英语作文求检查语法时态单词使用等错误.我要学校比赛的 我写是写完了,但是可能有语法错误.大家帮我看看,用词啊 结构哈 时态啊什么的.Dear SusanMuch to my excitement,next Friday is Xiao Ming's birthday!

英语作文求检查语法时态单词使用等错误.我要学校比赛的 我写是写完了,但是可能有语法错误.大家帮我看看,用词啊 结构哈 时态啊什么的.Dear SusanMuch to my excitement,next Friday is Xiao Ming's birthday!
英语作文求检查语法时态单词使用等错误.
我要学校比赛的 我写是写完了,但是可能有语法错误.大家帮我看看,用词啊 结构哈 时态啊什么的.
Dear Susan
Much to my excitement,next Friday is Xiao Ming's birthday!We have an adequate preparation in the student club,in order to give him a big surprise and let him spend a memorable day.So we invite you in enthusiasm,hoping you can attend this party.
There are the contents of our activity.First,let Xiao Ming light a candle and make a wish,meanwhile,all of us will sing a song for him together.Second,enjoy the deliciousness of cakes as well as take part in a variety of recreations.I guarantee you will be fond of them.Last,it is better to bring a gift no matter delicate or simple,because the meaning is more important than things.
I am anxious to hear from your reply,let us have a pleasant Friday!
Sincerely
Li Hua

英语作文求检查语法时态单词使用等错误.我要学校比赛的 我写是写完了,但是可能有语法错误.大家帮我看看,用词啊 结构哈 时态啊什么的.Dear SusanMuch to my excitement,next Friday is Xiao Ming's birthday!
Dear Susan
Much to express my excitement, next Friday is Xiao Ming's birthday! We are going to have an colorful party in the student club, in order to give him a big surprise and let him spend a memorable day, so we invite you in full enthusiasm, hoping you can attend this party.
There are some activities in our activity. Firstly, letting Xiao Ming light a candle and make a wish, meanwhile, all of us will sing a song for him . Secondly, enjoying the deliciousness of the cake as well as taking part in a variety of recreations. I guarantee you will be fond of them. At last, it is better to bring a gift no matter how delicated or simple it is, because the meaning is more important than things.
I am anxious to hear from your reply, let us have a pleasant Friday!
Sincerely
Li Hua