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  时间过得真快啊!一下子就到了考试的时候了。

  明天要半期考试了,心里面有一点担心,很害怕考不好。所以我在这时候不能够害怕。只要下去努力就一定能考个好成绩!而我就决定咬紧牙关!争取多多的复习老师教过的一切知识。我还会对自己说:‘’你一定能行的,只是一场小小的考试而已。只要你认真过,就一定能成功!

  为了我能考出个好成绩!为了我能得到零花钱!我会以此为目标!好好学习!天天向上!

    娄山关中学初一初一:王煊

篇一:2012~2013学年初一期末考试作文专题汇总

一、白下: <<初一那些新鲜事>>

难度:★★★

记事作文,限定时间——初一,关键词——新鲜,很多同学会在不知不觉中偏题,选材中新鲜二字没有凸显。这个题目要想写得出彩在与立意这一步,如果流于简单的叙事就浪费了素材,自己从事件中的收获或者对事件本身的思考正是画龙点睛的一笔。

二、沿江区(原大厂):家有_________事

记事作文,限定地点——家,审题难度低,作为期末考题,这个题目略平庸,学生很容易套作。相信这次题目最多的就是:家有喜事。。如果哪个同学能在题目上整点创意,相信会有意想不到的收获。

难度:★★★

三、鼓楼:《别样》(出处09年中考太原卷真题)

“别样”是与众不同的意思。总有一些人带给我们别样的感受;总有一些景。带给我们别样的情思;总有一些事,带给我们别样的感触;总有一段生活,带给我们别样的体验……

难度:★★★★☆

鼓楼区还是直接上真题了。虽然是中考真题,但是难度并不大,关键在于破题。“别样”这个字眼用了障眼法,很多同学一下子就懵了,其实可以问问自己“什么是别样?”别样就是不一样,也可以用“特别”“卓越”等字眼替换,思路就

可以以此拓开。最喜欢这样的题目,对孩子的文体的选择没有太大的限制,文笔好的孩子可以尝试写叙事散文或者哲理散文。

以写人为例:身边的某个特殊的人,给我带来的不平凡的成长历程,这种类型的文章平时都在习作练习中,适当改编即可;也可以是某个对你很有影响的人,或者你欣赏的历史人物,在描述他们的前提下,需要深度挖掘他们身上不一样的气质。

四、【玄外】 请以“______真好”为题,写一篇不少于600字的记叙文。

难度:★★★★

玄外这次自主命题,题目出自各毕业班带头人之手,对于这帮刚刚完成了初中学习六份之一的小朋友来说,老师的确有手下留情,这个文题意在让学生仔细审题,慎重立意。文题的关键字在于副词“真”,包含着真心诚意的赞美和感激,这是立意的根本在于感激、感恩,由衷地赞美。在选材上并没有限制,可以写人,也可以写事、写景,相对来说比较自由。

五、【未知】一次美丽的感动

难度:★★★

在生活中,一件小事就可以感动一个人。可以为恩师的一句教诲而感动,可以为你跌倒时伸向你的那温暖的手而感动,可以为伤心时朋友的一句安慰的话语而感动……

【其他省市期末试题汇总】

五、作文。(30分)【与白下区撞题了,呵呵】

刚刚进入初中的你,面对全新的环境、老师、同学、学习内容、学习方式,你一定有许多与小学不同的真切而新鲜的感受,请以“初中生活印象”为题写一篇文章。

要求:1.立意自定,除诗歌外,文体不限,600字左右。

2.不得出现真实的校名、地名、人名。

六、作文(30分)

22.任选一题作文。

(1)题目:回报

除诗歌外,文体不限,600字左右。文中不得出现真实的人名、地名、校名。

(2)童年的记忆里,有许多你感兴趣的事情令人难忘,那是我们成长的一个个足迹。请打开你记忆的闸门,以“儿时的乐趣”为话题,写一篇600字左右的文章,题目自拟,除诗歌外,体裁不限。

七、写作

题目:只要我们留心观察,用心体验,就会发现生活中许多有价值的东西。如从一件寻常小事中感悟出一个道理,在学习过程中发现了一种有效的方法,在与人交往中察觉到一份真诚……请以“我发现 ”为题写一篇文章。

要求:(1)根据自己的生活经历将题目补充完整;(2)表达真情实感;(3)文体不限;(4)5 00字左右。

八、作文:(30分)

在我们的成长的过程中,既有阳光雨露的呵护,也有风霜雨雪的相伴,它们都是人生的一大财富。幸福和谐的生活,让我们品评甜蜜,懂得了珍惜;苦难艰辛的处境,使我们志怀高远,实现了超越。尊重关爱,让我们学会宽容;挫折磨难,使我们变得成熟。在经历和体验中,我们逐渐摆脱了蒙昧、自私、幼稚……我们长大了。

请你以“在500字的作文。

① 提示:横线上可以填上“逆境”、“苦难”、“呵护”、“奋斗”、“磨练”、“关爱”等词语,也可以填上其他的词语。

九、作文(40分)

29、请选取其中一题完成作文。

(1)在我们的学习生活中常常会面对父母、老师、朋友的关爱而感到幸福;面对失败挫折而感到无助;或是一个人独处而感到孤独……

只要你细细品尝生活就能感受到其中的各种味道。

请以“感受 (幸福、孤独、成功……)”为题写一篇500字左右的记叙文。

(2)人,总在变化——从待人接物到处事态度,从言谈举止到心理状态,从衣着打扮到气质风度,从兴趣爱好到目标追求。当人生开始一个新阶段的时候,这种变化来得更猛。现在,你走进初中校门了,你发觉自己在不经意之间已悄然

发生变化了吗?请你选择某一方面,与你小学时进行比较,以“我在变”为题写一篇500字左右的文章。

十、写作(30分)

23.礼物,可以传达情感;可以奖赏成功;可以纪念事物;也可以表达特殊的意味……我们每个人都会在生活中收到或送出礼物,并在其中体会到各种人生滋味。请以“礼物”为话题写一篇文章,表达你的真情实感。

要求:①题目自拟。②除诗歌、戏剧外,文体不限。③字数不少于600字④文中不得出现真实的人名、地名和校名。

十一、作文。(任选其一,30分)

题目一:感恩

题目二:在我们的成长的过程中,既有阳光雨露的呵护,也有风霜雨雪的相伴,它们都是人生的一大财富。幸福和谐的生活,让我们品评甜蜜,懂得了珍惜;苦难艰辛的处境,使我们志怀高远,实现了超越。尊重关爱,让我们学会宽容;挫折磨难,使我们变得成熟。在经历和体验中,我们逐渐摆脱了蒙昧、自私、幼稚……我们长大了。

请你以“在 中成长”为题,写一篇作文。(提示:横线上可以填上“逆境”、“苦难”、“呵护”、“奋斗”、“磨练”、“关爱”等词语,也可以填上其他的词语。)

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篇二:考试作文技巧一

考试作文技巧一:作文成绩看字迹,得分要素是

结尾也很重要。一般来说,结尾是总结全文。如果是记叙文,要注意抒情。如果是议论文,则要注意归纳。无论如何,最好要扣准标题。怎么扣呢?如果你实在拿不准,就在结尾段的

篇三:考试作文

Pollution is becoming more and more serious all over the world, and people's health is threatened. How to solve this problem remains one of the most important issues for each country. Write an essay on the topic "The Problem of Pollution". You should base your essay on the following outline.

1. 全球污染现象变得日益严重。

2. 全世界人民都非常关注这一现象。各国政府也采取了一定的措施来解决这一问题。

3. 我们应该怎么做。

I read a piece of news recently. It says that in Japan many businessmen are selling fresh air to customers, and now it is becoming increasingly popular. Why? Fresh air is getting less and less in Japan, and so is it in the U. S. A., China, India, etc.

In fact, environmental pollution is a very serious problem the whole world is facing. It is largely caused by the waste products released from artificial substances, industrial production and increased consumption of goods. Besides, the use of chemical substances in agriculture also causes environmental pollution. Look at the sky, you can see that dense smoke is being released from the high and big chimneys;

those dirty and poisonous substances are flowing into the rivers that we use for drinking water and millions of tons of waste products are heaping around us.

Indeed, the earth is our home and we have the duty to take care of it for ourselves and for our descendants. In my opinion, we should work out concrete solutions to the problem of pollution For example, poisonous gas given off by automobiles should be controlled by equipping them with a device which can dispose of waste gas so as to prevent it from polluting air.

范文:My Ideal Friend 1、你心目中理想的朋友是什么样的? 2、现实生活中你是否有这样的朋友及你如何获得这样的朋友。

3、和好朋友相片应注意哪些?

Friends can be classified into two kinds, good friends and evil friends. Evil friends lead us astray and may destroy our life, while good ones drive us towards the right and make our life successful. Two of them exist in our daily life. However, ideal friends exist in people's mind. They should be

diligent, successful and loyal. When you need help, they will stand beside you and be delighted to give you a hand. Also you can share your happiness and sorrow together.

In my opinion, friends can share something but they also should keep their own secrets. So I wish my friends wouldn't interfere in my privacy too much. On the other hand, my friends should have Something in common with me, at the same time something special. In this way we can attract each other and learn from each other

范文:The Difficulties in My English Learning 1、学习英语的重要性。

2、在学习英语中碰到的困难。

3、如何解决这些困难。

Most Chinese students have difficulties in learning English. The difficulties vary so much from person to person that it is difficult to cite here in a few words. Some may have problems in reading. Others may have trouble in writing. I also had problems in English learning, but my difficulty seemed to lie in listening. For example, when tested for listening comprehension, I couldn't understand a single sentence, let alone a passage of medium level. In order to overcome the difficulty in my English learning, I made great efforts to find the key to the problem. I consulted my teacher and found out that I merely didn't have enough time to practice listening. So I bought a tape recorder and listened to it at least two hours a day. In addition, I listened to "Special English"

on VOA. I also went out of my way to speak to foreigners on the campus whenever we meet so that I could have the chance to listen to the native speakers. After half a year's hard work, I could get 70% of the questions correct in

listening comprehension tests. I own my success to my English teacher. It is him who tells me the correct way to learn English. It is him who always encourages me when I encounter difficulties and feel disappointed.

范文:The Person I feel the Most Grateful to 1、你最想感谢的人是谁?2、为什么要感谢他?

3、对你的影响。

I am now a college student.I not only stay on top in studies in my class,but also have a strong constitution.Perhaps no one believes that as a child I was meagre and weak,not able to speak and walk until three years old.The reason might be that my family was very poor when my mother was pregnant with me.There was not enough to eat,to say nothing of nourishing food. Mother never gave up hope and tried all means to feed me up.She worked very hard.She raised pigs and chickens,and planted vegetables.She learned how to make edible oil from peanuts,vinegar from millet,beancurd from soy beans.She did all this by herself,for my father was working for a geological prospecting party,always away from home.Mother took perfect and minute care of me.Once I had a high fever,she carried me on her back and walked three hours at night to see a doctor.Litle by little,I grew stronger,then I went to school.Mother often encouraged me to take exercise in order to keep fit. Now I am a sturdy young man,while mother,only a small more than forty,is a grey-haired woman with a wrinkled face,looking much older than she actually is.I feel I owe everything to my mother and she is the one I should be most grateful to.

范文:Should We Learn to Do Housework? 1、学生是否要学做家务?有人认为应该。

2、有人认为没必要。

3、我的看法。

Housework is often too heavy for our parents,especially for our mothers. Although we are very busy working at our lessons, I think we should do some housework for our parents,because our parents are also busy and tired after a day's work. They care for us and we should care for them too. What's more,doing housework can also help us learn to look after ourselves and make our tired brains relax. But,now,many parents don't let their daughters or sonsdo anything,because they hope that their children can have more time for lessons so that they can go to university and then have good jobs. But some of us don't make good use of the time. They just take it for granted that the housework is something done by parents. In other words,they don't value the time,or rather,they are just wasting the time. I think we should study hard every day in order to learn all the lessons well. At

the same time,we should also do some housework every day. It is good for us. Now we are not small children any longer. We should spend some of our spare time on housework to reduce our parents'

burdens.

With the improvement in living standards, more and more people start to go abroad for their

holidays. Write an essay on the topic "The Advantages and Disadvantages of Going Abroad for Holidays". And you should base your essay on the outline below.

1.出国旅游悄然兴起,出国旅游的种种好处;

2.出国旅游的种种弊端;

3.你的看法以及理由。

The Advantages and Disadvantages of Going Abroad for Holidays Going abroad for holidays is becoming more and more popular. One reason is that you can choose wherever you like to go. Another reason for it is that you can know nore about the local habit and culture. What's more, it's a good chance for everyone to practice speaking English.

But every coin has two sides. You may be badly ill or can't get used to the local culture immediately. Another disadvantage is that you can't talk to a person who doesn't have the same interst as you.

In my opinion, we can't miss a chance to go abroad.

Personally, I think this question should be probed(探究) in depth. From what has been discussed above, we can see clearly that the key lies in whether the student is able to strike a successful balance between work and study.

6. “My View on One-Child Family”

1、一些人对独子家庭持肯定态度;2、另一些人持否定态度;3、我的看法。

Many of the Chinese people think that a family with one child is better than those with more children. For one thing, many people will try their best to achieve career success and have little time to care about their children;

for another, if they only raise one child they can afford better education for the child.

But there are also some negative views about the one-child family. They think it is better to have a big family. Everyone in the family can help each other when they have difficulties. What is more, the more children they have, the better life they will live when they grow old.

In my opinion, it's enough for a family to have one child. Nowadays population expansion is one of the most serious problems in the world. Population expansion contributes to a series of problems: shortage of

natural resources and food supply, crowded cities and high rate of

unemployment. Some day the earth will be too crowded for people to live in.

3. Topic: My View on Studying Abroad 1.一些人认为出国学习是自我发展的最佳途径 2.另一些人则认为在国内也能充分展示个人的才华 3.我的看法 In recent years, studying abroad has been popular in our country. More and more students would like to go abroad through mediators. Is it good or bad to study abroad? In my opinion, on one hand, it has some advantages. Studying abroad can provide better studying conditions. People can make rapid progress in their foreign language study and it can also help widen their field of vision. Meanwhile, young students can learn advanced science and technology from foreign countries and spread cultures of different nations. On the other hand, it has disadvantages. For example, because of the lack of living experience and poor capability to take care of themselves, they may feel lonely and homesick. In addition, high living expenses and tuition fees will become a heavy burden upon their parents. So I think whether studying abroad or not should be decided according to oneself and

2. My View on Working at Home".

1.随着高科技的发展,越来越多的人选择在家工作 2.选择在家工作的利与弊 3.我的观点 With the development of hi-tech, more and more people work at home. There are many advantages of home working. For example, by working at home, you can save time and money spent traveling to and from work. What’s more, you can arrange work around family duties, and avoid noise and distractions of the workplace. However, there are disadvantages from home working too. You may find you have trouble with separating home and work life, and sometimes you will be interrupted by domestic duties. Besides, working at home makes one feel isolated. As far as I am concerned, one should weigh carefully the advantages and disadvantages and find out which is more suitable for him or her before making a decision

范文:Healthy Life 1、健康的生活方式包括合理膳食、有规律的起居、锻炼等。

2、不好的生活方式包括抽烟、饮酒、暴饮暴食等。

3、好的习惯使身体健康,不良习惯引发多种疾病。

Healthy life style involves keeping a balanced diet,living a routine life,and undertaking regular physical exercises. A balanced diet means eating a variety of foods and allowing for an adequate intake of them every day. Living a routine life refers to getting up and going to bed at a fixed time, and maintaining 8-hour sleep each day. Doing physical exercisesregularly is also the key to staying healthy. Choose a suitable type of exercise depending on your own interests and physical conditions and keep to it. Unhealthy life style includes smoking, drinking and overeating. Smoking would cause bronchitis and lung cancer. According to a recent survey, four million people die each year from diseases linked to smoking. Drinking would result in health and social problems. Drunk driving is a deadly hazard both to the person himself and to other people. Overeating would lead to obesity, diabetes, and other health-related diseases. It has been an undisputable fact that good life style will make people healthy, and bad one will result in many

diseases. To keep fit, we should develop good living habits, i.e. , eating a balanced diet, living a routine life, and doing physical exercises regularly. 范文:Grammar Learning 1、在很长一段时间,中国的英语教学非常重视语法教学。

2、近年来,有人提出在英语教学中要取消语法教学,因为死背语法规则的确不是有效的学习方法。

3、但语法学习也有其必要性, 关键在于如何将语法学习与语言应用相结合.

In the past, grammar was the focus of the English language teaching and learning in China. The English class had been dominated by teachers’ explaining grammar rules and sentence structures. Students were busy taking notse and they were given no time to practice using English for communication. Consequently, while having acquired a sufficient amount of grammar knowledge, students did not know how to express themselves in simple English. In recent years, it has been argued that we should stop teaching grammar in class, as memorizing grammar rules is not the proper way to learn English. It is suggested that more emphasis should be laid on developing students’ communicative abilities, i.e. their abilities to use English to interact with people. As a result, class time is mainly distributed to students’ 作文库大全小升初中考满分高考满分高考零分 doing various types of communicative tasks. However, more and more people have come to realize that grammar is necessary in developing communicative skills. Both fluency and accuracy are important in language learning. The key now is how to combine the two in practice

范文:Western Festivals in China 1、越来越多的中国人过西方的节日。

2、有些人却为这种现象担心… 3、我的看法。

Nowadays,various western festivals, such as Christmas, Valentine's Day or Thanksgiving Day ,enjoy great popularity among the people in China,especially the students in colleges and universities. There are many factors accounting for this phenomenon.For one thing,with the quickening pace of technological and economic development,the whole world is now becoming a global village with people of different nations sharing each other's customs and cultures.For another,it is human instincts to pursue something different and exotic, and most young people regard it as fashionable and novel to celebrate western holidays.Last but not least some shops celebrate western festivals because of financial drive to grab commercial profits. It is obvious that some western festivals,such as Christmas,have greatly boosted the business of many stores. As a result,western festivals may bring people in China more opportunities for pleasure and may also enhance the cultural exchanges between the east and the west.On the other hand,it may lead to some serious consequences.Perhaps someday the local Chinese may lose their own tranditions and cultures because of the invasion of western festivals.

范文:Entertainments 1、列举出人们需要娱乐的原因。

2、缺乏娱乐可能导致的后果。

Perhaps,it is the instinct for people to have some entertainments of difficult kinds. Usually entertainment is good for our health and intelligence as well.After relaxing with entertainment, we will be much more energetic.But,with the development of computer technology and its internet,more and more people,especially the young people are interested in the video games. Somtimes,they are too addicted to the games.They spend too much time and money on the games.Certainly enough,playing video games will do great harm to their health and will give bad influence on their study. Personally I think,we should learn how to keep balance between our lessons and the video games.We should think in what way we can noth enjoy ourselves and get progress in our learning.Never forget that our future life cannot depend on playing,although enjoyment is one part of our life.

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篇四:语文作文考试技巧

中考语文试卷写作文,除了平时的积累和拓宽阅读面以外,有没有一些应试小技巧呢?不少从事一线教学工作的老师们总结了一些应试作文小技巧,可以帮助考生应对临场写作文。

技巧一:作文成绩看字迹,得分要素是

技巧七:动笔之前不要慌,想了题目列提纲

在具体操作的时候,列提纲很关键。譬如,写记叙文要设计好开头结尾,同时要把你叙述的事情分成几个层次,一个层次是一段,中间如果能设置好一个过渡句或过渡段更好。列提纲的时候,一定要把开头结尾写详细些,中间各段,穿插哪些精彩的话语或名言俗语、诗词典故,要写准。一个合格的学生,列提纲,大约5分钟到8分钟。时间要掌握好,提纲就要简练些。

技巧八:想好主题和文体,非驴非马不可取

写作文,要么是记叙文,要么是议论文。一般来说,多是“总—分—总”结构。记叙文的结尾要注意抒情和总结哲理,议论文最好是“1—3—1”或者“1—4—1”结构,中间的3或4,是分层解题。当然也可以灵活采用夹叙夹议的手法。但是注意,千万别议论文说了那么多事例却不归纳主题,记叙文忘记说事却议论过多。因此,写考试作文,事先要想好了。

技巧九:适当克隆和“抄袭”,考前备料攒信息

考试前,建议考生翻阅大量的范文,积累一些考试作文的结构。可以把写作的梗概和套路归纳出来,可以分别背个三五句。譬如,前年有奥运,去年是新中国成立60周年,还有汶川地震的感人事迹等,都可以做考试作文的题材。

此外也有一些不太规范的方法,譬如别家的感人事迹,可以搬到自己家。这在考试的时候要灵活慎重运用。

技巧十:篇幅争取要写满,多写一点是一点

一般来说,中考高考作文要求都不低于600—800字。如果要求是600字左右,那就顶多写到700字。争取合理安排卷面,把给的卷面写满到95%左右。譬如中考作文不低于600字,试卷给的卷面多是800字左右,那么,你争取写到780字,留下最后一两行。

关于中考作文十个写作技巧分享

2013年中考已经渐行渐远,随着新学期即将开学,2014年济南中考将越来越近。无论政策怎么改变,中考依然会考试,提高成绩才是硬道理。今天和大家分享提高中考语文成绩,提高中考作文水平的技巧,中考作文的写作技巧。

知识要点:1、写作文时,应做到说真话、诉真情。2、力求表达自己对自然、社会、人生的独特感受和真切体验。3、感情的倾诉要适当节制,但不要有范围的限制。

考试说明:

中考作文如何表达真情实感

真情实感是作文的价值所在,魅力所在;胡编乱造,弄虚作假,这是作文的大忌。在2001年各省市的中考作文试题中,直接写明要求有真情实感的就有很多,有的虽然在提示中没有写明,但在评分标准中非常强调。从作文教学的发展趋势看,对作文的真情实感的要求必定会进一步加强,特别是记叙性作文。那么,考场作文中如何才能表达真情实感呢?这里以2001年几篇优秀中考作文为例来具体谈谈。

(1)述亲身经历

写作需要生活,越是亲身经历过、体验过的生活,写在文章中往往就越真实,越感动人。在构思过程中,我们要尽量从自己经历的生活中筛选素材。作为中学生,生活经历也许并不算丰富,但只要认真回忆和筛选,再进行适当的加工和组合,就一定能找到具体的材料,写出充满真情实感的作文。《我发现爸爸老了》是南通市的一篇优秀中考作文,作者写的就是自己亲眼所见的情景:小时候,为了不让我一个人孤零零呆在家里,父亲将两条毛巾平铺在装满秧苗的筐上,用那根我熟悉得不能再熟悉的扁担挑着我,在泥泞不堪的小路上送走了我的童年。当时的父亲,身材魁梧,虎背熊腰,在村里是数一数二的壮汉子;如今,父亲原先那嘹亮清脆的号子声已失去昔日的雄壮,隐约间还夹杂着几丝沙哑,原先油亮的黑发现在已染上了霜色,原先红润的面庞在已渐渐变得土黄,原先笔直的腰杆也略显弯曲??由于都是亲眼所见,印象特别深刻,写出来就有真情实感。

(2)多细节描写

真情实感离不开生动的、典型的细节,细节的多少和真实与否,反映出作者对生活的体验程度,也直接关系到文章的真情实感。如果文章中都是些笼统的、概括的叙述,即使是亲身经历过的,也往往会给人不真实的感觉。细节不细,这个"不细",就是指它的作用不小。《我喜欢童年的竹林》是荆州市的优秀中考作文,之所以说它有真情实感,就是因为它有生动具体的细节描写,如:伸出手,扶住竹竿使劲一摇,"哗啦"一声,雪花"簌簌"地如天女散花般地飘落下来,洒到我的脖子里,凉丝丝的,滋润我"咯咯"的笑声。又如:有时,我们从家里偷出绳子,牢牢地拴在竹子上,做成秋千。摇啊,荡啊,从秋千底下,摇出我心中的歌。这些细节,不但真实,而且写得也富有诗意。

(3)明人事要素

具体和真实是一对孪生兄弟,要使文章有真情实感,就必须写得具体。虽不能说凡具体就一定真实,但一般而言,具体的叙述往往更能让人信以为真。你简单地说某地发生一件抢劫案,听者不一定会信,假如你有鼻子有眼睛地说,把抢劫的时间、地点、受害人的单位或姓名及被抢劫的数量都说出来了,那别人就会相信。在作文过程中,要尽量写清楚相关的人事要素。人,主要是单位、姓名、年龄、相貌、性格等;事,主要是起因、经过、结果等。《为自己喝彩》是泉州市的中考优秀作文,

己的潜意识,心里是怎样想的,就怎样写。《为自己喝彩》的后半部分有这样几句:晚上,我站在穿衣镜前细细地端详自己。不!我不要这张苦大仇深的脸,我拥有别人没有的优点,我上进、奋发、勇敢,知识填高了我,我有什么好自卑的呢?这几句话,一般人是不会公开对人说的,但作者把它写了出来。心里想的就是这样,写出来当然就有了真情实感。

(6)拟相应情景

作文要尽量写自己经历过的事,但有时,从自己的经历中找不到恰当的材料,有时,必须对自己经历过的事作一定的加工和改造。换句话说,作文中的事并不是自己完全或真正经历过的。这能不能给人真情实感呢?应该说,虚构也能做到有真情实感,关键是要注意这两点:一是这种事,自己虽然没有经历过,但现实生活中必定会有,别人肯定经历过;二是要模拟相应生活情景,把自己置于其中,仔细地想一想:假如我在那个时间、那个场所,遇到那样的事会怎么样呢?如果写的是一位老年男子,那么,就不妨借助自己的外公或爷爷,从他们平时的表现中想一想:假如爷爷在遇到这种事时会怎么对待?如果所写的是中年妇女,那不妨借助自己的母亲或邻居的大婶,根据母亲等平时的性格特征和行为习惯,想一想:她会怎样处理这件事?模拟生活情景,转换人物角色,能使虚构的文章多一点真情实感。

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