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篇一:朋友 友谊 叙事作文

朋友 友谊 叙事作文

我的友人?在我记忆里最深的你们。

通,一个把彼此当作兄弟的人,我感觉很荣幸啊!呵呵!若可以有这样一个朋友,难道不是一生中的珍贵吗?从学前班到如今的高中校园,你是我最好的兄弟!!!还有阳啊,虽然只是认识了2年,但大家都很要好了,不是吗?呵呵!虽然我们不会去了解各自更深入的事情,但是这样纯洁的友情,是我想要的。不会不满足,更是欢喜。对通的那几个字--“做兄弟吧”,我会记忆犹新的啦,这是我最爱的话语!!!有想过我们或许可以在一所大学里,那一定很好玩把!

瑞说她把我当作她的亲人。很感谢在高中这个艰难的日子里有瑞给我的一切一切。要记住,我们说好要好好商量我们的未来的,因为未来我们还要在一起!我们是亲人!!!

还有个我最信任的人,我的徒弟啦!他是很好的男生哦,很细心的热闹,很有耐心的人,很知道理解和关心他人的朋友。我可以对他说心事啊,因为我知道他是对师傅好的!他爱的人一定是快乐幸福的啦!只可惜我可没有这个荣幸哦!呵呵。我们说好了要做永远的朋友!是啊。情人不会是永远的,但是朋友是会永远的,我是相信的!因为有你们的存在。

我的那位“哥哥”,希望你可以把大门做的很好,我可以去捧场啊呵呵还有鸡啊,说实话我对你很失望啊!不过我还是坚持我们的友情的啦!希望你知道什么才是真正的朋友。

最近的新歌《我们的歌》,来感谢我们的友情!我是珍惜你们的。

篇二:介绍朋友爱好的作文

介绍朋友爱好的作文

Lin Tao usually goes to the zoo with his parents. He likes to see animals. In his room there are many toys. Most of them are boy animals. All kinds of animals in his room are his good friend. Every day he plays with them. Sometimes he asks his friends to his home to play. On vacation or weekends he like to see the monkeys and elephants in the zoo, and the dolphin show is his favorite.

介绍我的家庭的作文

My family lives in Hsi-hu. There are four people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my sister and I. My father is tall and thin. He is a handsome man. He has big eyes. His hair is straight. He likes to watch TV and movies and read books. My mother works in an office. She cooks very well. She likes to read books, too. She is short and thin. My sister is a student. She is an independent girl. She is very graceful. I am a student, too. But I study in a junior high school. I go to school every weekend. I like to play dodge ball and listen to music very much. much. I like my family because each family member helps me a lot.

介绍我的物品所放的位置的作文

王华(wang hua) living room is large.

There is a television in the room.

The television is near the window.

There are some magazines on the television.

There is a table in the room.

There are some newspapers on the table.

There are some armchairs in the room.

The armchairs are near the table.

There is a stereo in the room.

The stereo is near the door.

There are some books on the stereo.

There are some pictures in the room.

The pictures are on the wall.

介绍我的朋友的作文

My friend.

I have a good friend whoes English name is lisa.She is twelve years old and she is a very pretty girl.Everyone in our class including teachers like her,but I am her only best

friend.We share everything we have and we nearly talk everything with each other.We both learn well,and we always learn together and help each other.She was very out-going and cute.She likes tell jokes and funny things.She likes smiling,you could always find simil blooming in her face.I like her not only because shind inside.Well that is my best friend.

寻物启事:

I lost my wallet on my way to school this morning. There is some money, a monthly ticket and something else in it. I wish the finder would return it to me soon. Will the finder please come to No. 11 Middle School or call me? I'll pay him or her for it. Thank you!

Name: Wang Li

Telephone: 669745

今天早晨在上学的路上,丢失钱包一个。里面有一些钱,一张月票和其它物品。希望拾到钱包者能尽早归还。请您到十一中学来或打电话给我好吗?我将对此给予酬谢。多谢!

姓名:王力

电话:669745

I lost my wallet with carelessness on my way to school this morning. Inside there is some money, IP card and a monthly ticket. Will the finder please send it to No. 11 Middle School or telephone me? My name is Wang Li, my telephone number is 669745. Thanks.

今天早晨在上学的路上,不慎将钱包丢失。里面装有一些钱,一张IP卡和一张月票。拾到者请送到十一中学或电话联系。我的名字叫王力,电话号码是669745。 在这里我对您表示感谢!

失物招领:

Lost and Found

On the evening of January 4th, 2005, I found an electronic dictionary in the English reading-room on the 3rd floor of the new library in the east district of our university.

The electronic dictionary can be generally described as follows. It is brand new and metallic gray in color. What's more, the portable electronic dictionary is as big as a piece of cake and as thin as a regular magazine.

The owner of the electronic dictionary may contact me now. My room phone number and mobile phone number are (010) 62043340 and 13801106414 respectively. Please make appointment in advance.

我的全家福

Look at this photograph of my family. There are five people in it. The tallest one is my father. He is forty-eight years old. My mother is standing beside him. She is not as my father. She is three years younger than my father. Sitting in front of them are my grandparents. My grandfather is that fat one with a pair of glasses. My grandmother is as fat as he. This little one is me. I’m sitting between them. All of us love one anther. I have a happy family.

体育收藏

I have a great collection of sports goods, it is I spent a long time collection. I have a collection of five football, one of which was also above the signature of Beckham, and I am very like it. I still have 10 volleyball, the pattern is very beautiful, I play volleyball every day. Beyond that, I have a collection of three tennis rackets and 3 tennis, I also play tennis every day, this is a very dynamic movement. I welcome you to visit the collection

写信的作文

Dear Tom,

I am glad to write to you,is everything going well?

All along ,i want to invite you to come to China to teach English.while you have not reply to me.Now ,there is a chance that the Middle school of QianJin needs a teacher ugencily .The schudule of materia is :Your duty is to responsible to the English oral learning between two classes that ten lessons of a week.At the same time organize the most of the important extracurricular activities a time a week.your monthly wages is 4000 Yuan,the accommodation is free.I am waiting for your write back.

Yours

篇三:初二记叙文我的朋友作文讲评

“我的朋友”作文讲评

董 涛

【原题呈现】

在先生生活中,我们有许许多多的朋友,一个人可以是朋友,一条小狗可以是朋友,一本书也能成为朋友??

请以“我的朋友”为题,写一篇文章。

要求:①文体自选;②不少于600字;③不要套作

写朋友的叙事作文

,不得抄袭;④不得透露真实的地名、校名、人名等相关信息。

【试题分析】

这是一道命题作文题,是根据2015年陕西中考作文试题改编的。试题难度不大,学生基本上有话可说,有内容可写。但是如果想要写得出彩,需要学生调动生活各个方面的积累,开拓思维,要深入分析“朋友”的内涵和外延,并能根据导语材料悟出命题者的命题意图。显然,命题者的关注点不在“人”上,也不在“小狗”“书”上,而是想通过由“人”到“物”的举例,让学生关注到省略号所蕴含的内容,使学生能从列举的示例出发,挖掘更多的写作方向。如果学生能悟到这一点,那立意高下就可见一斑了。

【写作指导】

一、中考作文写作要求

1、题目写第一行中间,上下不留空行,不能出现错别字。

2、不要照抄所给的导语材料,更不要抄写或套作试题中阅读题的文章。

3、开头要写好,最好先打好草稿,切勿勾抹,不要出现错别字。

4、开头结尾要点题。

5、切勿写成三段论,最好写成4——6段。

6、列写作提纲,具体到每一段。写作过程中可适时调整。

7、情节要丰富,最好体现出曲折变化,错落有致。

8、重点要突出,抓住题目中的关键词。

9、字数不够,插叙来凑。

10、选材要斟酌,自习筛选。

11、记叙文要讲一点道理,增加文章的深度。

二、容易出现的问题

1、审题不仔细,不能领会命题意图。绝大多数学生写的是身边的同学,立意不高。

2、重点不能突现出来,只写“我”,不见“朋友”。

3、选材俗滥。一写作文,就是下雨,然后送伞;就是摔跤,然后送医务室或买云南白药;就是吵架,然后莫名其妙地和好;就是考试考砸,然后收到鼓励??

三、审题立意示例

首先,解决“是什么”的问题——“朋友”是什么?

朋友可以是有形的、具体的,也可以是无形的、抽象的。

其次,调动思维,分类列举

1、具体立意

(1)“朋友”是人

A、身边的同学,亲人;B、政治历史文化人物,如孔子、屈原、陶渊明、李白、杜甫冰心、泰戈尔等等;C、文学作品中的人物(特别是学过的语文教材上的人物),如史铁生、海伦·凯勒、贝多芬、斯科特等等;D、“我”——过去的我和未来的我

这些朋友,在和“我”的思想交流中鼓舞我。

(2)“朋友”是动物

A、自家养的小狗、小猫等;B、抱团的蚂蚁,高飞的雄鹰,沉默的黄牛,皮鞭下的老马;

C、作品中的动物,如华南虎、斑羚等等

这些朋友,在精神上感染我,引领我。

(3)“朋友”是植物

梅兰竹菊;青松白杨;桃杏梨花,昙花荷花;仙人掌和沙漠大黄等等

这些朋友,在品格上塑造我,在困境中警示我。

(4)“朋友”是自然景物

山、水、云、雨,阳光、星辰,大江、小溪,大漠、小巷等等

这些朋友,在行动中启示我。

(5)“朋友”是生活中的物件

一张旧照片,一本青春纪念册,一个礼物、钢琴、小提琴、古筝、二胡、足球、篮球等等 这些朋友,在成长中教我留恋和珍惜。

(6)“朋友”是艺术作品

一本书、一首诗、一篇散文、一部小说、一台戏剧、一首歌、一支舞蹈

这些朋友,在浪漫诗意中让我优雅。

2、抽象立意

“朋友”是理想、目标、自信、希望、自尊、自立、自强、自律、诚信、关爱、宽容、淡然、优雅、奋进、坚持、专心、勇敢、坚强、奉献、援助、团结、文明、分享、岁月?? 这些朋友是我的指路明灯,催我前进,促我成长。

3、反向立意

“朋友”是网络游戏、手机游戏、电子书;是胆小懦弱、自卑害羞、急躁、吝啬、傲慢、自私??

这些朋友或曾让我沉迷,或牵绊我前进,我要摈弃他们,快乐成长。

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