追星记英语作文

篇一：英语作文解题技巧

英语作文解题技巧

一、注重文章的思想性

思想是文章的灵魂。六级考试除了选拔人才外，还有一个重要的目的，就是通过一次考试，教育一批人。使考生在思想上受到深刻教育。所以，不管什么作文题目，都是同一个题目：唱支山歌给党听，说党爱听的话。不要只想自己。觉得写作文没有话说，就是因为只想自己。

下面举几个例子：

写浪费问题，思路如下：1.浪费是对自己的不尊重，也是对家长的不尊重。

2.对农民的不尊重，农民是中国最需要尊重的人。3.浪费缺乏长远的眼光和战略。

4.我们的行为会影响我们的下一代，以后中国会成什么样子？(一斤芝麻炸出一斤油来！)

写你去医院探望生病住院的同学,可以这样构思:李明在SARS期间送一个迷路的老太太回家,他主动负责,在列车上不幸感染了SARS。住进了小汤山。他最需要鼓励，同学们不断发短信鼓励他，给他买了个大蛋糕，开生日PARTY??

写辞职信,以下几种理由不太恰当:

1 工作都快一个月了,还没给我重要的岗位。

2 大学学过的知识还没用上十分之一。(老师说：等你把学过的知识用完了再来考六级吧！) 3 上班太远,要三个小时。（老师说：我上班要三个半小时，你着什么急！）

以下是合适的理由：

我是一个刚从学校毕业，来自边远山区的女生。（老师心想：这是小女生写的！是小女生写的！）工作了两个月后，发现在大学所学的知识远不能满足工作的需要。并且，我由于身体不太好，无法适应单位长时间的加班。最重要的是：我非常难以适应公司里那种勾心斗角的人际关系?? （老师认为女生是弱者，平时很少骂女生。看到这里，心肯定软了 ?? 要是你说你是个强壮的男生，老师会让你再考三次，看你还强壮不强壮！）

写任何一个问题，都应上升到国际和未来的高度：写乱扔垃圾，就可以从南宁的国际形象入手。写追星问题，可以从业余爱好和学业的关系入手，着眼未来。

还要牢记大学生肩负的责任，并善于针砭我们大学生身上存在的缺点。（写作文就是要尽量写我们，写自己，老师爱听这样的话。）

总之，要讲政治，做又红又专的人才，使自己的言行符合党的方针政策。

二、采用英文写作的思维习惯，不用“Chinese English”

1、 文字要连贯。 除了要用however, and等连词外，遇到并列的事情时，要用“in the first

place?? in the second place?? the last but not least important??”这样的连接词。否则不得分！用“in the first place”代替“firstly”可增加很多字数。

2、 采用高级的句式。 如主语+插入语+谓语+宾语：Nanning, my hometown, is??. Native to China, Panda is lovely. 又如：Can I send you the money via web? Since my university, which is located in Nanning, is far away from the down town area, and I’m fully occupied by studies. (英国人都恨不得把所有的信息在一句话里说完。不象中国人，细言慢语，层层展开。所以翻译时，一句英语可以翻成四句汉语。)

特别是在文章开头第一段，如果用上定语从句或状语等，就拿高分了。

3、 重要的事情先说，开门见山。

4、 文章的第一句、每段的第一句一般是主题句。

5、 如果写图表作文，主语应该是图中所反映的内容，写“The picture

shows that??” 是错的，因为主语是“The picture”，而不是图中的内容。应该写“As is vividly depicted in the picture above, the boy??”或“As is apparently revealed in the chart above, the girl?? 第一个词是“As”的必满分。

三 、了解阅卷老师的心理

1 首先字迹要工整。老师认为写字不认真的学生，做事态度也不认真。既然是这样，也没有必要让他过六级。

2 在写信需要自我介绍时，就说你是清华/北大的。现在的老师都特别势力，你要是说你是平顶山煤矿学校的，就算把象范文那样的文章搬到试卷上去，也是不及格！

3 提到自己英语水平时，就说你四级考了90分，口语是A；考研英语得了85分。老师心想你英语水平这么高，六级怎么也得拿及格吧。他要想给你不及格，都得先摸摸自己脑门，看看有没有发烧。

4 写浪费话题的作文，千万不要写老师浪费粉笔！要是写了，就算你写出范文的水平，也是不及格！（老师一听就烦）

四、(转 载 于:wWW.zw2.Cn 爱作文网)作文要体现时尚、科技和人性

邮局汇款（Post Money）---------过时、封建。

上网付费（Send Money Via Web）---------时尚。

邮购资料的送货方式用EMS(Express Mail Service)---------时尚。

篇二：考研英语一作文第二段的具体写作框架

考研英语一作文第二段的具体写作框架本文主要内容为第二段写作。

解析：第二段为整篇作文非常重要的段落，是得失分的关键。需要考生予以高度重视。下面介绍两种行文思路——负向文章行文思路和正向文章行为思路。

一、负向文章行文思路：

负向文章行文思路主要是对话题的过渡、分析与数据/举例支撑。

A、过渡部分：

方案一:

(现实中大家热议XX话题。大家对此有不同的声音，但我…)In reality, the subject about +N/doing sth has long been a buzz in network community, the public as well as the media. Though a variety of voices can be heard,

I totally oppose that+句子/ (2005年——people turn a blind eye to their aging parents)I cannot agree more with you .

I can not oppose more against +N/I totally agree that+ 句子/ (2001爱心： love would brighten darkness/ love would cast light to the dark and brighten it. Where love would be, it will light up gloom)

I highly recommend that we should discourage people from doing sth (97吸烟—— discourage people, especially the youth, from smoking)

I can not agree more with the point that/ ( people are easily addicted to smoking and we should discourage them from doing that.)

方案二：

(图片反映的现象在快速发展中国各地区屡见不鲜，因此，这值得所有人的关注)In fact, the phenomenon reflected/mirrored by the cartoon typically occurs in many parts/regions of China, which are developing with breakneck speed, therefore, so it merits special attention from all walks of life.

方案三：

(这种情况值得大家关注。我的意见是)This situation/problem deserves careful concern/close attention from all walks of life, especially our young generation. I want to give my voice to

encourage sb to/ support that/ advocate that (2003温室花朵——parents should not relax the discipline in their families/ think twice about how to raise their kids.)

dote on sb 溺爱

discourage sb from doing sth/ put an end to (2003温室花朵——doting on their kids/giving too much love to their kids.

)/ stop doting on their kids. /curb(限制) sth/ check(限制) sth

B、原因分析(2-3条原因)

原因分析又分为外因和内因。

外因：社会、政府、媒体、家庭、学校，

① 法律缺失：

(问题是由法律不完善造成的) The current situation is often plagued by the absence(the lack of) of relative legislation(立法) and law enforcement

plague n瘟疫，疾病 v困扰

(当地政府没能填补xx方面的政策漏洞)The local authorities fail to close/fix loopholes in policies concerning (network community/ water pollution/dishonesty)

close/fix loopholes(漏洞)

② 媒体 mass media

(媒体对民意影响力大，媒体功能紊乱导致问题产生)The media has a powerful influence/impact on public opinion and a great deal of social conduct (social conduct社会行为)can be affected by the mass media. However, the dysfunction/malfunction of the media partially cause the problem that(问题) + .一句话

(媒体对民意影响力大，不幸的是，她的功能紊乱部分地导致问题)The mass media has great influence on public opinion via radio, TV program, magazines as well as newspapers. Unfortunately, it neglects to take that duty and therefore, leads to the problem that+一句话③ 学校 college/university/school

business/medical/law school

(大学不应只提供课程，还应提供训练去改善大学生的素质。)College, a community of undergraduates, are/is supposed to not only provide lectures and experiments to leverage their academic performance, but training as well as courses to improve their personalities.

(大学各团体应该发出声音。但明显的，他们大多数时候都是沉默的大多数)Societies from college and Student Union should make their voices heard by the whole society. But evidently, they are silent/mute majority most of the time.

the deaf mute

majority 成年人

minority 未成年人

administrations/departments/authorities/institutions concerned: lack supervision; insufficient management

④ 家庭(父母)

(家长是孩子最好的老师。孩子如何面对世界取决于家长如何教育。当家长忘了告诉他们的孩子该XX，问题会发生。)Parents are children’s best mentors. How children react to the world is largely determined(决心，确定，决定) by how parents parent and educate their kids in their childhood. When parents forget to let children understand that (句子), problems would, beyond a doubt, come up/pop up忽然出现.

pop-up广告弹窗

pop corn

pop music

Sb is determined to do

Tom is determined to be a teacher.

Sb has made up one’s mind to do

I have made up my mind to get through/pass the exam.

(家教会影响孩子的身心发展，并部分决定了孩子是否有个好的性格。如果家长经常在情感和身体上离开孩子，问题就出来了。)Parenting, would affect children’s mental development and physical growth， even partially determine whether he or she would have a good personality. When parents are often emotionally absent and even physically absent, problems would pop up.price n价格 v定价 pricing n定价

parent n父母 v教育 parenting n家教

function n作用，功能 v起效，发挥功能

functioning n起效，发挥功能

question n问题 v质疑

内因： 意识(awareness、consciousness)、心态mentality，品质性格(人性personality) etiquette礼仪、道德(morality——a slash in morality may cause crash in society)、责任感(accountability)、

(这种行为失当不仅是由于不知道造成的，而往往是心态不正确造成的)价值观In most cases, this misbehavior/pressing problem/situation is not simply caused by ignorance but by a lack of awareness of / lack of a proper mentality/attitude that+ 句子

(公共场合大声打手机是很失礼的)Talking loud over the phone in public places is a major breach of etiquette.

a major breach of principles/rules/regulations

(人类逃避责任时，问题就出现了)When individuals， as tiny part of society, skip/shrug off their responsibilities/fold their arms toward the problem/turn a blind eye to the situation, problems are bond to come up/ get pressing.

C、数据支撑：列举、举例、伪数据

05养老——A report published this year by the China Research Centre on (aging) forecasts/ indicates that over forty present of seniors spend their last years living alone

06自信——A survey concerning +N conducted by/ carried out by the China Research Centre on (successful people、high achiever) shows/indicates/demonstrates/ that self-confidence is the instrument(方法，途径) of their achievement/accomplishment/success.

A is the instrument of B(N/doing)

06追星——Opinion poll(民意调查) was conducted by the China Research Center on (也可以不写on sth ) to test (to how much degree, people would be affected by chasing idols and nearly 70 percent of respondents admitted that they wasted too much time and money chasing stars.waste time/money doing sth

(自身例子)One of my experiences would fully convince you that I am right. +例子Facts speak louder than words. +例子/I had an experience just like the picture indicates.

二、正向文章行文思路：

正向文章的行文思路主要是意义分析+数据支撑+箴言。

A：意义分析

以下是根据历年真题的作文话题例举出来的写作框架：

1、(健康——12乐观)N+ would enhance your emotional and spiritual well-being. A recent survey carried out by the China Research Center on Emotion demonstrates that a person who is ( ) tends to be more psychologically healthy and has a longer life expectancy/life span.

Keep chin up towards your future

make you a great man

2、(机会——13选择)N+would bring you more opportunities which does not guarantee you achievement overnight but means when a door is closed, more doors are open to you. Especially in current tight job fair, a person who is ( ) tends to win more job interviews over his or her opponents.

win sth over sb

stand out from sb

3、(提高个人素质——2004新起点) Being ready for challenge all the time means strong self-discipline which would contribute to the improvement of one’s personality and etiquette which would get you closer to your goal.

get sb closer to goal/dream

4、(社交，人际) () would, beyond a doubt, get you more social(善于交际) and therefore deliver a great contribution to enhance your interpersonal skills, foster your leadership, and make you a magnetic person/

strengthen personal charisma(领导魅力).

5、社会类话题可用到的作文框架：

help do sth

help sb in doing sth

(企业)() which would help build a friendly and healthy business environment that would spur enterprises on self-regulating and properly operating.

(良性竞争) ( ) would encourage all enterprises to participate into a fair play which would benefit both industries and the consumers.

which would lead to a win-win deal/result

(全面建设小康社会) (As the relationship between China and the rest of the world remains steady and stable ), more vitality would be injected into the building of a well-off society in an all-round way.

(社会发展平衡) To run a society of harmony, government are/is supposed to juggle equity and efficiency and ( ) would, without a doubt, help find balance between the two.

juggling’s one’s life

juggle v同时兼顾

the exchange of culture

B、数据支撑：

1、例证

To exemplify what I mean , I would share one of my memorable experiences with you.Nothing can exemplify my viewpoint better than the situation I once was confronted with .2011-旅游之余To exemplify my argument, I am going to examine(审视) a case (in which a neat and clear resort is favorable and popular by tourists. )

2、数据：data/figure/statistics

(1998年诚信)Data has always no emotion and is considered neutral/impartial which will never hide/shade the truth/reality. According to a recent poll on ( ), carried out by Sina.com,( percent of respondents/participants/subjects )

on average, six out of ten respondents would ( like to make friends with honesty person and do business with companies that carry good reputations. )

A out of B

03溺爱——Figures never tell a lie. Data that is pulled out of research findings proved that most successful persons were not born in a rich family.

(12自信)Average people like comfortable . If you do not want to end up with ordinary people, you should make your own path

(04起点)Life is too short to be average, and you should prepare for challenge all the time

C、箴言：

As an old saying goes, (confidence ) is (powerful strength) and it takes a lifetime to figure it out.

As the proverb goes, honesty is the best policy toward life.

Protection is the best attitude toward nature.

篇三：牛津英语中考作文经典句子

二．中考英语作文提分句型：

一、健康类：关注青少年心理健康或身体健康 观点：

1. 没什么比身体健康更重要：It is believed that nothing is more important than a healthy body.

2. 没有健康身体（心理）我们就会一事无成： Without a healthy body(mind), we can do nothing .

3. 我认为我们应该更多地锻炼：In my opinion, we should spend more time doing exercises.

4. 锻炼身体能让我们保持身体健康：An advantage of taking exercise is that it can keep us healthy.

5. 中学生面临的压力越来越大As middle school students, we are facing more and more stress in life.

6. 面对生活中的压力(困难)，我们应该微笑着去勇敢面对: When we are facing stress (difficulties) in life, the first thing we should do is smile to it (them).

7. 我们还可以向老师或父母寻求帮助：It is also a good choice for us to turn to our parents or teachers for help. (注: 所有困难类作文万用句型)

二．世界与环境：环保类 观点：

1.环保非常重要： There is no doubt that nothing is more important than protecting the environment/our earth.

2.环保需要我们人人共同努力: It is required that all of us work together in protecting the environment.

3. 环保需要我们从身边的小事入手: We should take action to protect the environment from our daily life.

三、叙事类：低碳生活的一天 观点：

1. 抒发感想：我们度过了最愉快的一天：We have a very good time today.

2. 我下定决心，以后要（植树/骑车出行/低碳活动等）： I have made up my mind to （do more planting/ ride bicycle）.

四、时事类：网络的利与弊

1.通过互联网/博客/微博，我们可以认识更多的新朋友，和朋友的沟通也更快捷方便: An advantage of the internet/blog/micro blog is that we can make more friends by it. Besides, the communication between us can become faster and more convenient.

2.然而，万事都有两面性：However, every coin has two sides.

3.互联网是把双刃剑：The Internet is a double edge sword.

4. 互联网/博客/微博也可能让我们面临危险，因为陌生人也能通过其找到我们: The internet/blog/micro blog may put us in danger, as a reason, it is easy enough for a stranger to find us through it.

5. 我们应该在父母或老师的帮助下合理地使用网络/博客/微博： it is better for us to use the internet/blog/micro blog with the help of our parents or teachers.

出题形式可能为：

一、短文征文类：这类作文一般会在题干后明确给出提示信息，如可能用到的词。考生应注意在行文过程中务必全部用到提示的词语，同时根据提示词语组织语言写作。

二、回信类：这类作文经常会给出来信，且不给出提示词语。考生注意，在动笔之前，务必仔细阅读来信，找出其中的隐含信息点（如要解决什么问题），划出来信中的关键词，同时在回信中要提及它们。另外，要注意书信的格式，如开头问好，结尾说"I am looking forward to hearing from you".

无论对中考题猜测如何，对中考作文写作方法的熟练掌握依然是王道。下面给出中考考前必备魔鬼万能句，并将每一类型用历年考过的话题进行举例，考生可在考前多多仿写，彻底掌握这些魔鬼万能句。

一、十三大连接关系词 -- 有逻辑，才有高分！

（考生在每类中挑选1-2个作为自己的专用词汇）

" 表示罗列、递进:

First / then / next / finally / last but not least

Besides / what's more / in addition / furthermore / moreover

" 表示时间顺序:（顺序）at first, in the beginning, to begin with, later, next, finally, at the same time, meanwhile," 表示解释说明： in this case, in fact, actually, that is to say …

" 表示转折关系: but, however, while, yet

" 表示并列关系: both… and ; also, too,as well, not only … but also, as well as, either …or, neither …nor" 表示因果关系:because, because of, since, as, for, thanks to…, due to…,

as a result, so…that, too…to…, such … that,

The reason why + 句子 ~~~ is that + 句子（之所以……的原因是……）

" 表示条件关系: as (so) long as, if, unless

" 表示让步关系: though, even if, even though,

however, whoever, whatever, whichever, wherever, whenever,

no matter ( how who, what, which, where, when, whom)

" 表示举例: for example, for instance, such as…, take… for example

" 表示比较:be similar to, similarly, the same as,

compared with (to)… among … , + 最高级 just like, just as,

" 表示目的: for this reason, so that, in order to, so as to,

" 表示强调: indeed, in fact, surely, certainly, without a doubt, there's no doubt, truly, obviously, above all," 表示概括归纳:in a word, in short, in brief, in conclusion

二、考前必背十大魔鬼万能句 -- 魔力十足保高分！

1). 正反观点双刃剑

on one hand, one the other hand / however, every coin has two sides.

用法：用于正反观点作文的转折关系。如网络利与弊，追星的优缺点。

例：On one hand, some of the students spend money on mobile phones. On the other hand, about 10% of them choose to buy books.

The internet gives us a more convenient life. However, every coin has two sides. it sometimes puts our children in danger.

2). 陈述观点有玄机

in my opinion, as far as I know, as we all know,例：As far as I think, Linhao is a brave boy who did his best when he faced great danger.

3). 被动语态很万能It is said that… 据说； It is reported that… 据报道

It is believed that… 大家相信； It is hoped that… 大家希望

It is well known that… 众所周知； It is thought that… 大家认为

It is suggested that据建议；It must be remembered that必须记住的是

用法：将近万能的插入语态，几乎任何句子都可以套上，但一定要注意通顺。

例：It is reported that after Wenchuan Earthquake happened, Linhao saved two of his classmates.

4). "毫无疑问"很强大

There is no doubt that 毫无疑问…There is no need to do 没必要做…

There is no point in doing 做某事毫无意义 There is no denying that ...不可否认的……

用法："毫无疑问"，这些句子接近万能！

例：There is no doubt that Linhao did his best when he faced danger.

5). "喜欢干嘛"成人句

like / love / enjoy doing be fond of doing喜欢做…

prefer A to B 喜欢A不喜欢B would rather do A than do B 宁愿做A不做B

用法：换用这些句子说"我喜欢"，"偏好……"，你的作文将被阅卷老师喜欢！

例： Some of us would rather spend the money on snacks than books.

6). "尽全力做"表决心

try / do one's best to do 竭尽全力做…spare no effort to do 不遗余力的做…

do whatever sb can (do ) to do 尽力做… do everything sb. can to do 尽某人全力做…

make up one's mind to do 下定决心做…

用法：用于"说说你的观点、态度、看法"这类作文中，表示一下决心。

例：I have made up my mind to do everything I can to help my parents with the housework in the summer holiday.

7). 提提建议表表态

had better (not) do 最好(不)做how about / what about doing …怎么样? If I were you, I would do… 我要是你的话，我会做…Why not do / why don't you do…? 为什么不… It's a good choice for sb. to do … （某人做X很好） An advantage of + 名词/ doing + is that + 句子（……的优点是……） 用法：在提出自己的观点时，这些句子会使你更加犀利。 例：It's a good choice for you to turn to your teacher for help. An advantage of the public transportation in Beijing is that you can go anywhere you want in a very short time.

8). 结尾期待和做梦

hope to do 希望做…， expect to do 期待着做…，wish to do 希望做…

look forward to doing 期待做…， dream of doing 梦想着做…

用法：在作文结尾，加上自己的希望、梦想，如同凤尾一般华丽。尤以回信类作文常用。

例：I am looking forward to seeing you in Beijing. (注意后接ing形式)

9). "不论干嘛"都牛逼

no matter what 无论什么+ 句子 / no matter when 无论什么时候 + 句子

no matter where 无论什么地方 + 句子/no matter who 无论谁+ 句子

no matter how 无论怎么样 + 形容词

用法：只要用在正确的地方，No matter绝对是个很大的亮点！

例：No matter who it is, Mary will always offer her help.

No matter where we are, we should follow the traffic rules.

10). 各种doing 增姿色

can't help doing 情不自禁地做某事keep / stop / prevent sb. from doing 阻止某人做…

be busy (in ) doing / with + 名词 忙于做… spend time / money (in )doing / on + 名词 花费时间/钱做… have fun / have a good time / enjoy oneself doing 玩得开心

have trouble / problem / difficulty (in) doing做…有困难

用法：在中考作文中常用doing，文章自然增万分资色！

例： They can't help spending the money buying snacks.

I am sorry to hear that you have some trouble in having lunch in school. /Mary enjoys dancing a lot.

附加

一、英语书信的常见写作模板

开头部分：

How nice to hear from you again.

Let me tell you something about the activity.

I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr. 9th.

I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit.

I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.

结尾部分：

With best wishes. I’m looking forward to your reply.

I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.

二、口头通知常见写作模板

呼语及开场白部分：

Ladies and gentlemen, May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make.

正文部分：

All the teachers and students are required to attend it.

Please take your notebooks and make notes.

Please listen carefully and we’ll have a discussion in groups.

Please come on time and don’t be late.

结束语部分：

Please come and join in it. Everybody is welcome to attend it.

I hope you’ll have a nice time here.

That’s all. Thank you.

三、议论文模板

1.正反观点式议论文模板

导入：

第1段：Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... （导入话题）

Our opinions are divided on this topic.（观点有分歧）

正文：

第2段：Most of the students are in favour of it.（正方观点）

Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由)

第3段：However, the others are strongly against it. （反方观点）

Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由)

结论：

第4段：Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.（个人观点） オ

2.“A或者B”类议论文模板：

导入：

第1段：Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.

正文：

第2段：There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因)

第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势)

结论：

第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论) オ

3.观点论述类议论文模板：

导入：

第1段：提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题

As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. （亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对）

The reasons for this may be listed as follows. （过渡句，承上启下）

正文：

第2段：First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的理由)

结论：

第3段：In conclusion, I believe that... （照应第1段，构成"总—分—总"结构）

4."How to"类议论文模板：

导入：

第1段：提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题

正文：

第2段：Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法)

结论：

第3段：These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法)

四、图表作文写作模板

The chart gives us an overall picture of the 图表主题. The first thing we notice is that 图表最大特点 . This means that as (进一步说明).

We can see from the statistics given that 图表细节一 . After 动词-ing 细节一中的第一个变化， the动词-ed+幅度+时间(紧跟着的变化) . The figures also tell us that图表细节二 . In the column, we can see that accounts for (进一步描述).

Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that (结论). The reason for this, as far as I am concerned is that (给出原因). / It is high time that we (发出倡议).