改错10处!Last week,the senior three students in改错10处!Last week,the senior three students in our school have a discussion on if to go to a nearby or not.Seventy percents of them preferred universities in thier local cities.The reason for this

改错10处!Last week,the senior three students in改错10处!Last week,the senior three students in our school have a discussion on if to go to a nearby or not.Seventy percents of them preferred universities in thier local cities.The reason for this
改错10处!Last week,the senior three students in
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Last week,the senior three students in our school have a discussion on if to go to a nearby or not.Seventy percents of them preferred universities in thier local cities.The reason for this is because it will be convenient for them and thier parents to take care of with each other.They can also take advantage of the home living conditions for thier studies.However,other students chose universities farther away from home so that they can be more independent.They can also make a few new friends but see more of the world.Personal,I favor a university outside our province,which can provide more living and working experience in society to us.

改错10处!Last week,the senior three students in改错10处!Last week,the senior three students in our school have a discussion on if to go to a nearby or not.Seventy percents of them preferred universities in thier local cities.The reason for this
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Last week, the senior three students in our school (have改成had) a discussion on (if改成whether) to go to a nearby (加入university) or not. Seventy (percents改成percent) of them preferred universities in their local cities. The reason for this is (because改成that) it will be convenient for them and their parents to take care of (去掉with) each other. They can also take advantage of the home living conditions for their studies. However, other students chose universities (farther改成far) away from home so that they can be more independent. They can also make a few new friends (but改成and) see more of the world. (Personal改成Personally), I favor a university outside our province, which can provide more living and working experience in society (to改成for) us.