作业帮初二英语作文改错纠错我们要举办个英语演讲,下面是我的演讲稿,能不能给我纠错一下Hello,everyone!I am Bill.I am a student.I make some resolutions.In the past,I hardly ever help with housework.In the future,I will do mor
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初二英语作文改错纠错我们要举办个英语演讲,下面是我的演讲稿,能不能给我纠错一下Hello,everyone!I am Bill.I am a student.I make some resolutions.In the past,I hardly ever help with housework.In the future,I will do mor
初二英语作文改错纠错
我们要举办个英语演讲,下面是我的演讲稿,能不能给我纠错一下
Hello,everyone!I am Bill.I am a student.I make some resolutions.In the past,I hardly ever help with housework.In the future,I will do more homework.In the past,Ieat junk food four or five times a week.In the future,I will never eat junk food.In the past,I always play computer games.In the future,I will play fewer computer games.it is good for my eyes.I will outgoing.Sometimes I like to watch TV shows.I like movies,comediesand cartoons.Idon't mind soap opera and I can't stand scary movies and news.In this winter,I will draw and play soccer.In the future I think I can be better.
初二英语作文改错纠错我们要举办个英语演讲,下面是我的演讲稿,能不能给我纠错一下Hello,everyone!I am Bill.I am a student.I make some resolutions.In the past,I hardly ever help with housework.In the future,I will do mor
In the past,I hardly ever help with housework.改为：In the past ,I didn't do my homework carefully.
In the past,Ieat junk food four or five times a week.改为：In the past ,I ate junk food four or five times a week.
In the past,I always play computer games.改为：In the past,I always played computer games.
I will outgoing.改为：I will be outgoing.
.In this winter,I will draw and play soccer..改为：In this winter,I am going to draw pictures and play soccer.