爱心是一盏灯作文

篇一：爱心是一盏灯 作文

爱心是一盏灯

Directions:

Among all the worthy feelings of mankind, love is probably the noblest, but everyone has his/her own understanding of it. There has been a discussion recently on the issue in a newspaper. Write an essay to the newspaper to

1) show your understanding of the symbolic meaning of the picture below,

2) give a specific example, and

3) give your suggestion as to the best way to show love.

本文中的图画非常简单，结合提示考生很容易理解其含义，但这张图片的意义却很深远：油灯上面的火焰是一个孩子的微笑，在黑暗中发出明亮的光芒，上面还有一句提示语“爱心是一盏灯，在越黑暗的地方越明亮。”这句话的理解关系到对整篇文章中心思想的正确理解。这句话的前半句是个比喻，后半句是一个越……越……的结构，考生应该深刻领会爱心的重要作用。本文中的提纲有三点，一是写出对于图画象征意义的理解，二是举出一个具体的事例，三是就献爱心的最好办法给出建议。另外这道题目中增加了情景语言，即：包括情景说明，提纲说明，以及图画。降低了题目的难度，考生可以结合提纲式作文、规定情景作文和图画作文的写作特点完成本文的写作。但要注意一个重要原则：英语情景说明语句，不可直接照搬，需要进行改动。尽量应用同义，近义词，相关表达，不同句式改造。例如worthy 可以替换为valuable，feelings 可以替换为 emotions，mankind 可以替换为 human being，noblest可以替换为greatest等。我们可分三段来完成本文。在第一段中不仅应描述图画，还应描述上面的那句话。在第二段中，应举一个能与图画所表达的道理相匹配的典型事例。这样的事例很多，考生可以结合自己的经历列举，如希望工程、抗洪捐款等等，也可以列举具体人物。最后一段中，考生可以提出自己的建议，这一部分难度不高，考生可以套用一些模版句型。

.经典范文赏析

范文一：

In the picture presented to us, an oil lamp gives out bright flame against the dark background. The flame is like a child’s smile, so innocent and pure. The oil lamp here is a symbol of love, which is the greatest among all the valuable emotions of human being. Just as the Chinese characters around the lamp say, love is a lamp; the darker the room is, the brighter it looks. It is

true that the harder the situation is, the more valuable love is.

One good example to illustrate this love is the "Hope Project". As we all know, although our economy is much better than years of ago, a great gap still remains between east and west regions, between large cities and rural areas. Thousands of poor children are forced to quit school because of lacking of money. All works of life have worried about this situation. "Hope Project", which is proposed just in time, calls for people to show their loves for those children unable to go to school, and tens of thousands of people has lent their hands without asking for any return.

The best way to show love, I think, is to be devoted to our work and our nation. Everyone is indeed unique loved by the people around, and therefore we must learn to love others, and try our best to shoulder the responsibility of the job so as to help others live better and make contribution to our nation.

译文

图中我们可以看到一盏灯正在黑暗中闪耀着光芒。火焰像一张充满童贞的笑脸。这盏灯是爱的象征，爱是人类所有感情中最伟大的。正如图中的汉字所写“爱心是一盏灯，在越黑暗的地方越明亮。”的确情况越艰难就越能显示爱的伟大。

阐述这种爱一个好例子就是“希望工程”。我们都知道，尽管近年来，我们的经济条件比以前好了很多，但东西、城乡差距依然存在。很多困难家庭的孩子因为没有钱只好辍学。社会各界对此都非常担心。“希望工程”应声而出，它呼吁人们为不能上学的孩子献爱心。成千上万的人不求回报的伸出了爱心之手。

我认为献爱心最好的办法就是投身工作，献身国家。我们每一个人都在接受着身边人的爱，因此我们要学爱他人。我们应该尽力完成好自己的本职工作帮助他人更好地生活，大家都能为祖国做贡献。

黄金句型

In the picture presented to us...

图中我们可以看到……

Just as ... say, ...

正如……所说……

It is true that the harder the situation is, the more valuable love is.

的确情况越艰难就越能显示爱的伟大。

One good example to illustrate this love is the "Hope Project"。

阐述这种爱一个好例子就是“希望工程”。

As we all know,...

我们都知道……

The best way to..., I think, is to...

我认为做……最好的方法是……

范文二：（满分范文）

1、20分范文：

Among all the worthy feelings of mankind, love is probably the noblest. It is of the utmost importance to the human beings. Everybody not only needs love, but also should give love.

As is described in the picture, “love is a lamp which is brighter in darker places.” This is indeed true. People in darker places need more light than ordinary people. Maybe even a dim light can give them much hope for a better life and progress. Maybe just a thread of light will call forth their strength and courage to step out of their difficulties.

For instance when someone is starving to death, just a little food and water from you may

save his life. Or when a little girl in a poor rural area drops out of school because of poverty, just a small sum of money from you may support her to finish her schooling and change her life, you have given love which is like a lamp in a dark place where light is most needed.

So to sum up, we should offer ou(转 载 于:wWW.smHAida.cOM 海达范文网:爱心是一盏灯作文)r help to all who are in need. We expect to get love from others and we also give love to others so when you see someone in difficulty or in distress and in need of help, don’t hesitate to give your love to him. I believe then the relationship between people will be harmonious and our society will be a better place for us to live in.

篇二：小学作文：关爱是一盏明灯

关爱是一盏明灯

关爱是一盏明灯，照亮人们前进的道路；关爱就像一把火，温暖着人们的心房；关爱是一艘小船，带到我们爱的彼岸。

随着关爱的脚步，让我轻轻的打开记忆的闸门。

那天，我和妈妈去姑妈家做客。突然，天空乌云密布，下了倾盆大雨；雷公电闪雷鸣敲锣打鼓，老天爷裹上了一身黑衣。我们心一惊，急忙告辞。因为我家的棉被还在小区的洋楼屋顶上晒着太阳呢！看来要变成落汤鸡了。那位天使姐姐帮帮我呀？?雨呀，慢点下吧！? 我正想着，嘿！真是说曹操曹操就到 ！黄豆般大小的雨点徐徐落下。“被子没救了”！我失望的说。妈妈没说话，我想可能是她也没办法吧！这可咋办呀？不久，我们终于到家了。我三步并作两步跑回我家，我那时的速度还可以与刘翔相比了。我匆匆忙忙回到了家，屋顶的门打开了，今天小区没有其他人的棉被在晒太阳呀！为什么门打开了呢？嘿，不管了，我走进去拿棉被，咦？棉被不见了，到哪去了？我感到疑惑。

事情原来如此：刚好，巡逻的保安见天突然变脸了，保安又看见了我家棉被没收。他就以最快的速度跑上楼顶帮我们收了棉被，幸好，他一进屋。“哗啦，哗啦…”的雨声响起来。

我想：虽然保安帮助我们收棉被只是举手之劳而已。但是拥有关爱别。我也要把关爱传递与他人，让世界充满关爱，让关爱造福人类吧！

关爱是一盏明灯，永远照亮人间！！

篇三：关爱是一盏明灯

关爱是一盏明灯

春苗小学 冯美静

关爱是一盏明灯，着凉了人们前进的道路；关爱是一艘小船，把人们带到爱的港湾；关爱是一把火温暖了人们的心。随着关爱的脚步，我轻轻地打开记忆的闸门。

记得那一天，天空乌云密布，电闪雷鸣，眼看一场暴雨就要来临时，我和妈妈正在外婆家做客。突然，看见老天爷裹上了一件黑外衣，心里一惊，急忙告辞，因为我家的棉被还在家里“晒太阳”呢！我心想：我家的棉被今天可要变“落汤鸡”了，我们今晚一定会挨冻的，这可怎么办呀！雨呀！你可要慢点来呀！

我正想着，嘿！真是说曹操，曹操就到了呀！天下起了黄豆班的大雨，我们在路边穿上雨衣，我对妈妈说：“快点呀！再晚，棉被就湿透了！”我们快速的乡家里冲去，就我们那速度，可以与刘翔媲美了！终于，我们到家了，当我要收棉被时，发现棉被已经没有了，这是怎么回事？

原来，那天邻居看见我家的棉被都快下雨了还在“晒太阳”，，而我家里有没人，就以最快的速度帮我家收了棉被。

我想：真是远亲不如近邻啊！虽然这只是一件小事，但体现了邻里之间的关爱，我以后也要把关爱传递给他人，让世界充满关爱，让关爱造福整个世界！

指导教师 杨娜

点评：文章笔调轻松幽默，一些细节描写细腻，真实，真感情就是好

文章，所以读起来别有一番风味。

篇四：爱心作文

Love is of utmost importance to us humans. Everybody not only needs love, but also should give others love. As can be seen from the picture, "love is a lamp which is brighter in darker places. " This is indeed true. People in darker places need more light than other people. Maybe even a dim light can give them much hope for a better life. Maybe just a thread of light will call forth their strength and courage to help them step out of their difficulties.

[2.举例段] I can think of no better illustration of this idea than the following example(s).For instance when someone is starving to death, just a little food and water from you may save his(her) life. Again, when a little girl in a poor rural area drops out of school because of poverty, just a small sum of money from you may support her to finish school and change her life. In these case/circumstances you have given love which is like a lamp in a dark place where light is most needed.

[3.归纳结论段] To sum up, we should offer our help to all the needed. We expect to get love from others and we also give love to others. So when you see someone in difficulty or in distress and in need of help, don't hesitate to give your love to

him (her). I believe that the relationship between people will be harmonious and that our society will be a better place for us to live in.

爱是我们人类最重要的。每个人不仅需要爱，但也应该给予别人的爱。从图片中可以看出，“爱是一盏灯，这是在较暗的地方更亮。”这确实是真的。在较暗的地方的人民比其他人需要更多的光。甚至是一个昏暗的光线可以让他们对美好生活的希望。也许只是一个光线程将唤起他们的力量和勇气，帮助他们加强他们的困难。

[2。举例段]我能想到更好地说明这个想法没有比下面的例子（S）。，例如当有人饿死，只是从你的一点食物和水可能挽救他（她）生活。同样，当一个小女孩在一个贫穷的农村地区因贫困而失学滴，你的钱，只是一个小数目，可能支持她完成学业，并改变她的生活。在这些案例/情况下，你给的爱像在黑暗的地方，最需要的是光灯。

[3。归纳结论段]综上所述，我们应该提供我们所需要的所有帮助。我们希望得到别人的爱，我们也付出爱给别人。所以当你看到困难或遇险和需要帮助的人，不要犹豫，给你的爱

给他（她）。我相信，人与人之间的关系将是和谐，和我们的社会将是一个更好的地方，我们住进去

篇五：爱心作文

红色的是自己填写的地方，黑色的是模板,绿色的是注释

第一段描述图片

There has been a heated discussion about a picture in the newspaper（cartoon/photograph/drawing/Magazine/journal） As is shown in the cartoon, in the darkness happily stands a candle, spreading brightness around itself.//尽量用高级句型，倒装，伴随Simple.as.the.picture.is,.the.symbolic.meaning.is.as.deep.as.ocean.

第二段，编编

What is the intended meaning of the picture? The writer’s real purpose is not the fact itself, but to lead us to discover what hides behind the iceberg. The past decade has witnessed a huge development in society owing to the reform and open door policy being carried out, bringing some problems at the same time, with the youth’s lack of confidence//自己填好什么现象是作者要反映出来的，尽量写大众化，大家都写的东西，还要保证是自己有话说，能写出来的东西being the foremost. According to the latest survey, over 60% youth get defeated when they meet any

difficulty, which leads great social concern.//这是举个例子，可写可不写，编编就行，主要是告诉老师你会举例子

第三段，解决办法

The situation being so serious, it is high time that we took effective measures to solve the problem. On one hand, it is essential that laws and regulations should be worked out. On the other, people should be educated to …//to什么自己写，记住：制定法律法规可以用在大的社会现象上，个人受教育就是平常小事，要是凑字数的话就两种都写上也没错With a proper law and an alert public, it will only be a matter of time .before the problem becomes things of the past. （Only in a reasonable, prosperous and healthy atmosphere can we hope to witness the ideal scene in which people can enjoy their life to the uttermost.//这句也不错）

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