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篇一：中考英语五年中考 作文
【五年中考】2009-2013全国各地中考英语试题分类汇编：书面表达知识点，书面表达
应用文
（一）（2009黔东南州）
假如你叫李红，你的英国笔友Mary正在学习汉语。她在给你的来信中介绍了她的汉语老师的情况。请根据以下信息用英语写一封回信，向她介绍你的英语老师Miss White的情况。要求文章写在答题卡上。
外貌：高挑、苗条(slim)、漂亮 国籍：美国 最喜欢的颜色： 蓝色
个人爱好： 读书、旅游 品质： 乐于助人
取得的成绩 去年教学竞赛(teaching competition)，荣获一等奖
要求：1.词数60-80。开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。2.所给信息要全部用上，可合理发挥。 Dear Mary,
Thank you for telling me something about your Chinese teacher. I think you have a good teacher. Now let me tell you something about my English teacher, Miss White.
Miss White is from America. She is tall and slim. And she is very beautiful. She has taught us English for two years. She is always in blue, because blue is her favorite. She likes reading and she also loves traveling when she is free. She is kind and helpful. As a teacher, she is successful. She teaches so well that she won the first place in the teaching competition last year. All of us like her very much.
Best wishes!
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hong
（二）（2009广东）
Skin-diving 是一种新的运动项目,假如你是一名轻装潜水馆里的一个工作人员,请你用80字左右的发言稿向人们介绍轻装潜水的情况。
Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to our Skin-diving Club. Skin-diving is a new sport today. It is very exciting. It will take you into a wonderful new world. If you are under the water, you will find it easy to climb a big rock, because you are no longer heavy.
When you are under the water, you will find everything is blue and green. You can stay in deep water for a long time with tanks of air on your back, and you can catch fish easily with your hands.
Catching fish is one of the most interesting parts of this sport. Besides there are more uses for skin-diving. So skin-diving is also a very interesting sport.
Enjoy yourselves and be careful!
（三）（2009绵羊）
从电视上看到美国正流行甲型HINI流感（A/HINI flu）,部分学校停课你为你正在美国上学的笔友Mike的健康与安全担心。请立即给他写一封email询问他的情况，并给他提出防护建议。
要点：一．询问1.他的健康状况； 2.他们学校有无甲型HINI流感病例（A/HINI flu cases）；
3.他们是否还上学。
二．建议1.尽量呆在家里，少去人多的地方；2.勤洗手；讲卫生 3.多开窗，保持空气新鲜； 4.多吃水果蔬菜。注意：1.长度：60-80词； 2. 首尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
From the TV I know many A/HINI I flu cases are reported recently in the United States and many schools are closed as a result. I’m so worried about you. Are you alright? Are there any A/HINI flu cases in your school? Do you still have to school everyday?
To stay away from the disease, you’d better stay at home as much as possible and not go to places where there are many people. Wash your hands more often to keep them clean; Open the window to have more fresh air in the room; And eat more fruit and vegetable to keep yourself fit and strong.
So far the disease is not so deadly as it seems to be. Do be at ease! Take care and you’ll be OK. Yours truly,
Li Hu
（一）（2009甘肃兰州）
反思可以使每个人成长进步，为未来做好计划可以铸就成功。初中的生活即将结束，新的高中学习将要到来。请你用英语记录下一两件最让你感动或遗憾的事，同时为你将来的生活做一点设计，下列句型可以帮助你完成作文。One?thing in my mind is?..,I am happy that??,It is a pity that I didn’t ??,I will??
要求：内容真实，要点齐全，行文连贯，字数100左右,作文的开头已给出。
My life in Junior school will come to an end soon.
【答案】此题为开放性作文，只要写出一件感动或遗憾的事，同时写出一个计划或设计且言之有理就可得分。但下列情况要酌情扣分：标准如下：1）要点每缺一个扣5分，2）语言错误多，没有可读性扣10分以上，3）抄搬别的内容不得分。
(二)(2009武汉)
为了使同学们与人交往时举止更加文雅，你校学生会正在举办以“How to behave well？ ”为主题的英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文。（以上背景内容无需表述）
短文要点如下：1.学生应该守时，守信，不撒谎，不说脏话；2.礼貌待人，热心助人；3.遵守交通规则；不在公共场所喧哗，不乱扔垃圾；4.请你就此话题再补充一至两点个人看法。
要求：1.不要逐词翻译。2.在文中不要提及真实的校名和姓名。3.词数60-80左右。短文首句已给出，不计入词数。参考词汇：dirty adj. obey v. promise n.
（四）（2009河南）
以“A person I will never forget”为题，写一篇英语短文。
要求如下：
短文内容应包括人物的外貌、性格、爱好和使你难忘之处等；
短文中不得出现真实的校名和人名；
词数80左右。
A person I will never forget
【答案】The person I’ll never forget is my English teacher. He’s a tall man with thick glasses. He likes sports and often plays football and basketball with us. He’s humorous and always makes his classes lively and interesting. He’s kind but is strict with us. He never allows us to pretend that we know what we don’t know. He often tells us that it’s no use memorizing new words without understanding, My English has greatly improved with his help.
（五）（2009宿迁）
你们学校最近就“一个好朋友的标准”做了一次问卷调查，调查结果如下图（阴影部分）。
请你以“What a good friend should be like”为题，用英语为你们学校的校报写一篇短文，报道此次调查结果并谈谈自己的看法。?????
注意：1. 词数：80-100（开头已给出的内容不计入总词数）；2. 内容必须包括上图中的要点，可适当
发挥； 3. 文章条理清楚、意思连贯、语句通顺；4. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
What a good friend should be like
Recently, we did a survey in our school on what a good friend should be like. About seven percent/ only a few/ Less than ten percent of the students prefer their friends should be beautiful or handsome. About forty-eight percent/ Less than half/ Nearly half of the students think that their friends should be hardworking and good at their lessons. Sixty-seven percent of the students hope their friends should be fond of singing and dancing, and also they should be good at sports. Ninety-five percent/ Almost all of the students agree that their friends should be not only lively, kind and helpful but also honest. Good friends should trust each other and share joys. I think to be honest is the most important for us all.
参考范文二：
Recently, we did a survey in our school on what a good friend should be like. Nearly all (95%) of the students think a good friend should be kind, helpful and honest. He or she should trust you and be willing to share joys with you. Sixty-seven percent of the students would like their friends to be fond of singing and dancing. Besides, they hope their friends are good at sports. Forty-eight percent of the students agree that a good friend must be hard-working and do well in lessons. Of course, there are some (7% / less than 10%) caring about appearance. They prefer to choose those with beautiful faces and slim figures as their good friends.
I don’t think a good friend has to be beautiful or handsome. I think honesty is the most important. ?
（六）（2009辽宁锦州）
根据要求完成大作文，并把答案写在答题卡的相应位置。
现在的利．技日新月异，各种发明以及高科技产品成为了我们生活中不可缺少的东西，如电脑、笔记本电脑(laptop)、手机(mobile phone)、MP4、数码相机(digital camera)、数码摄影机(DV)等。请以My favorite invention为题描述你最喜欢的一种发明，并说明理由(理由至少有两个方面)。词数在80词左右。
My favorite invention
Among all the modern inventions，laptop is my favorite one．I think it is the most amazing invention in the 21 st century．Laptops are light and small．They are easy to carry．With a laptop，we can work，study and entertain everywhere．A laptop can get to the Internet outside，which enables us to get the latest information whenever we want．Using a laptop，I Can keep in touch with my friends and family through e-mails and QQ at any time and in any place．I think in the future，everybody will have his or her own laptop．
（七）（2009深圳市）
假设你是Doctor Li，请你用英文写一篇发言稿，从作息、饮食、运动、卫生习惯等方面谈谈如何预防甲型H1N1流感。(共1题，10分)
要求： 1)包含至少3点建议；2)条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺．标点正确；3)发言稿中不得出现真实的校名和姓名 4)60－80个单词；发言稿的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
How to Defend the H1N1 Swine Flu Virus
Ladies and gentlemen:
Hello,everyone, I’m Doctor Li, The Swine Flu virus,detected in Mexico is the H1N1 Swine Flu Virus strain that has killed more than 152 people in Mexico.
But how to defend the H1N1 Swine Flu virus? We has been urging citizens increase in body temperature,headaches muscular pains and breathing problems to visit their nearest medical center as soon as possible, Then the city has been giving out face masks on public transport.and we should usually wash hands, ensure sufficient sleep, and moderate exercise will benefit you. I wish you all keep healthy.
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（一）（2009年山东泰安）六月六日是“全国爱眼日”。为此，某中学生英文报拟组织一次征文活动。请你结合生活实际写一篇题目为《如何保护眼睛》的征文稿，内容要点包括：
1、眼睛的重要性2、保护眼睛的措施：(1)不要长时间看书报；（2）不要在太强或者太弱的光线下看书；
（3）坚持做眼保健操；
注 意：词数：80～100；不要逐条翻译，可适当发挥。
How to Protect Our Eyes
Eye is the window of our mind. We use our eyes to see everything around us. Without eyes, nothing is left beside you but darkness.
How to protect our eyes? It’s not right to keep your eyes working for a long time. You’d better not read in a strong or poor light. Don’t read in bed or on a moving bus. Remember to keep your books away from your eyes for about a foot and do eye-exercises every day. What’s more, a balanced diet is necessary. Follow my advice and form a good habit. It’s time to say goodbye to thick glasses.
（二）（2009宁波）上星期，学校就学生的作业量问题要求各班召开家长会进行讨论。以下是你班家长的观点：多数家长认为作业多有好处，而部分家长则认为作业过多对孩子的成长不利。请你根据下面方框中的提示，用英语作一简要介绍并表明你自己的观点。
Most parents A few parents
◇ review what students have learned ◇ take a lot of time
◇develop students’minds ◇ cannot have a good rest
◇ stop students playing computer games ◇ cannot do the things students like
◇ ? ◇
注意：(1)可以适当增加细节，要求意思连贯，语句通顺；．
(2)词数80左右；短文的开头已给出(不计入总词数)。
Last week our class had a parents' meeting. At the meeting, all the parents talked about whether doing a lot of homework was useful or not. Many parents thought that doing much homework was useful. They thought by doing a lot of homework, the students could review what they had learned. It would also help to develop the students' minds and stop them playing computer games.
But a few parents thought that too much homework was useless. Because doing much homework took a lot of time and thus students could not have a good rest. What's more, they could not do the things they liked.
In my opinion, doing some suitable homework is necessary and helpful. (81 words)
（三）（2009绍兴）
你在和Eric的交流中了解到中美两国课堂有各自不同的一些特点，请你根据下表简要描述这些特点，并就此谈谈自己的想法。
中国课堂：特点仔细 ，听讲、做笔记，举手发言
美国课堂： 不称呼老师的姓名，学生面对面就座，比较放松，可以喝饮料自由谈论；
你的想法 ??
要求：⑴ 文章必须包括表中所有信息，可适当增加细节，细不要逐条翻译；⑵ 想法必须在２个句子以上；⑶ 文章的开头已给出（不计入总词数），你只需接着写；⑷ 词数在８０左右。
There are some differences between a Chinese class and an American class. Let’s have a look. In China, students call their teachers with “Mr” or “Miss”. In class they always listen to teachers and take
notes carefully. If they want to show their own ideas, they put up their hands first. However, in America, students sit around the desks, face to face. They have pretty relaxed rules. They can even drink coffeeor juice during classes. Aslo, they can speak out in class freely. Different countries have different cultures. But I think Chinese class is better. We should be strict in our study.
（四）（2009苏州）
假设某英文报“我爱写作”栏目为了配合创建“学习型城市”，正在举办专题英语征文比赛。请你根据下表所列的内容要点，以“Lifelong Learning”为题，用英语写一篇短文，参加比赛。
终身学习的意义 1．人们上学学习、参加考试，但学习不只在学校；
2．学校毕业，不是学习的终止。
终身学习的途径 去博物馆、阅读书籍、体育锻炼、外出旅行
终身学习的益处 考生自拟(至少一点)
注意： 1．词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；2．短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； 3．短文不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Lifelong Learning
When you finish high school or university，is learning done? The answer is“no．”many countries，people continue learning all their lives．
Why is lifelong learning important? You go to school and learn．You study．Y take tests．But learning doesn’t only happen in school．And learning doesn’t stop when you finish high school or university．You are learning all the time．For example，learning can happen when you go to a museum．It can also happen when you read a book．Y learn when you play a sport or when you take a trip．Learning is life! We never st learning．Every day，you can improve yourself by learning something new．
（五）（2009山东东营）
现在环境变得越来越差。环境问题影响着人们的工作，学习，生活。而我们的工作，生活，生产又使环境污染越来越严重.....如何保护我们的环境?请以“ How to protect/save our environment/world? ”为题写一篇短文。提示: 存在问题: 1.水污染和大气污染越来越严重 2.森林被破坏和砍伐 3.白色垃圾随处可见 要求 : 如何改善/保护环境? 至少3---4个方面， 80词左右。
How to protect/save our environment/world?
The environmental pollution is more and more serious today. We have no clean water to drink because of water pollution. And when trees are cut down, some animals disappear. There is more and more dirty smoke in the air. People's health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution. Many people died of diseases. In order to live a better life, it’s time for us to protect our world.
Firstly, we shouldn’t throw away rubbish everywhere. And we should recycle, reduce and reuse things, for this saves money and reduces pollution. Use things for as long as possible. Don’t use plastic bags. Also, we must plant more trees and stop people cutting them .We hope our world is more and more beautiful.
（七）（2009湛江）
水资源问题已成为举世瞩目的重要问题之一。联合国预计，到2025年，世界将近一半的人口会生活在缺水的地区。请以“How to Protect Water Resources”为题，写一篇英语短文，要点如下： 众所周知，水对人类是很重要的。没有水，地球上将没有生命。
现在工厂越来越多，很多河流变脏了，大量的鱼死在了河里。
保护水资源是我们的责任。我们应该节约用水、阻止工厂往河里排放废水和倒垃
圾,并告诉人们保护水资源的重要性。
要求：1. 包含所给出要点，可适当举例，意思连贯，词汇、语法正确。2. 单词数约80字左右。
篇二：初中英语作文复习
初中英语作文复习
（一）
假如你叫李红，你的英国笔友Mary正在学习汉语。她在给你的来信中介绍了她的汉语老师的情况。请根据以下信息用英语写一封回信，向她介绍你的英语老师Miss White的情况。
要求：1.词数60-80。开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。
2.所给信息要全部用上，可合理发挥。
Dear Mary,
Thank you for telling me something about your Chinese teacher. I think you have a good teacher. Now let me tell you something about my English teacher, Miss White.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes!
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hong
（二）
从电视上看到美国正流行甲型HINI流感（A/HINI flu）,部分学校停课你为你正在美国上学的笔友Mike的健康与安全担心。请立即给他写一封email询问他的情况，并给他提出防护建议。
要点：
一．询问
1.他的健康状况；
2.他们学校有无甲型HINI流感病例（A/HINI flu cases）；
3.他们是否还上学。
二．建议
1.尽量呆在家里，少去人多的地方；
2.勤洗手；讲卫生
3.多开窗，保持空气新鲜；
4.多吃水果蔬菜。
注意：
1.长度：60-80词；
2. 首尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
From TV I know many A/HINI flu cases are reported recently in the United States, and many schools are closed as a result. I’m so worried about you.____________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________
So far the disease is not so deadly as it seems to be. Do be at ease! Take care and you’ll be OK.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
三．
为了使同学们与人交往时举止更加文雅，你校学生会正在举办以“How to behave well？ ”为主题的英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文。（以上背景内容无需表述）
短文要点如下：
1.学生应该守时，守信，不撒谎，不说脏话；
2.礼貌待人，热心助人；
3.遵守交通规则；不在公共场所喧哗，不乱扔垃圾；
4.请你就此话题再补充一至两点个人看法。
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（四）
你们学校最近就“一个好朋友的标准”做了一次问卷调查，调查结果如下图（阴影部分）。
请你以“What a good friend should be like”为题，用英语为你们学校的校报写一篇短文，报道此次调查结果并谈谈自己的看法。
??????
注意：1. 词数：80-100（开头已给出的内容不计入总词数）；
2. 内容必须包括上图中的要点，可适当发挥；
3. 文章条理清楚、意思连贯、语句通顺；
4. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
What a good friend should be like
Recently, we did a survey in our school on what a good friend should be like.
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（五）
根据要求完成大作文，并把答案写在答题卡的相应位置。
现在的利．技日新月异，各种发明以及高科技产品成为了我们生活中不可缺少的东西，如电脑、笔记本电脑(laptop)、手机(mobile phone)、MP4、数码相机(digital camera)、数码摄影机(DV)等。请以My favorite invention为题描述你最喜欢的一种发明，并说明理由(理由至少有两个方面)。词数在80词左右。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（六）
水资源问题已成为举世瞩目的重要问题之一。联合国预计，到2025年，世界将近一半的人口会生活在缺水的地区。请以“How to Protect Water Resources”为题，写一篇英语短文，要点如下：
1、 众所周知，水对人类是很重要的。没有水，地球上将没有生命。
2、 现在工厂越来越多，很多河流变脏了，大量的鱼死在了河里。
3、 保护水资源是我们的责任。我们应该节约用水、阻止工厂往河里排放废水和倒垃 圾,并告诉人们保护水资源的重要性。
要求：1. 包含所给出要点，可适当举例，意思连贯，词汇、语法正确。
2. 单词数约80字左右。
参考词汇：保护protect; 水资源water resources; 往??排放?? pour...into...;
废水waste water
How to Protect Water Resources
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篇三：英语小作文范文
Spring
There are four seasons in a year.
They are spring ,summer ,fall and winter.
I love spring best.
Because spring is a beautiful season.
When spring comes ,everything begins to grow.
The weather is warm and sunny .The trees turn green .The flowers come out .They are very beautiful.And people begins to do exercise .Look! In the park , Some old people are warking near the river.Someyong people are running around the road.
Some children are playing games under the big trees.They are very happy. My humorous friend
She doesn’t have long hair, but big eyes ,a small mouth . She is very slim .Her hobbies are taking photos , speaking English , playing badminton and reading books . There’re a lot of books in her bookshelves . She is very interested and humorous .
Today , she went to the south sea square . She met a man . The man said :‘Miss , can you help me ?’ ‘Ok, what can I do for you ?’ ‘Can you look for my dog ?’The man said :‘Oh!’Shesaid :‘A dog ! A dog! Go left and at the corner of the cafe shop , you can see it !’ ‘;Oh! Dear !’ The man came up to the corner and picked his dog . She came to the dog and told it‘Buby , be careful next time ! Don’t lose your master again . The man smiled and left her .
Yes , this is my best and humorous friend .
Do you line her?
My day
Today is Sunday. It is sunny. I don't go to school. I want go shopping. I get up at half past seven in the morning.I have some cereal and an egg
for breakfast. I go out at 8:00. The shop is near . I go there on foot. Many people are in the shop. I buy a pencil .
At 12:00 I go home for lunch. I have some vegetable and meat for lunch. I read a book in the afternoon. I eat some noodles and fruit for supper. After supper, I do my homework. then I watch TV. Later, I play on the sport. I lie on my bed. I listen to the radio.
I have a happy day .
Special Holiday
I had a fun and special holiday。On Monday，I did my homework and read some interesting story－books。Tuesday morning，I went to a big nice supermarket。I bought a lot of food。Then I ate them。Oh，they were yummy！In the afternoon，I played ping－pong with my father。I won the match。I was so happy。Wednesday morning，I played chess with my mother。My mother won the game。But I was not sad。Because it was only a game。We played，we had fun。Wednesday evening，I watched TV with my parents。My parents are always busy。They have no time to play with me。But that night we were very close，very happy！
I love this special holiday！
我有一个饶有趣味并且特殊的假期。在星期一，我做了回家作业，还读了一些有趣的故事书。星期二的早晨，我去了一个又大又漂亮的超市。我买了很多食物，接着我吃掉了它们。哦，它们真美味！下午，我与爸爸打起了乒乓。我战胜了他。我非常开心。星期三早上，我和我妈妈下棋，我妈妈赢了比赛，但是我不伤心，因为它只是一个游戏。我们在游戏中获得了乐趣。星期三晚上，我和我的父母一起看电视。他们总是很忙。他们没有时间陪我玩。但是那个晚上我们很亲密，非常高兴！
我爱这个特殊的假期！
My hobby
Do you know what’s my hobby? Swimming? Playing computer games? No, they are not my hobbies.
To tell you the truth, my hobby is collecting all kinds of coins.
I have got coins from more than ten regions except Taiwan, Hong Kong and Macao .There are four albums for keeping the coins. The coins are in different shapes. Circle, hexagon and octagon.Even erose ones.
Some coins are from my trip, such as Singapore coin, Malaysia coin, some coins are from my parents’ trip, such as Brazil coin, Korea coin and America coin. Some coins are from my parents’ friends, such as France, India and Finland.
I like the Euro best of all these coins. Look at this Germany coin! Brandenburger Tor(布兰登堡大门) is on one side of it. And Spain coin! There is the Cervantes(塞万提司) head portrait on one side of it. Different European countries have different designs on their coins. I like the Denmark coins too. I think they are lovely. Because there are some heart shapes on each coin. And there is a small hole in the centre of the coin.
The American coins are the most interesting ones. Do you know? Different states have different designed coins. So there are fifty-two kinds of coins in America!
Since starting collecting coins, I have learnt much knowledge from them. I knew Brandenburger Tor(布兰登堡大门) is one of the most famous building. It is the representation of classicalism building in Germany. I also knew Cervantes(塞万提司) is the writer of <
My life
Good moring,everyone.Today I will tell you a story about My life.
Hello!I'm Pan Tao.I'm a girl and I'm nine.I'm from Tai Ming school.I study very hard.I like English lessons very much.I like spors and music.I can ride a bike and speak English.Peaches are my favourritefruit.I feel very happy,my life is very intersting!
A rainy Sunday
Last Sunday, It rained and rained .
I was at home ,In the morning , I was happy ,First , I finished my homework .Then I watched TV .Next I played the piano .After that , I danced in the living room , In the afternoon ,I painted a pictue . I listened to music.
I palyedchess .
How about you ? What did you do on Sunday ?
A Bee and A Candy
One day, a bee saw a candy. He asked the candy:” Do you dare to fly with me?” The candy thought a little while and said:” OK, Let’s do it!” The bee said: “Let’s do it tomorrow. The destination is your master’s bed.”
The next day, before the competition, the bee bit the face of the candy’s master. The master got very angry. He threw the candy towards the bee. The candy whizzed past the bee, the bee was right after the candy, but he could not catch the candy, the candy got the championship.
一天，一只蜜蜂看见一颗糖果。他问糖果：“敢和我比飞行吗？”糖果想了想，回答道：“敢，而且要赢你！”蜜蜂说：“那就明天比吧，终点是你主人的床！” 第二天，比赛之前，蜜蜂不小心叮了糖果的主人，主人很愤怒，他拿起糖果就向蜜蜂扔去，只听“嗖”的一声，糖果飞了出去，没有砸到蜜蜂，却远远地超过了蜜蜂。蜜蜂在后面使劲地追着，但他失败了，糖果得了冠军。
My English teacher
My English teacher is Miss White. She looks young and very nice. She is tall and thin. She has short black hair and a small nose.. She has blue eyes and a big mouth .she has two small ears. She likes yellow and blue. She likes wearing(穿着) a blue dress . She likes bread,eggs,apples and fish very much.
She likes reading books. She often goes to the library . She likes
listening to music and playing sports,too. She is very friendly .After class she plays games with us. She is a good teacher. We love her very much.
My Last Winter Holiday
I was very busy last winter holiday. On February third,I did my housework. In the morning, I washed the clothes . In the afternoon , I cleaned my room. On fourth ,I painted pictures and listened to music. On fifth , I went to Gucheng with my parents. We bought many beautiful clothes and many good food. We ate good food in Gucheng .I was very happy. On sixth . I did my winter holiday homework first. Sometimes I played football and made a snowman with my friends.
I had a lot of fun on my winter holiday .I love winter holiday. my summer vacation
My summer vacation this year went to Wuhan Han River in Xiangfan.
Swimming there people with swimming circle, because there is a depth of 60 meters, where there is a diving platform.
Some small children lined up in an orderly one by one.Lookat!They play more fun ah.
I took the swim ring and my father came to the river in the middle. Now look down.
It is so deep.I'm river middle was amused, but I was very afraid.
A poster
Welcome to Jinqiao center primary school. There is a library in our school. It is big. There are many books in it. We can read books in library?? Do you want to know more about the school? Welcome to our school! ----by Alice
My School Day
篇四：小六英语作文专题
小学六年级英语教案：作文专题
一、佳作欣赏
1、My friend and I
I’ve got a lovely friend at school. His name is Jack. Jack is 12 years old now.
I’m 11. He’s older than me. He’s 150 cm tall. I’m 148 cm. He’s taller and
stronger. He’s 43 kg and I’m 41 kg. He’s heavier. We’ve got round faces and
short hair. But my eyes are bigger and my legs are longer. Our favourite colours
are white and blue. We like summer best. We both like sports, too. On Saturdays,
we play table tennis. On Sundays, we play basketball. He’s good at basketball.
But I do better at table tennis. We laugh and play together. How happy we are!
【要领点评】
写法：这篇作文的题目是“我的朋友和我”。既然写作范围是两个人物，就要笔墨均匀，两者
缺一不可。不能只描写朋友，也不能只叙述我。这无形中增加了写作的难度。解决这个难点
的关键是：找出两个人几方面的异同。可以通过常见的年龄、身高、体重、外貌、喜好等方
面列举出每个人的具体实际情况，再进行比较，通过比较突出每个人物的特点。这样就把人
物活灵活现的展现给读者了。
时态：像此类题目的作文，运用一般现在时即可。
句型：因为涉及两个人的比较，不要忘记使用比较级句型：A+be+比较级+than+B。
注意：在列举两个人的“体貌、喜好”等方面情况时，应一边列举，一边比较。不要一味指出
不同，还要列举相同之处。两人能成为朋友，一定有共同语言和喜好，共性不容忽视。在表
达喜好时，不同的句型应交叉运用，避免枯燥的重复。例“Our favourite colours are…”，“We
like …best”，“We both like…,too”，为突出不同时间做不同运动，用“On Saturdays…”，“On
Sundays…”，形成鲜明对比。常使用并列连词and 和转折连词 but ，使文章读起来更流畅。
结尾以How happy we are!突出了两人从友谊中得到的快乐！
2、A Bad Cold
I’m not feeling well today. I think I have a bad cold. I have a headache. I
have a fever. My nose hurts. My throat is sore. I have to take some medicine and
stay in bed. My parents will take me to the hospital. What a bad cold! I hope I
can be better soon. And I want to go to school
【要领点评】
写法：这篇习作是按照时间顺序记叙了得病、病的症状、服药及治疗的全过程。写出了小作
者希望快点康复，好去上学的愿望。
时态：这篇文章可以采用一般现在时来写。如果主语是第三人称单数，动词别忘加s。
句型：要用feel 加形容词，和表示“患某种疾病“的用法have+表示的疾病的单词。
注意：在表示疾病时，可以使用-ache,hurt 和sore。不要只用一个单词，以避免枯燥。要写
出得病后的简单治疗及心情，不能只写得病的情况。常见病句：My nose is hurt。因为be后
面要加形容词，而hurt是动词，因此应使用sore；东西放在床上要用on the bed。生病，是
卧床不起，应该说stay in bed。
表示吃药时，通过用take some medicine，不用eat。
3、Zoom’s Weekend
Zoom had a busy weekend. On Saturday morning, he washed his clothes and
went to a park. He did his homework and went fishing on Saturday afternoon.
On Sunday morning, he cleaned his room and visited his grandparents. He
played football and watch TV on Sunday afternoon. Zoom was too tired.
【要领点评】
写法：这篇习作是按时间顺序记叙了Zoom的周末活动。
时态：这篇文章可以用三种时态来写，由于本单元主要讲的是一般过去时态，所以我们采用
一般过去时态比较合适。
句型：主语+动词过去式+过去时间。
注意：活动的相关表达法采用新旧知识结合的方法，但要注意动词过去式的拼写。
4、Tom’s Holiday
Tom went to Beijing by plane on his holiday. Every day he had fun with his
parents. They went to the Nature Park. They saw elephants. They went
swimming. They ate lots of delicious food. They also took many beautiful
pictures. They will come back home tomorrow. In a word, they enjoy their
holiday.
【要领点评】
写法：这篇习作是按照地点的顺序记叙假期里的活动，记叙了假期里去北京做了哪些活动以
及对活动的感受。
时态：这篇文章可采用两种时态来写。由于本单元主要讲述的是一般过去时的用法，所以这
里大部分我们采用一般过去时比较合适。
句型：主语+动词过去式+其他……
主语+will+动词原形+其他……
注意：活动的相关表达法可采用旧知识和新知识相结合去写，但要注意动词过去式的变化规
则。例：eat 的过去式为ate，为不规则变化。
5、A Post Card from John
Dear Sarah,
This post card shows you a picture from my holiday. We got Kunming on
Wednesday. On the first day we visited Stone Forest. It’s very beautiful. I love it
very much. On Thursday Kathy and I got lost in the city. We asked a policeman
for help. He helped us find the hotel. On Friday we went to a small village. We
saw folk dances and ate some fresh vegetables from the farm. We enjoyed
ourselves. Last day we went shopping ane bought some presents for friends.
Tomorrow we will be back home.
John
【要领点评】
写法：这是一封明信片，按照时间顺序记叙了约翰假期去昆明度假这几天的活动。分别记叙
了游览石林，迷路，看民族舞，购物，买礼物等活动。
时态：这篇文章由于是记叙已经发过的事，所以大部分可以采用一般过去时来写。
句型：主语+动词过去式+其他。
注意：描述已经发生过的事要用一般过去时，在写这篇文章的时候要注意动词的过去式的变
化，尤其是动词过去式的不规则变化。没发生过的事要用一般将来时。
6、A Farewell Party
It’s the end of the school year. The students in Class Three have a farewell
party. They invite their parents to the party. Many students have performance at
the party.
Look! Chen Jie is singing songs. Zhang Peng is playing the piano. Sarah is
playing the erhu. Mike is doing Chinese Kung fu. What is Miss White doing? She
is dancing.
Everybody has a lot of fun. But Liu Yun isn’t here. She has a cold. She is at
home. The classmates are going to visit her after party. They prepare many gifts
fot her. And they will take a picture together.
【要领点评】
写法：这篇习作记叙了一个告别晚会。记叙了学年末的告别晚会上大家都表演了什么节目，
以及晚会后大家要去看望刘芸的故事。
时态：这篇习作可采用三种时态来写。由于本单元主要出现的时态是一般将来时和现在进行
时，所以这里我们才用一般现在时，现在进行时和一般将来时来写。
句型：一般现在时：主语+动词原形+其他。
现在进行时：主语+现在分词+其他。
一般将来时：主语+ be going to / will +动词原形+其他。
注意：由于本篇文章中所涉及的时态比较多，所以要注意一下时态的变化。学生们都在表演
什么节目可以用现在进行时，将要去做什么，要用将来时。另外还要注意，一般现在时在肯
定句中，主语是第三人称单数，谓语动词也要用第三人称单数。
二、小试牛刀
PART1
根据图片提示，写一写假如你得了流感会有什么症状？应该怎么做？不少于5
句话。（10分）
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PART2
write . 写一写。（7%）
请你用几句话来介绍一下你的朋友，如身高，体重等方面。（至少写5句）
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PART3
作文：说说你是怎样度过周末的，你的心情如何，都干了些什么事情，不少于五
句话。
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篇五：小学六年级英语作文汇总
小学英语五年级上册各单元作文范例及点评
My English Teacher
Miss Tang is my English teacher. She’s very pretty. She is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. She likes cats very much. And she likes singing and dancing, too. Her English is very good. We often play games in English classes. She is very kind to us. We all love her.
【要领点评】
这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”，是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作者开门见山，直接点题，首先介绍了英语老师的姓名，然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等。
小朋友们在写作文时，要注意使用自己最熟悉的词[组]，以免写出一些错句子。写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰、规范等。
My Days of the week
I’m a student and I am in Grade 5.I get up at six o’clock every day. I have breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven o’clock. I have classes from Monday to Saturday. I have an English class on Friday and I have a PE class on Tuesday. I don’t have to go to school on weekend, and I like going swimming on that day.
【要领点评】
这篇作文的题目是“我的一周”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的亲身经历写起，叙述了自己一周七天的所作所为，并特别强调了星期天的喜好，写得自然、流畅。 小朋友们写作文时要注意人称及谓语动词的变化，要依据提示，结合自己的实际，写自己身边熟悉的事情。
I can help do housework
I am a girl. My name is Li Ling. I’m in Class Three, Grade Five. I’m very helpful at home. I can water the flowers, empty the trash and sweep the floor. After meals, I can help my mother do the dishes. On Sunday, I can wash the clothes. What about you? Are you helpful, too?
【要领点评】
本篇作文的题目是“我可以帮助做家务”，作者主要叙述自己在家帮助做的事情，介绍自己的名字，所在年级及在家能做的家务，很详细，到位。
小朋友们在写作时，应尽量写一些亲自经历的事情，这样会避免在作文时显得太空，因为只有自己经常做的事情印象才会特别深刻。写作时还要注意大小写和时态。
My Village
My village is very beautiful. There are many houses in the village. Near the village, there is a forest. A small river is in front of the village. The water in it is very clean. We can see some fish in the river. Near the river, you can see a mountain. Some flowers and grass are on the mountain. I like my village. Welcome to my village!
【要领点评】
本文以“我的村庄”为题描述了自己家乡的风景。介绍了村庄的房屋、森林、河流及大山，使人看了这篇作文后确实感觉到“我的村庄”的美丽。小朋友们在写作时，可仔细想一下自己的村庄或所在城市的特点，尽量使用本单元学过的单词或短语进行叙述。
小学英语五年级下册各单元作文范例及点评
My weekend
There are two days on the weekend, Saturday and Sunday. On Saturday, I often go to my dancing class in the morning and do my homework in the afternoon, and I often help my mother do some cleaning. On Sunday, I always visit my grandparents in the morning and do some reading in the afternoon. After dinner, I often watch TV with my parents. At that time, we can talk with each other and say something happily. We often have a good time.
【要领点评】
写法：这篇习作是按照时间顺序记叙周末的活动，记叙了周六和周日的上午和下午分别做了哪些活动及对活动的感受。即：周六上午：舞蹈课→下午：做作业和帮妈妈做清洁→周日上午：看望祖父母→下午：阅读→晚上：看电视，与父母交流→感受：高兴和愉快。我们还可以选取周六和周日中的几个比较主要的活动来写，先说明什么时间在什么地方由什么人做了什么事，有什么感受。再按照活动顺序把活动内容写清楚，最后抒发一下对这次活动或这个周末的感想。
时态：这篇短文我们可以用三种时态来写: a.一般过去时（主要描述你上个周末是怎样度过的）;b.一般现在时（主要描述你经常怎样度过周末）;c.一般将来时（主要描述你要怎样过周末）。这里我们来表述平时是如何过周末的，所以采用一般现在时来写。
注意：活动的相关表达方法可采用旧知识，eg.（例）起床get up，和新知识，eg. Climb mountains去爬山中的un很容易错写成nu。还要注意不要出现病句，eg. “I often watch TV with my parents.”不要写成 “I often with my parents watch TV .” 词量上控制在50 ~ 80 之间。
My Seasons
We have four seasons in a year. I can do many interesting things in each season. In spring, the weather is cool and windy, I can fly kites when it’s windy. And I can go hiking with my family when it’s sunny and cool. I like hiking. Summer is hot in the north of China, but it’s not long time. I often go swimming. It can make me healthy and strong. I can also wear my beautiful dresses. Fall is a season with harvest. And I can eat delicious fruits in this season. I can watch the leaves fall. Winter comes, it’s often snowy in winter in my hometown. When it snows, everything is white. We can play with snow and make a snowman, skate and ski. And winter is my favourite season, because of the Spring Festival. I love seasons. I love the nature.
【要领点评】
写法：这篇短文是描述“我的四季”，在写法上，是根据春、夏、秋、冬四季的更替来写的，先讲明每个季节的特征，之后再写在这个季节中的主要活动或比较有代表性的活动。同时讲一些自己的真实感受，最后阐述自己最喜欢的季节。在实际的写作的时候我们还可以先写出自己喜爱的季节及主要的活动内容，之后再去讲其他几个季节，还可以多讲解一下地域的季节特征和大自然中的其他景色，如：秋天的田地里一片金黄，农民在收割等等，这样写出来的四季更贴近实际。
时态：这篇习作讲的是“我的四季”，是比较惯常的一些行为，所以我们最好采用一般现在时和情态动词结合活动的写法。即：在什么季节，天气如何，我们可以做什么。
注意：在写作内容上，不可以像以往的内容那么简单，因为有四个季节，所以要写明季节，季节天气，季节性活动，活动的人，活动的感受等，要求句子顺序要正确，在写作中还要注意关联词的使用，如用了“因为”，就不能用“所以”，二者不可以同时出现。词量要控制在80个词以内。
My family
There are five people in my family. They are my grandma, grandpa, dad, mom and I. Look! Grandma is watching TV. Grandpa is reading a book. Dad is writing an e-mail. Mom is cooking dinner. I am doing my homework. I love my family!
【要领点评】
写法：这篇习作介绍了自己家的家庭成员，以及此刻他们正在干什么，表达了自己对家人的感情。
时态：由于本单元主要讲的是现在进行时态，所以建议采用现在进行时态。
句型：主语+be+动词的现在分词。
注意：本单元的重点是现在进行时态，注意在写句子时要保持时态的完整性，即系动词和动词的ing缺一不可。
A Field Trip
It is a nice day. Our class will have a field trip today. The classmates are very excited.
Look! Here we are. There’re a lot of activities to do. Amy is watching insects. Peter is collecting leaves. They want to write a report. Mandy is catching butterflies in the woods. Tim and Bob are playing chess. Some of the classmates are having a picnic. There is a lot of delicious food to eat. Oh, who’s that over there? It’s Miss White. What is she doing? She is taking photos. We had a very good time. I’ll never forget this field trip.
【要领点评】
写法：这篇习作是按照郊游时的画面来描述的，记叙了同学们分别在郊游中做了哪些活动及郊游的感受。
时态：这篇文章可以用一般过去时和现在进行时来写。由于本单元主要讲的是现在进行时，所以，这里我们采用现在进行时比较合适。
句型：××. is/are doing sth. She /He is doing sth. They’re doing sth.
注意：活动的相关表述法采用新旧知识相结合去写。注意时态的转换、描写感受时用一般现在时。
PEP小学英语六年级上册各单元作文范例及点评
Li Ying ’S Hobby
Li Ying likes English very much. She works hard at it. She reads English every morning. She likes speaking English. She often listens to the radio. She watches TV only on Saturday evening.
Does she like dancing? No, she doesn’t. But she likes drawing and singing. Her parents love her. And all the teachers and her friends like her, too. She says her hobbies make her happy.
【要领点评】
这一篇写爱好的文章,小作者的写作思路很值得我们学习,他没有具体写到刘莹的某一种爱好,而是从学习到课余的多种爱好入手,对刘莹的各种爱好进行了粗线条地勾画.从“爱好”这个角度来看刘莹的话，我们会觉得这个形象很饱满。
小朋友们写这种“叙事写人”作文时，可以从两个角度下手：一是具体地描绘；二是和上面小朋友一样，粗线条地勾画，二者各有所长，另处在行文中使用一些问句，使用一些转述的话，可以使作文更有灵气，避免了平铺直叙的缺点。比如上文的“Does she like dancing? No, she doesn’t.”和“she says her hobbies make her happy.”就是十分不错的句子，使读者眼前为之一亮。
Don’t be against the traffic rules
I go to school from Monday to Friday .I go to school by bike at 7:30 in the morning .I must cross two busy roads .If the traffic light is red or yellow,I know I can’t cross the road ,so I wait.
If the light turns green, I know it means “Go”, and then I walk across the road .I always ride on the right side of the road .I am never against the traffic rules.
【要领点评】
这篇作文的题目是“不要违反交通规则”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的经历写起，叙述自己以什么方式去上学，在上学的路上是怎么做的，很形象。
小朋友们在作文时注意不要图大，那样很容易使文章显得空洞，而要写自己身边熟悉的事情。要注意行文中字母的大小写、句子的标点符号等。
I Love My Family
Here is a photo lf my family. These are four people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my brother and I.
My father is a doctor. He works in a hospital far away. He goes to work by subway. My mother is a teacher. She works in a school near my home. She goes to work by bike. After work, they like reading books. Who is the tall boy? He is my brother. He is five years older than me. He is a singer. He’s now in Beijing. He goes there by plane.
I love my family.
【要领点评】
一个平凡的题材，一篇生动的作文。这样的命题，我们可能面对几次，甚至几十次了。但这位小朋友的笔端很是灵巧，了了数言，让一个幸福的家庭跃然纸上，很值得我们去思考，我们能做到吗？
小朋友的这篇作文除了语言优美之外，在结构上也有闪光之处。先总说，将自己的家人逐个介绍一遍，后分说，把家人的工作、上班方式，爱好一一细说。最后以一句话进行概括，起到点题的作用。我们在写类似的作文的时候是不是也可以借鉴呢？
How to get to the science museum
We are going to the science museum tomorrow. There is an old thing show in the Museum. Do you know how we can get to the science museum?
The science museum is next to the People’s Park. It’s isn’t far from our school. So we can go there on foot .Walk straight to the west from our school, next turn left at the post office and walk for about 5 minutes, then turn right at traffic lights. You can find the People’s Park on the right . Walk straight, and you’ll see the science museum.
【要领点评】
这篇作文的题目是“怎样去科学博物馆”。怎样才算是一篇好作文呢？通过你的叙述，能让别人很容易找到博物馆，这应是最基本的要求。小作者在文中告诉我们什么呢？首先他写了去博物馆的位置，最后浓墨重彩，指明从学校去博物馆的具体路线，这条路线够清晰吧！
小朋友们在写这类作文的时候，总有些无从下手的感觉，不知从何说起。其实介绍路线，无非就是告诉他人某段路的起点和终点，还有就是如何从起点走到终点。要给他人说清楚，你自己首先得清楚，然后再通过自己的叙述，将路线清清楚楚得呈现出来。一定要注意行文中一些关键的地方，如在哪儿转弯，向哪儿转，经过哪些重要的交通标志或显眼的标志建筑等。这样，你就能说清，别人也能弄明白。
Let’s have a nice day
It’s Sunday tomorrow .I’m going to the bookstore with my friends tomorrow morning .We are going to look for some good books .We all like reading books .We are going to eat our lunch at the restaurant. I like chicken, beef and
vegetables .After lunch, we are going to the Summer Palace by bus. We are going to play near the Kunming Lake. Maybe we are going to row a boat on the lake .Wow, that will be relaxing. We are coming back at 5pm.
【要领点评】
怎样才称得上是“美好的一天”？有两点不能忘记，一是安排得充实，二是安排得有意义。这两点小作者无疑都想到了，上午去书店看书买书，中午在饭店吃饭，下午去颐和园玩耍、划船，丰富多彩！文章以时间为线索，叙述清楚，文笔也很优美。
小朋友们在写这种叙事的文章时，要尽量给读者交代好时间、地点、人物和活动等，使文章有血有肉。要看好是写过去发生的事情，还是现在正在做的事情，或计划、打算要做的事情，以选择适当的句型。如果是写将来的事情，那么就要注意在表述时多用
“be going to+动词原形”这种句型。还有一点也很重要，那就是故事的线索要交代好，让读者在阅读时对整个过程一目了然。
PEP小学英语六年级下册各单元作文范例及点评
My friend and I
I have a good friend at school. His name is Jack. Jack is 12 years old now. I’m 11. He’s older than me. He’s 150 cm tall. I’m 148 cm. He’s taller and stronger. He’s 43 kg and I’m 41 kg. He’s heavier. Our favourite colours are white and blue. We like summer best. We both like sports, too. On Saturdays, we
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