good,moment作文

篇一：A Moment in Life英语高分作文

A Moment in Life

Time is the best story teller in our life. With time going by, we heard and acted on different stories. Some stories were ordinary, some stories were

sweet.However, some stories were so impressing. One moment in these stories touched me and changed me-traffic accident.

I still remember it was a hot summer, I just finished my college entrance examination, my classmates brought up an opinion that rode the bicycle around the Fuxian Lake. In order to release ourselves, we accepted the suggestion. We tried to prepare all the things, but we never knew a scary moment was coming soon.

Although the weather was hot, we enjoyed the beautiful lake, in order to take photos, one of my friends and I were slower than others, we tried to catch up with them so we speeded up. At that time, something horrific happened-A big truck came to us in the contrary direction. My friend was flustered at the moment when the truck was closer and closer to her, I also hurried to brake and called her name. But unluckily, she was hit by the truck, the driver tried to brake but failed.Her bake fell down in the big voice when I saw her that she fell down to the icy road. I can see red blood in her head clearly, also I could only hear a weak voice to call my name. At the moment, my heart full of worry but more was guilty.Although she was so dangerous, she cared about me firstly, I was selfish compared with her, because the moment I rejoiced to thinking that I was lucky, even I thought I was a lucky dog who just avoided the accident.

The moment with guilty passed away, and I was clam and tried my best to deal with the terrible situation, then I called to the hospital and other

classmates.Finally, we arrived in the time and had a good result. My friend was safe without life danger, and the driver paid the hospitalization costs. All the thing became normal, but in fact, the moment changed my thinking and the way of thinking.

Firstly, the moment has taught me how to deal with the dangerous

situation.I hadn't thought the traffic accident would happen in my life, so I never have any consciousness of dealing with the emergency. Through the moment, I know I need to gain some first aid knowledge, it's essential to protect myself and help others. Also I need to familiarize with the way to call to hostipal and so on.

Secondly, through the moment, I received true friendship. Not everyone is selfish, the nature of human beings is kind. So whenever or whatever that we should care about the people around us. We need to give more love to others, especially for our friends. As a true friend, I should treat them as ourselves.

With time going by, many memories faded away, but this special moment is deep in my mind. Life is the best teacher and the moment teach me and made me grow. Now, the only thing I can do is cherishing!

篇二：作文框架(goodgood)

一、议论性作文

开始段：总述。(两三句话)

Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)… （目前，……引起了广泛的关注。）

There is no denying that… （不可否认，……）

It is universally acknowledged that … （……是大家所公认的。）

be closely related to（与……息息相关）

Pose a great threat to … （对...造成一大威胁）

It goes without saying that… （毫无疑问，……）

There are at least two good reasons accounting for …

（至少有两个原因能解释这个现象）

中间段(分两种情况)：

（1）解释产生这种现象的原因或意义，并做出一定分析。

There are at least two good reasons accounting for __. On the one hand, __. On the other hand, __ is due to the fact that __. In addition, __ is responsible for __.Maybe there are some other reasons to show __.But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.

（2）描述不同人群的观点

It is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that _ 观点一__. In their views there are two factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一___.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二___. So it goes without saying that __观点一__.

People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people hold the idea that __观点二__. In their point of view, on the one hand， __原因一__. On the other hand, __原因二__. Therefore, there is no doubt that __观点二__.

结尾段：提出建议或总结观点或表明态度。（三四句话）

As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that __. Only by this way/doing so can we要实现的目标. / On no account can we __.

二、漫画作文

开始段：介绍漫画。(两三句话)

From the picture we can see…/ As is vividly described/shown/ indicated in the picture, 漫画内容. The picture does mirror a common social phenomenon and is really thought-provoking.

中间段：解释产生这种现象的原因或意义，并做出一定分析。

The purpose of this picture is to show us that…/The picture probably tells us that…

The implied meaning of the picture should be taken into account/consideration seriously.

There are at least two good reasons accounting for __. On the one hand, __. On the other hand, __ is due to the fact that __.In addition, __ is responsible for __.Maybe there are some other reasons to show __.But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.

结尾段：提出建议或总结观点或表明态度。（三四句话）

As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that __. Only by this way can we. / On no account can we __.

三、图表作文

开头段等同与漫画作文，也可借用议论性作文

(pie chart饼图 /bar chart柱形图)

中间段等同与议论性作文。第一种情况时候可借鉴漫画作文中给与的一些句子。 结尾段与前两者类似。

1． 开头

例如: 1. In 1999, it increased (rose / jumped / shot up) from 5 to 10 percent of the total (to 15 percent / by 15 percent).

2. By comparison with 1998, it decreased (dropped / fell) from 10 to 5 percent (to 15 percent / by 15 percent).

3. It account for 15 percent of the total.

4. There were 100 traffic accidents in April, and increase of 5 percent in a five-month period.

5. By 1999, only (less than / more than / almost / about / over / as many as) three quarters (40 percent of / one out of five / one in four) college population (graduates /

housewives) as against (as compared with) last year (1998) …

2． 正文

1. There are many reasons for this dramatic growth (change /decline / increase) in … For one thing, … For another, …

2. A multitude of factors could account for (contribute to / lead to / result in / influence) the change (increase / decrease / success/ failure / development) in…

3. What is also worth noticing is that…

3． 段落或文章结尾

1. Taking into account all these factors, we may safely draw (reach / come to / arrive at) the conclusion that…

3. It is high time that we placed special emphasis on the improvement (development / inc

rease / promotion) of…

4. It is high time that we put an end to the undesirable situation (tendency / phenomenon) of…

6. There is no easy (immediate / effective) solution (approach / answer ) to the problem of …, but … might be useful (helpful / beneficial).

7. No easy method can be at hand (found / guaranteed) to resolve the problem of …, but the awareness of (commitment to) the significance of … might be the first step on the right way.

12. It is necessary that effective action (steps /measures ) should be taken to prevent (correct / end/control ) the situation (tendency / phenomenon).

常用句式：

It goes without saying that…

There is no denying that…

I am greatly convinced (that) = I am greatly assured (that)

As far as my knowledge is concerned, …

There is no doubt (that)

According to my personal experience, …= Based on my personal experience, … With the increase/decrease of …

With the advance of science and technology, …

In the age of information and communication, … plays an dominant role in... in other words, …= to put it differently

In view of the practical need of society, ….

Only by living up to the three requirements can we ….

Only with combined efforts can we ….

This evidence shows that the importance of ～ cannot be overemphasized. In conclusion, …= To sum up, …

We can, therefore, come to the conclusion (that)

There are many examples found to prove that

(1)As is shown in the picture, the situation of college students

employment is worsening, as it is hard for them to be accepted by an employer upon graduation. (2) In the two bar pictures we can see that the number of both college graduates and post graduates increased from 1990 to 2001. (3) Moreover, nearly 50,000, or 10% of college graduates in the city become jobless in the year 2001. (4)It is safe to draw the conclusion that college students, once the "God favored few", are now in their hard times.

(5)There are many reasons responsible for this phenomenon and the

following are the typical ones. (6)The first reason is that the city's economic structure is changing so fast that many college graduates are not ready for the challenge. (7) The second reason is that type of economy has been changed to the knowledge economy that features high and new technologies and modern management. The requirement to graduates is more and more high. (8)The third reason is that many universities failed to change their education plans to meet the society's needs, so that they will not be able to produce students fully prepared. As a result, it is not hard to see that many students cannot find a job that matches their majors.

(9)In order to improve the situation, from my perspective, measures

must be taken to resolve the problem. (10) For one thing, the unemployment rate will continue to fall as more and more graduates choose to further their education. (11)For another, college graduates should be encouraged to take the post which may not matches their majors and keep learning in the process of practice. (12) Only in this way, can college students find job opportunities in the society.

作文须知：

避免低级错误（动词的使用、30% of the students、there be结构句式） 有效连接（注意连接词的使用，例如：in addition, besides, furthermore,

moreover, in fact, after all, on the other hand, to be honest, in contrast, that is, that is to say, in other words,等等）

句式复杂（长短句搭配使用，尽量使用各类从句，强调句，倒装句虚拟语气等。

比如，文章结尾Only by this way can we要实现的目标.）

语言地道（切忌生硬的将中文翻译成英文，用英语思考）

卷面整洁

一些有用的连接词 （1）表选择关系或对等关系的连接词：either…or…，neither…nor, or, as well as…, and, both…and…。

（2）表因果关系或对等关系的连接词：therefore, so, as a result, as the result of …，because of, due to …,owing to, thanks to等。

篇三：作文技巧及范文

初中作文技巧：

1. 只要不出错误就不会扣分太多，不需要太多文采

2. 用简单、正确的句型表达

3. 如何保证正确？答：用曾经背过、见过的句型。不要用汉语句式来写

4. 不会写的可以不写，或者换句话、换个词来写。

5. 会写的，可以适当多补充、发挥

6 练习写作时，可以查个别词，但是不要整句用翻译软件来做，因为翻译软件还极不成熟，翻译出来的句子结构几乎没有对的，生僻词也是大家很难记住的

7. 写作文应该选好写的题材，而不需完全真实

8. 写作前，先确定时态，保证大方向不出错

9. 写作要有头有尾：先有铺垫，最后有总结，这样结构才比较完整

10. 注意时态、单复数等细节

Dear Mr. Dean,

Now, many students like to talk with their friends by QQ. Is that good or bad for students? Different people have different ideas. So we did a survey on the problem last week. Here are the results：

Some students think that it’s good to chat by QQ. Because chatting by QQ is relaxing. They can talk about any topic they like. And it’s convenient to talk online. What’s more, Chatting by QQ can help them make more friends.

Other students have different ideas. They think what people talk by QQ is really boring. And they believe it’s a waste of time to chat online, because you have to spend more time typing than talking face to face. What’s worse, some students even copy homework by QQ. That’s terrible! Students should do their homework by themselves.

In my opinion, students can use QQ to chat, because it’s kind of interesting, but they shouldn’t use it too long. Anyway, time is valuable, so we shouldn’t waste our time. That’s all for my opinion. What’s your opinion, Mr. Dean? / What do you think, Mr. Dean?

Yours,

Maggie

My Dream

As teenagers, we all have dreams. Some students dream to be teachers, some dream to be doctors and some even dream to fly. Do you know what my dream is? Let me tell you.

I want to be a policeman when I grow up. Because policemen are cool! Thieves are afraid of them. So it’s policemen that make our society safe. (强调句)

How am I going to do that? Well, firstly, I must behave myself, because a man with bad records can never become a policeman. I will never cheat or fight. Secondly, I must study hard, so that I can go to a policemen college and study how to become a good policeman. Thirdly, I must pay attention to my PE marks, because I need to be very strong if I want to be a policeman. Now, I am not strong enough, so I must do exercises every day.

Every one may have different dreams, but any dream requires us to work hard. Do you agree with me？/ Do you think so?

Good Ways to Keep Healthy

Everyone wants to be healthy. But do you know how to keep healthy? Here are three ways that may help.

Firstly, food is important to our health（health是名词，healthy是形容词）. Now we can almost buy any food we like. But it’s important to eat a balanced diet. We should eat more vegetables and fruit. “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” Why don’t you eat apples every day? And we shouldn’t eat too much meat, because too much meat is not good for our health.

Secondly, we should do more exercise. There are many sports that we can do: basketball, football, tennis … If you can’t play ball games, you can just take a walk. It can also make you healthy and energetic.

Thirdly, you should keep happy if you want to stay healthy. Your mood(心情) is important to your health. If you are happy, you can live a longer life. But if you are unhappy every day, you can’t keep in good health. So I advise you to make more friends and talk with your friends. Smile at the people around you, and they will smile at you!

We have a saying in English, “Early to bed, early to rise, makes you healthy, wealthy and wise.” So we should live a regular life. Only in this way, can we keep in good health.（强调句，倒装）

作文（四）

A Talk with Him/ Her

I used to fight with my classmates, so they didn’t like me, but a recent conversation with Mr. Wang changed my life.

Mr. Wang is my head teacher. He is not tall or strong, but he is a good Chinese teacher, so we all like him. After I fought with Tom last week, Mr. Wang asked me to go to his office. I felt nervous at that time. However, he didn’t criticize（批评） me. Instead, he showed me a photo of my mother. He told me that, since(因为) my father had always worked in Beijing, my mother herself had to work hard to send me to school. So she didn’t have much time to spend with me. But she really loved me very much. When I was ill, she felt very worried. When I was happy, she was happy, too. So I shouldn’t make her worried about me anymore.

I felt really moved（感动的) / shocked（震惊的）. Although mom was always good to me, I had never thought that she had given me so much. At that moment, I decided that I would never fight with anyone. In the future, I must study hard and try my best to make my mother happy.

篇四：作文

Group 1、My favorite sport

Today, life’s steps are more faster, for us teenagers, sports are important for both physical and mental health and it also become widespread with people. To us, the basketball maybe the most popular sport form.

No matter you are men or women, young or old, you can play basketball when and where you want. As for me, I often play basketball with my classmates and friends from other classes. Without the huge pressure in high school, in college we have much free time take part in the basketball match. There is on doubt that the NBA is fierce，I like watching it, it enriches my life, what’s more , it makes me enjoy myself .

As for a modern college student , if you want to have a bright future, a healthy body is the base. So, keep exercising , keep moving! （148）

Group 2、My Favorite Sport

Amounts of college students are fond of sports. To be honest, I am not a real sport fan. However, I still have my favorite sport. For example, I like playing football, basketball, tennis and so on, but my favorite sport is swimming.

Last term, I chose a swimming course in PE lessons. I have ever heard it, but never had I put it into practice. By learning excellent sport, swimming has a sight of advantages. First, it can build one’s body. If you swim twice a week, you will improve your vital capacity. In addition, swimming in the pool with classmates can add daily communication. It is good to promote friendship. Last but not least, we live in Hainan Island. It is necessary for us to study swimming. In critical moment, we can save our lives and help others.

Would you like to join us? I am glad to be here to call for everyone to go swimming. （163）

Group 3、My Favorite Sport

Badminton is the most popular sport with people in our country, and I like it very much. I start playing badminton when I was very young, not only is it very popular, but it also made me feel confidence. I practice badminton hard everyday, I won many

prizes in competetions, I was pround of playing badminton from it.

As we all know, many people have partiality for badminton although it is not played as widely as tennis. Badminton is a indoor sport, it help me develop a regular habbit. Playing badminton keeps me fit and happiness. A lot of friends ask me why continue playing badminton even on a Black Friday, “Because it has a mysterious power for myself”I said.

Badminton is my best friend so that we always together,it gives me happiness and I really love it.I think I will hold up to play it. （151）

Group 4、 My favorite sport

As a college student, I have plenty of chances to take part in sports activities regularly. But Idid not any sorts of sports and didn’t like any sports. Until I learn about swimming on the physical education in second semester freshman year. So I deeply love swimming. In other words, my favorite sport is swimming.

The most important reason why I like to go swimmingnow is that it is the best body-shape exercises for me. I think that the reason can attract the most female teenagers and women. In addition, swimming can keep our fit. At risk of falling in water, we can save ourselves and be yourself out of danger. On the other hand ,we can make more frends who like swimming. and our life will be more significance.

In a word ,Swimming make a difference in my life.not only is it good to my health,but it also let me get more wonderful moments.for example , when I have some trouble in studying or making frends,I will get relax by swimming.therefore, it play a very important part to keep balance between learning and entertainment. （191）

Group 5、My Favorite Sports

Swimming is the most popular sport with people. I like swimming , too. Not only is it popular in young and old but it is also a favorite game with workers. Usually, I go to swimming with my friends.

Swimming is my favorite sports. It is not only a form of exercise ,but also a way of entertainment. Including surfing , water polo ,diving, synchronized swimming and so on. All these can bring much pleasure to us. What's more, swimming is the best

way of owning and keeping slim. Last but not least , I think swimming is the best choice in swim hot weather in Hainan. So i like swimming.

In a word, swimming is good for our health and makes our free time more interesting . I hope more people will fall in love the sport of swimming. (145)

Group 6、My favorite sports

Sport is a good entertainment, not only can it build up our body, but it makes people quick thinking.

My favorite sport is swimming, the reason is that swimming is a flexibility sport, although I always swim for a long time, I won’ feel tired , I enjoy the progress. summer swimming can provent the heaatstnoke . Winter swimming can make our body very strong and prevent us catching cold , and a other reason is that if you swim in the water, you will look like a lovely fish ,I like this feel, and the important advantage is that swimming can lose weight, so I like swimming very much.

I took part in swimming class last year in our school, and I have a good performance in the exam, so dear friends, swimming is really good for us , come here and join us! （150）

篇五：作文范文

六级考试的引言型作文仍以三段布局为佳。第一段引出名言，并用通俗的语言简要解释其蕴含的意义。这一段的任务是亮出观点，宜简洁明快，一般不要超过三句话。第二段论证名言的正确性。这一段是作文的重心所在，考生要不惜笔墨把道理讲透。第三段先简要议论，然后提出解决问题的建议，或者号召大家践行这个道理。结尾段虽无实质性分析，却也不可或缺，它会使作文的意思和结构更圆满。

表现形式：名人名言

作文模板

开头：

Understanding of "名言" is the key to success in all fields of activity.

This is a proverb full of logic.

On the contrany, if you can not do like this ,you will have less changes.

中间：

Examples can be easily found to make a case for this proverb.

Take the study of english for example, ...

Another good example is ...

结尾：

To sum up, there can be no achievement which is not based on the understanding of this.

2013年12月英语六级写作范文（一）

The Way to Happiness

When it comes to the topic of “happiness”, the opinions of people usually distinguish from each other, which gives rise to the heated discussion among the public concerning the way to achieve happiness. As the saying

goes,“Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them.” I personally ae that the ability to cope with complications in. Life is the right path of pursuing happiness.

However, how could we deal with daily troubles or even struggles could generate serious concerns? From my perspective, to begin with individuals, optimism could perform an essential character. According to a survey conducted in certain institution in China, the percent of people with optimistic attitudes far outweighs the opposite in the aspects of overcoming dilemmas, thus having better opportunity to achieve the sense of happiness.

In addition, in terms of the society, certain institutions in China should launch relevant caigns to strengthen the emphasis putting on the resolving of a problem, not the way trying to avoid it or even to neglect it. In spite of the fact that this may be a long run, these methods of coping with problems could definitely contribute to happiness in our consistent efforts.

2013年12月英语六级写作范文（二）

Happiness, as the saying has it, is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them. In other words, people can never be happy if they focus on their difficulties and challenges. Simple as the remark may sound, it conveys a thought-provoking notion that happiness is a state of mind not an absence of problems.

First and foremost, it is well known that in order to be strong individual, one needs obstacles to develop one?s strength, just like butterflies which struggle to be free of their cocoon in order for their wings to ome strong enouth to fly.

Furthermore, just because people have a disadvantaged childhood, it does not mean they cannot be successful. Steve Jobs is a case in point. He was abandoned by his biological parents and dropped out of university but still managed to change the world.

To conclude, as the saying goes “You cannot run away from your problems. There is not a place far enouth away.”Consequently, it is advisable for everyone to have a positive attitude toward their problems if they really want to be happy.

2013年12月英语六级写作范文（三）

With regard to happiness, opinions may vary from person to person. Some people take it for granted that happiness is the pursuit of the external materials.

While others choose to stand on the opposite side. As the saying goes,

“Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them.” What the saying illustrates is the significance that happiness derives from the optimistic mind to deal with problems rather than avoid them. Only when we spare every effort to cope with the obstacles and setbacks we are encountered with, can we taste the fruit of success. Those who can suffer years of toil and accumulate experience will genuinely feel happy. For instance, Helen Keller, one of the most world-renowned women writers, who was born deaf and blind, has completed the magnificent works ?If I have three days? with her tenaciousness and persistence.

In my view, we are supposed to show an optimistic attitude and develop the ability to cope with them when we are confronted with the obstacles. I firmly hold the view that you will surely experience the pleasure of happiness the moment you are equipped with the ability to solve the problems.

2013年6月英语六级作文高分版

Keep Our Hearts Strong

As the proverb goes, constant drops wear out the stone. Good habits help pave our way to success. However, during the cultivation of good habits we are frequently

bewildered and baffled by temptations from the world around us. Only when we are alert and determined enough to resist these temptations can we take a right and unswerving road to success.

In our daily life, it is essential for us to be self-disciplined. A healthy lifestyle, which may consist of regular exercise and balanced diet, is what most people are pursuing in contemporary society. Yet many people cannot resist the coziness of staying in and temptation of tasty but fatty food, thus giving up half way cultivating healthy habits and getting decreasingly robust. In addition, our progress in academic performance depends on good habits. We must restrain ourselves from endless entertainment. Otherwise, distracted and indulged, we can never maintain a good learning habit, let alone achieve academic excellence.

In summary, good habits rely on strong hearts that are not disturbed by temptations. With persistence and perseverance, we are heading to success.

【点评】：

本次作文要求以“Good habits result from resisting temptation.”即“良好的习惯源自抵制诱惑”，这一谚语为话题发表议论，在写作时需要对谚语的寓意进行阐释，并且表达自己的

观点和看法，相比更为常见的话题型和观点型作文题来说，有一定的难度。首先要求能够对谚语进行准确的理解，抓住谚语表达的中心意思，明确的提出观点，然后围绕这个意思进行阐述。所以在写作时需要强调抵制诱惑对于保持或者培养良好习惯的重要性，以这一论点进行展开阐述，注意行文的逻辑性和语言的准确、流畅。

2012年六月

2011年12月英语六级作文范文高分版

The Way to Success First essay—stream of thought type

The Way to Success

"Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration." And here comes our question, what is the way to success?

A strong will and great efforts are the most essential two keys to the door of success. Why do people fail to achieve their goal? The reason is that most of them give up halfway due to their lack of a strong will once they encounter any difficulty. A man of a strong will always sticks to his cause no matter how tough it might be.

Would Thomas Edison be such a great man in history if he had done nothing but possessing a strong will? We are all familiar with his story that he had tried one thousand kinds of materials before he finally made his great bulb light up. Without hard effort, Edison might have been a nobody. Without efforts, no one can succeed.

To sum up, a strong will and great efforts can help one open up the way to success. Where there is a will with efforts, there is a way.

【作文解析】

本次六级考试作文题为The way to success，与本次四级考试作文Nothing succeeds without a strong will遥相呼应，大同小异，都是在讨论成功这一话题。

此次六级考试作文的话题依然是老生常谈，即通往成功的道路，相信很多考生对此并不陌生，背过范文的同学写起来肯定也是得心应手。

该范文段落结构清晰，阐释说理也足以让人信服，是一篇不错的作文。

开篇作者通过引用爱迪生关于天才的一句名言来引出问题，吸引读者注意，引起读者的思考。紧随其后，作者就开门见山地亮出了自己的观点：只有坚强的意志和不懈的努力才能打开成功的大门。

第二段，作者同样以一个问题来引领全段，引发思考。然后通过对比不成功和最终成功的人的不同表现，来阐释坚强的意志对获得成功的重要作用。

第三段，作者进一步阐释“仅有坚强的意志，没有实在的努力，也能成功吗？”同样是先发问，然后举了爱迪生的事例，来证明答案是否定的。举名人的例子，而非个人的实例来作为文章的论据才更有说服力，这也是这篇作文的高明之处。

最后一段，作者先以第一句话进行了总结，然后为了加强作文结尾的力度，作者还对名言“Where there is a will, there is way”进行了改编，换成了自己的观点，为我所用，这也是本篇范文的一个两点之处。注意，写作文时对名言进行恰当地改编，不仅能体现幽默创新的一面，同样也体现了作者不错的文字驾驭技巧，考官也是很欢迎这样的文章的。

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