改错 10处 Last week,the senior three students in our改错 10处Last week,the senior three students in our school have a discussion on if to go to a nearby or not.Seventy percents of them preferred universities in thier local cities.The reason for

改错 10处 Last week,the senior three students in our改错 10处Last week,the senior three students in our school have a discussion on if to go to a nearby or not.Seventy percents of them preferred universities in thier local cities.The reason for
改错 10处 Last week,the senior three students in our
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Last week,the senior three students in our school have a discussion on if to go to a nearby or not.Seventy percents of them preferred universities in thier local cities.The reason for this is because it will be convenient for them and thier parents to take care of with each other.They can also take advantage of the home living conditions for thier studies.However,other students chose universities farther away from home so that they can be more independent.They can also make a few new friends but see more of the world.Personal,I favor a university outside our province,which can provide more living and working experience in society to us.

改错 10处 Last week,the senior three students in our改错 10处Last week,the senior three students in our school have a discussion on if to go to a nearby or not.Seventy percents of them preferred universities in thier local cities.The reason for
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Last week,the senior three students in our school 【have 改成 had】 a discussion on 【if 改成whether】 to go to a nearby【增加university】 or not.Seventy 【percents 改成 percent】 of them preferred universities in thier local cities.The reason for this is 【because 改成that】 it will be convenient for them and thier parents to take care of 【with 删除】 each other.They can also take advantage of the home living conditions for thier studies.However,other students chose universities 【farther 改成far】 away from home so that they can be more independent.They can also make a few new friends 【but 改成and】 see more of the world.【Personal 改成Personally】,I favor a university outside our province,which can provide more living and 【working 改成work】 experience in society 【to 改成 for】 us.