写焦裕禄的英语作文

篇一：英语作文

名字和年龄：My name is peter, I am six years old. 兴趣：My hobby is playing basketball.

个性：I am a talktive person.

My name is peter. I am six years old. I am from Taiwan. Many people ask me about my Chinese name because they think the meaning of it is very interesting. But I hope my friends can remember my English name rather than my Chinese one. My hobby is playing basketball. I usually play it with my friends after school, and I believe playing basketball will bring me good health. I am a talktive person. It is very difficult for me to keep quiet. Now I am studying in English, so I hope everyone can speak English to me. Otherwise I will feel very bad if I keep quiet.

写作技巧Tips：

第一段开头句：My mom is about 45 years old.

第二段开头句：My mom is always reasonable.

第三段开头句：I love my mom and so I give her a hug.

My mom is about 45 years old.She has long hair and very big eyes. She is a housewife. She always helps me with my homework before she cleans the house and prepares dinner for my whole family. She is really a nice and kind mother.

All she asks for is for me to complete my

schoolwork. If I get a good mark on my test,she will be very happy. If I don't do well,she won't get angry. She will encourage me to do better next time.

I love my mom,so I give her a hug when I get home,and tell her she is the best mom in the world.

Tips写作技巧：

第一段的开头句：Jian Mingwang has a round face.

第二段的开头句：When Wang was a child,he was very interested in baseball.

第三段的开头句：Wang is now a starting pitcher for the U.S. Major League Baseball Team--NewYork Yankees.

Jian Mingwang has a round face with

dark hair.He is the honour of Taiwan.

When Wang was a boy,he was very interested in baseball.So he joined the school team as a pitcher. At the beginning,his parents didn't want him to play baseball,but he liked baseballso much that he didn't want to give it up.He kept practising his pitching,and got better.

Wang is now a starting pitcher for the U.S. Major League Baseball Team--NewYork Yankees.He shows no fear whenever he pitches.He is always calm.He has become a sports hero around the world.He is myfavourite hero too.

Tips写作技巧：

第一段开头句：There are four people in my family.

第二段开头句：In my family I love my puppy best.

第三段开头句：I love my family very much.

There are four people in my family:my dad, mom,and my older sister and me .My family is a small family,and we also have a puppy.Its name is baby. In my family, I love my puppy best. because daddy and mom do not have time to play with me ,and my older sister has to go to school,so I always talk to baby while they are out.

I love my family very much,so I hope daddy and mom will not be so busy and they will have more time to stay at home.I think baby also wants them to stay at home longer.

9.My friend

I have a lot of friends, but I have only a few good friends. One of them is my best friend. We

are both twelve years old.He is fat and tall. He likes to eat oranges and meat. He is very straight and generous. We always help each other. He is a nice boy and his math is very good. He likes to play football and basketball. I enjoy playing with him because I can learn a lot from him. He can always come up with smart answers to those difficult questions. We usually play together after school in the afternoon. He is very funny and sometimes he tells me some interesting

stories but sometimes he sets me up. After all we get a long well. But sometimes we fight each other.His goal is to be a math teacher. He lives in LinShan and I live in Xiangshan. But we are good friends.

10.My school

I have a beautiful school.

In the spring,the weather become warmer and warmer.And the trees become green.Some birds are singing on the trees.The flowers are open.Some

篇二：假期经历的英语作文

假期经历的英语作文

上个暑假，我和我的家人坐火车去了青岛。那里总是阳光明媚,空气也很清新，令人心情舒畅。我们去了海边，海水和天空一样的蓝，在沙滩上沐浴着阳光，是件很享受的事儿。我和妹妹还捡了好多五颜六色的贝壳。我们在这里买了好多有趣的纪念品，我打算送给我的朋友们。我们在这里吃到了很多东西，比如鱼，虾..真的很美味。

我们住在一个干净整洁的旅馆里，而且价格不是很昂贵。

我很喜欢这里，如果有机会我还希望可以再次去青岛，这个美丽有趣的地方。 Last summer vacation,my family and I went to Qingdao by train.There was always sunshine and fresh air,which made us so comfortable.We went to the seaside,the sea was as blue as the sky,and bathing in the sunshine on the beach, was really an enjoyable thing.I also picked up a lot of colorful shells with my little sister.There we bought many interesting souvenirs,I was planing to send them to my friends.We ate many tings there,such as fish,prawn,and so on.They are very delicious.Then we lived in a clean and tidy hotel,and the price was not so expensive.I like Qingdao very much,and if I got a chance,I hope to come here again,it is such a beautiful and interesting place.

篇三：高中记叙文写作TT

高中记叙文写作

定义：是以写人记事、写景状物为主要内容，结合议论和抒情，以叙述为主要表达方式的一种文体。 范围：新闻、通讯、特写、传记、访问记、报告文学、回忆录、童话、寓言、散文、小说等。 要素：时间、地点、人物、事情的起因、经过、结果。

优秀记叙文的标准：

1、描摹形象细腻。 2、情节曲折起伏。 3、立意深刻新颖。 4、感情真挚热烈。

5、语言准确生动。

怎样才能写出好的记叙文？

1、要做生活的有心人，善于观察，善于思考。

2、能熟练运用写作的技巧：

形象细腻的描摹 曲折起伏的情节 深刻新颖的立意 真挚热烈的感情 准确生动的语言

3、要有创新的勇气与实践的精神。

第一讲 形象细腻的描摹

描摹： 景物描写： 全篇景物描写 写人、记事、议论中插入景物描写。

人物描写： 肖像描写 心理描写 动作描写 语言描写 细节描写

【景物描写】

写景的方法——多角度写景

（1）正面、侧面相结合（2）实写、虚写相结合（以虚衬实）

（3）白描、渲染相结合（4）动静相结合（5）多种修辞方法相结合

（6）上下、远近、俯仰相结合（7）注意写景的顺序（8）注意情景交融

【欣赏】

桃树、杏树、梨树，你不让我，我不让你，都开满了花赶趟儿。红的像火，粉的像霞，白的像雪。(正面,实)花里带着甜味儿；(人的感觉)闭了眼，树上仿佛满是桃儿、杏儿、梨儿。(侧面,虚)

花下成千成百的蜜蜂嗡嗡地闹着，大小的蝴蝶飞来飞去。(动)野花遍地是：（静）杂样儿，有名字的，没名字的，散在草丛里像眼睛，像星星，还眨呀眨的。（拟人、比喻等修辞）

景物描写的作用：

1、交代故事发生的时间地点，渲染气氛，交代背景

2、烘托人物心情 3、借景比喻、作为记叙的线索 4、推动情节的发展

示例

微风早已停息了，枯草支支直立，有如铜丝。一丝发抖的声音，在空气中愈颤愈细，细到没有，周围便都是死一般静。两人站在枯草丛里，仰面看那乌鸦，那乌鸦也在笔直的树枝间缩着头，铁铸一般站着。 ——《药》

渲染了坟场凄凉的气氛

【人物描写】

1、写好肖像，以形传神

肖像描写是指描写人物的外形，包括容貌、体态、表情、服饰等。写肖像，可以抓住性别、年龄、职业、身份、经历，表现人物的特征。

写肖像，一定要学会刻画眼睛

一是要让人物的眼睛反映人物的经历、遭遇、处境和人物的内心变化。《祝福》十多次写祥林嫂的眼睛、眼光、眼神，表现了祥林嫂的不幸遭遇和性格的变化。二是要让人物的眼睛反映出人物的年龄、个性和不同的情绪。孩子的眼睛可以是“明澄得像水晶一样“，而老人的眼睛则应当留下生活刻下的

印记，或是饱经沧桑，或是沉静平和慈祥，或睿智深遂。

2、写好心理，倾诉心声

人生活在矛盾重重的社会中，人、物于己，悲喜各异：有喜、怒、忧、思、悲、恐、惊“七情”，有睛、耳、鼻、舌、身、意“六欲”。这种种心理反应，支配着人物的语言和行动，显示出人物的性格精神。于是，开发人类的精神大陆，探索人物的心灵奥秘，成为写作的基本要求。

写人写面须写心。心理描写一要真实合理，符合人物个性深入体察人物内心，二要符合文章表达的需要。

心理描写的技巧：

①人物独白展示心理

小仲马在《茶花女》中写任人蹂躏的妓女玛格丽特对资本主义黑暗现实强烈控诉时，有一段如泣如诉、催人泪下的内心独白，很好地展示了她任人摆布的卑贱地位和痛苦悲愤的心情：“我们一点一点出卖我们的心灵、肉体和姿色。我们象野兽似的让人提防，象贱民般地被蔑视。包围着我们的人都是一些贪得无厌的好占便宜的人，总有一天我们会在毁灭了别人又毁灭了自己以后，象狗似地死去。” ②借梦境幻觉反映心理

写人物的幻觉，是揭示人物内心活动和精神世界的重要手段。我们看一看安徒生对卖火柴的小女孩幻觉的描写：“她又擦亮了一根。火柴燃起来了，发出光来了??桌上铺着雪白的台布，上面铺着精致的盘碗，还有填满了梅子和苹果的、冒着香气的烤鹅。”没有幸福和温暖的卖火柴的小女孩，在火光中闪烁着自己对温饱、幸福的向往和渴望。一个人做了坏事，黑夜中总是疑神疑鬼，更怕半夜鬼敲门。有的人心有所仪，看见花影，也会产生“隔墙花影动，疑是玉人来”的幻觉。紧扣人物的处境和心里，才易揭示人物心灵深处的活动和状态。

示例：

“推开房间，看看照出人影的地板，又站住犹豫：‘脱不脱鞋？一转念，忿忿想到：‘出了五块钱呢！’再也不怕脏，大摇大摆走了进去，往弹簧太师椅上一坐：‘管它，坐瘪了不关我事，出了五元钱呢。’” ——高晓声《陈奂生上城》

评析：以上的心理描写就属于直接描写式，它非常恰当的将陈奂生患得患失、狭隘自私的小农经济的心理描写了出来。

【示例】

请想象当时情景，从省略号处开始续写，你准备怎么续写？

??可我能够感受到妈妈并没有出去，反而好像到了我的床前，我似乎能听到妈妈平和温柔的呼吸声。我微微睁开眼睛，妈妈果然站在我床前，她就那么站着，手里抱着一条毛毯，眼睛愣愣地看着我，??

【续写一】那是什么样的眼神啊！我曾在史铁生的《我与地坛》里见过，那母亲的眼神是一种无言的祝福；我曾在屠格涅夫的《呱??呱??》里见过，那母亲的眼神是一种幸福的安详；我曾在毕淑敏的《我的五样》中见过，那母亲的眼神里是一种不能割舍的珍爱！

【续写二】我分明地感觉她的目光在我的头发上抚摸，妈妈好长时间没有爱抚我的头发了，她在回忆那逝去的岁月吗？妈妈的目光抚上了我的眉，漫上了我的眼，我的眼珠不自觉地转动了几下，她的目光便一如我儿时她那双温柔的手，轻轻地按摩着我的眼睑，我知道她在让我好好睡眠。??

【续写三】那是什么样的眼神啊！我在这眼神的普照下，顿时有种异样的感觉：我好象变成了一个襁褓中的婴儿，在酣然入眠，感动得母亲满脸都是幸福的微笑；??

【续写四】那是什么样的眼神啊!那是第一缕晨曦对娇花的抚弄，那是三月里的春风对碧水的温柔，那是夏日里的晚霞对嫩柳的辉映，??

3、写好动作，展示个性

动作是反映人物性格的三棱镜。

一个人的所作所为，是他思想性格的具体表现。行动描写生动，能准确地传神，达到形神兼备的佳境。动作描写一要显示人物性格，二要符合生活真实。切忌不能空洞、抽象、笼统。要抓住特征，

写出个性，忌面面俱到,要选择准确的动词，写出动作的连贯性。多用短句。

动作描写的技巧

①运用特写镜头

周立波的《暴风骤雨》写老孙头对被选中的马摔了又恨又爱的复杂心情，就是通过影视剧中类似特写镜头的方法完成的。“老孙头起来，跑到柴垛子边，担根棒子，撵上儿马，一手牵着它的嚼子，一手狠狠地抡起木棒子，棒子落到半空，却就扔在地上，他舍不得打。”

②具体描写人物的连贯动作

《水浒传》中有一个脍炙人口的故事“武松打虎”：“武松见那大虫复翻身回来，双手抡起哨棒，尽平生气力，只一棒，从半空劈将下来。只听得一声响，簌簌地，将那树连枝带叶劈脸打将下来。定晴看时，一棒劈不着大虫；原来打急了，正打在枯树上，把那条哨棒折做两截，只拿一半在手里。??”这里写虎亦即写人，虎越厉害，越显武松勇猛。打折哨棒直叫人惊出汗来，直到武松赤手空拳打死老虎，才叫人松下一口所来，看见武松的勇猛无比。

4、写好语言，传神出彩

①符合人物的身份和性格 ②抓典型化的语言

语言描写的特殊技巧：

①只言片语勾轮廓

有时塑造人物只选其三言两语，就能勾勒出他的性格特征，袒露他的内心世界。如 《荷花淀》：女人没有说话，过了一会，她才说：“你走，我不拦你。家里怎么办？”丈夫一贯积极向上，这次又第一个报了名要上前线，女人的识大体，生小怨的复杂心理活动一句话便写出。

②用叙述的方法写语言

这种间接手法笔墨经济，省却烦琐对话，用精炼语言突出人物特征。如鲁迅《祝福》中：“一见面是寒暄，寒暄之后说我‘胖了’，说我‘胖了’之后即大骂其新党。”朱自清《背影》：“他嘱我路上小心，夜里要警醒些，不要受凉。又嘱托茶房好好照应我。”也变对话为直接叙述。

语言描写的注意事项

在语言描写中，有三种引用的形式，不可总是“某某说”、“某某说”地一说到底。

【示例】

下面是某一学生的语言描写。

门被打坏了，开了一个拳头大的窟窿。班主任来了，说：“谁踢坏的？”捣乱鬼董小天说：“没看见。”旁边的张小勇还帮董小天说话。高芳芳说：“是董小天踢的。”董小天不承认。老师说：“还有谁看见的”“没看见。”李星说。

【升格】门被打坏了，开了一个篮球大的窟窿。班主任来了，瞪着眼：“谁踢坏的？”捣乱鬼董小天斜着眼，冷笑着：“鬼知道，有没有人叫我一定要看好门？”旁边的张小勇，朝老师做了鬼脸：“哈??，开了窗，好通风。”谁知这一下却惹恼了站在旁边的高芳芳。“是董小天，他来时，一阵风正好把门关了，他就抬起脚，用力一踢。”董小天脚一跺：“大白天别说梦话！你小心点，不要诬陷好人！”“我才不瞎说呢，大家都看见的。你凭什么，做了坏事，还要耍嘴。”老师说：“还有谁看见的？”“我，??没看见。”李星使劲地咽了一口水，神情恍惚。

捣乱鬼无事生非，油嘴滑舌；张小勇油嘴滑舌，混淆是非；高芳芳正义、勇敢，不留情面；李星性格软弱，胆小怕事，各自的思想境界以及性格特点活灵活现。

5、写好细节，形神兼备

细节描写——作品中对一些富有表现力的细小事物、人物的某些细微的举止行动，以及景物片断等具体细腻的描写。细节描写可使文章生动自然并且有深度，内容也会很充实。而大家写叙事写人的文章最大缺点就是把文章写得流水账一样。如“今天我晚了一点起床，把单车骑得飞快去上学，突然‘砰’的一声胎爆了，只好去补胎，迟到了，被老师罚跑了两圈，今天真倒霉！”根本没有什么细节，甚至连最基本的详略都没有。

细节的作用：刻画人物性格深化主题，推动情节的发展，渲染气氛

细节描写的技巧：

1、摄取细小动作

《我的老师》中蔡老师“教鞭好像要落下来，我用石板一迎，教鞭轻轻敲在石板上”的细小动作，极富情趣地表现了蔡老师假怒实热的品性。杨二嫂顺手拿走灰中的盘子及手套之类东西的动作，阿Q画圆圈的动作，孔乙己用手罩盘子让人过目难忘的细节，更是比比皆是。

2、抓住细微的痕迹

相同的事物总是在细微的痕迹上显出分别来。如《鞠躬尽瘁》中写焦裕禄克服病痛忘我工作的精神，就有一个相当典型而传神的细节，他办公的藤椅右边的扶手上被顶穿了一个洞（肝痛时用外物给顶住）。再如果戈里《死魂灵》中写地主泼留希金的形象：“脖子上围着一种莫名其妙的东西，是旧袜子、是腰带，还是绷带呢，不能断定。但决不是围巾。”这一形象便因其典型而独一无二。

3、勾勒细小的景物

“泼留希金”中泼氏桌子上墨水瓶干透了，酒杯里浮着三个苍蝇。可谓景物细小，却正是这细小的情节生动显现着主人公的僵化了的灵魂。

【文采演练】

用一段话描写进球后疯狂球迷的一系列动作，要求用修辞。

球入网那一霎那，“噢——”的一声，整个看台都沸腾了。

有的人攥紧拳头，用脚使劲地跺地，仿佛想把那股子愤懑与不满踩进地底去，有的人脚下仿佛生着一根弹簧，不停地往上跳；有的人仰天长笑，笑得脸上的肌肉收缩在一起，隆起老高；有的人使劲舞动着大彩旗，“呼隆”一下盖过你的头顶，又“呼隆”一下掠过你的耳际。整个人群就像热分子运动，让人想起集体出巢的蜜蜂，想起锅里翻涌的稀粥，想起氢气和氯气的大爆炸。哭的，喊的，笑的，骂的，充斥在空气中的每一个角落，如山呼海啸，铺天盖地，震耳欲聋。

第二讲 曲折起伏的情节

怎样写出事件的波澜？

（一）要善于利用事件本身的曲折性、复杂性。

（二）要了解兴波澜、生变化的方法。

【情节突转法】

记叙事件时，顺着一个方向铺陈渲染，把读者的注意力和情感愿望吸引到这个方向发展的一种可能性上去，层层推向高潮；达到顶点时，笔锋陡然一转，通过另一种结局的突然揭晓，掀起波澜，使读者对事件意义的理解推向一个新的高度。

牛耶？鼠耶？

送礼的人都走了，牛书记像往常一样，兴奋地欣赏着礼品。

“嘿嘿，这是什么？”他怀着极大的兴趣拿起纸筒展开，啊，是一幅国画！牛书记高兴极了！因为他姓牛，而画的又是一头“孺子牛”，赞誉之意，跃然纸上。

不过，作画者似乎功底不够，把牛画得有点像鼠，突然??

一只猫窜了出来，直扑那幅国画??

【示例】

让 座

我站在无轨电车里，身旁有个老大娘，两只手扶着椅背也是站着。旁边的座位上却大模大样地坐着一个15岁上下的小伙子。使劲盯着窗外，仿佛生平头一回见到这辆无轨电车沿途经过的街道似的。 我开口对老大娘说话了，其实是说给那个麻木不仁的小伙子听的。

“唉，现在的年轻人可真缺乏教养！”

“说得是啊，说得是啊，”老大娘点了点头，“就是没有教养嘛！”

“学校里是怎样教他们的！”

“说得就是嘛，学校里是怎么教他们的？”老大娘同意我的说法。

“大概他们的父母也是这种没教养的人。”我瞪着那小伙子说，可他却无动于衷。

“有什么样的爸爸，就有什么样的儿子。”老大娘叹着气说。

“真不像话！年轻力壮的小伙子坐着，却让老太太站在那里！”我的声音已经很高了。

老大娘一会儿看着我，一会儿又看着那个小伙子。

“喂，你这小青年，”我终于忍不住碰他的肩膀，“说的就是你哪，还不给老人让座！”

“你拽这孩子干什么！”老大娘突然冲我嚷起来，“你回家去教育自己的孩子好了，我的孙子你可别管！”

[赏析]

这篇微型小说的主要特点是顺势层层铺垫，结尾着力突转，情节发展出人意料。一般而言，读者以为小说的主旨在鞭挞年轻人缺乏教养，呼唤传统美德的回归；读到最后，才知主要是讽喻老太太那种“叶公好龙”的滑稽，对社会公德的缺乏深恶痛绝，但对自己的儿孙却纵容娇惯。前面，“我”每表示不满甚至愤慨，老太太总有附和，当“我”最后高声正面指斥那年轻人时，有一句对老太太神情的描写，这是一处藏得很好的近伏，这也表明了一个道理——伏笔宜藏，妙在伏得不注意不显露。这样，最后的转折才能陡峭而不突兀。

【设置悬念法】

悬念大师希区柯克对悬念的经典诠释:“如果你要表现一群人围着一张桌子玩牌，然后突然一声爆炸，那么你便只能拍到一个十分呆板的炸后一惊的场面。另一方面，虽然你是表现这同一场面，但是在打牌开始之前，先表现桌子下面的定时炸弹，那么你就造成了悬念，并牵动观众的心。”如果作者能在记叙类作文中巧妙地设计出扣人心弦的悬念，就可以使读者产生追根究底的阅读冲动，收到“踏破铁鞋无觅处，得来全不费功夫”的神奇的构思效果。

如“先闻其声后见其人”，先写结局后叙过程，先写问题(事件)后交代为什么(背景介绍)，或者借助间接描写，或“犹抱琵琶半遮面”，等等，就会让读者产生一种非看下去不可的强烈冲动，从而获得引人入胜的效果。

构成文章悬念的技巧一般为“起悬――垫悬――释悬” 。

【示例】

灵动与沉稳

在市长的办公室里，坐着三个人：市长，王灵动与马沉稳。王、马二人为某机关“一把手”与“二把手”候选人。王灵动，以聪明善辩，交际能力强在众多候选人中脱颖而出。马沉稳因老实憨厚，沉着稳重的作风获得了市长的青睐和支持。

市长要通过面试和实际行动来确定王灵动与马沉稳的最终地位。谁最终能够赢得“一把手”这个宝座呢？市长也没底。市长现在进行面试。王灵动立刻给市长倒茶、点烟，然后又回到座位上，而马沉稳则毫无动作。市长心里有了想法了。

首先，市长让王、马二人谈谈如何领导好这个机关，并对其中一些问题如贪污、受贿等腐败问题说出自己的看法与相应解决措施。王灵动先发表了观点，说：“我如果当上‘一把手’之后，首先，我得谢谢市长大人。是你给了我这个机会，我先得好好孝敬你。其次，我当上‘一把手’之后，首先要狠抓狠管，必要时辞掉那些没有作为的干部，我不能让人在这里滥竽充数。对于腐败问题要绝不手软，该处分的一定处分，该送走的一律送走。市长大人，你看怎么样？”市长摆摆手，对马沉稳说：“ 老马，你说。”马沉稳说：“我其实也没多大能力，但是，无论‘一把手’还是‘二把手’我都会尽力干，并把它干好。这点请市长放心。无论是谁，都要为机关，为咱百姓服务。对于那些腐败现象，要先做好模范作用，宣传法律知识，让那些尚未发展起来的能够自制。我相信，我们的同志都是好的。”市长没吱声，过了一会儿，给了王、马二人各100元钱，让他们在半小时内花完。半小时后，王灵动先到了，他给市长提来了上好的龙井茶叶，又给市长买了一双新皮鞋，领带也买了“相思鸟”的。这当然不止100元钱，市长心里有数了。王灵动也笑了。因为马沉稳还没来，市长让王灵动先回去，等候通知。40分钟之后，马沉稳大汗淋漓地跑了进来，连门都没敲，市长问：“钱花完了？”马沉稳嗯了一声。市长没再说什么就叫他走了。因为他从窗户里看见门卫老张门口放了一张新床和一把新电筒。

篇四：假期经历的英语作文

假期经历的英语作文

上个暑假，我和我的家人坐火车去了青岛。那里总是阳光明媚,空气也很清新，令人心情舒畅。我们去了海边，海水和天空一样的蓝，在沙滩上沐浴着阳光，是件很享受的事儿。我和妹妹还捡了好多五颜六色的贝壳。我们在这里买了好多有趣的纪念品，我打算送给我的朋友们。我们在这里吃到了很多东西，比如鱼，虾..真的很美味。

我们住在一个干净整洁的旅馆里，而且价格不是很昂贵。

我很喜欢这里，如果有机会我还希望可以再次去青岛，这个美丽有趣的地方。 Last summer vacation,my family and I went to Qingdao by train.There was always sunshine and fresh air,which made us so comfortable.We went to the seaside,the sea was as blue as the sky,and bathing in the sunshine on the beach, was really an enjoyable thing.I also picked up a lot of colorful shells with my little sister.There we bought many interesting souvenirs,I was planing to send them to my friends.We ate many tings there,such as fish,prawn,and so on.They are very delicious.Then we lived in a clean and tidy hotel,and the price was not so expensive.I like Qingdao very much,and if I got a chance,I hope to come here again,it is such a beautiful and interesting place.

篇五：焦裕禄纪念园英文导游词

焦裕禄纪念园导游词（开封） Guide Words of Jiao Yulu Memorial Park (Kaifeng)

各位朋友：Dear friends:

你们好！欢迎您来兰考观光旅游，到焦裕禄纪念园瞻仰学习。在这里安息着一位让人民群众无限敬仰，一位心里装着人民，唯独没有他自己，一位为人民鞠躬尽瘁死而后已的共产党人，他，就是被誉为当代人民公仆、县委书记的好榜样——焦裕禄。

Welcome to visit the memorial park of Jiao Yulu in Lankao County, Kaifeng City, He’nan Province. Here rests a communist of China, who was greatly admired by the people of the past and present, because he did everything he can to improve the well-being of his people but himself until his last breath. As a result, he is regarded as a good example of people’s servant as well as communist secretary of China.

焦裕禄纪念园，位于兰考县城明末清初黄河故堤的沙丘上，始建于1966年2月，占地面积91.7亩，现为全国重点烈士纪念建筑物保护单位，国家级重点文物保护单位，全国爱国主义教育示范基地先进单位，国家AAAA级旅游景区。园内主要建筑物有革命烈士纪念碑，焦裕禄烈士墓和焦裕禄纪念馆。

Jiao Yulu memorial park is located on the sand dune of the old bank of the Yellow River in Lankao County. It was built in February 1966, with about 6.1 hectares. It is a national key memorial building protection unit, national key cultural relics protection unit, national patriotism education base advanced unit, and national four-A level scenic spot. Therefore, you can see how important and famous it is in China. Inside the park, there are revolutionary martyrs monument, Jiao Yulu martyrs tomb and memorial.

进入园内，大家首先看到的是革命烈士纪念碑，它建成于1993年5月，占地400平方米，碑高19.64米，寓意纪念焦裕禄同志1964年逝世。纪念碑由碑体和碑座两部分组成。碑体正面刻有毛主席手体：“革命烈士永垂不朽”八个大字，碑座正面三块浮雕分别刻有“解放兰考”、“访贫问苦”和“查三害”的画面，背面为碑文。浮雕“解放兰考”反映了人民解放军战士为解放兰考不怕牺牲浴血奋战的英雄精神；浮雕“访贫问苦”记录了焦裕禄风雪夜下乡访贫问苦，为贫苦农民送温暖的感人情景，表现了焦书记关心群众疾苦，与人民群众心连心的公仆精神；浮雕“查三害”反映了焦书记带领干部深入基层调查研究，和群众一起查三害、战三害的斗争精神。碑体与碑座连接处是一双手捧着泡桐花与松柏枝叶编织的花环的造型，寓意焦裕禄精神像松柏一样常青，像泡桐花一样永远开在兰考人民心中。整个纪念碑在四周苍松翠柏的映衬下，显得洁净无暇。

Entering the park, the first site we can see is the Revolutionary Martyrs Monument. The monument is 19.64 meters high, completed in May 1993, with 400 square meters. The 19.64 meters represent the year of 1964 when Jiao Yulu breathed his last. The monument has two parts, the body and base. The front side of the body is engraved with the words of Chairman Mao: Immortal are the revolutionary martyrs of China. And on the front side of base, there are three embossment, engraved with the three pictures of “Liberating Lankao”, “Visiting the Poor” and “Resolving the Three Soil Problems of Lankao, which are: soil of sand, saline-alkali and water-logging. The embossment “Liberating Lankao” represents the spirit of the People’s Liberation Army who risked their lives and fought the bloody war for the liberating of Lankao. The embossment “Visiting the Poor” recorded the touching winter night visits of Jiao Yulu to poor people’s homes and send worm necessities to them. It shows the spirit of the public servant Jiao Yulu who worried about the miseries of his people and concerned for their sufferings; the

embossment “Resolving the Three Soil problems” is about Secretory Jiao Yulu conducting studies of the soil with other cadres and resolving the three problems with the people. What’s more, at the connection of the monument body and base, there is a sculpture of two hands holding a garland of the flower of paulownia and the leaves of pine, which means that the spirit of Jiao Yulu is as evergreen of pine and as beautiful as paulownia flower in Lankao people’s heart. Looking around, the monument is surrounded by the green pines and cypresses, making it more pure and flawless.

(来自:WWw.SmhaiDa.com 海达范文网:写焦裕禄的英语作文)

接下来，请大家跟随我参观焦裕禄烈士墓。焦裕禄虽然在兰考只工作了一年零三个月的时间，但他却带病带领兰考人民根治了风沙、盐碱、内涝三大自然灾害。终因积劳成疾，不幸于1964年5月14日在郑州病故，时年仅四十二岁。由于当时天气炎热，最初将焦裕禄的遗体安葬在郑州市烈士陵园。1966年，河南省委、省政府根据焦裕禄生前的“活着我没有把沙丘治好，死后也要把我埋在兰考的沙丘上，看着兰考人民把沙丘治好”的遗愿及兰考人民的迫切要求，于2月 26日用专列将焦裕禄的遗体从郑州运回兰考安葬在县城北的一个大沙丘上，现在陵墓经过两次重修已经初具规模。

Next, please follow me to visit the tomb of Jiao Yulu. Although he only worked here for one year and three months, he resolved the three soil problems of Lankao. Unfortunately, after numerous days and nights of hard work, he died on May 14, 1964 in Zhengzhou City at the age of only 42. In the beginning, his body was buried in the martyrs' cemetery of Zhengzhou because of the hot weather. In 1966, however, the communist party committee of He’nan and the government, according to Jiao Yulu’s wishes of “Bury me in the dune of Lankao. It is a pity that my eyes cannot witness the settlement of the problem of dune, but I want my body to do that”, as well as the urging demand of the Lankao people, moved his tomb to a large dune at the north of the county on February 26 by a special train. Now, after two renovations, the tomb is of this size.

焦裕禄烈士墓汉白玉结构，占地200平方米，有墓碑、墓周护栏和墓后屏风墙三部分组成。墓碑高2.75米，正面镌刻着“焦裕禄烈士之墓”，碑阴为烈士生平简介，墓后屏风墙上镶嵌有毛主席题词“为人民而死，虽死犹荣”。墓区广场2000平方米，平整开阔。墓前两侧树立着两座题词牌，分别刻有董必武和郭沫若撰写的歌颂焦裕禄的长诗，整个墓区松柏参天，庄严肃穆。

The tomb of martyr Jiao Yulu is constructed by white marbles with 200 square meters. The tomb consists of three parts: tombstone, guardrail and screen wall. The tombstone is 2.75 meters high. The front side is engraved with the words “The Tomb of martyr Jiao Yulu”, the back side is the introduction of his lifetime, and the screen wall inlaid with the inscription of Chairman Mao “It is an honor to die for the people”. The tomb square covers 2,000 square meters, it is plain and broad. Two inscription boards stand at the two sides of the tomb, engraved with the long poems of eulogizing Jiao Yulu by the two famous Chinese Dong Biwu and Guo Moruo. The tall pine and cypress trees make this place solemn and respectful.

最后，请大家再到焦裕禄纪念馆参观。焦裕禄纪念园自兴建以来，一直受到党和国家领导人以及社会各界人士的关心和支持。1993年，为了迎接“纪念焦裕禄同志逝世三十周年纪念活动”，兰考县委、县政府在各级领导的大力支持下修建了焦裕禄纪念馆新馆。该纪念馆是一座现代化建筑，也是目前河南省最大的个人革命烈士纪念馆。纪念馆主体高21米，占地面积2100平方米。馆正面三层，大门正上方镶嵌的“焦裕禄同志纪念馆”为江泽民同志亲

笔题写。馆内由序厅、展览厅、贵宾室和放映厅组成。纪念馆内陈列焦裕禄的遗物八十九件，版面、照片二百余幅，生动地展示了焦裕禄同志全心全意为人民服务，鞠躬尽瘁死而后已，平凡而伟大的一生。馆内珍藏有江泽民、李鹏、乔石、李瑞环、宋任穷、刘华清、薄一波、李铁映、陈云、宋健、温家宝、李岚清等重要领导的题词。纪念馆落成于1994年5月14日（焦裕禄逝世三十周年纪念日），胡锦涛同志曾为纪念馆开馆剪彩及焦裕禄铜像揭幕。焦裕禄铜像为铜铅合金，铜像高1.5米、宽 1.2米、重约600公斤。像座上的“焦裕禄”三个字，是邓小平1990年为大型纪实文学《焦裕禄》题写的书名。铜像后面红色幕布上镶嵌着江泽民同志的题词：“向焦裕禄同志学习，全心全意为人民服务”。

Finally, let’s go to visit the Jiao Yulu memorial hall. Since the building of the memorial hall, it has received care and support from the leaders of the CPC and government, and people from all sectors of society. In 1993, the 30th anniversary of Jiao Yulu’s death, the CPC committee and government of Lankao, with the powerful support from leaders of various levels, build a new Jiao Yulu memorial hall. The new memorial hall is a modern architecture; it is also the largest individual memorial hall for revolutionary martyrs in He’nan Province. The new memorial hall is 21 meters high, with 2,100 square meters. The front side of the hall has three floors, and there is a board right above the entrance written “Memorial Hall for Comrade Jiao Yulu” by China’s then President Jiang Zemin. The memorial hall is consisted of four parts: preparation hall, exhibition hall, VIP room and film room. There are 89 pieces of his relics and over 200 photos or newspapers pictures about him inside the memorial hall, which vividly display his ordinary as well as great lifetime of serving the people wholeheartedly until his last breath. The memorial hall also has the inscription of many important leaders in China, such as Jiang Zemin, Li Peng, Qiao Shi, Li Ruihuan, Song Renqiong, Liu Huaqing, Bo Yibo, Li Tieying, Chen Yun, Song Jiang, Wen Jiabao and Li Lanqing. The construction of the memorial hall was completed on May 14, 1994 (the exact 30th anniversary day of Jiao Yulu’s death), and comrade Hu Jintao cut the ribbon for the opening of it and revealed the bronze statue of Jiao Yulu. The bronze statue is the alloy of bronze and lead, with 1.5 meters high, 1.2 meters wide and about 600 kilograms weight. The three words “Jiao Yulu” on the base is the name of a large documentary writing written by Deng Xiaoping in 1990. And on the red curtain behind the bronze statue, inlays the inscription of comrade Jiang Zemin “Comrade Jiao Yulu is our example of serving the people wholeheartedly”.

这座纪念馆详细陈展了焦裕禄一生的感人事迹。观看过他的生平事迹，您会真正理解一位共产党人全心全意为人民服务的风采。纪念馆自建成以后，一直受到党和国家领导人的亲切关怀和高度重视，江泽民、胡锦涛、乔石、李岚清、李铁映、宋健、李长春、贺国强等中央领导亲临纪念馆参观，对纪念馆的建设给予了充分肯定，并号召全党、全国在新时期进一步弘扬焦裕禄精神。近几年纪念馆每年平均接待全国各地的人民群众达50万人次，特别是近期举国上下开展保持共产党员先进性教育活动以来，全国各地来参观学习的团队与日俱增。 目前，焦裕禄纪念园已成为全国各族人民学习焦裕禄精神，进行爱国主义教育、接受红色教育的重要基地，是我党广大党员干部进行“三个代表“重要思想教育、保持共产党员先进性教育的重要要阵地，焦裕禄纪念园作为红色旅游景区，在新时期、新阶段正在发挥着更大的育人作用，焕发更加璀璨的光芒。

The memorial hall records the touching events of Jiao Yulu’s lifetime in detail. After knowing these events, you would truly understand how a communist serve the people wholeheartedly. Since the building of the memorial hall, the CPC and government leaders have always attached

great importance and care to it, and many of them came to visit, including Jiang Zemin, Hu Jintao, Qiao Shi, Li Lanqing, Li Tieying, Song Jian, Li Changchun, He Guoqiang, etc., and fully appreciated it, and they call on the whole party and country to uphold the spirit of Jiao Yulu in the new era of China. In recent years, there are annual five hundred thousand people come to visit, and the number is increasingly each day, as recently, China is carrying out a campaign to maintain the advancement of communists. Nowadays, the Jiao Yulu memorial hall has become an important base for the people of China’s all ethnic groups to learn the spirit of Jiao Yulu and receive the education of patriotism and communism, an important battle field for the carders and ordinary members of CPC to conduct the education of the Important Thought of “Three Represents”, and maintain the advancement of communists. The Jiao Yulu memorial hall, as a communism tourist site, is playing a more important role of educating people and is also shining brighter light in the new era of China.

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