请帮我修改下面这篇英语文章,包括语法和单词Hello,everyone.My name is Wan Li.In Chinese,that means ten thousand Li.I’m very glad to stand here to share my speech with you.Today I’m going to talk about my story.It was a quiet nigh

请帮我修改下面这篇英语文章,包括语法和单词Hello,everyone.My name is Wan Li.In Chinese,that means ten thousand Li.I’m very glad to stand here to share my speech with you.Today I’m going to talk about my story.It was a quiet nigh
请帮我修改下面这篇英语文章,包括语法和单词
Hello,everyone.My name is Wan Li.In Chinese,that means ten thousand Li.I’m very glad to stand here to share my speech with you.Today I’m going to talk about my story.
It was a quiet night.After having supper,I came to my study to review lessons for tomorrow's final exams.
However,while I was working hard,the house had a sudden power cut.I looked around blankly and didn’t know what to do.When I realized what happened,I was angry enough to keep complaining loudly.My father heard that and then walked into the study.“Dear my son,cursing the darkness isn’t what you got to do now.Lighting a candle is more helpful,” said my father.He put a candle and a lighter in my hand.I lighted it and the room became much brighter.
Similary,in the face of life ,what we need is not to blindly complain ,but to take action to light the hope.This story taught me a lot.
That's all.Thank you!

请帮我修改下面这篇英语文章,包括语法和单词Hello,everyone.My name is Wan Li.In Chinese,that means ten thousand Li.I’m very glad to stand here to share my speech with you.Today I’m going to talk about my story.It was a quiet nigh
Hello,everyone.My name is Wan Li.In Chinese,the first character stands for ten thousand.I’m very glad to stand here to have a speech.Today I’m going to talk about my story.
It was a quiet night.After having supper,I came to my study to review lessons for tomorrow's final exams.
However,while I was working hard,the house had a sudden power cut.I looked around surprisedly and didn’t know what to do.When I realized what happened,I was angry and keep complaining loudly.My father heard that,then walked into the study.“Sweetheart,cursing the darkness isn’t what you are going to do now.Lighting a candle is more reasonable,” said my father.He put a candle and a lighter in my hand.I lighted it and the room became much brighter.
Similary,in the face of life ,what we need is not to complain blindly,but to take action to light the hope.This experience really gave me a lesson.
That's all.Thank you!

final exam
had happened
cursing改成complaining
Similarly
写的真心不错，加油！
记得采纳，谢谢！

My name is Wan Li.In Chinese, that means ten thousand Li.此句用定语从句更好，My name is Wan Li，which means ten thousand li in Chinese.
for tomorrow's final exams改为for the final exams tomorrow.
I was an...

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My name is Wan Li.In Chinese, that means ten thousand Li.此句用定语从句更好，My name is Wan Li，which means ten thousand li in Chinese.
for tomorrow's final exams改为for the final exams tomorrow.
I was angry enough to keep complaining loudly.改为I was so angry that I can't help complaining loudly.
Similary改为similarly

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However, while I was working hard, the house had a sudden power cut 改However, while I was working hard, the light went out 用灯熄灭代替断电，显出突然性。
When I realized what happened, I was angry enough t...

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However, while I was working hard, the house had a sudden power cut 改However, while I was working hard, the light went out 用灯熄灭代替断电，显出突然性。
When I realized what happened, I was angry enough to keep complaining loudly改When I realized what happened, I was so angry that I began to complain about it so that句型
Lighting a candle is more helpful, 改 Lighting a candle can be helpful, 点蜡烛更有帮助，那你是和什么比起来更有帮助呢？你都没有比较，只需要说有帮助就好
I lighted it and the room became much brighter. 改 lighted过去式是lit把?the room became bright again。蜡烛怎么可能比灯还亮，用再次变亮就好
in the face of life 改 when we are faced with difficulties 文章主要表达是面对生活中的困难，而不是单纯的生活
what we need is not to blindly complain 改 what we need to do is not to blindly complain
take action改take actions
逻辑和用词已经改了，理由也写上去了，自己看吧，私信也发你了

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