作业帮跨越坎坷的路,作文
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篇一：以跨越为话题的作文
以跨越为话题的作文
以跨越为话题的作文
浙江省慈溪市新世纪实验学校初三（9）班 陈质渝
当救援人员移开了压着的最后一块水泥板，昏暗的夜色中，只听得>生命探测仪在那儿不知疲倦地发出“嘟嘟”声。所有人都屏住了呼吸。是的，还有人活着！等到眼睛适应了光线，看到的是一具血肉模糊的躯体，躯体下一个小小的空隙中，蜷缩着一个消瘦的女人。
>地震后的空气弥漫着血腥与死亡的气息，在女人低声嘤嘤的哭泣中，人们抬出了那具尸体。这是一个强壮的中年男子，不用说，是女人的丈夫。很快，这个唯美的爱情故事就被人们口口相传，没有一个人不称道这对夫妻的恩爱。
只是，谁都没有注意到，那个微微潮湿的角落里，有一张白纸，上面赫然排列着五个大字：离婚协议书。
“我们离婚吧！”伴着诡异的橘红色天空，女人冷冷地甩出了这句话。屋子里的气氛如>同桌上的白纸一样冰冷而又单调。男人紧锁着眉，大口大口吸着劣质的烟卷，吐出一圈又一圈的烟雾。女人的不满他不是不知道，只是没有想到婚姻真的会走向破裂。
>时间就在这样的僵持中逝去，厨房那个破了多年的水管正“滴答滴答”地滴着水，两个人的婚姻多年以来的摩擦也如同这水一般，积少成多。
女人的心里正庆幸当初没有要孩子，不然此刻就会成为她的牵绊。这次她很决绝，如果男人不签字，她宁可上法庭，也不要过这种生活。丈夫长年在外，一年忙到头，却攒不下几个钱，女人从来都觉得男人不爱她，从来没有爱过。
墙上的老钟走向了整点，发出“咚咚”的声响，男人的眉皱得更紧了。余晖从西边
突然，房子剧烈地震动了一下，没人反应过来到底发生了什么；又是一阵更剧烈的抖动，房子里的东西“乒乒乓乓”地掉了下来，紧接着更多的东西纷纷坠落。男人想到了，这是地震，拔腿要跑，却听到了女人的尖叫，他想也没想便拉住了女人的手，刚想冲出去，可是太迟了！随着“轰”的一声巨响，女人的眼前一黑??再睁开眼睛的时候，她看到了为她挡出一小块空间的男人，浑身是血，没了鼻息。那么快，快得几乎来不及眨眼。
那一刻，女人感受到了男人震撼心灵的爱。
多年后，女人带孩子来到一块空地上，说： “这块土地下的一个角落，有一种爱，跨越了>亲情与血缘。”可没人懂得她在说什么。 《以跨越为话题的作文》
篇二：800字作文 跨越自己
跨越自己
高二七班 亢晓雅
人生的道路崎岖坎坷，我们无时无刻都面临着挫折和挑战。这时我们一应该把握航向，坚定信念，跨越自己。
跨越自己，战胜挫折迎接挑战。人生的道路上我们每个人都会面临这样或那样的挫折和挑战，我们不应该轻言放弃。迎接挑战，战胜挫折，我们应该坚定信念，要自信。同时我们要学会做大自然中任凭风吹雨打的小草，而不是做温室的花朵。要经得住风雨的考验。 海伦·凯勒，面对身体的缺陷，她毅然接受可命运的挑战。虽然她双目失明，但她凭借自己坚强的意志的永不服输的精神，迎接挑战，战胜挫折。最终实现了跨越自己。 试想如果她面对命运的折磨，灰心丧气，自暴自弃。那么她会有如今的成就吗？
跨越自己，需要持之以恒的毅力。跨越自己是一个渐进的过程，谁都不可能一步登天，跨越自己要脚踏实地。越王勾践被吴王差夫灭国后，十年中，他每天卧薪尝胆，总结自己被灭国的原因。正是因为他持之以恒的毅力和洗刷灭国之辱的决心，使他实现了复国的理想，跨越了自己。试想，如果他被吴王夫差灭国后，就消极、低沉、自甘堕落，谈何复国？ 跨越自己，我们才能走向成功。我们的命运掌握在自己的手中。我们自由懂得跨越自己，并为实现自己的理想不懈努力，才能走向成功。史蒂夫·霍金，他身餐志坚，正是凭着坚定的意志和不向病魔屈服的精神，他最终实现了跨越自己。虽然他的身体被禁锢在冰冷的轮椅上，但他的思维已经“飞”到了宇宙空间。“黑洞学说”的提出正是他实现跨越自己的体现。 因此，面对人生的困境，我们应知难而进，坚定信念，要有跨越自己的精神，要有永不服输的精神。跨越自己，实现人生价值。
篇三：跨越自己
跨越自己 汪国真
我们可以欺瞒别人 却无法欺瞒自己 当我们走向枝繁叶茂的五月 青春就不再是一个谜
向上的路
总是坎坷又崎岖 要永远保持最初的浪漫
真是不容易
有人悲哀
有人欣喜
当我们跨越了一座高山 也就跨越了一个真实的自己
篇四：跨越12分作文
一． 中心句扩展
1. 举例法：数据举例 （人物举例和事件/故事举例不推荐使用）
2. 原因法：通过摆原因来支持中心
1) 因果连词连接表示因果关系：because of; due to; owing to; thanks to; because; since; as; for
2) 动词短语连接表示因果关系：contribute to, give rise to, bring about, result in
3) 状语连接表示因果关系：非谓语动词结构 （分词做状语）和with引导的介宾短语结构放在主谓结构之前
3. 结果法：通过阐述中心句可能带来的进一步的好的或坏的结果来达到对中心句的支持
1) 因果连词连接表示结果：
As a result; As a matter of fact; Therefore; Consequently; … will undoubtedly …; By doing this; Only in this way
2) 非限制性定语从句表示结果
4. 正反论证法：如果中心句是正着说，则反过来假设；如果中心句是反着说，则从正面直接阐述。
正反扩展的句型结构：Without…, one couldn’t even…, let alone / speak nothing of…
Eg. 中心句：The digital products play a vital role in people’s work.
扩展句：Without those products, one couldn’t even finish his office work in time, let alone in such a efficient way.
5. 细节化法：中心句相对抽象和概括，后面通过对中心句里的某核心概念进一步进行细节化描述来支持，实际上与中
心句是一种同义关系。
6. 实例一：(举例法、原因法、结果法)
Increasing Time Spent on English Study
1) 现在大学生花在英语学习上的时间越来越多
? 中心句：College students tend to spend greater amount of time on their English study.
? 扩展句：数字举例法
According to a recent survey conducted by CEM— China Education Ministry, the past 15 years has witnessed a
sharp increase from 3.8 to 14.5 hours in the average time that students spent on English study per week.
2) 为什么大学生会花更多的时间来学习英语
? 中心句：To account for this phenomenon, people have come up with various reasons listed below.
? 扩展句一 (原因法)：首先，因为有越来越多的国际交流，英语在人们的工作和中作中必不可少。
① 用因果连词表示因果关系：
? In the first place, owing to increasing international communication, English is becoming a necessity in
people’s life and work.
? In the first place, because there is increasing international communication, English is becoming a necessity
in people’s life and work.
② 用动词短语表示因果关系
In the first place, the increasing international communication gives rise to the fact that English is becoming a
necessity in people’s life and work
③ 用状语连接表示因果关系
? In the first place, being widely used in increasing international communication, English is becoming a
necessity in people’s life and work.
? In the first place, with (there being) more and more international communication, English is becoming a
necessity in people’s life and work.
次要扩展句（结果法）：所以，大学生当然不能落后于这个社会趋势。
① 用因果连词连接表示结果
As a matter of fact / As a result/ Therefore / Consequently, college students will certainly / undoubtedly not lag
behind this social trend.
② 用非限制性定语从句表示结果
? …, which in turn urges / requires students not to lag behind the social trend. 扩展句二（原因法）：而且，英语流利的人能获得更好的工作机会这个事实也进一步导致了在英语学习上花
费时间的增多。
① 用因果连词表示因果关系：
Because those who can speak fluent English have a better chance in getting a good job, students tend to increase
time spent on English study.
② 用动词短语表示因果关系
What’s more, the fact that those who can speak fluent English have a better chance in getting a good job ③ 用状语连接表示因果关系
? Realizing the fact that those who can speak fluent English have a better chance in getting a good job,
students tend to increase time spent on English study.
? With better chances in getting a good job offered to those who can speak fluent English, students tend to
increase time spent on English study.
3) 大学生学习英语应该注意听说读写全面发展
? 中心句： While in the process of learning English, students should pay attention to improving both their written
and verbal ability.
? 扩展句（结果法）：只有这样他们才能在真正意义上掌握英语。
① 用因果连词连接表示结果
Only in this way can they grasp English in a real sense.
② 用非限制性定语从句表示结果
…, only by which they can grasp English in a real sense.
7. 实例二 （正反论证法、细节化法、举例法、结果法）
How to Keep Healthy
1) 人人都希望健康
? 中心句：Everybody in this world hopes to keep healthy.
? 扩展句（正反论证法）：没有一个好的身体，一个人甚至连过正常的生活都不可能，更别提幸福的生活了。
Without a good health, one couldn’t even live a normal life, let alone a happy life.
2) 如何保持健康
? 中心句：There are several ways to keep healthy.
? 扩展句一（细节化法）：首先，一个人应该坚持经常锻炼身体。
To begin with, one should keep to doing regular physical exercise.
次要扩展句 (结果法)：只有这样，一个人不仅可以每天保持良好的身体状态也可以保持好心情。
① 用因果连词表示结果：
By doing this, one cannot only keep himself in good physical condition but also stay in a good mood every day.
② 用非限制性定语从句表示结果：
…, by which one cannot only keep himself in good physical condition but also stay in a good mood every day.
? 扩展句二（细节化法）：另外，均衡饮食对于保持健康也很重要
In addition, having a balanced diet is also of great importance to keeping healthy.
次要扩展句 (举例法)：根据世界卫生组织最新调查表明，2006年人们所患疾病的34.7%都是由吸收过多的
脂肪而引起。
According to a recent survey conducted by WHO— World Health Organization, a high proportion (34.7%) of
? diseases that people suffered from in 2006 were caused by taking too much fat. 扩展句三 （细节化法）：而且，一个人应该注意不要有太多的压力
One should pay attention not to have too much pressure.
次要扩展句（细节化法）：保持稳定和规律性的日常生活以及缓解经济压力会无疑改善一个人的健康水平。
Having stable and routine everyday life and reliving economic pressure will undoubtedly improve one’s health.
3) 我是如何保持健康的
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? 中心句：As to me, I play table tennis for an hour every day and I take everything easy. 扩展句 （结果法）：
① 因果连词表示结果：
By doing this, both of my body and mind are refreshed and hence I keep myself stay in a good health.
② 用非限制性定语从句表示结果：
…, by which both of my body and mind are refreshed and hence I keep myself stay in a good health.
…, which refresh both my body and mind and hence keep me stay in a good health.
二． 句子结构优化
1. 避免低级错误：词性错误、主谓不一致、句子不完整、断句错误
2. 如何美化句子
1) 并列平行结构：增强文章节奏感，使行文流畅，富有韵律
① 词的并列：I want to be a man with sharp, vivid and imaginative mind.
② 短语的并列：Snapping the power line, paralyzing the public transportation and destroying houses and farmland, the
sleet and icy temperature have caused great loss and inconvenience to the people.
③ 句子的并列（排比）：If everyone if grateful, our society will be more harmonious, our family will have more 2) 非谓语动词结构：动词不定式、动名词、现在分词和过去分词。使句子结构紧凑、逻辑严谨。
Eg. ① ② ③ Their lack of necessary discipline make some students indulge in computer games and net world, forgetting their ④ Weighing up these two preferences, I prefer the former one.
⑤ Considering the above-mentioned, we can reasonably come to the conclusion that…
⑥ Given the fierce competition in the job market, students might as well make more efforts than necessary to take up social practice.
3) 非限制性定语从句：六级考点、亮点
Eg. ① ② Charles Smith, who was my former teacher, retired last year.
③ China’s opening policy has been implemented for many years, which has created more chances for people to go 4) 倒装结构：修辞效果强Only when, Only if, Only in this way, Only by doing sth., Not only… but also…, By no means …,
Not until…, Should / Had…
Eg. ① Only when all of us join in the efforts of eliminating cheating at all levels can we expect to have a cleaner society
and a more beautiful future.
② Only if we get prepared can we seize the opportunities instead of letting them slip by, just as the saying goes,
“Opportunities are only for the prepared minds.”
① Only in this way can I get a good understanding of the world outside the campus.
② Only by planning his time carefully can he improve efficiency and make achievements.
③ Not only did they break into his office and steal his books, but they also tore up his manuscripts.
④ By no means can we neglect the importance of taking up social practice while staying on campus.
⑤ Not until I began to work did I realize how much time I had wasted.\
⑥ Should I be free this afternoon, I will come and help you with your lesson.
⑦ Had it not been for the captain, the ship would have sunk with all on board.
5) 介词短语：增强文章表现力
Eg. I found everything in good condition
6) 被动语态：在陈述事实时会产生客观、公正的效果，并使句子简洁、顺畅
Eg. ① In addition, English is now widely used in all fields and is more likely to help you get a good job in the tight job
market.
② It is widely acknowledged / accepted that…
③ Attentions should be paid to …
④ It is high time that some effective approaches should be implemented.
7) while引导的状语从句 （凸显两种观点的对比）eg. Some people hold the opinion that … while others maintain that …
8) 条件状语从句：if, as long as, on the condition that, given that…,
9) 结果状语从句：so / such… that..
10) 让步状语从句：although, though, even though, even if, while (放句首), no matter how, however, whatever
Eg. ① First, while it is true that you can do a lot of things with money, it doesn’t follow that you can buy such things as
love, friendship, health and happiness with money.
② No matter how responsible the teachers are and how friendly the classmates are, you can only depend on
yourself once you step into the examination room.
11) Those who …句型: Eg. Those who are in favor of the Internet claim that it has a lot of advantages.
12) There is no such things as… “没有…这样的事情”
Eg. Taking all these factors into consideration, we may safely come to the conclusion that there is no such thing as
destined fate in our life.
13) 强调句：
Eg. First of all, the main financial support comes from parents and other family members. For all the years it is they who
gave the student courage and determination to hold on and excel.
14) 反问句：Why not …? (表示建议) How can I / you …?
Eg. ① Now that you can draw the conclusion that daydreaming is most beneficial, why not make good use of it to make
life rich and rewarding?
② If you have only had wonderful things happen to you, how can you become brave? If you can only embrace
success and will never accept failure, how can you become mature?
15) not (never) … until
Eg. ① For one thing, we can never wish people to be good to us until we become thoughtful and considerate.
② We can never wish to realize our dream of a cleaner and more beautiful environment until all of us take actions to
build, protect and take care of it.
16) 包含never的否定句:
① never.. too… to… “再…都不为过”eg. You can never be too good to your mother.
② never… no… 双重否定表肯定
Eg. Though it does good to college students in many ways, the two-day weekend can never be said to bring no problems. ③ never…because (since)… “不因为… 就…”
Eg. Last but not the least, it is for the first time in my life that I learn perseverance, and I will never give up since a
matter is difficult.
④ never… unless… “如果不… 就不…”
eg. Similarly, you can never write a good research paper unless you concentrate on what you are doing and have a
right attitude towards failure.
⑤ never fail…“总能够”
eg. On the other hand, selective courses can be informative, instructive and inspiring — because different teachers,
subjects, classmates and environment will never fail to sparkle new thoughts.
三． 词汇的亮化
1. 积极准备应用文功能用词
2. 积极准备校园生活话题和社会热点话题主题词汇
3. 积极使用一些高分词汇和短语
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? individuals, characters, folks替换 people ,persons positive, favorable, rosy (美好的)，promising (有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替换good dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的)替换bad , 如果bad做表语，可以用be less impressive替换 eg. An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time
passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation, as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.
(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替换many.
注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有词。
eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that….同理 用most, if not all, 替换most.
a slice of, quiet a few , several替换some
6. harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that,
it is universally acknowledged that)替think (因为是书面语，所以要加that)
7. affair ,business ,matter 替换thing
8. shared 代 common
9.reap huge fruits 替换get many benefits
? 10. for my part ,from my own perspective, as for me, as to me, as far as I am concerned 替换 in my opinion 11. Increasing(ly), growing 替换more and more( 注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing
/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly.
Eg. Sth has gained growing popularity.
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? Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth. 12. little if anything, 或little or nothing替换hardly 13. beneficial, rewarding替换helpful 14. shopper, client, consumer, purchaser, 替换customer 15. exceedingly, extremely, intensely, immensely 替换very 16. hardly necessary, hardly inevitable…替换 unnecessary, avoidable 17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换sb take interest in / sb. be interested in 18. capture one's attention替换attract one's attention. 19. facet, dimension, sphere代aspect 20. be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear 21. give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替换cause. 22. There are several reasons behind sth. 替换.reasons for sth. 23. desire 替换want. 24. pour attention into 替换pay attention to 25. bear in mind that 替换remember 26. enjoy, possess 替换have(注意process是过程的意思) 27. interaction替换communication 28.frown on sth替换 be against , disagree with sth 29.to name only a few, as an example替换 for example, for instance 30. next to / virtually impossible,替换nearly / almost impossible ? ?
4. 积极使用连接词
5. 积极使用程度副词（增强语气，强调客观事实）、评论性副词（客观评述）和调节观点的词（使说理内容客观、适
度、避免过于偏激）可使文章更为简洁、地道
① 程度副词
篇五：跨越自己
跨越自己 汪国真 我们可以欺瞒别人 却无法欺瞒自己 当我们走向枝繁叶茂的五月 青春就不再是一个谜 向上的路 总是坎坷又崎岖 要永远保持最初的浪漫 真是不容易 有人悲哀 有人欣喜 当我们跨越了一座高山 也就跨越了一个真实的自己
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