帮忙检查下这段英文吧,改出语法错误There are many we can recall the moment,these sounds nothing new,but we see when they cry.This drama are" trifles",but it is in these places portrays the characters' personalities,let them become fresh

帮忙检查下这段英文吧,改出语法错误There are many we can recall the moment,these sounds nothing new,but we see when they cry.This drama are" trifles",but it is in these places portrays the characters' personalities,let them become fresh
帮忙检查下这段英文吧,改出语法错误
There are many we can recall the moment,these sounds nothing new,but we see when they cry.This drama are" trifles",but it is in these places portrays the characters' personalities,let them become fresh and lovely,full of personality.See the introduction originally thought it would be a great family cruel bloody drama,it is full of each person would have tender side.Both distinguished prominent count,or in the kitchen was dictated to help the little girl,everyone live is full of humanity,and not to the plot to the appearance of a face.Each read drama people can easily tell each character's personality,even can't remember their names,also can recall their image.To do this step which for the creator,require much skill,is also very success!The individual thinks,the play 's most prominent figures among the Grantham count,he has principles with grace,is a master of the house; at the same time,he was not cruel aristocrat,he respected his servant,and they share a book,to help them to get rid of difficulties; and the face of his daughter,he be furious and filled with pamper.This figure is very interested in that,he was measured,in the lady unfortunate abortion two people lose their child,he is the same as the master of the house comes face to face with these,he can clearly tell the old friend Bates my pain,even let Robert accompany him for several minutes,but he is not so do.Because he knows his identity,he is a mature man.

帮忙检查下这段英文吧,改出语法错误There are many we can recall the moment,these sounds nothing new,but we see when they cry.This drama are" trifles",but it is in these places portrays the characters' personalities,let them become fresh
There are many （少宾语）we can recall the moment,（,改句号）these sounds nothing new,but we see when they cry.This drama are" trifles",but it is in these places(少that,强调句） portrays the characters' personalities,（,改句号） let them become fresh and lovely,full of personality.See the introduction（可加that,定语从句做主语） originally thought it would be a great family cruel bloody drama,it is full of each person （加that或which,宾语从句做主语）would have tender side.Both distinguished prominent count,or in the kitchen was dictated to help the little girl,everyone live is full of humanity,and not to the plot to the appearance of a face（不明白想表达什么意思,改不了）.Each read drama people can easily tell each character's personality,even（even改though） can't remember their names,（少主语they）also can recall their image.To do this step which for the creator,require（require应为ing形式,做宾补） much skill,is also very success!The individual thinks,the play 's most prominent figures among the Grantham count,he has principles with grace,is a master of the house; at the same time,he was not cruel aristocrat,he respected his servant,and they（they指代不明） share a book,to help them to get rid of difficulties; and the face of his daughter,he be furious and filled with（句子不明）.This figure is very interested in that,he was measured,in the lady unfortunate abortion two people lose their child,he is the same as the master of the house comes face to face with these,he can clearly tell the old friend Bates my pain,even let Robert accompany him for several minutes,but he is not so do【一句只有一个主语,此句标点符号错误多,意思不清）.Because he knows his identity,he is a mature man

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