小学六年级英语作文

篇一：六年级英语作文话题及范文

题目：A Happy Day in Spring

提示：下图是Mr. Black 一家人在春天的某一天在野外游玩的场景。请用一般现在时描写图中所呈现出的内容。可作适当的想象和发挥。 要求：

1.条理清晰，意思明确、连贯，句子通顺，标点正确，书写工整、规范。2.不少于70个单词。

A Happy Day in Spring

It’s spring. It’s sunny and cloudy today. There are many big trees in the park. Mr. Black’s family has a picnic in a park. They bring much food there. They bring fruit, drink and bread. Mr. Black and Mrs. Black talk with each other. They talk very happily. Ann reads a magazine. Tom likes flying a kite. The kite flies very well. They are hungry now. They want to eat their food. They are very happy.

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Mike is a student. He is my good friend. He is busy at the weekend. He is going to read a magazine this Saturday morning. He is going to go to the zoo this Saturday afternoon. He is going to buy a book this Sunday morning. He is going to learn Kungfu this Sunday afternoon. He is going to watch TV this Sunday evening.

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Mary 是个英国女孩，五年级学生，十二岁。她向别人自我介绍，并介绍她的家庭。她有个双胞胎姐姐，爸爸是医生，妈妈是老师，她非常爱他们，他们也很爱她。

My name is Mary. I come from England. I am an English girl. I am a student. I am in Grade Five. I like my teacher. Her English is good. There are four people in my family. I have a twin sister. My father is a doctor. My mother is a teacher. I love them very much. They love me, too.

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要求：

1.条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，书写清晰、规范；

2．要将提示词全部体现在作文中；不得少于50个单词。

提示词：（1）computer （2）net friend (3) talk with each other(互相交谈)(4) in the chat room (在聊天室) （5）talk in English (用英语交谈) （6）good now

My net friend

I am Tony. I have a computer. I have a new friend. His name is Jack. He is 12 years old. He is a student. He likes surfing the net. We often talk with each other in the chat room. We talk in English. My English is good now. He is a good boy. I like him very much. Do you want to have a net friend?

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要求：

1.条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，书写清晰、规范。

2.要将名片中的内容全部体现在作文中。3.不少于60个单词。

My good friend

I have a good friend. Her name is Ann. Her Chinese name is Wang Xiaolan. She is from England. She is in Beijing now. She is in She has blue eyes and yellow hair. Her father is a doctor and her mother is a nurse. Her brother is five years old. She likes dancing, singing and watching TV. She is friendly and she likes to help others. What a good girl!

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篇二：小学六年级英语作文范文集

5、提示：根据下面所给出的这张Ann的小名片，以“我的好朋友”为题，写一篇小短文，介绍Ann的基本情况。

要求：1、条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，书写清晰、规范。

2、要将名片中的内容全部体现在作文中。

3、不少于60个单词。

Ann王晓兰

北京市育英小学(primaryschool)

六年级四班

年龄：12 国籍：英国(England)

相貌特征：蓝眼睛、黄头发

家庭情况：父亲（医生）母亲（护士）弟弟（5岁）

爱好：唱歌(singing)、跳舞（dancing）、看电视（watching TV）

优点：友好(friendly)、乐于助人(like to helpothers)

My good friend

I have a good friend. Her name is Ann. Her Chinese name is Wang Xiaolan. She is from England. She is in Beijing now. She is in Yuying Primary School. She is in Class Four, Grade Six. She is twelve. She has blue eyes and yellow hair. Her father is a doctor and her mother is a nurse. Her brother is five years old. She likes dancing, singing and watching TV. She is friendly and she likes to help others. What a good girl!

6、短文写作。根据给出的提示和要求，写一篇65个单词左右的英语短文。

要求：1、写一封介绍你一家的电子邮件给Jay

Hello, Jay,

I am very happy to be your net friend. There are four people in my family. They are my parents , my sister and I. My father is the oldest and the tallest. He can drive a car. He is a doctor. My mother is a factory worker. She works hard. My sister is a student. She is the best in her CLASs. My hobby is playing basketball. My sister and I go to school on foot. I have a happy family. What about you?

Bye- bye，

Benson

7、Jack 昨天跟他妈妈买东西，请根据下表的信息，写一篇不少于60个单词的小作文。 Happy Shop：Some pieces of candy ￥4 A roll of toilet paper ￥5

Mr. Chen’s Store：A carton of ice cream￥15

Uncle Eddy’s Store：A bottle of shampoo￥45 A pair of socks￥8

Big Blue Department Store：A bag of chips ￥9 Toy car ￥105

Yesterday was Jack’s shopping day. He went shopping with his mother.

They went to the Happy Shop . They bought some pieces of candy. They are 4 yuan. They bought a roll of toilet paper. They bought a carton of ice cream at Mr. Chen’s Store .They bought a bottle of shampoo and a pair of socks at Uncle Eddy’s Store . They went to the Big Blue Department Store. They bought a toy car. It’s 105 yuan. They were very happy.

8、假设你是May, 请用不少于60个单词来向你的笔友Jay介绍你的家庭情况，请在文中使用3个最高级和2个比较级。

Hi, Jay,

I’m very happy to be your pen-friends. I have a warm family. There are four people in my family. My father is the tallest and the oldest in my family. My mother is beautiful. She is a teacher. She is thinner than my father. I am a student. I am three years older than my sister. My sister is the youngest in my family. I love my family. What about you?

Bye bye,

May

9、根据提示，从表格中获取信息写一篇不少于60个单词的小作文，要求提示的内容要全部体现在作文中。

My Friends

I have two good friends. They’re Zhang Ping and Jim. Zhang Ping is 12. Jim is three years older than her. He’s 15. Jim is heavier than Zhang Ping. He’s 60 kilograms. Jim is taller than her. He’s 162cm. Zhang Ping is a Chinese girl. She lives in Xinhui. Jim is a Canadian boy. He lives in Guangzhou now. Zhang Ping likes red. Her favorite sport is badminton. Jim likes blue. His favorite sport is swimming. I like them very much.

10、描写你的周末生活，注意用一般现在时。

My Weekend

I have happy weekend.

On Saturday morning I always have English CLASses at school. I study hard in the CLASsroom. In the afternoon I often play computer games. On Sunday morning I often draw pictures. Sometimes I visit my grandmother and grandfather. Sometimes I listen to music. On Sunday afternoon I often do housework or go shopping.

So I love weekends.

11、昨天是3月20日，也是你的生日，请描写你的生日派对，注意用一般过去时。

My birthday

thYesterday was March 20. It was my birthday. I had a party. I ate too much. Mike

brought a carton of ice cream. Jenny brought some candy. Mary brought a lot of cookies. My mom made a cake. My dad bought a toy car for me. I was very happy. At the party we sang and danced. We had a good time.

12、写一个你最喜爱的人，请对他/她进行一定的外貌描写。

My Favorite People

Who is your favorite people? My favorite people is my mother. She is beautiful. She is 38 years old. She is tall and thin. She has big eyes and long hair. She likes cooking. She cooks good meals for us every day. And she always does all the housework. She looks after my father and me. I love my mother very much.

13、请描写一下你的房间，注意要使用“there be ”句型。

My Bedroom

I have a nice and small bedroom. There is a beautiful bed and two small chair. I also have a big and tall closet because I have many clothes. There is a big desk next to the window. I always do my homework at the desk. There is a family photo on the wall. We took this photo this summer holiday. I like my bedroom.

14、请以你所在的学校“育英小学”描写你的学校。

My School

I study at Yuying Primary School. My school is very big and beautiful. There are three buildings and a playground. There are many trees and flowers. My CLASsroom is very big and bright. There are 60 students in it. They study hard and always help with each other. Our teachers are very nice and smart. I like my school.

15、根据下面提供的信息，写一篇60字左右的作文。

Name：Bill

Favorite sports: tennis, soccer, basketball

Clothes: black, T-shirt, blue pants

Age: 13

Phone number: 5352375

My Friend

I have a good friend. We are in the same CLASs. His name is Bill. He is 13. He likes sports very much. These sports are tennis, soccer and basketball. He plays tennis twice a week. He plays soccer twice a week. He plays basketball once a week. He often likes to wear black T-shirt and blue pants. His phone number is 5352375. Everyone likes him.

16、请写一个你最喜爱的季节，要写出你喜欢的原因。

My favorite season

My favorite season is summer. It’s hot in summer. There is a summer vacation in summer. I don’t go to school. I think many children like this season, because they can eat ice-cream and go swimming. I can go swimming. Sometimes I go to the beach with my parents. Sometimes I go to the swimming pool with my friends. I usually visit many places in summer vacation.

17、描写一种你最喜爱的动物，要对它进行外形描写。

My Favorite Animal

My favorite animal is rabbit. Its name is Sweet. Sweet has long ears. It’s very small. It’s white. It has a short tail. It has red eyes. It likes eating carrots. It likes jumping. It goes jumping three times a day. I like it very much. It’s lovely. It’s my best friend. I like the rabbit.

18、同学们，你一定有很多的爱好，请你写一个你的爱好，字数不少于60个单词。

My hobby

My hobby is collecting stamps（集邮）. There are many stamps in my room. I like stamps very much. There are many things on the stamps. They are colorful and beautiful. After school I usually go to the post office and there are many people there. I learn a lot from collecting stamps. I like collecting stamps very much.

19、寒假很快就要到了，请你为你的寒假写一个计划。快点把你的计划写出来吧！

My Winter Holiday

It’s January. My winter holiday is coming. I am going to go to Thailand. I will go there by plane. I like the food in Thailand. It’s spicy and tasty. In the winter holiday, I am going to play basketball. I am going to paint pictures, too. I will help my mother do some housework. I will be very happy in my winter holiday.

20、假设Jack 是10岁,短发,1.5m, 50kg; 而May 是12岁,长发,1.6m,45kg。请运用学过的句型介绍和比较一下他们的特征。

Jack and May

I have two good friends. They are Jack and May. He is ten. He has short hair. He is 50kg now. And May is a beautiful girl. She has long hair. She is two years older than Jack. She is 12 now. She is taller than Jack. She is 1.6m. But Jack is heavier than May. May is 45kg. They are lovely students. I like them.

篇三：小学英语作文大全

英语作文

题目：A Happy Day in Spring

提示：下图是Mr. Black 一家人在春天的某一天在野外游玩的场景。请用一般现在时描

写图中所呈现出的内容。可作适当的想象和

发挥。

要求：1、条理清晰，意思明确、连贯，句子通顺，标点正确，书写工整、规范。

2、不少于70个单词。

A Happy Day in Spring

It’s spring. It’s sunny and cloudy today.

There are many big trees in the park. Mr. Black’s family have a picnic in a park. They bring many food there. They bring fruit, drink and bread. Mr. Black and Mrs. Black talk with each other. They talk very happily. Ann reads a magazine. Tom likes flying a kite. The kite flies very well. They are hungry now. They want to eat their food. They are very happy.

2、根据给出的材料，写一写Mike这个

周末的活动计划。

Mike is a student. He is my good friend.

He is busy at the weekend. He is going to read a magazine this Saturday morning. He is going to go to the zoo this Saturday afternoon. He is going to buy a book this Sunday morning. He is going to learn Kungfu this Sunday afternoon. He is going to watch TV this Sunday evening.

3、根据下面提供的内容，写一篇英语短文。要求语句通顺，条理清楚，字数不少于50个单词。

Amy是个美国女孩，六年级学生，十二岁。她向别人自我介绍，并介绍她的家庭。她有

个双胞胎姐姐，爸爸是医生，妈妈是老师，她非常爱他们，他们也很爱她。

My name is Amy. I come from US. I am

an English girl. I am a student. I am in Grade Five. I like my teacher. Her English is good. There are four people in my family. I have a twin sister. My father is a doctor. My mother is a teacher. I love them very much. They love me, too.

4、题目： My net friend（我的网友）

要求：1.条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，

标点正确，书写清晰、规范；

2．要将提示词全部体现在作文中；

不得少于50个单词。

提示词：（1）computer （2）net friend (3) talk with each other(互相交谈)

(4) in the chat room (在聊天室) （5）talk in English (用英语交谈) （6）good now

My net friend

I am Tony. I have a computer. I have

a new friend. His name is Jack. He is 12 years old. He is a student. He likes surfing the net. We often talk with each other in the chat room. We talk in English. My English is good now. He is a good boy. I like him

very much. Do you want to have a net friend?

5、提示：根据下面所给出的这张Ann的小名片，以“我的好朋友”为题，写一篇小短文，介绍Ann的基本情况。

要求：1、条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，书写清晰、规范。

2、要将名片中的内容全部体现在作

文中。

3、不少于60个单词。

My good friend

I have a good friend. Her name is Ann.

Her Chinese name is Wang Xiaolan. She is from England. She is in Beijing now. She is in She is in eyes and yellow hair. Her father is a doctor and her mother is a nurse. Her brother is five years old. She likes dancing, singing and watching TV. She is friendly and she likes to help others. What a good girl!

6、短文写作。根据给出的提示和要求，写

一篇65个单词左右的英语短文。

要求：1、写一封介绍你一家的电子邮件给

Jay

Hello, Jay,

I am very happy to be your net friend.

There are four people in my family. They

are my parents , my sister and I. My father

is the oldest and the tallest. He can drive a

car. He is a doctor. My mother is a factory

worker. She works hard. My sister is a

student. She is the best in her class. My

hobby is playing basketball. My sister and I

go to school on foot. I have a happy family.

What about you?

Bye- bye，

Benson

7、Jack 昨天跟他妈妈买东西，请根据下表的信息，写一篇不少于60个单词的小作文。

Happy Shop：Some pieces of candy ￥4

A roll of toilet paper ￥5

Mr. Chen’s Store：A carton of ice cream￥15 Uncle Eddy’s Store：A bottle of shampoo

篇四：小学六年级英语作文

作文范例

My friend and I

I’ve got a lovely friend at school. His name is Jack. Jack is 12 years old now. I’m 11. He’s older than me. He’s 150 cm tall. I’m 148 cm. He’s taller and stronger. He’s 43 kg and I’m 41 kg. He’s heavier. We’ve got round faces and short hair. But my eyes are bigger and my legs are longer. Our favourite colours are white and blue. We like

summer best. We both like sports, too. On Saturdays, we play table tennis. On Sundays, we play basketball. He’s good at basketball. But I do better at table tennis. We laugh and play together. How happy we are!

Zoom’s Weekend（过去时）

Zoom had a busy weekend. On Saturday morning, he washed his clothes and went to a park. He did his homework and went fishing on Saturday afternoon. On Sunday morning, he cleaned his room and visited his grandparents. He played football and watch TV on Sunday afternoon. Zoom was too tired

. A happy day

Yesterday was Sunday. My father, my mother and I went shopping.

First, we went to the supermarket on foot. We bought some pineapples and oranges there. My mother bought a nice T-shirt for me. It is yellow and white. I like it very much. Then we went to the bookshop.There were so many kinds of books. I bought three English storybooks. After that we went home by bus.

What a happy day!

Tom’s Holiday

Tom went to Beijing by plane on his holiday. Every day he had fun with his parents. They went to the Nature Park. They saw elephants. They went swimming. They ate lots of delicious food. They also took many beautiful pictures. They will come back home tomorrow. In a word, they enjoy their holiday.

My summer vacation

I had a joyful summer vacation,I and my family member travelled,After the traveling comes back,I went to an English school to make up for a missed lesson, teacher was very friendly to me, under teacher's help,my English result progressed very much, I thank English teacher extremely, also thanks this school extremely.Hope next year summer vacation, I will be able to have a more joyful vacation

I Love My Family

Here is a photo lf my family. These are four people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my brother and I.

My father is a doctor. He works in a hospital far away. He goes to work by subway. My mother is a teacher. She works in a school near my home. She goes to work by bike. After work, they like reading books. Who is the tall boy? He is my brother. He is five years older than me. He is a singer. He’s now in Beijing. He goes there by plane. I love my family.

Let’s have a nice day（将来时）

It’s Sunday tomorrow .I’m going to the bookstore with my friends tomorrow

morning .We are going to look for some good books .We all like reading books .We are

going to eat our lunch at the restaurant. I like chicken, beef and vegetables .After lunch, we are going to the Summer Palace by bus. We are going to play near the Kunming Lake. Maybe we are going to row a boat on the lake .Wow, that will be relaxing. We are coming back at 5pm.

My weekend(一般现在时)

There are two days on the weekend, Saturday and Sunday. On Saturday, I often go to my dancing class in the morning and do my homework in the afternoon, and I often help my mother do some cleaning. On Sunday, I always visit my grandparents in the morning and do some reading in the afternoon. After dinner, I often watch TV with my parents. At that time, we can talk with each other and say something happily. We often have a good time.

In the park

It is sunny today .My mother, my father and I are going to the park. We like the park very much. It is very big and beautiful .There are many trees and flowers in it. Many people like to go there. Look! An old man is sitting on the chair. He is reading a book carefully. Two boys are jumping on the ground. Their mothers are talking with each other. Two birds are flying in the sky. The ducks are swimming in the river. They are very happy. What is the cat doing? Oh, it is running after a mouse. It’s a poor mouse.

My teacher

My teacher is thirty-six.She is a very beautiful woman.She has a round face ,black hair,big eyes,a small nose and a small mouth.She is very kind to us.

She often plays games with us.She teaches us many useful and interesting things.We learn a lot from her.I like her very much.

My Good Friend

My name is ×××.I have a good friend . Her name is Liu Yun. She lives in China . Her mather is a singer. She likes swimming. Her father is a TV reporter. He likes listening to mnsic. Liu Yun likes piaying the violin and riding her bike. Every morning , she goes to school on foot. Every evening, she reads newspaper ai home. Then she goes to bed at nine. This is my good friend Liu Yun.

My cat

I like animals very much. But I like cats best. Her name is Mimi. She is very lovely. She has a small black nose and a long tail. Her legs are short. When I get home, She always wags her tail and walks up to me. When she feels hungry, she meows loudly .Now she`s very fat.

I love my little cat very much.

篇五：小学五、六年级英语作文范例

小学英语五年级上册各单元作文范例及点评

My English Teacher

Miss Tang is my English teacher. She’s very pretty. She is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. She likes cats very much. And she likes singing and dancing, too. Her English is very good. We often play games in English classes. She is very kind to us. We all love her.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”，是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作者开门见山，直接点题，首先介绍了英语老师的姓名，然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等。 小朋友们在写作文时，要注意使用自己最熟悉的词[组]，以免写出一些错句子。写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰、规范等。

My Days of the week

I’m a student and I am in Grade 5.I get up at six o’clock every day. I have breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven o’clock. I have classes from Monday to Saturday. I have an English class on Friday and I have a PE class on Tuesday. I don’t have to go to school on school, and I like to go swimming on that day.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是“我的一周”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的亲身经历写起，叙述了自己一周七天的所作所为，并特别强调了星期天的喜好，写得自然、流畅。

小朋友们写作文时要注意人称及谓语动词的变化，要依据提示，结合自己的实际，写自己身边熟悉的事情。

My Favourite Food

Do you know what this is? Guess! Its colour is yellow. It’s long and thin. It looks like a small boat and crescent. Oh, it is a banana. Do you know what that is? Guess again! Its colour is orange. It’s round. It looks like a small ball and a small lantern. Oh, it is an orange. I like then a lot. I like ice-creams. I like to chew gum. Chocolates and candies are yummy. I like them very much.

How about you? What’s your favourite food?

【要领点评】

My Favourite Food 是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是简单地列举出自己最喜欢的每一种食物，而是有详有略地进行介绍。整篇文章用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。另外，文章中出现了一些生词，可见小作者是用心查字典了。

I can help do housework

I am a girl. My name is Li Ling. I’m in Class Three, Grade Five. I’m helpful at home. I can water the flowers, empty the trash and sweep the floor. After meals, I can help my mother do the dishes. On Sunday, I can wash the clothes. What about you? Are you helpful, too?

【要领点评】

本篇作文的题目是“我可以帮助做家务”，作者主要叙述自己在家帮助做的事情，介绍自己的名字，所在年级及在家能做的家务，很详细，到位。

小朋友们在写作时，应尽量写一些亲自经历的事情，这样会避免在作文时显得太空，因为只有自己经常做的事情印象才会特别深刻。写作时还要注意大小写和时态。

In The Kitchen

This is the kitchen of my family. It’s big and nice. Look! My mother is cooking in it. This is a microwave and that is a stove. There is a big table here. There are many things on it. What are these? They look yummy! Oh, they’re strawberries. And what are those? They are grapes.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是“在厨房”里，作者根据自己家的厨房情况。介绍厨房里有微波炉和电炉，有一张大桌子和桌子上的物品等，以及妈妈在做饭，非常真实。

小朋友们，可以从观察自己身边的事、物写起，利用所学的句子，描述身边熟悉的东西来训练习作。

My Village

My village is very beautiful. There are many houses in the village. Near the village, there is a forest. A small river is in front of the village. The water in it is very clean. We can see some fish in the river. Near the river, you can see a mountain. Some flowers and grass are on the mountain. I like my village. Welcome to my village!

【要领点评】

本文以“我的村庄”为题描述了自己家乡的风景。介绍了村庄的房屋、森林、河流及大山，使人看了这篇作文后确实感觉到“我的村庄”的美丽。小朋友们在写作时，可仔细想一下自己的村庄或所在城市的特点，尽量使用本单元学过的单词或短语进行叙述。

小学英语五年级下册各单元作文范例及点评

My weekend

There are two days on the weekend, Saturday and Sunday. On Saturday, I often go to my dancing class in the morning and do my homework in the afternoon, and I often help my mother do some cleaning. On Sunday, I always visit my grandparents in the morning and do some reading in the afternoon. After dinner, I often watch TV with my parents. At that time, we can talk with each other and say something happily. We often have a good time.

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写法：这篇习作是按照时间顺序记叙周末的活动，记叙了周六和周日的上午和下午分别做了哪些活动及对活动的感受。即：周六上午：舞蹈课→下午：做作业和帮妈妈做清洁→周日上午：看望祖父母→下午：阅读→晚上：看电视，与父母交流→感受：高兴和愉快。我们还可以选取周六和周日中的几个比较主要的活动来写，先说明什么时间在什么地方由什么人做了什么事，有什么感受。再按照活动顺序把活动内容写清楚，最后抒发一下对这次活动或这个周末的感想。

时态：这篇短文我们可以用三种时态来写: a.一般过去时（主要描述你上个周末是怎样度过的）;b.一般现在时（主要描述你经常怎样度过周末）;c.一般将来时（主要描述你要怎样过周末）。这里我们来表述平时是如何过周末的，所以采用一般现在时来写。

注意：活动的相关表达方法可采用旧知识，eg.（例）起床get up，和新知识，eg. Climb mountains去爬山中的un很容易错写成nu。还要注意不要出现病句，eg. “I often watch TV with my parents.”不要写成 “I often with my parents watch TV .” 词量上控制在50 ~ 80 之间。

We have four seasons in a year. I can do many interesting things in each season. In spring, the weather is cool and wind, I can fly kites when it’s wind. And I can go hiking with my family when it’s sunny and cool. I like hiking. Summer is hot in the north of China, but it’s not long time. I often go swimming. It can make me healthy and strong. I can also wear my beautiful dresses. Fall is a season with harvest. And I can eat delicious fruits in this season. I can watch the leaves fall. Winter comes, it’s often snowy in winter in my hometown. When it snows, everything is white. We can play with snow and make a snowman, skate and ski. And winter is my favourite season, because of the Spring Festival. I love seasons. I love the nature.

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写法：这篇短文是描述“我的四季”，在写法上，是根据春、夏、秋、冬四季的更替来写的，先讲明每个季节的特征，之后再写在这个季节中的主要活动或比较有代表性的活动。同时讲一些自己的真实感受，最后阐述自己最喜欢的季节。在实际的写作的时候我们还可以先写出自己喜爱的季节及主要的活动内容，之后再去讲其他几个季节，还可以多讲解一下地域的季节特征和大自然中的其他景色，如：秋天的田地里一片金黄，农民在收割等等，这样写出来的四季更贴近实际。

时态：这篇习作讲的是“我的四季”，是比较惯常的一些行为，所以我们最好采用一般现在时和情态动词结合活动的写法。即：在什么季节，天气如何，我们可以做什么。

注意：在写作内容上，不可以像以往的内容那么简单，因为有四个季节，所以要写明季节，季节天气，季节性活动，活动的人，活动的感受等，要求句子顺序要正确，在写作中还要注意关联词的使用，如用了“因为”，就不能用“所以”，二者不可以同时出现。词量要控制在80个词以内。

My Birthday Party

Every year, when it’s birthday, my parents hold a party for me. They invite my friend to come to my house to celebrate my birthday. I can get many beautiful gifts every year. In my party, we can do many things:

1. Light the candles.

2. Sing a “Happy Birthday” song.

3. Make a wish.

4. Blow out the candles.

5. Cut off the cake.

6. Eat the cake.

7. Open the presents.

8. Sing and dance.

9. Watch videos or play other games.

10. Say goodbye with each other.

That’s my birthday party, is it interesting?

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写法：这篇习作是按活动的顺序来写的，记叙了生日晚会的各项具体活动，比较全面。比较以前几个单元的写作写法，这个短文按活动顺序比较合适。

时态：这篇短文可以用三种时态来写：

1、一般将来时：主要说明生日晚会份的各项计划，都将如何进行。

2、一般现在时：主要说明习惯上如何度过每个生日。

3、一般过去时：主要说明你的生日晚会是如何进行的。

句型：invite sb. to do sth. 邀请某人做某事

注意：由于这篇短文很有局限性，所表达的大体上都基本相同，所以在书写的时候要注意结合自己的实际活动与真情实感去写。另外注意一些短语和单词的书写不要发生错误：

There are five people in my family. They are my grandma, grandpa, dad, mom and I. Look! Grandma is watching TV. Grandpa is reading a book. Dad is writing an e-mail. Mom is cooking dinner. I am doing my homework. I love my family!

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写法：这篇习作介绍了自己家的家庭成员，以及此刻他们正在干什么，表达了自己对家人的感情。 时态：由于本单元主要讲的是现在进行时态，所以建议采用现在进行时态。

句型：主语+be+动词的现在分词。

注意：本单元的重点是现在进行时态，注意在写句子时要保持时态的完整性，即系动词和动词的ing缺一不可。

In the park

It is sunny today .My mother, my father and I are going to the park. We like the park very much. It is very big and beautiful .There are many trees and flowers in it. Many people like to go there. Look! An old man is sitting on the chair. He is reading a book carefully. Two boys are jumping on the ground. Their mothers are talking with each other. Two birds are flying in the sky. The ducks are swimming in the river. They are very happy. What is the cat doing? Oh, it is running after a mouse. It’s a poor mouse.

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写法：这篇习作是用现在进行时描绘出公园里的人和动物们正在进行的活动还运用了一般现在时叙述了公园美丽的景色。

时态：这篇文章可以采用一般现在时和现在进行时两种时态，由于本单元的语法项目是现在进行时，因此，描述的重点要放在现在进行时态上。

句型：一般现在时：主语+谓语+其他

现在进行时：（1）What +be (am,is ,are)+主语+v.-ing+其他?

（2）主语+be(am,is ,are)+ v.-ing+其他。

A Field Trip

It is a nice day. Our class will have a field trip today. The classmates are very excited. Look! Here we are. There’re a lot of activities to do. Amy is watching insects. Peter is collecting leaves. They want to write a report. Mandy is catching butterflies in the woods. Tim and Bob are playing chess. Some of the classmates are having a picnic. There is a lot of delicious food to eat. Oh, who’s that over there? It’s Miss White. What is she doing? She is taking photos. We had a very good time. I’ll never forget this field trip.

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写法：这篇习作是按照郊游时的画面来描述的，记叙了同学们分别在郊游中做了哪些活动及郊游的感受。 时态：这篇文章可以用一般过去时和现在进行时来写。由于本单元主要讲的是现在进行时，所以，这里我们采用现在进行时比较合适。

句型：××. is/are doing sth. She /He is doing sth. They’re doing sth.

注意：活动的相关表述法采用新旧知识相结合去写。注意时态的转换、描写感受时用一般现在时。

PEP小学英语六年级上册各单元作文范例及点评

Li Ying ’S Hobby

Li Ying likes English very much. She works hard at it. She reads English every morning. She likes speaking English. She often listens to the radio. She watches TV only on Saturday evening.

Does she like dancing? No, she doesn’t. But she likes drawing and singing. Her parents love her. And all the teachers and her friends like her, too. She says her hobbies make her happy.

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这一篇写爱好的文章,小作者的写作思路很值得我们学习,他没有具体写到刘莹的某一种爱好,而是从学习到课余的多种爱好入手,对刘莹的各种爱好进行了粗线条地勾画.从“爱好”这个角度来看刘莹的话，我们会觉得这个形象很饱满。

小朋友们写这种“叙事写人”作文时，可以从两个角度下手：一是具体地描绘；二是和上面小朋友一样，粗线条地勾画，二者各有所长，另处在行文中使用一些问句，使用一些转述的话，可以使作文更有灵气，避免了平铺直叙的缺点。比如上文的“Does she like dancing? No, she doesn’t.”和“she says her hobbies make her happy.”就是十分不错的句子，使读者眼前为之一亮。

Don’t be against the traffic rules

I go to school from Monday to Friday .I go to school by bike at 7:30 in the morning .I must cross two busy roads .If the traffic light is red or yellow,I know I can’t cross the road ,so I wait.

If the light turns green, I know it means “Go”, and then I walk across the road .I always ride on the right side of the road .I am never against the traffic rules.

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这篇作文的题目是“不要违反交通规则”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的经历写起，叙述自己以什么方式去上学，在上学的路上是怎么做的，很形象。

小朋友们在作文时注意不要图大，那样很容易使文章显得空洞，而要写自己身边熟悉的事情。要注意行文中字母的大小写、句子的标点符号等。

I Love My Family

Here is a photo lf my family. These are four people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my brother and I.

My father is a doctor. He works in a hospital far away. He goes to work by subway. My mother is a teacher. She works in a school near my home. She goes to work by bike. After work, they like reading books. Who is the tall boy? He is my brother. He is five years older than me. He is a singer. He’s now in Beijing. He goes there by plane.

I love my family.

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一个平凡的题材，一篇生动的作文。这样的命题，我们可能面对几次，甚至几十次了。但这位小朋友的笔端很是灵巧，了了数言，让一个幸福的家庭跃然纸上，很值得我们去思考，我们能做到吗？ 小朋友的这篇作文除了语言优美之外，在结构上也有闪光之处。先总说，将自己的家人逐个介绍一遍，后分说，把家人的工作、上班方式，爱好一一细说。最后以一句话进行概括，起到点题的作用。我们在写类似的作文的时候是不是也可以借鉴呢？

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