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篇一:开会 留言条 Notes Left 英语作文

布朗先生:

您早上外出时,史密斯先生来电,他留下口信说明天早上9点他会过来与您商讨年会的相关事宜。我们需确定开会的时间、参会人数以及会议的规格。

Jan. 5, 2013

Dear Mr. Brown,

Mr. Smith called you this morning when you were out. He left a message that he would come tomorrow morning to discuss the details about the annual meeting. He would arrive at about 9:00. We should make confirmation of time, number, and standard.

Cindy

篇二:2015高考英语作文预测:义务劳动(留言条)

2015高考英语作文预测之义务劳动(留言条)

假设你是李华,星期天你要和你的同班同学李明一起去敬老院参加义务劳动,你去找他,但他没有在家 ,你给他留言说明要求,内容如下:

(1)9:30在学校门口集合;

(2)带劳动工具(洗衣粉、理发工具、除草工具等);

(3)自带午饭,骑自行车前往。

注意:

(1)词数100左右;(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Dear Li Ming,

______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ Li Hua

【猜题理由】高考写作题应该是学生较为熟悉的、身边的与他们生活、学习密切相关的话题。因为高考有一定的连续性,2015年有些省份仍可能采用应用文进行考查。

【构思点拨】本题属于提纲式要点作文,要求学生就所给内容写一张留言条,是学生比较熟悉的题材,体现了英语学习应该注意实用性,生活化的原则。应注意下面几点: (1)注意人称,应该用第一人称的形式给同学李明(第二人称)写便条:(2)注意时态的正确使用:从试题的内容上可以看出在表达要点上应用将来时;(3)注意恰当使用逻辑词语,是各个要点间逻辑连贯,行文通顺。提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译,而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句,因此要仔细组织语言,合理安排结构。在语言方面,要特别注意简洁明了,开门见山。

【参考范文】

Dear Li Ming,

This Sunday we'll go to the nursing home and do some voluntary labor. You were out, when I dropped in on you. Therefore, I had to leave a message to you. According to what monitor said, we'll meet at the gate of our school at 9:30 tomorrow morning and start out together by bike. So you should take your bike and don't forget to take some washing powder, barber tools and weeding tools so that we can help them with washing clothes, cutting their hair and get rid of some weed in the garden. At last, you should remember to take some food for lunch because we'll stay there for chatting with them at noon. If you come back, you'll phone me at once.

篇三:庆阳市中考英语作文范文预测

庆阳市中考英语作文范文预测 以下是无忧考网为大家整理的关于《2013中考备考:中考英语作文满分技巧》的文章,供大家学习参考!

要点:实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字,翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点,要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好,只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点,也就是文章的第二段内容,要做到全,围绕中心。 结构:中考最流行的结构就是三段式,深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。

三段式的第一段:简单明了,开门见山,不超过2句话,如,我们想表达小强很强壮,

第一段直接说 XQ is extremely strong. 观点明确,这一句足矣。

第二段:分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭,He has ten meals everyday! 详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时,He does exercise 2 hours a day! 详举做了什么运动。

第三段:经过第二段的论证,可以得出结论。但请注意,不能完全照抄第一段,要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如,How strong and robust XQ is! I hope to be him one day!

逻辑:这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的,转折的,总结的逻辑词等。递进:除了first, second, third, finally 等还可以使用高级点的,如first of all(首先),in addition, what's more, moreover(都是另外的意思),in a word, all in all(表示总结的)。转折:but, yet, however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词,因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。

语法:其他几点都不是硬性的要求,不那样做不能说是错,只能说是不好,但是语法却是硬性的。如,单词的使用,时态等。

亮点:当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文,最后两个字,亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前,都是结构清晰的三段式,要点都很全,都用了一些逻辑词,都没有语法错误,但是A篇只用了beautiful,good-looking,B篇却用到了attractive,charming,catching等,我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇,词组,句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以,以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。

1假定你是李华,最近你们班就“低碳”生活方式进行了讨论,你的美国朋友Jack来信向你询问讨论情况,请你用英语写封回信,简单参照作文地带介绍的以下讨论结果: 1.节水节电;

2.垃圾分类;

3.少用纸巾,重拾手帕;

4.步行,骑自行车或乘坐公交车。

参考词汇:低碳low carbon 纸巾tissue

注意:词数100以内(不含开头和结尾所给出的字数);可适当增加细节了,以使行文连贯;开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。

Dear Jack,

Thank you for your letter asking about our discussion on low carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it。

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes,

Li Bing

参考范文:

Dear Jack,

Thank you for your letter asking about our discussion on low carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it。

We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of living low carbon life. First, we’d better turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water also matters much. Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal. In addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world。

2【51Test.NET - 中考英语作文】

无忧考网为大家整理的《2013年中考英语作文题目预测:兴趣》,供大家学习参考。

【范文】My best subject

English is one of my best subjects and I started learning English when I was ten years old. But at the very beginning, listening seemed a little difficult for me. So I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes, watching English TV programs. And I found it really helped a lot. In fact, there are some more helpful ways to learn English well. For example, I enjoy singing English songs and I want to join an English club or find a pen pal from English-speaking countries. I believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.

3以下是无忧考网为大家整理的关于《中考英语作文训练:留言条》的文章,供大家学习参

考!

留言条范文: Apr. 20,2008

Dear Yang,

A Mr. Liu Bing called you this morning but you were not in. He wanted to meet you this coming Saturday, 9 a.m., at the university gate. If that is not convenient for you, you are requested to ring him up at any time evening from 8 p.m. to 10 p.m. at 123454576.

Yours,

Amelia

4以下是无忧考网为大家整理的关于《中考英语作文训练:英文名片》的文章,供大家学习参考! 陈欣是泉州一中的音乐老师,请为制作一张简易的英文文名片卡,提示如下: 地址:中山路86号 邮编:100037

电话:0595-88488970 手机:13501368855 E-mail:

[url=mailto:Chxin@yahoo.com]Chxin@yahoo.com[/url]

School: _______N0.1 Middle School of Quanzhou

Name: Chen Xin

Profession: Music Teacher

Family Address: No.86 Zhongshan Road, Quanzhou

Tel: 0595-88488970 13501368855 (mobile)

E-mail: Chxin@yahoo.com

5以下是无忧考网为大家整理的关于《中考英语作文:自我推荐》的文章,供大家学习参考! Dear manager, I learn from the newspaper that a secretary of the English language is wanted in your company.I beg to apply for the post.

My name is Li Hua, a girl of twenty-six. I graduated from the English Department of a university four years ago.I've been working as a guide of English for four years.And I take more pleasure in the job as a secretary.I can speak good English as well as Chinese.

I want very much to be accepted by your company.Please give me an answer if these satisfy you.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

6以下是无忧考网为大家整理的关于《中考英语作文:父母相处》的文章,供大家学习参考! Dear Alice, As a teenager,I met the same problem as you. But now I can get along better with my mother. Here are some ideas for you。

Your mother talks much,because she cares about you. Maybe it's not a good

way,but it shows your mother's love. So I think you should listen to her. If your opinions are different from your mother's,you can communicate with her,and tell her what you are thinking about。

If your mother doesn't take your advice,just keep silent and give her a smile。 I hope what I say here can help you a lot。

7以下是无忧考网为大家整理的关于《2013中考英语作文预测及范文:做家庭作业的利与弊》的文章,供大家学习参考!

做家庭作业的利与弊

The Advantages and Disadvantages of Homework

As we know, students have much homework to do everyday. Students and parents complain the heavy school burden while teachers think it’s necessary. It has become a hot topic.

In my opinion, there are both advantages and disadvantages. For one hand, doing homework could not only help students to review and understand what what they have learned but aslo help students to work on their own without teacher or classmates. Students could practice more through it. For anther hand, students will feel boring after doing howework for a long time. Sometimes they even don’t have enough time to finish it. As a result, there’ s no time for their hobbies. Many top students find they feel no help when problems come.

To sum up, teachers should control quantity of homework which will bring students a happier learning mood and better future.

8无忧考网为大家整理的《2013年中考英语作文训练:学会互助》,供大家参考。

题目:请以“Everyone Needs Help”为题,写一篇不少于60单词的作文。 Everyone Needs Help

1 Did you get any help from others?

2 Did you give any help to people when they needed?

3 Tell your story

参考作文

In our daily life, we are dealing with different kinds of people, no matter at home, in school, or at some other places. Everyone needs help, I think. And only who are willing to help others will also be helped. One day I saw a little girl in the street carrying a heavy schoolbag on her back. She was walking happily. Then suddenly an old man fell down while he was crossing a street. She ran towards him at once, but she was too short to help him to stand. I helped her and we together brought the old man to safety. He thanked us over and over. I think the little girl was, though very young, a very warm-hearted person.

9无忧考网为大家整理的《2013年中考英语作文训练:节约用水》,供大家参考。

题目:请以“Saving Water”为题,并根据以下提示写一篇不少于60单词的作文。 Saving Water

1 What do we use water for?

2 Why water is very important in our daily life?

3 How do we save water?

参考范文

As we all know, water is essential in our daily life. We drink water every day, we use water to wash things and cook food, we also use water to make machines. People can't live without water. Though about 75% of the earth is covered with water, only 3% of it is fresh water. So we must save water by having a shower instead of a bath. We can save water by fixing dripping taps immediately and we can also save water by not washing under a running tap.

10以下是无忧考网为大家整理的关于《中考英语作文题目预测:网上购物》的文章,供大家学习参考!

2012中考英语最有可能考的作文题目2 随着互联网的发展和普及,网络购物在中国也变得越来越普遍了,甚至已经成了我们日常生活的一部分了;相信同学们身边一定有不少同学已经通过网络进行购物了,比如*****网,京东商城等;但是网络购物究竟有何利弊呢? 请写一篇短文,谈谈网上购物的好处与坏处。

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

参考范文:

We talked about the advantages and disadvantages of internet shopping these days. Some students think it's very convenient for us to go shopping on the internet. The shops on Internet ,for example taobao.com, 360buy.com are open for almost 24 hours a day, so we can buy something we want at any time if we like. What's more, we needn't to wait in a queue。

However, some students disagreed with them. We can't see the things while we are shopping. So we are not sure whether they are good or not.. Besides, we can't enjoy the happiness of shopping with our friends。

11无忧考网为大家整理的《2013年中考英语作文训练:给姚明的信》,供大家参考。

You are one of the fans of Yao Ming. Please write a letter to him.题目:假设你是姚明的球迷,试着给他写封信。

参考作文

篇四:英语作文参考

2012年全国各省市高考英语书面表达题

范文集锦完整18套(附解析及专家简评)

一、(2009全国卷I、海南、宁夏卷)

假定你是李华,正在英国接受英语培训,住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs Wilson 不在家,你准备外出,请给Mrs Wilson 写一留言条,内容包括:

1.外出购物

2.替房东还书

3.Tracy 来电话留言:1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)见面取消

2)此事已告知Susan

3) 尽快回电

注意:1. 词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

【参考范文】

Mrs Wilson,

I?m going out shopping, and won?t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o?clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn?t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.

Li Hua

【解析】

作文题仍然同去年一样,属于提纲式要点作文,要求学生就所给内容写一张留言条,是学生比较熟悉的题材,体现了英语学习应该注意实用性,生活型的原则。应注意下面几点:1)注意人称,应该用第一人称的形式给房东(第二人称)写便条;2)注意时态的正确使用:从试题的内容上可以看出在表达要点1和2时应用将来时;而要点3中的几个方面则需要注意时态的替换,会用到一般过去时,现在时和将来时。3)注意恰当使用逻辑词语,是各个要点间逻辑连贯,行文通顺。提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译,而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句,因此要仔细组织语言,合理安排结构。在语言方面,要特别注意简洁明了,开头要开门见山。

【专家简评】

依然保持全国卷I短文写作的老套路:人物李华(自1999年以来,中间除了02年,统统都是李华同学在写

信,历时十年,众多效尤者),话题为简单的外语外事活动,形式为写信(邮件或留言),实则依然是短文写作,控制程度较高,体裁以陈述说明为主。

二、(2009.全国卷II)

假定你是李华,你的美国朋友sarah 打算暑期来北京旅游,来信询问改建后前门大街的情况。请你写封回信,简单介绍以下内容:

1. 简况:长800余米、600多年历史、300余家商铺;

2. 位置:天安门广场南面;

3. 交通:公共汽车17、69、59等路,地铁2号线;

4. 特色:步行街、当当车、茶馆、剧院等。

参考词汇:步行街 pedestrian street

当当车 trolley car

地铁 subway

注意:

1. 词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3. 开头语已为你写好,请将完整的回信书写在答题卡上。

【参考范文】

Dear Sarah,

Qianmen Street is a famous street of over 600 years old. Along this 800-meter street, there are more than 300 shops. As the street is in the center of Beijing, just to the south of Tian?anmen Square, it?s very convenient to get there by bus. You may take Buses No. 17, 69 or 59. Subway Line 2 has a stop there too. Qianmen Street is a pedestrian street, but there are trolley cars to take you not only to the shops, but also to chatters and teahouses where you can experience a truly Chinese way of life. I?m sure you?ll like it.

【解析】

本文是书信格式,给出四个要点,属于常规文体,学生只要把四个要点写全,注意上下文,句与句之间的合理过渡即可。

【专家简评】

人物李华,简单的外事活动。体裁属于陈述说明性质。话题是介绍前门大街改建情况。但这个话题对全国卷II考区的考生多少有些歧视。这种歧视可以理解为城乡歧视和信息歧视。因为该考区学生对前门并不熟悉,所幸试题控制很严,只当是翻译了。另外,试题所提供的名词类词汇缺乏考试的实际意义,只是照抄而已,对考生并无挑战。

三、(2009.北京卷)

第一节, 情景作文(20分)

假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华,为响应绿化祖国的号召,你班四月十二日去郊区植树,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,介绍植树活动的全过程,给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”为题的英文稿件。

注意:词数不少于60

提示词:郊区

(转载于:www.smhaida.com 海 达 范 文网:关于留言条英语作文60)

suburbs

第二节 开放作文(15分)

请根据下面提示,写一篇短文,词数不少于50

第一节 情景作文(20分)

一、内容要点:

1、 骑车去植树

2、 植树

3、 安插提示牌

4、 照相

二、说明:

内容要点可用不同方式表达

【参考范文】

Green Action in Our Class

April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering them. After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it?s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.

【解析】

本文是设计巧妙的提纲要点式作文,与环保结合,立意较好。题材贴近学生实际,学生只要注意理清思路按照活动的内容和时间来写即可。

【专家简评】

在全国卷和地方卷中,08年只有北京卷是记叙文,09年又是记叙文。有趣的是,都是“红星中学高三一班的学生李华”。场景设置几无二致,形式更是何其相似乃尔。如果追索源头的话,全国卷NMET时代的连环画看图说故事便是始作俑者了。NMET1998年书面表达题跟北京卷有得一比。四格或六格连环画的形式,多少让人回到了九十年代。一个是红星农场,一个却是红星中学。就话题而言,08北京是春游活动,09北京是植树主题,而NMET1998则是参观活动主题,话题显然高度相关。

第二节 开放作文(15分)

【参考范文】

What an interesting picture! A Western young man, sitting at a table, is ready to eat a bowl of noodles. He is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold chopsticks. He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot. At first glance, I think it?s a bit funny, for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles. The man in the picture is trying to copy us. Obviously he is doing it the hard way. Maybe using one fork will do a better job, In my opinion, we don?t need to copy others? ways of thinking. Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.

【解析】

本文是开放性作文,要求考生把握好图画内容,发散表达。考生重点要看出这个人是卷发高鼻的外国人,要体会到西式刀叉对中式食物的矛盾性。

【专家简评】

北京卷每年的第二篇作文(开放作文)一直都比较新颖,也能引人思考,问题是往往那个思考的关键点(文眼),学生未必能抓住或说未必能清楚地表达出来,尤其是要达到一语破的之妙,在高考那种氛围中,似乎不易。In my opinion,we don’t need to copy others’ ways of thinking. Sometimes a simpler way of doing things may be a better way. 这样的灵智多么需要现场的急智啊!如何让自己的思想收缩在几个简单的句子结构里面,这本身就是智慧。

北京卷的短文写作基本形成了自己的风格。近几年一直比较稳定。而2010年的北京随着课改的深入,高考应该会发生一些变化。

四、(2009.天津卷)

61.假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李华。学生会将举办每年一度的英语演讲比赛,本年度的主题为“The English Novel I Like Best”。作为组织者,你将在演讲比赛开幕时发言,请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇发言稿。

1. 说明比赛的意义,如提高英语听说能力,养成读书的习惯等;

2. 说明比赛的注意事项,如每人演讲不超过5分钟,语言流利,发音准确等;

3. 预祝比赛圆满成功。

注意:

1. 词数:不少于100词;

2. 可适当加入细节,以使行文连贯;

3. 发言稿的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入词数。

一、 评分原则

1. 本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分

2. 评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后综合给分。

篇五:2011高考英语书面表达预测-留言条

2011高考英语书面表达预测-留言条

留言条——参加义务劳动

假设你是李华,星期天你要和你的同班同学李明一起去敬老院参加义务劳动,你去找他,但他没有在家,你给他留言说明要求,内容如下:

(1)9:30在学校门口集合;

(2)带劳动工具(洗衣粉、理发工具、除草工具等);

(3)自带午饭,骑自行车前往。

注意:

(1)词数100左右;

(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Dear Li Ming,

Li Hua

【猜题理由】2010年高考写作题应该是学生较为熟悉的、身边的与他们生活、学习密切相关的话题。因为高考有一定的连续性,2010年有些省份仍可能采用应用文进行考查。

【构思点拨】本题属于提纲式要点作文,要求学生就所给内容写一张留言条,是学生比较熟悉的题材,体现了英语学习应该注意实用性,生活化的原则。应注意下面几点:(1)注意人称,应该用第一人称的形式给同学李明(第二人称)写便条:(2)注意时态的正确使用:从试题的内容上可以看出在表达要点上应用将来时;(3)注意恰当使用逻辑词语,是各个要点间逻辑连贯,行文通顺。提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译,而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句,因此要仔细组织语言,合理安排结构。在语言方面,要特别注意简洁明了,开门见山。

【参考范文】

Dear Li Ming,

This Sunday we’ll go to the nursing home and do some voluntary labor. You were out, when I dropped in on you. Therefore, I had to leave a message to you. According to what monitor said, we’ll meet at the gate of our school at 9:30 tomorrow morning and start out together by bike. So you should take your bike and don’t forget to take some washing powder, barber tools and weeding tools so that we can help them with washing clothes, cutting their hair and get rid of some weed in the garden. At last, you should remember to take some food for lunch because we’ll stay there for chatting with them at noon. If you come back, you’ll phone me at once.

Li Hua

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