作业帮帮我看看这篇英语文章有语病吗Dear jennyI have heared you had some problems with your parents on whether you can watch TV or not.Don't worry my friend,let me give you a hand.You could have a peaceful talk with your parents.Try to tell the
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帮我看看这篇英语文章有语病吗Dear jennyI have heared you had some problems with your parents on whether you can watch TV or not.Don't worry my friend,let me give you a hand.You could have a peaceful talk with your parents.Try to tell the
帮我看看这篇英语文章有语病吗
Dear jenny
I have heared you had some problems with your parents on whether you can watch TV or not.Don't worry my friend,let me give you a hand.
You could have a peaceful talk with your parents.Try to tell them that TV brings a lot of useful imformation to you and watching TV for a short time isn't a waste of time.At the same time you could make a study plan and promise to your parents you will stduy hard.I believe you can deal with it perfectly,will you And wish you good luck.
帮我看看这篇英语文章有语病吗Dear jennyI have heared you had some problems with your parents on whether you can watch TV or not.Don't worry my friend,let me give you a hand.You could have a peaceful talk with your parents.Try to tell the
当然有啊,第一句就有大问题,过去完成时,是表示过去所发生的事而对现在已经产生影响了,
have a peaceful talk with your parents,have 本身就是动词,而后面却是个动词词组.
time isn't a waste of time,waste是动词,不可以用a来修饰.
"At the same time"后面应有逗号
could make a study ,could make study,三个动词可以这样连吗?"you could making a studing
promise to your parents 后面缺一个宾语
I believe后面缺宾语