请英语高手帮忙修改下语法及其他的错误.急用,有肉!答的好给加肉,1：Got up early,after get up very sleepy,came to class before long were asleep,he wanted to sleep in the classroom,as in the dormitory,so also comfortable sleep.

请英语高手帮忙修改下语法及其他的错误.急用,有肉!答的好给加肉,1：Got up early,after get up very sleepy,came to class before long were asleep,he wanted to sleep in the classroom,as in the dormitory,so also comfortable sleep.
请英语高手帮忙修改下语法及其他的错误.急用,有肉!答的好给加肉,
1：Got up early,after get up very sleepy,came to class before long were asleep,he wanted to sleep in the classroom,as in the dormitory,so also comfortable sleep.In the classroom,lay prone to sleep eyes and bad,easy to cause the short time into myopia,because and can't eat breakfast,time is long on our health can cause harm.
2：Our school school only 7 bus to downtown,to say do taxi again the word too expensive,schools in the suburbs,far away from downtown,spending is too big,it is because only 7 bus,every time when traveling is particularly crowded,crowded,no little space,very uncomfortable.Originally the car won't not carsick,now a sit 7 bus is dizzy.
3.Sanya is a tropical climate,island,is surrounded by water,wind is sea wind,heat is very normal.Throughout the year,very hot,in winter is quite comfortable,the visitors came across the tourism,for the winter,the most outstanding is northeast three provinces of people open their visit to the house car.
4.Sanya from April the early start to rainy season,often of the heavy rain,this does not like other place is very cool,instead more hot!That's not a wind environment,deeply however spirit,like we just coming National Day,he spent the next eleven for seven days of rain,this allows us to be terrified of the rainy season in sanya.So 4 months of sanya out best brought an umbrella oh.
5.Just came to the university of university life,we filled with longing,because so we can get rid of high school life of hard,the university is a 100% of the time all belong to oneself hold place,is because learning less time,after-school self-consciousness is too low,just cause learning achievement dropped substantially,I should make good use of class time and leisure time; class The relationship between study and life in entertainment,adjust good study in learning entertainment!
6.Fall in love?I think everyone came to the university are eager to talk about magnificent and victorious in love,don't know what time from the beginning,has formed a habit,seem like the same,university required relationship is about 90% unrealistic,students should grasp,to themselves and others responsible.
7.Came to the university,many people want to exercise myself,let oneself more independent,later into society can adapt to.Just came to the school,students would buy basin of boiler bowl gourd ladle and all sorts of electrical appliances,do-it-yourself running his own life.History tells us,in an electric equipment must remember with,want to be safe to use,finished to cut off the power supply,reasonable check regularly,in order to eliminate hidden dangers.
还有一段，8.A person out college,parents worry about most is the safety and health of children,most children from the moment into the campus begin learning independence.Unfamiliar environment,strange classmate,we as soon as possible is blended in among them,go out in the outside,we will safety first,pedro,learn to protect themselves in the country less let parents worry.

请英语高手帮忙修改下语法及其他的错误.急用,有肉!答的好给加肉,1：Got up early,after get up very sleepy,came to class before long were asleep,he wanted to sleep in the classroom,as in the dormitory,so also comfortable sleep.
一题一题来啊...
问题还真多...没了主语,语法错了 然後句子本身也很verbose 语境也错了等等...
1：I got up early; after getting up I was very sleepy. I was sleepy in class even its long I arrived at the classroom, I wanted to sleep as if I was in the dormitory, a comfortable sleep. Sleeping in classroom with arise problems such as myopia in short period of time, and because I can't have breakfast in classroom to keep us alert, it would be harmful in the long run.
2：There are only 7 buses can be taken from downtown to our school. Our school is situated at the suburb, and it would be too expensive to take the taxi. So buses became the only choice; however it's every crowded, and people jostled around all the time. I am not supposed to have car sick but now I feel a little bit dizzy.