雅思作文,internet

篇一：雅思作文-网络的利弊

Topic:

What are the advantages and disadvantages of the internet?

Sample Answer:

In recent years, the Internet has been gaining its popularity at an amazing rate. Some people suggest that the Internet brings us a lot of benefits. But on the other hand, there are also many people who strongly advocate that its drawbacks should not be ignored. It is quite understandable that people from different backgrounds put different interpretations on the same issue.

Those who favor that the Internet has many advantages give their reasons as follows. In the first place, the Internet brings us great convenience and efficiency. For example, we can send E-mails to our friends in other countries in a few minutes while sending a traditional letter takes us at least a week and cost much. In the second place, we can make friends with people from all parts of the world. It overcomes the geographical barriers and makes the world smaller. Furthermore, the Internet accelerates the flow of information and spreads education to all corners of the globe. We can have easy and quick access to the latest information worldwide.

However, the other side of the coin voices its strong opposition, saying that the Internet has many weaknesses. For one thing, it can easily lead to psychological problems. An internet-addicted person tends to be isolated, self-centered and unsociable. For another, there is a sharp rise in the number of cyber crimes. More and more financial crimes such as money laundering are committed via the Internet. In addition, it also has negative impacts on young people because there are a lot of obscene and violent contents on line.

There is probably a litter bit of truth in both arguments. For my part, I completely agree with the latter view that the Internet has more disadvantages than advantages. It gives rise to people’s mental problems. It results in various computer crimes. What is more, it is harmful to the growth of the young. Something should be done as soon as possible to protect people from the negative effects of the Internet.

参考译文：

最近几年中，因特网以惊人的速度越来越受到人们的欢迎。一些人认为因特网给我们带来很多好处。但是，也有很多人强烈提出它的缺陷是不能被忽视的。来自不同背景的人对于同样的问题有不同的看法，只是非常可以理解的。

那些认为因特网有很多好处的人给出了如下的原因。第一，因特网给我们带来很大的便利和效率。比如，我们给国外的朋友发电子邮件只需要几分钟的功夫，传统的邮件至少要花费我们一周的时间并且费用也很高。第二，我们可以与世界各地的人们交朋友。它克服了地域上的障碍并使世界变小。此外，因特网促进了信息的流通，使教育波及到世界的每一个角落。我们可以方便快捷的了解到全世界的最新信息。

然而，反对的人认为因特网有很多的缺陷。 首先，它导致了心理上的问题。一个沉迷于因特网的人会趋向于孤立，以自我为中心，并且不擅长于交际。另一点，它使网络犯罪的人数激增。通过因特网的经济犯罪越来越多。另外，他对年轻人也有着负面影响，因为在网上有很多淫秽和暴力的内容。

双反观点都有道理。依我看来，我完全同意后一个观点：因特网弊大于利。它引发人们精神上的问题，导致各种各样的电脑犯罪。而且，对年轻人的成长是非常有害的。必须要做点什么，尽快尽可能的保护人们不受网络的负面影响。

篇二：雅思写作之社交网络

【时事聚焦】

通过社交服务网站我们与朋友保持了更加直接的联系，建立大交际圈，其提供的寻找用户的工具帮助用户寻到失去了联络的朋友们。但同时个人的隐私也很轻易地被他人所获知，因而个人信息安全保障措施还需要改善。近期，关于人们通过社交网站关注前任，情伤更难痊愈的研究引起了人们的广泛关注。

Face book users risk psychological damage spying on ex lovers

As many as half of Face book users are risking psychological damage from using the site to spy on ex lovers, according to new research.

Two of the most cited reasons for accessing Face book are to keep in touch with others and to surreptitiously monitor them - with between a third and half of users using it tocheck up on ex-partners.

With close to a billion users, it means hundreds of millions may be finding it more difficult to get over a broken romance.

Psychologist Dr Tara Marshall said in the past, such spying and keeping tabs with what your ex was up to was challenging.

You could try and pry information from his or her friends, telephone, or drop by their place, but it was usually unlikely you would turn up much useful information.

This made it easy for people to distance themselves from the relationship and move on - an emotionally healthy breakup.

But as long as you remain 'friends' with your ex on Facebook, they are now able to keep up with everything you are doing.

While satisfying a certain curiosity factor, it seems likely that it would make it far more difficult to actually emotionally distance yourself from your past relationship.

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In a survey of 464 participants, most of whom were undergraduate students, she found people who remain Face book friends with an ex-partner will experience poorer breakup adjustment and personal growth relative to those who do not.

The findings suggest continued online exposure to an ex-romantic partner may inhibit post-breakup recovery.

Notably, frequent monitoring of an ex-partner's Face book page and list of friends was associated with greater distress.

Dr Brenda Wiederhold, editor of Cyber psychology, Behavior and Social Networking which published the research, added: "This study sees again virtual life mirroring real life.

"Just as real life contact with ex-partners may inhibit growth, healing, and well-being, so may virtual contact."

（本文摘自China Daily）

这篇文章报道了根据一项最新研究，有多达半数的Face book用户使用该网站查看前情人的消息，这可能导致使用者的心理受创，让我们一起来看一下其中有哪些内容可以帮助我们应对雅思大作文。

首先，朗阁海外考试研究中心分析认为，这篇文章中使用了论证力比较强的引用论证方法，使文章非常有说服力。在这些引证中，作者通过引用研究的内容和结果，及专家的评论使自己的观点更加有说服力。同时，也运用举例子做了充分的例证。很多同学常常困惑如何才能使文章做到有理有据，引用和举例就是其中非常好用的一种方法，可以运用到雅思大作文中。

我们来看一道雅思大作文的真题。

The development of technology changes the way people connect with each other. In which ways does the development of technology change the types of relationships among people?

Does it have positive or negative effects on the relationships?

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我们可以将报道中的论证方法运用此题目中：

引用：

l As many as half of Face book users are risking psychological damage from using the site to spy on ex lovers, according to new research.

根据一项最新研究，有多达半数的Face book用户使用该网站查看前情人的消息，这可能导致使用者的心理受创。

句中的according to a new research这个引用句型

同样的句型还有：

According to the latest survey done by a group of researchers,

The investigation shows that

* The findings suggest continued online exposure to an ex-romantic partner may inhibit post-breakup recovery.

研究结果显示，在网上持续接触前任的信息可能有阻分手后的恢复。

* Psychologist Dr Tara Marshall said in the past, such spying and keeping tabs with what your ex was up to was challenging. You could try and pry information from his or her friends, telephone, or drop by their place, but it was usually unlikely you would turn up much useful information.

心理学家塔拉-马歇尔博士说，过去，像是暗中监视或者密切注意前情人这种事很难办到。过去，你可以试着通过你或者前情人的朋友、电话，或者顺便拜访住处，探听前情人的消息，不过通常得不到太多有用的信息。

举例：

l In a survey of 464 participants, most of whom were undergraduate students, she found people who remain Face book friends with an ex-partner will experience poorer breakup adjustment and personal growth relative to those who do not. 马歇尔在调查中发现，与前情人还是Facebook好友的受访者，其分手后的调整过程与个人成长，不如不保持好友关系的受访者顺利。共有464名受访者参与调查，其中多数是大学生。

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因果：

l Two of the most cited reasons for accessing Face book are to keep in touch with others and to surreptitiously monitor them - with between a third and half of users using it to check up on ex-partners.

用户使用Face book网站的两大原因是与他人保持联系与暗中关注他们，其中有三分之一到一半的用户登录Face book查看前情人的消息。

【7分词汇提炼】

headache 令人头痛的事

head-way 进展

conflict with… 与…相冲突

major cause 主要原因

be replaced by… 被…所取代

curb… 限制…

dilemma 进退两难

energy-saving 节能的

potential market 潜在市场

in view of 考虑到

provide convenience for … 为…提供便利

marketable products 畅销产品

jump into our sight 映入眼帘

high-tech products 高科技产品

fake and exaggerated information 虚假信息

be deceptive and misleading 具有欺骗性和误导性

encourage somebody to do something 鼓励某人去做某事

be tempted into an unhealthy lifestyle 从而过上一种不健康的生活方式

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篇三：7分作文-IELTS

雅思A类写作冲刺班讲义

主讲：刘巍巍

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第一讲 雅思高分写作思路总览

雅思写作高分：7分或7分以上

1. 申请顶级名校的同学

2. 申请对语文能力要求比较高的专业的同学：新闻、法律、MBA

3. 需要提高学术写作能力的同学

第一节的内容：

1． 雅思写作的整体介绍

2． 高分写作的要求

3． 解决问题的方案

4． 课程的总览

一．雅思写作的整体介绍 General Introduction

听力、阅读考试之后

60分钟 Task 1 and Task 2

A类和G类的区别：

task 2 议论文

task 1 A：图表作文 G：书信

评分：以Task 2 为主

二：高分写作的要求

评分标准：

Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构)

Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证，论点和论据)

Communicative Quality(交流质量)

Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构)

1. 避免使用过于低级的单词

The problem The problem due to the

They claim that sports lead to competition rather than cooperation is only an argument.

The claim that sports lead to competition rather than cooperation is only a argument.

People violence and crimes on TV and films every day.

People are violence and crimes on TV and films every day.

The kind of growth may lead to very .

.

consequence:

far-reaching（深远的）, profound（深刻的）, adverse（不利的）, catastrophic（灾难的）, damaging（破坏性的）, devastating（破坏性的）, dire（可怕的）, disastrous（灾难的）, fatal（致命的）, tragic（悲惨的）, severe（严重的）,

2. 避免过分重复同一样的单词

MothersMothers are career advancement as fathers.

Mothers are

3. 尽可能展示多变的句型

定语从句：

China is the largest developing country and is enjoying rapid economic growth. As a result, in the streets of major cities in China, there are thousands of vehicles of all kinds.

As the largest developing country, China is enjoying rapid economic growth, can be seen in all major cities thousands of vehicles of all kinds.

倒装句：

Young people are so impulsive and easily influenced that they are constantly tricked by advertisement in all forms of media.

Impulsive and easily influenced as young people are, they are constantly tricked by advertisement in all forms of media.

伴随状语：

It is common now for kids to spend six and a half days in school each week

because they have to sit through one extra class after another.

It is common for kids to spend six and a half days in school each week, sitting through one extra class after another.

设问句：

Even if machine translation were able to eradicate all the language barriers between peoples, learning foreign languages still make sense.

Even if machine translation were able to eradicate all the language barriers between people, would there be no point in learning foreign languages? By no means.

Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证，论点和论据)

Some people think that in order to improve the quality of education, high school students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers, but other people maintain that such

evaluation and criticism may cause loss of respect for teachers and discipline. What do you think? 有人认为，为了提高教育质量，我们应该鼓励高中生对自己的老师进行评估；别的人却认为这种评估是不尊重教师、违反学校纪律的行为。请给出你的看法？

学生评价老师的理由：

1. 通过评估，老师可以知道学生究竟想些什么、需要什么

If students are not allowed to evaluate or criticize the teachers, it is hard for the teachers to find out what the students think or what they need.

2. 评价和批评本身也是一种有效的交流方式

Evaluation and criticism are themselves effective forms of communication

3. 听取学生的真实意见和想法，教师自己也能够受益匪浅

Teachers will benefit a lot when their minds are open to the ideas and honest opinions of the youngsters.

高分作文两个注意事项：

1．

2． 论据尽可能新颖：论据新颖，文字才更有可能新颖 新颖应该让位于准确性：确保文字没有错误

Communicative Quality(交流质量)

1． 高分作文，在于文字和论据精彩，不在于结构另类

2．

三：解决问题的方案

1 Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇与句子结构)

?总结大量经典搭配，交替使用

2Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证，论点和论据)

?范文讲解附带论据整理

3Communicative Quality(交流质量)

?给出固定写作思路，不求变革

四：课程总览

雅思作文类型固定，写作模式也固定，高分作文亦然

第一节：整体介绍

第二至第七节：各类议论文的高分写作思路

1.该类议论文的写作思路点拨

2.范文讲解

3.课后作业及范文

第八节：

A类：图表作文高分写作思路

G类：书信类作文高分写作思路

要求：

1. 善于学习，由点及面

2. 循序渐进

3. 及时完成课后作业

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第二节 观点类雅思作文高分写作思路

范例：

Nowadays computers are widely used in education. As a result, some people think teachers no longer play an important role in classrooms. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that machine translation is highly developed in today?s society. Therefore it is not necessary for children to learn a foreign language. What?s your opinion?

University should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that it is the responsibility of the government to ensure that people in the country have healthy lifestyles. Other people believe that individuals should be free to decide their own lifestyles. Please give your opinion.

标志性文字：

Do you agree or disagree?

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

What?s your opinion?

Please give your own opinion.

重点在于：就题目讨论的问题，给出自己的观点

1. 传统的写作思路: 第一段亮出观点，然后分段给出不同的论据，最后一段收尾，总结全文，同时再次重申自己的观点

2. 高分作文，在于文字（词汇、句型、观点）方面制造亮点，不在于在结构方面铤而走险尝试新的方式

范文讲解1：

Nowadays people can use computers to talk, learn and communicate without leaving home. There is a danger that it will cause more isolation and a lack of communication among people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

写作思路：

1.观点：电脑不会妨碍人和人之间的交流

小提示：科技类的文章，尽量选择正观点，讲述科技为人类做出的贡献为佳

2. 论据:

(1). 不能狭隘地理解交流和隔阂，在电脑屏幕前花很多的时间不等于缺乏与世隔绝，

Communication and isolation must not be defined in a narrow sense. Alienation of people is not caused by how little they talk or meet each other but by lack of interest in our fellow creatures or the world at large.

隔绝、疏远： isolation alienation

(2). 计算机让大家有了共同的兴趣，促进了人们之间的共鸣

common 共同的

Computers help to prevent isolation by bringing every possible field of interest onto the screen. You can broaden your interests and enrich your life by accessing whatever and whoever you are interested in.

(3). 不同的时代有不同的交流方式，电脑就是当今时代的交流工具之一

Our mode of communication is forever changing and computers represent the latest way of communication.

远古时代： primitive primeval times shouts and gestures 呐喊和手势

后来： 文字和语言 spoken and written language

现代： we prefer emails to ordinary mails, chat room, forum, tele-conference

(4). 互联网让我们时时刻刻都连接在一起，一切都可以在指尖上实现

The Internet keeps us linked to each other all the time. Everything is at the touch of a fingertip.

开篇：引入观点的技巧

Some people think…. Other people think… I think ….

…. has been a hot topic. Different people hold different views. In my opinion, ….

…. has caused a lot of controversy. Some people think ….. but I think ….

（以下开始逐句讲解范文，请跟随讲解的进度，以flash的形式，屏幕上逐句出现范文的文字，并在需要讲解的地方，插入讲解内容的文本）

Invented some 60 years ago, computers have already transformed the way most of us live. The

篇四：雅思大作文范文之互联网

雅思大作文范文之互联网

下面为大家提供了一篇雅思写作高分范文，关于互联网Internet的话题，互联网对人们生活产生了巨大的影响，虽有负面，但更多的是积极的影响，你对此有什么看法呢?

题目

The Internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades. Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive. What are your opinions on this? 范文

The Internet has brought significant changes to our lives in recent years. However, there remains some disagreement as to whether the overall effect of this technology has been positive or negative. While there are certainly valid arguments to the contrary, I personally believe that the benefits of the Internet far outweigh its drawbacks and these benefits are twofold.

First of all, it is an indisputable fact that the Internet has revolutionized the way we communicate. Despite the risk of social isolation-a problem occasionally seen in people who spend too much time at their computer terminal rather than relating to people in the real world-most of us have benefited greatly from e-mails and Internet chat programs like MSN Messenger. These incredibly useful and powerful tools of communication facilitate both contact with loved ones in faraway places and global trade.

Moreover, the Internet has placed the entire world (and all of the information in it) at our fingertips. In earlier times, conducting research entailed long hours searching library shelves. Now, however, the same information can be accessed at the click of a button. Admittedly, not all of the information available on the Internet is reliable or helpful-there is a vast amount of material online that some would consider offensive or dangerous, ranging from pornography to instructions on how to make bombs. Nonetheless, I would contend that this free flow of information has generally been a very positive development.

By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that the Internet has had a positive impact on modern life because of its influences on communication and the flow of information.

篇五：雅思大作文专项突破：网络的影响

雅思大作文专项突破：网络的影响

本文收集整理了雅思大作文专项突破：网络的影响。这是目前常见的、高频的雅思写作话题，同学们在备考时可以边写边学，积累写作素材，以便在考试中更胸有成竹。

Topic 15: Nowadays people can carry out tasks such as shopping and banking even business transactions without meeting each other face to face. What are the effects on individuals and the society?

本题不是讨论网络的优缺点，而是讨论其正面和负面的影响。因此，仅仅讨论网络购物和网 络商务的优点和缺点是不足够和不确切的,需要针对这些特点讨论所产生的社会影响。

正面的影晌：

? 提高效率;

? 网络绐人们提供大量信息，增加人们的知识;

? 喊少交通工具的使用(rely less on private or public transport),从而减少汽车废气的排放(lead to a drop in the carbon footprint)

负面的影响：

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? 人与人之间的交流减少,人们只关心自己的生活方式(concerned about one's own way of life)，导致形成以个体为中心的社会(an insular society develops and forms);

? 人们习惯于不运动的生活方式(inactive lifestyle),甚至过起隐居的生活(live a reclusive life),过分依赖因特网做其他事情(rely excessively on the Internet for running errands)。

范文

With the wide use of the Internet， the way people conduct business and live their lives has vastly changed. Many businesses have websites that allow people to conduct business, execute deals and finish transactions online, as an alternative to a lengthy commute. Although people are thus free from the constraints of geography and time, there are some consequences of this trend that demand attention.

Supposedly, with Internet access, people are able to perform transactions and to do shopping without leaving home, but meanwhile they have to pay a heavy price for it. One of the most negative aspects is, for instance, that it alters their social behaviours and habits. For many people, to spend part of the day on the Internet is quite normal. It can be expected that being addicted to Internet use, most of home

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telecommuters or Internet users will become socially isolated. Poor social life and feelings of loneliness are those problems that are very often found among heavy users.

It is also likely that people have become increasingly accustomed to living in a world that appreciates convenience and inactivity and they do not want to evade those maxims. It gives explanation of why the sedentary lifestyle is now prevailing and why people spend little time on leisure or recreational activities. Time has been spent in front of the computer or Internet. The net result is that they suffer serious loss of vision, back pain and obesity. It is true that many people finally end up with struggling with deteriorating health.

Despite the negative effects, the Internet has its positive implications to the well-being of society. Online shoppers are able to seek out the lowest prices for items or services. Manufacturers, therefore, have to improve product quality and lower price levels in an effort to win the favour of consumers and secure a stable market share. Telecommuting-working at home using a computer is a solution to traffic congestion, the urban air pollution and petrol use.

As outlined above, people's growing obsession with Internet use, such as online shopping or banking, has both immediate and long-term

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impacts on health, social involvement, lifestyles and emotional well-being. Although it is of great value from a net surfer's perspective, people should step up efforts to minimize the negative effects.

近义词表

1. alternative=replacement= substitute:另一种选择，替代品

2. supposedly=theoretically=purportedly:理论上地，假想地

3. price=penalty:代价，付出 .

4. telecommuter=teleworker:在家通过使用电脑、传真和因特网工作的人

5. social life=spending time with friends and other people;社会生活

6. inactivity=idleness=immobility=indolence=sluggishness;懒惰，很少运动的生活方式

7. maxim=rule=principle=tenet=guideline=motto=dictum=axiom=truism:格言，定律

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