请英语高手帮我仔细看下自己写的英语作文有没有什么语法、时态、单词等错误,虚心求教哎自己用有道翻译了一遍,因为老师太严了怕出错,所以请帮忙再检查一遍.Thank my parents for giving my life.

请英语高手帮我仔细看下自己写的英语作文有没有什么语法、时态、单词等错误,虚心求教哎自己用有道翻译了一遍,因为老师太严了怕出错,所以请帮忙再检查一遍.Thank my parents for giving my life.
请英语高手帮我仔细看下自己写的英语作文有没有什么语法、时态、单词等错误,虚心求教哎
自己用有道翻译了一遍,因为老师太严了怕出错,所以请帮忙再检查一遍.
Thank my parents for giving my life.They're so diligent that them keep on working all day long in order to make a living.And they're so selfless that them always keep all good things for me.Parents have made all they can do to help me grow.
With a grateful heart to treat their parents with a sincere heart to go with their parents,not to be taken for granted that parents do anything to help us,they took us to this beautiful world,is great enough,and our parenting adults,not asking for anything,we have to pay for silence,we stop blindly to demand their pay,Thanksgiving it,thank parents for their bit by bit.
When I am happy,they would share my happiness with me,my parents are the people who love me best,so I have no excuse not to love them.
I will try my best,I want to see the smile in their eyes.I love them forever

请英语高手帮我仔细看下自己写的英语作文有没有什么语法、时态、单词等错误,虚心求教哎自己用有道翻译了一遍,因为老师太严了怕出错,所以请帮忙再检查一遍.Thank my parents for giving my life.
I wanted to thank my parents for giving me precious life.They're so diligent that they keep on working all day long in order to give us all good living.They're so selfless that they always keep all good things for me. Parents have do all the best they can to raise me.
With a grateful heart to treat their parents with a sincere heart to go with their parents, not to be taken for granted that parents do anything to help us, they took us to this beautiful world, is great enough, and our parenting adults, didn't ask for anything, we have to pay for silence, we stop blindly demand their pay, and thank them for giving it, thank parents for their bit by bit.
When I am happy, they would share my happiness together with me, my parents are the people who love me the most, so I have no excuse to not to love them. I will try my best to let them keep smiling and be proud of me. I swear I will love them forever always.