写回信的作文

篇一：写回信

写回信

假若你是《21th century》报纸的编辑，有一学生向你写了如下的一封信，请你根据来

信的内容写一封回信，帮他出出主意。字数约为100左右。

Dear Editor,

My physics teacher is very strict with us. I often feel nervous in his classes because we are punished by being made to stand for a few minutes if we can't answer his questions. It's embarrassing to be made to stand in class, so I hate physics classes. However, I really want to do well in physics. What should I do?

Yours sincerely

Zhang Ying

Dear Zhang Ying,

I am sorry you are having difficulty with your physics classes. Teachers have many different ways of encouraging students to put in more effort it seems as though your physics teacher thinks fear is the best way! He does it because he thinks it will produce results. If you feel that it is stopping you from doing your best then you should tell him. You say you want to do well in physics and if your teacher knows this, he will be pleased. It is only when students are not trying as hard as they can that a teacher is forced to take action. If he is aware of your worries, perhaps he will suggest other ways of helping you improve your work.

Editor

篇二：作文指导、讲评：《生活中作文——写回信》

作文指导、讲评：《生活中作文——写回信》

做课特级教师：徐鹄 上海市常青学校 师：可以上课了吗？

生：老师您好

师：小朋友请坐。小朋友，你知道上海吗？ 生：想

师：这回我到黄山来开会，宝山区的让我找一个手拉手学校，就因为这事，宝山一中心小学校长亲自来到这里，我就成了一个特殊的

生：邮递员

师：你说得给好，我像是一个小邮递员，一个信使。你们看过了吗

生有的看过有的没看过

师：没看过的赶快打开看看。

生看信。

师：看过的说说看完了你有什么想法吗，有什么让你感动的，没看过的赶快看看，你不看信不是白写了吗？ 师：看完说说你读了宝山一中心同学的来信你想到什么 生1：我想给他写回信

师：我说看到信有什么想法，先说你的想法

生1：因为他想跟我们交朋友

师：你的第一个想法愿意回应他

生2：我想说他的作文写得好

师：有什么优点

生２：念信（生字写）

师：什么地方让你感动啦，

生2：它没考好，与一百分失之交臂

师：你觉得失之交臂用得好，对吗

生3：我想立刻去上海

师：为什么你想去上海

生３：因为我想跟他交朋友

生４：他很热情

师：你从哪看出来的

生４：因为他说他很热情就是没有耐心

师：从信里你体会到他很热心。好，小朋友，

了宝山小朋友的热情了吗

生：体会了吗

师：还有什么

生：体会到了他们的面貌

师：面貌？换个词吧

生：容貌

师：容貌可以，还有更合适的 你们体会到

生：外貌

师：对了。还有吗

生：还有个头

师：这些都是在向你们介绍他自己。宝山小朋友的来信除了向你们提出了交朋友的愿望，还介绍了自己。一头黄山，人杰地灵的地方，另一边是国际大都市，两地小朋友手拉手，人家正等着你们来信呢，你们想不想？

生举手

师：那我们现在该干什么事呢？

生：写回信

板书

师：那么回信该写些什么内容呢，我请你们四个人一组商量一下。

四人小组商量。

生：我想介绍一下黄山，也介绍一下我们学校

师：首先该说什么

生：应该先说我们也想与他交朋友

师：好，也就是说首先要先表明我们的态度，同意吗？ 生：同意。

师：就是，要让人家明白你很愿意和他交朋友，除了这个呢

生：还应该介绍自己

师：为什么要介绍自己呀

生：因为不介绍自己他不能了解我

师：就是嘛，人家介绍他了，他还不了解你呢，要交朋友就得了解，知已知彼。对不对

生：对

师：小朋友，怎么介绍自己呢，如果你介绍得不吸引人，人家记不住你，那介绍就不值了。还有什么可介绍的 生：写我的爱好和性格

师；这都是介绍自己，刚才小朋友说可以介绍学校介绍黄山，可以不可以呀

生：可以

师：还可以提要求呀

生：有些问题我不明白我想问问

师：很好，写信问问清楚，弄弄明白，这个信写得就清楚了。好，同学们，表明态度，介绍自己，弄清问题。不过大家注意，比比介绍自己和介绍黄山哪个重要。 生：黄山

师：对。介绍自己怎么介绍得好呢，怎么介绍得人家留下深刻和留下，就决定了人家交不交你这个朋友，对不对 生：对

师：我请每个人独立思考，我介绍怎么介绍呢，想的时候

呢眼睛闭起来，脑子动起来，没想好眼睛不睁开，睁开我就知道你想好了。

生闭眼想。

师：介绍些什么内容呢，怎样给别人留下深刻的印象呢？这是一个忠告一个建议，就是先想好再说。同意吗？ 生：同意。

师：没想好，说一半就结结巴巴，噢，想好了再说。谁愿意第一个来，刚才第一个想好的是他，第一个举手的也是他，我想他一定是充满自信，不过我要请他到台上来说，这是要让他展现自己

生上台

生：我觉得应该先介绍名字的含义，接着介绍自己的爱好，然后介绍自己的优点和缺点。

师；这样你说说看

生：我的名字叫ＸＸＸ，欣是我长大后希望我欣欣向荣。亮是让我的名字更好听，我的名字原先是吕欣，爸爸妈妈觉得向女孩就给我加了个亮字

师：现在多大气呀

生：我的优点是上课发言积极，缺点是脾气暴躁。 师：怎么暴躁呢

生：我有的时候找不着东西就急

师：找不着怎么办怪爸爸怪妈妈，那可不好，要改好不好

篇三：一封回信范文

一封回信范文

写一封回信

假若你是《21th century》报纸的编辑，有一学生向你写了如下的一封信，请你根据来

信的内容写一封回信，帮他出出主意。字数约为100左右。

Dear Editor,

My physics teacher is v(转 载 于:wWW.smHAida.cOM 海达范文网:写回信的作文)ery strict with us. I often feel nervous in his classes because we are punished by being made to stand for a few minutes if we can't answer his questions. It's embarrassing to be made to stand in class, so I hate physics classes. However, I really want to do well in physics. What should I do?

Yours sincerely

Zhang Ying

Dear Zhang Ying,

I am sorry you are having difficulty with your physics classes. Teachers have many different ways of encouraging students to put in more effort it seems as though your physics teacher thinks fear is the best way! He does it because he thinks it will produce results. If you feel that it is stopping you from doing your best then you should tell him. You say you want to do well in physics and if your teacher knows this, he will be pleased. It is only when students are not trying as hard as they can that a teacher is forced to take action. If he is aware of your worries, perhaps he will suggest other ways of helping you improve your work.

Editor

篇四：作文回信

Your writing assignment is to reply to the following e-mail message:

Subject: product inquiry

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I have heard a lot about the product and would like to know more. Is there any way you can send some brochure about the same? I am a customer of your outlet from past 5 years and I buy new products on regular basis and like the fragrance and after effects of the products. Your products are really genuine and show the result as you show in your advertisement. I and my sister and mom are very impressed by the range of product your company is offering. I have always liked the quality and the customers services provide to us at your company and I find the price also reasonable.

Please send complete details about the product and so that we can decide at home what to buy and also I can provide it to my sister in law who resides in US. Even she liked lot of your range of products, please forward the brochure to this email address.

Thank you for your attention to my request.

Sincerely,

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篇五：写回信3

Dear Alice,

I ‘m glad to hear from you. It’s true that Chinese parents are very strict with their children. That’ their way to show love. I’m sure your mother wants you to become a great person.

I think you can talk to your mother about what you are feeling now and try to find a better way to improve your study. It ‘s a good idea to ask your teacher for help. Sometimes teachers’ advice works well. Above all, never give up study but try to enjoy it.

Your friend

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