2016年中考作文预测
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篇一:2016中考作文预测
关于兴趣爱好
My hobby
Different people,different hobbies.
My hobby is reading .I think it’s a good way to relax and spend my free time.when I was a kid,my mother often read books for me before I went to bed.From then on,I was interested in reading books.Books are m y best friends.
I always lose myself in the books when I am free.I like reading all kinds of books,storybooks ,novels and so on.
If you have the same hobby as mine,let’s make friends and share books,shall we ?
关于学校生活
My school life
School are students second home.My school is big and beautiful .It has a big playground and there are many trees and flowers in it.we do exercise on the playground every day.we have two teaching buildings. I study on the third floor. We have strict school rules.And the teachers are strict but kind.They not only teach us to study but also teach us how to be a man.
Every year,we go on a school trip with the teachers.I feel happy in my school and I learning a lot during the past three years.
I love my school and I enjoy my school life.welcome to our school if you have time ! 关于情感
My dream,the Chinese dream
Every has his own dream.It’s important for us to have a dream.
My dream is to be a good doctor.When I was young I had a car accident,a doctor sawed me from death.From then on,I have made up mu mind to be a doctor.Because I tink doctors are great,it can help people in trouble.I know to be a doctor is not easy.So I have been working hard to make my dream come true.
Being a doctor is not only my own dream,but is the Chinese dream.There are still mang sick people in poor areas who need doctors very much.If I were a doctor,I would try my best to help more sick people.
I’u hold on to my dreams,and never give it up.No matter how hard it is!
关于英语学习策略(英语的重要性和学习方法)
As we know,English is important in te modern world.It is spoken all over the world.Most business letters are written in English.If you don’t know English,you will fall behind in te future. How can you learn English well? It’s true that English is sometimes really very difficult for us.Both English listening and speaking are the most difficult for almost every beginner.Beet I think if you do a lot of practice,you will make progress.You’d better speak English with your classmates as often as possible not only in class but also out of class.I advise you to buy a radio,so you can listen some English programs on the radio.Watching English movies is also a good way to study English.If you do that,you’ll be able to learn English well easily.
Hope
All of you will become good at English step by step.
篇二:2016年中考作文题目十大预测
2014年中考作文题目十大预测
新课标对时下初中生的作文写作,提出了明确的要求。归纳起来,基本上有三部分,一是写字、卷面、标点符号的要求;二是文体的要求,就是记叙文,写的内容要具体。即使有说明文或议论文,也只能是“小作文”;三是对题材的要求,就是表达对自然、社会、人生的真实体验和独特感受。
在此意义上讲,各位考生首先注意卷面的干净和行文的规范,根据记叙文的要求进行备考。接下来,就是素材的准备。大家一定要记住,如果你在考场上写字不端正,卷面脏,你的备考工作,效果几乎就是零了。没有哪个阅卷老师,愿意给一张很脏的卷子给高分。
不管中考作文怎么出题,万变不离其宗,就是让考生写自己身边的人、身边的事儿、身边的景。考生备考中考作文,必须准备好这几类素材:身边让你感动的人、身边让你感动的事儿、身边让你感动的情景或者风景。这里的“感动”,可理解为“触动心灵”。如果孩子们对上述的素材,没有足够的积累,考场上写一篇高分作文可能性不大。
预测一:《我的中国梦》、《梦中的XXXX》。
推荐理由:十八大以后,中国梦成为一个热点名词。每个人都有自己的梦想,每个梦想都是中国梦的一部分。考生写中国梦,不要写得大而广,抓住自己梦想的一个内容,就行了。例如:住房、诚信、环保、平安、医疗等,围绕一个主题,写记叙文,感悟中国梦即可。需要注意的是,写这类东西,尽量不要做愤青,不要骂政府和国家,不要写“遍地贪官”,以免走歪。
预测二:《触动心灵的风景》
推荐理由:该作文题是写人与写事的结合,甚至,你可以写成一篇单纯的写景作文。风景,既可以是看得到的景色,也可以是一类现象的象征。写出你身边的一种感人的场面或景象,抒发你内心的感悟和感慨,提炼出对成长有益的价值,是这篇作文的要求。如:毕业的离别场面、抢险救灾的感人场面、考场外父母陪考的辛苦场面、大雨中警察指挥交通的场面、扶贫济困的场面,都是值得你搜集和书写的素材。
预测三:“爱”“正能量”话题作文
推荐理由:当前,“正能量”这个词,见报率很高。大家要做好准备。这类话题作文,不能讲大话,说大道理,必须从小见大。我们身边的每一种渴望,只要是健康的,与国家有观点,就是中国梦的组成部分。对正义的渴望、对环境的保护、对住房的期待、对健康的思考,都是中国梦的组成部分。如果是我,可以写写我家住房多么狭窄,然后期待宽敞明亮的居室——这就是我的中国梦。如果是民工,在劳累的夜晚,有一张容身的床,就这中国梦的组成部分。如果是农民,身边的河流不流淌着污染的脏水,就是中国梦的一部分。写一件事,放大,抒情,就是一篇中国梦的好作文。
“爱”话题作文,是写人写事的结合。爱,既可以是母爱、父爱、师爱,也可以引申为“大爱”,即爱岗敬业、无私奉献、遵纪守法等。考生需要想好一类,然后叙事,末尾扣题抒情。例如,你可以写风雨中交警的坚守——爱是风雨中的坚守;你可以写母爱——爱是清晨餐桌绿洲;你可以写军人——爱是路边那么惊
艳的绿色;你可以写扶贫济困——爱是青春无私的风险。甚至,你还可以笔走偏锋——爱是老爸的那记耳光、爱是老爸深夜的等待。
预测四:《XXXX的精彩瞬间》
推荐理由:这是写事儿的作文,貌似简单,但是写起来很不容易。因为,要求学生们写的是瞬间,凸出瞬间的精彩,就得有大量的描写,末尾还得有扣题和抒情。这对于习惯于写大事,写长故事的学生而言,把瞬间写大,显得极具挑战性。生活中的瞬间很多,你选择哪个呢?再就是,怎才算是精彩呢?孩子们需要开动脑筋。
预测五:《与你一起走过的时光》
推荐理由:这是写人写事且偏向于写人的作文,具有一定的难度。首先,这是一篇第二人称的作文,孩子们容易在人称上发生混淆。其次,题目中的“你”,既可以是人物,也可以是物品,也可以是一种品质。例如,“你”可以是字典,也可以是一种向往,也可以是一种困难。当然,就作文而言,“你”最好是一种看见到摸得见的人物和事物。如果你对第二人称的作文,掌握得不够熟练,那就赶紧练练吧。
预测六:《在XXXX中成长》
推荐理由:这是一篇倾向于叙事的作文。就文题本身而言,显得有点老生常谈,但是,这是一篇最为贴近新课标要求的作文。建议考生就这篇作文,从不同的角度写出自己的真实感受。此文的补题技巧,要求也相对高一些。在校园中成长、在这座城市里成长、在温暖的家庭中成长;在思念中成长、在一次次跌倒后成长、在训斥中成长;在雾霾中成长、在自信中成长。同学们一定要有个别致的补题。这篇作文可以写成“总分总并列段”结构,当然,也不妨写成小标题作文。
预测七:《课堂里的XXXX》
推荐理由:既然新课标要求孩子们写身边的真实体验,那么,就拿这个作文题目练手吧。课堂里肯定发生过许多你难忘的事情,或者出现过很多触动心灵的人物,回忆一下,补全题目,写出你真实的感受吧。这篇作文需要场面描写,也在考验着学生们的描写能力。不过,这篇作文孩子们不会感到为难,写生动则难了些。在补题的时候,一定要注意补得别致些、生动些。在选材的时候,最好是生动些、诙谐些。
预测八:《XXX教给我XXX》
推荐理由:从社会、他人、景物中,提炼出动人心魄的感悟,这是新课标对初中作文的要求。既然这样,你曾经领略出什么,就写出来吧。双重补题,留给考生足够的想象空调间。前面的补题,既可以是人,也可以是事儿,也可以是景色,还可以是一种现象。如:妈妈教给我坚韧、那次事故教给我交通规则、烂漫花枝教给我珍惜青春、“送礼”教给我自强,等等。
预测九:《我很XX,但是我很XXX》
推荐理由:成长中,总有一些不如意的机遇,但成长就是克服阻力,在追求中进步的。20多年前,就有一首歌《我很丑,但是我很温柔》,我们写这篇作
文,补题的时候,两个补题,要注意形成反差:我很笨,但是我很刻苦;我很累,但是我很坚强;我很开朗,但是我很纠结;我很傻,但是我很被人喜欢;我很想成功,但是我很无奈。这篇作文,你可以写你成长的经历,详略要得当。这是一篇容易出彩的作文。练练吧,没亏吃。
预测十:“害羞”、“惭愧”、“有趣”、“天真”等话题作文
推荐理由:我们在初中写作文写了三年,感动、温暖、财富、成长、礼物、思念等话题作文,早已熟悉有加。但身边那些看起来很俗的事情,往往也蕴涵着人生的真知和享受。例如,童年里的天真、无知、趣事,至今回味起来津津有味。再如,你肯定有过害羞、惭愧、心跳的经历精力,就像你无意中跟异性在教室门口走个碰头顶,脸会变红。
21世纪教育网建议广大考生平时多积累写作的素材,考场上才能信手拈来,发挥自如。
篇三:2016年中考英语作文预测
2016年中考英语作文热点预测
Alina主编
话题一:写人篇
★范文1. My best friend
My best friend is --- He is 15 years old. We are both in the same class. He works very hard. He is never late for school and he does well in all his lessons. He is always ready to help others. My math is very poor, so he often helps me with my math after class. His parents are both teachers. They are very busy, so he often helps do the housework at home. He is a little shorter than me but he is very strong. He likes playing football very much at school. We often play football together and he plays it pretty well, He gets on well with us, everyone in our class likes him. ★范文2. The Teacher I Like Best
Of all my teachers, I love Mrs. Li best. She taught us English in junior middle school.
he had many ways of making her classes interesting and exciting. She always taught us something new in easy ways. She helped us use English by doing interesting activities, such as, making surveys, playing games, etc.
Mrs. Li was a strict but kind teacher. She often asked us to be on time for class and do homework by ourselves. When we had trouble, she often helped us out.
★范文3. My Chinese Teacher
Of all the subjects, I like Chinese best because I have a good Chinese teacher. Though she has been teaching us for only three years, I respect and love her very much.
My Chinese teacher,Ms Sun is thirty-six years old and she is neither tall nor short. 折works very hard. She is always the first to come and the last to leave her office. She tries to make her classes lively and interesting. And we enjoy her lessons very much.
Ms Sun is very kind and friendly to us. And we're getting on well with each other. But she is very strict with us in our studies.
Ms Sun teaches us so well that we all enjoy learning Chinese. All the students think she is one of the most popular teachers in our school.
话题二:毕业,回忆,感恩,幸福 ,助人为乐,烦恼,压力
1. 回顾初中三年成长过程,你一定有很多感受,从学习, 生活,爱好等方面作出自我评价 ( 毕业 回顾评价)
★范文
I have studied in my middle school for three years. I have learned a lot. I have learned not only how to make friends but also how to talk to others. I have many hobbies. I like sports. I often play basketball, football and volleyball with my friends. Football is my favorite. Of all my subjects, I do best in English and Chinese. But my math and physics are a little weak. I think I will try my best to learn them well. I hope I can study in No.1 High School.
2. 初中生活马上就要结束了,三年的初中生活一定给你留下了很多挥之不去的回忆。请你给大家讲一个最值得你回忆的故事。包括时间、人物、事情经过和事后你的感想(请不要写出真实的学校名称以及真实姓名)。 提示词语: three years, memories, one of, one day, think, happy/ sorry
★ 范文
How time flies! I have studied in my school for three years. And I will graduate from middle school in a month.
I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you. I had so many memories in three years' life. One of them impressed me very much.
I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn't do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I've become interested in English and I'm good at it. I think I am so lucky to become one of her students. I've learned a lot from her. I will try to help others when they are in trouble. I think it is a happy thing to help others.
3. My School life ( 我的学校生活)
My name is Beth. I'm 14 years old, and I study in No. 1 Middle School of Hangzhou. My school is very big and beautiful. I'm very happy in the school.
I usually get up at 6:15 in the morning. Then I do morning exercises in the playground. At 6:40, I have my breakfast. You can see many students and teachers in the dinning room. After breakfast, I often read English with my classmates.
We have six classes every day. The first class begins at 7:50 am. I like all the classes for my teachers can make the classes lively and interesting. My favorite subject is English, so I join English Corner every week. I can speak English with many other students there. It's very interesting and exciting. I think it's help for me to learn English well. After class, I always play games with my friends. We play soccer ball, basketball, volleyball, ping-pong and so on. They are very relaxing.
I like my lessons, my friends and my teachers. In a word, I love my school. I find my school life more and more colorful. My school life is wonderful, isn't it?
4. 三年的初中生活就要结束,崭新的高中学习即将到来。回顾过去,你一定有许多成功的喜悦与失利的遗憾;展望未来,你肯定有美好的憧憬和实实在在的打算。请你以―Unforgettable Memories ‖为题,给英文报纸21st Century ―青春校园‖栏目写一篇80词左右的征文。
Unforgettable Memories
How time flies! Three years passed in a blink. Lots of memories left in my head. Teachers, classmates, hard work and above all friendship stay in mind. Looking back, I have gone through either the joy of success or the pains of failure. Teachers are friendly to us in life and always strict with us in study. Classmates and friends help me so much. With their help I‘ve made great progress. But I‘m a careless boy. And I always make mistakes which can be avoided. Senior middle school life is a new beginning and it gives me a chance to overcome my shortcomings. As it is said, ―It is not our abilities that show what we truly are, it is our choice.‖ The two-month holiday will also provide me the freedom to think over and make up my mind to do it better in the future. And I believe I can do it.
5 . 在即将告别母校的时刻, 你想表达你对母校、老师、职员和同学的感恩之情。请以The last moment held on to(难舍时刻)为题, 用英语写出一篇短文。
The last moment held on to
How time flies! We‘re just leaving you—our lovely junior high school. I have so many words from my heart to say. Thanks, dear junior school. You‘re a beautiful and happy home for us all. I hope you‘ll be better and better. Thanks, dear teachers. You‘re taught us lot of knowledge and helped us in all ways. I‘ll remember you forever. Thanks, our staff members. You‘ve taken good care of us and helped us grow up. I hope you are happy all the time. Thanks, dear classmates. You‘ve got on well with me just like sisters and brothers. Let‘s always keep in touch with each other. Thanks, all my loved ones. All the best to you ! Goodbye!
6. 假设让你代表今年的初中毕业生在毕业典礼上发言,请根据所给提示用英语写一篇发言稿。
回顾美丽的校园,师生友好,生动有趣的课堂,三年来的收获感谢老师的培养(training),父母的支持(support),同学的帮助祝愿考生自拟
注意:1. 词数:不少于80词。开头和结尾部分已给出,不计入词数。
2. 发言稿需包括所给提示内容,不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Good morning,my dear teachers and schoolmates,
It's a great honor for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating classes. How time flies! Our junior high school lives will come to an end.
________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for listening.
参考范文:
Good morning,my dear teachers and schoolmates,
It's a great honor for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating classes. How time flies! Our junior high school lives will come to an end.
In the past three years, we've had a beautiful school and it provides us with a good study place. Teachers are our friends. They've given us interesting lessons and we all love them.
We've learned a lot from them, not only knowledge but also the way to solve problems in life. Thanks for our teachers' training, parents' support and the help from classmates. Without them, we couldn't have so much wonderful time.
At last, we hope our school will become better, our teachers will be healthy for ever and all our dreams will come true.
Thank you for listening.
7. 初中阶段的学习即将结束,回想自己在父母和师长的关爱和帮助下的成长过程,心中充满感激之情。请用英语给父母或老师写一封80词左右的信表示感谢。
★范文
Dear parents,
Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you. You have taken good care of me since I was
born.When I am in trouble,you always encourage me and cheer me up.Once I argued with my best friend and was upset,you talked with me the whole night and finally helped me solve the problem. With your help,I have become a good student.I am so thankful for your love that I will work harder and try to do better in the future.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Zhang hua
8. 请以《家人的爱》为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文。
When I just opened my eyes , I could see my mom and dad‘s smiling face . When I just learned to walk, I could hear mother‘s encouraging voice. I still remember when I was ill, daddy took me to the hospital deep in the night. But, most of the time, I didn‘t understand them . Through more than 10 years of understanding, I know that they also have many hobbies and troubles, just like us .
I am growing up day by day with my family love.
9. 幸福是什么?幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家,幸福是老师望向你的赞许的目光,幸福是孤独时朋友送来的一杯奶茶,幸福是…… 请以My happiness为话题,写一件曾经发生过的令你感到幸福的事情。
要求:条理清晰,语言流畅,用词准确, 字迹工整,80-100词。
★ 范文
Happiness is important in our life. In fact, happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it。
I will never forget one thing. Once, I had a bad mark at a math test. I was shy and afraid to meet my parents. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened, they said to me: ―It doesn't matter, my child. Remember we'll be always beside you when you need help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up!‖ I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder。
I feel happy. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents' love. I want to be a good child for my parents.
10. 年是学习雷锋五十周年纪念日,雷锋同志说过:―我要把有限的生命,投入到无限的为人民服务之中去。‖ 请写一篇意思连贯,符合逻辑,不少于80字的作文。
在作文中,简单表述你对雷锋的崇敬之情,为什么向雷锋叔叔学习以及你在日常生活中是如何帮助他人的。 ★ 范文
Leifeng was known as a pattern that offered help to others selflessly. He devoted all this life into his beloved career as well. I, myself, was totally shocked by his character.
Such is human nature; people trace the good, water flows to low. Everyone should copy his sprit as our daily life goes instead of uttering a meaningless slogan ―learn from Leifeng, our decent idol‖, so that we could definitely see a lot more smiling faces rather than conflict.
To help others is not a hard thing, however, what you need is to consist doing it. Take myself as an example. I am the representative of Math, to collect homework is my daily task, however, I would turn them to the right page for shorten the time for teachers when correcting them.
11. 在和谐社会里,人与人之间的互帮互助已构成我们生活中的重要组成部分。下周英国友好学校将来你校访问,你校英语俱乐部将举行一次以"Helping Each Other Makes the World Wonderful"为主题的英语演讲比赛。假如李智要参加演讲比赛,请你以"李智"的名义用英语写一篇讲稿。内容要点提示:
1、 帮助同学 --友谊; 2、 帮助老人 --幸福; 3、 帮助病人 --快乐; 4、 帮助别人体会......
要求:
1、 词数:80词左右。正文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2、 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考范文:
Helping Each Other Makes the World Wonderful
Hello, everyone. I'm Li Zhi. It's nice to speak about help here. In our life we often help others and also get help from others. When we help our classmates with their study and other things, we can develop our friendship. If we give a hand to old people, we can understand the meaning of pleasure. As we know, patient in our life. I think we can get much when we help the people around us. As the saying goes, "Giving is much better than receiving."
Thank you for your listening.
12. 爱是心中的太阳,融化你我身边的冰雪。假设你是李明,你们学校的 "English Garden"正在举办主题为"付出即是收获"的征文活动,请你联系自己平时的爱心行为和感受写一篇文章投稿。
要求:1、文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。
2、80-100词,标题和文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:help ,clean up,an old people's home,make...happy
Giving Is Receiving
I am a student from Green Middle School. My name is Li Ming. I like helping others because I think it makes me very happy. I often help my classmates with their schoolwork. Sometimes I help clean up city parks. I go to the old people's home and do some cleaning for them once a month. So I'm pretty popular there. I often visit the Children's Hospital to cheer the sick kids up. I read stories and sing songs for them. I'm good with children. I also give money to charities to help people in trouble. I think giving is receiving. Helping others is helping ourselves. Do you agree with me?
13. 假如你是Han Mei, 下面是一封你的笔友Alice 给你发来的e-mail,请你根据e-mail 的内容给她写一封回信,与她交流看法,并帮她排忧解难。
提示词语:listen to, mother's love, care about, communicate with, get along with, smile
写作要求:1.语句通顺,书写工整;2.可用所给提示词语,也可以适当发挥;3.词数在60-80左右 Dear Han Mei,
I'm afraid I've got a big problem recently. My mother talks too much to me. She always tells me, "Be careful while crossing the street." "Put on more clothes." "Did you do a good job at school?" and so on. I'm annoyed(烦恼)。What shall I do?
Alice
例文
Dear Alice,
As a teenager, I met the same problem as you. But now I can get along better with my mother. Here are some ideas for you.
Your mother talks much, because she cares about you. Maybe it's not a good way, but it shows your mother's love. So I think you should listen to her. If your opinions are different from your mother's, you can communicate with her, and tell her what you are thinking about.
If your mother doesn't take your advice, just keep silent and give her a smile.
I hope what I say here can help you a lot.
Yours,
Han Mei
14. 假设你是Emma,你的笔友Josh给你写了一封电子邮件,向你倾诉他在家里的一些烦恼。请根据来信和提示,给Josh回一封电子邮件。先说说你的看法,再给出建议,并适当发挥。提示:1.内容要点:(1)看法:在父母看来,我们仍是孩子;父母这样做是为了保护我们。
(2)建议:给父母写信谈谈你的想法;主动帮你父母做些力所能及的事情。
2.回信应包括以上所有提示的信息,做到行文连贯,不要逐字翻译。
3.词数:不少于80。开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Josh,
Thanks for your e-mail. I have ever had the same experience. I even had a fight with my parents. But now, I understand them.
____________________________________________________________________
I hope this helps!
Emma
参考范文1:
Dear Josh,
篇四:2016 中考英语作文预测
中考英语作文预测
A
幸福是什么?幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家,幸福是老师望向你的赞许的目光,幸福是
孤独时朋友送来的一杯奶茶,幸福是?? 请以My happiness为话题,写一件曾经发生过的
令你感到幸福的事情。
要求:条理清晰,语言流畅,用词准确, 字迹工整,80-100词。
B
越来越多汽车进入我们的家庭生活,改善了我们的生活,但同时也带来了很多问题,如
塞车和车祸,给家庭和社会带来极大的危害。作为中学生,我们应该怎样做呢?
请写一篇有关交通安全的短文(80字左右)
内容包含:
1、遵守交通规则,如走人行道/过斑马线。
2、别在街道上或马路上玩耍和踢球。
3、可以适当增加内容,让短文通顺,过渡自然。
4、参考词汇:sidewalk 人行道 zebra-crossing 斑马线
注:第一段已给出,不计入总数
With more and more cars coming into our families, we are
C
健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们是非常重要的。你认为健康的生活习惯应当是怎样
的呢?请根据下面的信息提示,写一篇短文,首句已给出。
信息提示:健康饮食;早睡早起,不熬夜;参加运动,强身健体。
要求:根据信息提示,把握要点,适当发挥,不逐字翻译。字数在80词左右。
I think healthy habits are very important for us.
D.
对父母心存感恩,因为他们给予我生命,让我健康成长;对老师心存感恩,因为他们给了我教诲,让我抛却愚昧;对朋友心存感恩,因为他们给了我友爱;对社会心存感恩,因为社会给了我智慧和力量。自从国家实施义务教育以来,书本免费,食宿免费,而且还有贫困助学金等。面对这些,我们应该心存感恩,感谢祖国对我们的厚望和期盼。让我们永远记住:感谢父母、感谢老师、感谢朋友、感谢全社会!请以“感恩”为话题写一篇80—100字的作文。
E
假设你是School Kids Times杂志的编辑,你收到了一封读者来信。在信中,一名叫Helen的读者向你诉说了她的烦恼。请你针对她的问题谈谈你的看法,给她提几点建议。
Dear editor,
My problem is my parents. All of my classmates have mobile phones. They phone each other, surf the Internet and play games. I’m always asking my parents fo one. But they refuse, time and time again. None of my friends have such terrible parents. I’m so angry that I can’t study hard. Do you think I’m right? What shall I do?
Helen
F
目前,购物不一定要去商场,我们可以在网上购物,这已成为新型的购物方式,它可节省时间,比较方便、容易;但一些人认为在网上看不到真实的物品,容易被欺骗。 请根据自己的想法谈谈网上购物的利与弊。字数80词左右。 提示词汇:被欺骗be cheated 比较compare
参考范文:
A
Happiness is important in our life. In fact, happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it。
I will never forget one thing. Once, I had a bad mark at a math test. I was shy and afraid to meet my parents. But when I got back home late, my parents knew what happened, they said to me: “It doesn’t matter, my child. Remember we’ll be always beside you when you need help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up!” I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder。
B
With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents。
Traffic safety is everybody's business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on walk side, when we cross zebra – crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road .we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc。
We can say cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody's business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.
C
I think healthy habits are very important for us.
All of us want to be healthy. First, we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once. D
What should we thank?
The thankful great universe provides the environment of existence for us and give us sunlight, air, water and everything in keeping with us existence of space, bring storm to let us accept to toughen for us, bring to us mysterious let us look for. The thankful parents give us the life, make us feel the merriment of the human life, feel the genuine feeling of the human life, feel the comity of the human life, feel happiness of the human life, also feel hardships and pain and sufferings of the human life! The thankful teacher works with diligence and without fatigue everyday of teach, give us knowledge ability, and put on the wing which flies toward the ideal for us. The thankful classmate and friend grow up
with us and let us no longer stand alone in the itinerary(旅程),of life. The thankful our country provides us with free books, dormitory and food. Whenever it is, we should keep a thankful heart towards everything existed. Only thus, can we become a useful man.
E
Hi Helen,
I don’t think you’re right. Students should pay attention to their study. Mobile phones are not always necessary. They’re not like books and pens. You should understand your parents and do what they ask. Now public phones booths can be found everywhere. If you have to make a phone call, you may use them. You’d better have a talk with your parents and tell them you don’t want one any more. Work hard on your lessons and read more interesting books. You may also talk about your problem with your teachers and friends. I’m sure they’ll help you. If you have more questions, please ask me.
Yours,
F
Shopping online is quite popular in our daily life now. Some people think shopping online is very convenient. However, others don’t believe goods online and they afraid of being cheated.
In my opinions, shopping online is better. First, it can help us save much time. We don’t need spend much time in the street to look for the goods . Second, we can compare some goods and their prices at home. When the prices are listed ,we can buy Besides, we can pay for our goods after we get them. Don’t you think it’s a good way to go shopping?
篇五:2016中考语文作文预测——全国卷历年高考作文出题方向
中考讲义
作文
掌握作文写作技巧,了解中考作文得分点
熟悉作文的内容(包括立意、选材、中心)、结构和语言三大部分,提升写作能力。
知识梳理
一、考纲解读
1.写记叙文,做到内容具体充实。(能力层级:运用)
2.写简单的议论文,做到有理有据。(能力层级:运用)
3.写简单的说明文,做到明白清楚。(能力层级:运用)
4.中心明确,内容具体,感情真挚。(能力层级:运用)
5.结构完整,条理清楚。(能力层级:运用)
6.语言通顺,不写错别字,正确使用标点符号。(能力层级:运用)
7.书写规范、整洁。(能力层级:运用)
二、作文命题种类
(一)全命题作文
全命题作文是指命题者给出一个既定的题目,要求考生根据这个给定的题目进行写作。题目的唯一性,有利于在阅卷中确定评分尺度与标准,能够有效避免考前押题,防止抄袭与宿构。这类作文限制较紧,且大都隐含在题目之中,因此要写好命题作文,关键在于准确审题,精心构思。
1.直接型全命题作文:直接运思,化大为小
题干由“题目+要求”组成,题意明确,要求所记的事、所写的人、所说的理、所状的物一目了然。在直接型全命题作文里,考生往往已经知晓了作文的基本内容。对于这类作文题,考生可以通过“直接运思,化大为小”的方法进行构思。
2.含蓄式全命题作文:凭借转换,化虚为实
此类文题语意含蓄,往往包含引申、比喻或象征等意义。如果误将该类文题当作直接型全命题作文,就可能导致立意肤浅,视野狭窄,不合题旨。该类作文题写作时需要将它转换成直接型全命题作文题,即把题目中含蓄而富有哲理的文字转换成简明直白的语句,概括出蕴含其中的内涵后再运思行文。
3.材料式全命题作文:审读材料,立意选材
此类文题由“导语+题目+要求”或“题目+要求+提示语”组成。导语或提示语指引考生消除审题障碍,打开行文思路,拓展写作范围,从而准确把握题旨。材料的作用为解说文意、渲染气氛,或是唤醒考生阅读和情感的积累。在审读文题时,千万不可忽略对材料的审读,一定要读出隐含在其中的限制要求。当所给材料只有一个中心时,可直接将其提炼出来作为作文的主旨;当同时有多个要点时,则须首先选择一点作为写作中心,然后再化大为小或化虚为实地立意选材、谋篇布局。
(二)半命题作文
半命题作文就是命题者限定题目的一部分内容,学生根据要求将题目补充完整,然后再进行写作的作文命题形式。这一类型的作文题既有文题指定、限制的内容与范围,又有考生选材、立意的自由。半命题作文由于兼具限制性和开放性的特点,近几年来,一直受到命题者的青睐。
写好半命题作文的关键是补全作文题目。在选择填入横线的词语时,必须多加思索,反复推敲、比较,要选择适合自己写作的那个点、那个人、那件事或那个方面;要调动自己的生活储存,综合考虑选材、立意、构思等多种方面的因素,以写熟悉内容为重点,以写“我”为中心,以立意构思新颖为前提,以切入角度小为策略,扬长避短,把一个半命题变成就像是自己命的一个题。
1.补写型半命题作文:力避雷同
没有任何明显的限制语与修饰语,该类文题为同学们提供了广阔的写作空间。那些一看到考题稍加思索就能想到的题目,很难避免选材雷同的误区,对这样的题目应弃之不用。考生宜选取与中心相关的自己感受最深的体验、思考、发现来入题行文。
2.供选式半命题作文:选材求新
该类文题在题干中给出了可供填充的词句,考生写作时必须从这里面选择,限定了写作的范围与内容。如果在供选词语后面出现省略号或“等等”字样,则考生可自由选择其他词语。与前类文题相比,考生只需选择用所给词语填补完整题目即可,审题难度明显下降。然而题目提供选择会导致不少考生选取相同文题,因此要想脱颖而出,考生就得读出文题背后深层的立意导向,在选材上求新。
3.材料式半命题作文:把好审题关
相比前两种文题形式,材料式文题审题难度较大。对于考生来说,首要任务是反复研读材料,把好审题关。另外,这种类型的半命题作文极易陷入议论文与记叙文文体特征不明确的误区,需要同学们特别注意。
(三)材料作文
材料作文要求根据所给的材料(事例、故事、寓言、诗歌、歌词等)提炼中心,展开联想、想象,写出经历、思考、感悟等。材料作文在思辨性上对考生有较高要求,这类作文以能够凸显思想的张力与深度为佳。
1.单一型材料作文:“聚焦中心”法
这类材料作文形式多样,可能是一则材料,也可能是多则材料,但不论怎样,都有一个共同的中心,即中心单一明确。这类材料作文可采用“聚焦中心”法构思,即直接提炼出材料中心,立意选材,谋篇布局。
2.多元型材料作文:“从中选点”法
命题者在命制材料作文时,选择的语言材料常常具有丰富的含义,这样的材料就可能不止一个中心,而是具有多方面的意义指向。对于这样的材料作文,考生可以采用“从中选点”法构思,即从多项中心里选择一个重点来立意选材。怎样“从中选点”呢?应区分重点与一般,根据中考作文阅卷短、平、快的特点,考生可以先摒弃含混晦涩的角度,再剔除容易陷入雷同选材的中心,最后选择最能体现命题者意图且自己最擅长的角度立意。
3.“隐喻”型材料作文:“含义概括”法
这类作文题,材料中没有明确的寓意提示,我们可以采用“含义概括”法审题构思,即通过分析归纳的方法概括所给材料的基本思想,再立意选材与谋篇布局。写惯了记叙文的考生多感性思维,容易被这类材料中的某一细节打动而陷入“只见树木不见森林”的误区,而这类文题恰恰需要考生具备整体感知的思考能力。
(四)话题作文
话题作文即以某一话题为写作范围,要求围绕该话题展开联想,构思成文的一种作文题型。话题作文贴近考生现实生活,富含人文气息,能够最大化地唤起考生的生活体验。话题作文鼓励考生灵活取材、创新形式、发散思维,给考生充分的发挥空间,使其更为自由地写作。正是由于这些原因,话题作文曾经风行一时。虽然近年来逐渐式微,但其作为中考命题的主要形式之一仍然受到一些考区命题者的青睐,同学们在复习备考中不可忽略。
1.单纯型话题作文:学会限定范围
这类话题作文只给出一个话题,没有任何提示语或材料的限制,内容非常宽泛,审题难度较大,常使同学们产生“老虎吃天,无从下嘴”的感觉。对这类话题作文,我们可以在所给话题前面或后面加上合适的词语对其写作范围加以限定,从而使得话题由大变小、由虚变实、由抽象变具体。此外,我们也可以将话题从正面向反面思考或从反面向正面思考,来捕捉可以构思立意的角度。
2.材料型话题作文:审读材料,确定立意
这类话题作文,或提供一段富有诗意的个性化提示语,以激发考生的写作兴趣;或给出一段文字,对意义含蓄的话题进行解释和界定,以降低考生的审题难度。我们在写作这类话题作文时要仔细阅读文题所给材料,可从材料中选择某一个角度来立意,也可以全面理解材料,综合概括内容,整体阐释话题,继而立意选材。
三、审题和立意
(一)审题
1、审题目
命题作文的题目一般有词语、短语和句子三种。
对于词语类文题,要理解它的本义、比喻义及延伸义、扩展义或象征义。角度太大的话,我们可以采用扩展法,给题目加上合适的限制性词语,这样使宽泛的题目变得具体、实在、易写,便于把文章写真、写小、写活。如“晨”,这个命题有些宽泛,在不改变原来文题的情况下可以用扩展法将其转化为“人生之晨”、“山村之晨”、“车站的早晨”等来构思。
对于短语或句子类文题,审题要注意三点:
一要审清题眼。题眼,就是文题中揭示意义、体现中心、点明重点或表明感情色彩的词语,往往表明了写作关键。一般说来,题眼往往由文题中的动词或起形容词修饰限制作用的词来充当。文题是偏正结构的,题眼大多在偏的部分,如“美好的一天”,“美好”是题眼;题目是一个句子的,谓语多为题眼,如“我追上了成功”,“追上”就是题眼。 二要注意副词隐含的信息与要求。“最”、“也”、“还”、“再”、“更”、“其实”等副词出现在题目中,都不是可有可无的点缀,而往往是考生极易误入的陷阱。如“我最好的朋友”,“最”就规定了你笔下作为主角的朋友只能有一个;“这也是课堂”中的“也”规定了你所写的内容不能是平平常常的某一节课;“其实并不是这样”中的“其实”很重要,应写出从“误认为是‘这样’”到“意识到不是‘这样’”的过程,如果缺少这层转换,文章就会偏题。 三要注意句式复杂的文题的内在关系。这类文题往往有着因果、条件等内在联系,审题时必须辨别清楚。如“我拥有, 我快乐”,“拥有”是“快乐”的前提和原因,“快乐”是“拥有”后产生的一种心理情感反应,两者紧密联系,不可分割。如果忽略了这一点,下笔时只写“拥有”,不见“快乐”,或只见“快乐”,少见“拥有”,都是偏题的。 审短语或句子类文题,可运用短语或句子成分分析法去理解。如“留在我心底的风景”,这是一个定语加中心语的偏正短语,先看中心语“风景”,它既可指自然风景,也可以指人文景观乃至于一件事;再看修饰语“留在我心底的”,意味着这个“风景”给我留下很深的印象,从而可联想到是给人印象深刻的一种景或一件有教育意义的事件。对这类文题,还可以采用压缩法,抽出主干词或中心词,这样更便于把握文章的中心,不易跑题。
2.审导语
命题作文在出题过程中为降低审题难度,常常加上一段提示性的文字,这段提示性的文字往往给考生或多或少地指出了写作的方向和内容。因此,在审题时,应注意对提示语的研究揣摩。
3.审要求
为了严谨和科学,也为了考生尽量少失误,中考命题者总是要在文题前后交代几点,并冠以“要求”、“注意”等提示词。在这简短的文字中,有着丰富的、指令性与指导性兼容的信息。若不细细咀嚼领会就匆忙着笔,可能会给考场作文带来无可挽回的损失。
(1)要注意“不要出现真实人名(包括本人、家长、亲属、老师、同学等)、校名”一类词语。考生如果忽略了这些规
定中所隐含的“扣分”信息,往往会在不经意之中丢失了宝贵的分数。
(2)要注意字数。不按要求字数去完成考场作文也要扣分,好多考生不了解这一点,或者在写不出的时候马虎了事,结果篇幅不够;或者希望得到好的评价而尽情展示,超过规定的字数,糊里糊涂被扣了分还不知道,这也是很可惜的。
(3)要注意表达方式的选用。文题要求中对表达方式的限定也很严格。考生若不注意对此方面的规定,起码会造成两个方面的失误:一是没有综合地使用表达方式,二是写错文体。这方面的扣分将大大超过因字数不合要求的扣分,考生将蒙受更大损失。
(二)立意
“千古文章意为高”,“意”就是文章的主题,它是文章的核心与灵魂。立意就是确立文章的主题(中心思想、中心论点),也就是我们为什么要写这篇文章,写这篇文章的目的是什么。它是文章成败的关键,且直接关系到文章的选材、布局,乃至文章的深度。没有中心立意的文章是肤浅杂沓而没有灵性的。只有有了主题思想,文章才有灵魂,选择材料、安排结构、运用语言也才有依据,才有可能赢得中考作文高分。
好的立意应该力求做到:一是方向要准确。所谓准确,就是指立意要符合客观事物的本质和规律,表达出来的思想观点和感情要健康、积极向上,能够切合文题,或是与文题有一定的关联性。立意准确是写好作文的基本要求,也是评价文章的重要标准。一般来说,我们的立意要与我们目前国家社会倡导的公德一致,要与当前的时代精神一致。内容如:歌颂真、善、美,抨击假、恶、丑,提倡以人为本、爱国守法、诚实守信、环境保护、无私奉献等。决不能表现一些厌世消极的思想,或者是为那些腐败分子、迷信分子歌功颂德。所以,在考场写作时,同学们一定要注意按照马克思主义辩证法观点客观、公正地分析事物,反映事物。决不能站在自己的角度反映偏激的思想。二是主题情感要鲜明。议论文观点不清、似是而非,模棱两可,记叙文主题不明、含含糊糊、形散神散,这都是作文的大忌。所以写前要想好自己的写作目的,思想情感都要鲜明地表达清楚:赞同什么,反对什么;歌颂什么,批判什么;恨什么,爱什么;表达个人感情的如爱戴、崇敬、怀念、赞美、爱好、情趣、愿望、讽刺、批判、抨击等,在作文中都应该态度鲜明,决不能模棱两可,含糊不清。而作文时确立主题也要非常明确,下笔之前应有明确不含糊的立意,文章反映的是什么,心中一定要有数,作文时将其明确地表达出来。三是思想要深刻。就是要“道他人之所未道”,写出别人写不出来的东西。就考场作文而言,绝大多数考生都能做到立意正确,但是能在此基础上再进一步达到深刻这一目标的就很少了。所以要想获取高分,就必须在立意的深刻性上下功夫。对于中学生来讲,作文中也是应该力求有“真知灼见”的,有“真知灼见”的文章才有成为上乘之作的可能。因此,面对考题,你必须联系材料,纵向思考,探究原因深入挖掘。对作文题目和材料进行分析,努力挖掘内在的思想内容及所蕴含的哲理。由表及里、由果推因地审察事物,透过表象看到真相,由问题揭示原因,思考生活的内涵。这点主要是指对某人或某事的感悟与启迪。四是思维要新颖。“文贵乎自得”,“言前人所未言,发前人所未发”,让人耳目一新的文章才能受人喜爱。文章最忌随人后、人云亦云、拾人牙慧。如何“新”呢?就是要选好切入点,力争“道他人之所未道”,写出别人没有写出来的东西。很多事情都是“横看成岭侧成峰,远近高低各不同”的,因为社会是丰富多彩的,答案是多种多样。同样的事情,从不同角
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