江苏高考英语满分作文

篇一：2014江苏卷高考英语满分作文

第五部分: 书面表达 (满分 25 分)

81. 请阅读下面短文,并按照要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文章。

When we read newspapers, we often come across such English words as “AIDS” and “PK.” When we watch TV, we frequently hear words like “NBA” or “PM2.5.” When we speak, we automatically use words like “OUT” or “Bye-bye.” English words and expressions like these are getting popular. They have already become part of our daily language. And 239 English words have been included in the latest Dictionary of Contemporary Chinese.

The inclusion has started a heated discussion. A group of scholars signed a letter of complaint over the inclusion of these English words, which, they think, goes against Chinese language policies. They not only worry that Chinese is borrowing an increasing number of English words but are also concerned that the inclusion may hurt the dignity of the Chinese language. However, others are in favor of the inclusion because it is hard to say whether it will threaten the Chinese language. They believe the selection is mostly a result of their function and use in daily life.

[写作内容]

1. 用约 30 个单词写出上文概要;

2. 用约 120 个单词发表你的观点,内容包括:

(1)支持或反对汉语词典收录英语词汇;

(2)用 2- 3个理由或论据支撑你的观点。

[写作要求]

1. 可以支持文中任一观点,但必须提供理由或论据;

2. 阐述观点或提供论据时,不能直接引用原文语句;

3. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;

4. 不必写标题。

[评分标准]

内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。

支持:

Today, more and more English words find their way into the Chinese language. Even the Dictionary of Contemporary Chinese includes 239 English words. Some people support it while others do not.

Generally, I am in favour of the inclusion. As the number of English learners is on the rise, it’s not difficult for them to understand these words in Chinese contexts. Besides, it is, on some occasions, more convenient to use English words. Most people nowadays use “IT” instead of its translation “xinxi jishu.” In our global village, we can see that it’s not uncommon for one language to borrow words from other languages. In English, there are many words borrowed from Latin,

French, or even Chinese. In fact, Chinese has never stopped taking words from other languages, say, “ganbu” or “minzhu” from Japanese.

So, it’s safe to conclude that it is reasonable to include English which facilitates daily

communication.

反对:

With English words getting popular in both media and daily life, a Chinese dictionary has included 239 of them, leaving the public divided into two opposing groups: “For” and “Against.”

I tend to take the “Against” side for two reasons. Firstly, this inclusion has actually polluted our mother tongue. Sooner or later, many English accents will rise and fall with the four Chinese tones. And, rules don’t tell us how to pronounce such English-turned Chinese words as “wifi” and “Out” in a Chinese way! Secondly, such an inclusion may give rise to prejudices of the educated against those with little knowledge of English. Just for one illustration, while college students take “Bye-bye” for granted when parting from each other, it may unconsciously hurt the feelings of someone who is used to “zaijian.”

In short, not only has the inclusion poisoned Chinese, it may also bring about distance

between the Chinese people.

篇二：江苏高考英语满分作文

2007-2015江苏高考英语满分作文

2007年江苏高考英语满分作文

2007年4月29日上午10点到11点，全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时举行。江苏省1100万学生积极参与了这项活动。

教育部倡导学生：每天锻炼一小时· 健康工作五十年· 幸福生活一辈子

请你根据以上提示，用英语准备一份发言稿，向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情况，并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼，谈谈你的看法及理由。

注意：

1.发言稿应包括以上所有信息，要有适当发挥。

2.词数：120左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

3.参考词汇：阳光体育活动—a national student sports program;

教育部—the Ministry of Education

Good afternoon, everyone,

Thank you!

参考范文：

Good afternoon, everyone,

On the morning of April 29,2007,from 10:00 to 11:00,hundreds of millions of students fromprimary,middle schools and universities all over China joined in a national student sportsprogram. Eleven million students in Jiangsu took an active part in this program.

The Ministry of Education calls on students to exercise for an hour every day,in the hope thatthey wi(转载于:www.smhaida.com 海 达 范 文网:江苏高考英语满分作文)ll have good health to work fifty years and enjoy the whole life.

Personally,I think it a good idea for us senior 3 students to have daily exercise. Although wetake an hour a day for exercise,it is well worth it. Taking exercise helps us build up our bodyand keep a clear mind. Therefore,we can work more efficiently.

Thank you!

2008年江苏高考英语满分作文

实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于言表、更要学会倾听。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，写一篇题为“Being a Good Listener”的英文演讲稿。

为何倾听 表示尊重，增进理解，建立良好的人际关系

谁来倾听 家长倾听孩子 理解孩子，消除代沟，……

老师倾听学生 了解学生，满足需求，……

同学相互倾听 增进友谊，互帮互学，……

怎样倾听 （请考生联系自己拟定内容，列举两至三点。）

注意：1. 对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2. 词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

3. 演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。

Good afternoon, everyone!

The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”...........

Thank you for your listening!

参考范文：

Good afternoon, everyone!

The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”.

Good listening can always show respect,promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship.

Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they willunderstand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listenmore to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a goodrelationship with their students; students should listen more to their classmates, thus they willhelp and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.

What I want to stress is that each of us should listen more to others. Show your respectand never stop others till they finish their talk; show you are interested by a supportive silenceor a knowing smile; be open-minded to different opinions even though you don’t like them. In aword, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other. (151)

Thank you for your listening!

2009年江苏卷高考英语满分作文

【试题回放】鼠标是计算机时代最佳的人机交互工具之一。它极大地方便了人们的计算机操作。但是，过分依赖鼠标的习惯也会带来一些不利影响。请你以鼠标为切入点，根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇短文。

鼠标的必要性对多数人来说，操作计算机，上网冲浪……

鼠标的便捷性点击、移动、插入、拷贝、删除……编辑文本，搜索信息……

收发邮件，选购商品……

点播音乐，下载电影……

如果过分依赖鼠标…… (请考生结合自身感受，列举两到三点)

注意：

1.对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2.词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计人总词数。

3.作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer.

For most people, it’s almost impossible to operate a computer without a mouse, let alone surf the Internet. A well-chosen mouse is really handy, flexible and convenient in controlling the screen. With the functions of inserting, deleting, moving and copying, it enables us to edit test, browse web page and download what we want. It can even bring us a flood of music, movies and PC games. Just imagine, all this can be done with a cute mouse.

A convenient tool can certainly make our work easier, but it doesn’t always help in a positive way. Too much ready information on our fingertips leaves little room for knowledge pursuing. Too many ready answers make us less excited in finding truth. Relying too much on mouse clicking makes us lazier and less creative both mentally and physically.

81.假设你应邀参加学校组织的“英语学习师生座谈会”，请你根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇

注意：

1.对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2.词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计人总词数。

3.文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

Dear teacher and schoolmates,1t’s a great pleasure for me to be today and share my experience of learning English with you.

Thank you for listening.

Dear teacher and schoolmates, It’s a great pleasure for me to be today and share my experience of learning English with you. I’m interested in English and hope to be an interpreter in the future. Naturally. it’s very important for me to learn English well .As everybody knows vocabulary is an important part of language, just like bricking a building .I usually memorize twenty new words a day and put them to use whenever possible . After class．I often listen to English programs on TV and on the radio .Besides ,I've learned a lot from the Internet and other sources.

Now．I'd like to make some suggestions on English teaching and learning in our school. Firstly ,we should be given more opportunities to use what we’ve learned ln order to have a better grasp of it. Secondly．I hope our teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines and give us more free time to read them. Finally，1 suggest we have more English activities，such as English contests and festivals.

Thank you for listening. (150words)

81.下面这幅照片展现了女儿为回家妈妈拿包的情景。请根据你对这幅照片

的理解用英语写一篇短文。

你的短文应包含以下内容：

描述照片内容，如情景、人物、动作，等等；2.结合自身实际，谈谈你的

感想；3.举例说明你能为家长减负做些什么。

注意：

可参照图中文字及下面文章开头所给提示，作必要的发挥想象。

词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。

作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

The burden of students has been a hot topic for years,but the load of parents has received little attention,especially from their own children.

2012年江苏高考英语满分作文

2012 第五部分: 书面表达(满分25 分)

81. 生活中冲突时有发生。假设你班同学苏华和李江打篮球时发生争执,导致关系紧张。请 你结合此事,并根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文,向学校英文报“Happy Teens冶专栏投稿。

注意: 1. 对所有要点逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简单翻译。 2. 词数150 左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。

3. 作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。

Conflicts with others are common in everyday life.

Conflicts with others are common in everyday life. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other, trying to catch the ball. Then they started

shouting and yelling, and it turned into a horrible quarrel.

To be honest, it was Su’s fault but Li was also to blame—they were not calm enough and both said some really mean things. They cared too much about winning and losing. As a matter of fact, blocking, pushing and bumping are just part of a tough game.

To avoid such conflicts, we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoying a harmonious life. It is also a virtue to forgive and forget, especially in such a competitive and

stressful society. Instead of blaming each other, we should communicate more and put ourselves in others’ place.

Don’t be self-centered and try to be considerate. We must learn to handle conflicts calmly and wisely.

2013年江苏高考英语满分作文

2013 第五部分: 书面表达(满分25 分)

81. 请根据你对以下两幅图的理解，以 “Actions Speak Louder than Words”为题，用英语写一篇作文。

参考词汇：

banner (横幅)

stump (树桩)

你的作文应包括以下内容：

1. 简要描述两幅图的内容；

2. 概述你对两幅图中不同做法的理解；

3. 举例说明两幅图对你的启示。

注意：

1. 可参照图片适当发挥；

2. 作文词数 150 左右；

3. 作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。

Actions Speak Louder than Words

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Actions Speak Louder than Words

People celebrate Earth Day differently. In Picture 1, a man is trying to put up a banner on a lonely tree surrounded by stumps, but in vain, while Picture 2 shows a couple happily planting trees.

The message conveyed here is clear: “ Actions speak louder than words.冶 Our earth is suffering severe damage. Should we just pay lip service or take practical measures to protect it? The answer

篇三：全国高考英语满分作文赏析(本人最新整理)

高考满分作文

一. 用词准确;表达地道

1.(20)

美国中学生Jeff将要来你所在的红星中学学习中文，经协商安排住在你家。假设你是李华，请给Jeff写一封信，按照下图顺序介绍他来中国后的生活安排。注意：1.信的开头已写2.词数不少于60。 Dear Jeff,

I‘m Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. I‘m very happy to learn that you‘re going to stay with my family while you‘re in Beijing.

While you are here, we‘ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV. You‘ll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close to our home, so we could go to school together by bike. At noon we‘ll eat at the school dining hall. I‘m sure you‘ll like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. It‘ll be a lot of fun.

If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. We‘ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.

Best wishes,

[名师点评]这篇文章的特点还是比较清晰的，第一，作者根据图画将文章的要点概括完整，内容充实而丰富，结构紧凑，有层次感;第二，本文没有采用华丽的辞藻，但用词十分恰当，段落过渡自然，令人耳目一新。 2.

假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，主要内容如下：l 表示赞成。l 提出你喜欢的栏目。 l 简要说明理由。注意：1. 词数100左右。2.参考：栏目—column Dear Mr. Green,

I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.

Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, ―culture express‖ gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it‘s necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, ―blurt out‖ is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, ―entertainment‖ is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can‘t miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.

Well, I can‘t list more. I really can‘t wait to read that magazine!

Yours faithfully

【名师点评】这是一篇满分作文。由于这篇作文的出现，导致了安徽省该年的英语作文分数普遍偏低。仔细分析了这篇文章，写的的确是好，很地道的美式英语，一些词语的大胆使用，让人不得不猜测此人或者是家人可能有过国外生活的经历，否则这么地道标准的英语，可不是一朝一夕所能写出来的。比如说：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大胆运用，list, can't wait to 简直是perfect! 况且文章中没有一个错误，不管是书写还是语法。英语能够学到这种程度，不可谓不让人佩服。

二. 非谓语动词为作文添彩

假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为响应绿化祖国的号召，你班四月十二日去郊区植树，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍植树活动的全过程，给某英文杂志的―绿色行动‖专栏写一篇以―Green Action in Our Class‖为题的英文稿件。注意：词数不少于60 提示词：郊区 suburbs

April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering . After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it‘s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.

【名师点评】本文是设计巧妙的提纲要点式作文，与环保结合，立意较好。文章思路清晰，要点连贯，在语言的表达上选词新颖，同时运用了分词短语作状语等较好的句式表达。

三. 复合句为写作增色

4.，从小喜爱大熊猫(panda),一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫―苏琳‖和她的母亲―白云‖。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信1、自我介绍;2、祝贺苏琳生日;3、感谢工作人员;4、索取苏琳三岁生日照。 注意：1、词数100左右;2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3、开头语已为你写好。 Dear Sir/Madam,

Greetings from China!

I‘m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I‘ve been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I‘ve been watching her grow on your website,. Now she‘s going to be three. I‘d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US. By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance. Yours truly,

【名师点评】这封信格式正确，行文规范，描述有条不紊，称呼、正文中的开头及结尾、结束语

均表达到位。文章行文活泼，感情真挚，语言表述准确，洋溢着作者因大熊猫得到精心照顾而对美方人员的感激之情，以及希望自己愿望成真，得到照片的希冀之情。长短句运用合理，结合了简单句和复合句，流畅自然，不露痕迹，的确是一篇佳作。

写一

篇文字介绍。主要内容包括：1.地点：距白山入口处500米; 2.房间及价格：单人间(共20间)，100元/天;双人间(共15间)，150元/天;热水淋浴; 3.餐饮：餐厅(中、西餐)，咖啡厅(茶、咖啡); 4.游泳池：全天免费开放; 5.欢迎预定。注意1. 100词左右，开头已写好;2.可适当增加细节。 Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!

Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business. 500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides single person room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day. It also provides hot water bath service. You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe. The swimming pool is open for free the whole day. All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable. So come to enjoy yourself!

Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.

【名师点评】本文开门见山，首先点明了主旨。本文最大的特点是应用了很多比较复杂的句式，使文章比较出彩。

开头使用了独立结构交代宾馆位置。which引导的非限制性定语从句的使用也很正确。总地来说，文章句式精炼，是篇不错的满分作文。

美国女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后处于极度的痛苦之

中，美国抗癌协会(ACS)决定，每当Amy收到一封慰问信，就给她增加3美分的治疗款。

假如你是新华中学的学生李华，请你用英文给Amy写一封慰问信，主要内容包括：

自我介绍; 得知的情况,表示鼓励,打算为她做什么; 祝她早日康复

注意：1. 信的格式已为你写好2. 信中不得出现你的真实情况。3. 词数100左右。

Dear Amy,

I‘m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of China. I‘m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great pain. But you should realize that you are young and have a promising great future. So, stand up and fight against the disease! I‘m sure you will win. It is reported that the America anti-cancer association will donate three cents upon every comfort letter you receive. So I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to you. In that way, you will get enough money for you to be cured. Hope you can be well soon.

[名师点评]本文依照要求，涵盖了所有要点。文章使用了高中常见的句式，如I‘m sorry to hear that..., It is reported

that...等，都比较好。作者对定语从句的使用恰到好处地修饰了文章，行文自然而通顺，值得学习。

四. 结构清晰,句式准确

2007年4月29日上午10点到11点，全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时进行，江苏省1100万学生积极参与了这项活动。(教育部倡导学生：每天锻炼一小时,健康工作五十年,幸福生活一辈子). 请你根据以上提示，用英语准备一份发言稿，向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情况，并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼，谈谈你的看法及理由。

注意：1、 发言稿应包括以上所有信息，要有适当发挥。

2、 词数：120左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

3、 参考词汇：阳光体育活动——a national student sports program;

教育部——the Ministry of Education

Good afternoon, everyone,

The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10：00a.m.~11:00a.m.on April 29，2007 in many primary and middle schools all over China. Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this program.

The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years. Our whole life will be very enjoyable.

In my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is limited. Health is a basic condition for our study. If we did not do exercises, we wouldn‘t be able to get good study records. So every one of you, join the program now!

Thank you!

【名师点评】本文的结构十分明晰，同时句式使用得熟练而准确。本文分为三段，前两段叙述，

后一段发表观点，典型的作文结构。在句式使用上，作者用法多样，使用了独立结构和虚拟语气，十分出彩。复杂的句式是本文的特点之一。

8. Bob 将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请 你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房 面积为25 平方米，月租500 元。注意：1．词数：100 左右：2．参考词汇：房租—rent(n.).

I‘m very happy to receive your letter, and I‘m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a flat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I‘ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.

Hope you will come here soon!

All the best!

满分理由: 本文格式正确，意思表述完整，行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用，还使用了以?which，‘引导的非限定性定语从句，从而使文章层次分明，富于变化，不愧为考场佳作。

Dick听说中国的中小学正在减轻学生的学习负担，来信询问有关

情况。请你根据下表提供的信息，写一封回信，谈一谈减负给你的学习和生活带来的变化。 Dear ***，

How nice to hear from you again! You want to know what is going on in schools in China. OK, I will explain it to you. A lot of changes have taken place in our schools because of the reduced learning load. In the past we used to be very busy even at weekends since we had lots of home work to do. We didn‘t go to bed until 11:30. Now everything is improved. We can do all kinds of things that we like. In the daytime, we can read books and visit museums, take computer lessons. In the evenings we can watch news on TV and we sleep earlier than we used to.

Best wishes!

?请你根据

下表所提供信息，给报社写一封信客观地介绍讨论情况。开头已写好，词数100，参考词汇：门票

I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Those against charging entrance fee for parks take up 60%. They are of one mind that parks are a place for the public‘s enjoyment. If tickets are demanded on the visitors of a park, a gate has to be set up and

so have the walls on the four sides. If so, city will not look as beautiful as it would. Otherwise, those in favor of charging entrance fee for parks take up 40%. They all think that ticket price should be controlled properly, and that entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new sorts of flowers and trees. The truth lies in the hands of the majority. Does my argument stand to reason, dear editor?

11.今年七月将举办外国人―学中文，唱中文歌‖才艺大赛。你

的美国朋友Peter正在北京一所大学学中文，你觉得他应去试一试。请按以下要点给他写信告知此事，并表示可以提供帮助。比赛时间：7月18，报名时间：截止到6月30日。报名地点：北京电视台。注意：1.词数100左右 2.可适当增加细节，3.参考词汇：才艺大赛—talent show

Dear Peter,

I read in a newspaper today that a ―Learn Chinese, Sing Chinese Songs‖ Foreigners‘ Talent Show will be held in Beijing Television Station on July 18. I know you like singing, and you are in Beijing during that period. I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent, and how well you‘ve learned Chinese. If you would like to try, you' U have to go to the TV station to sign up before the end of June. If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help.

12.最近国内一家英文报纸正在讨论北京动物园是否应迁出市区。以下是

你所在班级讨论的情况。请你给该报写一封信，反映讨论结果。

赞成迁出：1.游客多，交通堵塞2.郊区环境好

反对迁出：1.建于1906年，中外闻名2.搬迁易造成动物死亡

注意：1. 100字左右，信的开头已为你写好。2.可适当增加细节，3.参考词汇： 郊区—suburb Dear Editor ,

Recently ,in our class there has been a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city . Some of my classmates are in favor of the move .They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams .They also say that once moved ,animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs .However ,other students are against the idea ,saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906 ,has a history of 100 years ,and is well –known at home and abroad .So it should remain where it is .What‘s more ,moving may cause the death of some animals .To move or not ,this is a big decision which has to be made by people in Beijing.

将在你居住的地方举办，现正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封信。内容应包括：1.个人情况：年龄，性别，学历 2.个人条件：英语好，爱好体育，善于交际，乐于助人，熟悉本地情况 3.承诺：提供最佳服务. 注意：词数100左右，开头语已为你写好;可适当增加细节，提示词：申请—apply (v. ), application (n.)，志愿者—volunteer Dear Sir / Madam:

I was quite excited when I heard the Asian Winter Games will be held in the city I live. My name is Li Hua. I am an 18-year-old boy student in a senior middle school. And I want to be a volunteer for the games. I like English and sports very much. I like making friends and I am ready to help others. I can be a good interpreter in every sports during the time. Hope the games will be a great success. Hope I will be chosen to be one.

[名师点评]这篇文章写得非常流畅，把握了所有要点，同时以―我‖为中心，详细说明了自己对志愿

者工作的结合，以此来表达自己的决心。由于用词恰当，这种表现就比较充分，具备一定的说服力。词汇和语句的运用也不错。

Bob的要求， 写一封短信介绍你校图书馆的基本情况。内

容须包括下面两幅图中的相关信息。注意：1、字数100左右2、可以适当增减细节，以使行文连贯3、开头语已为你写好

Dear Bob,

Thank you for your last letter asking about our library. Our library locates between the teaching building and our garden. The shape of it seems to be a book to welcome our students. it‘s open from Monday to Friday ,and we can borrow the books from 9:00a.m. to 7:00p.m.

There are many books available in our library , dealing with almost every subject. Not only the books, but also the magazines can be read here. You may borrow up to five books at a time, and keep them for at most ten days.

Due to the library , we are offered a place to gain as much knowledge as we can. If you are interested in it, welcome to our school, and I‘ll show you around.

【试题回放】假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs.

Wilson 不在家，你准备外出，请给Mrs. Wilson 写一留言条，内容包括：1.外出购物2.替房东还书3.Tracy 来电话留言：1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)见面取消2)此事已告知Susan 3) 尽快回电 注意：1. 词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Mrs. Wilson,

I‘m going out shopping, and won‘t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o‘clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn‘t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.

假如你是育才中学学生会主席李华。你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛（speech contest），希望附近某大学的外籍教师Smith女士来做评委。请参照以下比赛通知给她写一封信。注意：词数100左右。 英语演讲比赛主题：人与自然

时间：6月15日下午2：00—5：00

地点：501教室

参赛选手：10名学生

联系人：李华（电话44876655）

欢迎大家光临

Dear Mrs. Smith,

I‘m Li Hua, Chair of the Student Union of YuCai Middle School, which is close to your university. I‘m writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest to be held in our school on June 15. It will start at 2；00 pm and last for about three hours. Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic ―Man and Nature‖. We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. Please call me at 44876655 if you have any questions.

I am looking forward to your reply.

With best wishes

图表作文写作指导

图表作文是近年来高考常考的题型之一。图表作文的体裁多为议论文、应用文和说明文，内容多涉及前后变化对比、正反观点对比或产品介绍等。要求考生通过数据、文字内容分析，系统准确地表达出图表含义，并得出令人信服的结论。

一、图表作文的命题形式

1．表格式

将统计的数据或被说明的对象直接用表格形式体现出来，即统计表。这类题型一般以说明文和议论文居多，往往是介绍、说明某种情况或辩论某种观点、看法，但有时也可能是记叙文。

2．图像式

可分为以曲线形式表示数据变化的线形图、以条形形式表示数据大小或数量之间差异的条形图，以圆内扇形面积的大小表示总体中部分结构变化的圆形图等。这类题型一般以说明文居多，是一些关于生产、销售、发展进程等各种项目统计的示意图。

二、图表作文的应试策略

1．审读图表前的文字说明，弄清图表的性质，做到“四确定”。首先，确定文章的体裁；其次，确定文章的结构；再次，确定文章的时态；最后，确定文章的人称。

2．审读图表后的要求，寻找做题规律，要注意以下几个方面：

(1)词数：100左右。

(2)开头或结尾已给出，这就要求考生首先不能另行开头或结尾；其次，要细读所给语句的人称、时态和语言的表达风格，力求前后一致。

(3)内容完整，即要点齐全，写作时要注意详略得当和准确全面。

(4)行文连贯。行文必须做到形连和意连。形连要力求自我特色词汇的使用，以增加得分“亮点”。意连要求能涵盖高考书面表达中各种文体常用的一些特色词汇，如however；besides；instead；in the meanwhile；for instance；on the contrary；worse still；in conclusion；all of a sudden；as a matter of fact

篇四：2015年高考英语满分作文赏析

2015年高考英语满分作文赏析

一. 用词准确;表达地道

【北京卷高考英语】 【试题回放】 第一节情景作文(20分)

美国中学生jeff将要来你所在的红星中学学习中文，经协商安排住在你家。假设你是李华，请给Jeff写一封信，按照下图顺序介绍他来中国后的生活安排。

注意：1. 信的开头已为你写好。 2.词数不少于60。

Dear Jeff,

I’m Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.

While you are here, we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV. You’ll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close to our home, so we could go to school together by bike. At noon we’ll eat at the school dining hall. I’m sure you’ll like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. It’ll be a lot of fun.

If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

[名师点评]

这篇文章的特点还是比较清晰的，第一，作者根据图画将文章的要点概括完整，内容充实而丰富，结构紧凑，有层次感;第二，本文没有采用华丽的辞藻，但用词十分恰当，段落过渡自然，令人耳目一新。

【安徽卷高考英语】【试题回放】

假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给她写封回信，主要内容如下：

l 表示赞成。 l 提出你喜欢的栏目。 l 简要说明理由。

注意： 1. 词数100左右。 2. 新的开头和结尾已为你写好。

3. 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 4. 参考栏目：栏目—column Dear Mr. Green,

I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.

Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture express” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different parts of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful chance. Apart from that, “blurt out” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improve oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment” is so cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can’t miss it! Teenagers are just fond of the trendy things.

Well, I can’t list more. I really can’t wait to read that magazine!

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【名师点评】

这是一篇满分作文。由于这篇作文的出现，导致了安徽省该年的英语作文分数普遍偏低。仔细分析了这篇文章，写的的确是好，很地道的美式英语，一些词语的大胆使用，让人不得不猜测此人或者是家人可能有过国外生活的经历，否则这么地道标准的英语，可不是一朝一夕所能写出来的。比如说：my cup of tea, apart from that, oral English, last but not least, celebrities, catchy和trendy的大胆运用，list, can't wait to 简直是perfect! 况且文章中没有一个错误，不管是书写还是语法。英语能够学到这种程度，不可谓不让人佩服。

二. 非谓语动词为作文添彩

【北京卷高考英语】 【试题回放】情景作文

假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为响应绿化祖国的号召，你班四月十二日去郊区植树，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍植树活动的全过程，给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”为题的英文稿件。

注意：词数不少于60 提示词：郊区 suburbs

April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering . After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.

【名师点评】

本文是设计巧妙的提纲要点式作文，与环保结合，立意较好。文章思路清晰，要点连贯，在语言的表达上选词新颖，同时运用了分词短语作状语等较好的句式表达。

【北京卷高考英语】 【试题回放】开放作文

请根据下面提示，写一篇短文，词数不少于50

In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.

What an interesting picture! A western young man, sitting at a table, is ready to eat a bowl of noodles. He is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold chopsticks. He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot. At first glance, I think it’s a bit funny, for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles. The man in the picture is trying to copy us. Obviously he is doing it the hard way. Maybe using one fork will do a better job, In my opinion, we don’t need to copy others’ ways of thinking. Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.

【名师点评】

本文是开放性作文，要求考生把握好图画内容，发散表达。考生重点要看出这个人是卷发高鼻的外国人，要体会到西式刀叉对中式食物的矛盾性。行文结构十分明晰，同时句式使用得熟练而准确。

三. 复合句为写作增色

【全国卷高考英语】 【试题回放】

假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫(panda),一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣迭

哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信：

1、自我介绍;2、祝贺苏琳生日;3、感谢工作人员;4、索取苏琳三岁生日照。

注意：1、词数100左右;2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3、开头语已为你写好。 例文：

Dear Sir/Madam,

Greetings from China!

I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child. About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website,. Now she’s going to be three. I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.

By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【名师点评】本文写作的内容要点如下：

1.自我介绍;2.信息来源;3.祝贺生日;4.感谢照顾;5.索取照片;6.合适的结尾。

这封信格式正确，行文规范，描述有条不紊，称呼、正文中的开头及结尾、结束语均表达到位。文章行文活泼，感情真挚，语言表述准确，洋溢着作者因大熊猫得到精心照顾而对美方人员的感激之情，以及希望自己愿望成真，得到照片的希冀之情。长短句运用合理，结合了简单句和复合句，流畅自然，不露痕迹，的确是一篇佳作。

积累卡片英汉互译

好词1.delighted adj.欣喜的，快乐的 2.express v.表达 3.give birth to v.产生，生育

好句I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.

我祝福它生日快乐并且对你们的辛勤工作表达我的感激之情，正是你们的努力工作让苏琳和它的父母在美国过着幸福和健康的生活。

【高考英语全国卷II】【试题回放】

一家宾馆新开业，为吸引外国宾客，希望在互联网上进行宣传。请你用英语为其写一篇文字介绍。主要内容包括：

1.地点：距白山入口处500米;

2.房间及价格：单人间(共20间)，100元/天;双人间(共15间)，150元/天;热水淋浴;3.餐饮：餐厅(中、西餐)，咖啡厅(茶、咖啡);4.游泳池：全天免费开放; 5.欢迎预定。 注意：1.词数100左右，开头语已为你写好;2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!

Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.

500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides singleperson room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day. It also provides hot water bath service. You can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the cafe. The swimming pool is open for free the whole day. All these services can bring great convenience to you and are

very enjoyable. So come to enjoy yourself!

Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.

【名师点评】

本文开门见山，首先点明了主旨。本文最大的特点是应用了很多比较复杂的句式，使文章比较出彩。开头使用了独立结构交代宾馆位置。which引导的非限制性定语从句的使用也很正确。总地来说，文章句式精炼，是篇不错的满分作文。

积累卡片英汉互译

好词 1. provide v.提供2. convenience n.便利

好句All these services can bring great convenience to you and are

very enjoyable.所有这些服务都会给你带来便利，并且非常的愉快。

评析：bring great convenience，带来便利。

【重庆卷高考英语】 【试题回放】

据报道，7岁的美国女孩Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后处于极度的痛苦之中，美国抗癌协会(ACS)决定，每当Amy收到一封慰问信，就给她增加3美分的治疗款。 假如你是新华中学的学生李华，请你用英文给Amy写一封慰问信，主要内容包括： 自我介绍

得知的情况

表示鼓励

打算为她做什么

祝她早日康复

注意：

1. 信的格式已为你写好

2. 信中不得出现你的真实情况。

3. 词数100左右。

4. 请在答题卡上作答。

Dear Amy,

I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of China. I’m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great pain. But you should realize that you are young and have a promising great future. So, stand up and fight against the disease! I’m sure you will win. It is reported that the America anti-cancer association will donate three cents upon every comfort letter you receive. So I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to you. In that way, you will get enough money for you to be cured. Hope you can be well soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

[名师点评]

本文依照要求，涵盖了所有要点。文章使用了高中常见的句式，如I’m sorry to hear that..., It is reported that...等，都比较好。作者对定语从句的使用恰到好处地修饰了文章，行文自然而通顺，值得学习。

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好词1.realize v.意识到2.promise v.允诺3.donate v.捐赠

好句1. Im sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brings you great pain. 我很遗憾地得知你身患肺癌，给你带来了巨大的痛苦。

好处：which引导限制性定语从句。

2. So, stand up and fight against the disease!

因此，坚强地与疾病做斗争吧!

好处：掷地有声，语言准确。

四. 结构清晰,句式准确

【江苏卷高考英语】 【试题回放】

2007年4月29日上午10点到11点，全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时进行，江苏省1，100万学生积极参与了这项活动。

教育部倡导学生：

u 每天锻炼一小时

u 健康工作五十年

u 幸福生活一辈子

请你根据以上提示，用英语准备一份发言稿，向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情况，并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼，谈谈你的看法及理由。

注意：

1、发言稿应包括以上所有信息，要有适当发挥。

2、词数：120左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

3、参考词汇：阳光体育活动——a national student sports program;

教育部——the Ministry of Education

Good afternoon, everyone,

The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10：00a.m.~11:00a.m.on April 29，2007 in many primary and middle schools all over China. Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this program.

The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years. Our whole life will be very enjoyable.

In my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is limited. Health is a basic condition for our study. If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records. So every one of you, join the program now!

Thank you!

【名师点评】

本文的结构十分明晰，同时句式使用得熟练而准确。本文分为三段，前两段叙述，后一段发表观点，典型的作文结构。在句式使用上，作者用法多样，使用了独立结构和虚拟语气，十分出彩。复杂的句式是本文的特点之一。

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好词1.wage v.发动2.aim v.瞄准3. advocate v.提倡

好句1. The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years.

教育部提倡我们每天做一个小时的运动，能够健康地活50年。

评析：advocate，其后接虚拟语气，可以省略情态动词。

好句2. If we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study records. 如果我们不进行运动，我们的学习成绩就不会很好。

评析：虚拟语气。

篇五：2013年全国各地高考英语满分作文集

2013四川 某中学生英文报近期开辟专栏，讨论学习习惯问题，请你结合自身学习实际，按一下提示，用英文为该专栏写一篇稿件。

1. 说明学习习惯与学习效果之间的关系;2. 介绍一种好的学习习惯并提出养成该习惯的建议;3. 描述自己在学习习惯方面存在的某个问题并给出改进措施

注意：1. 词数120左右，开头语已为你写好 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

It’s useful and necessary to discuss learning habits. As we all know, good learning habits can make your study go to succeed. As a student, we should pay more attentions to our habits which we develop in our study.

I’m sure “repeat” is a best habit. Do you develop the habit? If we want to improve our study, we should repeat what the teachers taught us again and again, and then we can understand or remember the knowledge which the teachers demand us to master. How to develop the habit? the first step, set a timetable, and stick to carry out the plan, don’t stop.

When I do my homework, I often make mistakes with carelessness, how to overcome the shortage? I think I should think about it over and over as long as I do my homework. And then I do it little by little. Maybe in this way I can correct my mistakes.

2013年全国卷Ⅰ高考英语作文题是，开会接机。主要是要求大家用英文把这件事情阐述清楚。下面一起让我们来看看整个的作文要求，同时还为考生提供了一篇优秀的英语作文范文，供广大的考生参考使用。

假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明：李明：高个子，戴眼镜 航班号：CA985 到达：8月6日上午11:30 注意：1. 词数100左右 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3. 开头语和介绍语已为你写好。

Dear Peter,

How are you doing?

I’m writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference, and I’ve asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you’ve asked for before.

Also, I’d like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is the first visit to the U.S.? Thank you in advance!

His flight number is CA985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am. August 6. My uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses. And he will be in blue jacket.

Looking forward to your reply.

2013年江西卷卷高考英语真题中的英语作文题是，你作为一名英语报刊的记者，对一次登山活动进行报道。作文题中已经给出了基本的要求，展现你作文分数高度的就是你对活动的评论了。下面让我们来看看优秀的范文是如何处理这些细节性的东西的。

1. 时间与地点：4月10日，大青山(Daqing Mountain);2. 活动的过程;

3. 你对于这次活动的评论。注意：1. 词数120左右。2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountain-climbing on April 10. Hundreds of us took part in it.

It was a nice day. At 8:00 am, we gathered at the foot of Daqing Moutain and set out for the top in high spirits. All the way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. When some fell behind, others would come and offer help. About 2 hours later, we all reached the top. Bathed in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy.

The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work, it also promoted the friendship among us. What a wonderful time!

2013年山东卷高考英语作文题目是关于暑期的打算，主要的过程是你的美国朋友问你即将到来的暑假你有什么打算。希望同学们根据这个情节作文写出自己的想法和打算。下面为同学们提供了一份2013年山东卷高考英语作文范文，仅供参考。

假如你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据双下要点给他回封邮件：

1. 未及时回信的原因;2. 你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等)

注意：1. 词数：120-150;2 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Tom,

How are you doing? You asked me in your last letter about my plan for the coming summer vacation. I am sorry that I didn’t reply without delay. How I wish I would read and reply your email as soon as I received it. However, I was busy preparing for my final exam at that time, which is vital for me. As a result, I had no choice but to completely focus on my study, for which I am very sorry. I hope you can understand me.

During the holiday, I am going to do a part-time job. On the one hand, I can earn some money to reduce the burden of my family. On the other hand, I accumulate the social experience, which does good to my future life. At the same time, I will not forget to go over my lesson. I will spend a instructive holiday. How will you spend your holiday? I hope you have a good time.

These are my plan for the summer vacation. What’s yours? I am looking forward to your earliest reply.

2013年湖北卷高考英语作文题，是根据一段英语对话的提示，让学生进行想象，继续合理的作文。面对考题出现的这一段英语，你想到了怎么样写英语作文了吗?下面让我们一起来看看高考英语作文范文。

My classmate admires my fluent English very much and I usually feel encouraged by his compliments.

One day, when we learned the new word “eccentric” in class, we were asked to make a sentence with it. I volunteered to do it by saying “My deskmate is an eccentric boy whose clothes never fit him.” Hearing this, the whole class burst into laughter and my deskmate’s face turned red. After class, I learned from the teacher that my deskmate would have dropped out of school if he hadn’t been helped by others. My mindless words must have hurt him deeply.

Not until then did I realize words could be powerful in both positive and negative. We should avoid hurting others if we can’t always be encouraging when we speak.

2013年重庆市高考英语作文 看图作文，一定要仔细看清楚，图画中的每一个细节，同时把整个照顾生病的妈妈的细节记录清楚。提醒，考生们平时还要注意多多的积累英语句型，这样才能让英语作文有高分。

I must say that I have been behaving this way to some degree. Though I know Mum is the most important person in my world, I just can not do what she likes me to do. It seems that I quite often stay away from my dear mum in playing my phone, sleeping, hanging out with my friend, or just shutting out my mum in my room.

Having read about the above common complaint from so many mothers, I feel ashamed and guilty. From now on, I shall try my best to stay with my dear parents as often as possible. I must confess we young generation must realize that our parents care for us as well as hoping to share what we have been doing with them.

2013年上海高考英语作文题目 上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展，现就展出场所(博物馆还是社区图书馆)征集公众意见，假设你是王敏，给上海博物馆写一封信表达你的想法。你的信必须满足以下要求：1. 简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择;

2. 说明你的理由(从便利性，专业性等方面对这两个场所进行对比)

To whom it may concern:

I’ve learned that an art exhibition is to be held and that you’re collecting suggestions on its location. I’m writing this letter to share with you my opinions.

In my opinion, it is more advisable to hold the art exhibition in Shanghai Museum than in community libraries. My reasons are as follows.

On one hand, it is more convenient for people to get to Shanghai Museum which is located in the center of the city. And the museum is much more spacious than community libraries, which provides visitors with a more comfortable environment for appreciating art.

On the other hand, as a well-known museum, Shanghai Museum is more professional and experienced in holding art exhibitions. Its professional security guards and advanced facilities can better protect those famous paintings from being damaged or stolen.

Therefore, I suggest the exhibition be held in the museum.

如今孩子的成长以及教育问题是社会议论纷纷的话题，2013福建高考英语作文题目就以这个话题，配有一副漫画图。对父母包揽一切，孩子过度依赖父母的现象进行评析。看到了这样的漫画，你想到的什么呢?为同学们提供一篇范文，看看都是从哪几方面谈论，有什么地方是值得我们学习的呢

?

内容要求：1.描述漫画内容;2. 分析漫画所揭示的问题; 3. 提出你的看法。 注意：1.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数; 3.词数120左右;

2.考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯;

4. 文中不能出现考生的具体信息。参考词汇:pave the way

From the picture, we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet.

One possible version:

From the picture we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet.The son , well dressed, waves proudly in the middle while the father behind bends forward to hold the jacket and the mother in front rolls out the carpet, sweating.

It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families, shouldering the hope of their parents. Parents arrange everything for their children and spare no effort to pave the way for their success. As a consequence, children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas.

Such a situation is of great concern. In my opinion, overprotection and too much care are extremely bad for children’s development. Instead of doing everything for them, parents should encourage their children to overcome difficulties and inspire them to develop by themselves. Only in this way can they grow up to be independent and become truly successful.

2013年浙江卷高考英语真题中的英语作文题目是命题作文：One Thing I’m Proud of。通过对这件事情的阐述，谈谈自己的引以为自豪的原因以及从中得到了怎样的启示。看看自己的作文和英语作文范文差距在哪里呢。了解到不足，才会改正才会更加有进步的空间。 One Thing I’m Proud of

I still remember how I became a good table tennis player.

The first day I went to high school, I saw some of my classmates playing table tennis. Amazed at how skillful they were, I was determined to be just as good. Later on, I often watched them carefully to learn their techniques. Then I kept practicing until I became confident enough to challenge the good players. At the end of the term I became one of the best players in my class. I am really proud of this experience, because it helps me realize that we all can fulfill our potential and achieve our goals through hard work. It also helps me better understand the proverb "Practice makes perfect.”

2013年江苏卷高考英语作文题是看图作文，通过两幅图传达的意思，看看你从中了解到的中心思想，以及通过这幅图画你能得到怎样的启示呢。简述了图画内容之后，人生的启示更能让你的英语作文加分哦。下面让我们来看看优秀的英语范文都是怎样写的。

2013年湖南卷高考英语作文主要是通过英语作文讲述一次关于他人或者是自己的经历，主要是需要考生把给出的关键词，镶嵌进去，match winner loser result。

Last week, a football match was held between we Class One and Class Two.

The players from both sides are all excellent basketball players, so the match went on fiercely at first. At last the result is: the winner is Cass Two, and we were the loser.

We didn’t win the match, but we didn’t lose heart. One the one hand, we think that friendship comes first, and match comes second. On the other hand, since we all tried our best, we had no regret. In our life we may meet many failures, as long as we try our best, there’s no need feeling regret for these failures. What’ more， we should analyze the reasons of failure to get success for the next time.

In a word, success is important, so is failure, because it’s the mother of success

2013新课标卷的高考英语作文是，你是一个中国结的编织者，你想请开网店的外国朋友帮忙代卖。跟外国朋友讲述一下中国结的材质以及它的象征意义，同时也要把它的价格告诉外国朋友，那么这件事情你将会以怎样的句型来讲清楚呢。

Dear tom,

How are you? I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me. I made them myself with red silk threads, cloth and other materials. They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond, about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide. In china, these knots stand for friendship, love and good luck. People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses. They are only 12.99 US dollars each. If anyone wants to know more about the knots, let them write to me. Also, do let me know if you need further information. Thank you!

2013年陕西高考英语作文题是，假定你是李华。请根据写作要点用英语写一篇周记，记述你周末帮助家人做家务的一次经历。写作要点：1.做家务的理由;2.做家务的过程;3.你的感受。 注意：1.短文词数不少于100; 2.开头部分已写好，不计入总词数;

3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。 I am an 18-year-old middle school student,

I’m an 18-year old middle school student. I have been busy with my study and seldom helped my parents with the housework. Feeling quite sorry for that, I begin to think about what to do to help.

Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping, I suddenly got an idea: why not give the rooms a thorough cleaning? Firstly I collected all the books, newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place. Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture. After that, I swept and mopped the floors.

At this very moment, my parents came back and were quite surprised to see all the rooms tidy and floors shining. My mother gave me a hug and I could see satisfaction in her eyes. Tired as I was, I never felt so happy.

2013年辽宁高考英语作文及其范文：—个英文网站面向中学生征稿请你写一篇英语稿件，介绍“中秋节”及这个节日里的主要活动。

1. 写作要点：它是中国的传统节日之一;2. 家人团聚;3. 赏月、吃月饼;

4. 还有旅游、访友等其他活动。注意：1.词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3. 开头语已为你写好，不计人总词数。 参考词汇：中秋节 the Mid-Autumn Festival 农历 lunar calendar

赏月 enjoy the full moon 月饼 moon cake The Mid-Autumn Festival

The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar. As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity in our country. Usually, no matter how far away or how busy we are, we will try to come home for the celebration. The moon that night looks the brightest in the whole lunar month. What we love most is the time we enjoy the full moon together. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit, sharing our stories. In addition to these traditional activities, we have a wider range of choices such as travelling and visiting our relatives or friends.

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