我们的厨房英语作文

篇一：英语作文范例

My English Teacher

Miss Tang is my English teacher. She’s very pretty. She is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. She likes cats very much. And she likes singing and dancing, too. Her English is very good. We often play games in English classes. She is very kind to us. We all love her.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”，是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作者开门见山，直接点题，首先介绍了英语老师的姓名，然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等。

小朋友们在写作文时，要注意使用自己最熟悉的词[组]，以免写出一些错句子。写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰、规范等。

My Favourite Food

Do you know what this is? Guess! Its colour is yellow. It’s long and thin. It looks like a small boat and crescent. Oh, it is a banana. Do you know what that is? Guess again! Its colour is orange. It’s round. It looks like a small ball and a small lantern. Oh, it is an orange. I like then a lot. I like ice-creams. I like to chew gum. Chocolates and candies are yummy. I like them very much.

How about you? What’s your favourite food?

【要领点评】

My Favourite Food 是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是简单地列举出自己最喜欢的每一种食物，而是有详有略地进行介绍。整篇文章用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。另外，文章中出现了一些生词，可见小作者是用心查字典了。

I can help do housework

I am a girl. My name is Li Ling. I’m in Class Three, Grade Five. I’m helpful at home. I can water the flowers, empty the trash and sweep the floor. After meals, I can help my mother do the dishes. On Sunday, I can wash the clothes. What about you? Are you helpful, too?

【要领点评】

本篇作文的题目是“我可以帮助做家务”，作者主要叙述自己在家帮助做的事情，介绍自己的名字，所在年级及在家能做的家务，很详细，到位。

小朋友们在写作时，应尽量写一些亲自经历的事情，这样会避免在作文时显得太空，因为只有自己经常做的事情印象才会特别深刻。写作时还要注意大小写和时态。

In The Kitchen

This is the kitchen of my family. It’s big and nice. Look! My mother is cooking in it. This is a microwave and that is a stove. There is a big table here. There are many things on it. What are these? They look yummy! Oh, they’re strawberries. And what are those? They are grapes.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是“在厨房”里，作者根据自己家的厨房情况。介绍厨房里有微波炉和电炉，有一张大桌子和桌子上的物品等，以及妈妈在做饭，非常真实。

小朋友们，可以从观察自己身边的事、物写起，利用所学的句子，描述身边熟悉的东西来训练习作。

My village is very beautiful. There are many houses in the village. Near the village, there is a forest. A small river is in front of the village. The water in it is very clean. We can see some fish in the river. Near the river, you can see a mountain. Some flowers and grass are on the mountain. I like my village. Welcome to my village!

【要领点评】

本文以“我的村庄”为题描述了自己家乡的风景。介绍了村庄的房屋、森林、河流及大山，使人看了这篇作文后确实感觉到“我的村庄”的美丽。小朋友们在写作时，可仔细想一下自己的村庄或所在城市的特点，尽量使用本单元学过的单词或短语进行叙述。

My Seasons

We have four seasons in a year. I can do many interesting things in each season. In spring, the weather is cool and wind, I can fly kites when it’s wind. And I can go hiking with my family when it’s sunny and cool. I like hiking. Summer is hot in the north of China, but it’s not long time. I often go swimming. It can make me healthy and strong. I can also wear my beautiful dresses. Fall is a season with harvest. And I can eat delicious fruits in this season. I can watch the leaves fall. Winter comes, it’s often snowy in winter in my hometown. When it snows, everything is white. We can play with snow and make a snowman, skate and ski. And winter is my favourite season, because of the Spring Festival. I love seasons. I love the nature.

【要领点评】

写法：这篇短文是描述“我的四季”，在写法上，是根据春、夏、秋、冬四季的更替来写的，先讲明每个季节的特征，之后再写在这个季节中的主要活动或比较有代表性的活动。同时讲一些自己的真实感受，最后阐述自己最喜欢的季节。在实际的写作的时候我们还可以先写出自己喜爱的季节及主要的活动内容，之后再去讲其他几个季节，还可以多讲解一下地域的季节特征和大自然中的其他景色，如：秋天的田地里一片金黄，农民在收割等等，这样写出来的四季更贴近实际。

时态：这篇习作讲的是“我的四季”，是比较惯常的一些行为，所以我们最好采用一般现在时和情态动词结合活动的写法。即：在什么季节，天气如何，我们可以做什么。

注意：在写作内容上，不可以像以往的内容那么简单，因为有四个季节，所以要写明季节，季节天气，季节性活动，活动的人，活动的感受等，要求句子顺序要正确，在写作中还要注意关联词的使用，如用了“因为”，就不能用“所以”，二者不可以同时出现。词量要控制在80个词以内。

My Birthday Party

Every year, when it’s birthday, my parents hold a party for me. They invite my friend to come to my house to celebrate my birthday. I can get many beautiful gifts every year. In my party, we can do many things:

1. Light the candles.

2. Sing a “Happy Birthday” song.

3. Make a wish.

4. Blow out the candles.

5. Cut off the cake.

6. Eat the cake.

7. Open the presents.

8. Sing and dance.

9. Watch videos or play other games.

10. Say goodbye with each other.

That’s my birthday party, is it interesting?

写法：这篇习作是按活动的顺序来写的，记叙了生日晚会的各项具体活动，比较全面。比较以前几个单元的写作写法，这个短文按活动顺序比较合适。

时态：这篇短文可以用三种时态来写：

1、一般将来时：主要说明生日晚会份的各项计划，都将如何进行。

2、一般现在时：主要说明习惯上如何度过每个生日。

3、一般过去时：主要说明你的生日晚会是如何进行的。

句型：invite sb. to do sth. 邀请某人做某事

注意：由于这篇短文很有局限性，所表达的大体上都基本相同，所以在书写的时候要注意结合自己的实际活动与真情实感去写。另外注意一些短语和单词的书写不要发生错误：

eg.“吹蜡烛”要写成“blow out the candles”而不能写成“blow candles”。

My family

There are five people in my family. They are my grandma, grandpa, dad, mom and I. Look! Grandma is watching TV. Grandpa is reading a book. Dad is writing an e-mail. Mom is cooking dinner. I am doing my homework. I love my family!

【要领点评】

写法：这篇习作介绍了自己家的家庭成员，以及此刻他们正在干什么，表达了自己对家人的感情。 时态：由于本单元主要讲的是现在进行时态，所以建议采用现在进行时态。

句型：主语+be+动词的现在分词。

注意：本单元的重点是现在进行时态，注意在写句子时要保持时态的完整性，即系动词和动词的ing缺一不可。

In the park

It is sunny today .My mother, my father and I are going to the park. We like the park very much. It is very big and beautiful .There are many trees and flowers in it. Many people like to go there. Look! An old man is sitting on the chair. He is reading a book carefully. Two boys are jumping on the ground. Their mothers are talking with each other. Two birds are flying in the sky. The ducks are swimming in the river. They are very happy. What is the cat doing? Oh, it is running after a mouse. It’s a poor mouse.

【要领点评】

写法：这篇习作是用现在进行时描绘出公园里的人和动物们正在进行的活动还运用了一般现在时叙述了公园美丽的景色。

时态：这篇文章可以采用一般现在时和现在进行时两种时态，由于本单元的语法项目是现在进行时，因此，描述的重点要放在现在进行时态上。

句型：一般现在时：主语+谓语+其他

现在进行时：（1）What +be (am,is ,are)+主语+v.-ing+其他?

（2）主语+be(am,is ,are)+ v.-ing+其他。

Li Ying ’S Hobby

Li Ying likes English very much. She works hard at it. She reads English every morning. She likes speaking English. She often listens to the radio. She watches TV only on Saturday evening.

Does she like dancing? No, she doesn’t. But she likes drawing and singing. Her parents love her. And all the teachers and her friends like her, too. She says her hobbies make her happy.

这一篇写爱好的文章,小作者的写作思路很值得我们学习,他没有具体写到刘莹的某一种爱好,而是从学习到课余的多种爱好入手,对刘莹的各种爱好进行了粗线条地勾画.从“爱好”这个角度来看刘莹的话，我们会觉得这个形象很饱满。

小朋友们写这种“叙事写人”作文时，可以从两个角度下手：一是具体地描绘；二是和上面小朋友一样，粗线条地勾画，二者各有所长，另处在行文中使用一些问句，使用一些转述的话，可以使作文更有灵气，避免了平铺直叙的缺点。比如上文的“Does she like dancing? No, she doesn’t.”和“she says her hobbies make her happy.”就是十分不错的句子，使读者眼前为之一亮。

Don’t be against the traffic rules

I go to school from Monday to Friday .I go to school by bike at 7:30 in the morning .I must cross two busy roads .If the traffic light is red or yellow,I know I can’t cross the road ,so I wait.

If the light turns green, I know it means “Go”, and then I walk across the road .I always ride on the right side of the road .I am never against the traffic rules.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是“不要违反交通规则”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的经历写起，叙述自己以什么方式去上学，在上学的路上是怎么做的，很形象。

小朋友们在作文时注意不要图大，那样很容易使文章显得空洞，而要写自己身边熟悉的事情。要注意行文中字母的大小写、句子的标点符号等。

I Love My Family

Here is a photo lf my family. These are four people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my brother and I.

My father is a doctor. He works in a hospital far away. He goes to work by subway. My mother is a teacher. She works in a school near my home. She goes to work by bike. After work, they like reading books. Who is the tall boy? He is my brother. He is five years older than me. He is a singer. He’s now in Beijing. He goes there by plane.

I love my family.

【要领点评】

一个平凡的题材，一篇生动的作文。这样的命题，我们可能面对几次，甚至几十次了。但这位小朋友的笔端很是灵巧，了了数言，让一个幸福的家庭跃然纸上，很值得我们去思考，我们能做到吗？

小朋友的这篇作文除了语言优美之外，在结构上也有闪光之处。先总说，将自己的家人逐个介绍一遍，后分说，把家人的工作、上班方式，爱好一一细说。最后以一句话进行概括，起到点题的作用。我们在写类似的作文的时候是不是也可以借鉴呢？

How to get to the science museum

We are going to the science museum tomorrow. There is an old thing show in the Museum. Do you know how we can get to the science museum?

The science museum is next to the People’s Park. It’s isn’t far from our school. So we can go there on foot .Walk straight to the west from our school, next turn left at the post office and walk for about 5 minutes, then turn right at traffic lights. You can find the People’s Park on the right . Walk straight, and you’ll see the science museum.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是“怎样去科学博物馆”。怎样才算是一篇好作文呢？通过你的叙述，能让别人很容易找到博物馆，这应是最基本的要求。小作者在文中告诉我们什么呢？首先他写了去博物馆的位置，最后浓墨重彩，指明从学校去博物馆的具体路线，这条路线够清晰吧！

小朋友们在写这类作文的时候，总有些无从下手的感觉，不知从何说起。其实介绍路线，无非就是告诉他人某段路的起点和终点，还有就是如何从起点走到终点。要给他人说清楚，你自己首先得清楚，然后再通过自己的叙述，将路线清清楚楚得呈现出来。一定要注意行文中一些关键的地方，如在哪儿转弯，向哪儿转，经过哪些重要的交通标志或显眼的标志建筑等。这样，你就能说清，别人也能弄明白。

Planting Trees

It’s spring. It’s time to plant trees.

I want to plant a tree in our garden. Dad and Mum are very happy. They like green. Dad helps me plant the tree. First, we dig the soil. Then I put a little tree into the soil. Next I water it. I am so excited and I wait for the tree to grow. Two weeks later, my tree has some little leaves. I water it every day. Now it has lots of leaves. It grows fast.

We should plant more trees. They make our world beautiful.

【要领点评】

小作者写了一次植树的经历，但他并没有单纯拘泥于植树的过程。既有过程，也有感觉，能使文章打动读者，给人以启发。作文的最后一段就非常好，两句话胜似千言万语。我们可以学习一下这种写法。 既描述过程，又适时提自己的看法或想法的写法，在作文中叫做“夹叙夹议”,描述过程为了提出一种思想服务，提出看法或想法使原本平实的描述有了意义。我们在以后的写作中也可以试一试。

Let’s have a nice day

It’s Sunday tomorrow .I’m going to the bookstore with my friends tomorrow morning .We are going to look for some good books .We all like reading books .We are going to eat our lunch at the restaurant. I like chicken, beef and vegetables .After lunch, we are going to the Summer Palace by bus. We are going to play near the Kunming Lake. Maybe we are going to row a boat on the lake .Wow, that will be relaxing. We are coming back at 5pm.

【要领点评】

怎样才称得上是“美好的一天”？有两点不能忘记，一是安排得充实，二是安排得有意义。这两点小作者无疑都想到了，上午去书店看书买书，中午在饭店吃饭，下午去颐和园玩耍、划船，丰富多彩！文章以时间为线索，叙述清楚，文笔也很优美。

小朋友们在写这种叙事的文章时，要尽量给读者交代好时间、地点、人物和活动等，使文章有血有肉。要看好是写过去发生的事情，还是现在正在做的事情，或计划、打算要做的事情，以选择适当的句型。如果是写将来的事情，那么就要注意在表述时多用“be going to+动词原形”这种句型。还有一点也很重要，那就是故事的线索要交代好，让读者在阅读时对整个过程一目了然。

My friend and I

I’ve got a lovely friend at school. His name is Jack. Jack is 12 years old now. I’m 11. He’s older than me. He’s 150 cm tall. I’m 148 cm. He’s taller and stronger. He’s 43 kg and I’m 41 kg. He’s heavier. We’ve got round faces and short hair. But my eyes are bigger and my legs are longer. Our favourite colours are white and blue. We like summer best. We both like sports, too. On Saturdays, we play table tennis. On Sundays, we play basketball. He’s good at basketball. But I do better at table tennis. We laugh and play together. How happy we are!

篇二：小学英语作文类型集

小学英语作文类型集：

一、小学英语单元作文范例及点评

（1）My English Teacher

Miss Tang is my English teacher. She’s very pretty. She is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. She likes cats very much. And she likes singing and dancing, too. Her English is very good. We often play games in English classes. She is very kind to us. We all love her.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”，是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作者开门见山，直接点题，首先介绍了英语老师的姓名，然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等。 小朋友们在写作文时，要注意使用自己最熟悉的词[组]，以免写出一些错句子。写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰、规范等。

（2）My Days of the week

I’m a student and I am in Grade 5.I get up at six o’clock every day. I have breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven o’clock. I have classes from Monday to Saturday. I have an English class on Friday and I have a PE class on Tuesday. I don’t have to go to school on school, and I like to go swimming on that day.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是“我的一周”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的亲身经历写起，叙述了自己一周七天的所作所为，并特别强调了星期天的喜好，写得自然、流畅。

小朋友们写作文时要注意人称及谓语动词的变化，要依据提示，结合自己的实际，写自己身边熟悉的事情。

（3）My Favourite Food

Do you know what this is? Guess! Its colour is yellow. It’s long and thin. It looks like a small boat and crescent. Oh, it is a banana. Do you know what that is? Guess again! Its colour is orange. It’s round. It looks like a small ball and a small lantern. Oh, it is an orange. I like then a lot. I like ice-creams. I like to chew gum. Chocolates and candies are yummy. I like them very much.

How about you? What’s your favourite food?

【要领点评】

My Favourite Food 是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是简单地列举出自己最喜欢的每一种食物，而是有详有略地进行介绍。整篇文章用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。另外，文章中出现了一些生词，可见小作者是用心查字典了。

（4）I can help do housework

I am a girl. My name is Li Ling. I’m in Class Three, Grade Five. I’m helpful at home. I can water the flowers, empty the trash and sweep

the floor. After meals, I can help my mother do the dishes. On Sunday, I can wash the clothes. What about you? Are you helpful, too?

【要领点评】

本篇作文的题目是“我可以帮助做家务”，作者主要叙述自己在家帮助做的事情，介绍自己的名字，所在年级及在家能做的家务，很详细，到位。

小朋友们在写作时，应尽量写一些亲自经历的事情，这样会避免在作文时显得太空，因为只有自己经常做的事情印象才会特别深刻。写作时还要注意大小写和时态。

（5）In The Kitchen

This is the kitchen of my family. It’s big and nice. Look! My mother is cooking in it. This is a microwave and that is a stove. There is a big table here. There are many things on it. What are these? They look yummy! Oh, they’re strawberries. And what are those? They are grapes.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是“在厨房”里，作者根据自己家的厨房情况。介绍厨房里有微波炉和电炉，有一张大桌子和桌子上的物品等，以及妈妈在做饭，非常真实。

小朋友们，可以从观察自己身边的事、物写起，利用所学的句子，描述身边熟悉的东西来训练习作。

（6）My Village

My village is very beautiful. There are many houses in the village. Near the village, there is a forest. A small river is in front of the village. The water in it is very clean. We can see some fish in the river. Near the river, you can see a mountain. Some flowers and grass are on the mountain. I like my village. Welcome to my village!

【要领点评】

本文以“我的村庄”为题描述了自己家乡的风景。介绍了村庄的房屋、森林、河流及大山，使人看了这篇作文后确实感觉到“我的村庄”的美丽。小朋友们在写作时，可仔细想一下自己的村庄或所在城市的特点，尽量使用本单元学过的单词或短语进行叙述。

（7）My weekend

There are two days on the weekend, Saturday and Sunday. On Saturday, I often go to my dancing class in the morning and do my homework in the afternoon, and I often help my mother do some cleaning. On Sunday, I always visit my grandparents in the morning and do some reading in the afternoon. After dinner, I often watch TV with my parents. At that time, we can talk with each other and say something happily. We often have a good time.

【要领点评】

写法：这篇习作是按照时间顺序记叙周末的活动，记叙了周六和周日的上午和下午分别做了哪些活动及对活动的感受。即：周六上午：舞蹈课→下午：做作业和帮妈妈做清洁→周日上午：看望祖父母→下午：阅读→晚上：看电视，与父母交流→感受：高兴和愉快。我们还可以选取周六和周日中的几个比较主要的活动来写，先说明什么时间在什么地方由什么人做了什么事，有什么感受。再按照活动顺序把活动内容写清楚，最后抒发一下对这次活动或这个周末的感想。

时态：这篇短文我们可以用三种时态来写: a.一般过去时（主要描述你上个周末是怎样度过的）;b.一般现在时（主要描述你经常怎样度过周末）;c.一般将来时（主要描述你要怎样过周末）。这里我们来表述平时是如何过周末的，所以采用一般现在时来写。

注意：活动的相关表达方法可采用旧知识，eg.（例）起床get up，和新知识，eg. Climb mountains去爬山中的un很容易错写成nu。还要注意不要出现病句，eg. “I often watch TV with my parents.”不要写成 “I often with my parents watch TV .” 词量上控制在50 ~ 80 之间。

（8）My Seasons

We have four seasons in a year. I can do many interesting things in each season. In spring, the weather is cool and wind, I can fly kites when it’s wind. And I can go hiking with my family when it’s sunny and cool. I like hiking. Summer is hot in the north of China, but it’s not long time. I often go swimming. It can make me healthy and strong. I can also wear my beautiful dresses. Fall is a season with harvest. And I can eat delicious fruits in this season. I can watch the leaves fall. Winter comes, it’s often snowy in winter in my hometown. When it snows, everything is white. We can play with snow and make a snowman, skate and ski. And winter is my favourite season, because of the Spring Festival. I love seasons. I love the nature.

【要领点评】

写法：这篇短文是描述“我的四季”，在写法上，是根据春、夏、秋、冬四季的更替来写的，先讲明每个季节的特征，之后再写在这个季节中的主要活动或比较有代表性的活动。同时讲一些自己的真实感受，最后阐述自己最喜欢的季节。在实际的写作的时候我们还可以先写出自己喜爱的季节及主要的活动内容，之后再去讲其他几个季节，还可以多讲解一下地域的季节特征和大自然中的其他景色，如：秋天的田地里一片金黄，农民在收割等等，这样写出来的四季更贴近实际。

时态：这篇习作讲的是“我的四季”，是比较惯常的一些行为，所以我们最好采用一般现在时和情态动词结合活动的写法。即：在什么季节，天气如何，我们可以做什么。

注意：在写作内容上，不可以像以往的内容那么简单，因为有四个季节，所以要写明季节，季节天气，季节性活动，活动的人，活动的感受等，要求句子顺序要正确，在写作中还要注意关联词的使用，如用了“因为”，就不能用“所以”，二者不可以同时出现。词量要控制在80个词以内。

（9）My Birthday Party

Every year, when it’s birthday, my parents hold a party for me. They invite my friend to come to my house to celebrate my birthday. I can get many beautiful gifts every year.

In my party, we can do many things:

1. Light the candles.

2. Sing a “Happy Birthday” song.

3. Make a wish.

4. Blow out the candles.

5. Cut off the cake.

6. Eat the cake.

7. Open the presents.

8. Sing and dance.

9. Watch videos or play other games.

10. Say goodbye with each other.

That’s my birthday party, is it interesting?

【要领点评】

写法：这篇习作是按活动的顺序来写的，记叙了生日晚会的各项具体活动，比较全面。比较以前几个单元的写作写法，这个短文按活动顺序比较合适。

时态：这篇短文可以用三种时态来写：

1、一般将来时：主要说明生日晚会份的各项计划，都将如何进行。

2、一般现在时：主要说明习惯上如何度过每个生日。

3、一般过去时：主要说明你的生日晚会是如何进行的。

句型：invite sb. to do sth. 邀请某人做某事

注意：由于这篇短文很有局限性，所表达的大体上都基本相同，所以在书写的时候要注意结合自己的实际活动与真情实感去写。另外注意一些短语和单词的书写不要发生错误：

eg.“吹蜡烛”要写成“blow out the candles”而不能写成“blow candles”。

（10）My family

There are five people in my family. They are my grandma, grandpa, dad, mom and I. Look! Grandma is watching TV. Grandpa is reading a book. Dad is writing an e-mail. Mom is cooking dinner. I am doing my homework. I love my family!

【要领点评】

写法：这篇习作介绍了自己家的家庭成员，以及此刻他们正在干什么，表达了自己对家人的感情。 时态：由于本单元主要讲的是现在进行时态，所以建议采用现在进行时态。

句型：主语+be+动词的现在分词。

注意：本单元的重点是现在进行时态，注意在写句子时要保持时态的完整性，即系动词和动词的ing缺一不可。

（11）In the park

It is sunny today .My mother, my father and I are going to the park. We like the park very much. It is very big and beautiful .There are many trees and flowers in it. Many people like to go there. Look! An old man is sitting on the chair. He is reading a book carefully. Two boys are jumping on the ground. Their mothers are talking with each other. Two birds are flying in the sky. The ducks are swimming in the river. They are very happy. What is the cat doing? Oh, it is running after a mouse. It’s a poor mouse.

【要领点评】

写法：这篇习作是用现在进行时描绘出公园里的人和动物们正在进行的活动还运用了一般现在时叙述了公园美丽的景色。

时态：这篇文章可以采用一般现在时和现在进行时两种时态，由于本单元的语法项目是现在进行时，因此，描述的重点要放在现在进行时态上。

句型：一般现在时：主语+谓语+其他

现在进行时：（1）What +be (am,is ,are)+主语+v.-ing+其他?

（2）主语+be(am,is ,are)+ v.-ing+其他。

（12）A Field Trip

It is a nice day. Our class will have a field trip today. The classmates are very excited.

Look! Here we are. There’re a lot of activities to do. Amy is watching insects. Peter is collecting leaves. They want to write a report. Mandy is catching butterflies in the woods. Tim and Bob are playing chess. Some of the classmates are having a picnic. There is a lot of delicious food to eat. Oh, who’s that over there? It’s Miss White. What is she doing? She is taking photos. We had a very good time. I’ll never forget this field trip.

【要领点评】

写法：这篇习作是按照郊游时的画面来描述的，记叙了同学们分别在郊游中做了哪些活动及郊游的感受。 时态：这篇文章可以用一般过去时和现在进行时来写。由于本单元主要讲的是现在进行时，所以，这里我们采用现在进行时比较合适。

句型：××. is/are doing sth. She /He is doing sth. They’re doing sth.

注意：活动的相关表述法采用新旧知识相结合去写。注意时态的转换、描写感受时用一般现在时。

(13)Li Ying ’S Hobby

Li Ying likes English very much. She works hard at it. She reads English every morning. She likes speaking English. She often listens to the radio. She watches TV only on Saturday evening.

Does she like dancing? No, she doesn’t. But she likes drawing and singing. Her parents love her. And all the teachers and her friends like her, too. She says her hobbies make her happy.

【要领点评】

这一篇写爱好的文章,小作者的写作思路很值得我们学习,他没有具体写到刘莹的某一种爱好,而是从学习到课余的多种爱好入手,对刘莹的各种爱好进行了粗线条地勾画.从“爱好”这个角度来看刘莹的话，我们会觉得这个形象很饱满。

小朋友们写这种“叙事写人”作文时，可以从两个角度下手：一是具体地描绘；二是和上面小朋友一样，粗线条地勾画，二者各有所长，另处在行文中使用一些问句，使用一些转述的话，可以使作文更有灵气，避免了平铺直叙的缺点。比如上文的“Does she like dancing? No, she doesn’t.”和“she says her hobbies make her happy.”就是十分不错的句子，使读者眼前为之一亮。

(14)Don’t be against the traffic rules

I go to school from Monday to Friday .I go to school by bike at 7:30 in the morning .I must cross two busy roads .If the traffic light is red or yellow,I know I can’t cross the road ,so I wait.

If the light turns green, I know it means “Go”, and then I walk across the road .I always ride on the right side of the road .I am never against the traffic rules.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是“不要违反交通规则”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的经历写起，叙述自己以什么方式去上学，在上学的路上是怎么做的，很形象。

篇三：英语作文

My School My school is beautiful. We can study and play there. There is a big building in our school. There are many classrooms, two computer rooms and three music rooms. There is a library in our school. We can read book in it. There is a big playground in front of the school building. We can play sports with our classmates. I love my school very much.

小学英语作文范文（必背） 1、写一篇关于你上个五一假期做过的事情（注意要用一般过去

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时） I was happy on May holiday.On Monday I ate good food in Xinjiang.On Tuesday I sang and danced with my new friends.On Wednesday I climbed mountains.I took pictures on Thursday.On Friday I saw elephants.I had a good time.(What about your holiday?) 2、My Family（我的家

人） There are three people in my family. They are my father﹑

mother and I. I'm 12 years old. I a

m a student. I like playing computer games. My father is a driver. He drives a car. He likes playing football My mother is a doctor. She works very hard. She likes singing. 3、

My last Weekend（我的上一个周末）（用一般过去时

写） I had a happy weekend. On Saturday morning, I watched TV and helped my mother wash clothes. In the afternoon, I cleaned the room. On Sunday, I played football in the park. Then I went to my grandparents’ house. Grandpa played the piano! We were so happy. This was m

y last weekend 4、My Friend（我的朋友）（用一般现在时

写） I have a good friend. She has a small nose and two big eyes, Her hair is short and black.She is 12 years old She is tall and beautiful. She likes singing and dancing. I often play ping-pong with her.

My School My school is beautiful. We can study and play there. There is a big building in our school. There are many classrooms, two com

puter rooms and three music rooms. There is a library in our school. We can read book in it. There is a big playground in front of the school building. We can play sports with our classmates. I love my school very much. Seasons There are four seasons in a year. They are spring、summer、

fall and winter. I like spring. It is warm. It often rains. I can plant trees and flowers in spring. The spring is green. Summer is very hot. I can swim in the river. Fall is a good season. It is nice. I can fly kites in fall. I

篇四：英语作文(附翻译)

Dear Frank:

Long time no see. Howare you recently?

I am very happy toreceive your letter and glad to hear that you will come to my city and staywith us for a few weeks. My house is on theHeaven Streetwith five rooms, one ofwhich is living room, two bed rooms, the other two are kitchen and bathroom. Ihave cleaned a guest room for you. There is a bed, a sofa and three chairs inthis 25 square-meters room. If this room is not suitable enough, please writeto me and I will prepare another one for you. There is a bus stop near myhouse, and you can take number 1 bus to the cinema, number 2 to the supermarketin where you can always choose the commodities you need.

If you have otherrequests, please feel free to write to me. I will try my best to meet yourneeds. I wish you can come soon and have good days here.

Sincerely yours,

Jaz

亲爱的富兰克：

很久没见到你了，近来怎么样?

我很开心收到你的来信，听到你将要来我这里和我待几周我很高兴。我家住在天街，有五个房间，其中一个是客厅，两个卧室，另外两个是厨房和浴室。我已经帮你把客房打扫干净了。这个25平米的房间有一张床，一张沙发和三把椅子。如果这间放不合适的话请写信告诉我，我会给你准备另一间。我家附近有一个站牌，你可以乘坐 1路去电影院，2路到超市，在那里你可以买到你需要的商品。

如果你还有其他要求，请随时写信告诉我，我会尽量满足的你需求。希望你能快点来这，在这里度过愉快的日子。

杰斯

Dear Mary,

It has been a long time since our last meeting. I heard that you have been promoted to be the manager of your company, congratulations! I believe you can do it well.

I’m writing this letter to tell you that our college classmates plan to hold a party on the New Year’s Day. On that day, we will invite all of our classmates and some of our professors. I believe you miss them very much, don’t you? So on that day, we can see each other again. The party will be held in the New Century Hotel of TongXiang on 1st Oct. please remember to come! By the way, can you send this information to the classmates who keep in touch with you?

I wish that day would come sooner!

Best wishes!

Yours faithfully

Rose

亲爱的玛丽，

自从我们上次见面已经很长一段时间。我听说你被提升为贵公司的经理，恭喜！我相信你能做得很好。

我写此信是要告诉你，我们的大学同学计划在元旦举行一个聚会。在那一天，我们将邀请我们所有的同学和我们的一些教授。我相信你非常想念他们，不是吗？所以在那一天，我们能再次相见。晚会将在10月第一在桐乡新世纪大酒店举行请记得回来！顺便说一下，你能把这个信息，谁和你保持联系的同学吗？ 我希望这一天早点到来！

万事如意。

你的忠实的

罗斯

My Hobbies(爱好)

I have many hobbies, such as sports, singing, playing the violin and

keeping a diary.

In school, I often hear the P.E. teacher say, sports do good to one's health, and will make one live longer. So, I like sports very much. I go running at five o'clock in the morning, and after classes in the afternoon. I play pingpong with my friends. These sports have kept me

healthy.

At home, I like to sing and play the violin. I hope I will be a singer

and a violinist when I grow up. In order to attain these goals I go to the teacher's home for a lesson every Saturday, and practise singing and playing the violin every day. Busy as I am, I am quite happy. 我的爱好（爱好）

我有许多爱好，如体育，唱歌，拉小提琴和写日记。

在学校里，我常常听到体育老师说，体育做好自己的健康，并让一个活得更长。所以，我非常喜欢运动。我每天早上五点去跑步，并在下午的课之后。我和我的朋友们打乒乓球。这些运动使我保持健康。

在家里，我喜欢唱歌和拉小提琴。我希望我长大后要当一个歌手和小提琴。为了实现这些g目标，我去老师家的一个教训，每个星期六，练习唱歌和拉小提琴的每一天。我很忙，我很高兴。

My Family(家庭)

My name is Li Hua. I am from a worker's family. There are six people in my family. They are my grandfather, my grandmother, my father, my mother, my sister and I.

Every member in my family works for his or her own trade. My grandfather and grandmother are peasants. They do farm work every day in my hometown. My father is a senior engineer. He is now working in Africa, helping to build a power station. My mother is a teacher. She teaches English in a middle school. My sister, five years older than I, is a doctor in the People's Hospital of our county. She loves her work and does it well. I am a middle school student.That is my family. All the members in my family live in harmony

我的家人（家庭）

我的名字是李华。我从一个工人家庭。我们家有六口人.他们是我的爷爷，奶奶，爸爸，妈妈，姐姐和我。

在我的家庭中每个成员为他或她自己的贸易。我的爷爷和奶奶都是农民。他们做农活每天在我的家乡。我的父亲是一位高级工程师。他现在在非洲的工作，帮助建立一个发电站。我母亲是一位教师.她在一所中学教英语。我的姐姐，比我大五岁，是一名医生在我县人民医院。她喜欢她的工作，并且做得很好。我

是一名中学生。这是我的家人。和谐的生活在我的家庭的所有成员

sports

Sport plays an important role in our daily life. Most of us begin our day with some kind of exercise or sport. Athletics is part of our university curriculum. Many students play on either the departmental or university sports team after a hard day of class.

Some people take sports far too seriously. Some people are only interested in how their favourite sports team does: they don't care much about their country or the rest of the world. These people often get into fights if their team loses.

When I have time for sports there is one that I like more than any other. I find bas ketball both a physical and a mental challenge. Runing, jumping, and shooting, are also enjoyable and healthful sports.

运动在日常生活中起着重要的作用。我们大多数人在新的一天的某种运动或运动。体育课是我们大学课程的一部分。任何部门或大学一天艰苦的班队比赛后许多学生。

有些人把体育太严重。有些人只在他们喜欢的运动队的兴趣：他们不关心他们的国家或世界其它地方的。这些人经常打架，如果他们的球队输了。

当我有时间，我喜欢的运动有一个比其他任何。我发现打篮球身体和精神的双重挑战。运行，跳跃，射击，都是有趣的、有益于健康的运动。

An Interesting Story(有趣的经历)

Long long ago, there was a kind girl living in a small village. Her family was very poor but the girl was happy and she was friendly to everyone.

One day, she met a frog on her way home. The frog was ill and it would die soon. The girl took the frog home and looked after it until the frog got stronger and stronger.

Very soon, the frog grew very very big. So the girl had to build a house for the frog. After a few days, the house was built and it was beautiful. The frog was

very happy. The girl and the frog lived happily together.

But one evening, a robber went into the girl's house and he wanted to kill the girl. When the frog knew it, it was very angry. It jumped onto the girl's bed and woke her up. The girl wasn't afraid of the robber. She shouted and when her neighbours heard it, they ran into the girl's house and drove the robber away. The girl was thankful to the frog for saving her.

一个有趣的故事（有趣的经历）

很久很久以前，有一个善良的女孩，生活在一个小村庄。她的家庭很穷但是女孩很高兴，她对每个人都很友好。

有一天，她遇到了在她回家的路上，一只青蛙。青蛙生病了，它会很快死去。女孩照看青蛙，直到青蛙强大。

很快，青蛙长非常大。所以女孩有盖房子给青蛙。几天之后，房子建成，它是美丽的。青蛙非常开心。女孩和青蛙一起愉快地生活。

但一天晚上，一个强盗走进女孩的家，他想杀了那个女孩。当青蛙知道，很生气的。它跳到了女孩的床上，她醒来了。这个女孩是不害怕强盗。她喊着，当她的邻居听到了，他们跑到女孩的家里，并赶走了强盗。女孩感谢青蛙拯救她。

A Beautiful City

Do you know Nanjing? I went to Nanjing on the holidays. If you don't know it, I'll tell you something about the beautiful city.

Nanjing is very large. There are many tall buildings, and lots of flowers and trees. It takes 30 minutes to get to the center by car. When you go there, you must be very excited.

I went to Fuzimiao. I don't think you'll know it, so I'll tell you something unusual about it. Fuzimiao is a good place to go shopping. There are many nice streets in it. On the streets there are lots of shops, like clothes shops, bookshops and shoeshops. You can buy anything you like in the shops and you can find souvenirs in Fuzimiao. I like going there because there are a lot of interesting things in it and they make me happy.

篇五：小学英语作文(翻译)

小学英语作文 一、我的房子

有一间房子。它很大而且是新的。里面有八个房间。一间客厅，一间厨房，三间卧室，一间书房，两个浴室。我在客厅里看电视，在书房做家庭作业，在厨房吃午餐。这就是我的房子，我喜欢我的房子。

二、我的书包

我有一个书包。它是蓝色的而且很大。它是我父母给我的生日礼物。我非常非常喜欢它。它很“勤劳”的，因为我需要把所有的学习用的东西放进去。它很重。它所有的时间都在学校。它是我的好朋友。

三、四季

一年有四个季节。他们是春，夏，秋，冬。我喜欢春天。它是温暖的。它经常下雨。我可以种植树木和鲜花的春天。春天是绿色的。夏天是非常炎热。我可以在河里游泳。秋天是一个好季节。这是很好的。我可以在秋天放风筝。我可以吃多少苹果。冬天是寒冷的。我可以打雪和雪的人。我喜欢所有的季节，因为他们都很好。

四、我想飞

小时候可以自由的玩耍，不用去担心未来的前途，不用为作业烦恼，而现在各科的作业、考试使得我不能从事运动，不能做自己喜欢的事，我不要长大，我想自由的飞。

五、繁忙的一天

20013年3月25日 星期天 晴

今天早上我起床很早，吃完早饭后，我帮妈妈干家务，然后我就做作业。作业很有意思，因此我做得很好。下午我和朋友玲玲一起打乒乓球，我们玩得很开心。晚上我和父母一起看电视，然后就预习明天的功课。今天多么繁忙啊！

六、 我的生日

昨天是3月20日。这是我的生日。我有一个聚会。我吃了太多。迈克带来了一箱冰淇淋。詹妮带来了一些糖果。玛丽带来了大量的饼干。我妈妈做了一个蛋糕。对我来说，我爸爸买了一辆玩具车。我很高兴。在晚会上，我们又唱又跳。我们有一个很好的时间。

七、朋友

我有一个好朋友。她是一个女孩子，她的名字叫丽丽。她身高156厘米。她的头发又长又黑。她有着大大的眼睛，一个小鼻子和一张小嘴巴。她非常活跃。她非常喜欢唱歌、跳舞和游泳。我也喜欢游泳。我们周末经常一起去游泳，那很好玩。这就是我的好朋友。你的好朋友是怎样的？请告诉我

八、我在学校的一天

这是我在学校的日子。我通常8:10在操场上做早操，我们每天有六班。他们是英语，中文，数学，音乐，美术，体育和计算机类。第一类从早上8:35开始，数学，我最喜欢的课是英语，下课后，我经常玩游戏和我的朋友。我很高兴在学校。

九、我的假期

那是一个长假，我每天都过得很开心。我和我的妈妈去看望了广州的外祖父母，我们坐公共汽车去那里。第一天，我们在家里看电视。第二天，我们去了动物园看大象，还照了许多相片。第三天，我们去了公园，我们划了船。第四天，我做了我的家庭作业，还给我的朋友们买了礼物。假期的最后一天，我们回家了。下午，我洗了我的?a href="http://www.zw2.cn/zhuanti/guanyuluzuowen/" target="_blank" class="keylink">路勾蛏宋业姆考洹Ｄ愕纳细鲋苣┦窃跹模壳敫嫠呶摇?/p>小学作文