剑9test4大作文范文

篇一：剑9 Test4 高分范文

剑9 Test4 高分范文

Recent surveys suggest that many existing languages are facing extinction. Some people claim that there is nothing to worry about and communication between nations may even become less difficult as a result. However, I do not agree with this opinion because diversity is crucial to the survival and development of human civilization as a whole.

It is true that too many languages sometimes hinder communication and cause misunderstandings or even frustrations. We have to speak the same language to communicate well, which is why many people strive to learn a second language or even a third. But it does not mean that we do not have to protect the endangered languages as languages serve more important functions than communication. It is both a carrier of culture and a symbol of the identity of the people who speak it.

Undoubtedly, a language is a record of how the people who speak it have evolved. Therefore, it can provide clues as to how mankind as a whole has developed. Furthermore, the existence of a large number of language is conducive to cultural diversity and cultural exchanges which have resulted in some of the most important inventions or discoveries in the world. But how could cultural exchanges be possible if there were very few, or only one language left?

Apparently the idea that life will be easier if there are fewer language is too short sighted. People holding this view fail to take into consideration the role that language play in cultural diversity upon which the survival of mankind and social progress build.

As the English language becomes more widespread, some speakers of other languages fear that English loanwords are gradually replacing perfectly adequate native words.

篇二：剑八test 4大作文

剑八test 4大作文 WRITING TASK 2

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.

What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

Give reasons for your answer and include any

relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

No one could have failed to notice the fact that people in many countries have been gaining weight, which, in some cases, has so far exceeded the right proportion that it has resulted in severe problems in people’s health. Actually, this is true both in some developing countries and in some developed ones, the former exemplified by some African nations and the latter represented by the U.S. Accompanying the exploding arms and massive hips are often such problems as hypertension, heart diseases and diabetes. Before we conceive approaches to this problem, it is necessary to contemplate the causes.

Though a number of factors may be responsible for this phenomenon, the following, I believe, are the critical ones. The first and most fundamental one is the unchecked spreading of fast food around the world. Mainly having roots in the U.S. and best illustrated by KFC and MacDonald’s, this modern type of food and way of eating has met little resistance when proliferating. Though tasty and convenient, the foods are indeed threats to health. Containing too much calorie and little protein as well as other nutrients, they are known as “junk food”. What’s worse, in these foods are usually harmful instances that may hurt the neural system and lead to such diseases as cancer. Another leading reason is the wide use of modern conveniences, such as computers, autos and domestic appliances, which considerably reduce the amount of people’s manual labor and exercise, or confine them to homes or offices.

In order to tackle the problem, naturally, measures should be taken in the above-mentioned two aspects. On the one hand, it is imperative for people to enhance their awareness of the harmfulness of fast food, and refrain from consuming it or gradually reduce the amount of consumption. On the other hand, it is high time for many people to start a plan to work out to lose their already gained weight and regain their health.

关于“micro blog” 的范文

The Advantages and Disadvantages of Micro Blog

It has escaped almost no one’s attention that micro blog has gained

increasing popularity in people’s daily life in the past years. As we can see,

people of nearly all ages, occupations and social ranks have their own micro blog, which has become an essential part of their life.

Indeed, micro blog has some attractive traits. The most noticeable one is that, by using micro blog, one can share his or her own feelings and thoughts with many others at almost any time and place. In this way, one can also learn about fashions or hot issues in society. Besides, one can freely choose his readers or communicate with others in a private way. In this sense, micro blog has somewhat replaced QQ or MSN.

However, as every rose has its thorns, micro blog also has some drawbacks. First, some authors attack others in their micro blog or spread rumors, which infringe upon others’ rights or lead to social instability. Secondly, it is really a waste of time to read or write blog articles for those who are obsessed with it.

To sum up, micro blog is like a two-edged sword, which has both merits and flaws. Of course, we should not give up eating for fear of choking. Instead, we should exert proper supervision over its use and refrain from using it

excessively.

5月27日进行了同等学力英语考试，因其难度和六级接近，所以也请六级同学注意！

写作真题：

Part Ⅱ Writing (30 minutes, 15 points)

Directions: In this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition of no less than 150 words under the title of “My Favorite Way of Keeping Fit”. Some clues are given below in Chinese. Please write your composition clearly on the COMPOSITION SHEET.

保持健康有多种做法……，我最喜欢的做法是……

简析：

这次出题充分证明了出题人的反押题意识，也充分说明了押题这事有多么不靠谱，模板有多么不堪一击，基础有多么重要。其实，我一直都知道、也想告诉大家：随便出个题目---真的是随便出个题目---都能考出实际水平来。从阅卷的角度说，一两个词或搭配就能定分。前两天还在六级课堂上跟大家说了这么个笑话：“在大学校园里”的五个档次的说法：2分的：in collage garden（大学都写不对，花园还出来了）；5分的：in college compas（指南针都写不对）, 8分的：in college compass（指南针）, 11分的：in college campus（介词用的不对）; 14分的：on campus (campus 本来就表示“大学校园”的，因此就不必加上college，顺便指出，我的有些范文里出现了college campus的说法，请大家改过来)。

这次考题的参考范文我会稍后放上来，但在这里先放一篇雅思的相关真题和范文吧，供大家参考， 也特别提请六级同学关注，并重视基础！！！。 The FavoriteWay of Keeping Fit

Nowadays it has to be admitted that the whole society is faced with ‘health issue’.

Accordingto a recent survey conducted on the Internet, 42 in a hundred people are likely to suffer from vitaldiseases after retirement. This phenomenon has led to considerable thoughts and considerations 2 about the issue of health among the general public. For my perspective, I believe that proper diet and exercise are the upmost importance to health.

First, diet, this will undoubtedly become the prior one. Mounting fruits and vegetables are supposed to be listed in daily menu for their plenty of fibers and little fat. As a remarkable proverb says," An apple a day keeps the doctor away." Second, those food contain too much fat and sugar, such as candies, butter, pork and chocolate, should be kept under strict limit line. And excessive coffee is harmful too. Third, exercise comes up closely. Regular exercise burns extra energy and builds proper shapes. For instance, people with habit of jogging everyday are much healthier than those without it.

From what has been discussed above, I believe that these aspects should be given due attention now. On one hand, people should always bear these in mind for their own level; On the other hand, more advanced health information shall be open to the public. Only in this way can we keep good health and enjoy a pleasant life.

篇三：剑4 test3大作文

篇四：剑九写作考官范文剖析解题

剑九写作考官范文剖析之TEST3 TASK2

朗阁海外考试研究中心

2013年发布的《剑桥雅思真题集9》给广大考生带来了新一轮的考试方向的指引。从官方提供的真题集中，朗阁雅思培训中心的专家们总结了一些考试的动向和未来考试发展的趋势。同时，在剑桥9的Test2大作文中，也出现了“逆天”的所谓朴素8分作文。但是事实上，除了该篇以外，另外的三篇考官范文继续保持了以前剑桥真题相当的可读性、难度和地道性。这绝对说明，考试的评分标准并未发生变化，并且从语言的美感和内容逻辑性的要求来看，雅思考试一如既往对考生提出了相当的要求。朗阁海外考试研究中心写作组的专家就剑九所提供的考官范文，分别进行详尽的剖析。本文将以剑九TEST3 TASK2为主要切入点进行解析。

题目如下：

Some people say that the best way to improve the public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

正文内容：

A problem of modern societies is the declining level of health in the general population, with conflicting views on how to tackle this worrying trend. One possible solution is to provide more sports facilities to encourage a more active lifestyle.

Advocates of this believe that today’s sedentary lifestyle and stressful working conditions mean that physical activity is no longer part of either our work or our leisure time. If there were easy-to-reach local sports centres, we would be more likely to make exercise a regular part of our lives, rather than just collapsing in front of a screen every evening. The variety of sports that could be offered

would cater for all ages, levels of fitness and interests: those with painful memories of PE at school might be happier in the swimming pool than on the football pitch.

However, there may be better ways of tackling this problem. Interest in sport is not universal, and additional facilities might simply attract the already fit, not those who most need them. Physical activity could be encouraged relatively cheaply, for example by installing exercise equipment in parks, as my local council has done. This has the added benefit that parents and children often use them together just for fun, which develops a positive attitude to exercise at an early age.

As well as physical activity, high tax penalties could be imposed on high-fat food products, tobacco and alcohol, as excessive consumption of any of these contributes to poor health. Even improving public transport would help: it takes longer to walk to the bus stop than to the car.

In my opinion, focusing on sports facilities is too narrow an approach and would not have the desired results. People should be encouraged not only to be more physically active but also to adopt a healthier lifestyle in general.

解析1：审题

题目提出，一些人认为提升公共健康的方式是增加运动设施的数量，而另一部分人认为这个方法收效甚微，应当采取其他的方式。本题要求考生对事态双边分别进行讨论。这是一道双边中立型题目，也就是题目的双方都应当作为讨论的主体，在正反两方分别阐明原因和进行详细论述。结构段式范文分成了5段，正反主体各一段，因本题在反面观点中提出了“other measures are required”即需要采取其他方式来提升公共健康水平，因此考官范文另列一段说明。结尾做了双边总结，认为仅仅提升运动设备是远不够的，也应加入其他方式。

解析2：构思

范文首先在开头部分做了简单重述。在正文第二段，考官从现实出发，讲明现代社会，运动已经不再是生活必要部分，以及我们生活中花了较多时间保持坐着状态的主要的情况。以假设论证方法切入，指明如果有方便的运动设施我们则有很大可能性走出去而不是坐在电脑前。并且强调运动设施能够符合各个年龄层和不同爱好的要求，然后辅助举例说明比如我们可以选择我们喜欢的游泳项目而不是痛苦的足球项目。该段在论证逻辑上层层递进，严谨而有条理。且援引证据有足够的说服力。

而在正文第三段的反论部分，首先提出最大的问题是并不是所有人对运动都是感兴趣的，运动设施的设立可能导致的结局是吸引的是本身热爱运动的人，对于不爱运动的部分则没有强制性。接着表明事实上，安装器材鼓励效果是比较弱的，并且可能变成家庭成员间的娱乐互动。此处考官文章中表示这额外能提高孩子对运动的积极态度，笔者认为此句非常影响本段方面论述的立意，对该段论证没有积极支持效果，算是全文唯一的败笔部分。（见原文粗体部分）

接下去主体的第三部分，作者提出了两个其他方案：一是对垃圾食品征收高额税费来减少购买的人，二是在提升公共交通方面做一些调整使得交通线路过程中能迫使人们走更多的路。

全文表意清晰，文风地道，并援引合理佐证，是考生可以仔细参阅分析的一篇好范文。

解析3：文风亮点

文章不仅整体论证完整，支持论据逻辑条理清晰，说服力强，并且使用了相当地道和值得考生学习和效仿的语言表达。下面专家们总结了一些其中的优句：

A. A problem of modern societies is the declining level of health in the general population, with conflicting views on how to tackle this worrying trend. 主表对换，目的为突出体现问题严重，后半句由with引出伴随部分是存在双边观点。此表达和立论方法相当有新意，能突出重点。

B. If there were easy-to-reach local sports centres, we would be more likely to make exercise a regular part of our lives, rather than just collapsing in front of a screen every evening. 此句表述严谨，在做了if引出的假设同时，提出可能性。表述连贯。If…it would be more likely to….rather than结构值得考生学习。

C. Interest in sport is not universal, and additional facilities might simply attract the already fit, not those who most need them. 后半句做补充说明，以句尾强调突出运动设施无法实现其真正立意价值。

D. Physical activity could be encouraged relatively cheaply, for example by installing exercise equipment in parks, as my local council has done. 举例恰到好处，最后一个小短句使得by后短语变得自然且避免句子过长影响理解的问题。

解析4：词汇运用（文中具体部分详见加红词组）

tackle 解决

Advocates of this believe that 支持者们认为…

collapsing in front of a screen 堕落于电脑屏幕前

cater for 适用于，满足…

be encouraged relatively cheaply 相对而言难以被鼓励

imposed 强加，强制性

excessive consumption 过度消耗

too narrow an approach 不充分的方法

desired results 期望结局

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篇五：剑2-剑9雅思大作文整理

Test1：不知所云

Test2：国家的钱需要从治疗转移到预防。

Test3：死刑好处：震慑潜在犯罪；对穷凶极恶罪犯的惩罚，防止社会二次受害；抢劫和杀

人没区别。

死刑坏处：死刑太残酷；一旦冤假错案改不过来。

Test4：支持母亲工作影响孩子：孩子缺乏教育；

不支持：1、母亲工作可以给孩子提供更好的生活条件；现在一些暴力电影等的影响；学校太关注知识教育而忽视道德教育。

剑2

Test1：支持体育盛会有助于缓解国际紧张：分离领导人的注意力；可以增进交流，促进各国人民间的相互理解；在国际外交事务中作用很大（乒乓外交）

不支持：可能会使局面worse

Test2：支持不用传统生活方式的：科技提供效率和产量；

不支持：传统技能提供职业可能；一些地方科技并不能超过传统技能（acupuncture） Test3：支持孩子从事paid work：增加工作经验；学习将理论应用与实践；体会工作的艰辛。 不支持：增加孩子的压力；一些工作影响孩子身体健康，甚至可能会引发危险。 Test4：富国帮助穷国的好处：富国也可以获得回报；出于道德考虑应该帮助；不帮助可能

会引发国际冲突

坏处：让穷国养成依赖的习惯；富国国内也有许多问题有待解决。

剑4

Test1：比较各种媒体利弊：简单

Test2：幸福的定义：简单

Test3：不应该对艺术家的idea有限制：艺术对我们生活很重要；无约束的艺术才能创造出

最美好的；

应该：一些idea造成社会不良影响；每个人都是平等的；

Test4：学生不规矩的原因：缺乏父母管教；老师只关注knowledge；被一些电影影响。 措施：对上面的写下面的。

剑5

Test1：同意每门课相同男女数：科技让男女生差距缩小；学科的男女不平衡可能会造成男

女不平等（某些职业被男女dominant）；

不同意：生理差异；思维方式不同，兴趣不同；强行使男女生数相同可能会造成更大

的歧视。

Test2：同意上大学前工作：增长工作经验；；理论应用于实践；体会工作艰辛；挖掘自身兴

趣；

不同意：没文凭从事的可能都是非专业活，没意义；可能导致放弃学业。 Test3：鼓励孩子竞争：竞争孩子的动力；竞争培养孩子独立意识。

鼓励孩子合作：合作有利于相互学习；合作有利于形成和谐关系。

Test:4：天赋重要：没有天赋，后天再怎么培养也没用（singer）；

后天重要：天赋再好后天不努力也不可能成功；不善于演讲的人经过大量训练也可能

成为演讲家（口吃）；天生的性格也会被后天影响（twin）

Test1：同意高销量由广告造成：支持偶像；由冲动造成；跟随潮流；

不同意：广告并不是主因（人们有自己的消费习惯）；生活条件好了就可能会多购买。 test2：支持体育运动员赚得多：承受了巨大压力；付出了巨大努力；他们为国争光； 不支持：国家在培养他们时花了足够多的钱；有一些职业更重要却赚钱赚得不多。 Test3：旅游者遵守当地风俗：为旅游带来方便；有利于和当地人交流；否则可能会造成冲

突；

接受文化差异：有利于不同文化的交流，促进文化进步；有利于吸引更多人。

Test4：不喜欢生活变化：容易把事情做好；给生活提供稳定，增加满足感；变化有风险。 喜欢：可以不停学习新知识，新体验；一直不变会boring；

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Test1：略

Test2：支持固定的判罚：有利于减少犯罪；否则，罪犯可能会逃过法律的制裁。 不支持：可以保证公平。

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