帮忙检查英语故事有没有错误语法或单词Hello everyone.I want to tell you a story about Mr.Forgetful and Ben.One person is very forgetful,Who is he?He is Mr.Forgetful.He has a dog,he calls it ben.ben always say:"Mr.forgetful is a good m

帮忙检查英语故事有没有错误语法或单词Hello everyone.I want to tell you a story about Mr.Forgetful and Ben.One person is very forgetful,Who is he?He is Mr.Forgetful.He has a dog,he calls it ben.ben always say:"Mr.forgetful is a good m
帮忙检查英语故事有没有错误语法或单词
Hello everyone.I want to tell you a story about Mr.Forgetful and Ben.
One person is very forgetful,Who is he?He is Mr.Forgetful.He has a dog,he calls it ben.ben always say:"Mr.forgetful is a good man,but he isn’t a good master.” Because he forget give ben breakfast every day.
Odie and ben are good friends.Odie visited ben's room.Mr.forgetful didn‘t give ben breakfast again.Ben can't bear that.He wants to give Mr.forgetful a lesson.
Ben leaves home.he wants let’s Mr.forgetful know he is angry.Mr.fogetful can’t find ben.He goes to Lost and Found Office.A girl greets him in the office.Mr.forgerful give her a photo of ben.The girl put photos into the window.
Odie and ben pass the Lost and Found Office.Ben sees photo his own.He know Mr.forgetful is looking for him.He goes home happily.but Mr.forgert calls him odie.Ben has nothing to say.
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帮忙检查英语故事有没有错误语法或单词Hello everyone.I want to tell you a story about Mr.Forgetful and Ben.One person is very forgetful,Who is he?He is Mr.Forgetful.He has a dog,he calls it ben.ben always say:"Mr.forgetful is a good m
Because he forget give ben breakfast every day.
改为 ---because he forgets giving ben breakfast every day.
he wants let’s Mr.forgetful know he is angry.
改为-----he wants to make Mr.Forgetful know he is angry.
Mr.forgerful give her a photo of ben.
改为---Mr.forgerful gives her a photo of ben.
The girl put photos into the window
改为--The girl puts the photo on the window
Ben sees photo his own
改为---Ben sees photo of his own
然后就没什么问题了,但是如果你是在讲故事的话,全文都应该用过去时态,但是现在这个样子也不能说你的错的.

ben always say-->ben always says
Because he forget give ben breakfast every day->Because he forgets to give ben breakfast every day
Ben can't bear that-->Ben couldn't bear that
He wants to...

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ben always say-->ben always says
Because he forget give ben breakfast every day->Because he forgets to give ben breakfast every day
Ben can't bear that-->Ben couldn't bear that
He wants to give Mr. forgetful a lesson.-->He wanted to give Mr. forgetful a lesson.
Ben left home.He wanted to let Mr.forgetful know he was angry. Mr.fogetful couldn’t find ben.He went to Lost and Found Office.A girl greeted him in the office.Mr.forgerful gave her a photo of ben.The girl put the photo into the window.
Odie and ben passed the Lost and Found Office.Ben saw the photo of his own. He knew Mr.forgetful was looking for him.He went home happily.but Mr.forgert called him odie.Ben had nothing to say.

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