I\'m,Helpful200字作文

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　　My name is Wang Qiuyun. I"m a girl. I can do many things. I can speak English and Chinese. I can sing English songs. I can draw pictures. I can do housework with my mom.I can"t do any kung fu, but I can cook. What can you do?

    五年级:染蔷薇

五年级英语上作文范例

My English Teacher

Miss Tang is my English teacher. She’s very pretty. She is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. She likes cats very much. And she likes singing and dancing, too. Her English is very good. We often play games in English classes. She is very kind to us. We all love her.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”，是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作者开门见山，直接点题，首先介绍了英语老师的姓名，然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等。

小朋友们在写作文时，要注意使用自己最熟悉的词[组]，以免写出一些错句子。写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰、规范等。

My Days of the week

I’m a student and I am in Grade 5.I get up at six o’clock every day. I have breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven o’clock. I have classes from Monday to Saturday. I have an English class on Friday and I have a PE class on Tuesday. I don’t have to go to school on school, and I like to go swimming on that day.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是“我的一周”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的亲身经历写起，叙述了自己一周七天的所作所为，并特别强调了星期天的喜好，写得自然、流畅。

小朋友们写作文时要注意人称及谓语动词的变化，要依据提示，结合自己的实际，写自己身边熟悉的事情。

My Favourite Food

Do you know what this is? Guess! Its colour is yellow. It’s long and thin. It looks like a small boat and crescent. Oh, it is a banana. Do you know what that is? Guess again! Its colour is orange. It’s round. It looks like a small ball and a small lantern. Oh, it is an orange. I like then a lot. I like ice-creams. I like to chew gum. Chocolates and candies are yummy. I like them very much.

How about you? What’s your favourite food?

【要领点评】

My Favourite Food 是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是简单地列举出自己最喜欢的每一种食物，而是有详有略地进行介绍。整篇文章用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。另外，文章中出现了一些生词，可见小作者是用心查字典了。

I can help do housework

I am a girl. My name is Li Ling. I’m in Class Three, Grade Five.

I’m helpful at home. I can water the flowers, empty the trash and sweep

the floor. After meals, I can help my mother do the dishes. On Sunday, I can wash the clothes. What about you? Are you helpful, too?

【要领点评】

本篇作文的题目是“我可以帮助做家务”，作者主要叙述自己在家帮助做的事情，介绍自己的名字，所在年级及在家能做的家务，很详细，到位。

小朋友们在写作时，应尽量写一些亲自经历的事情，这样会避免在作文时显得太空，因为只有自己经常做的事情印象才会特别深刻。写作时还要注意大小写和时态。

In The Kitchen

This is the kitchen of my family. It’s big and nice. Look! My mother is cooking in it. This is a microwave and that is a stove. There is a big table here. There are many things on it. What are these? They look yummy! Oh, they’re strawberries. And what are those? They are grapes.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是“在厨房”里，作者根据自己家的厨房情况。介绍厨房里有微波炉和电炉，有一张大桌子和桌子上的物品等，以及妈妈在做饭，非常真实。

小朋友们，可以从观察自己身边的事、物写起，利用所学的句子，描述身边熟悉的东西来训练习作。

My Village

My village is very beautiful. There are many houses in the village. Near the village, there is a forest. A small river is in front of the village. The water in it is very clean. We can see some fish in the river. Near the river, you can see a mountain. Some flowers and grass are on the mountain. I like my village. Welcome to my village!

【要领点评】

本文以“我的村庄”为题描述了自己家乡的风景。介绍了村庄的房屋、森林、河流及大山，使人看了这篇作文后确实感觉到“我的村庄”的美丽。小朋友们在写作时，可仔细想一下自己的村庄或所在城市的特点，尽量使用本单元学过的单词或短语进行叙述。

新版PEP五年级上册作文整理

新版PEP五年级上册作文整理

Unit 1作文

1、介绍自己、朋友或老师等熟悉的人物，如：My …teacher/friend/…。

思路导引

（1）开头：交代人物的身份 I have a/an…He/She is…

（2）中间：1）体貌 He/ She is tall/strong… He/She has …hair/eyes…

2）性格 He/She is strict/kind…

3）爱好 He/She likes playing pingi-pong/… 或He/She often read books/… on the weekend.

（3）结尾：评价人物或抒发对人物的情感 I like him/her very much.

2、范文：（1）课本P9 Read and write

（2） My Chinese teacher

I have a new Chinese teacher. She is Ms. Chen. She is tall and thin. She has big eyes and long black hair. She is kind and funny. Sometimes she is strict, too. She is also hard-working. She likes reading books. Her class is so much fun. We all like her.

Unit 2作文

1、描写一周的生活，如：My week

思路导引

（1）开头：简单的自我介绍：My name’s…/ I’m…

（2）中间：1） 介绍周一至周五的情况，可以着重介绍自己最喜欢的那一天：

I go to school from Monday to Friday. I like…because I have…

2）介绍自己周六、日的活动：I often watch TV/…on the weekend.

（3）结尾：This is my week. What about yours?

2、范文：

My week

My name is Li Ming. I go to school from Monday to Friday. I like Tuesdays and Thursdays, because I have music and PE. I often do my homework and read books on Saturdays. I often play ping-pong on Sundays.This is my week.

Unit 3作文

1、描述自己和家人最喜爱的食物

思路导引

（1）开头：简单介绍自己的家庭成员：There are…people in my family. They are…

（2）中间：分别介绍每个家庭成员最喜爱的食物时什么：…favourite food is…/…is…favourite./…like(s)…best.

（3）结尾：穿插说明喜欢的原因：It’s/They’re…

2、范文：（1）课本P29 Read and write

（2） There are four people in my family. They are my parents(my father and mother), my brother and me. My mother likes salad best. It’s fresh. Beef is my

father’s favourite . He thinks（认为）it’s delicious. My brother likes ice cream. It’s sweet. My favourite food is fish. It’s very healthy.

Unit 4作文

1、描写自己或家庭成员会做的事情，如：I’m helpful / Super family； 思路导引

（1）开头：介绍自己或家庭成员的基本情况：I’m… I’m…years old. I have a super family. There are three people in my family. They are…

（2）中间：介绍自己在家和在学校里会做的事情/介绍家人的外貌性格以及会做的事情：

I can…at school. I can…at home.

My father is strong. He can do some kung fu. My mother is…She can…

（3）结尾：总结 This is me. What can you do?

This is my family. I love my family. Can you tell me your family?/What about your family?

2、范文：（1）课本P43 Read and write

（2） Hello, I’m Zhao Ming. I’m eleven years old. I’m helpful. I can clean the windows and sweep the floor at school. I can cook and wash my clothes at home.

I often play the pipa on the weekend. I can play basketball. I like English very much. I can speak English well. What can you do?

Unit 5作文

1、描写房间、卧室，如：My room / bedroom；

思路导引

（1）开头：总体概括自己卧室的特征 I have a nice/big/clean/…room.

（2）中间：描述卧室里的物品、摆设 There is/are….on/beside/…

My computer/… is on the desk/….

（3）结尾：抒发对卧室的情感 I like/love my bedroom (very much)! Can you tell me yours?

2、范文：（1）课本P53 Read and write

（2） My bedroom

I have a nice bedroom. It’s not big but clean.

There is a yellow bed in it. Beside the bed, there is a desk and a chair. There are many books and a computer on the desk. There is a water bottle, too. There are many pictures on the wall. Two plants are near the window.

I like my bedroom. Can you tell me yours?

Unit 6作文

1、描写景物，如：看图作文（风景图）

思路导引

（1）开头：Look at the picture.

（2）中间：用There is/are…beside/in front of…句型描述图中所有的景物及其位

置，注意要有明确的观察主线，即观察的顺序性与条理性。

2、范文：（1）课本P63 Read and write

（2）看图作文

Look at the picture. This is a beautiful village. There are three houses in the picture. There are many trees near them. In front of the houses, there is a river. The bridge is over the river. Behind the houses, there is a forest and a mountain.

英语类应用作文

重点诠释

英文书信格式与中文书信格式有许多不同，它包括五部分，即：信头，称呼，正文，结束语

和签名，具体如下：精典题例解读

下面是2003年NMET的书面表达试题。体裁为书信，内容为学生所熟悉。要点通过汉语和图

示两种方式给出。汉语句子虽不算少，但无法照译。

考生在完成本题时需要做到以下几点：

1.认真审读所给文字和草图，确认全部信息要点。

2.确定写的动机：向你的英国笔友介绍你为他所找住房的情况。

3.确定写的基本路子：以回信的口气，介绍情况，询问态度。

4.确定语篇的结构：书信开头、介绍情况、询问态度、书信结尾。

5.起草语篇，考虑措辞。

6.进行文字修改。

（一）假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校来学中文，

来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告

知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。

注意：1.词数：100左右。

2.参考词汇：房租—rent(n.)。

Dear Bob,

Yours,

Li Hua

内容要点：

1.开头;

2.公寓（一室带浴室、厨房）;

3.面积、家具（25平米、床、沙发、书桌、椅子）;

4.公寓位置（芳草街，离学校一站远）;

5.月租500元 ;

6.结尾。

说明：

1.内容要点可用不同方式表达。

2.对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。

3.开头、结尾的内容须合乎逻辑、语言得体。

Dear Bob,

I’m so glad to learn that you’re coming in September. I’ve found a place for

you,

It’s a small flat of 25 square meters, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen.

In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair. The rent is 500 yuan

per month. The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxiu

Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you straight to the school. In fact. it’s only

Do you think you’d like it? If not, I can try and find another place for you.

Just let me know.

Yours,

Li Hua

（二）假如你是贫困地区的一名失学的儿童，名叫李萍。你很幸运地得到在北京工作的一位

美国人Mr.Smith的帮助，得以重新回到校园继续学习。于是你于2002年2月1日给Mr.Smith

写一封信，向他表示感谢，并介绍了学习情况。（字数：80~120）

信中内容包括：

1.收到书和钱，并能重返校园，表示感谢；

2.在老师的帮助下学习上取得了很大进步；

3.老师表扬了你，家长鼓励你；

4.下决心更加努力学习，取得更大进步；

5.盼望见到Mr.Smith，但因没有机会去北京，希望Mr.Smith给你寄张照片。

【参考范文】

Dear Mr. Smith.

I’m glad to have received your money and books. Now, I can go to school again.

I’m very happy. Thank you very much!

I have been studying hard since I accepted your gifts. I have made great progress

sed me for it. And my parents have encouraged

me to work harder. I have made up my mind to do so and make even greater progress

with the help of the teachers.

I’m looking forward to seeing you, but I have no chance to go to Beijing. Could

you send me one of your photos to me? Thank you!

Best wishes.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ping

（三）假定你是李华，有一位美国朋友Smith托你在北京找工作，你看到21世纪英文报（21st

Century）上刊登了一则招聘启事，认为他很合适。请用英文写一封短信，用E-mail发给

Smith，告知此事，并征求他的意见。广告原文如下：

Foreign Teachers Wanted!

The Education Department of the Ladder Company is running an English course for

children and adults.

Requirements:

1.Native English speaker

2.University degree in education or related field preferred

3.Foreign expert certification

If you are interested, please call us:

Tel:86-10-68019433

E-mail: liecbj@hotmail.com

注意：1.开头语已给你写好；

2.介绍必须包括所有内容，但不要逐词翻译说明部分；

3.词数：100个单词左右。

Dear Smith,

I know you want to find a job in Beijing.

【参考范文】

Dear Smith,

I know you want to find a job in Beijing. I read an advertisement in today’s

“21st Century”,an English paper here. A Beijing Ladder Information Company is

running a school for children and adults. So they need native speaker English

teachers. What they prefer is a university degree in education or other related

field, which you have. And a foreign expert certification is also required. I think

you are the right person they want.

If you are interested, please directly call or write to the company. The telephone

number is 86-10-68019433,and their e-mail address is : liecbj@hotmail.com.

Good luck.

Yours,

Li Hua

（四）光明中学依山傍水，校园曾经安静美丽，一年前该校附近建了一家化工厂。学校受到

了严重影响。假如你是该校的一名学生，名叫李东。请你根据下表内容用英文给中国日报写

一封信，反映情况，呼吁有关部门采取相应措施。

建厂前 建厂后

校园内鲜花盛开,树木常青;校园安静,学习佳地工厂每天排出大量污水、废气，严重影响师

生健康，花草树木受到危害，工厂噪音也干扰了教学活动。

注意：1.词数：100左右；

2.开头已为你写好。

Dear editor,

I’m a student of Guang Ming Middle School,Our school used to?

【参考范文】

Dear editor,

I’m a student of Guang Ming Middle School.Our school used to be very beautiful.There

used to be green trees and all kinds of flowers in our school all the year round.

It used to be a quiet place and it was a good place for study.

Things have changed since a chemical works was built near our school a year ago.

Every day it produces large quantities of waste water and harmful gases. The terrible

pollution has done great harm to us as well as to the trees and flowers. And the

great noise from the works has greatly affected our teaching and studying activities.

Our school is no longer a quiet and good place for study. We suffer a lot from

the pollution.

We do hope you can help us to take measures to protect our school and stop it from

being polluted.

Yours truly,

Li Dong

（五）下面是某中外合资企业刊登在昨天的China Daily上的一则广告：

Office secretary, with experience in bookkeeping, typewriting, public relations,

operating PC(personal computer).Address, age, health condition

Write to A518,Charlie Office.

假如你是张林，现年20岁，身体健康，学习英语6年，学过广告中所列项目。通信地址是

滨海市745信箱（P.O.Box745）。请根据广告中提出的招聘职务、应聘条件和你自己的简要

情况，写一封自荐信。字数：100词左右。

【参考范文】

Dear Sir,

I have read your advertisement in yesterday’s China Daily. I feel I am qualified

for the job in your company. I’m 20 years old and in good health. After graduation

from a middle school, I studied English for six years. I also learned bookkeeping, typewriting and public relations. I’m good at operating PC and have a good command

of English. I’m interested in the position of a secretary. I want very much to

be accepted by your company. I’ll work hard if I can be a member in your company.

Zhang Ling

（六）假设你是王晓明，请根据你校美化校园的规划，用英语给你在美国的笔友Peter写一

封短信，介绍该规划。短信的主要内容如下：

规划目的 美化校园、净化空气 创造良好学习和生活环境

规划内容 种植花草树木

建一个植物园，供参观、实践

建一个小花园，供休息、读书

建几座名人雕塑，激励师生

注意：1．短信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

2．词数：100左右。

3．参考词汇：雕塑—statue (n.) 植物园—botanical garden (n.)

Dear Pter,

I would like to tell you that our school has worked out a new program.

Welcome to our school if you have any chance.

Yours,

One possible version

Dear Peter ,

I’d like to tell you that our school has worked out a new program.

The purposes of the program are to make our school more beautiful, to make the

air cleaner and fresher ,and to turn our school into a better place for us to study

and live in .

According to the program ,we will plant different kinds of trees ,flowers and grass in and around our school .A botanical garden will be built for us to visit and practice in .Besides ,we are to build a small garden in which we can do some reading and take a rest .What’s more ,some statues of famous people will be set up to encourage us to work harder .Don’t you think it a wonderful program? Welcome to our school if you have any chance.

Yours ,

（七）假如你是李晓华，住在江城。你的加拿大笔友Bob来信谈到了他所居住的城市，并希望了解你家乡江城的情况。请你用英语写一封回信。回信须包括下表中的内容。

自然情况 ①位于长江边、风景优美、适合居住 成 ．就

②经济发展迅速

③新建了不少工厂、住房、道路等存在问题

④水、空气污染

⑤交通拥挤

对江城发展的看法 ⑥(内容由考生自己拟定)

注意：1．回信中不能使用“江城”以外的地名。

2．词数100左右。信的开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入词数。

参考词汇：经济economy n．

Dear Bob，

It's very kind of you to write me and let me know about your beautiful city.Now I’d like to tell you something about my hometown Jiangcheng．

Yours，

Xiaohua

Dear Bob，

It's very kind of you to write me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Jiangcheng.

The city stands on the bank of the Changjiang River. It is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years. New factories, houses and roads have been built. More schools and hospitals are available for its people. However, there are still some problems, such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours. In my opinion, Jiangcheng should develop its economy scientifically. I would also think that the growth of its population should be brought under control so that we'll have a better hometown in future.

Yours,

Xiaohua

（八）请你仔细阅读所给英文信，然后给Worried写一封回信。要求包含以下内容：

1.安慰鼓励；

2.记一些惯用词组和句型结构，将它们组织在一起并用其造句；

3.多读英语，告诉他通过大量阅读才能正确使用语言；

4.多背诵一些好的短文。

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