英语作文 纠错ABOUT THE CAMELThe camels are very lovely animals.They have hump,long eyelashes.And they live in the desert.In their hump,they can stores food,and they can go without water for a long time.Their eyelashes so that the sand can't go

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英语作文 纠错ABOUT THE CAMELThe camels are very lovely animals.They have hump,long eyelashes.And they live in the desert.In their hump,they can stores food,and they can go without water for a long time.Their eyelashes so that the sand can't go
英语作文 纠错
ABOUT THE CAMEL
The camels are very lovely animals.They have hump,long eyelashes.And they live in the desert.
In their hump,they can stores food,and they can go without water for a long time.Their eyelashes so that the sand can't go into the camels's eyes.
the camels are very important for people.

英语作文 纠错ABOUT THE CAMELThe camels are very lovely animals.They have hump,long eyelashes.And they live in the desert.In their hump,they can stores food,and they can go without water for a long time.Their eyelashes so that the sand can't go
1.They have humps,long eyelashes,and they live in the desert.
2.they can store food
3.their eyelashes are long so that...
4.camels are very important to people.

They have hump,long eyelashes改成They have long ,hump eyelashes.
stores 改成store
for people.改成to people
Their eyelashes so that the sand can't go into the camels's eyes.
这句话我觉得很有问题,可是不知道怎么改Their eyelashes后面应该加个动词什么得把。。

hump加s吧因为是论一群骆驼来说的啊~~
desert前面可以用the吗?这里不需要特指吧?
so that不是这样用的吧??以致于???
我不知道准确答案
而且改错题好久没有做了类~~~
不知道对不?

1,文中所有hump都应该是humps
2,stores应该是store
3,"Their eyelashes so that"少了一些内容.比如Their eyelashes is very long so that.......或者Their eyelashes is so long that......
4,最后一句话首字母大写

ABOUT THE CAMELS
The camels are very lovely animals.They have humps and long eyelashes. They live in the desert.
they can store food in their humps,, and they can go without water for a long ...

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ABOUT THE CAMELS
The camels are very lovely animals.They have humps and long eyelashes. They live in the desert.
they can store food in their humps,, and they can go without water for a long time.Their eyelashes are so long that the sands can't go into their eyes.
The camels are very important for people.
BTW,how old is the writer? If more than 20, his/her english sucks!

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