沟通英语作文

篇一：如何和陌生人沟通_英语作文

Ways of Taking to Strangers

Up until a year ago I saw the world as a place where very few doors opened for me. At first I thought it was due to bing extremely introverted. But as time went on, I started to straggle with making friends I started talking to strangers on my college campus and in the city because I was tried of staying on the sidelines. It was scary for a naturally timid person like me, but I decided to fight the fear.

Great things come to those who are willing to risk rejection and put

themselves out there. After two months of doing this, Imade some great friends, simply by starting conversations. After of these interactions allowed me to understand how to engage with people. For example, I learned that tone and body language are more important than saying the right thing. Through my experiences, I learned that people are usually friendly and happy to talk to you.

I feel happier knowing that I have the power to talk to whomever I want to.More opportunities arrived by networking with others.

Here are some ways I learned about turning strangers into friends.

Firstly, say the magic word: "Hi ". It sounds so obvious, but it's the big barrier. You have to use that magic word to start a conversation. I noticed that people are welcoming after you break the ice. It's not something that everyone wants to do because it takes some curage to go uo to someone you're never met before and start a conversation. However, more people are more welcoming than we generally expect. When you encounter someone who isn't, remember, that someone else will be. Secondly, detach yourself from the outcome. When you don't expect any outcome, you won't be disappointed or offered if someone doesn't respond to you. What's more, tolerate rejection. If they reject you, it does not mean they do reject you. It is about where they are ai mentally, so do not take it personally. If they passed up on the opportunity to connect with you, then they missed out on something great. Forthly, don't mind what strangers thinking about. This is your life, and you have the right to talk to whomever you wan to talk to. Not everyone is that open. Allow them to be how they are and think how they do, without letting it challenge your courage. Fifthly, if you feel the fear, do it anyway. One of the best ways to combat the fear is to do it

repeatedly.Push through the fear and it will start to feel more naturally. Finally, practice.Don't worry if you seem a little awkward or aggressive at first. If your intentions are authentic, you will come across that way more and more each time you try.

These tips are my ways of talking ro strangers.

篇二：英语作文网络交流

Nowadays, Internet technology has more and more developed. It made our communication more and more convenience. young people incline to communicate with others on internet , and lack communication with people around them.

First of all, I want to talk about it's benefits . There has a example, a Chinese girl talked with her father on internet at four clock p.m , and her father is in the America at ten clock p.m .If there has no internet,they would have a very long time for wait a letter, but the internet can make you have a communication at anytime and anywhere .It eliminates the barrier of distance,and very convenient for us.

The second, It also have some bad influence . young people may spend hours chatting with friends through QQ or MSN, but rarely do they talk with other face to face. Some people say,they become more and more indifferent to each other in real life. Some netizens who are immersed in virtual world even have difficulty in making friends in reality. So,e-communication is a double-edged sword , We should strike a balance between them and make the best of the internet.

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Nowadays, Internet technology has more and more developed.

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: 多指具体的某种技术和技巧。

: 含义比technique广泛，泛指生产工艺、科学技术。

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It made our communication more and more convenience.

? [教师点评][学习提示] 易混词汇: communication, traffic, transportat

: 指邮电、无线电、铁路、公路等各种交通方式或媒介。

: 指来往的东西的情况，表示一种抽象概念的交通流动量。

: 指将乘客或货物从一处运到另一处，也可指交通运输工具。

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young people incline to communicate with others on internet , and lack communication with people around them.

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? [学习提示] 易混词汇: lack, need, want, require 均有“缺少，短少”之意。

: 指完全短缺或数量不足。

: 语气较重，指需要必不可少的东西，强调急需。

: 侧重缺少某种必需之物，或个人渴望得到的东西。

: 使用广泛，语气较轻。强调急需时可与need换用，但有时暗示所需的人或物是完成某一任务必不可少的。

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First of all, I want to talk about it's benefits .

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? [学习提示] 易混词汇: advantage, benefit, interest, favour, profit, gain 均有“利益，好处”之意。

: 指因某方面占优势或利用某机会以及对方弱点而获得利益与好处。

: 普通用词，指通过正当手段从物质或精神方面得到的任何好处或利益。

: 作“利益”解时，多用复数形式，既可指集团、群体的利益，又可指个人的利益。

: 指在竞争中获得的advantage,也可指在狭隘的个人利益。

: 着重收益，尤指从物质、钱财等方面获得的利益。

: 指获得的物质利益，也暗示不损坏他人利益而得的无形好处。

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There has a example, a Chinese girl talked with her father on internet at four clock p. m , and her father is in the America at ten clock p. m .

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? [学习提示] 易混词汇: example, instance, case, sample, illustration, specimen 均有“例子，事例”之意。

: 普通用词，指能代表同类事物性质或一般规律的典型例子。

: 多指用于说明、支持或反证一般事实或理论的事例。

: 多指需要加以认真研究的实例，如病例，案例等。

: 通常指样品。

: 指用来说明、解释某种理论或看法而引用的例证。

: 可与sample换用，但常指人或物中选出的有代表性部分，或指供科研、化验或检验用的标本。

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Chinese用作名词，表示“中国人”[a person born or living in China, a person of Chinese descent]时，是可数名词，单复数同形；指中国人民或特指—个或数个中国人时，均加冠词，泛指时不能加。 好评报错

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If there has no internet, they would have a very long time for wait a letter, but the internet can make you have a communication at anytime and anywhere .

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如果设计不当，刻度盘将会非常难于操作。

Between 1890 and 1930 the woman suffrage movement became exceedingly militant. 一八九○年到一九三○年间妇女争取选举权运动变得非常激烈。

The surface of Mars is remarkablydiverse.

火星的表面参差不齐。

He was so informed and intensely forceful.

他是那么见多识广，极了不起。

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It eliminates the barrier of distance, and very convenient for us.

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? [学习提示] 易混词汇: obstacle, barrier, obstruction, bar, hindrance 均含“障碍，障碍物”之意。

: 指在达到目的或前进的过程中必须消除或绕过的障碍物，也指起阻碍作用等情况。

: 常指临时的或者可能跨越的障碍。

: 常既指具体的障碍又可指抽象或喻意上的阻碍。

: 既可指阻止进出或通过的栅栏一类的障碍物，也可用于抽象意义障碍。

: 指妨碍他人进步或做事的人或物。

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? [批改提示] eliminate近义表达有do away with/ get rid of/ extinguish/

obliterate/ exterminate

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The second, It also have some bad influence .

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He had formed an unfavorable opinion of my work.

他对我的工作已有了成见。

I' ve had a dreadful day everything seems to have gone wrong.

我度过了很糟糕的一天，每件事好像都出了差错。

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young people may spend hours chatting with friends through QQ or MSN, but rarely do they talk with other face to face.

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? [学习提示] 易混词汇: friend, mate, acquaintance, pal 都有“朋友”之意。

: 一般用词，指某人喜爱并乐意与之相交往的人。

: 最普通用词，既可指好友、同事，又可指合伙人，还可指配偶的一方。

: 指彼此相识，但交往不甚密切，相互间没有深厚情感的人。

: 口语用词，指十分要好的朋友。

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Some people say, they become more and more indifferent to each other in real life.

? [教师点评][学习提示] 易混词汇: genuine, authentic, actual, real, true, factual 均有“真的，真实的，实在的”之意。

: 普通常用词，指真正的，货真价实的，强调非人为或非虚假的。

: 常可与genuine换用，指与事实完全相符，强调准确可靠。

: 指事物的实际存在，并非出自主观臆造。

: 普通用词，含义较广，有时可与actual和genuine换用。指一切真实的或 表面看不出虚假的事物。 : 指同实际情况或标准完全一致。口语中多用。

: 与actual同义，但更测重根据事实，不扩大或缩小，不渲染。 [批改提示] through的近义表达有in term of或via。 好评报错

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Some netizens who are immersed in virtual world even have difficulty in making friends in reality.

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So, e-communication is a double-edged sword , We should strike a balance between them and make the best of the internet.

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? [学习提示] 易混词汇: remainder, surplus, rest, remains, balance 均含“剩余部分”之意。 : 含义较广，可指数学运算中的余数，也指从整体取走或用掉部分后的所余部分，或一群人走掉一部分剩下的人。

: 指超过需要数量之外的剩余。

: 最普通用词与定冠词连用，指任何指定数量的人或物等。

: 常指人或动物死后的遗体或遗骨，也指古代文明的遗迹或去世作家尚未发表的遗稿。 : 指支取存款的余额或减去各种开支后的尾数。

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篇三：英语作文-沉溺网络而忽略与父母的沟通

书面表达（满分25分）

“Can’t talk now—I am chatting.”

上图反映的是网络时代所出现的一些问题， 有些孩子沉溺于网上交流而忽视了与父母的沟通。请你根据对漫画的理解用英文写一篇短文。该文应包含以下要点:

1. 该漫画告诉了我们什么；

2. 你对此现象的看法；

3. 我们该如何主动和父母亲沟通。

注意：

1． 表达时要适当发挥想象，不要仅作简单描述。

2． 词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。

3． 文中不得提及本人的相关信息。

参考词汇: 漫画caricature

Modern technology has many advantages. While we enjoy the fun and convenience of the Internet, we also experience some new problems. This caricature describes one of them.

素材：

漫画： caricature cartoon and comics

在网上：on line on the Internet in the virtual worldin the virtual reality

现实里：in the real lifein the real worldin reality

上网成瘾：be addicted to sth. can’t help oneself doing sth.

be in too deep /be too deep in sth.

网络活动：play video gameschat on line chat on the QQ chat on the MSN

watch TV series via Internet

影响： have an (good / bad) impact on sb. Have an (positive / negative) effect on sb.To exert influence on sb. To affect sb.To influence sb.

忽略： neglect ignore overlook

重视： lay emphasis on to emphasize attach importance to

consider…of great importance think of…. as an important role in

沟通： to communicate with sb. The lack of communicationto sit down and talk To create a harmonious atmosphere in our family life to keep harmony

Modern technology has many advantages. While we enjoy the fun and convenience of the Internet, we also experience some new problems. This caricature describes one of them. In this caricature, a boy is sitting in front of a computer. He is so busy chatting on line that he is impatient with the woman, perhaps his mother, who comes to him asking him to do her a favor.

From my point of view, the Internet has placed a negative impact on the family. In the first place, it is obvious the boy fails to maintain the balance between the virtual world and the real life. He places too much emphasis on the chatting on line while overlooking the real communication with his mother. Under these circumstances, numerous family problems will inevitably take place, such as misunderstanding, quarrels etc. In the second place, the boy has been too addicted to the Internet, which must violate his daily routines. He is likely to sit up too late. He is likely to get up too late. And he is likely to neglect his studies, for example, without handing in his homework on time. What is worse, he refuses to meet his mother’s necessary requirements, and consequently he hurts his mother’s feeling a lot.

Of course, the virtual reality has been playing an important part in our modern life. we cannot stop the quickened pace of scientific development. What we can do is (to) strike a better balance between the two poles. On the one hand, we are supposed to plan the time wisely. After spending most of time on school assignments and homework, we can spend one hour or two on the Internet a week. As a high school student, too much time spent on line will lead to failure in exams. On the other hand, we are expected to offer helps to our parents rather than wait for their asking. More important, we should be always ready to talk with our parents, which can ease their minds and removes the worries. Only in this way can a harmonious atmosphere be created in the family life.