急!求大师帮我改改这篇英语作文.关于体罚孩子的问题.谢谢啊!In this day and age, many families have only one child who is the apple of their parents. These children often lack of responsibility. Corporal punishment on students w

急!求大师帮我改改这篇英语作文.关于体罚孩子的问题.谢谢啊!In this day and age, many families have only one child who is the apple of their parents. These children often lack of responsibility. Corporal punishment on students w
急!求大师帮我改改这篇英语作文.关于体罚孩子的问题.谢谢啊!
In this day and age, many families have only one child who is the apple of their parents. These children often lack of responsibility. Corporal punishment on students whether it should be becomes a hot topic in these years.
Many children can not afford that self-control and to distinguish right from wrong. Some children spend most of their time watching TV or play games. They do not themselves homework. Thus corporal punishment is necessary. Children need to develop good habits of corporal punishment.
Corporal punishment would adversely affect the child. Firstly, age of the child is still small, they would become introverted personality of corporal punishment. Second, children may become rebellious go astray.
In the final analysis, I concede that give children the right guidance and some of corporal punishment on their better. whether parents and teachers or the community want children to grow up healthy and happy.

急!求大师帮我改改这篇英语作文.关于体罚孩子的问题.谢谢啊!In this day and age, many families have only one child who is the apple of their parents. These children often lack of responsibility. Corporal punishment on students w
In this day and age,many families have only one child who is the apple of their parents.These children (are)often lack of responsibility.Corporal punishment on students whether(这个单词怎么用的看不懂) it should be （后面不用be了）becomes a hot topic in （去掉in）these years.
Many children can not afford that self-control（这个读不通,表达不能自控吗） and to distinguish right from wrong.Some children spend most of their time watching TV or play ing games.They do not themselves（do not do their ） homework.Thus corporal punishment is necessary.Children need to develop A good habits of corporal punishment（养成体罚的习惯读起来不好吧）.
Corporal punishment would adversely affect the child（副词一般放到最后的Corporal punishment would have a bad influence on kids ,）.Firstly,age of the child is still small（the children is very young ）,they would become introverted personality of corporal punishment.Second,children may become rebellious （and）go astray一句不能有两个行为动词.astray 是副词,用go wrong way 吧
In the final analysis,I concede that giveing children the right guidance and （punishment on their bettr.）——give punishment to them is better sometimes.whether parents and teachers or the community want children to grow up healthy and happy（副词修饰动词健康的和快乐的单词加ly）.你用的词语挺难得,只是用错了很多,你 要学会怎么造句才好 ···加油吧 这个作文及格都难哪
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In recent years,many families have only one child who is the apple of their parents.These children are(缺动词） often lack of responsibility. Whether to corporal punishment on children becomes a hot topi...

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In recent years,many families have only one child who is the apple of their parents.These children are(缺动词） often lack of responsibility. Whether to corporal punishment on children becomes a hot topic these days.
Many children can not control themselves well and distinguish right from wrong.Some children spend most of their time watching TV or play games. They do not do their homeworks. 前面只是根据的你思路改了点小小的语法错误，后面的我改不下去了，我很抱歉的说一句，你是几年级的学生啊

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