以启航为题的作文

篇一：以“启航”为标题的作文指导及例文

以“启航”为标题的作文指导及例文

【题目】

假如你是青青的小草，不必羡慕桃李的芬芳；假如你是腾跃而上、不过数仞的斥鴳，不必羡慕展翅高飞、鹏程万里的大鹏；假如你是……架起自信的风帆，乘着青春的浪花，满载美好的梦想，启航吧！只要你有一颗水手般坚毅的心。

【题意】

此作文题目基本没有审题障碍。要思考的是，如何立意才更能切题。几句“假如你是”，提示“你”也许只是一个平凡的人，但你却可以拥有“自信”“青春”“梦想”，你可以用你的“水手般坚毅的心”去面对生活中的种种。因此，作文如能考虑二元或多元关系，如“启航”与“自信”（“青春”“梦想”“水手般坚毅的心”），那是最恰当不过的。另要注意材料中的“你”。

【误区】似是而非展开

不少人在展开文章时，只是开头或结尾点明“启航”，主体部分却大谈特谈“自信”“青春”“梦想”“水手般坚毅的心”在人生中的重要性，明显欠缺点题的意识。

【片断分析】

小草，不必羡慕参天大树，因为你带来了几分新绿；小溪，不必羡慕辽阔的大海，因为你带来了几分灵动；小鸟，不必羡慕高飞的雄鹰，因为你带来了几分清脆……

我们的人生，难道会一帆风顺吗？……所以，我们需要的是自信的风帆！

【点评】这是一篇文章的开头，与照搬所给材料作开头无异。

天空中雄鹰展翅高飞，鹏程万里，令人羡慕；大地上江河湍急，一泻千里；令人震慑（撼）；雨林中苍（参）天大树直指苍天，令人叹服……

和他们相比，或许斥鴳、溪流、小草都要自惭形秽，但是不会，花儿的盛开，是青青小草的陪衬；大江汹涌，离不开潺潺的小溪…… 而此刻的我们，则需不再犹豫，筑好自信的风帆，迎着风浪的洗礼，心存美好的梦想，启航吧！

【点评】这是另一篇文章的开头，第一段换一个角度写“令人羡慕……”的种种，第二段再作比较，第三段顺势提出观点，比上面的片断自然成功了不少。

自信是我的风帆……

理想是我的引擎……

目标是我心灵的港湾。我的目标没有孔子仁爱天下的伟大，没有庄子寻求本身的深远，更没有鲲鹏水击三千里的浩气，但我有明亮的灯塔照亮属于我自己的路。科学家发明药物，抵抗癌症拯救世界，让我跃跃欲试，斗志萌动；比尔〃盖茨捐资580亿扶助公益事业，令我心神所向却望尘莫及；军人不分昼夜，拯救了无数废墟中的生灵，令我感动不已；望着周围高楼拔起，我摩拳擦掌，起笔绘出一张张蓝图。抬头望着奋笔疾书的同窗，我立下决心，向自己呐喊，生命人林要有你的一方土地，命运海洋要有你的一簇痕迹，目标在前，我即将奔向。

于是乎，我有了些许装备，它们装点着我空旷的甲板。林语堂说“梦想是美好的”，于是我装上了理想和飘扬的自信；汪国真说“我喜欢出发”，于是我带着明确的目标，抖擞着，巨浪不再恐怖，礁石不再嚣张，我冒着温暖的晨光，启航！启航！

【点评】以上是一篇文章的主体部分和结尾。三个分论点处理上，显然是虚实结合。内容上，热情洋溢地写出了自己启航前的心理状态，能切题，虽然一些语句表达尚有不足，分论点也值得商榷。

1号文

启航

饶平二中高三（1）班 林冬乔

汪洋一片浩荡，其间千帆竞渡，而渡口仍有人于船头观望。远方是否惊涛骇浪？我的帆船如此简陋，能否抵御狂风的吹打，海浪的袭击？于是，一再踟蹰，最终无缘远方的景色，无法领略远航的惊奇。

既然一再犹豫于事无补，何不就在此刻启航，管他远方大雪冰霜。

或许，远方的成功只是不懈追求的动力，或许，狂风会在途中将你的船只打翻，但请相信，风永远不能将阳光打败，只要你具备启航的勇气，你就是一道明媚的阳光。

如果说成功是我们要攀登的巅峰，那么它不会拒绝任何一个志在顶峰的攀登者。每个人都有成功的资本，都具备成功的潜能。不是只有一直光彩照人、一帆风顺的人才能成功，每个人都可以。叱咤商海的马云原本只是一个默默无闻的人，名不见经传，甚至因为个人头矮小，长相粗劣而受人鄙视，然而这都不是他自卑的理由，相反地，他用自己敏锐的目光撷取商海中的一朵浪花，抓住机遇，勇敢启航，最终成为“阿里巴巴”总裁，成为驰骋世界商界的人物，他的成功不得不说是缘于他自信的力量。他勇于启航，所以挂帆直济沧海；他从不自卑，所以幸运之神将成功的光环授予他。

虽然成功者不需要完备的条件和得天独厚的优势，但热忱与济世胸怀是每个成功者需要具备的。这种热忱便是启航的自信，航程中的从不言弃。

试想，曹雪芹如果没有“批阅十载，增删五次”的努力，何来巨著《红楼梦》的问世，没有司马迁忍辱负重的坚持，又何来《史记》这一千古绝唱，这一“无韵之离骚”；如果没有居里夫人始终如一的坚持，又何来“镭”惊现于世？他们的成功，无不是对文学的热爱，科学热忱的追求。因为有了他们的热情的胸怀，才有他们义无反顾的信心与勇气，也才有了他们攀登走向成功的勇气，所以可以无视一路上的荆棘阻挡，一路上的狂风暴雨，勇往直前。

你还在为远方艰辛的旅程而愁眉紧锁么？还在自惭形秽于自身不具备被人那样优越的条件吗?启航吧，自信是你厚重的资本，青春使你充满迈步向前的力量，即使前路有很多阻拦，相信你一定能成功跨越。

启航吧，还在踟蹰的人儿，远方有辉煌的渔火。

得分：48分

【点评】（1）此文语言表现力，这是作文得高分的关键之一。（2）首尾呼应，过渡自如。

（3）主体部分二段论证一正一反，能扣住观点。

2号文

启航

饶平二中高三（12）班 余伊玲

“我要做远方忠诚的儿子，和物质短暂的情人，从今以后，我不得不和所有的梦为马的诗人一样，和烈士和小丑，走在同一条道路上。”

诗人海子在心里放臵一枚小小的灯塔，义无反顾地扬起了人生的风帆。他启航了。前方

有暗涌潮伏，有大风孟浪，礁石以不变的表情面向天空。

或许我们梦想着的远方，只是一座芳草萋萋的荒城，只有一片晴翠，布满了小径。但我们都想变做一回水手，以梦为帆，从心里启航。我们在乎的不是彼岸，不是沿途的风景，我们的也在瞭望，瞭望着他人的航程。

心高气傲的曹丕啊，自信地鼓起了风帆启航了。人生如同在他手中的航，翻转自如。“人生莫知，多有何为？今我不乐，岁月如驰。”与风浪搏击，又与礁石共语。“策我良马，被我轻裘，载驰载驱，聊以哀忧。”摇晃的船身，清荡出一种轻快自如的节奏。他用挺拔的身影告诉我，启航吧，前途是希望。

而正当此时，一艘荡悠悠的小舟又晃入视野，只剩“残山剩水”的八大山人，拾缀起他满身才华，归隐入山林。“一室寤歌内，萧萧满烟尘。”浮华渺邈的尘世，容不下他一颗空净的心，山河破碎，而他却时时启航。“青山旧业在，零落种瓜人。”一亩方田，几畦菜地，他启航了，去往心灵的自我所在。他笔下烟雾缭绕，空灵隽秀的山色，是他梦里的仙境。

千帆竞过，我们留恋过别人的风景，也小心把持着自己手中的舵，不令命运的帆船，驶错了方向。正如云盖智本禅师所云：“一念心清净，处处莲花开。”我们怀揣的梦想，如同一朵朵柔软光洁的莲花，不堪盈手赠。

庄子在《逍遥游》里，曾写过一只鹏鸟，“背若太山，翼若垂天之云，抟扶摇羊角而上者九万里，绝云气，负青天，然后图南，且适南冥也。”如今我们既是做了自己人生的水手，不也应有大鹏这种恢弘博大的气势，启航之后，一往无前么？

别来迅景如梭。我们在时间的海洋上，扬帆远航。眼前，是“花未开全月未圆”的景致，心中是“长风波浪会有时，直挂云帆济沧海”的执着，梦里，是“远方侵古道，晴翠接荒城”的风光。启航的心情，一如波兰诗人切〃米沃尔的一句诗所写的那般:

“我的身体里没有疼痛，直起身，我看见蓝色的海和白色的帆。”

得分：48分

【点评】此文笔调轻快抒情，诗句的引用恰如其分。海子的启航引出下文：虽然前路漫漫，但自信（曹丕）、仙境（八大山人）能让我人鼓足勇气，像大鹏一样翱翔蓝天。此外，表达上虚实结合得好。

6号文

启航

没有朝阳的光辉，没有月亮的皎洁，又何妨？夜空中那点闪烁是星星迷人的微笑。没有拿破仑的生杀大权，也没有周杰伦的响亮歌喉，又何妨？我有自信，我有青春，我有梦想，我已启航，驶向未来。

启航吧，带着超人的自信！

李白够自信，“欲与天公试比高”是他的豪言，一吐便是半个盛唐是他的壮举；周杰伦也很自信，一个打杂工人扬言要出唱片，唱遍大江南北，现在的铁杆粉丝遍中华便是他的成就。一个人要想有所成就，就必须要自信。自信也许并不能让你成功，但它往往是丰功伟绩的前序。让我们中学生也带着自信，走向未来。

启航吧，在这可贵的青春里！

冯唐有才有智又如何！直至九十岁才有“持节云中遣冯唐”的一天。一个人到了九十岁还能干什么呢？毛泽东青年时就意气风发，心怀远大抱负，并不断为梦想而奋斗。我们青年人应该在这宝贵的青春里启航，为未来而奋斗，不要到老了才叹息“冯唐易老”。那时的叹息会为你的人生添加那令人不齿的污点。

启航吧，怀揣着美丽的梦想！

有人说：“我想当科学家，因为那样可以去寻找未知的美丽。”有人说：“我想成为政治家，因为那样可以齐家治国平天下。”有人说：“我想成为世界富翁，因为那样即可为家人提供富裕的生活，又可帮助穷人。”有人甚至会说：“我要成为超人，因为那样可以除恶扬善，做飞人。”……

说出你的理想，没有人会笑话你。会笑你的人如果存在的话，那他们也只是不识千里马的人罢了。不用理会他们，带着你那美丽的梦想，就此启航。

我们每个人都有自己的优点，我们应当架起自信的风帆，乘着青春的浪花，满载美好的梦想，启航。

启航吧！

把风留给帆，

把浪留给桨，

把船长的位子留给我。

【点评】这是一篇行文流畅的作文，但只当作得中档分处理。理由：（1）有话题作文的痕迹。标题作文不同于话题作文，它最大的要求是要吃准题意——“启航”是什么意思。（2）有模式作文的印记。三个分论点单独成行并非不可，然而“自信”“青春”“梦想”跟所给材料的顺序一模一样，让阅卷者觉得不是滋味。各个论点展开时，也不敢从自身的角度去写。（3）最后四行文字写得可以，但有凑足字数之嫌。

【温馨提示】

作文评分时，主观色彩是较浓的。也许你对自己的得分不满意，也许你觉得自己还能做得更好。但请你不要怨天尤人，请你严格按作文规范做好自己，相信幸运会降临你的身上的！

饶平二中高三语文备课组

2011年1月23日

篇二：臧启航作文

那句话让我知错就改

“诚实是人生道德标准，是无价的财宝”。就是这句话成为我以后的动力，人生的方向。

往事如烟，教人深思。在学校家庭社会中，我都会犯过很多错误，但都不知道改正自己的坏毛病。可自从那件事，我改了，而且改的很彻底??

小学时，老师很信任我，让我当每天检查作业的组长。把未交作业的名单给老师，都是经过我。可我还有不足的时候。那一次，我记作业少记了一项，回去之后也没有察觉。第二天早晨老师说作业的项数时，我蒙了，恍惚间，我知道我没有写那项作业。

还是诸如往常，这一组的同学都把作业往我这交，从前我一看到这些，很快就把那些颜色不一的作业整整齐齐地摆放好，很干净整洁。这次我却没有心了，直愣愣得盯着黑板上不可磨灭的作业项数，要是老师知道了肯定不会放过我，还可能撤了我的职位，然后??我不敢往下想，一个可怕的念头出现在我的眼前——不记我的名字了，回到家后再把那项作业给补上就当重来没有发生过吧。

我想着，不知不觉已经上课了，今天是语文阅读课，可是这气氛怪怪的，黯淡，很黯淡，十分黯淡。仿佛桌椅都在轻视我，椅子坐下冰凉冰凉的，像触了电似的，怎么坐也不

舒服。听老师讲课应该能转移注意力吧。今天读《木偶奇遇记》中的一则故事。当老师读到木偶因撒谎鼻子变大了，我习惯性地摸了摸自己的鼻子，还好，没有变大。最后木偶还是主动承认了自己的错误，结局还是圆满的。老师又念了，“诚实是人生道德标准，是无价的财宝”。我怔住了，也不知哪来的勇气，看了看作业，果断写上没交作业者——我。完毕后，感觉自己好像透气了，至少比刚才舒服多了。这肯定是我人生当中的一次重要体验

诚实是最重要的，老师的那句话让我恍然大悟，能够知错就改。在人生的道路上都会犯这样那样的错误，可是我知道，要知错就改。

篇三：启航最后作文

Section IV 作文考点及复习技巧

1．英汉思维习惯(直截了当 direct= call a spade a spade；indirect 转弯抹角)

2．写作的现实与矛盾( wordless, incorrect )

3．写作的“四化”：

① 语言准确化(accuracy) ② 语言多样化(variety)

③ 结构清晰化(clarity ④ 内容简单化 (simplicity)

4．写作的九条原则：

① 语言第一（准确度、广度、难度、亮度） ② 结构第二（关联词）

③ 内容第三（要一致） ④ 审题看图要认真

⑤ 文体要统一 ⑥ 主题要突出

⑦ 方式要多样化 ⑧ 首尾要照应

⑨ 考点要覆全

第一节 高分词汇变化与替换

1. More and more young people find it more and more difficult to adapt to the fierce competition. ___________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________.

2. More and more children like surfing the internet.

Teenagers’ surfing the internet is on the increase/rise/drop/decline/.

The number of teenagers’ surfing the internet is on the rise.

3. A more and more harmonious climate is needed with the development of society.

There is a growing need /demand for an increasing harmonious climate as our society advances.

4. Most people realize that every citizen should have an equal chance to be educated.

The vast/overwhelming majority of folks are aware that every citizen should have an equal chance to be educated.

5. People began to discuss the issue of middle school students studying abroad.

A spirited discussion has sprung up with regard to /as to/concerning the issue of middle school students studying abroad.

6. I firmly support this idea that we should make friends with our neighbors.

I am firmly supportive of this idea that we should be on good terms with our neighbors.

7. Some people often think everybody should have a sense of responsibility.

It is universally acknowledged that everybody should have a sense of responsibility.

8. When we talk about whether college students should be involved in business activities, different people have different ideas. 一谈到大学生是否应该参加商业活动的问题，不同的人持有不 同的观点。When it comes to whether college students should be involved in business activities, ideas/opinions vary from person to person.

9. This picture has a deep meaning and indicates a deep social phenomenon too.

This cartoon/drawing bears a explicit meaning and is indicative of a profound social

phenomenon as well.

10. I think we should encourage children to face some hardship. Only like this, they are able to face the problem they will meet in their lives.

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In my personal sense, children are encouraged to go through some hardship. Only in this manner, are they capable of facing the problem they will confront in their lives.

11. We can see from the picture that the runner reaches the finishing line and starts towards a new

goal again.

As can be seen from the picture /is depicted in the drawing, the runner … line and strives for the next goal once more.

12. Nowadays, the trend of becoming old appears to be the biggest problem.

Currently, an aging population has become a harsh /severe problem in China.

13. So I am full of thanks for your timely help.

Consequently I am deeply obliged to you for your timely help.

14. In our society, some people think supporting old men is not as important as before.

In our fast-developing community, some individuals contend that supporting the old is no longer regarded as momentous as before.

15. They think they don’t want to look after their parents for having no time.

The youngsters maintain that they are unwilling to look after their parents for lack of time.

16. There were no our parents. Then, we have no chance to live in this world.

But for/Without our parents, we would have no chance to come to the world.

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第二节作文典型错误分析

一．谓语动词（时态错误）

1. We college students had enough time to take part-time jobs, no matter how busy we were.

2. The young people are facing with too many temptations nowadays.

3. His fault is satisfy with the past success and pay little attention to the present challenge.

4. The importance of cultural communication just let more foreigners know China.

二．主谓一致和代词(指代错误)

5. Every aspect of the Chinese lives have changed in the past decade.

6. One of the serious problems human beings are faced with are water shortage.

7. Getting up early benefit us in more than one way.

8. I shall meet with lots of difficulties, but I think I can overcome it.

三．逻辑主语与后面的主语不一致错误

9. At the age of six, my father began to give me English lessons.

10. So to solve this problem, it needs everyone to make great effort.

11. Compared the two pictures we can conclude that the flowers in a green-house are too weak to bear harsh environment.

12. Confronted this situation, we should develop a rational attitude towards it.

四．平行结构错误

13. A young folk should strike a balance between being himself and to follow the cult.

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14. Nowadays people not only eat enough, but also eat better.

15. His spoken English is better than all his classmates.

五．名词错误

16. College student is confronted with various stress and tension.

17. Internet provides us with many useful informations.

六．连接词语错误

18. Because some college graduates could not find a better job, so they decided to continue to pursue a second degree.

19. Although an opportunity is rare, but we must strive to seize it.

20. There is, as is vividly illustrated in this picture, a young man is asking his barber to cut his hair in David Beckham’s style.

21. China opened the door to the outside world, more and more people visit China and become interested in Chinese culture.

22. As the saying goes, “time is money.” In my personal sense, time is even more precious than money. When money is spent, we can earn it back. When time is gone, it will never return. This is the reason why we must value our time.

七．拼写、表达、搭配错误

23. We students should learn/study as much knowledge as possible.

24. In order to serve for the people well in the future, I should study hard now.

25. TV now plays an important role in our daily life. Because we cannot live without it.

26. The fishing ships are many more in 1995 than in 1990

27. My solutions to this problem have several ways.

28. When old problems are solved, new problems will rise.

29. I’m determined to study much more harder than last term.

30. In the past two decades, our country has taken place great changes.

九．词性错误

31. We should develop China’s economic, and lead our country to a rich, strong nation.

32. Our world will bright if everyone shows love to others.

33. The increasing population effects on our environment.

十．句子成分错误

34. People think go to the movie will cost a lot of money.

35. The picture shows an American girl who wearing the traditional Chinese costume.

36. The best way show love is to help those need help in their life.

37. As it is universally acknowledged, knowledge is power.

38. More and more people deeply believe smoking does harm to health, wastes money.

十一．标点符号错误

39. I won’t lose my heart, instead, I’ll study harder.

40. I can do whatever I like in the library. For example: reading, traveling, or doing exercises.

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第三节作文经典句型练习

一. It + 被动语态 + that…

1．人们普遍认为，广泛的文化交流在许多方面对各国人民有好处。

_____________________________________ that extensive cultural exchange does good to people form various nations in many ways.

2．人们通常认为，一个人如果没有在现实生活中经历逆境和困难，他意志就决不能变得足 够坚强。

It is generally accepted that without experiencing hardships and difficulties in real life one can never become strong-minded enough.

3．人们必须承认，就青少年来说，一个充满竞争的环境对于生活技能的锻炼来说是必要的。 It must be admitted that a competitive environment is necessary for the practice of life skills on the side of teenagers.

4．不可否认的是，旅游业的过度发展可能会破坏某些风景区的生态平衡。

It cannot be denied that the overgrowth of tourism may disturb the ecological balance of some scenic resorts.

5．众所周知，体育锻炼能够提高和增进我们的身心健康。

It is well known to us all that physical exercises can improve and enrich our physical and mental well-being.

二. It is + 形容词 + that…

6．显而易见/不言而喻/毫无疑问，这种情况是直接由于过度的紧张和压力而造成的。 ________________________________________ that the situation is caused directly by excessive tension as well as stress.

7．人们对这个有争议的问题持不同的态度，这是可以理解的/不可避免的。

It is comprehensible / understandable (inevitable) that people’s attitudes are divergent/different on this controversial issue.

8．很难想象/相信我们年轻人竟然如此沉溺于这个虚拟的网络世界里。

It is unimaginable (incredible/unbelievable) that we youngsters should be much addicted to the virtual net world.

三. It is + 形容词 + for sb. ( sth. ) to do sth.

9．大家积极参加体育锻炼非常重要。因为体育锻炼不仅我们的身体有好处，而且对我们的 心理和性格也有好处。

It is obvious (self-evident, clear, undeniable, apparent), for they will do good not only to our body but also to our mind and personality.

10．现在大学生毕业时很难找到一个理想的工作，特别是那些学基础课程专业的学生，比如历史和数学。

________________________________________________________upon his graduation, especially those majoring in fundamental courses such as history and mathematics.

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11．现在非常迫切需要采取紧急措施来控制非法毒品在青少年中大幅度蔓延。

It is highly imperative that urgent measures should be done to control the widespread use of illegal drugs among teenagers.

四. as /along with/Coupled with “随着”句型

12．随着经济的快速发展，中国人民的生活标准已经大大提高，许多家庭能够买得起房子 和汽车。

Along with the rapid growth of economy, the living standards of the Chinese people have been greatly improved. Houses and cars are within easy reach of（买得起）many families.

13．随着每年培养的大学生越来越多，求职市场的情况正变得愈加严峻。

_______________________________________________________________ each year, the situation in the job market is getting tighter and tighter.

14．随着工业和农业的不断进步，缺水的问题也将越严重。

As industry and agriculture advances, the problem of water shortage will be the more serious.

15．随着中国进一步开放和扩大与其它国家的教育交流，出国留学在中学生中正越来越流 行。

As China opens further to the outside world and increases its educational exchange with other countries, going abroad to study is increasingly fashionable among middle school students.

五. There be 句型

16．在过去十年里，年轻已婚夫妇想生孩子的数量已出现了明显的下降趋势。

In the past ten years there has been a marked decline in the number of young married couples who want to have children.

17．近来，关于是否要克隆人类出现了热烈的讨论/辩论。

In recent years, there has been a heated /spirited debate/controversy concerning whether human beings should be cloned.

18．现在仍然有许多孩子因为贫困而不能上学。

There are still quite a number of children who cannot afford to go to school because of poverty.

19．随着因特网业的发展，越来越多的人会上网冲浪。

As the Internet industry develops, there will be an increasing number of folks surfing on the web.

20．现在人们对孩子不得不要承受的学习和心理上的沉重负担表现出越来越多的担忧。 ________________________________________________________________________, both academic and psychological, which our children have to bear.

六. 表示“使……变得…”的句型 make ＋宾语＋形容词 make＋形容词＋for sb. to do sth.

21．信息技术的广泛引用会使我们的工作和生活更加方便和丰富。

The widespread introduction of modern information technology will make our work and life more convenient and colorful.

22．最重要的是，我们应该不断地加强我们的环保意识，使我们的世界成为适合人类居住 - 16 -

的美好家园。

Most importantly, we should increasingly heighten our environmental awareness and

____________________________________________________________.

23．现代交通意味着让人们出门旅行更加快捷、方便和舒适。

Modern transportation means making it highly fast, convenient and comfortable for people to travel far away from home.

24．先进的医学科技使得人类的寿命更长，遭受各种疾病越少。

Advanced medical science has made it possible for human beings to lead a much …

七. so that（以便）/so…that（如此…以致）句型

25．青少年是如此喜欢时装以至他们花大量钱来买时髦的衣服。

Teenagers are so keen about fashions that they spend large amounts of money on fashionable clothes.

26．我们青年人应该学会以恰当的方式来减轻压力以便我们能够更好地适应这个竞争社会。________________________________________________________________ we can better adapt to the competitive society.

八. 非限制性定语从句

27．有些人可能沉溺于网上冲浪，这会危害他们的身心健康。

Some people may be addicted to netsurfing, which impairs their physical and mental health.

28．越来越高的离婚率将引发一系列的问题，这已受到大众的极大关注。

The increasingly high divorce rate will cause a series of problems, which .

九. 用分词结构扩展内容

29．由于人们没有意识到地球上的水资源是有限的，因此人们每天浪费了大量的水。 People, are limited, waste a great

amount of water every day.

30．公民有权利知道真相和约束名人，从而形成一种公众舆论。

Citizens have the right to know the truth and supervise the celebrity, thus forming a public opinion.

31．由于父母亲对孩子寄予极大希望，所以当他们得知其孩子考试不及格时，他们再也抑 制不住自己极度的失望和生气了。

Having placed great expectations on their son, they couldn’t hold back huge disappointment and anger when they learnt their son’s failure to pass the test.

32．随着生活水平的提高，越来越多的人们开始购买汽车来满足工作和生活的需要，也就

篇四：2012年启航考研小作文(直至到12月30日)

大作文常用词汇：

图表类型：table、chart、diagramgraph、column chart、pie graph

描述：show、describe、illustrate、can be seen from、clear、apparent、

reveal、represent

内容：figure、statistic、number、percentage、proportion

一、写作时间分配

小作文15分钟，大作文35分钟，共50分钟，再分别分为三个阶段：

1．审题：小作文2分钟，大作文3分钟

2．写作：小作文10分钟，大作文28分钟

3．检查：小作文3分钟，大作文4分钟（语法、拼写、标点等） 高分策略

精读（精彩词汇、精彩词组、精彩句型、句子结构、段落结构、关联词、同义替换、代词替换、精彩观点）

背诵（背诵不同类型作文的模板）

默写（背完模板后进行默写）

二、书信类写作格式

1、首段：

1)自我介绍：I am···from···

2)写作目的：I am writing the letter in purpose of···

I am writing to inform you that···

（私人信函不用自我介绍）

2、中间段：根据题目要求改写提纲。

3、尾段：

1)表示感谢：

My thanks for you to···

I take this opportunity to show my heartfelt t appreciation to···

2)期待回信：

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Your prompt attention to my inquiry would be highly

appreciated.

三、告示类写作格式

1、标题（Notice、Announcement、Corrections、Rules等)

2、日期（格式：月份 日期，年份；例如：November14,2011）

3、正文（注意时态，一般用一般现在时和一般将来时）

4、署名

四、咨询信格式

第一部分：写信的目的

第二部分：介绍背景

第三部分：询问细节详情

第四部分：表示感谢，期待回复

模板：

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to ···

····we plan to···

I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my···And your prompt response would be warmly welcomed.

Yours sincerely Li ming

五、建议信格式

第一部分：写信的目的

第二部分：说明原因

第三部分：提出自己的建议

第四部分：表示希望被采纳，表示感谢，希望回复

模板：

Dear Sir/Madam:

You have asked me for some advice on how to improve···.I will give some useful suggestions.

To tell me the truth,···.For instance,···.That is the major reason why I···

Moreover,···.May be you could manage this by···

I hope that my suggestions are helpful for your decision—making

concerning···.

Yours sincerely

Li ming

六、申请信格式

第一部分：写信的目的

第二部分：介绍自身情况

第三部分：点名申请学位及其原因

第三部分：恳请申请学校或单位考虑本人的申请，表示感谢，希望回复

模板：

Dear XX:

I am writing to express my interest in···.I have study/worked··· What I am interested in is···.I am good at ···.In addition,···.So I am confident that my

qualification and word experience make me a suitable candidate fo the job. I am available for···,please contact me at···. Thank you for considering my application.

Yours sincerely Li ming

七、介绍信格式

第一部分：写信的目的

第二部分：介绍事情

第三部分：表示感谢，希望回复

模板：

Dear XX:

May I introduce···

I shall be very happy if you can assist···in any way.

Thank you very you much for your help. Yours truly

Li ming

八、邀请信

第一部分：写信的目的

第二部分：说明事情，邀请的时间和地点

第三部分：表示对对方前来的期待和感谢

模板：

Dear XX:

We should be very grateful if you could··· We are looking forward eagerly to··· Yours truly Li ming

篇五：启航第二篇作文作业5月23

启航第二篇作文题目

Directions:

Study the following cartoon carefully and write an essay in which you should

1) describe the cartoon,

2) interpret its meaning, and

3) point out its implications in our life.

You should write about 160—200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)

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