帮我改改英语改错,急,This moning on my way to school Iwas deep moved by what I saw outside a bank .AN old man was counting his money in the front of the bank.Suddenly a young man came running and knocked him down.TO make things bad,his money

帮我改改英语改错,急,This moning on my way to school Iwas deep moved by what I saw outside a bank .AN old man was counting his money in the front of the bank.Suddenly a young man came running and knocked him down.TO make things bad,his money
帮我改改英语改错,急,
This moning on my way to school Iwas deep moved by what I saw outside a bank .AN old man was counting his money in the front of the bank.Suddenly a young man came running and knocked him down.TO make things bad,his money was lying in all direction.In no time the people around rush to pick the money up while the old man stood there,not know what to do.Surprisingly,everyone gave backthe money they had just picked.The old man counted the money again and found that not a single bill was missed.To my great joy,there are now a lot of nice people in your life.It's ture what honesty is more important than money!

帮我改改英语改错,急,This moning on my way to school Iwas deep moved by what I saw outside a bank .AN old man was counting his money in the front of the bank.Suddenly a young man came running and knocked him down.TO make things bad,his money
This morning on my way to school I was deep （1.改为deeply） moved by what I saw outside （2.加of）a bank .An old man was counting his money in the （3.去掉the）front of the bank.Suddenly a young man came running and knocked him down.To make things bad（4.改为worse）,his money was flying in all direction（5.改为directions).In no time the people around rush （6.改为rushed) to pick the money up while the old man stood there,not know （7.改为knowing) what to do.Surprisingly,everyone gave back the money they had just picked.The old man counted the money again and found that not a single bill was missed（8.改为missing）.To my great joy,there are now a lot of nice people in your（9.改为our） life.It's ture what （10.改为that）honesty is more important than money!

this morning早晨拼写错了。
i was deeply moved by 修饰动词应该是副词。
in front of 不是in the front of in front of 是在。。。前面，in the front of则指的是在。。。。前部
An old man was counting....suddenly...
把句号改掉换成when.....

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this morning早晨拼写错了。
i was deeply moved by 修饰动词应该是副词。
in front of 不是in the front of in front of 是在。。。前面，in the front of则指的是在。。。。前部
An old man was counting....suddenly...
把句号改掉换成when...
to make things worse, 不说 to make things bad
其它错误
in all directions
in no time did the people around rush to
not knowing
not a single bill was missing
it's true that honesty is more .....

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