过度包装,四级作文

篇一：四级作文参考范文—过度包装

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① Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over excessive packaging in our country.

② It is known to all that excessive packaging has negative influences on consumers.

③ And people would turn pale at the very mention of excessive packaging.

① There are many reasons why excessive packaging emerges, but in general, they come down to three major ones.

② For one thing, I argue, Chinese consumers care more about packaging than product itself.

③ For another, the packaging often represents the quality of product, so the manufacturer is eager to do excessive packaging.

④ But the prime reason is perhaps that the department concerned turns a blind eye to this irrational phenomenon.

① In regard to this problem, steps should be taken to minimize it.

② The first thing we should do is to emphasize product's quality over its packaging.

③ Another thing we can do is to strengthen the supervision on excessive packaging.

④ In addition, the Weibo is one of the most effective media that remind consumers to spend reasonably.

On Excessive Packaging

In recent years, with the economy growing, all kinds of goods are flowing into our life. The packaging of goods becomes more and more attracting our eyes. However, the problem of excessive packaging has aroused people’s wide concern.

This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons. For one thing, the business has seen through the mind of most consumers who are face-saving, for they thought that the more beautiful the packaging of goods is, the best people like. For another thing,

excessive packaging can make the majority of merchants get high profit for the cheap commodity by improving price. Perhaps the primary reason lies that the form far outweighs the content.

In my opinion, it is more advisable to focus on the quality of goods than to decorate its appearance. So, it is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation. Only in this way can we reduce unnecessary waste and have a rational and pure shopping condition, making our money cost worthwhile

On Excessive Packaging

Nowadays, with the rapid development of national economy and elevation of cultural demands, more and more commodities with luxury packaging appear in stores or supermarkets. Lots of people select these commodities to present as gifts to bosses, friends or relatives at festivals.

This phenomenon, which resulted by several factors, arouses hot discussions among people. One of these reasons is the psychology of extravagance-showing among people of all ranks. They tend to feel inferior if their presents look common and simple. On the other hand, lots of merchants, out of the consideration of their commercial profits, use all their efforts to promote their goods, which need to be luxuriously packaged as to meet the demands of market. Last but not the least, some people select these over packaging commodities to please their bosses in order to get a promotion.

Overall, this phenomenon is an outcome of the market economy. It can promote the development of economy, but, at the same time, leads to the corruption of social morality. We should take all measures to reduce the production of these commodities as to control social environment.

On Excessive Packaging

Nowadays, the phenomenon of excessive packaging has becoming increasingly serious. Lots of packages have already deviated from their original function. Excessive packaging is a serious waste phenomenon, which deserves our special attention and penetrating research.

There are many reasons accounting for excessive packaging. Firstly, the promotion effects of excessive packaging have been greatly exaggerated by interest-driven merchants. Furthermore, it is irrational consumption that led to the phenomenon of excessive packaging. The last but not the least, as everyone sees it that distempered of the related laws and regulations and inadequate enforcement of the law together contributed to this phenomenon.

As far as I am concerned, excessive packaging not only creates waste of resources, but also causes unnecessary environment pollution, so we should try our best to eliminate this phenomenon completely. To avoid excessive packaging, we should increase our awareness of this phenomenon and change our ideas towards it. We should also establish the atmosphere of simple packaging, advocate appropriate packaging and build a conservation-minded society.

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篇二：2012年6月英语四级作文真题-过度包装的现象

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Nowadays the phenomena of excessive packaging of goods are prevailing in our society: clothes swathed in tissue paper, placed in cardboard box and finally wrapped in well-designed plastic bags, imported bottles of grape wine packed in wooden boxes, fruits put in hand-woven baskets, to name but a few.

There are several causes of excessive packaging. The first reason is that a large number of companies believe that they can attract customers' attention and stimulate their purchasing desire by over-packaging their goods, thus gaining more profits. On the other hand, quite a number of consumers mistakenly hold that the more delicate the package is, the better the quality will be, thus encouraging excessive packaging.

In my point of view, excessive packaging has disastrous consequences, including the loss of precious resources, excessive consumption of water and energy, and unnecessary extraction of scarce land for landfill.

To solve the problem, it's necessary to take the following measures. First, laws and regulations must be made to restrict excessive packaging of companies. In addition, we need to raise consumer's awareness that excessive packaging don't equal to high quality and advocate packaging recycling.

篇三：12年6月英语4级作文题过度包装

On excessive packaing

Recently years，the phenomena of excessive packaging are very common around our life。we can find examples easily. Such as a small thing is packed in a big box

There are many reasons why the goods are excessive packaing。On one hand，lots of manufactures usually package their products with unnecessary but appealing materials，it will attract people to buy their products。On other hand，many customers believe that the more beautiful the package looks, the better the quality will be.。

However, the emergency of excessive packaging has caused many bad consequences. For one thing, it’s a waste of the limited natural resources.In my opinion，there is no need depending on excessive packaing，what manufactures need to do is develop their products’ quality.Only by doing this can they sell more products.

篇四：四级作文

四级英语作文范文

一My views on Online Shopping

1. 现在网购已经成为一种时尚

2. 网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题

3. 我的建议

Nowadays, can we find a person who has not experienced online shopping? Definitely not. Online shopping is coming into fashion in most of cities due to the rapid development of internet technology.

Online shopping is welcomed by most people due to various reasons. From the perspective of consumer, it can save some time for people who don’t have much spare time. Just click the mouse, they can get whatever they want while staying at home. For the retailers, it can cut some costs for those who don’t have much circulating funds. They don’t have to rent a house and spend money on employees comparing with the traditional trade mode. However, there are still some defects in online shopping. First, face to face deal makes online shopping less reliable and trustworthy. Second, people will lose the fun of bargain.

It is undeniable that shopping on the internet has become an irresistible trend in modern society. It’s of great urgency that we need to regulate the relative laws in accordance with the rapid growth of online shopping. Only in this way can we enjoy the pleasure and convenience of online shopping without the concern of being treated.

点评：本次四级作文探讨的是最近的热点话题之一——互联网网购。目前网购的风靡程度是众所周知，因此，考生对于该话题还是比较熟悉的。但是，比较特殊的是，题干所列出的要求的是考生从一个客观的角度来阐述该话题，而不是简单陈述自己的意见。所以，考生应当审清楚题，在写作时不仅仅要列出网购的优点，还必须给出相应的缺点。 按照四级作文的要求，考生在第一段时应该总述现象并引出话题；

第二段考生应当从正反两方面来论述网购，分别铺陈其优缺点；关于优点，网购的优点很多，考生可择其最突出显著的方面来阐述，比如说网购可以节省很多时间；网购可以节省很多成本开支等；其次，缺点方面考生可以把重心放在诚信方面；为了不至于跟优点相比，缺点方面太轻，考生可以考虑稍微提一下其他缺点，比如说与传统购物相比，网购少去了很多砍价的乐趣；

第三点要求考生对于第二段列出的缺点给出自己的建议。此处我们可以根据第二段列出的缺点方面给出相应的防范应对措施。

二On Excessive Packaging[过度包装]

Wandering at the supermarkets, you could find that the shelves are filled with fancy and excessively-packaged goods with high price, especially when festivals approach. Although the

government has much concerns over this issue, the phenomena are still common.

The reasons can be listed as follows. First, manufacturers could benefit from the over-packaging. Fancy packaging would increase the price to a large extent, from which they can earn more money. Secondly, some of the goods are brought and sent as gifts to our relatives and superiors. Gorgeously packaged gifts would be more attractive and add “face” to the one who buys and sends them.

From my point of view, excessive packaging is a waste of resources and money. Most people would throw the package away after they open it, which would lay heavier burden to our environment. To prevent this, every citizen should be aware of the problem, and strict laws must be made or reinforced to restrict the manufactures from excessive packaging.

【解析】本次写作延续了传统的出题方式，即英文题目+ 中文解析，但同时也继续了去年的一点小改动，对字数作了明确的限定。对于考生而言，商品过度包装本身已是日常生活的热点话题，大家比较熟悉，能有较多发挥空间。

在写作过程当中，最重要的是要理清思路，将文章的逻辑关系理清。范文中，作者第一段描述了这一现象；第二段中，开篇便点出了主题，一目了然，列出了出现这一现象的原因；最后一段里，作者发表总结了自己的一些观点。全文条理较为清晰。

其次，在句型方面，建议考生使用长短句交错的方式，这样节奏便较为明朗。

最后，用词方面，文章对“过度包装”使用了多种表达方式，如fancy packaging, luxurious packaging, glorious packaging等等。这样文章便不会显得“干燥”，让阅卷老师怀疑你的词汇量。因此，同学们在平时一定要注意同义词、词组的替换和使用。

三Education Pays

The above bar chart clearly shows us education pays in 2010. We see that unemployment rate of those with higher education background is much lower than those with lower education degree. For instance, the unemployment rate of college students with no degree is as high as 14.9% while that of those with doctoral degree is only 1.9%.

The following reason, in my opinion, is the most important one to account for this phenomenon. Compared with those with comparatively lower education degree, people who have received higher education possess considerably wider knowledge, more remarkable learning and research ability, greater innovation and most of all, resourceful social network, all of which make them more qualified and competent for their task. Thus, they are less likely to lose their jobs.

This phenomenon tells us that education is a worthy investment. Therefore, education investment should be strengthened while we, as college students, should study harder to avoid unemployment.

四The Big is the Little

Nothing can be done except little by little, the French poet Baudelaire Charles once said. Most people, however, often ignore such a truth. So does the little boy shown in the picture. He expresses his worries to his father about disposing of nuclear waste, but is told that he can achieve nothing if he doesn’t empty the dustbin first.

Every single little thing you can do today matters. The truth has been tested for ages, and thousands of great people have set good examples for us. For instance, Leonardo da Vinci, the world-renowned master in painting, starts his career with repeated egg-drawing. Lu Xun, the great man of letters, reminded himself to get up early by inscribing the character “morning” on his desk.

As university students, in my opinion, we should aim high, but at the same time, we shall never measure a task by its size. All in all, only those who have the patience to do simple things perfectly will acquire the skill to do difficult things easily.

【点评】本次四级作文为看图作文，探讨的话题是“一屋不扫，何以扫天下”。这个话题较为常见，一般考生对此都比较熟悉，所以对考生来说难度不大。一篇好的四级作文，要注意两点：一，要紧扣题目要求；二，要在评论的基础上亮出自己的观点。

范文开头第一句就开门见山，引用名言，亮出观点，简短而有力。紧接着又用图片中所给的故事，作为论据支撑。这样以来，既避免了直接叙述故事带来的突兀感，又使故事更好的支持论点。

第二段作者进一步分析深入论证自己观点。通过中外两个“从小事做起的”伟人的例子做论证，使论点更为饱满，更具说服力。

第三段作者从自身出发，指出大学生对“一屋不扫”应该具备积极的态度。文章最后，以名言作结，切中主题，铿锵有力。

五The Overusing of Cell Phones[过度依赖手机]

This picture portrays such an ironic situation: on the road, stands a man, who is completely concentrating on his cell phone whereas using a stick for direction, which implies the unprecedented popularity or even overusing of cell phones nowadays.

Exaggerated as the picture is , the phenomenon behind it is rather thought-procking. With the development of high-tech equipment, especially smart phones, people in growing numbers tend to become addicted to the excessive use of them. According to a survey carried out in China Daily several days ago, almost 47% of citizens explain that they would experience certain kind of anxiety without cellphones at hand. Meanwhile, the overusing of cellphones, firstly, would exert detrimental impact on the health of us. What’s worse, it would perform a negative character in interpersonal relationship since we have less time to communicate.

Judging from the evidence above, certain measures should be taken. Firstly, certain institutions in

China should launch relevant campaigns to limit the excessive ust of cellphones. Moreover, we ,as college students, should put emphasis on it right from ourselves as a start.

2014年12月四级英语作文分析

作文题目一：“大学中印象最深的一门课”

第一个，这门课的内容要写出来，比如印象最深的课是英语课，或者印象最深的课“如何做公众演说”，你得把这个课程的内容描述出来，把它的第一点、第二点、第三点，甚至上课的形式，这就是描述。

最后你要做一个论述，说这门课对我产生的影响，以及未来我怎么对待它，这些都需要写。 作文题目二：“大学中影响你最深的一位同学”

这位同学影响你最深，你不能说他对我影响很深，确实他对我产生很深的影响，他对我很重要，这样车轱辘的话反复说是不得分的，是没有意义的。

要点：要把这位同学他影响你的事迹、经历，令你振奋的故事描述和记叙出来。特别像六级考试考的是举例论证。特别像六级考试当中的举例论证，可能考的又是这样的题目。比如说给你一个什么样的观点，Please set some examples to illustrate your point，请你举一些例子来证明你的观点，六级考试是举例的，考例子，要描述的。现在的四级没有说一定要举例子，但是以题目的方式隐性要求你必须写故事、写例子。

比如我们看一下今天公布的范文说影响最深的一位同学，我们对它的描述是有个同学，刚刚开学的时候我们没有什么印象，但是他后来经常迟到印象很深，后来了解是他是跟久病卧床的妈妈一起上学的，为了照顾久病的妈妈所以经常迟到，但是他为了不仅解决了生活和学业的负担，优秀毕业，获得了奖学金。这件事情给我的影响是我们要如何面对压力、我们要有坚持和毅力，包括强大的意志面对生活中的不幸和磨难，这位同学对我的影响是非常深刻的。所以你把这个故事写完以后做一些评论，说他对我的影响是什么。最后还可以说一下我们以后要选择什么样的朋友，这位朋友给了我很深刻的影响，他给我的启发是以后我们要选择真正对我们有影响，有帮助，给我们正能量的朋友。第二段进行描述、记叙，第三段议论。 作文题目三：《A campus activity that has benefited most》——一项对你影响最深刻的校园活动。

第三个题目我们新东方国内考试部有一位教六级的作文老师叫刘杨老师，他写的一篇范文是他有一项活动叫“辩论赛”，他参加了这项活动以后，增加了自信、增加了口才、结交了朋友，这项活动对他影响非常深刻。

你在第二段需要描述一下这个活动的内容；在第三段需要写一下未来你会怎么样让这些类似的大学活动，使你的大学生活变得更加有意义，使你个人变得更加有竞争力。

总结：

1、这三道题目都是第一段引入话题；

2、第二段进行故事内容的描述和记叙；

3、第三段进行内容的提炼、升华和议论。

这就是我们说的目前四级作文，至少我们结合6月份和12月份这两次考试获得了两个启发，也就是我们要记叙和议论的结合。

六The Most Impressing Course in My College Life

印象最深的一门课

During the two years of college life, I have attended many special courses, among which the most impressed one is psychology. I still remembered the days when I was fed up with my major Math, which frustrated me so much. Till I fortunately select one of the most fascinating optional courses lectured by Professor Wang.

Time gone back to the first class of Mr. Wang, I found a little old man came in the classroom with a thick book of psychology. Mysteriously, I first unveiled and explored the myth within it by the vivid demonstration of Mr. Wang, and became fascinated with this course. In the following days, it enclosed an assorted of psychological phenomenon reflected in ordinary people’s daily lives by illustrating examples in reality.

To be frank, it is the psychology class that enlightens my soul of exploring the unknown world and stimulate my desire to learn. And it is no surprise to say that psychology is the most impressing course for me in college.

七The Most Impressive Campus Activity

Every university offers numerous kinds of activities to enrich students’ extracurricular life. As one of the young college students, I have benefited a lot from all of these well-organized activities, but the one impressing me most is the debate competition which I took part in last year.

That was a debate competition between different majors and the topic was about theoretical knowledge versus practices. What mattered most is not the result of the debate, but gathering background information and practicing the process of debate. Also, no individual could accomplish the challenging task all by herself or himself, so joint efforts have played a significant role in winning the competition. Team spirit and co-operation has been improved a lot and I believe this is more precious than winning or losing.

To be brief, we should participate in more campus activities, not only can we get a better understanding of what we have learnt before, but also make new friends and discover our interests.

写作思路指导：

第一步，确定你印象最深的校园活动是什么。

第二步，该校园活动主题和内容是什么。

第三步，活动的启发和影响。

题型不再局限于纯粹的议论文，而是各个文章体裁夹杂和糅合。要对文章的体裁和相应写法

篇五：四级作文高分模板_高分哦

第一段：陈述现状段

文章第一句话：

1)第一句的第一种写法：就某事，人们又热烈讨论

There is a heated discussion whether(通常用在选择性话题：是否年级小出国，是否有必要参加?)

they should live off campus or live together with other roommates.(住在校外，还是和同学共住)

students should be asked to grade their teacher (是否学生应该要求给老师打分) students should take a part-time job in school (是否学生在校期间应该找兼职)

2)第一句的第二种写法：某事引发人们关注 (不用写事情的经过，用一个词儿代替事情过程) Recently，the problem of “”has aroused wide concern among the public

Currently，he phenomenon of drunken driving has arouse wide concern among the public(酒后驾驶)

Currently，the frequent job-hopping of graduates has aroused wide concern among the public.(跳槽)

Currently，the problem of “food safety” has aroused wide concern among the public. (食品安全)

3)第一句的第三种写法：社会现象变成某个“词”(这种写法最大的魅力也是，将事件过程压缩成一个词!)

The newly-coined word/phrase“”may by no means sound strange to most people in this day and age.

(“”中填进的词有：nude picture scandal艳照门丑闻; water shortage缺水; online education网络教育;fake diplomas假证书;craze for talent shows 选秀狂热 )

4)第一句的第四种写法：社会趋势 (一般都写在“有越来越多的人干什么去了”

5)There is a growing tendency nowadays that?

graduates in mounting numbers can hardly find an ideal job (就业难)

people in mounting numbers show great enthusiasm for volunteer works/ various talent shows(选秀热)

students in mounting numbers show great enthusiasm for students leaders selection (竞选班干部热)

people in mounting numbers participate in the test for national civil servants. (公务员热)

undergraduates in growing numbers take the postgraduate entrance examination (考研热)

people in mounting numbers try their luck to buy lottery tickets (买彩票热) people in mounting numbers use credit card. (信用卡热)

5)第一句的第五种写法：某个现象人尽皆知 (一般写比较大的，比较严重的社会问题) No one in China has failed to notice the phenomenon that?

that goods in mounting numbers are wrapped in flaring boxes or bags (过度包装) that there has been a steady rise in the number of rural laborers who swarm into big cities.(农工进城)

The economy has been developing at a considerably high speed at the expense of living environment.(经济发展以牺牲环境为代价)（背景段）

文章第二句话：

第二段：对立观点论述段

文章第三句话：

(提出正方观点，比如说他支持什么;总体来说，有两种表示支持的说法)

Some maintain that ( 表示“认为”的单词;maintain/argue/hold/claim都可以写 )

1) 某物是有好处的：something is beneficial to sth. (练习：跳槽对学生有利)

2) 某物优点>缺点：The merits of sth. far outweigh its demerits.(练习：用手机的优点>缺点)（优点段）

文章第四句话：

( 上句提出了论点，这句就必须要用论据来证明，论据可以写一个，也可若干个;个数的标准是字数达标 )

Firstly,?secondly,?last but not least,?. （论证段）

文章第五句话：

( 既是正反对立观点作文，第三句提出正方观点，那么这句当然要提出对立观点啦! ) However，quite a few people hold the opposite opinion that (反方观点)，

1) 某物是有坏处：something is detrimental to sth.

2) 某物缺点>优点： The demerits of sth. far outweigh itsmerits. (merits 代替advantages)（缺点段）

文章第六句话：

( 上句提出了论点，这句就必须要用论据来证明，论据可以写一个，也可若干个;个数的标准是字数达标 ) For one thing，? for another,?(万能理由：这个只能在新东方小虹的六级写作课堂听啦!)（论证段）

第三段：个人观点段

文章第七句话：To my way of thinking，? From my perspective, + 个人观点句(参见第三、五)（观点段）

文章第八句话：( 上句提出了论点，这句就必须要用论据来证明，论据可以写一个，也可若干个;个数的标准是字数达标 ) In the first place，? in the second place,?(万能理由)（论证段）

文章第九句话：( 再次重申自己的观点，和第七句话正好构成“总分总结构”)

Given all the factors I have outlined，I strongly commit to the notion that(观点句)

或者是：Weighing the pros and cons of these arguments, I am inclined to agree with the idea that?（总结段）

模板二：问题解决作文 {3段9句话，2011年12月六级可能考}

第一段：陈述现状段

文章第一句话：

(小虹有话：第一句话的功能，就是介绍文章写作背景，社会现状;所以呢，写法和“对立观点作文”的文章第一段，第一句的写法是完全一样的!)

The past several years have witnessed a not uncommon phenomenon that? ( 社会现象 ).（背景段）

文章第二句话：

具体描述

(将文章第一句话所讲的抽象的、大体的社会现象，用具体的文字描述一下，增加字数，只能这么做了!)

举例：

(第一句)Nowadays, the phenomenon of drunken driving has arouse wide concern among the public.

(第二句)Especially the young generation living in metropolis, tend to drive after drinking, ignoring the fact that this behavior may pose underlying threat totheir precious life and may even endanger others.（背景段）

第二段：原因或危害陈述段(分析问题)

文章第三句话：

(过渡句，引发讨论某个社会问题、现象产生的原因)

Ample reasons can account for this phenomenon，and the followings might be the most critical ones:（原因段）

文章第四句话：

(提出某个社会问题、现象产生的原因;具体写几个原因，根据字数情况斟酌) Firstly，? secondly,?.(万能理由)（原因段）

文章第五句话：

(提出如果我们不关注这个问题，后果很严重!)

The problem mentioned above will bound to generate severe consequences if we keep turning a blind eye and deaf ear to it. (翻译：如果我们对这个问题视而不见，听而不闻，将产生严重后果)（加强说明段）

文章第六句话：

(危害和后果分别是什么呢?)

On the one hand, ? on the other hand,?（优点段、缺点段）

第三段：原因或危害陈述段 (解决问题)

文章第七句话：

(号召句，“放空话”!号召大家赶紧采取措施，投入关注等等)

Effective measures should be adopted before things get worse.（号召句） 文章第八句话：

First and foremost，(措施).

1) 扬善去恶：(两面性问题，比如手机，彩票等等)

What we should do is to encourage the merits and diminish the demerits to the least extent

2) 大家联合起来：(一般用在解决学生的问题，心理健康啊，网瘾啊等等)

It is high time that parents，educators，and the authorities make combined efforts to put an end to this situation.

3) 个人意识：(提高环境保护的意识等等)

The public should enhance their consciousness of the significance of ?

4) 采取行动：(这句话纯粹就是凑字数的)

We must press forward on deeper research，but research alone is inadequate, actually，any one of us has good reason to take actions to?我们必须加紧更深入的研究，但是仅仅研究是不够的，事实上，我们中的任何人都有足够的理由去做。。。。

5) 加强教育：(一般用在涉及面比较广的社会问题)

A public education campaign （活动）should be launched（发起） to inform the public of the importance（重要的地位） of spiritual civilization（精神文明）

6) 政府出台：(一般用在比较大的，比较严重的社会问题，如节约问题，浪费问题等等) It is essential that the authorities should make and implement relevant laws and regulations to impose a heavy penalty on those who (contaminate the environment deliberately)

7) 呼吁相关部门加强监管：(一般用在比较大的，比较严重的社会问题。如质量问题，假冒产品问题)

We should appeal to the relevant administration departments to strengthen supervision over（方案段）

文章第九句话：

(采取了措施之后，当然要有美好的远景啊!)

1) 只有采取措施，我们才能：

Only with these measures adopted can we put an end to this problem. (结束这个问题)

Only in this way can(graduates find a satisfactory job and enjoy a brilliant future.)

2) 采取了这些措施以后

With these measures taken, it is reasonable for us to believe that this problem can be perfectly solved in the near future(我们有理由相信问题一定能完美解决) With these measure adopted, I strongly believe that the problem of (drunken driving)will be things of the past.(这个问题将会成为过去式)

3) 我坚信生活美好：

It is deeply-rooted in my mind that a happy and bright future is awaiting us if we make every effort to ?

4) 和谐社会人人追求：

It is deeply-rooted in my mind that the world will be a more harmonious place for us to live in.（总结段）

七、开篇（背景段）

1) Many nations have been faced with the problem of ??

2) Recently the problem has been brought into focus.

3) Recently the phenomenon has become a heated topic.

4) Recently the issue has aroused great concern among ??

5) Nowadays there is a growing concern over ??

6) Never in our history has the idea that ?? been so popular.

7) Faced with ??, quite a few people argue that ??

8) According to a recent survey, ??

9) With the rapid development of ??, ??

二、原因（原因段）

1.A number of factors are accountable for this situation.

A number of factors might contribute to (lead to )(account for ) the phenomenon(problem).

2. The answer to this problem involves many factors.

3. The phenomenon mainly stems from the fact that??

4. The factors that contribute to this situation include??

5. The change in ??largely results from the fact that??

6. We may blame ??,but the real causes are??

7. Part of the explanations for it is that ??

One of the most common factors (causes ) is that ??

Another contributing factor (cause ) is ??

Perhaps the primary factor is that ?

But the fundamental cause is that ??

一、比较（优缺点段）

1.The advantage far outweigh the disadvantages.

2.The advantages of A are much greater than those of B.

3.A may be preferable to B, but A suffers from the disadvantages that??

4.It is reasonable to maintain that ??but it would be foolish to claim that??

5.For all the disadvantages, it has its compensating advantages.

6.Like anything else, it has its faults.

7.A and B has several points in common.

8.A bears some resemblances to B.

9.However, the same is not applicable to B.

10. A and B differ in several ways.

11. Evidently, it has both negative and positive effects.

12. People used to think ??, but things are different now.

13. The same is true of B.

14. Wondering as A is ,it has its drawbacks.

15. It is true that A ?? , but the chief faults (obvious defects )are ??

三、后果

1. It may give rise to a host of problems.

2. The immediate result it produces is ??

3. It will exercise a profound influence upon??

4. Its consequence can be so great that??

四、批驳（观点段—反驳）

1)It is true that ??, but one vital point is being left out.

2) There is a grain of truth in these statements, but(来自:www.sMHaiDa.com 海 达范文网:过度包装,四级作文) they ignore a more important fact.

3) Some people say ??, but it does not hold water.

4) Many of us have been under the illusion that??

5) A close examination would reveal how ridiculous the statement is.

6) It makes no sense to argue for ??

7) Too much stress placed on ?? may lead to ??

8) Such a statement mainly rests on the assumption that ??

9) Contrary to what is widely accepted, I maintain that ??

六、证明（论证段）

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