批改网高分作文

篇一：批改网高分攻略

四级作文经典句型

creating a green campus

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enjoy great prestige in the world

享誉世界

is the essence of 是。。。的精华

Recently a debate about green campus has aroused public attention.引起公众关注。 Undoubtedly毫无疑问

Has a profound impact on both individuals and society.对个人和社会有极深影响。 Needless to say,a green campus includes...不必说 Degradable plastic 可降解塑料。

Meanwhile,we should make efforts to improve the moral standard of university students in order to create a civilized atmosphere for the sake of students’mental health.

过渡句：In the first place,it is essential that...,furthermore,it is high time for us to...,last but not least...

Work out 解决，实现

Increase the awareness of the importance of...增强对...的认识的重要性 Rewind the clock 时光倒流 In addition to this除此之外

Go all out全力以赴属于四六级经典高分短语 What’s more

[高分词汇] whereas意思是然而…，是四六级经典转换话题类词汇。

nothing but意为：只有,只不过，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！ Genius is nothing but labor and diligence. 天才只不过是劳动加勤奋。

what's more意思是另外，而且?，是四六级经典补充类词组。 What's more, bigger banks can diversify their earnings, which should further militate against failure . 而且，大银行可以使他们的收入多样化，这可以防止经营失败。 take advantage of的意思是利用，是四六级经典短语 attach importance to意为：重视，属于四六级经典高分短语

[高分短语] take pride in意为：以?自豪，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒 高分短语] take advantage of的意思是利用，是四六级经典短语。

on account of意为：由于，属于四六级经典高分短语

it goes without saying that意为：不用说...，很明显...。类似的表达有：属于四六级经典

高分句型， (It is) needless to say (that)，It is obvious that， Obviously, ...。用得很棒！

[高分词组] far beyond的意思是远远超过，大量超出，远在天边，是四六级经典词组。

It goes without saying thatit pays to keep early hours. 不用说早睡早起是值得的。

[高分短语] may as well意为：最好，不妨，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！

We may as well cut across the playground. 我们不妨从运动场上横穿过去。

[高分句型] it pays to 意为：...是值得的。属于四六级经典高分句型，用得很棒！ It pays tohelp others. 帮助别人是值得的。

[高分表达] 高分词组，not to mention意为“更不用说/别提??”，同意表达有to say

nothing of、not to speak of。

[高分表达] 高分词组，be of接名词用来说明句子的主语所具有的性质或特征。

Though time is of the essence, it pays to spend some to make our work better. 高分短语] contribute to意思是对某事有帮助，有贡献；有助于做某事…，是四六级经典短语。 [高分短语] stay up late意思是熬夜，是四六级经典短语。

Many retired people can still contribute to the society with their rich experience . 许多退休的老人还能用他们丰富的经验为社会作贡献。 好评报错

[高分短语] on no account 意为：决不，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！ Young people should on no account neglect their daily physical exercises. 青年人决不应疏忽每天的体育锻炼。 好评报错

[高分句型] On no account can意思是...绝对不能...，是四六级经典句型。 On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge. 我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。 好评报错

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There is no denying that意思是不可否认的，是四六级经典句型。

There is no denying thatthe qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse. 不可否认的，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。

[高分句型] the reason why 意为：...的原因是...，属于四六级经典高分句型。 The reason whywe have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us. 我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。 好评报错

[高分表达] 高分词组，look forward to意为“期望/等待??”。 [高分表达] 高分词组，look forward to意为“期盼/期待”。

好评报错

[高分句型] It is universally acknowledged that意思是大家都认为，是四六级经典句型。

whereas意思是然而…，是四六级经典转换话题类词汇

take into account意为把?考虑进去，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！

A case in point is[高分短语] 意为：一个恰当的例子，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！ [高分短语] cope with 意为：对付?，妥善处理，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！ [高分短语] once for all意为：一劳永逸地，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！

比如take into account（我不觉得它很牛的样子）、heart and soul，play an role in等等。

[高分句型] that is the reason why的意思是原因是，是四六级经典句型。

referring to not hesitate to

Give priority to给===优先权

Recently,a heated debate arose online in China about the "Chinese style of crossing the road", a term referring to the tendency of large crowds of people to cross roads in disobedience of red lights.

Puzzle out苦思，puzzle over

Be short of 缺乏。。。。

attach great importance to 高度重视

七、An advantage of ~ is that + 句子(...的优点是...)

例句：An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won't create (produce) any pollution.

三、~ cannot emphasize the importance of ~ too much.(再怎么强调...的重要性也不为过。)

例句：We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much. 我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。

It makes me understand that perseverance makes the impossible possible.

To make a long story short

enrich one's experience增长见识

in defiance of 不顾，无视

It’s highly desirable for sb to do something.很希望某人做。。。 Submit oneself to...遵守 Interpret...as...把什么理解为 Whereas 然而

Judging from the evidence offered, we might safely draw the conclusion that

/There are many ways which can be adopted to 解决问题

has nothing to do with

With the improvement of the living standard，the proportion of people’s income spent on food has decreased while that spent on education has increased.

An obstacle set back or delay means only one thing: it's not time for your goal to be completed yet.

Compared with cars，bicycles have several advantages besides being

affordable.Firstly，they do not consume natural resources of petroleum.Secondly，

they do not cause the pollution problem.Last but not least，they contribute to people’s health by giving them due physical exercise.

had been in its glory in the period of Qianlong Emblem of Qing dynasty

1）主语从句

It is common knowledge that honesty is the best policy. It is well-known that… It is self-evident/ conceivable / obvious / apparent that… It goes without saying that… It is universally acknowledged that… It is / that

2）宾（表）语从句

3）定语从句（限定性和非限定性）

As is shown/ demonstrated/ illustrated/ depicted/ described… in the cartoon/ picture/ graph/ table…,

It is estimated that tens of billions of pounds spent on cigarettes every year in our

4）状语从句（时间，原因，地点，条件，让步，转折when, since, because, if, though, before等） （怪物） which will devour him.

5）分词短语做定语或状语

6）倒装句 （only, neither, nor, at no time, in no case)

activity known to geologists as hot spots. 7）被动句

Many people believe that…（…）

8）强调句

9) 省略句

10) What句型

11) 设问句

Do you still remember the boy who cried wolf for several times so no one would trust him?

12) no more …than…

A home without love is no more a home than a body without a soul is a man.

13) may as well…as 与其…不如

One may as well not know a thing at all as know it imperfectly.

14) the ~est …that I have ever seen ( known/heard/had/read, etc) Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had.

15) cannot…too…

You cannot be too careful.

16)否定+until(till)

Nobody knows what he can do till he has tried.

17) Nothing is ~~ er than to

Nothing is more important than to receive education.

18) There is no doubt that ~

There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired.

19) So …is…that … （如此...以致于...）

So precious is time that we can't afford to waste it.

20) Adj as…is

Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory.

篇二：批改网高分作文

批改网高分作文

Who Are Teachers’ Pets, Boys or Girls?

1）

Nowadays, a growing number of people tend to think about a question: who do teachers like more?

Reading this table, we can get some information and analyse the result via the figures. Obviously, teachers favor girls over boys in primary school. As far as I concerned, the most indispensable reason is that girls are quiet, smart and well-behaved during that age. While in junior middle school, hat might seem to be no difference between boys and girls. In a word, there is no prejudice and gender discrimination at that time. Nevertheless things are getting change when coming to senior high school. The most

reasonable explanation is that girls are superior to boys in math and physics up to the age of ten, fall behind from then on. under that circumstance, teachers is shown to call on male in class far more than female students. While in college, teachers seem to have no preference in student because of the less attention and unawareness

2）

It is obviously that the answer of such question changes frequently as students growing up and here is my analyze according to the chart.

First of all, girls, in my opinion, are much more welcomed in primary school. Over two-thirds of students believe that female students are teacher's pet in primary school. Second,

however, conclusion in senior middle school is quite different because half of students hold the view that it was boys that are teacher's pet. Thirdly, the circumstance in junior middle school as well as In college is between two extremes which means neither boys nor girls have advantage to be pets of teachers.

What conclusion can I draw is that the chart indicates us girls are more welcomed by teacher at low grades because they are not only quite gentle and quiet but also boys are naughty at the same time. As time goes by, though, such difference gradually disappear which lead to

such result. Last but not least, I hold the view that there is no sex, including boys and girls, can hold teachers' love forever

3）

Rencently, a survey on"who are teachers' pets"has developed among students . According to the chart, we can easily find that the majority of pupil's answers are girls, the junior students said that all of them were favored, a lot of middle school students replied: "girls! ", while college students thought neither of them is teachers' pet.

So, why did the phenomenon occurred? I suppose the following reasons can account for it. In primary school, girls are generally obedient, while boys may be more naughty. Girls are good at reading and writing, but boys show nothing superior . Of course , teachers think more of girls. In junior school , boys perform as well as girls , so the teacher will think all of them are great. When go to the senior school , boys become more initiative and are more interested in mathematics, which can ignite teachers' enthusiasm of teaching. On the university , boys and girls have to rely on their own efforts to learn more, thus, the teachers can pay less attention. As far as I'm concerned, teachers shouldn't hold different attitudes to students'gender . Both girls and boys should be treated equally to have a better prospect.

4）

Reading this chart, we can discover that most of the primary school students think girls are teachers' pets. In contrast, most of the high school students think boys are teachers' pets. While in junior middle schools and in colleges, the numbers of students who think boys or girls are teacher's pets are almost equally, more that they think it depends on teachers' mind. For this, its reasons are obviously. First, primary school teachers have to pay more attention to girls. In that not only girls are timid, but also boys may bully them. Second, high school teachers believe boys have more advantage to pay off and more likely to be rolled in

world-famous universities than girls meeting the challenge of college entrance examinations. Third, in junior middle schools and in colleges, teachers feel boys and girls have similar

capabilities, alternatives and so on. Moreover, university teachers know seldom students, not to mention who are their pets.

Nowadays, gender is not crucial. It is urgent to persuade teachers to care about gender in a reasonable way, especially elementary school teachers and high school teachers.

篇三：批改网高分攻略

四级作文经典句型 $('#contents').unbind();

creating a green campus

?

enjoy great prestige in the world

享誉世界

is the essence of 是。。。的精华

Recently a debate about green campus has aroused public attention.引起公众关注。 Undoubtedly毫无疑问

Has a profound impact on both individuals and society.对个人和社会有极深影响。 Needless to say,a green campus includes...不必说 Degradable plastic 可降解塑料。

Meanwhile,we should make efforts to improve the moral standard of university students in order to create a civilized atmosphere for the sake of students’mental health.

过渡句：In the first place,it is essential that...,furthermore,it is high time for us to...,last but not least...

Work out 解决，实现

Increase the awareness of the importance of...增强对...的认识的重要性 Rewind the clock 时光倒流 In addition to this除此之外

Go all out全力以赴属于四六级经典高分短语 What’s more

[高分词汇] whereas意思是然而…，是四六级经典转换话题类词汇。

nothing but意为：只有,只不过，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！ Genius is nothing but labor and diligence. 天才只不过是劳动加勤奋。

what's more意思是另外，而且?，是四六级经典补充类词组。 What's more, bigger banks can diversify their earnings, which should further militate against failure . 而且，大银行可以使他们的收入多样化，这可以防止经营失败。 take advantage of的意思是利用，是四六级经典短语 attach importance to意为：重视，属于四六级经典高分短语

[高分短语] take pride in意为：以?自豪，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒 高分短语] take advantage of的意思是利用，是四六级经典短语。

on account of意为：由于，属于四六级经典高分短语

it goes without saying that意为：不用说...，很明显...。类似的表达有：属于四六级经典

高分句型， (It is) needless to say (that)，It is obvious that， Obviously, ...。用得很棒！

[高分词组] far beyond的意思是远远超过，大量超出，远在天边，是四六级经典词组。

It goes without saying thatit pays to keep early hours. 不用说早睡早起是值得的。

[高分短语] may as well意为：最好，不妨，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！

We may as well cut across the playground. 我们不妨从运动场上横穿过去。

[高分句型] it pays to 意为：...是值得的。属于四六级经典高分句型，用得很棒！ It pays tohelp others. 帮助别人是值得的。

[高分表达] 高分词组，not to mention意为“更不用说/别提??”，同意表达有to say

nothing of、not to speak of。

[高分表达] 高分词组，be of接名词用来说明句子的主语所具有的性质或特征。

Though time is of the essence, it pays to spend some to make our work better. 高分短语] contribute to意思是对某事有帮助，有贡献；有助于做某事…，是四六级经典短语。 [高分短语] stay up late意思是熬夜，是四六级经典短语。

Many retired people can still contribute to the society with their rich experience . 许多退休的老人还能用他们丰富的经验为社会作贡献。 好评报错

[高分短语] on no account 意为：决不，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！ Young people should on no account neglect their daily physical exercises. 青年人决不应疏忽每天的体育锻炼。 好评报错

[高分句型] On no account can意思是...绝对不能...，是四六级经典句型。 On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge. 我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。 好评报错

?

There is no denying that意思是不可否认的，是四六级经典句型。

There is no denying thatthe qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse. 不可否认的，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。

[高分句型] the reason why 意为：...的原因是...，属于四六级经典高分句型。 The reason whywe have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us. 我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。 好评报错

[高分表达] 高分词组，look forward to意为“期望/等待??”。 [高分表达] 高分词组，look forward to意为“期盼/期待”。 好评报错

[高分句型] It is universally acknowledged that意思是大家都认为，是四六级经典句型。

whereas意思是然而…，是四六级经典转换话题类词汇

take into account意为把?考虑进去，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！

A case in point is[高分短语] 意为：一个恰当的例子，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！ [高分短语] cope with 意为：对付?，妥善处理，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！ [高分短语] once for all意为：一劳永逸地，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！

比如take into account（我不觉得它很牛的样子）、heart and soul，play an role in等等。

[高分句型] that is the reason why的意思是原因是，是四六级经典句型。

referring to not hesitate to

Give priority to给===优先权

Recently,a heated debate arose online in China about the "Chinese style of crossing the road", a term referring to the tendency of large crowds of people to cross roads in disobedience of red lights.

Puzzle out苦思，puzzle over

Be short of 缺乏。。。。

attach great importance to 高度重视

七、An advantage of ~ is that + 句子(...的优点是...)

例句：An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won't create (produce) any pollution.

三、~ cannot emphasize the importance of ~ too much.(再怎么强调...的重要性也不为过。)

例句：We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much. 我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。

It makes me understand that perseverance makes the impossible possible.

To make a long story short

enrich one's experience增长见识

in defiance of 不顾，无视

It’s highly desirable for sb to do something.很希望某人做。。。 Submit oneself to...遵守 Interpret...as...把什么理解为 Whereas 然而

Judging from the evidence offered, we might safely draw the conclusion that

/There are many ways which can be adopted to 解决问题

has nothing to do with

With the improvement of the living standard，the proportion of people’s income spent on food has decreased while that spent on education has increased.

An obstacle set back or delay means only one thing: it's not time for your goal to be completed yet.

Compared with cars，bicycles have several advantages besides being

affordable.Firstly，they do not consume natural resources of petroleum.Secondly，

they do not cause the pollution problem.Last but not least，they contribute to

people’s health by giving them due physical exercise.

had been in its glory in the period of Qianlong Emblem of Qing dynasty

1）主语从句

It is common knowledge that honesty is the best policy. It is well-known that…

It is self-evident/ conceivable / obvious / apparent that… It goes without saying that…

It is universally acknowledged that… It is / that

2）宾（表）语从句

3）定语从句（限定性和非限定性）

As is shown/ demonstrated/ illustrated/ depicted/ described… in the cartoon/ picture/ graph/ table…,

It is estimated that tens of billions of pounds spent on cigarettes every year in our

4）状语从句（时间，原因，地点，条件，让步，转折when, since, because, if, though, before等）

（怪物） which will devour him.

5）分词短语做定语或状语

6）倒装句 （only, neither, nor, at no time, in no case)

activity known to geologists as hot spots. 7）被动句

Many people believe that…（…）

8）强调句

9) 省略句

10) What句型

11) 设问句

Do you still remember the boy who cried wolf for several times so no one would trust him?

12) no more …than…

A home without love is no more a home than a body without a soul is a man.

13) may as well…as 与其…不如

One may as well not know a thing at all as know it imperfectly.

14) the ~est …that I have ever seen ( known/heard/had/read, etc) Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had.

15) cannot…too…

You cannot be too careful.

16)否定+until(till)

Nobody knows what he can do till he has tried.

17) Nothing is ~~ er than to

Nothing is more important than to receive education.

18) There is no doubt that ~

There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired.

19) So …is…that … （如此...以致于...）

So precious is time that we can't afford to waste it.

20) Adj as…is

Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory.

篇四：批改网作文总结

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标题：Team Work

字数: 不低于100字并且不高于500 字

满分: 100

要求：

Directions: For this part, you'll have to write an essay entitled Team Work. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.

1) 为什么我们要学习团队合作；

2) 你是如何在大学加强自己的团队合作能力的；

3) 学会团队合作的关键是什么。

As we all know, teamwork plays an important part in our success. However, what is teamwork? Without doubt, what is called teamwork means each person on the team should work within a group of people, which is number of people greater than one. Certain(来自:www.sMHaiDa.com 海 达范文网:批改网高分作文)ly, even if there are only two people in the group, they can be called a team. Therefore, it is an essential requirement of any employment that any potential employee is a team player.

As the saying goes: Many hands make light work; If everyone is moving forward together, then success takes care of itself; Talent wins games, but teamwork and intelligence win championships; A great person attracts great people and knows how to hold them together; etc. All the sayings above we have heard or not about team all emphasize the significance of cooperation to an extent. Therefore, it is necessary for us to learn to how to cooperate with others, which will turn out to be easier for us to succeed in our aims.

As current college students, playing an important role on the team no matter what where that is from. To my point of view, even the pupils know the effect of cooperation, which is the reason why we college students should take action right away! What's more, it is well known that any great project can make it without teams.

So during my time in university, I will take an active part in the teams to work hard in order to achieve more successes. For instance, give some suggestions or try my best to support the teamwork.

Instead of merely study hard regardless of the things around us, something that I think is the most important is every member of the team has a very specific role--as a captain, goalkeeper, striker, midfielder or defender. Apart from that, each member should care for each other. When one of the member is missing, the team is handicapped and so on. Only in this way, can the team achieve a great success.

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As we all know, teamwork plays an important part in our success. [修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 play...part 在教材中出现过 4525 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: part, piece, section, division, portion, fraction, fragment,

segment, share 均可表示“整体的一部分”之意。

important的近义表达有 crucial/essential。

[批改提示] know近义表达有cognize/ recognize/ realize/ foreknow

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However, what is teamwork? [修改]坛是普特www.put

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Without doubt, what is called teamwork means each person on the team should work within a group of people, which is number of people greater than one. [修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: group, crowd, gang, band, mob, throng, masses, swarm 均含“群，帮，伙”之意。

[批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。

[批改提示] person表示“人”。注意与people的区别。详情点击

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Certainly, even if there are only two people in the group, they can be called a team. [修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: certainly, naturally, of course, surely 均有“肯定地，当然”之意。

[批改提示] people表示“人，民族”。查看与person的区别。

1.5

Therefore, it is an essential requirement of any employment that any potential employee is a team player. [修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: profession, job, occupation, trade, vocation, career, work, employment 均含“职业”之意。

[批改提示] 批改提示，注意potent与potential的区别。

第2段

2.1

As the saying goes: Many hands make light work; If everyone is moving forward together, then success takes care of itself; Talent wins games, but teamwork and intelligence win championships; A great person attracts great people and knows how to hold them together; etc. [修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 attract...people 在教材中出现过 2116 次

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 make...work 在教材中出现过 3088 次

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 win...championship 在教材中出现过 14291 次

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 win...game 在教材中出现过 35020 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: athletics, sport, game 均有“体育运动”之意。 注意game和match的区别。

2.2

All the sayings above we have heard or not about team all emphasize the significance of cooperation to an extent. [修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 emphasize...significance 在教材中出现过 20 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: hear, listen, overhear 均含“听”之意。

[批改提示] emphasize/accentuate/ stress/ underline/ highlight

2.3

Therefore, it is necessary for us to learn to how to cooperate with others, which will turn out to be easier for us to succeed in our aims. [修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: aim, goal, purpose, end, target, object, objective 均有“目标，目的”之意。

[批改提示] learn近义表达有take in/ absorb/ ingest/ acquire

[批改提示] cooperate近义表达有pull together/ work together/ join forces/ coordinate/ collaborate

第3段

3.1

As current college students, playing an important role on the team no matter what where that is from. [修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 play...role 在教材中出现过 26773 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: college, university, institute, school, academy 均含有“学院，大学”之意。

important的近义表达有 crucial/essential。

3.2

To my point of view, even the pupils know the effect of cooperation, which is the reason why we college students should take action right away! [修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 know...effect 在教材中出现过 252 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: act, action, deed, operation, performance 均含“行为，行动”之意。

[批改提示] reason表示“原因，理由”。注意与cause的区别。详情点击

the reason why 意为：...的原因是...，属于四六级经典高分句型。

[批改提示] know近义表达有cognize/ recognize/ realize/ foreknow

3.3

What's more, it is well known that any great project can make it without teams.

[修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: big, large, great, grand 均含“大的”之意。

[批改提示] know近义表达有cognize/ recognize/ realize/ foreknow

what's more意思是另外，而且?，是四六级经典补充类词组。

第4段

4.1

So during my time in university, I will take an active part in the teams to work hard in order to achieve more successes. [修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 achieve...success 在教材中出现过 1003 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: attain, reach, achieve, arrive 均有“达到”之意。

4.2

For instance, give some suggestions or try my best to support the teamwork. [修

改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 give...suggestion 在教材中出现过 161 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: give, accord, award, confer，grant, endow, present, bestow 均含有“给予，赠给”之意。

第5段

5.1

Instead of merely study hard regardless of the things around us, something that I think is the most important is every member of the team has a very specific role--as a captain, goalkeeper, striker, midfielder or defender. [修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 have...role 在教材中出现过 6325 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: each, every 都有“每一个”之意。

[批改提示] very的近义表达有extremely, exceedingly, remarkably, intensely。 important的近义表达有 crucial/essential。

5.2

Apart from that, each member should care for each other. [修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: care, mind 均有“介意，在乎”之意。

[批改提示] apart from在做“除去??，除??意外”讲时，近义表达有with the exception of。

[批改提示] 注意care for和like区别。

5.3

When one of the member is missing, the team is handicapped and so on. [修改]

[学习提示] 易混词汇: lose, miss, misplace 均有“丢失，遗失”之意。

5.4

Only in this way, can the team achieve a great success.[修改]

[搭配统计] 动名搭配 achieve...success 在教材中出现过 1003 次

[学习提示] 易混词汇: attain, reach, achieve, arrive 均有“达到”之意。

As we know, a team teamwork plays an important part in our success to a degree.However,what success.However,what is teamwork?What teamwork?Without doubt,what is called teamwork means each person on the team should work within a group of people,which is number of people greater than one.Even one.Certainly,even if there are only two people in the group,they can be called a team.Therefore,it is an essential requirement of any employment that any potential employee is a team player.

Certainly,as player.

As the saying goes:Many hands make light work;If everyone is moving forward together,then success takes care of itself;Talent wins games,but teamwork and intelligence win championships;A great person attracts great people and knows how to hold them together;etc.All the sayings we have heard or not about team emphasize the significance of cooperation to an extent.In short, extent.What's more, it is necessary for us to learn to how to cooperate with others,which will turn out to be easier for us to succeed in our aims.

As the current college students,playing an important role on the team no matter what where that is from.Besides,even the pupils know the effect of cooperation,which is the reason why we college students should take action right away!It away!At the same time,itis well known that any great project can make it without teams.

So during my time in university,I will take an active part in the teams to work hard in order to achieve more success.For instance,give some suggestions or try my best to support the teamwork.

Meanwhile,something that I think is the most important is every member of the team has a very specific role--as a captain,goalkeeper,striker,midfielder or defender.Apart from that,each member should care for each other.When one of the member is missing,the team is handicapped and so on.Only in this way,can the team achieve a great success.

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Being Creative

As is known to us, imagination is the beginning of creation. You imagine what we desire, you will what you imagine and at last you create what you will. First all, anything unique is under the creation that is derived from the creative people.Result from the creation, various things meaningful start to exist. In short, creation is so important that we have to keep and develop it to an extent. In my opinion, creative people have a great deal of physical energy, but they are also often quiet and at rest. Besides, they can work long hours with great concentration while remaining fresh and enthusiastic all the time, which does not mean that creative people are always active. In fact, they rest often and sleep a lot. What's more, the key to success is that the creative people know how to control their energy, which is not ruled by the calendar, the clock or an external schedule. When necessary, they can focus it like a laser beam; when not, creative types immediately recharge their batteries, which is not a biorhythm inherited with their genes and was learned by trial and error as a strategy for achieving their goals.

Meanwhile, we should not only study hard but also catch the opportunities in order to be creative people. Only in this way, can we all have a bright future!

1.1

As is known to us, imagination is the beginning of creation.

[学习提示] 易混词汇: imagination, fancy, fantasy 均含有“想象，幻想”之意。

[批改提示] be known to... 表示“为...所熟知”。注意与be known by... 的区别。详情点击

篇五：批改网提分路

批改网提分路（第二章）

很早以前就允诺自己要达到批改网目前我见到的最高分，本次得尝己愿，写下这个“第二章”。虽然心里有点怨念——第一章没有怎么得到大家的支持，回帖什么的都很少，虽然我不是很在意这个，但是这毕竟是我的心血，不管对大家的作用大小，但毕竟我是带着诚意帮大家写下这个，现在姑且称为经验吧。

首先希望大家已经看过了第一章，因为我在这章不会说上一章已经说过的经验。

首先问大家第一次接触句酷修改网（不是其他修改网）是自己主动找到的还是老师布置作文，告诉你们的。大多数应该是后者吧。

其实，笔者越接触批改网，对其的反感和厌恶之情也就越深。作为一个喜欢人工智能和微电自控技术但又同时深深受教育于中华文学的人，笔者本身就是矛盾的。因为一方面甚至语言的美丑优劣只有视角、立场和区域的不同，没有绝对高下之分，在第一章中笔者就已经说明过，电子批改的基本算法是不堪我们这些充满“创造力”的考生折磨的，了解了打分的模式，每次按照这个结构出牌，分数一般就恒在一水平线上。没错，笔者认为按照笔者的方法，这个线大概是88-98. 那么，接下来的这个问题就很重要了——

你是主要是想要高分数还是英语写作能力的提高？

笔者之所以这么问，第一是因为；前面已经说了，（这里用一点计算机方面的知识），你可以把批改网想象成一个有固定接口和固定处理程式的机器，即使每次你输入的是差不多的一些句型，一些其实不是很恰当但是“高级”的词汇，并用上一些小技巧（后文会说），你就能得到高分数。而这，是根本对于提高你的英语实力无益的。注意，这里说的是对整个过程无益，也许你考四六级、考研时用上应付批改网的这类技巧，拿到了高分，但那只是类似于一个随机结果，通过测试你面对真实英语写作实际时所展现的能力的水平线来看，你还是处在一个不高的水平上。说到这个可能你会感到笔者的语言展现已经有些不清晰了那么我用具体的测试来说明下：

笔者通过对批改网的测试，有这些样例：

VOA原文，考研范文，GRE黄金200句（Issue）等，几乎都有不下5个的错误和成片的黄色警告，中式英语和句式错误让我情何以堪……

面对这些纯正地道的英语批改网往往给出80分左右的评价，这不禁让笔者想起了“庸医害一人，庸师误一群”，反观之，高考满分作文和四级高分作文就好很多，大概85上下。这似乎在明示我们——通过批改网的训练，你最多只能达到一个四级写作小牛的地步。当然我不是说批改网拿高分的都是只有四级小牛的水平，很多备考GRE的同学提笔一写就是92上下…… 但是！笔者的重点是：

第一， 批改网说明的中式英语等可能就是它的语料库本身不完善，很多好

句型可以去如：British National Corpus去找。大家为了分数的话还是要改，只不过不能在大脑里留下“这个表达是中式英语，以后不能再用”的想法，你可以多方查证，我聚个非常简单的例子： learn knowledge就是中式英语，应该用obtain，get等，这些就需要你去查证，也许批改网会报错

第二， 很多错误，如时态，单复数，代词指代等，作为一个了解电子评改

基础算法的人我可以说，能查出语言的各种细节的机器和软件的制造难度不亚于完美的机器翻译和人工智能通过图灵测试。所以你拿了高分，很可能在英语考级或者TOEFL等实力测试中因为各种基础错误连篇而败得很惨。

第三， 因为写作思维的不同，我们的很多表达只能被中国人理解，但电脑

就认为是中式英语，然后你再改，又是中式英语表达，但是假设通过了（这个很容易），可是它还是中式英语。相反，很多优美的句子，也许来自著名的英语母语的作家，或者就来自读者（-，-不是中国的），但是这句在语料库中出现很少（经过测试），批改网的评分十分缺乏理

解美文美句的能力。比如你写一篇中文作文，有那么几句如泣如诉，恍若天成，那么这篇作文可能因为这句话而上几个等级，但是在电脑看来，这种感性的“感觉”不会存在，最多是，判断一句，然后做出“很好”然后在判断一句“一般”，再判断“好”，你的那句有着修辞用法的句子即使没有被误判为有错误，那么最多给你的作文增加0.5-1分。

写到这里，笔者觉察到似乎写得不是很有头绪，也许是因为经验，即使是条例化的经验也是包含在感觉中的，更何况我好似一直在批判……

那么，以上的总结可以姑且概括为——如果你需要提高分数或者只要分数，那么往下看，如果你认为你只希望提高能力，那么下面你就参考参考，一直用，你的分数高了，能力却不会有什么上升。

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1. 改的次数。要是没有吃苦的精神，又不是高帅富白富美，那么要拿高分，不吃苦怎么行。一篇作文不改到90上你良心要是安宁，那么，祝贺你，你将有好的心态到老并很有可能是一事无成到老。有同学说了，我基础差，好，那么也要上85，这是底线！那么，怎么改，首先你英语基础不能太差，有同学说我就是很差怎么办，我就是高考英语没及格怎么办？能怎么办，什么都别说了，开始学呗！怎么学？首先语法上，不要求你现在拿回高考的选择题做，100道能对75道以上，你至少要对错误有基础意思。红色错误，一定要改！这是原则一。因为类似于编程，erroring一定是违背基础语法的，这类问题你不能总是说“批改网有问题！“，也许有问题，

不过笔者也只是遇到过某个单词它太笨或者太低级，不认识过于专业的单词或者英美式对于某个东西各有各的说法，但是它只认识一种，举个例子enterogastric disease，肠胃病，但是它不认识，换成intestinal tract disease吧，它又说要加the……当然，我觉得批改网要求加上介词的情况比现实中美国英语要多。也许它是习惯了莎士比亚时代的那个the的富含量……哈，开个玩笑。

总之，红色错误是一定要改的，一般一个红色错误都有0.5-1.5分的飞跃。 而黄色警告，如果你要求高分，注意——黄色警告一定要在3个以下！否则你的分数就会比期望至少低1-5分·。

然后就有2种情况了，第一——我改后，红色错误没了，黄色警告3个左右了，为什么分数还是不好，这时你还是要改。之前是改正，现在是改进！你英语基础不好，状语从句，非限，主词从句，形式主语，定语从句是使用得最多的加分句子，注意我指的是在批改网上。我举个例子，你想说什么东西很重要：

Apparently，it goes without saying that XXX that（这个东西，比如你说iphone，那你加解释，was invented by Jobs/was produced by Apple.Inc等等，Jobs你又可以加who……或者whose reputation and creativity ……等等）play/plays an important role in XXXX，whichXXXXX.这只是一个很通俗的例子，只需要一点点的语法知识，一个句子串起来怎么也会有25-50个词吧，句子长度和连接词是电子批改的算法观察点之一！

那么这又有两个问题了，我英语基础太差，还是不会怎么办！首先，基础

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