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篇一:作文改错

错文: A Visit to Beijing Zoo

Last Sunday morning, I and my friend go to visit the Beijing Zoo. We went by bike. It take us about half a hour to get there. When we get to there, it is already crowded with people. There was a lot of foreign visitors, too. It is said that the Beijing Zoo is largest in Asia and one of the largest in the world. There are hundred of different kinds of animals. It will take a whole day to see all the animals there. So we decided to saw some of the most interesting ones. We saw the elephants first and then the monkeys. Finally we go to see our favourite "friends"--the giant pandas. We were delighted to see them waving to us. We really have a wonderful time in the zoo.

正文: A Visit to Beijing Zoo

Last Sunday morning, my friend and I went to visit the Beijing Zoo. We went by bike. It took us about half an hour to get there. When we got there, it was already crowded with people. There were a lot of foreign visitors, too. It is said that the Beijing Zoo is the largest in Asia and one of the largest in the world. There are hundreds of different kinds of animals. It would take a whole day to see all the animals there. So we decided to see some of the most interesting ones. We saw the elephants first and then the monkeys. Finally we went to see our favourite "friends"--the giant pandas. We were delighted to see them waving to us. We really had a wonderful time in the zoo.

错文: National Day

National Day is coming soon, and I has a plan on that day. Firstly, I needs to complete all my homeworks. After that, I is going to invite my friends to come to my house and playing the games. Secondly, I am going to cook some delicious food to my family. Lastly, my family members is going to my cousin's birthday party. I think the National day is a wonderful day!

正文: National Day

National Day is coming soon, and I have a plan on that day. Firstly, I need to complete all my homeworks. After that, I am going to invite my friends to come to my house and play the games. Secondly, I am going to cook some delicious food for my family. Lastly, my family members are going to my cousin's birthday party. I think the National day will be a wonderful day!

错文:

My mother is tallest than my father.I'm heavyer than my brother.We like both sports, although he is more athletic(擅长运动的,活跃的) than me. He is more outgoinger,and I'm very quieter.I think I'm smarter than his. He run faster than me do . However We both enjoy go to parties. We like to do same things.

错文:There are many subjects at school,like Chinese math English science history and so on.I think the math is more difficult than Chinese.And English is more popular than Chinese.So I like English very much.science is also good.But I think history is more interesting than science.

My mother is taller than my father.I'm heavier than my brother.We both like sports,although(虽然) he is more athletic(擅长运动的,活跃的) than me. He is more outgoing(外向的,友好的),and I'm quieter.I think I'm smarter than him. However(然而)We both enjoy(喜欢)going to parties.(聚会)We like to do the same(相同的) things.2.My subject

正文:There are many subjects at school,like Chinese math English science history and so on.I think the math is more difficult than Chinese.And English is more popular than Chinese.So I like English very much.science is also good.But I think history is more interesting than science.

错文:

Hello everyone! My name is Wu Cao .How time fly! It was two years since I come to the high school. And I became taller and taller than before. Because of my hard study, I think that I'm smart than before. I made friends with my classmates ,so I become more and more popular in my class. Two years ago, I am a very shy boy ,but now I was more outgoing, because I often played basketball or soccer with schoolmates and I believe our friendship is forever. I also believe I am a better student than others because I usually help someone who is poor .

正文:

Hello everyone! My name is XXX .How time flies! It was two years since I came to the high school. And I become taller and taller than before. Because of my hard studying, I think that i'm smarter than before. I make friends with my classmates ,so i become more and more popular in my class. Two years ago, i was a very shy boy(Girl) ,but now i'm more outgoing, because I often play basketball or soccer with schoolmates and i believe our friendship will be forever. I also believe i am a better student than others because i usually help someone who is poor .

篇二:作文改错

Some are in favor of the ideas that English should be cancel.

English can let us to save so much of english.

The number of the students for the opinion are 60percent.

It is useful that study english well for us.

Some are for favor of the idea that you can reduce the burden on our learning.

There are 60% students agree, they thinks cancled english can decrease students burden and we can pay more attention in chinese that we don’t spent time on studying english.

篇三:改错作文

In order to make use to learning materials, the Students’ Union of our school are planning an activity. The school leavers are called on to give away our used books, newspapers or magazines to the student in the lower grades. The idea, that is intended to encourage a low-carbon lifestyle, is praised and supported by the teachers and students. The activity will be hold on the first floor of the school library and so it will last for eleven days , from June 10 to 20. As student , I strong support the activity because it is very meaningful and helpful. I hope this activity would continue every year in the future.

假定你是李华,想提高自己的英语听力和口语水平。你想请在一家英语培训中心工作的美国朋友Nancy 为你推荐一位辅导老师。请按下列要点写一封邮件:

1. 介绍自己的英语水平

2. 说明对辅导教师的要求

3. 约定上课时间

注意:1.词数100左右

2. 可以适当增加细节,以使英文连贯

3. 开头已为你写好

Dear Nancy,

I’m writing to ask whether you could recommend a tutor for me. Yours, Li Hua

篇四:春节的作文200字

春节的作文200字

春节的作文200字(一)

今天是大年初一,外面张灯结彩、普天同庆,热闹极了!大街上有放鞭炮的、有敲锣打鼓的、有玩套圈的、有卖气球的??最好玩的还要数舞龙灯了。只见两条长“龙”在飞舞着,中间有一位叔叔舞着一颗“龙珠”,两条长“龙”都想把“龙珠”变成自己的宝贝,它们上下翻滚着、跳跃着,真是活灵活现。

今天,最开心的事,还要数拿压岁钱了。我把部分压岁钱交给了妈妈,让妈妈帮我存到银行里去。还留下一小部分放在自己的钱包里,准备留着买一些学习用品。转眼间天就黑了,时间过得真是太快了!

春节的作文200字(二)

在这一天,我们已经放寒假了,马上要迎来春节了,好开心呐!这一天人们都会贴春联,喝屠苏酒,就像宋代诗人王安石写的一首诗:爆竹声中一岁除,春风送暖入屠苏,千门万户瞳瞳日,总把新桃换旧符。

而且我们又长了一岁,那时候就更要懂事了,帮助他人,给亲戚拜年,他们都夸我懂事乖巧的女孩,当时心情是多么的好。

放爆竹是小朋友们最喜欢的,可是爆竹有时候很危险,要在家长的陪护下才能玩噢!小朋友千万不要独自放爆竹哦!

我们还会吃团圆饭,穿新衣服,妈妈婶婶阿姨都忙活着炒菜,我们却在旁边一边玩着,那时候的情景多么忙活啊!

就是这样的一个春节,让我们充满了多少快乐!

春节的作文200字(三)

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春节是我国的传统节日之一。

年三十这一天,各地都有各自的风俗和习惯,我们这里的习俗也非常的多。比如要扫屋,要贴对联,放鞭炮,还要守岁。长辈还会给晚辈压岁钱,还要蒸年糕和包饺子等。

除了这些有趣的风俗和习惯外,重头戏还在后面呢!大家都知道,这一天,一家人都要围坐在一起吃团圆饭。我家也是如此,全家人坐在一起边吃饭边聊,谈着一年的新鲜事儿。

吃完了年夜饭,全家人一起看春节联欢晚会。晚会里各种节目应有尽有,有优美动

听的歌曲,有多姿多彩的民族舞蹈,还有搞笑热闹的小品相声呢!

新一年的钟声敲响了,我们送走了旧的一年,也迎来了新的一年。这时,人们会互送祝福,发拜年短信,可热闹了。年年如此。

春节的作文200字(四)

今天是大年三十,爸爸从街上买来一只又大又肥的甲鱼。午饭后,爸爸把它放在井边,准备动手杀它。我走过去看爸爸如何杀它。只见这只甲鱼,一会儿把头躲进去一会儿把头伸出来,害得爸爸的剪刀跟着它乱动。后来,爸爸终于找到了一个机会,把它的头剪卫刀,才把它杀死。杀好后,爸爸把它洗净,放在锅里蒸起来。

到了吃年夜饭的时候,香喷喷的甲鱼端上了桌,爸爸给奶奶夹了一条大大的腿,给我一个背壳,我们津津有味地吃了起来。 今天真是一个难忘的年夜饭。

春节的作文200字(五)

春节临近,年味渐浓,我们有个共同心愿:过一个欢乐祥和、低碳节俭文明的春节。

随着经济发展和生活水平提高,春节期间人情消费也随之增长,增加了经济负担,节日间的大吃海喝,给人们的身体健康带来危害,燃放的鞭炮烟花,也造成了严重的噪声和空气污染,还威胁到群众的生命、财产安全。

低碳节俭文明过春节已是社会的呼唤,我们要注意勤俭节约,反对讲排场、比阔气,严格控制节日活动的规模和开支,多参加一些丰富多彩文明健康的文化娱乐活动,摒弃那些陈规陋习,过一个欢乐、祥和、喜庆、低碳的春节。

篇五:六年级作文难得的一次改错

难得的一次改错

作者:刘佳佳 辅导老师:桑彦松 今天吃过午饭后,老师悄无声息的抱着作业走进教室,那张此项关爱热情的面孔显示出一种不详的预兆,让人看了心中生畏。

过了一会儿,我看老师也没有什么反应,我正准备写其他作业的时候,老师叫到了我,我心中一惊,觉得不好的事情要发生,于是我把头埋得低低的,恨不得找个地洞钻进去。我一步一步的走向讲台,我虽然离讲台只有两张桌子,可我觉得似乎有很长很长,永远走不到尽头似的。到了讲台上,我静静地站着,倾听着老师纠正着错字,我心里很害怕,一动不动的仿佛钉在讲台上。

老师突然说:“把错字在黑板上从南写到北,写一行。”我从沉思中惊醒,拿着作业本和粉笔无声息的走到黑板前开始改。不一会,我就写完了,飞快的走下讲台,我虽然很快的完成了这些,但是我的“光辉”的一面却定格在讲台上,成了我人生路上的一个汇报单。

一会同学们都来了,老师一一的把同学们叫上去,老师雄壮而有力、洪亮的声音在教室里回荡着、回荡着······

通过今天的改错,我不仅知道了自己的错,还明白了许多道理,如果我一个人错了不要紧,可是中国十几亿的人都写错字,那么五千年来的文化就让我们这一代人给糟蹋了,中国人还有何面目谈爱国心,我下定决心:一定要改正错字。

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