留便条英语作文
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篇一:英语便条写作范例
英语便条写作范例
1)请假(Asking for Leave) 例1
Directions: You are about to write a Business Leave Note of about 60 words. Please describe this information clearly.1) the reason you ask for the leave
2) the time and how long you will leave
Aug. 22nd
Secretary Li,I‘m sorry to apply for ten days’leave from the Aug.
23rd to sep., 3rd instantly, as the time is urgent. My father now in the hospital is badly ill and I have to take care of him for a few days, for I’m the only child in my family. I will show you the telegram about my father’s illness to support my application. I promise I will do my best to catch the missed lessons on after I come back. Yours respectfully ,
×××
或:
例2
Aug. 22nd
Dear Mr Li,
I'm very sorry to tell you that I can't attend school today becauseof a bad cold. I enclose the doctor's certificate(证明) and ask you for three days sick leave.
Yours,
Li Ming
Enclose(附): the doctor's certificate for sick leave
练习
①
吴先生:
因爷爷病重,我打算回家探望,要求请假一星期,从本月10日到16日止。附上姐姐发来的电报,请批准为盼。
您的学生赵威1999.12.9 (字数:50左右)
December 9th Dear Mr. Wu,
I’m sorry to apply for a week’s leave from the December 10th to December 16th. I intend to go home to visit my grandfather because he is badly ill. I enclosed my sister’s telegram. Wish for your allowance.
Your,
Zhao Wei
2)约请(Invitation)
例 1
Directions: You have a ticket to the Russian National Ballet Troupe, which is visiting and you want to give it to your friend Alice. Write a note to her and say:
1) the time of the show,
2) the place where you will wait for her
You should write about 60 words.
Aug. 22nd
Dear Alice,
Here is a piece of good news for you. The Russian Natio
nal Ballet Troupe will give a performance in the Beijing Grand Theater tomorrow evening. I am sure that you will be happy to watch it and I leave you The performance will begin at seven o’clock sharp. I will wait for you at the theater entrance. Yours,
×××
3)道歉(Apology)
在社会交往中,人们常常会出现一些疏忽、过失等。为了避免误解,
不影响感情,在这种情况下,应写信给对方予以解释,以请求谅解。
例1
Directions: You have missed a date of your friend, now you have to write a letter for apology in about 60 words.
May 20th
Dear Lily,I am sorry I missed seeing you yesterday. I know that yo
u must have been disappointed. I also feel worried and anxious in my heart. I am terribly sorry. However, I would like to ask you out this weekend to make up for yesterday. Please give me a chance and I am waiting for your reply.
Yours,
××× 例2
Directions: You have received an invitation from your friend, but you have already had some guests in your house. Please express the reason you can’t go clearly. Please write in about 60 words. 6 April Dear Lucy,I do apologize for having to send this letter about Saturd
ay night. When I accepted your invitation, I simply forgot that Saturday was a holiday and that my own guests were not leaving until Sunday morning. It is difficult for me to make a choice. Though I also wonder to meet you very much. I could not very well go out by myself and leave the guests at my home. I hope you know how sorry I am not to be with you this Saturday. Should I make a visit to you in my other spare time?
Thank you very much.
Yours,
×××
例3
Directions: You are already have a date with your friend but suddenly have another thing to do and you have to tell your friend that you can’t go. Express your reason clearly in about 60 words.
Monday 9:00 a.m
Dear Jane,
I am sorry to tell you that I won’t be able to come this af
ternoon because I have to go to the airport at 2:00 p. m. to meet an overseas visitor from Australia. I really have kept our datd in my mind all these days, however, I received my boss’ e-mail this
morning, he asked me to go to the airport to meet one of his friends from abroad, it’s suddenly and urgent and I must go. Please forgive me. Would you please ring me up to make another time?
Many thanks.
Yours,
×××
4)借物(Borrowing)
例 1 Directions: You are going to write a note for borrowing sth. please describe these information clearly.
1) the thing you ask
2) detailed what you are going to do with it.
3) how long will you take it.
Tuesday
Dear Xiao Wang:I wonder if I could borrow your electronic dictionary for a few days. Now I am translating some important articles. There are many new words which I have to look up the dictionary usually. I just have a paper dictionary but of course it’s not as convenient as the electronic one, which has a bad effect upon my velocity of my translating. So I think your electonic dictionary is more suitable for me to complete my work. I promise that I must be very careful of your dictionary and make no damage done on it. Thank you very much!
Yours ever,
×××
练习:
小明:
篇二:高考英语作文便条
(七)便条
写作指导
便条是一种简单形式的书信。常用的便条有请假条和留言条两种,其特点是格式简单,内容简短,便条上一般只需要一两句话。因此,便条要求做到:内容简明扼要,文字简洁明了,讲清谁写的,写给谁,什么事以及什么时候写的等。
留言条的日期可以写上年、月日,也可以写上星期几或星期几上、下午,或者只写几日,几点钟也行。日期多写在正文右上角,便条多用于熟人之间,因此,便条上的写条人地址、结束语等都可以省略。
精选范文 ① Dear Mr Li,
I'm very sorry to tell you that I can't attend school today because of a bad cold. I enclose the doctor's certificate(证明) and ask you for three days sick leave.
Your student,
Li Ming
Enclose(附): the doctor's certificate for sick leave ②
Headmaster Li,
I have just received a letter from my home saying that my grandma is badly ill and asking me to go home at once. Because of this, I would like to have a leave of three days beginning on Oct. 8. I hope that you can allow me to go.
Zhang Hua
Enclose: a letter from my home. 练习 ① 吴先生:
因爷爷病重,我打算回家探望,要求请假一星期,从本月10日到16日止。附上姐
姐发来的电报,请批准为盼。
您的学生赵威 1999.12.9 (字数:50左右)
参考词语
重病to be seriously ill 感激to be thankful to 附上enclose ② 海伦:
我想借用你的汉英词典,三天后还。因为我目前正在翻译一篇重要文章,经常要用,我使用时一定小心爱护,决不损坏。
谢谢!
珍妮 5.15
(字数:50左右) 参考词语
能否I wonder if you can…
汉英词典Chinese-English Dictionary 查字典to consult a dictionary ③ 彼德:
我今天上午乘火车到达上海,住上海宾馆305号房间,请来一叙。
杰克
上午8∶50
(字数:50左右) 参考词语
过来一叙to come over and have a chat
④你到一个叫李英的同学家,通知他一件事,碰巧他不在家,你给他留了张便条,内容如下:
a.明天的课将推迟到本星期六下午2点,因为明天你要参加劳动——植树,
上午7点在校门口集合出发。
b.前天你把雨伞落在他家房子的前门外,请他明天上课时替你带来。
××× 8.10
(字数:80左右) 参考词语
参加劳动take part in the labor 雨伞umbrella
⑤假如你是建国,你的朋友今天下午5∶00到你家。你当时不在,他只好留条说
明他来是为了约你明天上午和你一起去看望你们的班主任,他明天上午8∶30来叫你。请在家等候。(字数:50左右)
⑥假如你是Lucy,打算同你校外籍教师Dianna 同去人民剧院看京剧,你前
去送票,碰巧她不在家,请你写一份留言:
a.戏剧今晚7∶00开始;
b.戏票已经买好,请她别再买票; c.你将在剧院入口处等她;
d.去时,在校门口坐3路车直达剧院。 (字数:80左右) 参考词语
京剧Beijing Opera 在入口处at the entrance 乘三路车to take the BSS No.3
⑦假定你的名字叫王磊,你原来和林平约好今晚去参加舞会,但你父亲生病住院,你得去医院照顾,于是你去林平住处,想要告诉他这件事。另外,你准备约他下周六下午去乡下钓鱼,林平碰巧不在家。
请你给林平留个便条,并请他在下周四以前给回音。(字数:80左右) 参考词语
参加舞会to go to the dance 照顾to look after 钓鱼to go fishing 通知…to let…know
准备好一切 to get everything ready
(七)便条
①
Dec. 9th
Dear Mr Wu,
My grandpa is seriously ill. I have been told that by my sister. I' m going to go home to see my grandpa, so I have to ask a week's leave, from Oct. 10th to16th. I'll be very thankful to you if you agree.
Yours, Zhou Wei
Enclose: a telegram from my elder sister ②
May 15th
Helen,
I wonder if you can lend me your Chinese-English Dictionary for three days. I' m translating an important article and must consult it now and then. I would, of course, be very careful of it, and see that no damage is to done to it.
With many thanks.
Yours, Jane
③
8: 50 a. m.
Peter,
I arrived this morning by train. I' m staying at Shanghai Hotel ( Room 305 ) . Please come over and have a chat.
Jack
④
Aug. 10
Li Ying,
Tomorrow's class will be put off to Saturday. Instead, we'll take part in the labor----plant trees. We' ll gather at the school gate and start off at 7 : 00a.m.
I left my umbrella at the front door of your house the day before yesterday. Please bring it to me when you come to school tomorrow.
Thank you very much.
Yours, Wei Ping
⑤
Jian Guo,5:00 p. m. Thursday
篇三:便条写作
便条写作考试策略
第一单元:格式
便条作为专业英语四级考试对应用文的考查点之一,是每年的固定题目。2005年专业四级考试大纲将便条的分值从5分增加到10分。考试大纲对英语专业写作便条部分的测试要求是:“根据提示写大约50-60词的便条、通知、请贴等。要求做到格式正确,语言得体。考试时间为10分钟。”由此我们可以看出它所涉及的考点是 格式和语言得体性。因此我们可以从格式、开篇结尾、表达是否清楚得当以及如何使用委婉语气和敬词这几方面着手进行复习和练习。
便条根据其用途可分成很多类,这里我们着重探讨经常考试的几类:邀请类便条、通知类便条、致谢类便条和祝贺类便条。
写作要点:
便条写作是专四写作部分考试中得分很有灵活性的一道题目,既可以得满分,也可能得分很低。其得分高低的关键之一在于格式是否正确。考试大纲对英语专业写作要求中提到:“便条写作最主要的是注意格式正确。”因此我们首先要熟练掌握便条写作的格式。
关键:称呼顶格、日期在右、首行缩进、署名签在后
英文书信由6个部分组成:信头、信内地址、称呼、正文、谦语和署名。而便条写作有别于普通的书信,属于非正式书信。它的格式非常简单。它的篇幅短小,无需写信内地址,有时也无需写祝词和谦语。如此清晰的格式,我们可以将其简单地总结为:“称呼顶格、日
1. 称呼顶格,可根据亲疏关系尊称或直呼其名。可用Dear Sir or Madame, Dear Tom 等正式称呼,也可直呼其名。在称呼后面一般用逗号(英国式),有时也可用冒号(美国式)。我们习惯上还是用逗号。写给亲人和关系密切的朋友时,用Dear 或My dear再加上表示关系的称呼或直呼其名。例如:My dear mother, Dear Alice等。商务信函用Dear Sir 或Gentleman (Gentlemen)。不能出现Dear Gentleman这种称呼。也可用头衔或职位再加上姓名,如:Dear Professor David Smith, Dear Dr. John Wells。
2. 日期写在右上角。便条的日期既可以写明具体年月日,也可只写星期几,若日期的准确性要求高,也可以写明具体时刻。日期可写成:May 11, 2008 (美国式),11 May, 2008, (英国式), May 11th, 2008, 11th May, 2008等形式。May 11, 2008的用法最为普遍。
3. 正文首行第一个字母缩进四个字母。便条正文位置在称呼语下面第一行。正文注意不要按汉语习惯问候“Hello”.
4. 署名签在最后,应在右下角。署名前可视情而定,写Yours sincerely, Yours ever, Respectfully yours 等表示恭敬之意,也可直接签名。注意一般不要按照汉语的习惯写:Your best friend, Your classmate等称谓。谦语位置低于结束语一至二行,从信纸中间偏右的地方开始写。
谦语的一些规则:
对地位高的人或长辈:Respectfully yours, Yours respectfully
对不太熟悉或应表示客气的人:Yours truly, Truthfully yours
亲密的 朋友或亲属之间:Affectionately yours, Yours cordially
最亲密的人之间:Yours lovingly, Devotedly yours
便条示例:
9 a.m, May 11 Dear Mike,
I’ve got two tickets to a concert given by the famous pop band Nightingale. Yesterday I waited a long queue in order to buy them because I’ve been looking forward to listening to this concert. It is to begin at 7 p.m. tomorrow. I have no classes tomorrow. Are you also free tomorrow? Would you like to come with me? When your classes are over, please phone me.
Yours,
Tom
第二单元邀请类便条
四级考试大纲明确要求明确指出,“根据提示写大约50-60 词的便条、通知、请贴等”。请贴即正式的邀请类便条。对于请贴的写作,我们尤其注意语言得体。“语言得体”也是四级便条的考察点。四级便条的评分标准中就有appropriacy(适当、恰当)这一点。“适当、恰当”包括
措辞和语气两方面。这要求我们根据情景和人物关系正确选择措辞和语气,做到措辞恰当、语气表达适当。考试中通常要求向熟悉的同事、同学、朋友写便条,用词比较通俗、口语化。写作注意:根据关系亲疏决定措辞和语气的正式程度
前面已经讲过,便条分正式便条和非正式便条。我们应当首先分清楚写便条者和收便条者之间的关系和情景的正式程度,以决定是用对方的职称还是直接称呼姓名,确定所使用的措辞。通常情况下便条的形式和内容比较简洁。中心内容可以用几句话概括,语言尽量通俗,口语化,简单扼要,直截了当,无需使用客套语言。但向诸如教授等长辈留便条时要注意措辞,并且用的语气要尽可能委婉。
试比较以下两则便条
Dec.29, 2007
Dear Ms. Smith,
We will hold a party in our classroom to celebrate the mid-autumn festival at 8 p.m. this Friday. Will it be possible that you come and join us in the celebration? We would be very delighted to have our dear teacher with us on this special occasion. If possible, please let us know whether you can come at your convenience.
Respectfully yours,
Hua
May 4, 2007
Dear Liu,
We will have a party at 8 p.m. to celebrate the mid-autumn festival in our classroom. Do you care to come to our party? I assure you there will be a lot of entertainment and joyful events. Don’t hesitate. Come and see for yourself!
Wang
请看下面几组例子:
1.I should appreciate it very much if you condescend to meet us.
2. Come and meet us at the school gate!
3. We are looking forward to the opportunity to listen to your in-depth speech!
4. I can’t wait to listen to your speech!
四句话语气显然不同。第一句和第三句客气,句式正规;第二、四句言简意赅,句子简短。我们应该在比较中理解语气的选择与使用。
便条语气不要生硬。比如以下句子:
You have breakfast at eight, get your luggage downstairs at eight thirty and leave here for the airport at nine.
这句话尽管表达得非常清楚,信息量充足,但语气生硬,没有礼貌。试改为下面这句: Breakfast is at eight. Would you please get your luggage downstairs at eight thirty? We are going to leave here for the airport at nine.
经过改动,变陈述句为疑问句,就显得礼貌,委婉。
我们可以多了解一些表达“请”的词,除了please,还可以用kindly; be good enough; be kind enough; have the kindness 等词来表达。表示高兴、愉快、荣幸的词不达意可用to have the pleasure to do/ of doing/in doing; to take ( a) pleasure in doing (something); to take pleasure in doing (sth); to be pleased to (with/by) ; to be delighted at (in) (with); to be glad to (of ) (about) ; to be rejoiced in (at); to be extremely pleased to等短语来表达。
若要将句子变得更为礼貌、更委婉,则除了使用表达“请”的词,还可能利用以下几种方式:
1. 陈述句改为问句,而少用祈使句、感叹句等。如:
Would you please… Is there any possibility that … Why not …等。
2. 采用包含would ,should , might 等情态动词的语句。提出劝告、建议:
It would / could be fine to do…
It might be better to …
Perhaps you might like to …
You might as well do…等
提出请求、询问意向,如:
I would (very much ) like to …
Could you …
Would you…;
If may, I will..
Could you possibly …
Would you mind…等
3. 陈述看法时,用过去时代替现在时是客气委婉的表示。如:
I believed/ thought…
I was wondering if …
I wonder if …等。如以下例句:
I wonder ( wondered) if you can (could) spare a few minutes.
I want (wanted) to ask if I can (could) borrow your bike.
I hope (hoped) you can (could) give us some help.
4.一般将来时和将来进行时虽然都表示将来,但后者听起来更委婉。比如I shall be waiting for you.要比I shall wait for you.要委婉客气得多。另外,在疑问句中用将来进行时也比用现在进行时更为客气。如:
Are you staying in Beijing long?
Will you be staying in Beijing long?
开篇结尾背句型
短小型文章给人形成印象的时间是10-12秒!
无论何种类型的作文,有针对性地背诵相关句型总是不无裨益的,特别是跟开篇结尾有关的句型。有数字表明,诸如便条类的简短文章给人形成印象的时间只有10-12秒钟。也就是说,一则便条是否能在阅卷已十分疲劳的老师的脑海里形成良好的印象几乎全靠前10秒钟。我们理应把最能出彩的话写在段首和段尾。况且便条写作不同于一般写作的一个特点在于它要在开篇就写出便条的目的,即开篇表意,如表关切、歉意、感谢等。清楚明朗的开篇,紧扣主题的结尾会给整个便条作文增色不少。因而我们可分类整理和背诵开篇结尾的句型。以下是邀请类便条的开篇结尾句型。
开篇:
The Smiths kindly request your presence at the banquet to be held…
May we have the honor to invite you to the concert…
Will you please tell me what time will be convenient for us to get together..
We should be so happy to have you come to dinner with us next Friday.
I shall be grateful if you can come to my place at your earliest convenience.
We’d like to invite you to..
Would you like to come with us to…
Do you want to join us in …
Are you interested in …
Do you care to join us in…
Would it be possible for you to join us at …
We should be so happy to have you come to dinner with us tonight.
结尾:
Please reply as soon as possible.
Please let us know your decision ASSP.
Please let me know by calling me up at the office.
We would be very happy if you could join us.
We are awaiting / anxious to receive your early reply.
We should appreciate an early reply.
We thank you now for the courtesy of your early attention.
Kindly reply at your earliest convenience.
Please favor us with your reply as early as possible.
Please write to us by tonight’ mail, without fail.
May we remind you that we are still awaiting your early reply?
Your prompt attention to this matter would be greatly esteemed.
A prompt reply will greatly oblige us.
Your prompt reply would be greatly appreciated.
A prompt reply would help us greatly.
May we request the favor of your early reply?
We look forward to receiving your early reply.
As the matter is urgent, an early reply will oblige.
有时表达邀请的便条需要另附邀请函,这种情况可以用以下词组表示:
Enclosed please find…
英语作文