不吃早餐危害英语作文

篇一：初中英语作文-No Breakfast, No Good

初中英语作文:No Breakfast, No Good

No Breakfast, No Good

Now a lot of students go to school in a hurry so that they have no time to have breakfast. But not having breakfast will do harm to their health and their study.

Having no breakfast will throw the normal work of our digestive system into confusion. As a result, it will do harm to our health. And at our age it is high time for us to grow up. So our bodies are in great need of energy. If we don't have breakfast,there will be not enough energy to supply. This may stunt our growth.

What's more, it is a long period between breakfast and lunch. Breakfast provides us with the energy needed for the class. Without breakfast we cannot get along well with our classes. So for the sake of our health and our study, we must have breakfast.

不吃早餐不好

现在很多学生上学很匆忙，以至于没有时间吃早餐，但不吃早餐会有害于学生的健康和学习。

不吃早餐会扰乱我们消化系统的正常工作，从而对我们的身体健康产生危害。这个年龄段正是我们长身体的时候，所以我们的身体需要大量的能量。如果我们不吃早餐，就不会提供足够的能量，这会阻碍身体的发育。

另外，早餐与午餐之间。的时间很长。·早餐可以为我们提供上课所需的能量，不吃早餐会影响我们上课。所以，为了我们的健康和学，习，我们必须吃早餐。

篇二：初中英语作文-No Breakfast, No Good

初中英语作文:No Breakfast, No Good

No Breakfast, No Good

Now a lot of students go to school in a hurry so that they have no time to have breakfast. But not having breakfast will do harm to their health and their study.

Having no breakfast will throw the normal work of our digestive system into confusion. As a result, it will do harm to our health. And at our age it is high time for us to grow up. So our bodies are in great need of energy. If we don't have breakfast,there will be not enough energy to supply. This may stunt our growth.

What's more, it is a long period between breakfast and lunch. Breakfast provides us with the energy needed for the class. Without breakfast we cannot get along well with our classes. So for the sake of our health and our study, we must have breakfast.

不吃早餐不好

现在很多学生上学很匆忙，以至于没有时间吃早餐，但不吃早餐会有害于学生的健康和学习。

不吃早餐会扰乱我们消化系统的正常工作，从而对我们的身体健康产生危害。这个年龄段正是我们长身体的时候，所以我们的身体需要大量的能量。如果我们不吃早餐，就不会提供足够的能量，这会阻碍身体的发育。

另外，早餐与午餐之间。的时间很长。·早餐可以为我们提供上课所需的能量，不吃早餐会影响我们上课。所以，为了我们的健康和学，习，我们必须吃早餐。

篇三：八年级上英语作文

八年级英语上册作文复习资料

1.有很多同学早晨上学不吃早餐，这是一个不好的习惯，对身体有很大的危害。请根据提示写一篇短文，指出不吃早餐的危害。提示1.不吃早餐对身体有害2.不吃早餐会影响上午听课。

Every morning, we have to go to school very early, so many of us don?t have breakfast. It?s very bad for our health. In the morning we usually have four classes. It?s a long time before lunch. If we don?t eat anything for breakfast, we may feel hungry and we can?t listen to the teacher carefully. We need energy very much while we are growing. I really think that we should have a good breakfast.

2 . How to keep healthy

If we want to keep our bodies healthy, we must have a good habit. We should get up and go to bed early and sleep at least eight hours every day. Do more exercise, such as walking, swimming, playing balls and so on. We should also eat healthy

food—more fruit and vegetables and less meat. If you don?t feel well, you?d better see a doctor at once. And we should wash our hands before meals and drink enough

boiled water every day. It?s necessary for our health. We should not throw litter about, keep long fingernails and smoke etc. It?s also very important.

3. 从饮食，睡眠和运动几方面谈谈怎样可以保持身体健康。

Health is one of the most important things for us. Without a good health, we can?t do anything. So we all want to keep healthy. But how?

If you want to be healthy, you must have a good diet. You shouldn?t have too much hot or sweet food with much fat on them. They are all bad for your health. Instead, you should have vegetables and fruit to keep yourself healthy.

You should also sleep well. A student should sleep at least 8 hours a day. Besides, more exercises are necessary, too. You should take more exercises to make yourself stronger and healthier.

Since health is so important, we should try our best to keep healthy.

4. 介绍你的一个朋友的兴趣爱好和生活习惯（不少于60词）

He thinks he isn't pretty healthy. He doesn't like exercise, so he does exercise once a week. He is very fat. He doesn't like vegetables, so he hardly ever eats

vegetables. He likes eating junk food. He thinks it is very nice. He eats them about four or five times a week. He loves milk, but he doesn't drink it every day. He only drinks them two or three times a week. He eats fruit once or twice a week. But he sleeps nine hours every night. His lifestyle is not very well. But he knows healthy lifestyle helps him get good grades. He tries to eats some vegetables and eats lots of fruit. And he wants his parents to play sports with him. He wants to be the healthiest.

5.假如你的爸爸是个医生，曾参加了2003年的非典防治工作，虽然非典已经过去了，但是他对一家人的健康仍然很重视。请你写一篇60词左右的短文，讲一下只要预防得当，疾病并不可怕。参考词汇：personal health个人健康spit吐痰overwork使?过于疲劳

Keeping healthy

My father is a doctor. In 2003, he took an active part in the battle against SARS. He said, “We don?t have to be afraid of catching the illness. If we have good habits, we can keep the illness away.” My father and I like running in the morning. We keep the windows open so that the air in the room is clean and fresh. We wash our hands before meals. We have healthy food and drink. We don?t spit here and there. He told us not to overwork because too much work will make us tired and make it easy to get sick.

6.你的爸爸抽烟吗？请写一篇小短文描述抽烟的害处，回家后读给你的爸爸听。（60词左右）提示如下： 1.抽烟有害健康,不能长寿； 2.抽烟易导致疾病； 3.抽烟还危害别人。

Smoking and Health

Everyone knows smoking is bad for health. People who smoke too much may not live long. Many people die from smoking each year.

Smoking causes many illnesses. Smokers have bad teeth. A lot of people always cough because of smoking. Smoking can easily cause lung cancer.

Smoking is bad for smokers, and it?s also bad for women and children, too.

I hope all the smokers can give up smoking for themselves and also for the people around them. Let?s enjoy clean air.

7.假如你是Li Tao，请根据昨天的情况写一篇60词左右的日记。早上感到头疼，老打喷嚏(sneeze)，妈妈带你去医院，医生检查了一下并问了一些情况，最后给你开了一些药并让你好好休息。第二天你觉得好多了。

Wednesday, October 12th, 2009

I felt terrible yesterday morning. My mother took me to the hospital. “What?s your trouble, little boy?” the doctor asked. “I can?t stop sneezing and I have a headache.” “When did it start?” “This morning.” “Open your mouth and say ?Ah?.” My mother was worried and asked the doctor, “What?s the matter with him?” “He has a bad cold, but it?s nothing serious.” the doctor said. Then the doctor let me take some medicine. He asked me to stay in bed and have a good rest. I feel better after taking the medicine.

8.假设李平是你的朋友，他目前的身体状况不好。他从来不锻炼，他经常感到很紧张，很疲倦，他爱吃零食，有时会胃疼。这几天，他感冒了。头很痛。请写一封信给他，并提些建议。

Dear LiPing,

I am sorry to hear that you are not feeling well。I think you should see a doctor，then you should take some medicines，and drink a lot of water。 You said you are stressed out and tired。Why do not you listen to music and go to bed early。

You should also try to exercise。Eating less junk food。Eating more healthy food，like apple，orange and milk 。I think they are good for your health。

I hope you feel better soon！

Yours×××

9.假如李明是你的好朋友，根据提示写一篇80词左右的短文介绍李明的业余爱好。（短文开头已给出）提示语：1.李明以前是个电影迷, 一周至少去看两次电影，有时租VCD在家里看，最喜欢的影星是姜文； 2.李明现在的兴趣是集邮, 认为集邮非常有趣，可以从邮票上学到很多关于人物、地点、历史的知识, 有些旧邮票非常有价值；3.上周五是李明的生日, 他从朋友那里得到了许多邮票，非常高兴。

Li Ming is my good friend. He has many hobbies. He used to be a movie fan. He went to the movie theater at least twice a week. Sometimes he rented VCDs and watched them at home. His favorite movie star was Jiang Wen.

Now Li Ming is interested in collecting stamps. He thinks it?s great fun. He can learn a lot about people, places, history and many other things from stamps. Some old stamps are very valuable.

Last Friday was Li Ming?s birthday. He got many stamps from his friends. Li Ming was very happy.

10.根据下列班级活动调查表，用英语写一篇文章。

Class12,Grade 8: Activity Survey

Activity Every Day Twice a Week Four Times a Week

Watch TV 60% 20% 20%

Have Sports 10% 20% 70%

Do homework 100% 0% 0%

Here are the results of the student activity survey in Class 12, Grade 8. Most students watch TV every day. Some students watch TV twice a week. Some students watch TV four times a week. Some students have sports every day. Some students have sports twice a week. Most students have sports four times a week. All the students do homework every day. No students do homework twice or four times a week.

11.根据下列育英中学八年级（1）班学生上学方式 的调查表，用英语写一篇短文。不少于70 个单词。

上学方式 Bbus Wwalking Bbike Ccar

学生人数 15 110 25 0

Here are fifty students in Class 1, Grade 8 at Yuying Middle School. Every day they go to school in different ways. Fifteen students take buses because they live far from the school. Ten students walk. They think walking is good for their health and they live near the school. Twenty-five students ride their bikes to school because they like riding bikes very much and their homes are not very far from the school. No one goes to school by car.

12.以“How did you spend last Sunday? Did you have a good time? What were you doing at different times last Sunday?”为内容，写一篇80词左右的短文。

提示：watch a movie, climb mountains, play basketball, visit friends, play computer games, do housework ... happy, excited, sad ..

A Happy Sunday

I had a happy day last Sunday. From 6: 30 to 7: 00, I was running along the road. At 8: 00 a. m. I was doing cleaning at home, because my parents were out. At 9: 50, I was watching a movie with my friend, Han Xingxing. The film was very interesting, and it made us excited. From 2: 20 to 4: 30, I was playing basketball with my

classmates on our school playground. At 6: 00 p.m. my grandparents, my parents and I were having a big dinner together in a restaurant. We all felt very happy and enjoyed it.

I was watching TV from 7: 30 to 9: 30 at home in the evening, and then I went to bed.

13.想象我去哪里度假，和谁一起去，为什么去那里度假，什么时候出发，那里天气怎么样，在那里呆多长时间。

On the holiday morning ,I went to the park with my friend, because this day is my friend's birthday, my friend wanted me to go to the park with her, so I went to the park with my friend, there were lots of people in the park, the weather was good. We stayed in the park about two hours, we left at about nine o'clock. In the afternoon went to my aunt's home with my parents, my aunt gave me lots of sweet, (this is my favorite food). In the evening, I ate dinner with my parents at my aunt's home, at eight o'clock, we went home today, I?m very happy, how about your holiday?

14.假设你的一个笔友上个星期天 早晨8：30在火车站接他后来到苏州动物园。那里有很多不同种类的动物。12：00吃午饭。然后乘车前往虎丘（Tiger Hill），那里风景秀丽，你们玩得很开心等。（字数60左右）

One of my pen pals came to see me last Sunday. I went to meet him at the train station at 8:30 a.m. We went to Suzhou Zoo together then. There were many different kinds of animals. At 12:00 we had lunch. After that we went to the Tiger Hill by bus. It was very beautiful there and we enjoyed ourselves very much.

篇四：八年级英语作文

八年级英语作文

1.有很多同学早晨上学不吃早餐，这是一个不好的习惯，对身体有很大的危害。请根据提示写一篇短文，指出不吃早餐的危害。提示1.不吃早餐对身体有害2.不吃早餐会影响上午听课。 Every morning, we have to go to school very early, so many of us don?t have breakfast. It?s very bad for our health. In the morning we usually have four classes. It?s a long time before lunch. If we don?t eat anything for breakfast, we may feel hungry and we can?t listen to the teacher carefully. We need energy very much while we are growing. I really think that we should have a good breakfast.

2 . How to keep healthy

If we want to keep our bodies healthy, we must have a good habit. We should get up and go to bed early and sleep at least eight hours every day. Do more exercise, such as walking, swimming, playing balls and so on. We should also eat healthy food—more fruit and vegetables and less meat. If you don?t feel well, you?d better see a doctor at once. And we should wash our hands before meals and drink enough boiled water every day. It?s necessary for our health. We should not throw litter about, keep long fingernails and smoke etc. It?s also very important.

3. 从饮食，睡眠和运动几方面谈谈怎样可以保持身体健康。

Health is one of the most important things for us. Without a good health, we can?t do anything. So we all want to keep healthy. But how?

If you want to be healthy, you must have a good diet. You shouldn?t have too much hot or sweet food with much fat on them. They are all bad for your health. Instead, you should have vegetables and fruit to keep yourself healthy.

You should also sleep well. A student should sleep at least 8 hours a day. Besides, more exercises are necessary, too. You should take more exercises to make yourself stronger and healthier.

Since health is so important, we should try our best to keep healthy.

4. 介绍你的一个朋友的兴趣爱好和生活习惯（不少于60词）

He thinks he isn't pretty healthy. He doesn't like exercise, so he does exercise once a week. He is very fat. He doesn't like vegetables, so he hardly ever eats vegetables. He likes eating junk food. He thinks it is very nice. He eats them about four or five times a week. He loves milk, but he doesn't drink it every day. He only drinks them two or three times a week. He eats fruit once or twice a week. But he sleeps nine hours every night. His lifestyle is not very well. But he knows healthy lifestyle helps him get good grades. He tries to eats some vegetables and eats lots of fruit. And he wants his parents to play sports with him. He wants to be the healthiest.

5.假如你的爸爸是个医生，曾参加了2003年的非典防治工作，虽然非典已经过去了，但是他对一家人的健康仍然很重视。请你写一篇60词左右的短文，讲一下只要预防得当，疾病并不可怕。参考词汇：personal health个人健康spit吐痰overwork使?过于疲劳

Keeping healthy

My father is a doctor. In 2003, he took an active part in the battle against SARS. He said, “We don?t have to be afraid of catching the illness. If we have good habits, we can keep the illness away.” My father and I like running in the morning. We keep the windows open so that the air in the room is clean and fresh. We wash our hands

before meals. We have healthy food and drink. We don?t spit here and there. He told us not to overwork because too much work will make us tired and make it easy to get sick.

6.你的爸爸抽烟吗？请写一篇小短文描述抽烟的害处，回家后读给你的爸爸听。（60词左右）提示如下： 1.抽烟有害健康,不能长寿； 2.抽烟易导致疾病； 3.抽烟还危害别人。

Smoking and Health

Everyone knows smoking is bad for health. People who smoke too much may not live long. Many people die from smoking each year.

Smoking causes many illnesses. Smokers have bad teeth. A lot of people always cough because of smoking. Smoking can easily cause lung cancer.

Smoking is bad for smokers, and it?s also bad for women and children, too.

I hope all the smokers can give up smoking for themselves and also for the people around them. Let?s enjoy clean air.

7.假如你是Li Tao，请根据昨天的情况写一篇60词左右的日记。早上感到头疼，老打喷嚏(sneeze)，妈妈带你去医院，医生检查了一下并问了一些情况，最后给你开了一些药并让你好好休息。第二天你觉得好多了。

Wednesday, October 12th, 2009

I felt terrible yesterday morning. My mother took me to the hospital. “What?s your trouble, little boy?” the doctor asked. “I can?t stop sneezing and I have a headache.” “When did it start?” “This morning.” “Open your mouth and say ?Ah?.” My mother was worried and asked the doctor, “What?s the matter with him?” “He has a bad cold, but it?s nothing serious.” the doctor said. Then the doctor let me take some medicine. He asked me to stay in bed and have a good rest. I feel better after taking the medicine

.

8.假设李平是你的朋友，他目前的身体状况不好。他从来不锻炼，他经常感到很紧张，很疲倦，他爱吃零食，有时会胃疼。这几天，他感冒了。头很痛。请写一封信给他，并提些建议。 Dear LiPing,

I am sorry to hear that you are not feeling well。I think you should see a doctor，then you should take some medicines，and drink a lot of water。 You said you are stressed out and tired。Why do not you listen to music and go to bed early。

You should also try to exercise。Eating less junk food。Eating more healthy food，like apple，orange and milk 。I think they are good for your health。

I hope you feel better soon！

Yours×××

9.假如李明是你的好朋友，根据提示写一篇80词左右的短文介绍李明的业余爱好。（短文开头已给出）提示语：1.李明以前是个电影迷, 一周至少去看两次电影，有时租VCD在家里看，最喜欢的影星是姜文； 2.李明现在的兴趣是集邮, 认为集邮非常有趣，可以从邮票上学到很多关于人物、地点、历史的知识, 有些旧邮票非常有价值；3.上周五是李明的生日, 他从朋友那里得到了许多邮票，非常高兴。

Li Ming is my good friend. He has many hobbies. He used to be a movie fan. He went to the movie theater at least twice a week. Sometimes he rented VCDs and watched them at home. His favorite movie star was Jiang Wen.

Now Li Ming is interested in collecting stamps. He thinks it?s great fun. He can learn a lot about people, places, history and many other things from stamps. Some old

stamps are very valuable.

Last Friday was Li Ming?s birthday. He got many stamps from his friends. Li Ming was very happy.

10.根据下列班级活动调查表，用英语写一篇文章。

Here 8. Most students watch TV every day. Some students watch TV twice a week. Some students watch TV four times a week. Some students have sports every day. Some students have sports twice a week. Most students have sports four times a week. All the students do homework every day. No students do homework twice or four times a week.

11.根据下列育英中学八年级（1）班学生上学方式 的调查表，用英语写一篇短文。不少于they go to school in different ways. Fifteen students take buses because they live far from the school. Ten students walk. They think walking is good for their health and they live near the school. Twenty-five students ride their bikes to school because they like riding bikes very much and their homes are not very far from the school. No one goes to school by car.

12.以“How did you spend last Sunday? Did you have a good time? What were you doing at different times last Sunday?”为内容，写一篇80词左右的短文。

提示：watch a movie, climb mountains, play basketball, visit friends, play computer games, do housework ... happy, excited, sad ..

A Happy Sunday

I had a happy day last Sunday. From 6: 30 to 7: 00, I was running along the road. At 8: 00 a. m. I was doing cleaning at home, because my parents were out. At 9: 50, I was watching a movie with my friend, Han Xingxing. The film was very interesting, and it made us excited. From 2: 20 to 4: 30, I was playing basketball with my classmates on our school playground. At 6: 00 p.m. my grandparents, my parents and I were having a big dinner together in a restaurant. We all felt very happy and enjoyed it.

I was watching TV from 7: 30 to 9: 30 at home in the evening, and then I went to bed.

13.想象我去哪里度假，和谁一起去，为什么去那里度假，什么时候出发，那里天气怎么样，在那里呆多长时间。

On the holiday morning ,I went to the park with my friend, because this day is my

friend's birthday, my friend wanted me to go to the park with her, so I went to the park with my friend, there were lots of people in the park, the weather was good. We stayed in the park about two hours, we left at about nine o'clock. In the afternoon went to my aunt's home with my parents, my aunt gave me lots of sweet, (this is my favorite food). In the evening, I ate dinner with my parents at my aunt's home, at eight o'clock, we went home today, I?m very happy, how about your holiday?

14.假设你的一个笔友上个星期天 8：30在火车站接他后来到苏州动物园。那里有很多不同种类的动物。12：00吃午饭。然后乘车前往虎丘（Tiger Hill），那里风景秀丽，你们玩得很开心等。（字数60左右）

One of my pen pals came to see me last Sunday. I went to meet him at the train station at 8:30 a.m. We went to Suzhou Zoo together then. There were many different kinds of animals. At 12:00 we had lunch. After that we went to the Tiger Hill by bus. It was very beautiful there and we enjoyed ourselves very much.

15.依照下列问句，为题写一篇60词左右的短文。

1.What hobbies did you use to have? Why did you like them?

2.What hobbies do you have now? Why do you like them?

3.What different hobbies do you have in different seasons?

My Hobbies

Different people have different hobbies. I used to ride a bike and read story books. They could give us lots of knowledge. I keep cats and dogs. I thought pets were very friendly and lovely, but now I like listening to music and chatting on the Internet, because music can relax me after the daily work and chatting can bring me happiness and friendship.

I have different hobbies in different seasons. In spring I like flying kites. In summer I go swimming. I often climb hills in the fall. I like making snowmen best in winter.

16.

Class 5, Grade 8, Ningde No. 108 Middle School. I like collecting stamps and singing. At weekends I often go boating in the park, and go to the movies, too. When I grow up, I want to be a soldier.

17.Tony作为中外文化交流的使者，从加拿大来到北京参加了一个月的“体验中国”活动。现在，他想写封信将在这里的学习和生活情况告诉远方的父母。请根据以下提示，帮助Tony完成这封信。

提示： 1.与中国学生相互学习，相互交流，周末参加体育活动; 2.游览北京的名胜古迹，观看京剧(Peking Opera), 品尝美食, 了解中国历史; 3.喜欢这里的生活。 要求：1.语言规范，字迹工整。2.词数在60-80之间；开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Dad and Mom,

How is it going? I hope you are in good health. I enjoyed living in Beijing very much. I studied and communicated culture with Chinese students. At the weekends, I played different kinds of sports. Last week I visited many places of interest in Beijing, and I saw Peking Opera yesterday. I enjoyed delicious food here and learned a lot about Chinese history. Hope to see you soon.

Yours,

Tony

18.假设你是导游，请根据下面表格所给的提示，用英语向外宾简单介绍一下景

Welcome to the Sandu Island! Now let me tell you something about it. The Sandu Island is a beautiful place surrounded by the sea and it has a long history. It?s a good place to spend holidays because there are many places of interest on it.

You can have great fun on this island. You can go boating, go fishing and have picnics if you like. Besides, you can walk along the beach.

You?ll stay on the island for the whole morning, have lunch on the island and leave

in the afternoon. While you are traveling, pay attention to your own safety.

Hope you have a good time on the island!

Thank you.

19.北京仁爱国际英语学校八年级学生魏环境向福州的网友李志愿发了一封电子邮件，询问了一些情况。请根据来信帮他回一封电子邮件。

篇五：中考英语写作中常出现的错误及范文

中考英语写作中常出现的错误及范文

一篇优秀的英语作文在内容和语言两方面应是一个统一体，任何一方面的欠缺都会直接影响到作文的质量。本文整理了中考作文常出现的的是个错误，以及部分优秀作文范文。 第一：中考作文常出现的错误

1. 审题不清

如2014年一篇中考真题作文要求写一项最喜欢的课外活动，有些考生将作文的主题定位为“我最喜欢的活动”，偏离了“一项、课外活动”这一主题。依据作文的评分原则，若文章内容不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确，都会被判为零分。

2.拼写错误

拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功，但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差，同时也直接影响内容的表达，通常会降低作文的档次。

3.名词单复数问题

误 my father and my mother is all teacher。

正 my father and my mother are both teachers。

4.缺少动词

在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的，但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有 动词来构成，如：“我累了。”这个句子没有动词作谓语，而用形容词，但英语形容词不能作谓语，一定要写成：i'm tired。

误 i happy i can come to beijing zoo。

正 i am happy i can come to beijing zoo。

误 the apples cheap. i'll take some。

正 the apples are cheap. i'll take some。

5.缺少介词、冠词等

还有一些考生因为没有熟练掌握介词或者冠词的用法，不了解中英文语言习惯的不同，也会出现明显的错误，造成丢分现象。

误 because heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting。

正 because of the heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting。

6.代词的误用

英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分;此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词，而英语中物主代词是不可省略的，代词的误用是考生最容易发生的错误。

误 i mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for i father。 正 my mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for my father。

7.句子不完整

有的考生因为对句子结构认识模糊，所以出现只写半句的现象，这也是造成失分的原因之一。

误 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. for example, my friend in high school。

(这段文章的第二句话没有动词，他不能独立构成一个句子。这是一个非常常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。)

正 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college, for example, my friend in high school。

8.前后不一致

所谓不一致，包括数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致、主谓不一致等。 例1. when one have knowledge, he can do what he want to do。

(人一旦有了知识，他就能想干什么就干什么。)

剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has ;同理，want应改为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致。

改为 when one has knowledge , he can do what he wants (to do)

9.时态、人称和数的搭配错误

汉语动词无时态、人称和数的变化，而对英语来说，这些都至关重要。例： 误 when i get to the station the train leave。

正 when i got to the station the train had left。

10.综合性错误

综合性错误是指单词的大小写和标点符号的错误等，以及形容词和副词的混淆、连词的误用等等。这些都是靠考生平时知识的积累，所以考生应该从平时练习出发，每天坚持写英语日记，多读适合自己英语水平的原版著作，提高自己的英语素养。

第二：优秀作文范文

范文1：〖题目〗请你仔细阅读下面的招聘广告。

Boys and girls aged 12-15.

Are you good with children?

Happy kids winter camp Needs help with:

sports music computers

Come and join us! Send your personal (个人) information to hkwc @163.com. 假如你是李平想要应聘，请你根据招聘广告中的要求，在表格空白处至少填出两项你所能做的事情。并根据表格中的所有信息，发一封e-mail，介绍你的个人情况、兴趣爱好及能力。字数40～60。信的开头、结尾已给出

Name——Age——School——Like——can

Li Ping——13——No.3 Middle School——Reading,computers,Playing basketball Dear sir,

I want to join your Winter Camp to help the children with sports and music. I think I can be good with the children and I hope to get your letter soon. Yours, Li Ping

〖范文〗Dear sir,

I want to join your Winter Camp to help the children with sports and music. My name is Li Ping I am thirteen (years old). I study / am a student in No. 1 Middle School. I like reading and playing basketball. I like computers, too. I can play football well. I can stag many English songs, And I can dance and swim. I can surf the Internet and send e-mails.

I think I can be good with the children and I hope to get your letter soon. Yours,

Li Ping

范文2：〖题目〗假如你的爸爸是个医生，曾参加了2003年的非典防治工作，虽然非典已经过去了，但是他对一家人的健康仍然很重视。请你写一篇60词左右的短文，讲一下只要预防得当，疾病并不可怕。参考词汇：personal health个人健康 spit吐痰；overwork使??过于疲劳 food and drink饮食

〖范文〗Keeping healthy

My father is a doctor. In 2003, he took an active part in the battle against SARS.

He said,“We don't have to be afraid of catching the illness. If we have good habits, we can keep the illness away.”

My father and I like running in the morning. We keep the windows open so that the air in the room is clean and fresh. We wash our hands before meals. We have healthy food and drink. We don't spit here and there. He told us not to overwork because too much work will make us tired and make it easy to get sick.

范文3〖题目〗你的爸爸抽烟吗？请写一篇小短文描述抽烟的害处，回家后读给你的爸爸听。（60词左右）提示如下：

1.抽烟有害健康,不能长寿；2.抽烟易导致疾病；3.抽烟还危害别人。

〖范文〗Smoking and Health

Everyone knows smoking is bad for health. People who smoke too much may not live long. Many people die from smoking each year.

Smoking causes many illnesses. Smokers have bad teeth. A lot of people always cough because of smoking. Smoking can easily cause lung cancer.

Smoking is bad for smokers, and it's also bad for women and children, too. I hope all the smokers can give up smoking for themselves and also for the people around them. Let's enjoy clean air.

范文4〖题目〗有很多同学早晨上学不吃早餐，这是一个不好的习惯，对身体有很大的危害。请根据提示写一篇短文，指出不吃早餐的危害。70个词左右。

提示：1.不吃早餐对身体有害；2.不吃早餐会影响上午听课。

〖范文1〗

Every morning we have to go to school very early, so many of us don't have breakfast. It's very bad for our health. In the morning we usually have four classes. It's a long time before lunch. If we don't eat anything for breakfast, we may feel hungry and we can't listen to the teacher carefully. We need energy very much while we are growing. I really think that we should have a good breakfast.

〖范文2〗How to keep healthy

If we want to keep our bodies healthy, we must have a good habit. We should get up and go to bed early and sleep at least eight hours every day. Do more exercise, such as walking, swimming, playing balls and so on. We should also eat healthy food——more fruit and vegetables and less meat. If you don't feel well, you'd better see a doctor at once. And we should wash our hands before meals and drink enough boiled water every day. It's necessary for our health.

We should not throw litter about, keep long fingernails and smoke etc. It's also very important.

范文5：〖题目〗中秋节的英语作文-The Mid-Autumn Festival

〖范文〗The Mid-Autumn Festival

The Mid-Autumn is a very important Chinese festival. It falls on the 15th day of August. A few days before the festival, everyone in the family will help to make the house clean and beautiful. Lanterns will be hung in front of the house.

On the evening there will be a big family dinner. People who work far away from their homes will try to come back for the union. After dinner, people will light the lanterns which are usually red and round. Children will play with their own toy lanterns happily.

At night the moon is usually round and bright. People can enjoy the moon while eating moon-cakes which are the special food for this festival. They can look back on the past and look forward to the future together. It is said that there was a dragon in the sky. The dragon wanted to swallow up the moon. To protect the frighten the dragon away.

〖译文〗中秋节

中秋节是中国一个很重要的节日，在八月十五号。在节日来临的前几天，家庭中的每一个人都帮着打扫房子，把房子装扮得漂漂亮亮的，灯笼挂在屋前。

晚上有一顿美餐，离家在外工作的人也要回来团圆。晚饭后，人们点亮灯笼，一般是红色的圆灯笼。孩子们会高高兴兴地玩他们的玩具灯笼。

晚上月亮又圆又大，人们在赏月的同时吃着中秋节特别的食品——月饼。人们在一起回顾过去，展望未来。据说天上有一条龙，它要把月亮吞下去。为了保护月亮，孩子们要弄出很大的响动把龙吓跑。

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