作业帮请帮忙看一下小朋友写的作文,有没有错误,My deskmateMy deskmate is Apple.She’s a girl .She’s short .She’s thin.She likes eating bararas,Her student aumber is two.We are gook friends.I like her very much.
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请帮忙看一下小朋友写的作文,有没有错误,My deskmateMy deskmate is Apple.She’s a girl .She’s short .She’s thin.She likes eating bararas,Her student aumber is two.We are gook friends.I like her very much.
请帮忙看一下小朋友写的作文,有没有错误,
My deskmate
My deskmate is Apple.She’s a girl .She’s short .She’s thin.She likes eating bararas,Her student aumber is two.We are gook friends.I like her very much.
请帮忙看一下小朋友写的作文,有没有错误,My deskmateMy deskmate is Apple.She’s a girl .She’s short .She’s thin.She likes eating bararas,Her student aumber is two.We are gook friends.I like her very much.
基本没有错误,但可以更流畅一些,如果你愿意,请看如下文章：
My deskmate
I have a deskmate,she is a girl,her name is Apple.She is short and thin,and she likes eating bananas,her student number is two.we are very good friends,I like her very much.
aumber 改number gookg改good bararas改bananas
aumber？？应该会number吧