帮我看看这篇英语小文章有没有语病,顺便翻译出来,谢谢~!My name is Jackson.I’m a chinese boy,fourteen years old.I'm a middle school student.My dream school day is very nice.First,the school is big and beautiful.And teachers are

帮我看看这篇英语小文章有没有语病,顺便翻译出来,谢谢~!My name is Jackson.I’m a chinese boy,fourteen years old.I'm a middle school student.My dream school day is very nice.First,the school is big and beautiful.And teachers are
帮我看看这篇英语小文章有没有语病,顺便翻译出来,谢谢~!
My name is Jackson.I’m a chinese boy,fourteen years old.I'm a middle school student.My dream school day is very nice.First,the school is big and beautiful.And teachers are very kind and funny.We can learn a lot of information.And I have many good friends at school.We only have six lessons at school from Monday to Friday.Then I hope the lunch is delicious. And Every day we can have more happy hour,have less homework.This is my dream shool day,but I know it can’t come true forever.

帮我看看这篇英语小文章有没有语病,顺便翻译出来,谢谢~!My name is Jackson.I’m a chinese boy,fourteen years old.I'm a middle school student.My dream school day is very nice.First,the school is big and beautiful.And teachers are
我的名字叫杰克逊,我是一个14岁中国男孩.我是一个中学生.我的梦想是校园生活是非常好的.第一,学校是大和漂亮的 和 是非常大方和幽默的.翻译：我们学习一点信息.和我在学校有很多好同学.我们从星期一到星期五只有6节课在学校.然后我希望午餐是非常美味的.和每天我有很多欢乐时光,很少的作业.在是我梦想的校园生活,但是我知道它永远不能实现.
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我想说这个短文有很多语病,第一你用了“first”后面应该有“second”,or“ third”之类成为排比.然后“and”不能用在句子开头哦!“I’m a chinese boy,fourteen years old.”可以写成“I’m a fourteen-year-old Chinese boy,fourteen years old.”.“information”是不可以learn的!学习的是“knowledge”.“chinese”的“c”要大写哦!“lessons”是讲“第几课,或者什么课”应该用“periods”

My dream school day is very nice
这句不通
First
改成FIRST OF ALL
不要频繁使用AND
结合条目可以用：
first of all,
secondly.
besides.
as well as.

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My name is Jackson,I'm a Chinese boy,forteen years old,My dreamy school day is very nice.First,the school is big and beautifu,the teachers are all very kind and funny.We can learn a lot of...

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My name is Jackson,I'm a Chinese boy,forteen years old,My dreamy school day is very nice.First,the school is big and beautifu,the teachers are all very kind and funny.We can learn a lot of knowledge everday.We only have six lessons at school,from Monday to Friday.Then I hope the lunch food is delicious.Every day we can have more happy hours,less homework.This is my dreamy school day,but I know it will never cmoe true.
我的名字叫杰克逊，我是一个中国男孩，14岁了，我梦想的学校生活是美好的。首先，学校很大很美，学校里的老师都很友好很有趣。我们每天都能学到很多知识。从星期一到星期五，我们每天只上六节课。然后我希望午餐的食物很美味。每天我都能有更多快乐的时光，更少的功课要做。这就是我梦想的学校生活，尽管我知道这永远不会实现。

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My name is Jackson.I’m a fourteen years old chinese boy .I'm a middle school student.My dream school day is very nice.First,the school is big and beautiful,the teachers are very kind and fu...

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My name is Jackson.I’m a fourteen years old chinese boy .I'm a middle school student.My dream school day is very nice.First,the school is big and beautiful,the teachers are very kind and funny，we can learn（get） a lot of information.Second, I have many good friends at school.We only have six lessons at school from Monday to Friday.Last, I hope the lunch is delicious and everyday we can have more happy hours,have less homework.This is my dream shool day,but I know it can’t come true forever.
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我的名字是杰克逊 （Jackson）。我是一个十四岁的中国男孩，是个中学生。我所希望的一天读书生活是非常棒的。首先,学校很大和漂亮。还有老师很友好和风趣。我们可以学到很多，我在学校有很多好朋友，从周一到周五只有6节课。我也希望午餐是美味的。 每一天，我们可以有更多的欢乐时光，更少的 作业。这就是我梦想的一天学校生活，但我知道它永远不可能实现。
是我自己一点一点改的翻译的，希望能帮助你

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