中考总结作文

篇一：中考作文总结

中考作文总结

一、“世界无烟日World No Tobacco Day”那天，你们对你们学校学生吸烟情况进行了一次调查，结果如图所示。请就此话题用英语写一片短文。

要求:①对调查结果进行描述；②表明自己的看法并提出建议；③所写内容符合“世界无烟日”主题；④词数80-100.已给开头不计入字数

提示词语：do a survey about?做一个有关?的调查 3% of the students 百分子三的学生 On World No Tobacco Day, we did a survey about how many students smoke. Here are the results: 3% of the students often smoke. 7% of the students smoke sometimes. Luckily, 90% of the students never smoke. The students who smoke say they smoke for fun and they think they look cool while they are smoking. We all know smoking is bad for our health. As students, we shouldn’t smoke. And if our family members smoke, we should stop them. Let’s tell more people the danger of smoking and help smokers give up smoking.

二、生活在城市小区里的孩子们很郁闷，几乎不认识周围的邻居，没有兄弟姐妹的他们除了每天在家做作业看电视就是玩电脑，没有玩伴。 社区（community）负责人李叔叔注意到了这个问题，请你写封邮件给他提出自己的建设性意见。约100词，已给开头和结尾不计入词数。如：①：组织社区里面的孩子们参加清洁本小区的公益劳动；②提供一个地方给社区的孩子们学习交流；③组织一些社区的活动，吸引社区的孩子参加。 Dear Uncle Li, Thank you for reading my e-mail.

I am living in this community. I also have no friend here. Luckily, you want to help us. Here are my suggestions: First, we can clear up our neighbourhoods with the other children in this community, we can know each other and make new friends. Second, I hope you can offer a room for us to do homework, and then we can help each other and learn from each other. Third, I think we can build an after-school club. We can do sports, play games, and even have a picnic in the community. Our life must be very fun and colourful. Best wishes, Xu Jun

三、Tony去年来到Ling Ling所在的学校学习。在学习期间，他对学习提倡的“创建和谐校园”活动感触颇深。他发现该校的学生学习认真，兴趣广泛，友爱互助，师生之间关系融洽，人于环境和谐相处。（如：保持环境卫生，爱护花草树木，不随地乱扔废弃物等）。请你 以Tony的名义，给远在英国的父母写一封信，介绍学校的现状并谈谈你自己的感受。

文中不得出现真实的姓名，校名或地名。词数80左右。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

以下词汇供参考：build up建立，创建 a harmonious campus和谐校园 impress vt. 给某人留下印象 Dear Mom and Dad,

Time flies! I’ve been here for nearly a year. I’m very pleased to find that our school is really a good one. The students in our class work hard. They take an active part in activities that help to improve their qualities and health. They are

friendly to each other and help each other.

The teachers here enjoy their work. They work hard and help their students. The teachers and students get on well with each other. The students try their best to keep the school yard clean and tidy. They never throw waste or pick the flowers. In a word, I am deeply impressed be the harmonious atmosphere here. I love my new school.

Yours,

Tony

四、假如你叫Li Ping,最近你就使用电子词典的问题调查了各方面的意见（见下表）。现在请你根据表格中的信息用英语给某报社编辑写一封信。

注意：①信件必须包括写信缘由及表格所列的内容②书信格式正确③书写整洁④词数80个左右。

Recently, I made a survey about the use of the electronic dictionary. My classmates think that the electronic dictionary is useful, convenient and it can help to save time looking up the words. The parents also think the electronic dictionary is easy to carry and most families can afford it. But my English teacher doesn’t think we should use it, because she/he thinks its explanations for the words are too simple. I suppose the electronic dictionary will make us lazy and we shouldn’t use it.

Yours,

Li Ping

五、现在越来越多的中学生拥有了自己的手机（mobile phone）。作为一名中学生，你对中学生持有手机有什么看法？写一篇80词左右的短文。下面提供的单词或词组供选用。

提示词语：more and more, after a lot of convenience （方便） send short messages some troubles

Today, more and more middle school students have their own mobile phones. As a student, I think it’s good to have a mobile phone, because mobile phones can offer a lot of convenience. And students can send short messages to their parents when they are in trouble or not at home. In fact, if students use mobile phones in right ways, mobile phones will help us, such as we can use mobile phones to look up new words. But it can also bring some trouble. For example, many students use their mobiles to listen to music in class. They don’t listen to the teachers carefully. And many students send messages in class. In my opinion, it’s not right to use mobile phones in school. We should try our best to use mobile phones in right ways.

六、汶川地震牵动亿万人民的心，海内外各界人士纷纷伸出援助之手，帮助灾区重建家园，真所谓“天灾无情人有情”。灾区也有像你一样参加中考的学生，为了使他们鼓起更大的学习于生活的勇气，请你用英语给他们写一封60词左右的信，鼓励他们发奋图强。 My dear friends,

I’m very sorry to know the big earthquake took place in your hometown. Maybe many people around you lost their lives in the earthquake. But please don’t be afraid. You are not lonely. We’ll be with you forever. Let’s cheer up! To be brave to face all kinds of difficulties. Learn to forget these sad things. Study hard from now on and try your best to make much progress in your study life. And we are sure that our future will be more beautiful.

七、众所周知，嘉兴作为一个国际旅游城市吸引了国内外的旅客前来参观，购物。嘉兴市将进一步改善环境。提高市民的素质也势在必行，因为文明的举止在国际交往中非常重要。作为年轻人，我们自身也存在着一些不文明的行为。请你列举你所观察到 的不文明行为（三种以上），并就此作出评论或提出建议。80词左右。

It is known to all that Jia Xing is an international and travelling city. It attracts more and more people to come and do business. In order to make the city more beautiful and stronger, we will improve the environment of Jia Xing. At the same time, it is necessary for us to improve the quality and culture of the people. We often notice that some people don’t behave properly in our daily life. For example, spitting in public places can be seen somewhere. The flowers in public gardens are picked. What’s more, rubbish and plastic bags are thrown on the ground in the streets. In my opinion, these bad behavious will make bad impressions and make a difference to Jia Xing. So every one of us should form (养成) good habits from now on.

八、①写出健康生活六规则

1.Don’t eat junk food.

2. Don’t be a couch potato!

3. Watch your diet.

4. Rest up while you can.

5. Don’t worry. Be happy!

6. Say no to smoking and drugs.

7. take plenty of exercise.

②良好的 生活习惯对我们的成长是 非常重要的，你认为，良好的生活习惯应当是怎样的呢？请根据下面的要点提示，写一篇80词左右的短文。

1. 吃得好，才能有健康的身体;

2. 必须吃早餐，为身体提供能量；

3. 饮食要健康，多吃水果、蔬菜，少吃垃圾食品；

4. 要早睡早起，熬夜对身体有害；

5. 饭前要洗手

6. 要参加体育锻炼，强身健体

It’s very important for us to have better life habits. First, we must eat well

so that we can have a healthy body. We must have breakfast. It can provide energy for the body. Second, we must have a healthy diet. We must eat more fruit and vegetables and less junk food. Third, we’d better wash our hands before meals. Fourth, we must go to bed early and get up early. Staying out is bad for our health. Above all, we must do some sports to keep healthy. If we can do so, we will be healthier.

九、遵守校纪校规（10条）

1． Don’t spit.

2. No running or shouting in the classroom.

3. Please wear your school clothes every day.

4. Don’t step onto the grass.

5. Please save the water.

6. Please protect everything in the school.

7. Try to use more polite words.

8. Listen to the teacher carefully.

9. Don’t fight with others.

10. Don’t be late for school.

十、①结合初三上：module 6 11从自己的切身感受出发，写写人口增长引发的问题

Nowadays, the population of the world is becoming larger and larger. With the increasing of the population of the world, there are more and more problems. First, there is less and less food for everyone to eat. So some people in poor areas are struggle with hunger. Some people in Africa even die of starving. Second, there is much more pollution. The cities become bigger and bigger, and more and more people have their own cars. This causes much more air pollution and noise pollution. Third, there is less and less resource for people to use. So we should try our best to control the increasing of the population. Then we will have a happier life.

②写一篇“Save our world”为主题的短文。80词左右

Save the world

How to protect the environment becomes one of the biggest problems in the world. We can find that rubbish not only pollutes our environment but also does harms to people’s health. So we should not throw rubbish onto the ground. Some factories are pouring waste water into the rivers, the lakes and the fields. It can make a difference to the environment. It can pollute plant. Sometimes it can kill lots of fish.

We must keep our environment clean and tidy. We have only one earth. We must try our best to protect her, and keep our home more beautiful and greener.

十一、你觉得现在的中学校园生活状况如何？哪些方面使你感到困惑并有压力？你所向往的中学生应该是这么样的？围绕这一话题，写一篇80词左右的短文。

I’m a middle school student in China now. Sometimes I don’t very happy to be a student, because we have so long time to stay at school. We have to go to school very early and come back home very late every day. We have no time to do something which we are interested in. So it will be really nice if school can give more time

back to us. I like reading, then I can read some wonderful novels. I like sports, then I can join in the community to do some volunteer work. I have a lot of dreams, if I have more

time, I want them to be realized. I want to be happier to be a middle school student.

十二、作为中学生，你觉得应该为节约资源，保护学校环境，城市环境做些什么贡献（你可以参考以下几个方面：1. 纸，玻璃等的再利用；2. 垃圾分类；3.关掉电灯，水龙头；

4.不践踏草坪；5. 不采摘花果；6。不烧无用的东西；7.尽量骑车走路上学；8.每年植树；

9.买国产的东西；10.不用纸杯等。至少写8点，写到别的方面也可以，但请注意语句通顺连贯，80词。

As middle school students we should save recourses and protect environment of the school and the city. We should reuse the reusable things, such as paper and glass. We should sort the rubbish. When we leave the place, we should turn off the lights and after using the tap, turn it off. We shouldn’t step onto the grass, and we shouldn’t pick the flowers. We can’t burn the useless things. Try to go to school by bike or on foot. Don’t use paper cups. Every year we can plant many trees. If we all try our best, the environment will be better and better.

十三、在你的成长过程中，家人（父母、祖父母等）倾注了大量的心血。他们对你的生活和学习除了给予关心、帮助之外，也会给你提出一些建议。请你根据你的情况，列举5点家人给你的关心、帮助或建议，分别填入A—E后。

参考词汇：be strict with, take care of, encourage, talk with,

They often wash clothes for me.

A. They are strict with me.

B. They take good care of me.

C. They encourage me to study hard.

D. They often talk with about my study and life.

E. They often buy some healthy food for me.

根据上面的内容选择一点或几点写一篇短文， 谈谈你的家人给予你的关心、帮助或建议以及你的想法。

注意：80词左右，短文中请不要出现真实的人名、校名及相关信息。

Mum is very kind and helpful to me.

Every day she gets up early to cook breakfast for me. She never forgets to put an apple in my schoolbag so that I can keep the doctor away. In the evening she often asks me about what I have done at school and gives me her advice which is really helpful to me. She is very strict with me. She often tells me to study hard and try to read more books, but she never allows me to do my homework late at night. On weekends, she usually sends me to go to extra classes. However, I hate going to extra classes. I really want to tell my mother that I need my free time and I want to arrange my own study.

篇二：中考作文实用总结

中考作文特点： ▲ 时间地点的限制性：构思要迅捷，书写要麻利。

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▲ 写作范围的限制性：要审清题意再进行作文，要善于将大的、空泛的题目化为小的、能表现自己熟知生活的题目。 ▲ 文章篇幅的限制性：语言要言简意赅，力求用最经济的文字表达最丰富的内涵。 ▲ 文章题材的限制性：要熟知各种文体特点，选择好文体后，在写作中不可随意更改。 ▲ 拥有材料的限制性：平时要博闻多识，扩大感知范围，要广泛收集材料，并尽可能准确记忆。 ※ 卷面书写的美观性：首先要把字写清楚，其次，要尽量整洁、美观。 ※ 审题立意的准确性：审题要清，立意要明，要健康，要给人以积极的启示。 ※ 选用材料的新颖性：选材要新颖，如果无法避开众人常用的材料，也要找到新颖的角度，使“老枝”发出“新芽”来。 ※ 表现生活的真实性：要尽力表现自己对生活的感受和体验，抒写真情实感。 ※ 谋篇布局的合理性：要注意谋篇布局，用好你手上的每一颗棋子，要用的恰如其分，不露痕迹。 ※ 细节描写的生动性：要学会用细节构筑情节，让自己的笔底波澜多一些，生活的味道浓一些。 ※ 语言品质的表现性：语言既要富有张力，又要干净利落。 ☆ 命题作文 ☆ 半命题作文 ☆ 话题作文 ☆ 材料作文 ●记叙文： ○并列式、小标题式结构 ○题记、后记式结构 ○序数式结构 ○日记式结构 ●议论文： ○纵式结构： □层层深入 □起承转合 ○横式结构： □总论-分论-总论 □总论-分论 □分论-总论 ◇ 开门见山，直接入题 ◇ 写景状物，渲染气氛 ◇ 巧妙引用，突出主题 ◇ 妙用修辞，展示文采 ◇ 巧设悬念，强磁吸引 ¤呼应式结尾 ¤抒情式结尾 ¤引用式结尾 ¤反诘式结尾 ¤延思式结尾

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《西游记》是中国古典四大名著之一，是由明代小说家吴承恩所创作的中国古代第一部浪漫主义的长篇神魔小说。主要描写了孙悟空、猪八戒、沙僧三人保护唐僧西行取经，沿途遇到八十一难，一路降妖伏魔，化险为夷，最后到达西天、取得真经的故事。取材于《大唐三藏取经诗话》和民间传说。

二、《水浒传》

《水浒传》，是中国四大名著之一，全书描写北宋末年以宋江为首的108位好汉在梁山起义，以及聚义之后接受招安、四处征战的故事。

《水浒传》也是汉语文学中最具备史诗特征的作品之一。是中国历史上最早用白话文写成的章回小说之一。版本众多，流传极广，脍炙人口，对中国乃至东亚的叙事文学都有极其深远的影响。

《水浒传》是一部以描写古代农民起义为题材的长篇小说。它形象地描绘了农民起义从发生、发展直至失败的全过程，深刻揭示了起义的社会根源，满腔热情地歌颂了起义英雄的反抗斗争和他们的社会理想，也具体揭示了起义失败的内在历史原因。

三、《繁星?春水》

《繁星·春水》的内容，是诗人冰心平时随便记下的“随时随地的感想和回忆”。后来，她受到泰戈尔《飞鸟集》的启发，觉得自己那些三言两语的小杂感里也有着诗的影子，这才整理起来，而成为两本小诗集。冰心在当时大约不会想到，她这两本含蓄隽永、富于哲理的小诗集的出版，竟会使那么多青年的久已沉默的心弦受到拨动，从而在她的影响下，促使“五四”以来的新诗，进入了一个小诗流行的时代。

《繁星·春水》这两本诗集用冰心自己的话来说，是将一些“零碎的思想”收集到一个诗集里。这两本诗集是冰心生活、感情、思想的自然酿造，在中外享有很高的声誉。其诗集的主题是：母爱与童真的歌颂，对大自然的崇拜和赞颂，对人生的思考和感悟。

四、《骆驼祥子》

《骆驼祥子》是作家老舍的代表作之一，主要是以北平（今北京）一位人力车夫祥子的行踪为线索贯穿全文，以二十年代中期的北京市民生活为背景，以洋车夫祥子的坎坷、悲惨的生活遭遇为主要情节，深刻揭露了旧中国的黑暗，控诉了统治阶级对劳动者的剥削、压迫，表达了作者对劳动人民的深切同情，向人们展示军阀混战、黑暗统治下的北京底层贫苦市民生活于痛苦深渊中的图景。

五、《朝花夕拾》

《朝花夕拾》是鲁迅唯一一部回忆性散文集。《朝花夕拾》是鲁迅后来修改的名字，原名《旧事重提》。“朝”表示早年时候，“夕”表示晚年时期。题目的意思是早上的花晚上来捡，这里指鲁迅先生在晩年回忆童年时期、少年时期、青年时期的人和事。

六、《钢铁是怎样炼成的》

《钢铁是怎样炼成的》是前苏联作家尼古拉·奥斯特洛夫斯基所著的一部长篇小说，于1933年写成。小说通过记叙保尔·柯察金的成长道路告诉人们，一个人只有在革命的艰难困苦中战胜敌人也战胜自己，只有在把自己的追求和祖国、人民的利益联系在一起的时候，才会创造出奇迹，才会成长为钢铁战士

七、《简?爱》

《简·爱》是十九世纪英国著名的女作家夏洛蒂·勃朗特的代表作，人们普遍认为《简·爱》是夏洛蒂·勃朗特“诗意的生平写照”，是一部具有自传色彩的作品。讲述一位从小变成孤儿的英国女子在各种磨难中不断追求自由与尊严，坚持自我，最终获得幸福的故事。小说引人入胜地展示了男女主人公曲折起伏的爱情经历，歌颂了摆脱一切旧习俗和偏见，成功塑造了一个敢于反抗，敢于争取自由和平等地位的妇女形象。

《童年》是高尔基以自身经历为原型创作的自传体小说三部曲中的第一部（其他两部分别为《在人间》、《我的大学》）。讲述了阿廖沙三岁到十岁这一时期的童年生活，生动地再现了19世纪七八十年代前苏联下层人民的生活状况，写出了高尔基对苦难的认识，对社会人生的独特见解，字里行间涌动着一股生生不息的热望与坚强。

九、《名人传》

《名人传》，是19世纪末20世纪初法国著名批判现实主义作家罗曼·罗兰（1866~1944年）创作的人物传记作品，它包括《贝多芬传》（1903）、《米开朗基罗传》（1906）、《列夫·托尔斯泰传》（1911）三部传记。

十、《鲁滨孙漂流记》

《鲁滨逊漂流记》是丹尼尔·笛福的一部小说作品，主要讲述了主人公因出海遇险，漂流到无人小岛，并坚持在岛上生活，最后回到原本社会的故事。

十一、《格列佛游记》

《格列佛游记》是乔纳森·斯威夫特（又译为江奈生·斯威夫特）的一部杰出的游记体讽刺小说，以里梅尔·格列佛（又译为莱缪尔·格列佛）船长的口气叙述周游四国的经历。通过格列佛在利立浦特、布罗卜丁奈格、飞岛国、慧骃国的奇遇，反映了18世纪前半期英国统治阶级的腐败和罪恶。还以较为完美的艺术形式表达了作者的思想观念，作者用了丰富的讽刺手法和虚构的幻想写出了荒诞而离奇的情节，深刻地反映了当时的英国议会中毫无意义的党派斗争，统治集团的昏庸腐朽和唯利是图，对殖民战争的残酷暴戾进行了揭露和批判；同时它在一定程度上歌颂了殖民地人民反抗统治者的英勇斗争。

十二、《汤姆索亚历险记》

《汤姆·索亚历险记》是美国小说家马克·吐温1876年发表的代表作品，小说的故事发生在19世纪上半世纪美国密西西比河畔的一个普通小镇上。主人公汤姆·索亚天真活泼、敢于探险、追求自由，不堪忍受束缚个性、枯燥乏味的生活，幻想干一番英雄事业。小说的时代在南北战争前，写的虽是圣彼得堡小镇，但该镇某种程度上可以说是当时美国社会的缩影。小说通过主人公的冒险经历，对美国虚伪庸俗的社会习俗、伪善的宗教仪式和刻板陈腐的学校教育进行了讽刺和批判，以欢快的笔调描写了少年儿童自由活泼的心灵。《汤姆·索亚历险记》以其浓厚的深具地方特色的幽默和对人物敏锐观察，一跃成为最伟大的儿童文学作品，也是一首美国“黄金时代”的田园牧歌

篇三：中考小作文总结

中考小作文总结

1 LOST AND FOUND

Lost:

My school ID card.

My name is Tony.

Please call me at 123456. Thank you!

Found:

Is this your backpack?

My name is Jack.

Please call me at 654321.

Found :

A red coat

Please call the lost and found.

Tel :1234567

留言条

Dear Jack,

Can you bring these things to school? They are my hat, my shoes and my watch. I

need them. My hat is on my bed. My shoes are under the chair. My watch is in the

drawer. Thanks .

Li Dong

Musicians wanted

Are you a musician? canyou sing? Can you dance? Can you play the piano, the

drums or the guitar? Can you be good with the kids? Then you can be in our music

club. Please call Liu Li at 666-6668

Note for leave

Dear Miss/Mr.

I’m sorry to tell you that I hadI days’\ week’s leave. I hope I’ll

get well and return to school soon.

Thank you!

Yours,

Dear Miss\Mr.

I’m sorry to tell you that myis ill. He My parents\father\

mother aren’t\ isn’t at home now. They. My Thank you!

Yours,

Invitation

May 9th

Dear I would like to invite you to on Hope to see you then!

Sincerely,

For Rent

Small apartment for students

￥850 a month

Call Ms. Zhang at 1234567

For Rent

House with three bedrooms

Call Mrs. Tong in the evening\at weekenks

Tel ：1234567

Wanted

House with furniture for a family of three

￥500 a month

Please call Mr. Li at1234567

Wanted

Looking for a quiet double room

Under ￥300 per month

Call Bob at 1234567

Telephone massage

From : Tom

To : Jane

Message: Climbing a mountain

When: This weekend

Place :Mount Tai

Time : 6:00 in the morning

Meeting place: At the school gate

Accident Report Form

Time : 4:40p.m Date: May 9th,2011

Place : the gate of Sifang Supermarket

Accident : A motorcycle hit a student cyclist. The student’s right leg was badly hurt

and his bike was broken.

篇四：2012年中考作文素材和总结

作文总结

一．四个规范

二．八大高招

作文素材

一．亲人

（1）我的亲人们：《平淡是幸福》

没有什么爱情比轰轰烈烈更让人感动了吧！可是人不可能总活在童话里，回归到生活就变成了柴、米、油、盐、酱、醋、茶的平平淡淡。

我的外公外婆就是这样。每天围着锅转，偶尔因一些琐碎的小事争吵几句，在我看来，没有任何浪漫可言，这是不被我欣赏的。

今年二月上旬，外婆因过于操劳，住进了医院。我和妈妈都忙各自的事情，无暇顾及。考虑再三，只好让外公亲自出马。可是我心里犯嘀咕了，外公平常粗心大意，这种细致活儿，他能行吗？为了消除心中的担忧，我放下了繁忙的功课，挤出了一点点时间，去探望外婆。 来到医院，我怕打搅外婆休息，悄悄推开病房，眼前的一幕让我呆住了，我立在门口，不忍心打搅这两位老人。

外婆刚刚打过针，身体很虚弱，无法自己坐起来。外公便小心地将枕头立好，一只手托起外婆的头，另一手轻轻地挽着外婆的腰，慢慢地将外婆扶正坐好。紧接着，外公麻利地将盛满了饭菜的碗端起，饭菜热汽腾腾的，外公舀了一勺，轻轻地放在自己嘴边，轻轻地吹一吹，再放到自己的唇边，试了试温度，才缓缓地送入外婆口中。

我站在门边，久久不肯进去半步，怕打碎了这样一幅绝美的画面！外公转身给外婆拿擦嘴的纸巾时，发现了我，“XX，来啦！怎么不进来呀？”看到外公头上的白发在不太明亮的病房里格外醒目，“是啊？你发什么呆呢？”外婆也用微弱的声音轻问，嘴角的余尾纹散开了，犹如一朵盛开的菊花，仿佛回到了她的少女时代。

从医院出来，我依稀听到一首老歌，不知从哪个方向传来，“我能想到最浪漫的事，就是和你一起慢慢变老??”这不就是两位老人的写照吗？

是啊，生活如一碗稀粥——平淡！刻意去添加些什么，显得做作，其实，只需要在稀饭上不经意地放几颗青葱，平淡深处那些鲜活的滋味就会让你感觉到某些特别的味道，那平添的味道到底是什么味道呢？

幸福的味道?? （2）我的亲人们和我《让爱永驻心中》

温暖的午后，我坐在窗前准备写作业。一片橙色的叶从窗前掠过，将我的视线引向楼下夕阳洒满的人行道：一个头发斑白的老人背着小学生书包，领着个“小豆包”往家走。笔直的小路无限地延伸着，时间仿佛回到十年前的冬天??

“我玩回来了！”那正是冬天，推开房门，一股热气冲来。我朝外公外婆嚷着，迫不及待地往餐桌上瞄——哈，今天的水果是我最爱的梨！“累了吧，快坐，把鞋脱了??”外婆说着便把沾满白雪的鞋从我脚上拽了下来，而我已用有点儿脏的小手抓起一片削得一点皮也没有得梨吃了起来。啊，好甜！

小时候的水果盘，是我每天回家的期待。

“玩累了吧？吃点水果??”外公说着就放了盘水果在电脑桌上。四年级的我对电脑的热爱胜过一切。见到水果，我只好停下，离开键盘，听着那极有吸引力的游戏音乐吃水果。狼吞虎咽地吃完水果，我便又开玩了。谁知外公好像对削苹果这事乐此不疲，没玩上几分钟，有一盘水果伴着一句“吃点水果”向我扑来。我既不情愿地离开了键盘，心里直抱怨：好烦，没完没了？外公看我不耐烦的眼神，悄悄走出了房间。惊人的是，自此，外公便不再说“吃点水果”了，只是静静地放在桌上，让我自己选择时间吃。当我终于静下心，放下电脑，吃外公默默送来的水果时，心中充溢着感动。咦，这里怎么会有咸味？啊，是泪溶进了里面。 水果盘里，盛满了微小到有些琐碎的理解与关心。

人在初三，我的生活被作业填满。“吱——”门开了。我回头，外婆端着盘水果走进来。“学累了，休息会儿，张弛有度啊。”她留下一串温柔的声音和桌上的水果，轻轻掩上门。我抚摸着盘中的水果——有苹果、橙子、梨??整齐地排列着，皮削得一干二净。黄昏的阳光下，他们在朦胧中显出惊人的橙色，像黄昏里波光粼粼的湖水。吃下一口，眼泪顿时溢满

眼眶。这种熟悉的，充满期待、关心、理解的味道在舌根蔓延。它不是铿锵的，也不是浓郁的——而是淡淡的独有的味道——实施年抑或更恒久的香甜——这是爱的甜味。

窗外的那对祖孙走远了，留下条依然温馨的小道。外公外婆对我的爱没有消失，我对外公外婆也一日日地感激起来。让这种跨越辈分的关心和理解延续下去吧！让那被爱浸透的甜味，在心中永驻。 二．朋友（同学）

（1）我的朋友们的故事：《我们班的“崔永元”》

我们班有这么一位明星，他有着高高的个子，身材挺匀称；奇短的头发紧贴在“0”字形的头上；眼里泛出的光芒看似呆傻，其实这不但是他“大智若愚”的表现，更是他小品天赋的所在；显得有点扁的大鼻子卧在脸中央，下面点着一块“大众化”的小嘴。只要他一瞪眼、一咧嘴，保你联想到标准的小丑形象。他之所以被称为我们班的“崔永元”，不单单是因为他姓崔，更因为他的言行像崔永元一样滑稽有趣。不信请看：

历史老师点他读课本上的一段话，他利落地站起来，开始了抑扬顿挫的朗读。不过他这么做既不是因为他喜欢诗，也不是为了用“诗韵”哗众取宠，而是为了给大家送去笑声。他在读副词时要么夸大升降调，要么就用重音拖长腔读，不然就把文章读得一字一顿，每个词的音长还不相同，尤其到了关键的字词，他总是刻意停顿两三秒。大家呢？不但不介意他的搞怪行径，而且更快地接受了新知识。现在，老师一旦点他读文段，就会引发大家不由自主地窃笑，连思想开小差的同学也被拽了回来。

有时他也要为“事业”做出牺牲。一堂地理课上，老师点同学回答问题时，答题的人话没说完，只见在或昏昏欲睡或点头称是的人群中，有一个长着“0”字脸的人煞有介事地念叨：“错了，错了！??”回答问题的人莫名其妙，大家也一头雾水，继而人们忍俊不禁。只有老师脸上掠过一丝乌云。下课后，一直活跃于教室的他不见了，去了哪里可想而知。

他也有时以自己幽默的语言和谬论为“绯闻”中被冤枉的同学们辩护，并且每次都能化干戈为玉帛。

他比多崔永元一些挑战高手的勇气和唱技。一次唱英文歌曲，其中有一段无歌词的唱段，全班同学都使用了自己保持沉默的权利，只有他以低沉的声调迎战。虽然以绝对的劣势败下阵来，但也展现了他另一种风格。

他难道称不上我们班的“崔永元”吗？

（2）我的朋友们和我的故事：《朋友需要我》

薄暮冥冥。五点多才放学，我和你一前一后地骑车回家。你和我小学时就是好友，有难题我总会向成绩优异的你求教。这不，即使在汽笛嘈杂的现在，我仍在和你讨论着那道题。 路灯昏黄，照在马路上让人不禁联想起凿壁偷光之人。“XX，没你我真不知学成啥样了！”我朝前面那个小巧的女生感叹道。“嘻，感谢我吧！”你转过头来瞄我一眼，满脸自豪地扬着头。

终于，我们骑过了喧嚣的地段，进入了楼群间的小道。“吱——”只听见尖锐的摩擦声。你的车突然停下。“链条掉了！”你惊叫道，话语中充满了绝望。

我也停下车，蹲在车旁，顶着链条看。“以前有过这样的事吗？”“没有啊！”你嚷着，拿了把钥匙勾住链条，想把它再次挂到轮盘上。可钥匙太宽了，眼看就要挂上了，却只听“咣当”一声，它掉了下来。你不服，迅速挽起袖子。可我明明看到你眼神恍惚不定，流露着担忧。“努力！”我对她笑笑。可那链条还是“当”地掉了下来。

“这样不行吧！”我说着，摘下手套，去捡链条，一下，两下??“别用手了，你手都黑了！”你急了，“我来吧！”我抬头，你的脸已因天色暗得看不清轮廓了，只有路灯照射的阴影在你的双颊上晃着。你的眼角闪着点光泽。“没关系，我会陪着你修好它的，一起来吧！”你犹豫了一下，便也摘下手套：“嗯！”??

终于，不知过了多久，那链子终于回到了盘上，车可以走了。我们慢悠悠地推着车，脸上挂着喜悦。月亮的嘴咧开了，吐出了好多闪闪的小星星，躲躲藏藏的。

“你知道吗？刚才要不是你，我可能就叫我妈从家赶过来了呢。”

“你真好，总在关键时刻陪着我，今天体育课上的7圈要不是你一直在我身边跑着，我可能就走了。”

篇五：中考话题作文范文总结

中考作文出现的常规错误:

1、卷面出现涂改，字迹不工整。

人是情感动物，卷面整洁从某种意义上讲甚至比内容更重要。

无耐心读下去，势必影响得分。

不超过20秒，评分12以下。 即使有再华丽的辞藻也是徒劳。

2. 中考作文也不是你新句型的练兵场，是关乎你前途命运的一次大考。所以务必确保自己写上的每一句话都是正确的。不拿中考作生僻表达的试验田。

3. 不是语文作文，更不是演讲稿，不需要你自由发挥，感慨万千！

4.细节问题：

1）三无：无段落、无结构、无明显主题

2）语法错误太多

大量明显拼写、语法错误是分数“毒药”

最常出的错误就是：

名词复数、介词缺失、句子结构混乱（单三/时态）。

5. 细节问题：提示词不理解，没有全部用到

2008年是有中考以来第一次出现夹叙夹议的文体，因此出题老师已经尽力将所有能给

之提示悉数奉上，只要按部就班按照中文句子和提示词将句子翻译出来即可。可惜有的同学并不领情，依然故我，舍提示词于不顾，非要尝试长难句。殊不知大智若愚，大巧若拙这个道理

作文提分我能做什么？

明确作文新趋势：

? 提示

? 提示作文也称之为提供材料，它要求根据汉语意思和英语提示词语，写出

意思连贯、符合逻辑的英语文段。这种提示已将所要叙述的事情列出，并且有的提示给出了英语词汇、句型，只是要求学生根据所给的提示，利用合理的想像，运用一定的语言逻辑，使用正确的语法和句法，将整篇的文字用英语表达出来。

?

1.根据题目要求列出写作提纲，打草稿。

切忌直接在卷面上写作文，写作前要先构思文章的主旨，段落，时态。

1）首先，应认真阅读汉语和提示，理解写作要求；将相关组合起来。

2）明确时态，理顺思路，

根据提示的内容，确定时态、人称，在此基础上，确定适当的词汇、句型。

3）写作内容：写人就要从外貌、性格、爱好、年龄、职业、心理活动和人物相关的主

要事件等角度考虑；写事（经历）要交代时间、地点、人物、事情发生的顺序等，提建议用建议句型 另外，注意应用文的格式，如信件E-mail等。

4）写完草稿后，要仔细阅读全文，看文章是否扣题，是否涵盖全部要点，单词拼写是

否准确，有无语法错误，草稿修改好后，抄写在试卷上，抄写时字体要规范整洁。

试卷上务必不要出现大段的涂抹、勾画。

2. 选用自己熟练掌握的句子组织语言。设计好文章的开头和结尾，结构层次要清晰，可按题目的要点分段，并有适当的过渡。

1) 句型为王 句子是表达完整含义的最小单位。

? 自造句+ 模板句

? 考试中尽量使用见过/背过的句式和短语，注意中表达的差异，避免使用中式英

文。我们在课本中学过的句式都可使用在作文中，

? 如：It is … for sb to do sth.

? It is necessary for us to make a plan for our study.

? It is a good habit for us to exercise every day because it can help us

? keep in good health.

个人观点：I hink…；I believe…;In my opinion，…I prefer to do sth rather than

do sth because…I等，我们可在原句型的基础上举一反三利用所

知识准确的表达出自己的观点。

2）另外在适宜的情况下也可使用一些平时积累的很经典的句子，等起到画龙点睛的作用。

? Do well and have well

? Practice makes perfect

? 但求无过，用熟不用生

3）巧润色，细检查。

学会使用过渡词，避免重复使用同样的短语和句型，在需要的地方加上表示转折、因果、并列、比较、时间顺序的过渡词或短语，使文章更加自然、流畅，也会使文章增色不少。

? 临场检查六注意

? 一篇优秀的应符合以下要求：

? 1.审题争取，要素齐全（不全，降档）

? 2.单词拼写错误，语法时态及句子结构错误是否影响了内容的准确性。

? 3.能否使用恰当的关联词或者复合句使文段内容完整，层次清楚。

? 4.运用丰富的词语和句子，增加句子的多样性

? 5.句子开头大写及句尾的标点符号。

? 6.卷面是否整洁。

考前总结常犯错误

? 小提示：

? 1.不会表达，另辟蹊径。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办

法，化难为易，化繁为简。

? 2.小词大用。汉语中有些语意看来很复杂很文雅，但在中常可用一些常用词来

表达。下面这些词可能在你的书面表达中有用：take，have，get，make，come，go，do，see，show，happy，nice，kind，help等。

? 3.注意使用复合句。

中考作文归类总结范文：

第一大类提建议：

Beginnings:

i. There are many things you can do to help you...

ii. I’m sorry to hear that. I would like to help you deal with your

iii.

iv.

Engdings:

? 1. In a word, nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.

? 2. I hope to receive your good news.

? 3. I hope you can feel better soon.

? 4. Easier said than done. Let’s start from now.

? 5. I am sure you will…

Structures:

1. You should/could + do---You shouldn’t/couldn’t +do

2. You’d better do… You’d better not do…

3. Why not do…? Why don’t you do…?

4. Why not consider doing …?

5. You are supposed to do…

6. Don’t do…

7. If I were you, I would do…

8. If possible, I would do

（1）学习 problem. There is nothing serious. I’d like to give you some advice. I know it isn’t easy to... But I have some ideas that may help.

A. how to become a good learner

To be a good leaner, we should have good habits and ways in learning.

First, it's important to get ready for our lessons before class and listen carefully in class. After class, we’d better go over the lessons and finish our homework on time. Second, we need to help each other and study in groups. It can not only help us solve problems but also provide us the opportunities to learn to work with others.

Above all, working hard is important, but don’t forget to do sports and keep healthy. I hope all of us will become good learners.

B. how to study English well

? say something about how I study English.

? first of all, my listening is poor. I can hardly understand when people talk to me.

I think that doing lots of listening practice is because I can see the actors say the words

? Then I am afraid to speak in class. My English teacher gave me some advice that helped me a lot. She told me not to be afraid of making mistakes and encouraged me to speak a lot. There is an old saying, “Practice makes perfect.” now my speaking English has improved a lot.

? As for grammar, I sometimes make mistakes in grammar, the best way to study grammar is by taking notes carefully in class.

? in a word, as English is getting more and more important, I decide to learn it harder and better by reading English novels. Hope I’ll do better in learning English.

具体问题：

I can’t understand when people talk to me

I can’t spell some English words.

I read very slowly.

I make mistakes in grammar.

I am afraid to speak in class, because I think my classmates might laugh at me.

I could hardly understand the teacher when she talked in class.

阐述困难的句型：

first of all, My … is poor. /I can hardly do…

Later on, It’s difficult for me to…

Also, I don’t know how to …

Next, I make mistakes in doing…

/ I sometimes worry about making mistakes when I speak English out loud.

And, I find doing… is difficult for me.

补充学习英语的方法：

listen to tapes ,watch English movies,join an English club,speak to friends in English

have conversations with friends,read the textbook,read English newspapers/magazines make flashcards, memorize words of pop songs, find a pen pal, work with friends

ask teacher for help, study with a group, study English by using it.

学习谚语：

? Just as an old saying goes, ‘….’

? Nothing is impossible/difficult if you put your heart into it.

? Where there is a will, there is a way.

? Action speaks louder that words.

? Practice makes perfect.

? No pains, no gains.

? Little by little, one goes far

? The more you learn, the better you will be.

(2) 健康

A. 睡眠方面的建议

Please don’t worry. I’m sorry to hear that you have many problems. I would like to provide you with some suggestions that may help you. goes, “ Early to bed, early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.” So that you’ll not only have a good rest but also sleep with a good quality.

a cup of milk before going to bed instead of drinking a cup of tea? In my opinion, it’s good for your health.

I hope you’ll sleep as sweetly as a baby. And I am looking forward to your great changes.!

B. 面对H1N1，我们可以做什么

Please don’t be afraid of H1N1. There are many things we can do to stay away from it. Here are a few. A healthy lifestyle can be very effective. Just as an old saying goes, “ Early to bed, early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.” We should have enough sleep because it can give us more energy.

take exercise regularly to make our body strong. having a balanced/ healthy diet? I think we should eat more vegetables and fruits. Just as an old saying goes, ‘An apple a day keeps a doctor away.’ Also, stay away from food with too much sugar or salt! It can not only help us lose weight but also help us keep fit.

we should wash our hands more often and we shouldn’t touch our eyes and noses with our dirty hands. The last but the most important thing is to open the window as often as possible to let fresh air in.

Finally, if we catch a cold or have a fever, go to see a doctor in time and ask him for some useful advice. There is nothing serious. Preventing H1N1 is possible if we put your heart into it.

健康方面的谚语：

Just as an old saying goes, ‘….’

There is nothing more important than health.

The first wealth is health.

An apple a day keeps a doctor away.

Early to bed, early to rise makes a man healthy wealthy and wise.”

All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. 只工作, 不玩耍, 聪明小伙也变儍。

(3) 环保

A. save water节水

The earth is so dry that not only the people but also the plants and animals are short of water. It’s very difficult for people to make a living and so it’s dangerous for their lives. Water is important in our life and everyone has the duty to save every drop of water

For example, First, We can take a shorter shower because it is not necessary for us to use so much water. Second,We can turn off the shower when we wash our hair.what’s more, We can collect enough used waste water to sweep the floor or water the flowers.

In a word, If we don’t save water now, the last drop of water in the earth will be our

tear!I’ll keep doing them and try my best to save more water. I believe if everyone makes a little effort, we can make a big difference.

B. save energy节能、低碳

important

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