山西的英语作文

篇一：山西中考英语作文

2008VIII.基础写作 (本题分A、B两部分；满分15分)

以下两题均请勿出现真实的人名和校名。

(A)话题表述：即将初中毕业的你又要展开学习与生活新的一页，你一定会接触到更多的同学与朋友。为了与他们更好的沟通与了解，请以Cheng Dong为名，从外貌、性格、爱好三方面用英语做一自我介绍。字数30-40个词。（共6分）

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(B)书面表达：

汶川大地震牵动了亿万人民的心，海内外各界人士纷纷伸出援助之手，帮相灾区重建家园，真所谓“天灾无情人有情”。灾区也有像你一样参加中考的同学，为使他们鼓起更大的学习与生活的勇气，请你用英文给他们写一封60词左右的信，鼓励他们发愤图强。（共9分）

提示：lost one’s life in ??， feel sad , be not lonely , be with you for ever(永远)；cheer up, be brave to face all kinds of difficulties, learn to forget; study hard, make progress, graduate from, try one’s best to , be active in ?? 。

要求：1. 可用所给提示词语，也可适当发挥。

2. 信件开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

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VIII.86. 参考范文：

Hello, everyone. I’m Cheng Dong. As you see, I’m very outdoing

and healthy. I like playing basketball. I’m tall and strong. I took so

energetic that others may feel safe when they are together with me. Glad to be your friend! Thank you!

87. 参考范文：

My dear friends,

I’m very sorry to know the big earthquake took place in your

hometown. Maybe many people around you lost their lives in the

earthquake. But please don’t be afraid. You are not lonely. We’ll be with you forever. Let’s cheer up! To be brave to face all kinds of difficulties. Learn to forget these sad things. Study hard from now on and try your best to make much progress in your study and life. And we are sure that our future will be more beautiful.

2009Ⅷ.基础写作 (本题分A、B两部分；共15分)

请用英语完成A、B两题；文章中出现的任命、校名或地名均用×××代替；书写规范、语言流畅、主题鲜明。

(A)话题表述：关爱生命，拥抱健康。请从饮食、运动两方面，谈谈你是怎样保持健康的。（30―40词 满分5分）

(B)书面表达：生活多姿多彩，变化无处不在。请你写下身边（如家庭、学校、家乡等）的变化，见证发展。（60词左右满分10分）

要求：1. 补全题目，题目不计入总词数。

2. 参考词汇： in the past， now， great( ly )， improve， be proud of 。

参考范文：

I’m a sunny girl with a lovely name “Happy Baby” which is given by my classmates Fruits

and vegetables are my favorite. I like sports and often do them. I’ll keep this healthy lifestyle as long as I can.

82. 参考范文：

Changes in my My life has changed a lot in the last few years. I used to ride a bike to school, but now I

usually take my mother’s car. I used to watch plays and news on TV, now I can also watch them on the Internet! There are much more changes in my life now. I have never been enjoying it like this before!

2010

IX. A) After the exam, I really want to travel to Dalian. I think Dalian is a very beautiful city. I like the sea there. I can swim in the real sea. It will make me relax.Also I can lie on the beach and enjoy the sunshine.

How happy I will be!

B) You are an outgoing boy. There’s always a smile on your face and

everybody likes to make friends with you. We used to play baskerball on the playground. Sometimes we went to the park and had a good time there. I always laughed a lot when I was with you. At this very moment I’m saying goodbye to you, I just want to give you my best wishes;

I hope you are happy and healthy forever.

I hope you are successful in the future.

2011Ⅸ书面表达（共15分)

某校进行了“你最喜欢的课堂学习方式”的调查。结果表明，小组合作学习的方式受到了同学们的欢迎。请你写一篇有关小组合作学习的短文，

2让你感受深刻的一次小组合作学习的经历；

3小组合作学习的方式给你带来的收获。

要求：1词敦80词左右。已给出的句子不计人总词数；

One possible version :Studying in groups is becoming more and more popular.

书面表达：

One possible version:

Studying in groups is becoming more and more popular. It has many advantages. For

example, we can not only save time but also encourage each other when we study in groups.

I still remember when I was in Grade 8, my physics was very poor. I had a really hard time with it. Once in class, I studied with some classmates together. I was very relaxed and asked my classmates a lot of questions about physics. I didn’t feel stressed out at all. At last, I finished my homework by myself for the first time. How excited I was!

Because of studying in groups, I am not worried about physic ay more. I get more confidence with my classmates’ help. It also gives me more chances to improve myself in many ways.

2012

篇二：山西省2011-2013英语中考作文真题

山西省2011-2013作文题

2011省模：

同学们，三年的学习生活即将结束，你一定有很多值得回忆的故事。一次老师的鼓励，一次同伴的帮助，一次父母的支持……都能让我们学会勇敢面对生活的挑战和考验。某杂志现在向大家征稿，希望能把你印象深刻的故事分享给大家。请你写一篇80词左右的短文，内容必须包括以下要点：

What problems did you meet before in your study or life?

How did your parents /teachers /friends /…..help you out?

If others are in trouble, what will you do to help?

范文：

During the past 3 years, I have met some problems in my study. They made me really upset and even give up. It’s my teachers and friends that helped me out.

I used to fail math tests very often but my math teacher, Ms Li, was really patient to me. She encouraged me to do more exercises and taught me to regard the difficulties as challenges. Luckily, I made great progress. In my heart, she is the light of my life. I will never forget her.

If you are in trouble, just come to me and I will also try my best to help you.

2012省模：

每个人的生活中都充满了挑战。勇敢地迎接挑战能让人迸发出无穷的潜力。在日常学习和生活中，你一定也有这样的经历。请你写一篇关于你勇敢地面对挑战、战胜困难的短文。短文须包括以下内容：

What challenge did you meet in your study or life?

How did you deal with it?

What do you think we should do when we face the challenge?

范文：

As a student in Grade Nine, I had challenges in improving my grades and getting used to long hours of classes.

I kept doing more exercises. Practice really made perfect. I also fitted some sports into my daily life. The balance of study and sports made me more energetic and helped me concentrate more on what the teachers say in class.

In my opinion, when challenges come, we should keep a positive attitude and face them bravely.

2013省模：

我们正在建设“美丽中国”。在当今社会涌现出了“最美妈妈”、“最美司机”、“最美教师”、“最美乡村医生”……你们学校也正在举行“最美中学生”的评选活动，你心目中的“最美中学生”是谁呢？他/她又怎样的感人事迹？我们又该做些什么才能成为最美中学生呢？请根据下列三个提示要点写一篇短文：

Who do you think is the most beautiful student?

Please tell us a beautiful story about him or her.

What is a teenager supposed to do?

范文:

In my eyes, my best friend Li Ming can be chosen as the most beautiful student of our school. Not only is he hard-working, but also he is very kind-hearted.

Ling Ming volunteers his free time to help disabled children in the City Orphanage for about three years. Once I followed him to go to the orphanage. That day I saw many warm pictures. He played games with the disabled children. He read books to them. He gave out the presents that he himself bought to them. Tears came into my eyes when I heard the children call him “elder brother’.

As a teenager, we should be good students at school. We should be parents’ helpers at home. In the neighborhood, we should try to put our love to good use by protecting our environment and being volunteers. I wish I can become one of the most beautiful students like my best friend, Li Ming.

2011太原市一模：

周末是我们放松身心，和朋友、家人参加户外活动的日子。你的周末呢？还记得你拥有的最难忘的周末么？你觉得周末如何度过才能更有意义？请以“My Weekend”为题，写一篇80词左右的英语短文。

内容包括：

Are you busy on weekends?

Please tell us an unforgettable weekend you had.

How do you think teenagers should spend their weekends?

范文：

My Weekend

As a Grade Nine student, I am usually very busy on weekends. In order to get good grades, I have to take some extra classes and also I have a lot of homework to do. So I am really tired on weekends.

How I missed my unforgettable weekend when I was young! I still remember it was a sunny day, I went hiking with my classmates and teachers. We played games and had fun climbing the hills. Everyone of us enjoyed ourselves. We didn’t want to leave until it was very late.

In my opinion, we should have relaxing weekends. After a week’s study, we really need to have a good rest. We can go to see a movie or play basketball with our friends. Also we can visit our grandparents. I think they will be very happy to see us. I don’t like busy and tiring weekend. What about you?

2012太原市一模：

校园是我们温馨的家园，我们每一个人都非常热爱这个温暖的家。为了促进它的和谐发展，学校倡导和谐校园建设，为此你们班组织主题班会，请你依据下列提示要点，为主题发言做好准备。（80词左右）

How are you getting on with your classmates?

Did you have any trouble with your classmates and how did you deal with it?

What do you think you should do to get on better with your classmates?

范文:

I’m getting on well with my classmates. I have many friends and I am popular. But sometimes I have some problems in getting on with them. My friend Xiao Li is the best student in my class. But in an English competition I beat her and won the prize. She was upset. She told others I cheated in the competition. I wasn’t angry with her and helped her find out why she didn’t do well. She thanked me and said she was sorry.

To get on better with my classmates, I should try to be more outgoing and funnier. I should be friendly to my classmates and join them in many activities. When they are in trouble, I’ll try my best to help them. I will also do something good for them, even sometimes they may misunderstand me. One day they will find out my kindness. I’m sure I will be more popular.

2013太原市一模：

“你幸福吗？”是去年最火爆的一句问候，它问出来国人对幸福的感受，也问出了无数欢乐、无数思考。作为中学生，你有什么感触呢？请写一篇英文短文，内容需包括以下三个提示要点：

Do you feel happy?

Tell us one of your experiences that made you feel happy.

What do you think can make you happy?

注意：1、词数：80词左右。

2、不要出现真实的人名和校名。

3、请把答案写在答题卡的相应位置上。

范文：

Do I feel happy? I really can’t answer it at once. Think it over----happiness is like warm wind that is always around me.

One night before an exam, I studied till it was very late. I felt sleepy and tired, but there was still a lot of schoolwork to do. Just at that time, I heard someone go into my room. It was mum. In her hand was a bottle of hot milk. After I drank the milk, a sense of happiness flowed into my heart.

In my opinion, happiness doesn’t mean eating something delicious, owning a lot of trendy things or traveling around the world, but getting much care from parents or friends, which makes my life full of hope.

2011太原市二模：

亲爱的同学们，父母在我们的成长过程中，始终是我们最亲密和最重要的人。你和父母之间相处的融洽么？还是偶尔也会有一些小的摩擦？你还记得你与父母之间发生过的一件不同寻常的事么？你觉得应该与父母如何相处呢？现在请你写一篇80词左右的英语短文，内容包括：

Do you get along well with your parents?

Please tell us an unusual thing that happened between your parents and you.

How do you think we should get along with our parents?

范文：

To be honest, I have to say that I sometimes had some arguments with my parents recently

although we usually get along well with each other.

Last month, before the exam, I was stressed out and I really wanted to relax myself by talking with my best friend on the phone. Just while we were talking, my mother rushed out and stopped me because she thought I had waste a lot of time. I was so angry that I couldn’t help crying and argued with her. I ran into my room and I didn’t have dinner until she said sorry. Of course, I also realized I was wrong the next morning and said sorry to her, too.

As a kid, we all know that parents are our closest people in the world and they love us very much. We’re supposed to try to understand them. On the other hand, we can also often tell our own ideas to them and let them know what we are doing and what we ate thinking, thus we can have a good relationship.

2012太原市二模：

假如你是初三年级学生李英，在即将毕业之际，回想起三年来老师们的辛勤教育，感激之情油然而生。你特别想对你的英语老师Mrs Li说声谢谢，在感谢信中你想告诉她： the reasons why you want to say “thanks” to her

one of the most helpful things she did for you

the things you will do to make her happy

要求：1、词数80词左右，已给出的句子不计入总词数。

2、文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。

Dear Mrs Li,

It’s a pity that I’m leaving this school soon. At the moment I really want to say “Thank you very much.”

范文：

You helped me a lot with my study. Whenever I need help, you are always there helping me and encouraging me. Without your help, I would not show interest in English and make so much progress. I cannot forget one thing that happened three months ago. I fell off my bike. One of my legs was badly hurt and I had to stay in bed. That evening, when I was alone, feeling sad, you sent me a message, telling me not to worry about my English and you said you could help me. You cared for me like my mother. I was too excited to say a word. Now I’m studying hard for the important exam and I’ll try to get good grades. I know the best gift for you is my progress. I’ll be a good person like you in the future.

2013太原市二模：

创建文明太原是每个太原公民的责任。亲爱的同学们，你认为你自己是文明市民吗？请你讲述曾经看到的一个不文明行为。你认为青少年应该如何做才能成为文明市民呢？现在就请你写一篇80词左右的英文短文，内容包括：

Are you a good citizen(市民) of Taiyuan?

Please tell us a story about one uncivilized(不文明) behavior that you saw.

As teenagers, what are you supposed to do be a good citizen of Taiyuan?

注意：1、词数：80词左右。

2、不要出现真实的人名与校名。

3、请把答案写在答题卡的相应位置上。

范文：

I think I am a good citizen in Taiyuan because I am a good person who regards helping the people in need as my job. And I believe strongly that little actions make the difference. Although most people have realized the importance of being a qualified citizen, there are still some wrongdoings around us. One day, when I was waiting in line to buy a ticket for a Beijing Opera, a little boy jumped the queue with his mother. The mother didn’t move back until she heard the complains behind her. That made her felt so embarrassed that she said sorry and moved to the back with her face turning red. In fact, we can do more as a good citizen like taking responsibility for what goes on around us, taking part in community service, being a good neighbor and as well as respect other people. Last but not least, we should follow the rules of family, school and society.

2011山西中考作文：

某校进行了“你最喜欢的课堂学习方式”的调查。结果表明，小组合作学习的方式受到了同学们的欢迎。请你写一篇有关小组合作学习的短文，内容须包含以下三个方面：

1、 小组合作学习的好处。

2、 让你感受深刻的一次小组合作学习的经历。

3、 小组合作学习的方式给你带来的收获。

要求：1、词数80词左右。已给出的句子不计入总词数。

2、提示词：save time, express one’s own idea, encourage each other, open up your mind, get on well with others, improve yourself.

范文：

Studying in groups is becoming more and more popular. It has many advantages. For example, we can not only save time but also encourage each other when we study in groups.

I still remember when I was in Grade 8, my physics was very poor. I has a really hard time with it. Once in class, I studied with some classmates together. I was very relaxed and asked my classmates a lot of questions about physics. I didn’t feel stressed out at all. At last, I finished my homework by myself for the first time. How excited I was!

Because of studying in groups, I am not worried about any more. I get more confidence with my classmates’ help. It also gives me more chances to improve myself in many ways.

2012山西中考作文：

现在，社会上补习机构火爆，在各种媒体上，我们经常可以看到“名师名校”、“个性化教学”、“终极押题”、“秒杀中考”等广告词。你相信这样的宣传吗？为此，你所在的学习小组针对这一社会现象，围绕“课余时间我们应该更多地去做什么才能够得到全面的发展”展开了讨论，最终大家形成了以下的观点：

请你根据同学们的上述观点，并结合自己的亲身体验，就此问题陈述自己的看法，内容必须包含以下要点：

1、Would you like to take after-school classes? Why or why not? (Please give 3 reasons.)

2、What would you like to do in your spare time?

3、Please tell us one of your stories of this kind of experience.

要求：1、词数80左右。2、文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。

篇三：山西2013高考英语作文大全_完美炮制法则

2013高考英语作文完美炮制法

紧扣高考英语作文评分标准

高考作文采用总体评分方式，集中在以下四个方面：

－覆盖了题目提出的所有内容要点和要求；

－应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，内容比较丰富；

－在使用复杂结构或高级词汇时允许有些许错误；

－有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，全文结构紧凑流畅。 ●高考英语作文完美行文四步骤

STEP1：确定文章框架，包括：时态、语态、格式、展开方式、开头结尾等。STEP2：确定内容要点，包括：主要人物、时间地点、重要细节、合理发挥等。

STEP3：正式开始写作，整理思路成篇，行文连贯。

STEP4：

及粗心犯下的错误.

高考英语写作技巧汇总

（一）掌握技巧：

（1）注意篇章结构，合理布局

开始部分（opening paragraph）——说出文中的要点、核心问题。正文部分（Body paragraphs）——围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。 结尾部分（concluding paragraphs）——对全文的总结和概括。

要做到全文中心突出、段落之间必须是有机地联系，内容完整、连贯。前后呼应，祛除与主题无关

的内容。 详细可以参情况考ESL资源网站 里面的writing部分。

（2）确定主题句

主题句是对全文的概括，是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。通常主题句出现

在一篇文章的开头，而后，全文对主题句所提出的内容进行解释，扩展。写主题句应注意以下几点：

①归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点

②提炼出一句具有概括性的话

③主题句应具有可读性，抓住、吸引读者。

（二）巧用连接词

要想使文章有整体性、连贯性，就要学会正确使用连接词

表示罗列增加

First, second, third,First, then / next, after that / next, finally

For one thing … for another…,

On (the) one hand…on the other hand,

Besides / what’s more / in addition / furthermore / moreover / another / also,

Especially / In particular,

表示时间顺序

now, at present, recently,after, afterwards, after that, after a while, in a few days,at first, in the beginning, to begin with,

later, next, finally,immediately, soon, suddenly, all of a sudden, at that moment, as soon as, the moment, form now on, from then on,at the same time, meanwhile,till, not…until, before, after, when, while, as during,

表示解释说明

now, in addition, for example, for instance, in this case, moreover, furthermore, in fact, actually表示转折关系

but, however, while, though, or, otherwise, on the contrary, on the other hand, in contrast, despite, in spite of, even though, except (for), instead, of course, after all,

表示并列关系

or, and, also, too, not only … but also, as well as, both… and, either …or, neither …nor

表示因果关系

because, because of, since, now that, as, thanks to…, due to…, therefore, as a result (of), otherwise, so…that, such…that

表示条件关系

as (so) long as, on condition that, if, unless

表示让步关系

though, although, as, even if, even though, whether …or…, however, whoever, whatever, whichever, wherever, whenever, no matter how (who, what, which, where, when,whom)表示举例

for example, for instance, such as…, take… for example

表示比较

be similar to, similarly, the same as, in contrast, compared with (to)…just like, just as,表示目的

for this reason,, for this purpose, so that, in order to, so as to,

表示强调

in deed, in fact, surely, certainly, no doubt, without any doubt, truly, obviously, above all,表示概括归纳

in a word, in short, in brief, on the whole, generally speaking, in my opinion, as far as I know, As we all know, as has been stated, as I have shown, finally, at last, insummary, in conclusion

（三）掌握常用句型：

台湾英语资源网 http://www.esl.tw 里面有很多，下面只列举比较常用的。

1. in order to

为了实现他的梦想，他学习非常努力。

He worked very hard in order to realize his dream.

2. in order that

她拼命干活以便到六点时把一切都准备就绪。

She worked hard in order that everything would be ready by 6 o’clock..

3. so…that

他们太累了，除了伸懒腰什么都做不了了。

They were all so tired that they could do nothing but yawn.

4. such…that

天气非常冷，以致于街上一个人都没有。

It was such a cold day that there was nobody on the street.

5. would rather do…than do

他宁愿听他人讲而不愿自己说。

He would rather listen to others than talk himself.

6. prefer doing to doing

他宁愿在精心准备后去做报告。

He prefers making speeches after careful preparation.

7. prefer to do…rather than do

比起女人，男人总是宁可在家睡觉也不愿花那么多时间来购物。

Compared with women, men always prefer to sleep at home rather than spend so much time

shopping.

8. not only…but also

在短短的三年的时间里她不但完成了所有课程，而且还获得了博士学位。In just three years, she had not only finished all the lessons, but also received herdoctor’s degree.

9. either…or

如果考试过关，你可以买一个MP3或去云南玩一趟。

You could either buy an MP3 or go to Yunnan for a visit if you pass the exam.

10. Neither…nor

他是一个无聊的人，既不爱娱乐，也不爱读书。

He is a boring man. He likes neither entertainment nor reading.

11. as well as

他善良又乐于助人。

He was kind as well as helpful.

12. …as well

这个小孩活泼又可爱。

The child is active and funny as well.

13. One…the other

你看见桌子上有两只笔吗？一支是红色的，另一支是黑色的。

Have you seen two pens on the desk? One is red, the other is black.

14. Some…others

每个人都很忙，有些在读书，有些在写作。

Everyone is busy in classroom. Some are reading, others are writing.

15. make…+adj /n

我们所做的可以让世界更美丽。

What we do will make the world more beautiful.

16. not…until

直到他告诉我发生的事，我才了解真相。

I didn’t know the truth until she told me what happened.

17. as if

他夸夸其谈好像什么事都知道。

He talks a lot as if he knows everything.

18. It is no use (good) doing…

假装不懂规则是行不通的。

It’s no use pretending that you didn’t know the rules.

19. find it + adj to do…

我觉得作听力时有必要作笔记。

I find it necessary to take down notes while listening.

20. It is + time since…

我已经有两年没见他了。

It is two years since I last met him.

21. It is + time when…

我到电影院时已经八点钟了。

It was 8 o’clock when I got to the cinema.

22. It is + time before…

不久我们就会再见面的。

I won’t be long before we can meet again.

23. It is…that…

我最珍视的是友谊。

It is friendship that I value most.

24. It is + n / adj + that / to do…

每个人都必须懂得如何使用计算机

It is a must that everybody should know how to use computers.

写作辅导：写作核心句型

核心句型

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1. The arguer may be right about …, but he seems to neglect (fail) to mention (take into account) that fact that…

2. As opposed to (Contrary to) widely (commonly/generally) held (accepted) belief (ideas/views), I believe (argue that…

3. Although many people believe that …, I doubt (wonder) whether the argument bears much analysis (close examination).

4. The advantages of B outweigh any benefit we gained from (carry more weight than those of / are much greater than) A.

5. Although it is commonly (widely / generally) held (felt / accepted / agreed) that …, it is unlikely to be true that…

6. There is an element of truth in this argument (statement), but it ignores a deeper and more