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篇一:2016上海中考作文评分

2016

上海中考必读:英语老师解密中考英语作文评分标准 中考英语作文难不难?其实不难,大部分同学都能得到12分以上,13、14分也是平常,但是要想得到15分甚至以上,就难上加难了。到底什么样的作文能得到16分以上?经过和中考命题组和阅卷组老师的交流,我们对中考英语作文评分标准做出了更深的理解。

一、中考英语写作的概述

关于体裁,本文包含记叙文和议论文两种最容易考到的类型,其他一些文体也有可能会综合涉及。

关于题材,同学们的反应可谓是“几家欢喜几家愁”。上海中考写作也有自己的特色:一般围绕着“生活化、学校化”来考察。近几年,考试题目实际上是一些比较贴近中学生活,为中学生能够的认识能力、生活经历所能驾驭的问题。比如:

2009年题目“I Want to Do something for my School”(我想为学校做的一件事)

2010年题目“I’m Proud of myself”(我为自己感到自豪)

2011年题目“I am a member of_____”(我是?的一员)

2012年题目“A letter to Joe”(给Joe的一封建议信)

2013年题目“How to protect myself”(如何保护自己)

2014年题目“The time next year”(明年此时)

2015年题目“I want to invent ____”(我想要发明___)

你对于在中考英语写作中拿高分有把握吗?实际考试中,许多学生却常常有“无话可说”的感觉。那要如何我们才能克服这种无话的状态,取得高分呢?归根到底这是一个英语基本功——单词、短语和句型的问题。

英语作文的前提条件是掌握了一定量的词汇、语法及体裁、题材等方面的知识。学生如果想要在写作方面有本质上的提升,必须进行多次的写作练习。因此,必须合理地设置训练步骤,遵循从初级到高级,从简单到复杂的原则去练习,经过一段写作实践之后,写作水平一定会有大幅度的提高。

二、中考英语写作的评分标准

1、老师拿到的标准

写作水平的高低和文章的好坏,分数是最直接的评分标准,也是考生们最关心的。但是多少考生真正透彻知道中考英语写作的评分标准?什么样的文章才是阅卷老师眼中的好文章?

评分标准:

①整篇作文满分20分,其中内容8分,语言8分,结构4分。

②内容贴切,句子流畅,用语准确,加整体印象分1分。

③不满60个词,少1——5个词扣0.5分,6——10个词扣1分。④所有给出问题涉及的三项内容,每少一项扣3分。

⑤每个拼写,大小写,标点符号等错误扣0.5分;同一的拼写错误不重复扣分,扣分总和不超过2分。

⑥语法错误每项扣1分,同一错误不重复扣分,扣分总和不超过2分。

2、老师想看到的标准

语言(8分):词——固定搭配、高频重点词汇;

句——复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!内容(8分):(总、分)论点、论据支持句;

简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。

结构(4分):语言结构——句子重点突出、内容清晰;

内容结构——论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系;句数控制——对于相对内容的句数掌握;

亮点、出彩点——排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等

篇二:2016上海中考英语词汇和短语 完整版

2015年上海市中考英语词汇表

1 ability 2 able 3

about 4 about 5 above 6 abroad 7 accept 8 accident 9 accurate 10 achieve 11 across 12 act 13 active 14 activity 15 actor 16 actress 17 actually 18 add 19 addition 20 address 21 Adult 22 advantage 23 advertisement 24 advice 25 afford 26 afraid 27 Africa 28 after 29 after 30 after 31 afternoon 32 again 33 against 34 age 35

aged

n. adj. prep. adv. prep. adv. v. n. adj. v. prep. v. adj. n. n. n. adv. v. n. n. n. & adj.n. n. n. v. adj. n. prep. adv. conj. n. adv. prep. n. adj.

能力,才能 能够;有能力的 关于

大约;到处,四处 在??上面 到(在)国外 接受

事故,意外的事 精确的 达到,获得 横过,穿过

表演,扮演(角色);行动积极的;活跃

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的 活动 男演员 女演员 实际地;现实地 添加,增加 增加 地址 成年人

有利条件;优势,优点 广告

忠告,劝告;建议 负担得起,抽得出(时间)害怕的;担心的 非洲

在??之后;在??后面 在后;后来 在??以后 下午

再一次;再;又 对着,反对 年龄;时代

有??年岁的;上年龄的

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36 agent 37 ago 38 agree 39 ahead 40 aim 41 aim 42 air 43 airline 44 airport 45 alarm 46 alive 47 all 48 all 49 all 50 all 51 allow 52 almost 53 alone 54 alone 55 along 56 along 57 already 58 also

59 although / though 60 altogether 61 always 62 A.M.(a.m.) 63 amazing 64 ambition 65 America 66 American 67 among 68 amount 69 amusement 70 amusing 71 ancient 72

and

n. 代理人 adv. 以前 v. 同意;应允 adv. 在前,向前 n. 目的;目标 v. 打算;瞄准 n. 空气;大气 n. 航线 n. 机场 n. 警报

adj. 活着的,存在的 adj. 全(部);总;整 adv. 全部地 pron. 全部;全体人员 n. 全部;全体人员 v. 允许,准许 adv. 几乎,差不多 adj. 单独的 adv. 单独地 prep. 沿着;顺着

adv. 向前;和??一起;一同 adv. 已经 adv. 也 conj. 虽然;尽管 adv. 总共;全部地 adv. 总是;一直;永远 上午 adj. 令人惊讶的 n. 雄心;野心 n. 美国;美洲 adj. 美国的;美洲的

prep. 在??中间;在(三个以上)之间;n. 数量,总数

n. 娱乐;消遣;娱乐活动 adj. 引起乐趣的 adj. 古代的,古老的 conj.

和;又;而

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73 angrily 74 angry 75 animal 76 another 77 another 78 answer 79 answer 80 any 81 any

82 anybody / anyone 83 anything 84 anywhere 85 apologize 86 appear 87 apple 88 April 89 area 90 argue 91 arm 92 army 93 around 94 around 95 arrange 96 arrive 97 art 98 article 99 artist 100

as 101 as 102 as 103

Asia 104 ask 105 assistant 106 at 107 attack 108 attend 109

attention

adv. 生气地;愤怒地 adj. 生气的;愤怒的 n. 动物

adj. 再一;另一;别的;不同的 pron. 另一个

n. 回答;答复;答案;回(信) v. 回答;答复;回(信)

adj. (用于疑问句,否定句,条件句)一些;什么;任何的;pron. 任一的(无论)哪一个;

(无论)哪些 pron. 任何人,无论谁

pron. 什么事(物);任何事(物) adv. 任何地方 v. 道歉 v. 出现 n. 苹果 n. 四月

n. 面积,范围;地区 v. 争论,争吵 n. 手臂 n. 军队 adv. 在周围;环绕 prep. 在??周围 v. 安排;布置 v. 到达;达到 n. 艺术 n. 文章 n. 艺术家;画家

conj. 像??(一样),如同;因为;当??时 prep. 作为,当作;当??时; adv. 同样地 n. 亚洲

v. 问,询问;请求,要求 n. 助手,助理

prep. 在(几点钟);在(某处);(表示动作的目标和方向等) v. 进攻,袭击 v. 出席,参加 n.

注意,关心

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110 attitude 111 attract 112 attractive 113 audience 114 August 115 aunt 116 Australia 117 Australian 118 automatic 119 autumn 120 available 121 average 122 average 123 award 124 award 125 away 126 awful 127 baby 128 back 129 back 130 background 131 bad(worse,worst) 132 bag 133 bakery 134 balance 135 ball 136 balloon 137 banana 138 bank 139 bar 140 base 141 basic 142 basket 143 basketball 144 bath 145 battery 146

battle

n. 态度 v. 吸引,引起 adj. 有吸引力的 n. 观众,听众 n. 八月

n. 姑;姨;伯母;舅母;婶 n. 澳大利亚;澳洲

adj. 澳大利亚的;澳洲的;澳大利亚人 adj. 自动的 n. 秋天;秋季 adj. 可用的;可得到的 adj. 平均的;普通的 n. 平均数 n. 奖品,奖励 v. 授予 adv. 离开;远离 adj. 可怕的 n. 婴儿

adv. 回(原处);向后 n. 背后,后部;背 n. 背景

adj. 坏的;有害的,不利的;糟糕;可惜;严重的n. 书包;提包;袋子 n. 面包店 n. 平衡 n. 球 n. 气球 n. 香蕉 n. 银行 n. 酒吧

n. 根据地;基地;基础 adj. 基本的;基础的 n. 篮子 n. 篮球 n. 洗澡 n. 电池,蓄电池 n.

战斗;战役

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147 be 148 beach 149 bear

150 beat (beat, beaten) 151 beautiful 152 beautifully 153 because

154 become(became,become) 155 bed 156 bedroom 157 before 158 before 159 before 160 beg

161 begin(began,begun) 162 beginning 163 behavior 164 behind 165 behind 166 being 167 believe 168 bell 169 belong 170 below 171 belt 172 beside 173 besides 174 besides

175 best(good和well的最高级) 176 better(good和well的比较级)177 better 178 between 179 bicycle / bike 180 big 181 bill 182 bin 183

bird

v. 是;成为(原形,其人称和时态形式有n. am,is,are,was,were,being,been海滨,海滩 ) n. 熊

v. 敲打;跳动;打赢 adj. 美丽的 adv. 优美地 conj. 因为 v. 变得;成为 n. 床 n. 卧室

prep. 在??以面;在??前面 adv. 以前 conj. 在??之前 v. 请求,乞求,乞讨 v. 开始,着手 n. 开始;开端 n. 行为,举止 prep. 在??后面 adv. 在后面;向后 n. 生物;人 v. 相信,认为 n. 钟,铃 v. 属,附属 prep. 在??下面 n. (皮)带;带子 prep. 在??旁边;靠近 prep. 除??以外(还有) adv. 还有,此外

adj. & 最好的;最好地,最好的(人或物) adv.adj. & 较好的,更好的;更好地

adv.n. 较好的事物;较优者 prep. 在(两者)之间;在??中间 n. 自行车 adj. 大的

n. 1.帐单;2.钞票,纸币 n. 箱子;垃圾箱 n.

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篇三:最新 上海市2015-2016年中考英语模拟试题(含答案)

中考英语模拟试题

一、 听对话,从所给的A、B、C中选出正确答案

( )1. What are they talking about?

A. Tim’s family photo?B. Tim’s younger brother.

C. Tim’s twin sister

( )2. What does Ben look like now?

A. He is shortB. He is thin C. He is tall

( )3. What can we learn from the dialogue?

A. The woman likes travelling.B. The woman is worried about her son.

C. The woman can’t speak English.

( )4. Where will the man work?

A. In the bank B. At the TV station C. The man hasn’t decided yet.

( )5. Which tie is the man going to probably take?

A. The black oneB. The blue one C. The pink one

二、听对话,从所给的A、B、C中选出正确答案

听下面一段对话,回答6、7小题

( )6. What exercise does Mike take?A. Riding a bike B. Going swimmingC. Playing basketball

( )7. How often does Lucy take exercise?

A. Every day B. Once a week C. Twice a week

听下面一段对话,回答8、9小题

( )8. What will Alice do if she were Bob?

A. Go to universityB. Get a jobC. Study medicine

( )9. How does bob feel when he asks his parents for money?

A. HappyB. AngryC. Sorry

听下面一段对话,回答10、11、12小题

( )10. Can you guess who the woman is?

A. She is a teacherB. She is a painterC. She is a guide

( )11. When will the modern things be shown in Japan?

A. In five weeks B. In one week C. In six weeks

( )12. Who inverted those new things?

A. Tom BrownB. EdisonC. We don’t know

听下面一段对话,回答13、14、15小题

( )13. If the man decides to book a two-bed room, how much will he pay?

A. 285 dollars a monthB. 250 dollars a monthC. 35 dollars a day

( )14. Which of the following is NOT true?

A. A two-bed room is much bigger.B. A one-bed room has a CD player.

C. A one-bed room is a little cheaper

( )15. What can’t they do if they book the two-bed room?

A. Cook by themselvesB. Swim in a poolC. Watch CDs

三、听短文,从所给的A、B、C中选出正确答案

( )16.What’s the main idea of the passage?

A. Elise was having trouble learning English

B. Elise solved her problem of learning English

C. Elise’s challenges, solution and influence.

( )17. How did Elise pronounce right? A. She borrowed some tapes from her English teacher.

B. She listened to her teacher’s tapes and repeated the easy sentences.

C. She listened to her teacher’s tape and repeated the difficult sentences.

( )18. How often did Elise club meet a week?

A. Once B. Three timesC. Twice

( )19. Who helped Elise practice her writing?

A. Her teacher B. Her classmates C. Her pen pal

( )20. What should we learn from Elise when we are in trouble?

A. Go away from the difficultiesB. Face the challenges

C. Worry about the problem

四、听短文,完成表格

五、单项选择

( )26. –Why did you laugh just now?

–Ted wanted to tell us ____ very story, but he forgot ____ ending himself.

A. a; anB. the; theC. the; a D. a; the

( )27. –Lucy, you look so excited. Why? --I will have a ____ holiday.

A. two-weekB. two weeksC. two-weeks C. two week’s

( )28. – She has cut the cake into ____ pieces. Which piece do you want?

--The ____ one. It’s the biggest.

A. five, four B. five, fourth C. fifth, fourth D. fifth, four

( )29. That’s ____ brother’s shirt. It isn’t ____.

A. my, yourB. yours, mineC. hers, hisD. his, yours

( )30.--____ will the dinner be ready? --Just a minute.

A. How muchB. How longC. How soonD. How often

( )31. –I really like to watch the TV program I AM A SINGER.

--Me, too. It’s one of the ____ TV programs I’ve ever seen.

A. least boringB. least interestingC. most boringD. most interesting

( )32. –Do you have your summer plan, Bill?

--Well, I want to go ____ to relax with my family.

A. interesting somewhereB. nowhere interesting

C. somewhere interestingD. interesting nowhere

( )33. –When is Jay’s concert? –It’s ___ three o’clock ___ the afternoon.

A. at; inB. at; onC.in; in D. on; in

( )34. Why not ____ your teacher for help when you can’t finish___ the story by yourself.

A.to ask, write B. to, writingC. ask, writingD. asking, to write

( )35. –I think the girl under the tree must be Alice. –No, it ____ be her. She is in the gym.

A. can’t B. mustn’t C. may D. may not

( )36. Smoking is bad for your health, you’d better ____.

A. set it upB. give it upC. pick it upD. give up it

( )37.----The Amazing Spider Man 2 is on these days. It’s fantastic.

--Really? But I ____ it yet.

A. don’t seeB. won’t seeC. haven’t seenD. am not seeing

( )38.After the earthquake, we heard of lots of ____ stories, and all of us were deeply ____.

A. moving; movedB. moving; moving C. moved; moving D. moved; moved

( )39.If you want to go to see the movie this evening, so ____I.

A. doB. amC. willD. should

( )40. –could you please tell me ____?—Lf course. On the second floor.

A. when you bought the shoesB. where you bought the shoes

C. why you bought the shoesD. where did you buy the shoes

六、完型填空

“It’s raining cats and dogs!” Grandpa shouted.

Little Richie came running to the window. He wanted to see the _41___ falling from the sky. He looked out of the window, but it was _42___ that there were no cats or dogs. He only saw small pools of water on the ground.

“Man, it’s really coming down out there!”Uncle Bob agreed _43___ he looked out of the window,too. Richie scrached his head(挠头). What was coming down? First they talked about cats and dogs that _44___ be seen. Now someone said”it”. What was going on with these_45___?

“wow!”Aunt Susie shouted as she looked out of the window. “It’s raining

really hard.”

Richie _46___ his aunt. “It’s raining hard,” he agreed, “but _47___ are the cats and dogs?”

Grandpa laughed, “Gichie, that just _48___ it’s raining really hard.” “So why didn’t you just say that?”Richie _49___. It was irritating( 恼人的) when people spoke like they were not speaking English at all.

“We did. You just didn’t understand these _50___.” Richie’s cousin said with a big smile.

“Well, now I do.”Richie said.

( )41. A. tigers and lionsB. pigs and sheep

C. cats and dogsD. chickens and ducks

( )42. A. importantB. possible C. necessary D. strange

( )43.A. unless B. after C. till D. though

( )44.A. couldn’t B. shouldn’t C. needn’tD. mustn’t

( )45.A. days B. animals C. ideas D. people

( )46.A. shouted atB. looked atC. laughed atD. pointed at

( )47.A. what B. howC. whereD. who

( )48.A. explainsB. proves C. means D. shows

( )49.A. orderedB. thoughtC. repeatedD. asked

( )50.A. sayingsB. questions C. objectsD. stories

七、阅读理解

A

Mr. Lee was in bed and was trying to go to sleep when he heard the bell ring. He turned on

the light and looked at his clock. It was twelve o'clock. "Who can it be at this time of night?" He

thought. He decided to go and find out. So he got of bed, put on his dressing gown (浴袍) and

went to the door. When he opened the door, there was nobody there. "That is ver

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