介绍海南岛的英语作文

篇一：2013海南高考英语作文_句型_万能模板

命题趋势与应试策略

一、评分原则

1.本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。

2.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后综合给分。 3.词数小于100的，从总分中减去2分。

4.评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。

5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。没错误书写3个单词从总分中减去1分，原则上不超过3分，重复的不计。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。标点符号错误，将视其对交际的影响程度酌情减分。

6.如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。 二、各档次的给分范围和要求

高考英语作文高分技巧-逆向思维法

逆向思维法是指为实现某一创新或解决某一因常规思路难以解决的问题，而采取反向思维寻求解决问题的方法。在做英语书面表达题时，我们亦可借鉴这种方法，从研究高考对书面表达的要求入手，以及阅卷者的感受，去迎合他们的要求，从而做到有的放矢，以求短时期内取得对书面表达的突破。 我们可以从高考作文的评分标准及阅卷的角度来审视一下对写作的要求，看看在他们的眼中优秀作文的共同点有哪些，哪些又是主要的失分点。通过研究高考书面表达卷评分标准，我们可清楚地发现，一篇高分书面表达必须具有以下特点：

内容要点齐全，清楚地表达了自己的观点并进行了充分合理的论证；

准确性高，描述恰当，时态、人称符合文章要求，语法、句法准确无误，结构严谨，标点、格式、大小写亦能正确应用；

连贯性好，衔接语使用恰当，全文结构紧凑；

使用了一些较为复杂的词汇，句式，能体现出较强的语言运用能力； 开头、结尾富有特色不落俗套，给人耳目一新的感觉。

通过对高考评分标准的研究，我们可能发现高分作文有着共同的优点。我们在平时就要严格遵循书面表达的要求，认真训练，积极发现自己的问题并做出有针对性地改进。 【典例1】 Live in Harmony

当前我国政府和人民正努力把我国建设成一个社会关系和谐的国家，具体到学生而言，大部分学生与家长成员以及同学关系的处理上总体是好的，但也存在着一些问题，如果容易发火，与同学吵架，不听从家长和老师的教育等。我校正在调查高三学生与家庭成员和同学老师之间的关系处理情况，你作为高三学生请把以上的情况向学校反映并提出一些改进的意见。

要点如下：1．目前的实际情况：好的方面和不好的方面； 2．你个人的改进意见。 注意：1．文章的开头已经给出（不计入总词数）； 2．词数：100左右。

Nowadays the government and people of China are trying to build a country with a harmonious relationship. 【参考范文】 Live in Harmony

Nowadays the government and people of China are trying to build a country with a harmonious relationship. Generally speaking, the relationship between us students and our

family members, classmates as well teachers is good. However, there exist some problems. Some students in our grade are easy to lose their temper because of unbearable anxiety and heavy study burden. What’s worse, they sometimes quarrel with others, and even turn a deaf ear to their parents and teachers, which is very disappointing.

In my opinion, we middle school students should make our efforts to improve the situation. First, we should respect our parents and teachers as well as our classmates. Second, when we are not feeling good, we can chat with our friends, teachers and parents. It is likely that they can understand us better and give us some reasonable advice. Third, after a day’s hard work, we can relax ourselves by taking some exercise, such as playing basketball, table tennis and so on. The most important is to create a harmonious atmosphere around us in order to realize self-harmony.

专家点评：本篇作者以大见小的写作手法紧密联系实际，清晰的结构，入理的描述，准确的用词，都说明它是一篇不错的范文。

1) 内容要点齐全。作者巧妙地分析了周围环境的不和谐现象，并且提出创造和谐氛围的途径，富有见地，富有哲理。作者首先总结出学生与家庭成员以及班级同学在关系处理上总体是好的，但也存在着一些问题并很自然地引出问题所在，然后话锋一转，提出自己的观点：学生应该如何改变这种状况。作者在写作中适当增加了细节，使文章内容更为充实，表达更为具体，给读者以清晰的印象。最后用一句话总括主题：创造和谐氛围，创建和谐校园。整篇文章读起来要点清晰，归纳有序，让读者一目了然。 2) 语言使用准确性高，较好地使用了英语的各种句型，琅琅上口，英语味道浓厚。作为对当前社会问题的论述，时态的把握特别重要，写作时应以一般现在时为主。另外要能正确地列举事例，有些同学列举时，容易前后不一致，开始时用firstly, secondly,后来就变成了third。还要注意的是标点应用准确，逗号、句号的使用要恰如其分，使名层次结构清晰，句意明了，有效的避免汉语句式的简单罗列、词语堆砌。

3) 语言的连贯性强，非常出现地使用了连接词，使全文的结构紧凑，层次清楚，过渡自然。比如使用了如however, what’s worse, generally speaking, in my opinion等连接词，使文章衔接自然、生动。

4) 这篇范文较好地使用了较为复杂的词汇和高级句型，并运用了同位语，插入语以及非限制性定语从句。As well as, lose their temper, turn a deaf ear to, make our efforts to , chat with, quarrel with, create a harmonious atmosphere等词组应用及It is likely that 句型，which is very disappointing非限制性定语从句，relax ourselves by taking some exercise中非谓语动词的使用无不为文章增添了亮点。 书面表达语篇布局：

1．仔细审题，确定体裁。首先要判断作文是记叙文、说明文还是应用文，是图表形式还是提纲形式是开放式作文还是半开放式作文，并据此选择合适的应对策略。

2．抓住关键信息，梳理文章要点，考生在拿到题并审完题后，应列出提纲，以免遗漏，对需要适当发挥的地方细心确认，不要离题太远。

3．紧扣所列要点，精心挑合适的词句，列出需用的重点短语和句型，注意行文要适合语境及英语的表达习惯。

4．利用所列出的词句组句成文，注意句子结构的完整性及语法的准确性，还要选择合适的连接词把句子联系起来，使上下文行文连贯，成为有机的整体。

5．仔细核对草稿，修正错误，尤其要注意自己经常犯的一些错误，大到人称、时态的选择小到标点、大小写都要注意。

6．注意卷面，规范誊写，誊写时要写得干净工整，清晰易读，千万不能太潦草，试卷一般不能出横格，要靠线书写整齐。

第一讲 高考英语作文高分技巧-十句作文法

十句作文法是由有关专家总结出来的一种高分作文方法，考生在经过短期训练之后便可较大幅度地提高成绩。为此有必要向考生加以介绍，目的是使一些对作文没有把握的考生找到一条可行的解决办法。

需要指出的是所谓十句作文并非一定10句，从很多考生的高分来分析，句子数量在8句至12句(依句子长短和结构不同而不同)。如以每个句子平均10—15个单词计算，便能用8—12个句子完成一篇要求10—120的作文。 其基本模式为：

篇二：海南高考英语作文

海南高考英语作文

2012海南高考作文

假定你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡((Singapore)举办夏

令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。

内容主要包括:

I.自我介绍(包括英语能力);

2.参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家);

3.希望获准.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I'm Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it.

I know that you welcome students from different countries and I'd like to take part in it. I've been learning English for10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, I'JI be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as amember of your summer camp.

Looking forward to your reply!

Regards,

Li Hua

2011高考全国卷一·新课标卷

试题：假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心（Learning Center）的帮助，根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：

1. 本人简介；

2. 求助内容；

3. 约定时间；

4. 你的联系方式（Email:lihua@1236.com;Phone:12345678）。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.结束语已为你写好。

Dear Sir or Madam,

Look forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

例文：

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m Li hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university. I’m writing to ask for help. I came here last month and found my courses interesting. But I have some difficulties with note-taking and I have no idea of hoe to use the library. I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and I am anxious to get help from you. I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons. Please let me know which day is OK with you. You may e-mail or phone me. Here are my e-mail address and phone .

Look forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

2010年

假定你校将举行一个成人仪式，你将作为代表在仪式上发言。请你按以下内容要点准备一篇英文发言稿。

1.过去对成年的向往;

2.现在的感受和认识;

3.将来的目标及措施。

参考词汇：责任 responsibility

篇三：海南景点英文介绍

博鳌: Boao Forum for Asia is a nonprofit, non-governmental, international, organization ,Conference provides a high-level platform for communication between government and business circle.Premier Wen Jiabao of the State Council had attended the Conference 2009 in Boao of Hainan Province and deliver a speech.through these forum , hainan becomes the focus of international attention.also increase his popularity .More and more foreign tourists come here.

海上观音: The Kwan-yin on the water covenred with gold wholly and with a height of 108 meters,Statue of Liberty is 93 meters tall, 观音 is 15 meters taller than Statue of Liberty,so it is the biggest figure in stone in the world. The world largest Buddha statue has been a symbol of peace ,Wisdom and Compassion in China.

猴岛:monkeys have different feeling of beauty,monkey king like female monkey who has red face,monkey love their children very much,they often hold their little monkey in arms.monkey is clever and tricky ,if you bring food,once they see it,they will rob your food.but if you keep your hands in plain sight,they will go away . So we often say "as tricky as a monkey"

天涯海角: If you've never been to sanya / Ultima Thule ,it means you never been to hannan./sanya ultima thule is a famous scenic['si:nik, ] spot in hainan island. At this point ,tourists seem to have reached the end of heaven and earth.here are clear water ,blue sky,coconut whirling and rocks everywhere.blue water as clear as mirror,and soft sand as white as silver. There are many big stones ,also they have many

fantastical stories love square is also very famous,every year many celebrity ( si'lebr?ti] hold their wedding ceremony here.Do you remember a song "请到天涯海角来"many people dream of coming here because of this song,

三亚:Sanya is known as " the oriental Hawaii" and " Sunshine City" because of its special tropical scenes as well as its attractive nature. Sanya's tourist resources, richly endowed by nature, are not only special in China, but also rare in the world. It is a most fashionable place where tropical marine tourist resources are closely concentrated and lovers of swimming can enjoy their holidays in winter.

Within the city, well-known tourist spots are dotted everywhere--the national Yalong Tourist Area, the Tianyahaijia, the Great Eastern Sea, the Luhuitou Peninsula, Sanya Bay and the Luobi Grotto. Besides these, there remain the ancient Yazhou City and relics and a sculpture of the Monk Jianzhen of the Tang Dynasty, who landed ashore to avoid the storm when he was sailing eastwards to Japan. Now the Buddhist Cultural Sightseeing spot has been partly completed and opened to the public. The Nation Hot Springs area is now under construction. It is rare that a city can concentrate all such resources: sunshine, seawater, beaches, climate, forest, animals, hot springs, grottos, customs and countryside. According to statistics, the average per capita life span of Sanya people has risen to 74.5 year old, the highest in China

篇四：海南各景点英文介绍(较全)

博鳌: Boao Forum for Asia is a nonprofit, non-governmental, international, organization ,Conference provides a high-level platform for communication between government and business circle.Premier Wen Jiabao of the State Council had attended the Conference 2009 in Boao of Hainan Province and deliver a speech.through these forum , hainan becomes the focus of international attention.also increase his popularity .More and more foreign tourists come here.

海上观音: The Kwan-yin on the water covenred with gold wholly and with a height of 108 meters,Statue of Liberty is 93 meters tall, 观音 is 15 meters taller than Statue of Liberty,so it is the biggest figure in stone in the world. The world largest Buddha statue has been a symbol of peace ,Wisdom and Compassion in China.

猴岛:monkeys have different feeling of beauty,monkey king like female monkey who has red face,monkey love their children very much,they often hold their little monkey in arms.monkey is clever and tricky ,if you bring food,once they see it,they will rob your food.but if you keep your hands in plain sight,they will go away . So we often say "as tricky as a monkey"

天涯海角: If you've never been to sanya / Ultima Thule ,it means you never been to hannan./sanya ultima thule is a famous scenic['si:nik, ] spot in hainan island. At this point ,tourists seem to have reached the end of heaven and earth.here are clear water ,blue sky,coconut whirling and rocks everywhere.blue water as clear as mirror,and soft sand as white as silver. There are many big stones ,also they have many

fantastical stories love square is also very famous,every year many celebrity ( si'lebr?ti] hold their wedding ceremony here.Do you remember a song "请到天涯海角来"many people dream of coming here because of this song,

三亚:Sanya is known as " the oriental Hawaii" and " Sunshine City" because of its special tropical scenes as well as its attractive nature. Sanya's tourist resources, richly endowed by nature, are not only special in China, but also rare in the world. It is a most fashionable place where tropical marine tourist resources are closely concentrated and lovers of swimming can enjoy their holidays in winter.

Within the city, well-known tourist spots are dotted everywhere--the national Yalong Tourist Area, the Tianyahaijia, the Great Eastern Sea, the Luhuitou Peninsula, Sanya Bay and the Luobi Grotto. Besides these, there remain the ancient Yazhou City and relics and a sculpture of the Monk Jianzhen of the Tang Dynasty, who landed ashore to avoid the storm when he was sailing eastwards to Japan. Now the Buddhist Cultural Sightseeing spot has been partly completed and opened to the public. The Nation Hot Springs area is now under construction. It is rare that a city can concentrate all such resources: sunshine, seawater, beaches, climate, forest, animals, hot springs, grottos, customs and countryside. According to statistics, the average per capita life span of Sanya people has risen to 74.5 year old, the highest in China

导游考试英文导游词

Good morning ! My name is Can I begain?

Attention,please.Ladies and gentlement .Welcome to beautiful city ,Nanjing ,I am the guide xuyi .Today, we are going to visit *****. On the way to ****,let me introduce the beautiful city ,Nanjing .

Nanjing is the capital city of Jiangsu Province and the provincial political, economic and cultural center ,she is located in the lower

reaches of Yangtze river,southwest of the province.The population of its urban area is about 3million.

Nanjing is one of the historical and cultural cities rectified by the state.She bears the reputation of the capital of Wu, Easter Jin, Song,Qi,Liang,Chen,Southern Tang,Ming, Taiping Kingdom, and Republic of china subsequently.Nanjing is a place of celebrities and humanities, with a splendid cultrual heritage.The attraction of Nanjing consists in the combination of rich natural and cultrual heritages.With many a relics of the Republic of china era in particluar , Nanjing is recognized as the museum of modern Chinese history.

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DR.SUN YATSEN?S MAUSOLEUM

Among al the historical and cultural attractions in Nanjing, the most favored highlight is Dr.Sun Yaten?s Mausoleum.Dr.Sun Yatsen?s Mausoleum sits on the southern slope of the pruple Mountain in the eatern subrub of the city. The construction began on March 12,1926 and was completed in 1929 when the remains of Dr.Sun Yatsen was transported from Beijing and buried at the present site on June,1.

Dr.Sun Yatsen, also named Sun Wen or Sun Zhongshan, is considered as the forerunner of the Chinese democratic revolution.Dr.Sun Yatsen is a great man because he devoted 40 yeas of his life to pursuing his dream to overthrow the feudal monarchy and build a progressive, united and democratic Republic of china.

Why was Dr.Sun Yatsen buried in Nanjing instead of in his hometown or Beijing where he died?The mausoleum site was first recommended to Dr.Sun Yatsen by the abbot of Linggu Temple for its good geomantic omen.One day in April, 1912, he went hunting at the site of present mausoleum with his friends.Dr.Sun Yatsen was really so amazed by the beautiful environment that he aid to them :”I wish I could be bestowed a piece of land by people and be buried here after my death”.He once again expressed this desire in his sickbed in 1925.The architect named Lu Yanzhi .Dr.Sun Yasen?s Mausoleum is designed in the shape of a liberty bell, intending to remind people never to get self-contented. The park of mausoleum covers an area of 800000 square meters. The whole architecture ,from the gateway to the main entrance,tablet pavilion ,memorial hall and the tomb valult,lies on the north-south axis with 392 steps ans 10 platforms in between .The buildings are all constructed with natural granite and marbls and convered by blue glazed-title roofs.

Opposite to the bronze incense-burner off the quare, stands the 12-meter high gateway of three arches with Dr.Sun Yatsen?s handwriting “Fraternity” carved on its front top. The 480-meter long tomb avenue, lined wih pine ,gingko and maple trees ,leads to the main entrance tower roofed by blue-glazed tile.Under the front eave of the tower, Dr.Sun Yatsen?s motto ?The world belongs to people ? can be seen .Walking through it , the first building one will seee is the tablet pavilion which houses a huge tombstone which is engraved with ?Premier Dr.Sun is buried here by the Chinese Koumingtang on Jone1,1929?. From there, a panoramic view of the memorial hall can be obtained. However, there are still 392 steps in 4

flight to go before tourists reach the memorial hall on the top , and a platform with stone benches at evry flight so as not to exhaust the climbers.

The memorial hall stands 73.33 meters abov the ground. The lintel of the memorial hall is inscried with “nationalism, democratic rights and people?s livelihood” and a vertical plaque is carved with 4 characters “Hao qi chang cun ” meaning imperishable noble spirit. All these words are written in Dr.Sun?s own hand. In the center of the memorial hall sits the Italian white marble statue of Dr.Sun Yatsen mounted on a pedestal carved in bas-relief by a Polish sculptor about his revolutionary activities. The surrounding walls are inscribed with the national constitution written by Dr.Sun Yatsen. Beyond the memorial hall is the tomb vault .Standing by the side of the pool, as visitors look down, they bow to see Dr.Sun Yatsen?s reclining marble statue with his body buried 5 meters underneath. If one looks up, he will find the emblem of the nationalist Party on the ceiling.

When one wraps up the homage tour and steps down, he will not only enjoy a bird?s eyeview of beautiful Nanjing , but also feel toally reliveed because he does not see any more of those 392 steps , but the platforms. Not until then, will he understand how great Dr.Sun Yatsen is.

The whole mausoleum is an architectural complex in a typical and traditional Chinese style, and the layout is harmonious and rational.All the buildings are roofed with blue-glazed tiles. With pine trees and cypresses growing around ,the mausoleum looks magnificent and dignified.Dr.Sun?s Mausoleum attracts thousands

篇五：海南岛英文

海南岛英文Hainan Island Introduction

As everyone knows, Hainan Island is China's most southerly province and the country's second largest island after Taiwan, located in the South China Sea about 60 minutes south of Hong Kong

by air. The closest city by flight to Hainan Island is Guangzhou (Canton), only 50 minutes to Haikou, the capital City of Hainan Island. Visitors could also reach Hainan Island by Air/Boat, Train and Bus.

Hainan Island is

a vaulted mountain which is high in the middle with lower elevations on its surrounding areas,Its coastlines are 1528 kilometers long with sandy beaches. Hainan Island is a combination of Mountains(25.4%), mesa (32.6%), hills (13.3and savanna (28.7%). Many swimming areas are less than 2 meters’ deep, with bottoms full of sand, as far as 200 meters out from the shore.

With a landmass of about 34,000 sq km, Hainan Island is made up of Hainan, Nansha, Xisha, and Zhongsha islands. The province has a total coastline of about 1,617.8 km and covers a sea area of about 2.1 million sq km.

There are many tropical fruit in Hainan Island. Some of them smell very strange.Some of them you may never see in other places, For

instance, mango, papaya, Chinese wampee, guava, mangosteen, lych-ee, carambola, wax apple, dragon fruit, rambutan, betelnut, coconut, jackfruit, pineapple and so on.

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