帮我检查下语法的问题Free-time Activities In our daily life,we don’t pay attention to our body because our study and work.It would bring us a lot of trouble,in fact,let’s out of trouble is very easy,that is,free time,do some exercises It

帮我检查下语法的问题Free-time Activities In our daily life,we don’t pay attention to our body because our study and work.It would bring us a lot of trouble,in fact,let’s out of trouble is very easy,that is,free time,do some exercises It
帮我检查下语法的问题
Free-time Activities
In our daily life,we don’t pay attention to our body because our study and work.
It would bring us a lot of trouble,in fact,let’s out of trouble is very easy,that is,free time,do some exercises It will help us in good health
I guess:
After busy studying and working,people should make a plan in their free time to do some activities.Especially in the outdoors activity,for example:Plays the basketball,badminton,ping pang kicks football run,skips,(jump rope)and so on,in my free time my favourite activities is running.Because running can relax myself,exercise my brain,resist disease (prevent disease) lose weight,I like running very much!For retired people,maybe fishing,flying the kite,playing chess,dancing and so on fit them than others,in brief,the people may have the very many free activities
At last,I hope everybody can Plan your time carefully.

帮我检查下语法的问题Free-time Activities In our daily life,we don’t pay attention to our body because our study and work.It would bring us a lot of trouble,in fact,let’s out of trouble is very easy,that is,free time,do some exercises It
1.because our study and work→because of our study and work
2.let’s out of trouble is very easy, that is, free time, do some exercises It will help us in good health.这句很杂
首先不能用let’s out of trouble当主语
若非要改的话,只能用being out of trouble is very easy,但不建议用.
直接用It is very easy for us to get rid of trouble这样意思不变但变得通顺.
再者,free time, do some exercises it will help us in good health.→doing exercise in free time will help us in good health.
3. After busy studying and working→After busy study and work或者After busily studying and working
4.Especially in the outdoors activity→Especially the outdoors activities
5.Plays the basketball→Playing basketball
6.kicks football run, skips,(jump rope)and so on→playing football, running, skipping(jumping rope)and so on.
7.my favourite activities→my favourite activity
8.flying the kite→flying kites
9.dancing and so on →and so on去掉,dancing前面加and
10. fit them than others→fit them better than others
11.the people →people
12.the very many free activities→many free activities
13.everybody can Plan your time carefully→everybody can Plan his time carefully
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