改错作文600字

篇一：出错作文600字

出错作文600字

篇一：出错作文600字

很多人对他人的出错都持一种嘲笑的态度，对先于自己出错的事持一种侥幸心理。有些人害怕出错，有些人厌恶出错。其实想想，出错何尝不是一种人生积极的探索？能常常出错何尝不是一种经常性的>收获？敢于出错的人何尝不是一个积极求索的人？

生活中，我们需要不断探索，所以出错是难免的，我们怎样面对出错后的失败呢？我们需要一种出错的精神。爱迪生在研制电灯的过程中，尝试了两千种不同的材料，但都失败了，但爱迪生却说：“我已经成功了两千次，因为我知道了两千种材料不能用来做灯丝。”

一个在日本求学的中国孩子日语不好，但他上课发言非常积极，他的父母问他“你怎么不怕出错？”孩子回答说：“不怕，老师说教室就是出错的地方。”

敢于尝试，敢于出错才能不断获得新知，出错的精神是一种敢于探索，尝试的精神。能出错就能获得新知、新经验，出错是一种探索。小心翼翼地迈出你的脚，在你放下这只脚的时候，你会想到可能会出错，但是你不放下的话就永远不知道这一步是对还是错。

人生的历程没有固定的模式，就像一个人走在无边无际的大草原上，你要朝着一个正确的方向走，你就将迈出自己的脚，去探出一条路来，但是草原上没有方向标，每个方向都可以走，你只有敢于尝试，不怕出错，去不断地尝试，改正，尝试，才能走出自己的一条路。

如果你在两条路的选择中出错了，那么回过头来重走的时候，你有两个收获：这条路不能走，不是两条路都能走。

出错是经常有的，一个人从幼稚到成熟，从一个未经风雨、不谙世事的孩子到一个饱经风霜、目光深邃的老人，他要出几千次几万次的错。出错的精神就在于不固步自封，敢于尝试，就在于不懈地努力探索，寻求正确的目标。

敢于出错的精神是一种不畏险途、不怕失败、不断探索新知的可贵的精神。

篇二：出错作文600字

错误，是不可避免的，也是每个人在生活中成长的前提。但是，在生活中的错误会带给我们不可代替的启示。

著名科学家爱迪生以发明灯泡而闻名于世界，你可知他发明灯泡做了多少次实验？那几千次实验无一重复，这足以体现他那仔细认真的态度，还有他的坚强。假使他在几次实验后就放弃，或者他并没有想到这个实验，那我们现在还会在明亮的灯光下学习

吗？假设可以，那会在多少年以后？我们这一代会是吗？无怪乎他被称之为发明大王，如果不凭借耐心，大概他的一切发明都不会存在，或许现在的文明会倒退几十年，甚至几百年??

从小到大，犯的错不少，得到的教训也不少。但在这些教训中，我得到了最有价值的经验：数学是强项，但却因为粗心大意，使数学成绩每况愈下。上五年级后的一次考试，本是信心满满，不料，母亲却告诉我，我只打了五十分。果然，老师念成绩那天，第一个不是我，第二个，第三个??当我的名字从老师嘴里蹦出来时，五十个人大惊失色，一个人面不改色，当然，这不包括我。试卷发下来后，我仔细地寻找出错原因，且慢，试卷正面干干净净，一道题也没错，那——一阵迟疑，我将卷子翻了过来，只见一道路程计算题的旁边画了一个超级大叉，还有几行红艳艳的批语：“你做作业时曾经做错过这道题，现在你又做错了，扣你五十分。”十分的题被扣了五十分，从此，我长了记性：同一类型的题，我再也没有错过两次。这个教训虽然使我的数学成绩有所提高，但却并未根除我真正的缺点。

小学毕业时的几次测验，让我改掉了粗心大意的毛病：“负七的绝对值是负七”！相信看过这道题的人会认为这不是一个好学生做的。可巧，它就是我这个在诸多老师眼里所谓的“高材生”所做。这道题的旁边有一行批语：“你错了不该错的题，有必要惩罚一下。”此后我便与几个犯了同样错误的好学生在讲台前与地面为伍，一天中两到三节数学不等，在讲台前一“坐”就是40分钟，双腿多次麻木，一直坐了十余天??

错误可谓是成功路上的绊脚石，一个两个并不起眼，如果你不搬动，它将越积越多；如果你舍不得弯下腰，那么它将成为你不可攀越的山峰??

篇三：出错作文600字

“咯吱、咯吱??”宋朝的军队在雪地上行进着。

将士们身披的重铠上积着森寒的白雪，冻得发紫的嘴唇不停地哆嗦着，然而，那鞘中被擦得雪亮的宝剑“咯咯”的碰撞声分明是响亮的誓言：“不捣黄龙誓不回！”

雪纷纷扬扬铺天盖地地下着，那远方冷峭的雪山白茫茫的一片，只露出青灰色的山尖。西北风厉鬼一般呼号着，卷折了路旁那棵枯木，吹乱了将士帽上的红缨。整个天空就像狰狞的恶魔张着惨白的大口，企图吞噬整片大地。军队仍然前进着，整齐的脚步震撼了整个山谷。

夜幕像一张黑色的网扑来了，带来了那一轮凄冷的月。

营帐里，耀眼的火舌贪婪地跳动着，吞没着木柴，不时“噼啪”地发出响声。

元帅身着盔甲，双手背在身后，不停地走来走去，这到底该怎么办呢？他痛苦地沉思着。

“报——钦差大臣到！”

这已是朝廷发来的第十道金牌了！元帅的眉头锁得更深了。

风猛烈地哭吼着，跳动着的火焰疯狂地闪烁着，像发疯的野兽犀利的双眼，夺人心魄。

西方的冷月在云雾中渐渐淡去，天空开始变白、变亮，一点血红点染了东方。元帅还在思考着：说好了和弟兄们饥餐胡虏肉，渴饮匈奴血；说好了要冲锋陷阵，直捣黄龙；说好了要迎接皇上，报效大宋；说好了??可如今，朝廷却发来了十道金牌命令收兵！

无奈，元帅脸色苍白，眉头紧皱，右手轻轻一挥，低沉地说：“回朝！”

阴霾布满了天空！一个错误的决定从此改变了历史，一个错误的决定造成了一段千古奇冤。悲哉！悲哉！

沙发回目录 保留错误也是一种美

篇四：出错作文600字

在漫漫人生旅途中，很多时候，我们是在错误中成长，在成长时犯错。错误，在某种意义上讲，是成就人生的必然因素。

从我们“惊天动地”来到这个世界，我们就开始犯错，在一个又一个错误中，我们逐渐让这个陌生的世界成为我们所熟悉而温馨的家园。错误中，我们会跌跌撞撞走路；错误中，我们会咿咿呀呀说话；错误中，我们用稚嫩的双手，写字画画；错误中，我们会用我们浅薄的智慧去赢得老师家长的夸耀；错误中，我们便会用手指敲打键盘，我们可以用我们的腿脚博得阵阵喝彩；错误中，我们学会用属于自己的知识步入竞争的行列。

我们都在被纠正错误中长大，懂事，成熟。可是生活中，保留一些错误却可以创造生活的美好。

身为劳动农民的父亲，在他孩子面前吹牛说他读书的时候英文可了得，孩子不服气。当父亲把那些英文字母乱说一气的时候，孩子咯咯地大笑。父亲的错误成为了逗乐孩子的方式，这难道不也是另一种爱的表达方式吗？

孩子一天为自己准备了一个大红苹果，而当父亲看到时，却“自做多情”地说：“这个苹果是给爸爸准备的吗？真懂事！”而孩子用孩子最天真的笑容清脆地说：“是的，爸爸。你吃吧！”这又是一个错误，却是一个美丽的错误。这错误，铸就了美丽真挚的亲情。谁能说，这错误需要纠正呢？相信，在以后，孩子想到就不仅仅是自己而已了。

不是错误都要纠正，不是纠正了就是正确的。有时候，错误也是>幸福与美丽的一种特殊路标。保留下某些错误的痕迹吧，那是另一种美丽的所在！

篇二：改变作文600字

改变作文600字

改变作文600字（一）

“我可以改变世界，改变自己??”因花儿的改变，花园变得芬芳；因河水的改变，小溪变得清澈；因星星的改变，蓝天变得绚丽。当然我们不可能改变人类生活的世界，只能改变属于自己的世界。

取得成功，从改变做起。

当成绩不理想时，我们不可以改变成绩，但可以改变心情。让自己自信，去迎接下一次考试。

我们不可以样样顺利，但可以事事尽力。

我们不可以改变时间，但可以把握时间。经过月考暴风雨的洗礼，我决定在沉默中爆发，改变自己。找到适合自己的状态，适合自己的心情，适合自己的方法去迎接下一次挑战。也许，对我来说，改变无疑是我最恰当的选择！

三国时，吕蒙因听了孙权的劝告，而发奋读书，令鲁肃刮目相看，他增长了才干与智慧，不再是当年吴国的大将了！

丑小鸭，虽然遭到了嘲笑，但它改变心态，面对嘲笑，不放弃，勇敢执着的追求属于自己的未来！

最终因自身的改变而变成了一只美丽的白天鹅。

吕蒙、丑小鸭的>故事告诉我，改变自己很重要。

我要改变自己，让自己变得坚强，不再因为成绩而在默默流泪，而是将泪水转化为动力，勇往直前，在下一次挑战中，改变分数！

我要改变自己，让自己变得快乐，不再因为不开心的事情而痛苦，开心就笑，不开心就过会在笑，而是将痛苦转化为力量，激励自己，改变心态！

从现在起，我要改变自己，要做让人铭记的第一，不做让人遗忘的第二！

改变作文600字（二）

有一位教师曾经问过学生这样一个问题：“你们可以在一天之内改变你们自己吗？”学生们都异口同声的答：“当然可以！”这位教师又笑着问：“那同样也是一天，你们谁可以改变这个世界？”顿时，学生们炸开了锅，有的人面带窘迫说不行，有的人

则是大笑。

曾经有位英国圣公会教主的墓碑上写着这样一段话：当我年轻时，我梦想改变这个世界。当我发现这个世界是不能改变的，于是我将眼光放得短浅些，那只改变我的国家吧！但我的国家似乎也是我无法改变的。当我到了晚年，抱着最后一丝希望，决定只改变我的家庭，我亲近的人，但是，他们根本不接受改变。在我临终之际，我才突然意识到：如果起初我去改变我自己，接着我就可以改变我的家人，有了希望也许就能改变我的国家，也许连整个世界都可以改变。

英国圣公会教主墓碑上的碑文已经告诉了我们：改变世界就要从改变我们自身开始。

如果一个学生要直接改变世界是难的，但是，如果让他去改变自己，这应该是容易的。试想，这个学生改变自己颓废的学习态度，制定了一个适己的学习计划，努力学习，成绩有了很大的提高，老师便在各个班级表扬他的勤奋学习，并鼓励大家像他一样刻苦钻研，于是许多对学习“绝望”的学生们有了动力和希望，加快了努力的步伐??每个班级都涌现出了一批批的“学习能手”，整个班级踊跃的学习气氛带动了整个学校，于是这种学习气氛广泛传播，后来的事大家都可以想到——这个学生因为改变了自己而成功的“改变”了世界。所以说，改变世界是说难也不难，说易也不易的。

改变自己，就要改变我们的心态。当一位普通的记者想到了要伸张正义、打击奸商，而不是和他们同流合污时，当他把揭露三鹿奶粉质量问题的报道写入报刊的那一刻，世界因他而更加正义??

改变自己，就要提高自身的素质。不论是你的同学、老师、同事、朋友做出了什么“素质低下”的行为，你都要严于律己，守纪律、尊规则、讲文明，世界因你而更加和谐??

希望我们每个人，都能好好地认识、反省、改变自己，让自己成长起来，让自己卓越起来。每个“自己”都在改变，世界何愁不变成美好的人间？

改变作文600字（三）

记得我上一年级的时候，我总是被爸爸妈妈那>温暖的大手轻轻地牵着，一次又一次的走过那条早已轻车熟路的小巷。

时光流逝，学校里的那棵松树周而复始的成长着，我也迎来了四年级。同学们的改变很大，个个都长高了许多，看起来有点小伙子、小姑娘的味道了。但走出校门时的脸色与以前相比好象略显疲倦了，书包好像也重了不少，??一切都在变化着。

记得有一次，我在回家的路上碰见了同学，第二天我拉着爸爸妈妈的手回家的事被他们在教室里传开了，成为了他们的笑柄。当时，我感觉脸上热热的，恨不得马上离开教室不上课了。一回到家我就对爸爸妈妈说：“以后我再也不要你们送我上学了。”现在想来，真是一件很傻的事情。之后，在我每天独自去上学之前，总会听到爸爸和妈妈

的>唠叨。直到有一天，我终于爆发了：“你们可不可以不要再烦了！”他们听到这话愣了一下，很吃惊地看着我，看上去好像是一脸的茫然。再之后的每一天里，我再也没有听到一丝的唠叨声，而是每天在我的书包里多了一张小纸条，上面清楚的写着“轩轩过马路要小心，上课要认真。”等诸如此类的话语。同学们看到后都很羡慕我有这么好的父母，我自然就十分的自豪。

当我再次的提出让他们送我去上学时，他们再一次的惊愕了。当我再一次的拉着父亲的手走过那小巷子时，无意中发现父亲的白发又多了些许，手好像也越来越粗糙了，但不变的仍是他那温暖的脸庞与双手，还有他那让我暖心的话语。

时间让我和父母都改变了很多，但唯一不变的是那永远都不会改变的爱。

篇三：改错,作文

短文改错

I was recent told that listening to loud music is gradually making people hard of hearing. I'm sure it has already been happened to my neighbor. For years she has turned a deaf ear to my requests to turn her radio down. When she gave a party she isn't have to invite the rest of the street. Everyone can dance in her music in his own room. Now a scientist has discovered a certain electronic sounds have strange effects on rats. He declares they break down; almost paralyze(瘫) with legs trembled. Then it is simply a matter of throwing them out by their tail. I wonder if the same thing will happen to my neighbor some day. 书面表达

Can money buy happiness? 有人认为金钱是幸福，有人认为金钱不能买到很多珍贵的东西，比如时间和友情。作为高中生的你一定有自己的理解。请认真思考这句话，然后按要求用英语写一篇短文。

内容要求： 1. 你的观点； 2. 议论说明； 3. 恰当的结尾。

词数：120左右

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1.______ 2.______ 3.______ 4.______ 5.______ 6.______ 7.______ 8.______ 9.______ 10.______

短文改错：

1. recent→recently 2.去掉been 3.√

4. gave→gives 5. isn't→doesn't 6. 第一个in→to 7. 去掉a

8. with后加their

9. trembled→trembling 10.tail→tails

书面表达

Can money buy happiness? Different people have different opinions. It is true that with enough money one can buy all the things one wants, and live a life of comfort and security. However, it is equally true that lack of money causes great distress. It is a common view that "money is the root of all evil." The pursuit of money drives many people to cheat and steal. In some places there is nothing that cannot be bought with money, resulting in corrupt societies where everybody is miserable. Money does not necessarily mean happiness. It all depends on how it is used. If we make honest and sensible use of money, it can be a stepping-stone to happiness. Although money cannot buy happiness, it can make happiness possible if it is employed sensibly.

篇四：作文改错

题目：Many parents these days work in other countries, taking their families with them. Do you think the advantages of the development outweigh its disadvantages?

ESSAY：

Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned with the phenomenon that more and more parents go to overseas for working with their family. Some people hold the opinion that parents working abroad, in particular, is not good for their family even their children. Some others, in the other hand, advocate that parents taking their families is necessary when they work in other countries. However, as for me, a better way to accompany their families is to go abro

ad together.

Some people believe that parents should not go abroad for working, taking their family with them. In the first place, leaving their own country, they may face some situation what is too strange to understand when they reach other countries for the first time. In the second place, the competition in foreign company is cruel; they have to spend more time on working, so that they can not take care of their family as in their own country.

However, further analysis would make it clear that increasing number of income will be earned for improvement their life. In the first place, more money means that they can provide better educational resource for their children. Not only they will learn rich culture of other country, but also they experience the local customs and practices. For example, American born Chinese, in particular, they live in a traditional Chinese family but they study in the American high school or college. So, they got some advantages of those two entirely different culture.

In summary, I think that it is a good idea to work in other countries wit their family. Many parents these days work in other countries, taking their families with them. Do you think the advantages of the development outweigh its disadvantages?

这篇文章题目有一定的难度，但是他还是取得了7.5分的写作绝对高分。请大家重点看他的语言使用（Lexical Resources).

In the contemporary world, the pace of globalization is advancing at a meteoric speed. Accordingly, some people propose that a lingua franca should be contrived for individuals all over the world to conduct international communication; however, people hold divergent views when it comes to this issue. Personally, I tend to believe that it is meaningless to simply compare the merits and drawbacks of inventing a universal language as both sides are not ignorable.

Compelling arguments can be made that different languages, undoubtedly, cause obstacles and misunderstandings in conversation, restricting the native to communicate with foreigners. In contrast, a universal language may not only bring about convenience for individuals in their daily life, learning and working, but promote joint development the world over, smooth the talk between nations and drive societal advance as well. For example, college students are expected to no longer rely on mechanical translation software when downloading foreign essays and material and companies can economize their costs and budget because it is unnecessary for them to hire simultaneous interpreters. Meanwhile, foreign countries are accessible to travelers due to the fact that individuals no longer fret about cultural shock and linguistic obstacles. Consequently, contriving a fresh language is sure to produce profits for both the public and countries from all over the world.

However, admittedly, notwithstanding the reality that a lingua franca has a variety of advantages, we should still be consciously aware of its downsides. For one thing, on the basis of recent research and statistics, the vernacular and lesser-known languages are disappearing at a staggering rate. And it seems that under the huge impact of dominant languages, like the proliferation of English, the extinction of lesser-known languages are just around the corner. For the other thing, some experts and scholars are anxious about the phenomenon that cultural assimilation may give rise to global uniformity, rendering life become dull and monotonous. Traditions, rites, rituals, mores and the language of a culture are all unifying forces of a nation and the decline of them erodes the national identity and national pride of a country.

Overall, based on what has been discussed above, I feel whether to contrive a new language is a sophisticated issue which we are well-advised to take varying aspects into account before we make the final decision.

J9T2 TASK1

The bar chat gives the information about the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in United kingdom ,divided into three different call types, during the period from 1995 to 2002.

According to the bar chart,the minutes which used on fixed line local call type saw an upward trend gradually from 1995 to 1999 .In 1995 it coasted 72billon minutes on local-fixed line and it peaked at 90 billion minutes until 1999 .However ,in the rest 3 years , the figure experienced a downward trend , with 85 billion minutes in 2000, 79 billion minutes in 2001 and 72 billion minutes in 2002 . It is interesting that the figure in 2002 has fallen back to 72, which was as high as the figure in 1995.

As the other call types are concered , over the 8 years between 1995 and 2002 , the figure of national and international-fixed line and mobiles-all calls increased

respectively. We can see that in 1995, the figure of national and international-fixed was only 38, with the slight increase , in 2002 ,it reached its peak at 61 billion

minutes .As for the figure of mobiles , it saw an significant upward on the bar chart , with the figure only 4 in 1995 ,while it peaked at 46 in 2002.

To sum up , from the bar chart ,we can find that during the period from 1995 to 2002 , the total number of minutes of telephone calls in the United Kingdom saw different trend by three different categories differently.

TASK2:

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity ,improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children).

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years , some high schools order their students must participate in the unpaid community service as attending a compulsory course which would be scored by their teachers . I disagree this totally , although some people belive that unpaid community service should be a required part of high school programmes.

Admittedly , participation in some unpaid community services such as working for a charty , improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children can bring some benefits to high school teenagers. It can forster students to become a kind person with sympathe mind , can help them to understand how to communicate with different people , can make them be exposed to other people’s harshtime by

witnessting the disabled children , poor person as well as many other disadvantaged groups .Besides , attending some unpaid community services can improve students practical skills as well as job skills.

Nevertheless , taking part in unpaid community services does not need become a

compulsory part of high school programmes .Undoubtedly, it is a excellent thing to do

unpaid community service , while if students were obligated to do this , with the reluctant emotion to do this , the effect would be discounted .Specifically , some

students have too much workload on study to accomplish, it is difficult to ask them to throw away their major task ,then turn to help others with a happy mood . In

addition ,some teenagers are in some disadvantaged circumstance such as disabled or poor as well. How can we ask them to help others and who can secure them ?

From my perspective , it does not make any sense to put unpaid community service as a compulsory course.

J7T4Task 1:

The four pie charts compare the information about units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.

From the two pie charts ,which show units of electricity by fuel source in

Australia ,we can see over 20 year period between 1980 and 2000, the total production increased by 70 units. The units of electricity by coal increased

significantly by 80 units, and the units of electricity by hydro power rised slightly by 16 units .By contrast, the usage of natural gas saw a downward during the 20 years by 18 units. In addition, the fuel oil also decreased by 8 unites.

According the other two charts, the total production of units of electricity by fuel source in France increased by 90 units during the 20 year period from 1980 to 2000. The usage of nuclear power only 15 units in 1980, while it increased 111 units to 126 units in 2000.Besides, the oil increased slightly by 5 units. In contrast, the usage of natural gas and hydro power decreased by 23 units and 3 units respectively. As for the coal, it remained stable at 25 units.

Comparing with the units of electricity by fuel source in Australia and France , these two countries ,the variant of total production almost similar , while the changes of the fuel sources was different in two countries.

Task2: Some people think that universities should provide graduates with knowledge and skills needed in the workplace .Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake , regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer.

What , in your opinion ,should be the main function of a university?

Nowadays, it is not uncommon that many people dropout from universities or even go to career path after high school graduation. They think the university only can bring the theoretical knowledge to them, while that can’t help their employment prospects. From my perspective, the university should still mainly give access to knowledge for its own sake ,regardless of whether the course is useful to an employment.

In other words, I think the main function of a university should be enable students to acquire theoretical knowledge rather than the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace, because the adequate theoretical knowledge can lay foundation for practical knowledge, can open the door for better career prospects. In people’s job lives, the certification of their profession, the acknowledge of their degree, the high scores of their subjects and even the high speaking by students’ faculties are all contribute to their career path, whereas these factors all can be acquired by the theoretical knowledge’s study.

Furthermore, with the main function of a university to give access to theoretical knowledge ,the university should also provide some opportunities for students to training their job skills and acquire some practical knowledge of employment. The universities can offer some courses for students learning practical knowledge, the faculties of universities can recommend students to do some part-time job when their study schedule are not over-whelmed.

To sum up ,my point of view is that the main function of a university is to open a door for students to acquire theoretical knowledge so as to lay a solid foundation for their career prospects.

J7T4Task 1:

The four pie charts compare the information about units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.

From the two pie charts ,which show units of electricity by fuel source in

Australia ,we can see over 20 year period between 1980 and 2000, the total production increased by 70 units. The units of electricity by coal increased

significantly by 80 units, and the units of electricity by hydro power rise slightly by 16 units .By contrast , the usage of natural gas saw a downward during the 20 years by 18 units. In addition, the fuel oil also decreased by8 unites.

According the other two charts, the total production of units of electricity by fuel source in France increased by 90 units during the 20 year period from1980 to 2000. The usage of nuclear power only 15 units in 1980 ,while it increased 111 units to 126 units in 2000.Besides , the oil increased slightly by 5 units . In contrast , the usage of natural gas and hydro power decreased by 23 units and 3 units respectively. As for the coal ,it remained stable at 25units.

Comparing with the units of electricity by fuel source in Australia and France, these two countries ,the variant of total production almost similar , while the changes of the fuel sources was different in two countries.

篇五：改错与作文

改错一

Ladies and gentlemen,

May I have your attentions, please? Now we are looking for a passenger, Mr. Brown, he is

from America. And he’s now leaving Beijing to America on Flight 2748. But we were told Mr.

Brown left his passport as good as his wallet in Friendship Hotel where he had stayed in.

The manager of a hotel telephones to tell us about it. He has just sent his secretary to bring

the passport and the wallet here, but she will come soon. Will Mr. Brown please go the gate

of our airport and wait for his passport and wallet? She'll arrive in ten minutes.

答案：attentions→attention he→who to→for good→well 去掉in a→the

telephones→ telephoned but→and go后加to his→your

改错二：

Our city changed a lot in the past 5 years. More highways have been built, that makes it

very convenient for people to travel. Many high buildings have been appeared, which are

modern and beautiful. As the result, people’s living conditions has been greatly improved.

Many families have got cars of their own. And they can enjoy them when traveling on holidays.

They lead a rich and colorful life. Mobile phone and computers are very usually now. But it is

easier for people to keep in touch with each other than before. More and more foreign

companies have started factories here. How a happy life it is, I think.

答案：

changed前加has that→which

usually→usual How?what

去掉been the→a has? have them→themselves phone→phones But? and

作文一

假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Mike 写信给你，想多了解“星光大道”这个电视节目的

情况。请你根据以下提示，给他写一封回信，并鼓励他去参加这个节目。

1. “星光大道”在中国是家喻户晓的节目。

2. 大众节目，想展示才艺的人都可参加。

3. 表演形式：唱歌、跳舞、演奏乐器或其它才艺表演。

4. 一个叫“郝歌”的外国朋友在2006年还获了三等奖。

5. 鼓励他也去参加这个节目。

注意：1.字数在100字左右。2.可适当发挥。3. 开头的句子已给出（不计入总字数）。

参考词汇：才艺表演 Talent Show

Dear Mike,

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One possible version:

Dear Mike,

I am very glad that you are interested in the CCTV programme “Avenue of Stars”. This programme is a household name in China, which is intended for ordinary people who want to show their talent in performance, including foreign friends. There are various forms of performance, such as singing, dancing, playing musical instruments and other kinds of Talent Show. Many people have become famous through this programme, especially an African singer named Hao Ge ,who loves music. He can sing Chinese songs very well, which makes him stand out and win the 3rd prize in 2006.

I know you have a gift for singing and dancing, and why not have a try?

作文二：

假如你在台湾当导游，有几个美国游客问起来钓鱼岛的事情，请你用英语来对钓鱼岛做一下简介。包括一下要点：

1. 钓鱼岛是钓鱼岛群岛的主要岛屿, 自古以来是中国的领土。

2. 它位于中国东海。距离温州356公里，距离基隆市190公里。

3. 它占据4.3838平方公里水域，周围水域17平方公里。

3. 由于周知的美国和二战的原因，中日开始就钓鱼岛产生争端。

4. 2012年9月10日，中国政府开始对钓鱼岛进行监控。

字数：100字左右

参考词汇： 领土：territory 基隆: Keelung 争端：dispute

答案：

Diaoyu island is the main island of Diaoyu islands, which has been China's territory since ancient times. Lots of evidence has proved it. Diaoyu island, which is located in the East China sea, lies about 356 km away from Wenzhou City as well as about 190 kilometers from Keelung City. It has（occupies） an area of 4.3838 square kilometers with the surrounding sea area of about 17 square kilometers. Due to the fact that In the WWII, the United States "gave" the Diaoyu island to Japan, the Diaoyu islands dispute arose between China and Japan. On September 10, 2012 , the Chinese government began to carry out monitoring it.

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