作业帮商志传奇作文班讲义
来源：学生作业帮助网 编辑：作业帮 时间：2024/09/24 07:16:29 体裁作文
篇一：2013考研 商志传奇作文班
What an impressive and instructive image it is! Featured in it is that_________________. Nothing can be so illuminating and fascinating as this drawing. Indeed ,whoever in front of it may be very much enlightened . What on earth can be inferred from the above illustration ?
Studying it further ,we can easily learn that what the illustrator actually aims to mirror is by no means simple. It is indicative of a fairly familiar scene in our society for the time being:_________________.__________________.Can this be merely a coincidence ? As can be apparently from the statistics released by Xinhua New Agency last December , 67 percent of the people __________________________________________.It should be noted of course , that upsetting parallels are now available in nearly all walks of life .And similar stories frequently hit the headlines of the mass media. Looking around , we may find such a scene is too numerous to list . An acquaintance of mine may serve as a telling example. She _____________________._______________________. Taking into account all evidence offered above , we may reasonably reach the conclusion that _______________________________________________________________. The general public,fortunately,have been made aware that_____________________________.ChinaYouth Daily editor Zou Xin notes that the situation will improve so long as the authority and the citizens make concerted efforts to _________________this phenomenon. As Cao Lei , 58-year-old sociologist of Chinese Academy of Sciences , puts it , "There has to be coordination of the whole society . What is needed is a package deal."__________should be given due attention . Failure to realize the ____________________of such cases may inevitably give rise to dire consequences. The sooner we take effective and efficient actions,the better our life will be. However much importance we attach to similar practices,it is far from enough.
How instructive and interesting the image above is! Indeed, few thing could be more
hilosophic and symbolic than this picture.What can be clearly seen in it is____________ who _________________.___________________.Simple as the above picture appears at first glance, its intended meaning goes undoubtedly far-reaching. What in the world does the drawing virtually attempt to mirror? In fact, that the cartoon does carry pretty important implications goes far beyond and reasonable dispute---_______.It should be observed,of course, that______________has played an indispensable role in nowadays society. As can best be illustrated in terms of one of my former colleagues, who____________________________. "However much importance we attach to___________,it is far from enough ,"contends Dr.Sun Yuan,a pioneer of behavioral studies of Chinese Academy of Sciences. It is the responsibility of the government, the mass media and schools of all levels to take the lead in the campaign to_____________________such a phenomenon, awakening people to the____________________of ____________.Meanwhile, each individual should strive to serve as_____________________to such happenings. I am strongly convinced that only when we are equipped with ___________can we achieve more progress and success in school and in life.
Nothing could be more illuminating and enlightening than the above drawing. What is subtly portrayed in it is that ______________.______________.It is so striking and thought-provoking that whoever in front of it cannot help being fascinated. How symbolic and philosophic it is! What on earth does the illustrator really intend to communicate to us? However odd and absurd the picture may seem at first sight, it is apparently far more than a mere simple cartoon---it is a vivid reflection of a rather prevalent social phenomenon.________._________. Indeed, such a scene is not entirely a coincidence. The previous couple of years has witnessed a growing incidence of similar events. It should be observed, of course, that such happenings are now available in near all walks of life, and reports of similar stories are readily found in the mass media. Nowhere in history has such a phenomenon been concerned so much as in our society today. As is revealed in a recent survey conducted by Chinese Academy of Sciences, three-fifths of the youngsters are _______________.A convincing example occurring to me goes to one of my acquaintance , who______________._______________. What to do? Much can be done. The government, fore and most, should serve as a__________________________, doing its utmost to_______________such a trend. Moreover, it is the responsibility of the mass media and schools of all levels to awaken the general public to the _____________________of such practices. Above all, the general public should be made aware that_________________.There are good reasons to hope that _______. Such an upsetting phenomenon will soon be ended or at least significantly reduced, and we will have a happy, healthy and harmonious society.The society will soon be populated with such encouraging happenings, and our society will be more prosperous and harmonious.
篇二：启航商志2015年考研传奇作文班作文押题
Jan.5,2013
Dear____,
I am a__________.I_________________________,so I am writing to present you my ________________________________________________________________.
What follows are a few aspects concerning my_______________.For one thing,_______________________.________________. For another ,________________.
It is my sincere hope that you could _____________________.Thanks a lot for your time and attention to this____________.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
What an impressive and instructive image it is! Featured in it is that_________________. Nothing can be so illuminating and fascinating as this drawing. Indeed ,whoever in front of it may be very much enlightened . What on earth can be inferred from the above illustration ?
Studying it further ,we can easily learn that what the illustrator actually aims to mirror is by no means simple. It is indicative of a fairly familiar scene in our society for the time being:_________________.__________________.Can this be merely a coincidence ? As can be apparently from the statistics released by Xinhua New Agency last December , 67 percent of the people ___________________________________________. It should be noted of course , that upsetting parallels are now available in nearly all walks of life . And similar stories frequently hit the headlines of the mass media. Looking around , we may find such a scene is too numerous to list . An acquaintance of mine may serve as a telling example. She _____________________._______________________.
Taking into account all evidence offered above , we may reasonably reach the conclusion that _______________________________________________________________. The general public,fortunately,have been made aware that_____________________________. China Youth Daily editor Zou Xin notes that the situation will improve so long as the authority and the citizens make concerted efforts to _________________this phenomenon. As
Cao Lei , 58-year-old sociologist of Chinese Academy of Sciences , puts it , "There has to be coordination of the whole society . What is needed is a package deal."
__________should be given due attention .
Failure to realize the ____________________of such cases may inevitably give rise to dire consequences.
The sooner we take effective and efficient actions,the better our life will be.
However much importance we attach to similar practices,it is far from enough.
How instructive and interesting the image above is! Indeed, few thing could be more philosophic and symbolic than this picture. What can be clearly seen in it is____________ who _________________.___________________.Simple as the above picture appears at first glance, its intended meaning goes undoubtedly far-reaching.
What in the world does the drawing virtually attempt to mirror? In fact, that the cartoon does carry pretty important implications goes far beyond and reasonable dispute---_______.It should be observed,of course, that______________has played an indispensable role in nowadays society. As can best be illustrated in terms of one of my former colleagues, who____________________________.
"However much importance we attach to___________,it is far from enough ,"contends Dr.Sun Yuan,a pioneer of behavioral studies of Chinese Academy of Sciences. It is the responsibility of the government, the mass media and schools of all levels to take the lead in the campaign to_____________________such a phenomenon, awakening people to the____________________of ____________.Meanwhile, each individual should strive to serve as_____________________to such happenings. I am strongly convinced that only when we are equipped with ___________can we achieve more progress and success in school and in life.
Nothing could be more illuminating and enlightening than the above drawing. What is subtly portrayed in it is that ______________.______________.It is so striking and thought-provoking that whoever in front of it cannot help being fascinated. How symbolic and philosophic it is!
What on earth does the illustrator really intend to communicate to us? However odd and absurd the picture may seem at first sight, it is apparently far more than a mere simple cartoon---it is a vivid reflection of a rather prevalent social phenomenon.________._________. Indeed, such a scene is not entirely a coincidence. The previous couple of years has witnessed a growing incidence of similar events. It should be observed, of course, that such happenings are now available in near all walks of life, and reports of similar stories are readily found in the mass media. Nowhere in history has such a phenomenon been concerned so much as in our society today. As is revealed in a recent survey conducted by Chinese Academy of Sciences, three-fifths of the youngsters are _______________.A convincing example occurring to me goes to one of my acquaintance , who______________._______________.
What to do? Much can be done. The government, fore and most, should serve as a__________________________, doing its utmost to_______________such a trend. Moreover, it is the responsibility of the mass media and schools of all levels to awaken the general public to the _____________________of such practices. Above all, the general public should be made aware that_________________.There are good reasons to hope that _______.
Such an upsetting phenomenon will soon be ended or at least significantly reduced, and we will have a happy, healthy and harmonious society.
The society will soon be populated with such encouraging happenings, and our society
will be more prosperous and harmonious.
0.inferred ,learned,derived
1.表格4种：chart , graph, table, diagram
图画2种： drawing, cartoon, picture, image;photo, photograph, picture, image 这幅图画（表格）/上面这幅图画（表格）：the above ~ , the ~ above , this ~ , the ~
2.subtly , vividly , clearly, obviously, apparently, conspicuously,
3.illustrated, featured, portrayed, presented, depicted, described
4.symbolic, philosophic, impressive, instructive, interesting, fascinating, illuminating, enlightening, striking, thought-provoking
5.simple, funny, odd, absurd, far fetched, ridiculous
6.may look, may seem, may appear, looks, seems to be, appears
7.intended meaning ，implication
8.interested, fascinated, illuminated, enlightened, struck, attracted
9.very much, greatly 10.really, actually, virtually
11.aim, intend, attempt 12.fairly, pretty, rather, quite, very
12.5.prevalent , pervasive , widespread , familiar
12.6.phenomenon , scene 13.important, significant
14.Studying it further, we may find that________________________.
Indeed,_________________________________.
That_____________________goes far beyond any reasonable dispute.
It goes far beyond any reasonable dispute that____________________.
15.It should be observed, of course, that_________________________.
It should be noted, of course, that___________________________.
Indeed,_______________________________________________.
In fact,______________________________________________.
16.scene , phenomenon,
such a scene, such a phenomenon
such/similar scenes /phenomenon/events/cases/happenings/practices/stories
17.are now available , can be readily found
18.in nearly all walks of life , anywhere in our neighborhood around the world
19.a case in point , a telling illustration , a convincing example , a typical example
20.an acquaintance of mine , a colleague of mine ,
one of my acquaintance , one of my former colleagues
21.Chinese Academy of Sciences , China Youth Daily , People's Daily , Xinhua New Agency 21.5.at the end of the last year,
January 简写Jan. February 简写Feb. March 简写Mar. April 简写Apr. May 简写May. June 简写Jun.
July 简写Jul. August 简写Aug. September 简写Sept. October 简写Oct. November 简写Nov. December 简写Dec.
22.indicate , suggest ,reveal , demonstrate , show
23.Given , Judging from , Taking into account
24.evidence , argument 25.presented , offered
26.safely , reasonably 27.arrive at , draw , reach , come to
28.notes , argues , contends , says
29.significance , importance , severity
30.I am strongly convinced that _______________.
There are good reasons to hope that_______________.
31.To begin with,______________________.(Primarily, Initially)
What's more,_______________________.(Furthermore , Moreover)
篇三：商志传奇作文2015考研作文模板24
本人是2015考研党，参加了商志传奇作文班。想和大家分享一下学习经验。
2015年商志传奇作文班上课时间只有两个小时左右。90分钟的时间讲解第一段的写法（可见第一段的重要性），30分钟讲解小作文的写法和一个万能模板。
商志老师自己写了大概 30份不同的作文模板(第二段和第三段)根据报考的学校和专业不同，把模板发给同学，使同一考场的学生不可能拿到相同的模板。模板中，只有一两句话需要自己写，把模板背下来，直接抄写在答题卡上就行。
本人拿到的是模板24. 以下是模板24的内容： 商志传奇作文2015考研作文模板24
1. 小作文：按课上所讲去复习。
2. 大作文：第一段：按课上所讲去练习。
第二段：如下。第1句可删掉。第3行这
句必须自己写，其他抄到答题卡上即
可。
○1What in the world can we learned from the above image? ○2Indeed,the given illustration is indicative of a rather noteworthy social phenomenon__________.○3Nowhere in history have similar events been concerned so much as in our society for the
time being.○4Looking around,we may find that such a phenomenon is too numerous to list.○5Indeed, we can by no means afford to ignore such a thought-provoking scene.
第三段：如下。直接抄到答题卡上即可。
○1The general public should be made aware that there has to be deliberate effort of the whole society.○2The auth
补充说明：
1).关于第二段的补充说明：
如果Directions里要求举例子，就在第二段尾写One of my best friends may serve as a case in point .She__________.如果Directions里没有明确要求举例的，就不用写举例子的句子。
2).关于第三段的补充说明：
第三段中有2组红色部分，注意：如果是好的，正
确的，积极的现象或趋势，就写前者（a driving force,promote）;如果是不好的事或趋势，就写后者（a counterbalance,curb）。
小作文万能模板;
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a 。，so I am writing to present you this letter.
What follows are a few aspects concerning my attention to this letter.
以上资料为2015传奇作文材料，仅供参考。
篇四：商志四六级写作讲义
新四六级作文精讲
编讲商志
主讲介绍：
★人生规划大师，高等教育出版社高分英语系列丛书主编，应试之王，中国单词第一人，传奇考研英语满分写作创始人
★考研英语辅导史上划时代的人物，考研英语辅导高分神话的缔造者，硕士研究生入学考试英语首席主讲，“考研路上最不可错过的一位英语老师”
★直取本质、彻底破解，主讲的考研英语基础班、强化班、写作班、全程班等创造了多项他人无法打破的记录
商志老师新浪微博:商志考研英语
龙腾启航 您身边的辅导专家。
第一节历年四级作文总览
2013年6月（注：1.2013年6月的试题是多题多卷，共考了3个不同的图画作文题；2.新四级给出的样题就是下面的第一个图）
1. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big。
You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
( In the cartoon there is a father talking with her son. Having heard his son’s words that “ Dad, I am a bit worried about disposing of nuclear weapon.” The father replies that “ If you can empty the dustbin here, you can do anything”. )
2. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the importance of learning basic skills.You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
3. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the importance of reading literature。
You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
2012 年12 月Education Pays
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Education Pays based on
the statistics provided in the chart below (weekly earnings in 2010). Please give a brief description of the chart
first and then make comments on it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
2012 年6 月On Excessive Packaging
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Excessive Packaging following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
1.目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象
2.出现这一现象的原因
3.我对这一现象的看法和建议
2011 年12 月Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by commenting on the humorous saying,”Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. I’ve done it hundreds of times” . You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
2011 年6 月Online Shopping
1.现在网上购物已成为一种时尚
2.网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题
3.我的建议
2010 年12 月How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent ?
1. 目前不少父母为孩子包办一切
2. 为了让孩子独立，父母应该??
2010 年6 月Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling
1. 如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写
2. 出现这种现象的原因是??
3. 为了改变这种状况，我认为?
2009 年12 月Creating a Green Campus
1. 建设绿色校园十分重要
2. 绿色校园不仅指绿色的环境??
3. 为了建设绿色校园，我们应该??
2009 年6 月Free Admissions to Museums？
1. 越来越多的博物馆现在免费向公众开放，目的是??
2. 有人认为这样做会带来一些问题
3. 在我看来??
2008 年12 月Limiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bags
1.一次性塑料袋曾广为使用
2.由此带来的问题
3.限制一次性塑料袋的意义
2008年6月Recreational Activities
1. 娱乐活动多种多样
2. 娱乐活动可能使人们受益，也可能带来危害
3. 作为大学生，我认为??
2007年12月What Electives to Choose
1. 各大学为学生开设多种多样的选修课
2. 学生出于各种原因选择不同的选修课
3. 以我自己为例?
2007年6月通知Welcome to Our Club
1. 本社团的主要活动内容
2. 参加本社团的好处
3. 如何加入本社团
第二节历年6级作文总览
2013年6月（注：1.2013年6月的试题是多题多卷，共考了3个不同的作文题，但类型一致；2.新六级给出的样题就是下面的第一个作文）
1. Directions：for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay by commenting on the remark “earth provided you enought thing to satisify someone's needs but not someone's greed.” You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1.
2. Directions：for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay by commenting on the proverb“Good habits result from refusing temptation” You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1.
3. Directions：for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay by commenting on the remark “Smile is the shortst distance between two people” You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1.
2012年12月On Maintaining Trust
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Maintaining Trust by commenting on Abraham Lincoln’s famous remark, “It takes years to build trust, and a few seconds to destroy it.” You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
Man and Computer
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Man and Computer by commenting on the saying, “The real danger is not that the computer will begin to think like man, but that man will begin to think like the computer.” You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
2012年6月The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
Directions：For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication. Your essay should start with a brief description of the picture. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
2011年12月The Way to Success
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Way to Success by
commenting on Abraham Lincoln’s famous remark, “Give me six hours to chop down a tree, and I will spend the first four sharpening the axe.” You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
2011年6月The Certificate Craze
1. 现在许多人热衷于各类证书考试
2. 其目的各不相同
3. 在我看来??
2010年12月My View on University Ranking
1. 目前高校排名相当盛行
2. 这于这种做法人们看法不一
3. 在我看来
2010年6月Due Attention Should Be Given to the Study of Chinese
1. 近年来在学生中出现了忽视中文学习的现象
2. 出现这种现象的原因和后果
3. 为了改变这种状况，我认为??
2009年12月Should Parents Send Their Kids to Art Classes?
1. 现在有不少家长送孩子参加各种艺术班，
2．对这种做法有人表示支持,也有人并不赞成；
3．我认为?
2009年6月On the Importance of a Name
1．有人说名字（或名称）很重要；
2．也有人认为名字（或名称）无关紧要；
3．我认为??
2008年12月How to Improve Students’ Mental Health?
1. 大学生的心理健康十分重要
2. 为此，学校可以??
3. 我们自己应当??
2008年6月Will E-books Replace Traditional Books?
1. 随着信息技术的发展，电子图书越来越多；
2. 有人认为电子图书会取代传统图书，理由是?
3. 我的看法
2007年12月The Digital Age
1. 如今数字化产品越来越广泛的使用，例如：
2. 数字化产品的使用对人们工作、学习、生活产生的影响。
2007年6月Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed?
1. 有人做了好事期望能得到回报；
2. 有人认为应该像雷锋那样做好事不图回报；
3. 我的观点
篇五：商志作文班笔记之大作文
商志作文班笔记之大作文
一． 大作文写作基本步骤及注意事项
1. 审题Directions ，审题主要审的是写作要求，注意以下三个方面：
(1) 有没有题目（大多数的年份是没有题目的，某些年份如02年英语一有题目:Cultures—National and International）
(2) 写作要求中规定的要点有哪些？（describe, interpret ,comment；个别年份如04年英语一写作要点中要求举例子时这个写作要点就
不能漏掉）
(3) 图或表的种类；数量；文字提示/数据信息
A. 种类：
英语一 图画（是画出的还是拍出的照片）
画的（可替换）：drawing cartoon picture image
illustration;
拍的（可替换）：photo photograph picture image
illustration
英语二 图表（不能混用，题目当中是什么就是什么，不要随便
替换）
chart
graph
table
diagram
再强调一遍，英二题目当中图表用哪个词表示就用哪个词，不
要随便替换
B． 数量：是一个图还是两个及以上图
一个图：这幅图画（表格）/ 上面这幅图画（表格）表示方法 the above ~
the ~ above
the given~
this~
the ~
说明：由于英语一图画一词可以替换，所以有25种表示方法，不
再一一示范；英语二不可以替换，共有5中表示方法。
一组图（两个及以上）：
the above set of ~s(名词复数)
如：the above set of pictures/ the above set of charts
the set of ~s above
the given set of ~s
this set of ~s
the set of ~s
说明：虽然是多幅图，但是用了set 这个词，表示一组的含义，所
以谓语动词用单数即可。
2. 构思（写3段，不要多也不要少）
（1） 第一段：描述 describe（注意两点）
A．图画或是表格的关键信息，关键信息指的是与主旨相关的信息，
不要什么旁枝末节的图画内容或是数字信息都描述;
B. 一个单词不会写可以写上义词，或是近义词，举例说明：火锅 ，
可以写锅pan ,pot ,或容器 container。
（2） 第二段：思路如下，具体句子后文模板再展示
第一，interpret指出图画/图表的含义（2-3个句子）
第二，comment评论（下面具体列出几中评论的发展方法，大家参
考，写出一种或两种即可，不用全部都写）
A. 评论方法之普遍性（或举例）
B. 评论方法之原因
C. 评论方法之利弊说明
3. 书写（具体书写时注意事项和细节问题）
（1） 答题时间安排：小作文 15分钟，大作文25分钟；
（2） 写作注意事项：（内容；格式）
A． 用黑色笔，框外答题无效，不允许使用涂改液
B． 书写认真规范，尤其是标点，逗号（，）句号（.）单词与
单词之间的距离（1-1.5个字母大小距离即可）。一个单词
在行末写不完时，分行必须落在音节处，举例说明：
describe 这个单词
C.字体大小与字数：字体常规，不要过大也不要过小；字数严
格控制，英语二大作文170-180；英语一 大作文200字左右， 小
作文100字。
二． 具体写作模板及替换
说明：下文中上标数字（1-31）最后有备注，可查阅备注替换成相应的那组词里面的任?a href="http://www.zw2.cn/zhuanti/guanyuwozuowen/" target="_blank" class="keylink">我桓觥Ｈ?/p>
表示subtly 这个词可以换成后面备注表2中的vividly, clearly等等，以此类推。
第一段：描述图画或图表
先整体举例说明 ，然后再给大家具体分解每一句（黑色字体为模板句，可以背过，切题句必须要根据图来自己描述）
示范1
is exactly that
具体分解结构：
△ is exactly that 句子1（自己写描述句），with
可换为phenomenon/ behavior )thought-provoking. As can be ~ly seen in △，句子2（自己写描述句）. 句子
is exactly that 句子1（自己写描述句）
，with
△，句子2（自己写描述句）. 句子
示范2
有时必须换成
figures/ data） which reveal
具体分解结构：
英一 第一句：
有时必须换成an) 4 it is ! What can be 2 seen in △ is 第二句：3 in
有时必须换成an) 4 it is ! What can be 2 seen in △ is figures/
which reveal
△
does 示范3
示范4
有时必须换成is that
第二段：寓意+评论图画或图表
第二段：思路如下，具体句子后文模板再展示
第一，interpret指出图画/图表的含义（2-3个句子）
第二，comment评论（下面具体列出几中评论的发展方法，大家
参考，写出一种或两种即可，不用全部都写）
A.评论方法之普遍性（或举例）
B.评论方法之原因
C.评论方法之利弊说明
第一 解释图/表的含义
of a
示范of a
第二 评论发展方法之
讲原因：（如果原因写不好，可以不写）
示范1Why appear? Several
with, more, ____原因2____________. Above all, ________原因3___________________.
示范2：
What might the phenomenon up 原因2________________.Above all, one more important factor worth our concern is that _____________原因3______________.
示范3：
take place? There are generally three factors it. Initially,___________原因1_______________.
体裁作文