作业帮看这篇英语作文,请评分并挑错,谢谢!作文大意：你的朋友心情不好,请你发封E-mail提出合理建议,帮她调适心情. 参考建议：sing,take a walk, do sports , write the diary , watch TV, listen to music, go shopping, g
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看这篇英语作文,请评分并挑错,谢谢!作文大意：你的朋友心情不好,请你发封E-mail提出合理建议,帮她调适心情. 参考建议：sing,take a walk, do sports , write the diary , watch TV, listen to music, go shopping, g
看这篇英语作文,请评分并挑错,谢谢!
作文大意：你的朋友心情不好,请你发封E-mail提出合理建议,帮她调适心情. 参考建议：sing,take a walk, do sports , write the diary , watch TV, listen to music, go shopping, go swimming , go outside…… 要求：语言表达准确,短文连贯通顺.2、文中不得出现真名及学校名.3,80词左右 请问这篇作文里哪个地方错了,不合适 并给出合适的分数（满分10分）
看这篇英语作文,请评分并挑错,谢谢!作文大意：你的朋友心情不好,请你发封E-mail提出合理建议,帮她调适心情. 参考建议：sing,take a walk, do sports , write the diary , watch TV, listen to music, go shopping, g
1 You are in a bad mood 心情不好 2If you do 不是does 3 go to sleep 3 write diaryswa 5 the best way to relax yourself 6 when you go shopping go ... go..7 listen to 8have a try 9 Ithink Your mood will get better 这篇在4-6分吧 你的作文