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篇一:十段无声告白中富有电影张力的文字

2014年,80后华裔女作家伍绮诗(Celeste Ng)凭借其处女作《Everything I Never Told You》(中文译名《无声告白》)登上Amazon年度最佳图书榜首。

关于《无声告白》的几个数字

2 代

伍绮诗(Celeste Ng)在美国宾夕法尼亚州和俄亥俄州长大,父母均为科学家的她,是香港移民第2代。

6 年

伍绮诗耗时6年才完成《无声告白》

9 项

本书2014年获得除亚马逊年度图书外的9项美国图书大奖

10 天

电子版本正式发售10天便登上中国亚马逊电子书总榜第一

Everything I Never told You

译名:无声告白

作者: Celeste Ng

出版社: Penguin Press HC

出版年: 2014-6-26

页数: 304

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近日据悉,《Everything I Never Told You》的影视版权卖给了第86届奥斯卡最佳影片提名作品《Dallas Buyers Club》的制片人Robbie Brenner。

身份危机、人生成就、种族、性别、家庭、个人道路

伍绮诗在《Everything I Never Told You》中表达如此多严肃主题的同时,并不疏于对场景和人物的刻画。

在此收集了十个富有电影张力的,期待电影呈现方式的书中片段。

Upstairs, Marilyn opens her daughter’s door and sees the bed unslept in: neat hospital corners still pleated beneath the comforter, pillow still fluffed and convex.

Nothing seems out of place. Mustard-colored corduroys tangled on the floor, a single rainbow-striped sock. A row of science fair ribbons on the wall, a postcard of Einstein. Lydia’s duffel bag crumpled on the floor of the closet. Lydia’s green bookbag slouched against her desk. Lydia’s bottle of Baby Soft atop the dresser, a sweet, powdery, loved-baby scent still in the air. But no Lydia.

楼上,玛丽琳打开女儿房间的门,发现床上似乎没有人睡过————羽绒被下面是边角折叠整齐的床单,枕头松软凸起,没有丝毫凌乱的痕迹。地板上胡乱扔着一条深黄色条绒裤子和一只彩虹条纹的袜子。墙上挂着科学展颁发的绶带,还有一张印着爱因斯坦头像的明信片。莉迪亚的帆布旅行袋堆在衣柜旁边的地板上,皱成一团,她的绿色书包摊放在书桌上。梳妆台上是莉迪亚的“柔宝宝”乳霜瓶,空气中还飘散着婴儿护肤品特有的香甜气味。然而莉迪亚却不见了。

莉迪亚消失的那个清晨,这里应该用大量的特写,配合着玛丽琳主观视角的摇镜头,镜头的移动速度和房间的光影变幻都是玛丽琳情绪变化的关键。——— 屋中的一切都恰到好处,却又像在遮掩着什么。

Morning sun fills the house, creamy as lemon chiffon, lighting the insides of cupboards and empty closets and clean, bare floors. Marilyn looks down at her hands, empty too and almost aglow in the sunlight. She lifts the phone and dials her husband’s number.

上午的阳光洒满房间,有着柠檬戚风蛋糕般的细腻质感,照亮了碗柜、空衣橱的内部和光洁的地板。玛丽琳低头看看自己的手,在阳光的照耀下,空空的掌心反射出柔和的光芒。她拿起电话,拨了丈夫的号码。

詹姆斯极度渴望着融入,他娶玛丽琳的原因是她“很美国”,玛丽琳发觉到莉迪亚的消失,便拨通了詹姆斯的电话,当然是先前对自己一番审视过后。

“Stay still,” he says. “There’s something in your hair.” Her hair is cool and a little damp, not quite dry from her morning shower. Louisa holds quite still, her eyes open and fixed on his face. It’s not a flower petal, as he’d first thought. It’s a ladybug, and as he picks it out, it tiptoes, on threadlike yellow legs, to hang upside down from his fingernail.

“别动,”他说,“你头发上有东西。”她的头发凉凉的,又有点漏,似乎早晨淋浴后没有完全擦干。路易莎一动不动地睁大眼睛,盯着他的脸。不是花瓣,他想,是一直瓢虫,他把它摘了下来。瓢虫撑起细如丝线的小黄腿,踮着脚尖,倒挂在他的指甲上。

路易莎和詹姆斯的动作里,若有若无地参杂着对两人关系的暗示,詹姆斯表面上维持着一贯的谨慎,路易莎则将这份谨慎全力地印在眼中。

The man setting his papers on the lectern was youngish and thin, but that was as close as he came to what they all had pictured. An Oriental, she thought. She had never seen one in person before. He was dressed like an undertaker: black suit, black tie knotted tight, shirt so white it glowed. His hair was slicked back and parted in a perfect pale line,but one wisp stood straight up in back, like an Indian chief’s feather. As he started to speak, he reached up with one hand to smooth down the cowlick, and someone snickered.

而眼前这个把讲义放在讲台上的人,却非常青涩瘦削,不过,仅凭年龄还不至于让他们如此震惊。一个东方人,她想。她之前从未亲眼见过东方人。他打扮得像个送葬的,一身黑西装,黑领带系得很紧,衬衫白得耀眼,头发向后梳,整齐地一分为二,但后面有一撮顽强地直竖着,如同印第安酋长头上戴的羽毛。开口讲话时,他伸出一只手,想把那撮头发抿回去,下面有学生偷偷笑起来。

回顾玛丽琳第一次见詹姆斯的场景,在玛丽琳的眼中:东方人、素装、哈佛、呆毛,一切都是与众不同的同义词。

Louisa’s smile vanishes.

“I’m sorry,” she says. “My phone’s actually not working right now.”

She looks desperately at Marilyn, as if wishing she would just give up and go away. Marilyn waits, letting Louisa fidget. Her hands have stopped shaking. Inside she feels a quiet smoldering rage.

篇二:2007年高考完形填空专练1--20篇

2007年高考完形填空专练1--20篇

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阅读下面短文,掌握其大意,然后从1-20各题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中,选出最佳选项。(共20小题,每小题1.5分,满分30分)

I told her everything that had happened to me in Dr Webber‘s secret brain-research Lab. out on the other side of Crystal Town. I showed her the photos I had taken with a hidden micro-camera. I told her about my best friend-Plummet-who had with me. I told her how he was afraid to come to the police. She again.

“Don‘t you worry, Mr. Serge. You‘ve got nothing to from us. If you can take us to this Research Lab, we will come with you and close the place down. This Dr Webber sounds very ”Her words were like music to my ears. I with relief. Twenty minutes later, we were on a boat, racing back across Piccadilly Lake, on our way back to the Research Lab, with six officers, all with nerve guns.

The of Dr Webber being shot with a nerve gun and arrested made me very . -but I was also frightened. back to that place was the last thing I wanted to do. I suddenly felt very and watched the paraliders (滑翔机)and balloons by over head. They must have banned (禁止)motor vehicles from the London sky I was away.

It was much more up there. Better than the noisy jet-cars and helicopters (直升飞机)that used to block out the in my ear.

“Serge! Wake up! ”

It was Plummet, talking into my tiny micro-radio. He had been me from the roof of a nearby tower-block. “”

1. A. quickly B. secretly C. excitedly D. frequently

2. A. escaped B. stayed C. suffered D. struggled

3. A. stopped B. cried C. rested D. smiled

4. A. fear B. ask C. keep D. steal

5. A. after all B. on time C. at last D. right now

6. A. interesting B. powerful C. dangerous D. strange

7. A. chatted B. sighted C. laughed D. said

8. A. research B. fishing C. travel D. police

9. A. covered B. armed C. carried D. brought

10. A. thought B. idea C. sight D. dream

11. A. sleepy B. surprised C. happy D. nervous

12. A. Walking B. Sailing C. Going D. Running

13. A. hopeless B. tired C. excited D. sick

14. A. flying B. passing C. moving D. floating

15. A. while B. because C. where D. since

16. A. peaceful B. beautiful C. gentle D. natural

17. A. Lab B. boat C. sky D. place

18. A. shouting B. whispering C. speaking D. sounding

19. A. calling B. watching C. following D. expecting

20. A. Hurry up B. Get up C. Wake up D. Look up

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阅读下面短文,掌握其大意,然后从文后各题所给的四个选项(A、B、C和D)中,选出最佳选项。(共20

小题,每小题1.5分,满分30分)

Good Heart to Lean on

More than I realized, Dad has helped me keep my balance.

When I was growing up, I was embarrassed (尴尬的) to be seen with my father. He was severely disabled and

very___1___,and when we would walk together, his hand on my arm for___2___, people would stare. I would inwardly

feel uncomfortable at the unwanted___3___.If he ever noticed or was bothered, he never___4___that he knew.

It was__5___to coordinate (cooperate ) our steps — his hesitant, mine impatient — and because of that, we

didn‘t___6___much as we went along. But as we started out, he always said,"You set the___7___.I will try to follow you."

Our usual walk was to or from the subway, which was___8___he got to work. He went to work despite illness and

nasty weather. He almost never missed a day and would___9___it to the office even if others could not. A matter of___10___.

He never talked about himself as an object of pity, nor did he show any envy of the more fortunate or___11___.

What he looked for___12___others was a "good heart", and if he found one, the___13___was good enough for him.

Now that I am older, I believe that his idea is a proper___14___by which to judge people, even though

I___15___don‘t know exactly what a "good heart" is.___ 16___I know the times I don‘t have one myself.

He has been gone many years now, but I think of him often. I wonder if he___17___I was unwilling to be seen with

him during our___18___. Now that I am older, I‘m sorry that I never told him how sorry I was for my feeling___19___be with him in public and how unworthy I felt to be his daughter. I think of him when I complain about trifles (something unimportant ), when I am envious of another‘s good fortune, and when I don‘t possess a "good heart".

At such times I put my hand on his arm to___20___my balance, and say, "You set the pace. I will try to follow you."

1.A.strong B.energetic C.short D.handsome

2.A.balance B.strength C.comfort D.courage

3.A.care B.attention C.situation D.friendship

4.A.hoped B.found C.liked D.showed

5.A.easy B.difficult C.possible D.necessary

6.A.see B.pay C.say D.give

7.A.rule B.time C.step D.pace

8.A.how B.why C.when D.where

9.A.get B.make C.take D.walk

10.A.joy B.faith C.belief D.pride

11.A.rich B.successful C.able D.hardworking

12.A.on B.in C.at D.with

13.A.owner B.keeper C.winner D.other

14.A.method B.value C.standard D.level

15.A.yet B.also C.ever D.still

16.A.And B.But C.Now D.Then

17.A.sensed B.smelled C.agreed D.recognized

18.A.walks B.talks C.stays D.visits

19.A.afraid B.proud C.ashamed D.disappointed

20.A.find B.keep C.refill D.regain

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阅读下面短文,从短文后所给各题的四个选项(A、B、C和D)中,选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。

The story goes that some time ago, a man had a very lovely little daughter. One day the man 1 his 3-year-old daughter for a roll of gold wrapping paper. Money was tight and he became when the child tried to decorate a the next morning and said, "This is for you, Daddy."

The man was by his earlier , but his anger flared again when he found out the box was . He yelled at her, stating, "Don‘t you know, when you give someone a present, there is to be something inside?" The little girl looked at him with tears in her eyes and cried, "Oh, Daddy, it‘s not empty . I blew kisses into the box. They are all for you, Daddy."

The father was crushed. He .Only a short time later, an and

whenever he was discouraged, he would take out an there. In a very real sense, each one of us, as human beings, has been given a gold container unconditional love and kisses...from our children, family members, friends and God. There is simply no other , anyone could hold, more

1. A. asked B. praised C. begged D. punished

2. A. wasting B. stealing C. selling D. holding

3. A. glad B. angry C. sad D. upset

4. A. room B. hall C. box D. ball

5. A. Nevertheless B. But C. Therefore D. And

6. A. father B. mother C. teacher D. sister

7. A. puzzled B. surprised C. scared D. embarrassed

8. A. overwork B. overreaction C. overcoat D. overpass

9. A. empty B. heavy C. full D. wet

10. A. happened B. seemed C. supposed D. used

11. A. down B. back C. up D. forward

12. A. at all B. after all C. above all D. in all

13. A. put B. turned C. handed D. gave

14. A. kindness B. forgiveness C. sadness D. carelessness

15. A. overcoat B. incident C. accident D. action

16. A. days B. months C. nights D. years

17. A. imaginary B. kind C . gentle D. warm

18. A. filled with B. pleased with C. crowded with D. equipped with

19. A. world B. feeling C. possession D. love

20. A. expensive B. precious C. comfortable D. interesting

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阅读下面短文,掌握其大意,然后从1—20各题所给的四个选项(A、B、C和D)中,选出最佳选项。

The earthquake and tsunami(海啸)in the Indian Ocean last week caused great damage.The

UN secretary—general Kofi Annan says helping is a race time. aid must hurry and provide it.The offers around four thousand million dollars.

The concern(关注)about offers of international aid is based on .For example, countries and groups offered hundreds of millions of dollarsof assistance when Bam,Iran suffered from the earthquake in 2003.The UN says it has confirmed(证实)only about seventeen mil1ion dollars in aid has been received Governments and organizations that offered help dispute(提出异议)that, .

On Thursday Mister Annan met with the world leaders in Indonesia.They discussed the of delaying some debt by affected nations.But some of the leaders said that making direct to survivors would be more helpful.

The UN aid official has said the number of the dead will be“much ”than 115,000.

The official adds that about a half-million people are .The WHO has clean water along with food and medicines needed to help prevent the of disease.

Representatives of 26 countries and international organizations attended the meeting in Jakarta.

Officials say they will work together to a tsunami warning system.

A small group of countries including the United States began to direct aid efforts after the

of December twenty-sixth.Now American officials say the group is being suspended(暂停)so theUN can start to take .

On Friday Kofi Annan expressed at the destruction(毁坏).He said he had never seen

such destruction he saw on Sumatra.In his words,“Where are the ?"

1.A.in B.against C.on D.behind

2.A.supported B.offered C.given D.devoted

3.A.add up to B.add to C.add in D.add on

4.A.society B.politics C.culture D.history

5.A.amount B.value C.worth D.total

6.A.80 far B.as far C.by far D.too far

7.A.however B.besides C.moreover D.therefore

8.A.1evel B.idea C.fact D.importance

9.A.demanded B.given C.paid D.owed

10.A.suggestions B.payments C.money D.offers

11.A.smaller B.higher C.1ower D.bigger

12.A.drowned B.injured C.killed D.buried

13.A.called for B.called in C.called up D.called on

14.A.increase B.death C.shock D.spread

15.A.carry B.get C.develop D.do

16.A.things B.events C.accidents D.matters

17.A.step B.method C.control D.measure

18.A.disappointment B.shock C.astonishment D.sorrow

19.A.as B.before C.after D.when

20.A.1eaders B.soldiers C.police D.people

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阅读下面短文,掌握其大意,然后从1—20各题所给的四个选项(A、B、C和D)中,选出最佳选项。

A friend of mine met with an accident driving in darkness. His legs were so hurt that he couldn‘t move. What was

the was he found himself unable to ask for help — his mobile phone went out of as a result of exhausted (用尽的)battery. Nothing could be done but to in cold wilderness. It was 8 hours later that day broke, and then the of the rescue.

that he could stand the horror in the darkness for so long. Even more surprising was his : "First of all I checked up my conditions and found myself not in mortal (致命的)danger. As there was no to call for help ,I leaned back in my seat trying my best to keep the wound from .In this way I dozed (打盹)off ."

of an exploration adventure that happened last year. A group of

young men to explore a mountain cave and got lost . to find a way out in the dark cave they were frightened and ran anxiously without a sense of .Finally they fell dead in fear and exhaustion(筋疲力尽).According to the 14 people that found them, the place where they got lost was only about 10 meters away from the of the cave. If they stayed on the spot when they lost their way and tried to themselves, they would probably sense a faint light glimmering (闪烁)not far away .

Don’t you think that you can compare it with itself? When you meet with obstacles (障碍)in life and work ,you are lost in darkness. you it’s unclear yet and you needn’

t put up struggle . It seems to be a negative (消极的)attitude, a person who can afford to do so

must have foresight as well as a great courage in the first place .

1. A. hopeless B.worst C.more D.best

2. A. service B.way C.order D. work

3. A. cry B. lie C. wait D. sleep

4. A. delay B. success C. team D. arrival

5. A. untrue B. unimaginable C. true D. useless

6. A. plan B. decision C. explanation D. excuse

7. A. physical B. mental C. working D. medical

8. A. method B. way C. tools D. strength

9. A. rotting B. spreading C. hurting D. bleeding

10. A. loss B. failure C. disappointment D. sadness

11. A. had

12. A. Willing

13. A. hearing

14. A. rescue

15. A. end

16. A. save

17. A. adventure

18. A. Mind

19. A. really

20. A. and

B. managed C. tried B. Unable C. Determined B. sight C. feeling B. village C. local B. top C. opening B. help C. stop B. work C. life B. Watch C. Imagine B. immediately C. carefully B. so C. but D. planned D. Deciding D. direction D. brave D. side D. calm D. mankind D. Warn D. hopefully D. while

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阅读下面短文,掌握其大意,然后从1-20各题所给的四个选项(A、B、C和D)中,选出最佳选项,并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。

young man was getting ready to graduate from college. For many months he had a beautiful sports car in a

show A room, and knowing his father could well it, he told him that was all he wanted.

As Graduation Day came near, the young man awaited that his father had bought the car. of his graduation, his father called him into his study room. His father told him how he was to have such a

fine son, and told him how he loved him. He handed his son a beautifully gift box. Curious, and somewhat disappointed, the young man opened the box and a lovely, leather- bound (皮纸封面) Bible, the young man's name pressed in gold. , he raised his voice to his father, and said "With your money, you give me a Bible?" and stormed out of the house.

Many years passed and the young man was very successful in . He had a beautiful home and wonderful family, but realized his father was very , and thought perhaps he should go to him. He had not seen him that graduation day.

Before he could make arrangements, he received a telegram him his father had passed away, and willed all his possessions to his son. He needed to come home immediately and things.

When he arrived at his father's house, sudden and regret filled his heart. He began to search through his

father's important papers and saw the still gift - wrapped Bible as he had left it years ago. With tears, he opened the Bible and began to turn the pages.

Suddenly, a car key dropped from the back of the . It had a tag (标签) with the date of his graduation on it, and the words PAID IN FULL.

1. A. admired B. watched C. seen

i never told you

D. noticed

2. A. offer B. afford C. serve D. supply

3. A. mark B. support C. signs D. promise

4. A. Finally B. Instead C. So D. Shortly

5. A . public B. hard C. lazy D. private

6. A. proud B. sad C. upset D. puzzled

7. A. many B. far C. much D. often

8. A. typed B. wrapped C. written D. painted

9. A. looked B. reached C. showed D. found

10. A. with B. while C. after D. when

11. A. Interested B. Pleased C. Angry D. Disappoint

12. A. none B. all C. little D. bit

13. A. business B. study C. city D. home

14. A. healthy B. strong C. young D. old

15. A. on B. until C. since D. after

16. A. telling B. showing C. saying D. talking

17. A. look for B. take care of C. care D. mind

18. A. excitement B. disappointment C. surprise D. sadness

19. A. but B. right C. just D. only

20. A. Bible B. bed C. desk D. door

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阅读下面短文,掌握其大意,然后从1—20各题所给的四个选项(A,B,C,D)中,选出最佳选项,并在答

题卡上将该项涂黑。

There is a workman in America who earns as much as a company director. He is Max Quarterman, a thirty-year-old

篇三:2014短文改错练习

2014年高考英语短文改错起跑线(从这里开始)

一. 单句改错.(下列句子各有一处错误,请改正)

1. Now people get a lot of informations from TV. 2. German is a European country.

3. They didn’t want me to do any work at family. 4. Yesterday I met an old friend of my father.

5. Boys and girls, don’t lose hearts. Do better next time. 6. They are of different size.

7. It is so beautiful place that you must visit it. 8. What a terrible weather we have been having! 9. It took place in France, an European country.

10. Suddenly I caught a sight of my English teacher in the crowd. 11. What good time we had last night! 12. We shall spend three-day holiday together.

13. I came to understand that was not easy to earn money. 14. Some parents think useless for girls to go to school.

15. When he bought a chocolate cake, he put them in a secret place. 16. One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. 17. It’s important that we should think over before doing anything. 18. The truck was moving so fast that the driver couldn’t control. 19. I apologized and controlled me at my best till the dinner started. 20. We must take part in the social practice to prepare us well for our future. 21. The teacher did not punish for cheating but instead gave me a second chance. 22. Henry did not like his car, that ran badly and often broke down.

23. There was a five-pound note in the pocket of the trousers I had told her to wash it. 24. People can hardly do some fishing there.

25. I visited a place where is surrounded by mountains. 26. I am sure you will find one you like it. 27. It was yesterday when he broke the window. 28. He had lost his glasses without them he couldn’t see. 29. Oliver Twist, the hero of the story, he was an orphan. 30. It starts with choosing a tree from neither a farm or a store. 31. She never has enough time for that she wants to do. 32. I find what I have one shortcoming in my character. 33. What necessary it is that we get rid of the bad habits. 34. It didn’t matter that I would win or not.

35. People in the US drink more coffee than people in any country. 36. The development will bring us much more hopes and chances. 37. The Olympics are held each four years. 38. A summer, Fane traveled abroad.

39. I hope you think about my request as soon as possibly. 40. I know you are particular interested in Human Rights. 41. As there is no air or water, there can be no life, too.

42. There were too many nice things that I didn’t know what to choose. 43. He decides to travel a lot and visit such many new places as possible. 44. I couldn’t see as clear as before.

45. The water in it is so dirty that it smells terribly. 46. I appreciate your help very well.

47. You always gave me specially attention and inspired me. 48. It was until midnight that it stopped raining.

49. People both at home and abroad have been great helped by the new computer. 50. He has to work if he wants to live comfortable. 51. She is a brave and honesty girl.

52. It is much easy to make plans than to carry them out. 53. It is convenient for me to prepare for the exam than before. 54. He gave me an order worthy 15 million dollars.

55. The tree was put into a Christmas stand that holds the tree up straightly. 56. Is teaching kids English as interested as you expected in college? 57. We had guests last night who had not stayed in it ago. 58. We are all very much active and the activities are enjoyable. 59. If you won’t want to take a taxi, you can go by bus. 60. Our city is a modern city. It set up in the early 1980s. 61. Bad habits not come suddenly.

62. I have caught a bad cold for a week and I can’t get rid of it. 63. Following the road and you will find the store.

64. I rush over without delay, jumped into the water and swam towards him. 65. You must do everything you can help them.

66. When a rabbit see something dangerous, it runs away. 67. Its tail, which is white, moving up and down as it runs. 68. Think perhaps I was too tired; I stood up and was going to sleep. 69. I was often tired and watch TV demands little effort. 70. The little girl hurried home with the remained money. 71. His young patient was soon able to get up and ran about again.

72. It was kind of them to meet me at the station and drove me to their home. 73. She liked it very much and reads it to the class. 74. There were over 1000 students attend it.

75. Is it likely to be any food at the party on Saturday? 76. Please excuse us for not able to say goodbye to you. 77. He spends hours on the telephone, talks to his friends. 78. Filling with many people, the room is crowded.

79. At the interview there are many people who wait to interviewed for jobs. 80. It will cost a rocket a hundred thousand years to reach it. 81. There used to have a church in front of the school. 82. Hope you great success in your work!

83. All you can do is encouraging him, show him understanding and offer him advice. 84. In Friday afternoon, some students took part in a speech activity. 85. In a few weeks the story was returned to her.

86. It was very fine when I got up early on last Sunday morning. 87. I rushed out the house as quickly as I could. 88. It is necessary to decide what is worth taking notice. 89. I had difficulty in grammar after I entered into the school. 90. She could hardly afford for the medical care.

91. But we don’t seem to have much time to talk about together. 92. He was punished because what he had done. 93. The ice isn’t thick enough for us to skate. 94. I gave you my luggage at a quarter of an hour ago. 95. I am writing to thank you with your kind help. 96. He means to come no earlier as that time. 97. We must return back to school this afternoon 98. Child as he is, but he knows a lot.

99. Having been ill for a long time, so she fell behind her classmates. 100. Thinking he happened to have no work to do, and he came back home.

二. 单句改错(下列句子各有两处错误,请改正)

1. If you close your eyes, you can’t see something, because your eyelids prevent the light enter your eyes. 2. For our joy, Li Ding, monitor of our class, who was among the winners. 3. The only thing I can think is when I am going to get home listen to my music. 4. All my classmates are busy prepare for the exam except myself.

5. The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. 6. I communicated myself thanks to his great kindness.

7. I was great delighted to learn that you do very well in the mid-term examination. 8. If you learning English, it is not enough only to keep in minds the rules of grammar.

9. I get up very early this morning to go to the airport to meet Mr. White, a expert from the USA. 10. One and a half year later, I now think English a fun to learn.

11. I went through the test for many times but I can only answer three out of the twenty questions. 12. For instance, on one night, the played strong and loudly music till 4 o’clock in the morning.

13. Thinking he had no work to do, and my father came back home, quickly finishing his supper and left for the cinema.

14. Men have been interesting in the stars ever since they first looked up into sky. 15. That is difficulty to say how many people are learning English. 16. Three years ago, he was picked out and send to study in abroad.

17. Sometimes, I wish I can stay in a quiet place lonely, away from this city for a long time. 18. Many years ago, I step into a bookstore for some books I wanted them.

19. Having learned why he wanted the book, and the bookseller gave him some writing papers and a new pencil as a gift.

20. You can find all kinds information in just a few minute on the internet. 21. I got know that they were college students travel in china. 22. Under the help of him and my classmates, I made some progresses.

23. We went to the zoo on last Sunday. There were a lot of visitors stood in front of the ticket window. 24. With development of mobile phones, the short message service is becoming more and more popular for us nowadays.

25. On the night before my first day, I was much excited to go to sleep and as a result, I got up lately in the morning.

26. Three years ago, I was studying to abroad in Japan. It was there where I began reading comic books. 27. Have they ever thought of plastic bags do harm our environment?

28. It is certainly that Zhang Village will built into a better modern village.

29. On the ceremony we made a statement which as grown-ups we should have sense of duty to our society from now on.

30. Though the city is modern, but there are still some problems, such as air pollution crowdedness and noisy.

短文改错(1)

In many western countries heavy industry is high developed the difference between heavy and light industry are based on the nature of the goods produced. Heavy industry produce machines while light industry uses machines produce the smaller objects required for various purpose in our home and offices. The growth of industry in country depends on the general level of economic or industrial development. In its beginning, industrialization is likely to be cheap. decrease (减少)costs, industrialists in an area usually depends on Local supplies of the coal or electric power for their operation.

短文改错(2)

It happened in a morning that I was walking in the street. I ate up a banana and threw its peel on the corner of the road. Short after that I heard a scream behind. I looked back to see what was happened. A little girl about 8 years old fell down and the banana peel was exactly under her left shoes. She stood up without cry. Then she picked up the banana peel and ran toward the dustbin. On that moment, I realized my fault, and went to apologize her for that, but my vanity (虚荣心)prevented me. The little girl had taught me a good lesson by her action. And now, after I do everything, I'll think carefully whether it's right and wrong. I'll do my best to be in good habits and qualities.

短文改错(3)

Mr Wang is my physics teacher. He has 1.75 meters in the height. He was born in November 4, 1952. So he is a middle-aged man. He graduated Qinghua University in 1978. After graduation, he becomes a middle school teacher. He has been taught physics for more than 20 years. He is very successful as a teacher. He has been given a lot of honor. He not only is a good teacher in phy

sics but also speak English and Russian very well. In his spare time, he likes reading books, collect stamps and listening music. Also, Mr Smith is kind-hearted.

短文改错(4)

Dear Lily,

I got your letter and pleased to hear about your job interview at a grocery store. I know you wanted to get a job at the TV station, and you've been looking for several week now and haven't found something. The job at the grocery store doesn't sound badly. If I am you, I'd take it. If you worked there a while, you could earn some money. Its your decision, of course, but I advise you to take it. Let me to know what you decided to do. By the way, after you get the job you can think about get a bike later.

Love

短文改错(5)

Dear Abby,

How are you? I've got a wonderful news to tell you I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my further education. One hundred and twenty students took exam for it, but only a few were chosen and I was one of them. Therefore, my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against my going there. They say it is too far away that they will not see me for a whole year but they are afraid of I will feel lonely. They can't imagine a girl so young live alone. They advise me to study in the capital instead. Then I'll be able to continue living with them. How can I persuade them to accept the fact I have grown up?

Best Wishes,

Jane

短文改错(6)

I went to see film after supper. In my way to the cinema, I met an old English woman, she had lost her way. I gave up the chance to see the film, walking towards her and took her to her hotel. While go there, I told her great change had taken place in the past few years and she told me something about Britain and her family. Though I missed the film, however I felt very happy, for

I not only helped the old lady out from trouble but also practise my spoken English. If I hadn't worked hard at English, I would have been able to help her.

短文改错(7)

I was anxiously expected your letter, and at last it has been reached me. I am very glad to know that everyone at home is enjoying good health as usually. Things there are the same now as we were before. The final examination will take place of next week. But I am now busy preparing my lessons. It's nice to think that the summer vacation is coming near. I can't say much I want to see you all again. Looking forward to spend summer days with you. Give my love to Father, mother and anyone at home.

短文改错(8)

Helen is one of my best friends. She had taught us English when I attended training course two years before. Helen always made good preparations for the lessons; she tried her best to make her classes lively. I used to being poorly in English, especially in written English. But now I'm able to write English letters and reports correct. I still remember how she helped me for my English patiently. Teachers' Day's come. I'm going to send to her a card and give her best wishes.

短文改错(9)

I'd like to tell you why I learn English.I often read English aloud and try learn something important by hearts, which helps me remember it easily and form the good habit of thinking in English. I listen to a lot and talk with others in English.In this way, I was improved both my hearing or my spoken English.I keep a diary in English every day but my spoken English is becoming better and better. I also try my best to master the necessary grammar knowledge.By this means, I can express itself in English correct. That's the way I have been learning English.I hope it will be useful to you. That's all.Thank you.

短文改错(10)

I passed all the other course that I took at my university, but I could never pass botany. This was why all botany students had to spend several hours a week in a lab look through a microscope

at plant cells, and I could never see through a microscope. This was used to make my professor angry. "I can't see everything,‖ I said. Then he began patient enough to explain how to see through it, and I still couldn't make it. At last we tried it with every adjustment of the microscope known to man. With my pleasure, I saw something and drew it quickly on the paper. "What's that?" my professor asked. "That's what I saw." I answered. "No, you don't!" he shouted, and he bent over and looking into the microscope. "That's your eyes! You've fixed the lens so that it reflects! You've drawn your eyes!"

短文改错(11)

One cold day, a aged lady was sent for her doctor. When he came, she tells him that her right leg was very sore(酸痛)in the knee. The pain sometimes was bad enough to make it walking difficult. She asked him what the trouble could be because she had ever before suffered some similar discomfort. After making a careful examination, the doctor said, "You are in a very bad state of health for a woman of your age. I think the trouble in your right knee is just matter of old age. We get diseases as we get old. The trouble will mostly clean up in spring!" "Non sense, doctor!" she said, "My left knee is perfect, and it is exactly same age as my right."

短文改错(12)

May I have you attention please? I have a few things to tell to you. When you have a class here in the language lab, please be here a little early. Change your shoes before enter the lab. Don't bring anything here except your text books. When you are into, please don't touch these machine without permission. Always do as the teacher tell you to. In class you should only speak the English, not Chinese. Recorders can be used make a copy of the listening materials. When class over, turn off your machines and leave the lab one by one.

短文改错(13)

On Children's Day last year, our city hold an interested activity, that children and their parents play the rich and the poor. In the dinner, the rich could have more delicious food, but the poor could only have breads with porridge(粥). Parents both hoped to have the dinner for the poor with the children. They hoped that their children could be taught the lesson from the dinner. Now many p

eople on the earth don't have enough food and clothes. Every day only one half the world could enjoy enough food. The activity was held to make the families understand the differences from the poor and the rich and also make the parents know that too much material life won't always do good to the children.

短文改错(14)

We'll never forget the day which my classmates and I paid a visit to a chemistry factory last week. It was a larger one with nearly 2,000 workers. It looked a garden and we could see colorful flowers, grass and trees anywhere. We also visited some workshops and saw workers worked very hardly. We talked to them and learned a lot. We understood them further. On the way home we felt tiring. We all thought that we had a very good day. We really hoped that we could get more chances of leave the school and learn social experience.

短文改错(15)

One morning Mrs. Jenkins went to department store to buy a coat. There was not shop assistant in the store before she got there. She had to wait. Then a fat lady came in. She went to Mrs. Jenkins and asked her to serve for her. She told Mrs. Jenkins that she wanted to buy a coat. Mrs. Jenkins said that she couldn't do. The fat lady got angrily. She didn't let Mrs. Jenkins explain anything but insisted that Mrs. Jenkins would do that right away because it was her job. At last Mrs. Jenkins has to tell her that she was a customer herself and wanted to buy a coat, either.

短文改错(16)

If there are much more people in the world, there must have more food to feed the people. But food is already a problem in today's world. One-third of the world's population is starving, so there is not enough food. Ten thousand people died of hunger every day in some parts of the world. But in others parts of the world, people become ill or died because they eat too much food, and they are very fat. Some countries have no food, but the others have too much, and they throw them away. How can tomorrow's world feed its people? The world needs produce more food than it does now.

短文改错(17)

篇四:2013年高考英语短文改错(13年真题题全解析)

2013高考英语短文改错题技巧点拨

短文改错常见错误类型

1. 谓语动词的错误是历年考试的重点和热点 常见动词错误类型有

① 一般现在时与一般过去时错用; ② and 前后动词时态不一致;

③ 主谓不一致; ④ 缺少动词,特别是be动词;

⑤ 第三人称单数形式错用; ⑥ 主动语态和被动语态错用。

1) studies.(did 改为do 错误类型属于 ①)

2) (visiting 改为 visited错误类型属于②)

3) There will an important game next month.(will后加be错误类型属于④)

4)③ 主谓不一致)

2. 名词的常见错误

单复数名词错用;注意区分名词是可数还是不可数;或根据名词前的修饰语或谓语动

词的单复数来判断。

① I‘ll get good marks in all(subject 改为subjects)

②were a great encouragement to me.(word 改为words)

③ Without enough knowledges, you can never teach well.(knowledges改为knowledge)

3. 连词错误

连词包括关系代词、副词,并列连词and/ or/but等

(一般考查从句关系 who/ whom/whose/what/which/how/why/when/where/if/whether ) ① I have a good friend who‘s name is Liu Mei. (错用了who的所有格形式改为whose) ② I teach them, play with them, but watch them growing up.

(此处应该是并列的关系而非转折,but改为 and)

③ Clever as she is, but she works very hard.

④ When I was a child, rain was a mystery. In one class, I learned it rained.

4. 冠词错误

误用a和an(根据单词的因素来判定);误用a 和the(固定搭配,各自单独使用的地方)

多余的冠词或则少冠词。

① We may be one family and live under a same roof. (a 改为the the same 是固定搭配)

② As everyone knows, it‘s famous mountain with all kinds of pants.

(mountain是可数名词需用冠词,所以加 a )

③ My teacher advised me to keep my dairy.

④ I hope you have pleasant journey.

5. 形容词和副词错误

1) 系动词后用形容词(be/am/is/are/was/were/become/go/感官性动词 smell /feel)

2) 词性的误用 形容词修饰名词 修饰 实义动词,形容词和副词,过去分词用副词 ① I‘m sure we‘ll have a wonderfully time together.

(time是名词 所以要用形容词wonderful修饰)

② My pronunciation was terribly.

6. 代词错误

1)代词的主格和宾格(I / me; He/him; She/ her; We/ us ;They/ them )

2)反身代词(myself/yourself/himself/herself/themselves/ourselves)

3)代词的单数和复数

4)多余的代词和少代词

① Soon I began to enjoy talking to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in

simple English. (express oneself, me 改为 myself )

② One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. (加it)

③ If any one of us had any difficulty in our life and study, the other would help him out. ④ What‘s more , you have to be friends with your pupils and take good care of him.

7. 非谓语动词的常见错误

1)不定式,动名词作主语,宾语。

2)and 连接的不定式或动名词前后一致(尤其距离较远时),

3)介词后用动名词ving形式作宾语。

4)某些动词后要求接动名词或不定式。

① Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was…. (enjoy 后需接动名词 talk--talking)

② But his parents think go to college is more important than playing sports.(作主语 改为 going )

③ Children may not develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves.

④ I particularly enjoyed driving through the countryside with you and saw the changing

colors of the leaves on the trees.

8. 介词错误

1)词组中的介词误用,2)介词意思理解偏差,3)介词的多用或少用

① There are too many people among my family.

(among 改为in in my family 为固定搭配)

② I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow. (去掉 at ) 短文改错解题思路和检查原则

1)句中各部分的结构是否完整,特别是每个句子要有动词;

2)谓语动词的时态、语态;

3)非谓语动词的用法;

4)名词的单、复数,格的使用是否正确;

5)定冠词和不定冠词是否正确;

6)代词的格和性的使用是否有误;

7)定语从句中关系代词、副词是否准确无误;

8)并列句中的并列连词、主从复合句中的从属连词用的是否得当。

短文改错解题四原则

1)改动以最少为原则 2)虚词以添加或删除为原则 3)实词以改变词形为原则

4)以保持句子原意为原则

短文改错解题步骤

1)通读全文,掌握大意 2)整句分析,逐行推敲3)反复通读,复查验证

解题注意要点和能力培养

① 核对错项时,若的确有一时难以改出的地方。可以参考所改动项是否基本符合―1126‖

等题型比例。正确1个,多一词1个,缺词2个,错词6个。

② 核对改正的语法项目是否有重复。因为短文改错往往覆盖面广,一般不会出现重复考查某个语法点的现象。原文中每行改动只能改一词,答案也只能是一词。

③ 核对答题符号是否规范,位置是否准确,看看有无遗漏符号,忽略字母大写和拼写等问题

④ 如有两行都难以找到错误时,与其乱改一行,不如都打―√‖以确保一行正确。 ⑤ 从作文入手,提高自身语言运用素质

⑥ 合作学习,帮批帮改,提高识错、纠错能力

⑦ 精炼短文改错,抓好写、比、改三步

例题分析

Tom and Dick are next door neighbor who work 1.________ in the same office so they walked together to and from 2.________

office. Some day as they were walking home together it 3.________

sudden started to rain. Tom quickly opened his umbrella 4.________

and said, "My wife surely has foresight (预见) . She said 5.________

on this morning it would rain and told me to carry my 6.________

umbrella with me." Dick smiled and walked to him, said, 7.________

"My wife has even great foresight. She told me not to 8.________

carry an umbrella and as she knew you would certainly 9.________

have with you." 10.________ 首先 通读全文,掌握大意 此文讲述的是邻居Tom 和Dick 的故事。

1. 整句分析,逐行推敲

① 第二遍阅读后 容易改出的题有 1.2.4.6.10

② 然后先看前6项 第3项 翻译整句为:有一天当他们一起走路回家时天突然开始下雨了。

Some day 不能表示有一天,属于固定搭配中修饰词有误。

③ 第5项,由于对foresight的意思和用法不清楚,不能轻易改动。暂放一边。

③ 现在看7-10 项。第7项 翻译意思:Dick 笑了笑并且走向他(Tom),说到…..,翻

译后很容易可以看出said前有一个逗号,and 连接的动词只有smiled 和 walked。说明此处有错。

④ 第8题,又出现了foresight。现在来比较第5项和第8项的两个句子。

1)My wife surely has foresight (预见) 我的妻子肯定地作出了预见 (Tom‘s wife)

2)My wife has even great foresight。 (Dick‘s wife) 比较两句后 可以判断这里的foresight不是一个动词而是一个不可数名词。可以判定great有错。并可以反推第5项应该没有错误。(Dick 的妻子说的话明显有比较的含义并且这样才能突出文章的幽默感)

⑤ 第9项理清句子结构后,可以看出有一词是多余的。

总结错误考查点有

1.名词单复数2.时态 3. 固定搭配 4。词性5.多余的介词和连接词 6.非谓语 7.形容词的比较级

8.少了代词。

题型比例 1个正确,缺词1个,多词2个,错词6个

(一)

Most families in China hoped their single children will 76._______

have a happy future, so they are very strict in their children. 77._______

So do teachers in schools! Many children are given so much 78._______

homework that they have hardly any spare time have sports. 79._______

The children are forbidden to do anything but to study. No 80._______

wonder so many children are tired of lessons. Some even 81._______ attack or kill his parents and teachers! I believe many people 82._______

already read this kind of news in newspapers or magazines. 83._______

Shouldn't we draw lesson from the accidents? Now our 84._______ government is making out a plan to solve the education problems. 85._______

(二)

Nowadays, almost every family has TV set, and almost 76._______ everyone likes watching TV. TV has become part of our lives. 77._______ TV has many advantages, for example, it informs us the 78._______ latest news which is happening in the world; it can open our 79._______ eyes, enlarge our knowledge and also help us to see more 80._______ about the world. But, it also has some disadvantages. People 81.______ waste too much time in watching TV and his normal life 82._______ and work are affected. To the children who they spend too 83._______ much time in watching TV, it can do harmful to their sight 84._______ and healthy. So we should control the time of watching TV. 85._______

(三)

A few months after returning the US from Germany, I took 76._______ part in a college course in French. Since I have learned 77._______ to say German well in Germany, I thought it might be 78._______ interested to begin studying another language. At the 79._______ first class, the teacher asked us to do a pronunciation 80._______ exercise in it he would say a word or two in French, and 81._______ each student would do their best to copy. When he got to 82._______ me, he kept having me to say more words, and I 83._______ finally asked him why. "I find it great fun," she explained 84._______ it. "In 25 years of teaching at school, it's the first time 85._______ I've heard an American speak French with a German accent."

(四)

The Huaihe River has been serious polluted. Day and night 76.______ millions of tons of waste water is being poured down to it from 77.______ hundreds of factories. The waste water is harmful. At present 78.______ there is no fish in it. The river water cannot be drunk. People in 79.______ either bank have to dig wells to take drinking water. The Huaihe 80.______ River is such dirty and poisonous that people don't dare swim 81.______ in it. Something must be done to stopping the pollution. The 82.______ government and the people near the river must try to clear water 83.______ as soon as possible. Now special attention has paid to the 84.______ pollution by the government and more scientists. The pollution 85.______ will be prevented in the near future.

(五)

Dear Abby,

篇五:英文经典歌曲30首的歌词

[A Whole New World]

[Aladdin:] I can show you the world Shining, shimmering, splendid Tell me, princess, now when did You last let your heart decide?

[Jasmine:] Unbelievable sights Indescribable feeling

Soaring, tumbling, freewheeling Through an endless diamond sky A whole new world

[Aladdin:] Don't you dare close your eyes

[Jasmine:] A hundred thousand things to see

I can open your eyes Take you wonder by wonder Over, sideways and under On a magic carpet ride A whole new world

A new fantastic point of view No one to tell us no Or where to go

Or say we're only dreaming [Jasmine:] A whole new world A dazzling place I never knew But when I'm way up here It's crystal clear

That now I'm in a whole new world with you

[Aladdin:] Now I'm in a whole new world with you

[Aladdin:] Hold your breath - it gets better

[Jasmine:] I'm like a shooting star I've come so far

I can't go back to where I used to be [Aladdin:] A whole new world [Jasmine:] Every turn a surprise [Aladdin:] With new horizons to pursue [Jasmine:] Every moment red-letter [Both:] I'll chase them anywhere There's time to spare

Let me share this whole new world with you

A whole new world That's where we'll be [Aladdin:] A thrilling chase [Jasmine:] A wondrous place [Both:] For you and me

[Because You Loved]

歌词

For all those times you stood by me For all the truth that you made me see For all the joy you brought to my life For all the wrong that you made right For every dream you made come true For all the love I found in you I'll be forever thankful baby You're the one who held me up Never let me fall

You're the one who saw me through through it all

You gave me wings and made me fly

You touched my hand I could touch the sky I lost my faith, you gave it back to me You said no star was out of reach You stood by me and I stood tall I had your love I had it all

I'm grateful for each day you gave me Maybe I don't know that much But I know this much is true

I was blessed because I was loved by you

You were my strength when I was weak You were always there for me You were my voice when I couldn't speak The tender wind that carried me

You were my eyes when I couldn't see A light in the dark shining your love into my life You saw the best there was in me Lifted me up when I couldn't reach

You've been my inspiration

Through the lies you were the truth

You gave me faith 'coz you believed My world is a better place because of you I'm everything I am Because you loved me

歌词大意

I'm everything I am Because you loved me

曾几何时,你总是站在我身旁,你告诉我人生的道理,你为我的生命带来欢乐,你总能帮我收拾残局,你让我的梦想得以实现,你对我的爱我永远心存感激。我的世界因为你而更精彩,正是你往日的爱造就了今天的我。

[Casablanca]

I fell in love with you Watching Casablanca. Back row of the driving show In the flickering light.

I guess there are many broken hearts in

Casablanca.

Popcorn and cocas Beneath the stars

You know I've never really been there.

Became champagne and caviar.

So I don't know.

Making love on a long hot summer's

I guess our love story will never be seen

night.

On the big wide silver screen. I thought you fell in love With me watching Casablanca.

But it hurt just as bad When I had to watch you go

Holding hands 'neath the paddle fans

Oh'a kiss is still a kiss in Casablanca.

In Rick's candled café~

A kiss is not a kiss without your sigh.

Hiding in the shadows from the spots.

Please come back to me in Casablanca.

A rocky moonlight in your arms

I love you more and more each day

Making magic in the movies

As time goes by.

in your old Chevrolet.

Oh'a kiss is still a kiss in Casablanca

Oh'a kiss is still a kiss in Casablanca.

A kiss is not a kiss without your sigh.

A kiss is not a kiss without your sigh. Please come back to me in Casablanca. I love you more and more each day

As time goes by.

Please come back to me in Casablanca

I love you more and more each day I love you more and more each day As time goes by.

歌词大意

As time goes by.

当你观看《Casablanca 》时,我便爱上了你。在星星布满天空的夜晚,我们坐在车上看电影,古老的雪佛莱车上,我们尽情欢笑。卡萨布兰卡的亲吻依旧,请来卡萨布兰卡找我,随时光流逝,我对你的

爱与日俱增。

[A Whole New World]

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[Aladdin:] I can show you the world Shining, shimmering, splendid Tell me, princess, now when did You last let your heart decide?

[Jasmine:] Unbelievable sights Indescribable feeling

Soaring, tumbling, freewheeling Through an endless diamond sky A whole new world

[Aladdin:] Don't you dare close your eyes

[Jasmine:] A hundred thousand things to see

I can open your eyes Take you wonder by wonder Over, sideways and under On a magic carpet ride A whole new world

A new fantastic point of view No one to tell us no Or where to go

Or say we're only dreaming [Jasmine:] A whole new world A dazzling place I never knew But when I'm way up here It's crystal clear

That now I'm in a whole new world with you

[Aladdin:] Now I'm in a whole new

[Aladdin:] Hold your breath - it gets better

[Jasmine:] I'm like a shooting star I've come so far

I can't go back to where I used to be

[Aladdin:] A whole new world [Jasmine:] Every turn a surprise [Aladdin:] With new horizons to pursue

[Jasmine:] Every moment red-letter [Both:] I'll chase them anywhere

world with you There's time to spare

Let me share this whole new world with you

A whole new world That's where we'll be [Aladdin:] A thrilling chase [Jasmine:] A wondrous place [Both:] For you and me

[Because You Loved]

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歌词

For all those times you stood by me For all the truth that you made me see For all the joy you brought to my life For all the wrong that you made right For every dream you made come true For all the love I found in you I'll be forever thankful baby You're the one who held me up Never let me fall

You're the one who saw me through through it all

You gave me wings and made me fly

You touched my hand I could touch the sky I lost my faith, you gave it back to me You said no star was out of reach You stood by me and I stood tall I had your love I had it all

I'm grateful for each day you gave me Maybe I don't know that much But I know this much is true

I was blessed because I was loved by you You were always there for me

You were my strength when I was weak The tender wind that carried me

You were my voice when I couldn't speak A light in the dark shining your love into my life You were my eyes when I couldn't see You've been my inspiration You saw the best there was in me

Through the lies you were the truth

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