英语作文我是向导

篇一：英语作文

从文章中我们了解到，一个以学生为主的登山团体，在登山过程中由于遇到雪崩最终造成7名学生遇难，其他人也不同程度受伤。

许多国家都有学生登山队，中国也不例外，同样，在中国也发生过多起“山难”

登山运动是一项危险性较大的运动。由于大自然不可抗拒的灾难是不以人的意志为转移的，所以登山活动会遇到困境。在文章中，该登山队献出了7个年轻的生命。登山过程中发生人力不可抗拒的灾害是难以避免的，社会并不能因此而否定登山运动本身。

造成这些事故的原因可能有很多，但我认为最重要的三点：第一：队员没有为登山活动做充分的准备；第二，团队没有聘用高山向导。第三，团队可能是因为资金短缺。

登山运动是对生命极限的挑战。登山运动对登山队员的综合素质以及登山技术与经验的要求都很高运动。登山者还需要一定的社会经验，需要有分析、解决实际问题的能力和困境磨练出来的坚强意志。登山者需要较长时间的、运动量很大的适应性训练，需要多次攀登来提高技术和累积经验。

而学生在学校以学习为主，没有太多时间进行超强度的体能训练和攀援高山，积累技术和经验是比较困难的，而20出头的学生很年轻，社会经验与经历都不多。所以学生登山一定要慎之又慎。

我们应该从这类事件中吸取教训，防止类似的事件再次发生。这不是否定登山运动，而是为了使登山运动向更健康的方向发展。

首先，学生登山队对高山、季节的选择要科学。其次，对自己的实力要有客观的认识，在了解自己的情况下做好尽可能好的生命保障措施；再次，社会对学生登山的积极性要保护、要支持。

长期以来，我们是不是常常赋予“坚强、坚忍不拔、临危不惧、勇往直前”等概念于理想主义的色彩，片面强调用勇敢的精神去战胜困境，片面强调用刻苦学习的精神加班加点地学习课本知识，而忽略了用智慧和策略去战胜困境、去学习；是不是往往在提倡用高尚的品格进行各种挑战的同时，忽略了价值观，特别是健康和生命的价值；是不是经常因为勇气和胆量，而没有很好地做细致的实地调查和认真检查自己的各方面条件而做到知己知彼，也没有更好地研究如何尊重科学和尊重各种规律，而去做一些冒险的、力所不能及的以及年龄和身心难以胜任的事等等，也许这是我们目前有些人要走出的思维误区。

我们的教育是否应该更加重视学生的实事求是精神的教育，是否应该更加讲科学，并创造条件，让学生有更多的机会和时间到社会去、到大众中去，到实践中去补上这一课？而说真话、敢于正视自己的缺点错误，是不是也是我们应该重视的素质教育呢？

这些年轻的生命一起唤起我们对勇敢精神的追求，对生命的珍惜和对生命与科学、对大自然规律的尊重。

From the article, we learned that a student-based mountaineering groups in the process of climbing the final because it encountered an avalanche caused seven students were killed and others were injured.

Many countries have student climbers, China is no exception, and similarly, many incidents also occurred in China "mountain difficult"

Mountaineering is a dangerous sport bigger. Due to the nature irresistible disaster is not the people's will, so mountaineering activities will encounter difficulties. In the article, the climbers gave up seven young life. Mountaineering force majeure occurs during disasters are inevitable, and can not therefore be denied social climbing movement itself.

Causes of these accidents could have a lot, but I think the most important three points: First: the players did not make full preparations for mountaineering activities; second, the team did not hire mountain guides. Third, the team may be because of shortage of funds.

Mountaineering is a challenge to the limits of life. Mountaineering and climbing on the overall quality of the technology and experience requirements are high sport climbers. Climbers also need some social experience, the need to analyze and solve practical problems and dilemmas honed strong will. Climbers take a long time, a lot of adaptive training exercise, requiring multiple climbing to improve technology and accumulated experience.

The students in the school-based learning, there is not much time for super-strength workouts and climbing mountains, the accumulation of technology and experience is more difficult, and students in their early 20s are young, do not have much social experience and experience. So students must be cautious climbing.

We should learn a lesson from such events to prevent similar incidents from happening again. This is not a negative rappel, but in order to rappel to a more healthy direction.

First, the choice of mountain climbers students, season to science. Secondly, the strength of their own have an objective understanding of life to do the best possible safeguards in the understanding of their own circumstances; again, mountaineering community for the students' enthusiasm to protect, to support.

For a long time, we are not often given "strong, perseverance, courage, courage," and other concepts in color idealistic, one-sided emphasis on the spirit with courage to overcome difficulties, with a one-sided emphasis on the spirit of hard study textbook knowledge overtime , while ignoring the wisdom and strategies to overcome difficulties, to learn; is not often used to promote a variety of challenges noble character, while ignoring the values, especially the health and value of life; is not often because of the courage and guts , but not very well done and detailed field surveys and carefully examine all aspects of their condition and to know ourselves, there is no better study how to respect science and respect for the law, and do some adventure, the force can not and and the age and physical and mental things, and so could not do, and perhaps this is what we are thinking of some people to get out of misunderstanding.

Whether we should pay more attention to students' educational spirit of seeking truth from facts education, whether it should be more talking about science, and to create conditions to allow students more opportunities and time to the community to go to the public to go to practice, go to make up this Lesson? And to tell the truth, dare to face their own shortcomings and mistakes, is not why we should pay attention to the quality of education?

Together evoke these young lives we seek to brave spirit, cherish and respect for life, for life and science of the laws of nature.

篇二：会考英语作文

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假设你的朋友Tom写信向你询问你最近的学习生活状况，请你以Li Hua 的身份给Tom回信，内容应包括以下要点：

注意：词数100词左右；可适当发挥，使上下文连贯。

1.目前的学习生活状况。

2.高中的苦与乐，对未来的打算。

3.英语方面学习有困难，希望得到一些帮助。

4.邀请对方来中国玩，期盼早日收到回信。

Dear Tom,

Thank you very much for your last letter.How’s everything going?I’m writing to tell you something about my school life.

As far as I’m concerned,my school life is busy but meaningful.I am busy preparing for the coming exams.I have to do much homework every day so that I have little time to enjoy the sunshine.However,I have made many friends with my classmates.We get on well and help each other with our studies.In addition,my dream is to study computer science in a university and become an excellent computer engineer in the future.I am sure I will realize my dream.What’s more,I just wonder if you could help me and give me some advice because I have trouble in studying English.I find it hard to study English.Could you give me some advice?

I hope you will come to visit China and I will be glad to be your guide.I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

翻译：

亲爱的汤姆，

非常感谢你的最后一封信。一切都好吗?我写信是想告诉你一些关于我的学校生活。

就我而言,我的学校生活是忙碌而有意义的。我忙着准备即将到来的考试。我每天都要做许多家庭作业,这样我没有时间享受阳光。然而,我认识了很多朋友和同学。我们相处得很好,互相帮助学习。此外,我的梦想是在大学学习计算机科学在未来成为一名优秀的电脑工程师。我相信我将会实现我的梦想。更重要的是,我只是想知道你是否可以帮助我,给我一些建议,因为我在学习英语有困难。我很难学习英语。你能给我一些建议吗?

我希望你会来访问中国,我将很高兴成为你的向导。我期待着你的回复。

你的 李华

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假如你是市一中学生李华，即将赴新西兰一所友好学校进行为期三周的交流学习。作为此次外出学习的学生负责人，你写信给该校国际部书面咨询有关事宜，具体要点如下：

1.课程安排；

2.外出参观活动；

3.生活方面（天气、交通、住宿等）；

4.其他。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结束语已为你写好。

Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m Li Hua,a student leader from No.1 Middle School,who is going to study at your school.Now I’m writing to ask for some information about our three-week stay three.

Firstly, could you tell me something about the arrangement for our study?I am wondering what subjects we will study and how many classes we will have every day.Secondly,are there any organized trips around,through which we can learn more about your culture and customs?Next,we’d like to know whether we will stay in the dorms or at home.Besides,what will the weather be like?

I’ll be grateful if you write back soon.Look forward to your reply.

Yours, Li Hua 翻译：

亲爱的先生/女士,

我是李华,来自第一中学的学生领袖,谁会在你的学校学习。现在我写信是想询问一些信息关于我们三周保持三个。

首先,你能告诉我一些关于我们的研究的安排吗?我想知道我们将学习的课程每天会有多少类。其次,有组织的旅行,通过它我们可以了解更多关于你们的文化和习俗吗?接下来,我们想知道是否将呆在宿舍或家里。此外,天气怎么样? 我将感激不尽如果你尽快回信。期待你的回复。

你的, 李华

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假设你是李华，你的英语老师Mr.Black要求你们周六下午去听一场关于英语历史的讲座，但你因故不能参加，请你根据以下提示，写一封邮件想Mr.Black请假。

内容主要包括：

1.表示歉意：

2.去机场接一位家乡的老朋友；

3.对英语历史很感兴趣，为不能去听而感到遗憾；

4.询问是否有录音，以便补听讲座。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Mr.black ,

I am so sorry that I won’t be to attend the lecture on British history this Saturday afternoon.An old friend from my hometown will come to see me and I have promised to meet her at the airport.

You know I am deeply interested in British society and history.It’s a pity to miss the lecture.I wonder if it is possible for the lecture to be recorded.If so,could I borrow the tape?It would mean so much to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk.I would appreciate it if you could allow me to ask for a leave of absence.Thank you!

Look forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely, Li Hua

翻译：

亲爱的布莱克先生,

我很抱歉,我不能参加这个周六下午关于英国历史的讲座。一个老朋友从我的家乡来看我,我已经承诺在机场去接他。

你知道我对英国社会和历史非常感兴趣。很遗憾错过这个讲座。我想是否有我们讲座的记录呢。如果是这样的话,我可以借磁带吗?这将意味着有很多的录音需要我去学习。我会很感激如果你能允许我请假缺席。谢谢你！

期待你的回复。

你的真诚的, 李华

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国际文化交流中心将组织一次更国学生参加“和平、友谊”夏令营活动，要求报名者提交个人简历。假如你是王珊，请根据下列信息写一篇个人简历。 姓名：王珊 性别：女

年龄：16岁 学校：昆明阳光中学

其他：爱好音乐、摄影；善与人交流，乐于助人；热爱自然，热爱和平 参加夏令营目的：结交朋友，了解外国文化。

My name is Wang Shan.I’m a 16-year-old girl studying in Kunming YangGuang Middle School.I like music,especially classical music.I’m also interested in

photography because it allows me to record the beautiful moments in my life.I’m good at communicating with others and always ready to help other people.

Furthermore,I love nature.Whenever I’m free,I’ll travel to beautiful natural

attractions to experience natural wonders with my family .In addition,I love peace,and I hope all nations in the world can live in a peaceful environment and lead a happy life.

The purpose of my intending to join the Peace and Friendship Summer Camp is to make more friends from foreign countries,and to have an access to the insight of foreign cultures I hope I can do something for the world peace.I’m sure I’m be learning a lot from the Summer Camp.

翻译：

我的名字叫王珊。我是一个16岁的女孩在昆明阳光中学学习。我喜欢音乐,尤其是古典音乐。我也对摄影感兴趣,因为它能让我记录下在我的生命中美丽的时刻。我擅长与他人沟通,并且随时准备帮助别人。

此外,我爱大自然。每当我有空时,我将前往美丽的自然景点和家人经历自然奇观。此外,我热爱和平,我希望世界上所有国家都生活在一个和平的环境,人们才能过上幸福的生活。 我打算参加和平友谊夏令营是为了让我结交更多的外国朋友,和有一个访问了解外国文化的机会,我希望我能做一些对世界和平有帮助的事情。我相信我可以从夏令营学习到很多。

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5月1日，高二（3）班的聊天学生志愿者Li Yue和Zhang Hua去阳光敬老院（Sunshine Nursing Home）开展志愿活动（送水果、打扫、）。假如你是校英语报的记者李华。请按下列要点用英语写一则100个词的新闻报道。注意：

1.时间、地点、人物活动；

2.老人们的反映；

3.简短评价；

4.报道的标题和记者姓名已给出（不计词数）

Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly

On May Day,Li Yue and Zhang Hua, students from Class Three,Grad Two,went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary were work.Upon their arrival,Li Yue and Zhang Hua warmly welcomed,and respectfully ,they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits.then,they started working at once,cleaning the windows and

sweeping the floor.Everything done,they sat in the yard chatting with elderly people. When it was time for volunteers to leave,the elderly people thanked them for their kindness.They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever. Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy.What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.

翻译：

学生志愿者给老年人带来了阳光

5月的一天,来自高二（3）班的李越和张华去阳光疗养院欢迎,和做一些志愿工作。当他们到达,李越和张华受到了热烈欢迎,和尊重,他们给老年人带去了鲜花和水果。然后,他们马上开始工作,清洁窗户和扫地。一切完成后,他们坐在院子里和老人聊天。

志愿者离开的时候,老人感谢他们的好意。他们说这是一个美好的一天,他们将永远记住它。

李越和张华都非常高兴。他们给别人带来了快乐并且丰富了自己的生活。

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篇三：英语作文

1、The Importance of Environmental Protection

重要性 环境 保护

As is known to us all, with the development of industry and

众所周知 发展 工业

agriculture,our earth is undergoing a tremendous change,thus causing 农业 经历 巨大 造成 varities of environmental problems. From my point of view, it is 许多 环境 问题 以我之见 critical to protect our environment.

关键 保护

First of all, as the son of the earth,the role we should play is not 首先 作为地球之子 规则

the conqueror but the one loving her as well as protecting her,so 征服者 爱她并且保护她 we are supposed to cooperate with each other to fulfill the

应该 合作 互相 完成

responsibility. Secondly, if we continue leting our earth down, the 责任 第二 继续

consequence of it will be the various disasters resulting in the 结果 各种 灾难 产生

countless number of people losing their lives! Last but not least, 无数

there is no denying that the bad living condition may have negative 否认 条件 负面 influence on our health.

影响 健康

To sum up,not only should we cultivate good habits of protecting our 总之 培养 好习惯

environment but also the government must place strict control over 政府 严格 控制

heavy industry. We hope that all these measures will be effective and 工业 措施 有效

bring back a healthful environment.

带回 健康

2、Culture Exchanges

文化 交流

Early in the QingDynasty,cultural exchange has linked China and India 清朝 连接 中国和印度 in many aspects.Nowadays,cultural exchange is becoming a very 方面 现在

important way to promote national and international prosper and

重要 推进 国内和国际 繁荣

harmony.Taken as an example,Japan absorbed something good from China 和谐 举个例子 日本 吸收

and other countries,combined Chinese culture and eastern culture with 国家 结合 东方

theirs own and finally developed into an advanced country.So cultural 最后 发张 发达国家

exchange is a process of learning ,understanding and applying.China 过程 理解 运用

is a big country with rich natural resourses,long history and 自然资源 历史

considerable culture.To play a unique role at the stage of the 可观 唯一 角色 世界舞台

world,China is making great contributions to cultural spread and 贡献 传播

exchange.Meanwhile,the world,which is developing so fast,need to 同时 focus on the cultural exchange to strengthen its background.

聚焦 强大 背景

3、The importance of Education

教育

Education is very important for everyone. In my opinion, there are 以我之见

two reasons.

原因

First, education gives us the knowledge. We can get a lot of 知识

knowledge through education. We can get the knowledge not only from 通过

the books, but also from everything around us. We can know the right 我们周围

behavior

举动

to come into contact with people in daily life. We can know the good 接触 日常生活

manners such as table manner. We can know what to do and the wrong 举动 餐桌礼仪

belief will be wiped out of our mind.

信仰 擦

Second, education makes us follow our dream. Before you get a 追随

great career, you may become a well educated person.

职业 教育者

We start form the school education. But education does not end here.

Please keep in mind that it is never too old to learn.

请记住

4、心理健康

Health is the very thing that everybody is concerned about. It 有关

includes not only physical health but mental health as well. In my 包括 身理健康 心理健康

opinion, mental health is no less important than physical health.

To keep our mental health, we can learn and accept more from books 接受

reading, TV watching and movie seeing. In those processes, however, 过程

we must refuse those unhealthy messages and only accept healthy ones 拒绝 信息

any time.

What's more,we have to spare no effort to break our bad habits, which

而且 努力 习惯

controls and will control our thoughts and acts,and try to develop 思想 行动

some good ones.

In a word, if we have a good mental health, we will be albe to 一句话

go much further in the road to success.

更远

5、Professional Responsibility and Social Responsibility

专业 责任 社会 责任

Once we take a job, we should be responsible for you job. With out

责任

the sense of responsibility, we will never succeed in our work. 成功

However, everyone has the responsibility of our society. We live in our 社会

society and get education. When we grow up, we should repay our society 长大 回馈

and make some contribution. Similarly, a company is like a person. 贡献 同样 公司

It gains a lot from the society, so it should repay the society too.

The company is made up with a lot of employees. So as an employee, 组成 职工

we should make the professional responsibility and social

专业

responsibility in balance. When they comes into conflict, we should 平衡 冲突

put our social responsibility in the first.

6、申请信 Application letter

Dear Sir or Madam,

I have recently heard that Shiyan School is offering a position to new 最近 实验学校 提供 职位

teachers.I am writing to express my great interest in the position.I 表达 兴趣

would like to have you send me an application form.

申请

I am graduated from Children's teacher-training school in 2000. And 毕业 I am majored in Children’s education. When I was a student in college， 专业 I got scholarship for 3 times and than became a teacher in

奖学金

kindergarten.I think that children are very cute an I can go smoothly 幼儿园 流利 with them .

If these meet your requirement, please grant me an interview. 要求 面试

Thanking you in advance for your early reply.

在。。。前面 回复

Yours obediently,

听话地

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7、道歉与建议

August

18, 2011

Dear Frank:

I am terribly sorry to say that I have lost the valuable book you

Were

非常抱歉 有价值

so kind to lend me last week. I like the book and read it everyday. I

intened to finish it next week . When I was going to read it yesterday, 打算

I couldn’t find it. I found the book everywhere, but I fail to find it.

失败

I am so sorry. I will buy a new book for you. But I am afraid that it can’t

take the place of the old one. It’s your old friend.

代替

I know that you will use it to write your paper next week. I am sorry to 论文

suggest you that you can find some material online temporarily untill I 建议 资料 暂时

send you a new book . Please allow me to say sorry again.

Yours sincerely,

真诚地

Lily

8、投诉与咨询

August 17,2011

篇四：英语作文十大常见错误

俗话说“千里之行始于足下”。英语书面表达能力的形成不是一日之功，必须从平时的课堂学习一点一滴抓起，持之以恒。

一篇优秀的英语作文在内容和语言两方面应是一个统一体，任何一方面的欠缺都会直接影响到作文的质量。然而，很多考生在写作中或者由于粗心大意，或者由于基本功不扎实而经常出现名词不变复数、第三人称单数不加s，前后不一致，以及时态语态、句子完整性等方面的错误。

1. 审题不清

如2004年中考作文要求写一项最喜欢的课外活动，有些考生将作文的主题定位为“我最喜欢的活动”，偏离了“一项、课外活动”这一主题。依据作文的评分原则，若文章内容不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确，都会被判为零分。

2.拼写错误

拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功，但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差，同时也直接影响内容的表达，通常会降低作文的档次。

3.名词单复数问题

误 my father and my mother is all teacher。

正 my father and my mother are both teachers。

4.缺少动词

在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的，但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有 动词来构成，如：“我累了。”这个句子没有动词作谓语，而用形容词，但英语形容词不能作谓语，一定要写成：i'm tired。

误 i happy i can come to beijing zoo。

正 i am happy i can come to beijing zoo。

误 the apples cheap. i'll take some。

正 the apples are cheap. i'll take some。

5.缺少介词、冠词等

还有一些考生因为没有熟练掌握介词或者冠词的用法，不了解中英文语言习惯的不同，也会出现明显的错误，造成丢分现象。

误 because heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting。

正 because of the heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting。

6.代词的误用

英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分；此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词，而英语中物主代词是不可省略的，代词的误用是考生最容易发生的错误。

误 i mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for i father。 正 my mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for my father。

7.句子不完整

有的考生因为对句子结构认识模糊，所以出现只写半句的现象，这也是造成失分的原因之一。

误 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. for example, my friend in high school。

(这段文章的第二句话没有动词，他不能独立构成一个句子。这是一个非常常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。)

正 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college, for example, my friend in high school。

8.前后不一致

所谓不一致，包括数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致、主谓不一致等。 例1. when one have knowledge, he can do what he want to do。(人一旦有了知识，他就能想干什么就干什么。)

剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has ;同理，want应改为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致。

改为 when one has knowledge , he can do what he wants (to do)

9.时态、人称和数的搭配错误

汉语动词无时态、人称和数的变化，而对英语来说，这些都至关重要。例：

误 when i get to the station the train leave。

正 when i got to the station the train had left。

10.综合性错误

综合性错误是指单词的大小写和标点符号的错误等，以及形容词和副词的混淆、连词的误用等等。这些都是靠考生平时知识的积累，所以考生应该从平时练习出发，每天坚持写英语日记，多读适合自己英语水平的原版著作，提高自己的英语素养。

在总结了一些学生写的中考(微博)作文通病和闪光点之后，我想以下的几点可以作为同学们备考时练习写作的一个参考，或者说是高分作文的一些技巧：

一、提炼字词句

一篇作文是由单词和句子组成的。这是写作最基本的要素，就像万丈高楼需要一砖一瓦层层盖起来一样，如果砖瓦质量不好，那么这座高楼很快就会垮掉。同样的，如果基本的词句掌握不好，那么我们在写文章的时候就会感觉提笔无从下手，甚至连一个句子都很难写出。这就是因为头脑中没有“存货”造成的。因此，从现在开始，我们应该重视字词句的提炼，把我们学过的，见到过的甚至在新闻、广播、杂志、电影里见到的优美的、地道的词句提炼出来为我所用。一般来说，我们掌握了初中教材要求的大部分词汇以及考纲中全部词汇和词组，写出一篇合格的作文并不是难事，然而，面对如此激烈的竞争，仅仅是一篇合格的文章就够了吗？恐怕不是的。因此，掌握更多的优秀词句能让我们在写作中出彩。我们可以从作文素材中进行词句的提炼：

第一个资源，也是我们最容易忽视的资源，就是我们手中的教材。

教材文章难度适中，词汇丰富，是非常好的词库。也许有的同学不以为然，那么我们看这个句子：A比B要美得多。如果让你用英语写出这个句子，你能想到的句型有几个？在你想到的句型中，是不是转来转去就那么几句：Ais more beautiful than B， 或者A is more beautiful when compared withB ， 或者B is not as beautiful asA??这样的句型你会写，还有数万个和你一样的中学生也会写，但是如果你写出：Although A is beautiful， itpales when it is in comparison with B. (虽然A很美，但是与B相比便黯然失色了。)这样的句子，效果会大不相同。

第二个资源，基于教材，我们可以向外发散，任何你读过的报英文刊杂志，比如《21st Century》《ChinaDaily》等等，都是很好的资源，还有很多经典的英文电影，英文歌曲也都是丰富的词库，从中可以提炼出非常多的优美的词汇和句子，改造一下，就可以放到我们的文章中，为我们的作文增色不少。

第二、巧用过渡词

所谓过渡词，就是表示先后顺序的first， second，?.at last，表示因果关系的as a result， dueto， because of?，表示分述关系的what’s more， furthermore， besides， inaddition等等。为什么要使用这样的词汇？原因有二：其一，我们每个人写的文章虽然内容几乎千篇一律，但是每个人的写作风格和逻辑思路不尽相同。怎样在短时间内让阅卷老师进入自己的逻辑体系，快速而精准的判断你的文章呢？过渡词就是一个很好的“向导”，它能够引导阅卷人的思路，让其短时间内对你的文章做出公允的评价；其二，我们列好提纲准备下笔的时候，总有一个先后顺序，总有一个逻辑结构，如何使自己的文章结构清晰，要

点明确，中心突出，答案还是过渡词，使用了过渡词，可以规范自己的逻辑思路，让我们在有压力的写作之下能够做到临危不乱，有条不紊，层次清晰，逻辑通畅。

第三、句式多变

如果一百份试卷里都是清一色的“Ithink”简单句，那阅卷人读起来将会多么的乏味，乏味至极的阅卷人又如何能给得出高分？所以，我们在写句子的时候，要尽可能的变换句式和结构，让文章富于变化，错落有致。具体地说：中考作文中，我们可以尝试使用更多的复合句，主要是宾语从句、状语从句以及尝试变化语态。例如，2008年中考北京卷作文题，以汶川地震为背景描写一个叫做林浩的小英雄的故事以及自身感受。其中有一句细节描写叫做“他救出了自己的同学并步行七小时到达安全地点。”例文给出的句子是“he saved two of his classmates. Then he walked for seven hoursto safety。” 这句话我们可以改写成为一个从句：saving two of his classmates， Lin Haowalked for seven hours to safety。

如果再加上语态的变换，还可以改写成：Being saved from the earthquake， two of LinHao’s classmates walked for seven hours to safety with Lin Hao。这样的变化在作文中能够主动使用的话，一定会增加阅卷人的青睐，从而给你的文章增加获胜的筹码。 第四、善用名人名言

在中考作文中，很少有同学能主动写出名人名言为自己的文章画龙点睛。名人名言是精炼浓缩的，富有哲理和智慧的句子，经过数百年人们口耳相传到了今天，足以说明它的凝练和它的魅力。如果在文章中能成功使用合适的名人名言，那将会是怎样一番景象，其实不难想象。比如你在一篇讨论中学生该不该使用手机的文章中用了“Just as the saying goes， ‘every coin has twosides.’”，那效果就相当于一个美国人在汉语水平考试作文里写出了“中国人有句古话叫‘福兮祸之所倚，祸兮福之所伏’”一样的震撼！因此，学会使用名人名言，将会使我们的文章大放异彩。当然了，使用名人名言的前提是我们得记得住一定数量的名言。很多同学在写作的时候没有办法写出漂亮的名言来衬托，这一是因为自己平时积累不够，写不出合适的名人名言，第二是对名人名言没有形成条件反射，联想不到。大家在接下来的文章中不妨可以尝试一下，看看效果如何。

总之，冰冻三尺，非一日之寒，练习写作也是一样，三天打鱼两天晒网是不行的，必须得持之以恒的练习，才会有进步。上述的技巧也是要建立在练习的基础之上的，否则没有办法深刻体会，更何谈自如运用？只要勤加练习，相信每一位同学都能取得巨大的进步！

篇五：高考英语作文

高考英语作文复习资料

通知

写作指南：

通知是传达将要做某事的应用文体，书写通知的正文时，语言应简洁明了，写明所做事情的具体时间、地点、概括性内容（多为书面通知的首句）、通知对象及有关注意事项。同时，必须注意句子之间的安排，使之符合逻辑，调理清晰。

书面通知的具体写作步骤及注意事项如下：

①要有标题NOTICE 或Notice。

②内容：这是通知的主要部分，主要包括时间、地点、人物、事由、注意事项等要点。

③时态:通知是传达将要做的事。因此,通知多用一般将来时,如: A party will be held./There will be a party.等。

④句式:多用祈使句,如: Please wear comfortable shoes as we will do a lot of walking./Please take your umbrella with you .等。

⑤语言文体:多用书面语。

⑥结束语:书面通知的结束语常常有: Please attend it on time.或 Don’t be late !或 Everyone is welcome to attend/take part in it.等。

⑦单位名称:单位名称为发出通知的单位。

⑧通知日期:英美两国在表达日期时,顺序略有不同。如 2012年 3月 15日,美国习惯用 March15(th),2012;英国习惯用 15(th)March,2012。

常用句型：

①Looking forward to your active participation. 期盼大家积极参与。 ②This activity aims to/is intended to… 此次活动的目的在于……

③This activity is arranged tolast7 days or so. 此次活动安排持续 7天左右。

④Who ever is interested can contact … 感兴趣的人可联系……

⑤The Student Union/Students’ Union is going to hold a party.

学生会将举行一次聚会。

⑥The party will be held in… 聚会将在……举行。

⑦There’s sure to be a lot of fun .Everybody is welcome.

一定会很有趣。欢迎各位前往。

⑧The lecture will last about three hours. 演讲将持续大约三个小时。 写作实例：

假定你校学生会定于 2011年 10月 16日(星期日)参观大运村(the Athletes’ Village of Shenzhen 26th Summer Universiade)

请根据下面表格内容,以学生会的名义用英语写一则通知。

注意: 1.词数: 100左右; 2.可以适当发挥,以使短文连贯; 3.通知的格式已为你写好，不计入总词数。

参考词汇:

大运广场the Universiade Square; 运动员公寓the Athletes’ Apartment 运动员餐厅the Athletes’ Dinning Hall 征文比赛essay contest

中国文化体验区 the Chinese Culture Exhibition 报名 sign up

Notice

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Students’ Union

October 10, 2011 写作向导：

1.文体信息

这是一篇应用文。题目要求学生按照所给内容提示写一篇通知。

(1)体裁:应用文——通知

(2)时态:因为参观活动是将来发生的,所以文章中的时态应该以一般将来时态为主;

(3)人称:告知我们活动的时间、地点和内容,因此用第一人称。

2.思路点拨

在写作通知的过程中,考生应认真阅读题目要求,将已知信息有机地安排,思路要清晰,详略应得当。同时要设计必要的过渡词语,以使文章连贯。此外,考生要注意所用语言尽量做到简洁明了、精炼扼要。

写作信息要点:

(1)活动: 10月 16日(星期日)参观大运村;

(2)集合时间、地点及出行方式: 早上 7:00, 校门口集合; 7:20,乘公交车出发;

(3)活动内容与要求: 上午参观大运广场和运动员公寓、中午在运动员餐厅吃午饭、下午参观文化体验区; 拍照、做记录,之后参加校摄影或征文比赛。

(4)注意事项: 自带饮用水; 注意安全; 本周五前到学生会报名。

注意:

(1)要注意条理清楚, 行文连贯;

(2)将已知信息有机地安排, 不要直译, 可以适当打破所给汉语提示的语序。

Notice

We are going to organize a tour to the Athletes’ Village of Shenzhen 26th Summer Universiade on October16.

In the morning, we will Athletes’ Apartment, These are very useful because you will take part in the photo or essay contest in our school. At noon we will visit the Athletes’ Dinning Hall and have lunch there. In the afternoon, we will go to the Chinese Culture Exhibition, enough drinking water with you as there will be no time for you to go to the supermarket during our tour. By the way, please be careful and obey their rules.

Those who are to take part in the visit can sign up at the Students’ Union before this Friday. We are leaving by bus at 7:20 a. m .this Sunday, and

Students’ Union

October10, 2011

点评:这篇文章言简意赅,语言流畅自然。独到之处是能够将简单句和复杂句交替使用,且运用得恰到好处。

①pay a visit“参观” ,用得恰到好处,其效果远远高于 visit。

②where引导的非限制性定语从句把文章中“参观展区”和“拍照、做记录”两个要点很好地结合在一起,打破常规的写作模式,值得广大考生借鉴。

③where引导的非限制性定语从句衔接自然, get a better understanding of为地道、高级的英文句式。本从句所表达的意思是围绕主题的拓展和发挥,体现了作者灵活的表达能力。

④合理运用祈使句,这正好符合通知的写作特点,使文章结尾干净利落,不拖泥带水。

日记

写作指南：

日记是以叙述一天生活中所见、所闻、所做或所想的事情为内容的一种文体。写日记一般要注意以下几点：

1. 英语日记有一定的格式。英语日记通常由两部分组成，即书端和正文。书端用于记载写日记的日期、星期天和天气情况。它位于正文上面的第一行，顶格写起。

日期和星期写在第一行的左上角，天气情况写在第一行的右上角。

2. 日记是对生活的记录，是把一天中最有意义的事情记录下来所形成的书面材料，多用第一人称。

3. 日记一般记叙当天发生的事,因此多用过去时态和现在完成时态,但也可灵活运用,如说明客观事实、普遍真理或为了使所描述的事物生动等时,也可用现在时态。

常用句型：

① Today, we paid a visit to the Great Wall .今天我们参观了长城。

② I had an unforgettable trip to Cambridge today.

今天我进行了一次难忘的剑桥之旅。

③ Although tired ,I spent the most exciting day in my life .

尽管疲惫,但我度过了一生中令人兴奋的一天。

④ As soon as we got there, we were divided into several groups .

一到达那里,我们就被分成了几组。

⑤ We had such a good time that we didn’t realize it was very late.

我们玩得非常开心以至于没有意识到天已经很晚了。

⑥ From this experience I learned that…从这次经历中我懂得了……

⑦ Everyone enjoyed themselves so much .每一个人玩得都很开心。

⑧ I hope it won’t belong before we have another chance to get together. 我希望不久我们就会再有机会相聚。

写作实例：

根据下面四幅图片写一篇英语日记,记述你与另两位男同学(Li Hua 和 Zhang Ping)2011年3月21日去风景区游玩所发生的故事及你的感受。

注意:词数 100左右。参考词汇:风景区 scenic spot

1.文体信息

(1)体裁:日记

(2)时态:记述你与另两位男同学( Li Hua和 Zhang Ping)2011年 3月 21日去风景区游玩所发生的故事,用一般过去时;谈自己的感想时可用一般现在时。

(3)人称:以第一人称为主。

2.思路点拨

本篇日记从所给的四幅图来看,内容清楚、明了。根据图中信息,可将其分为三段来写:

(1)首先点明当天的活动内容、地点。

(2)然后根据图中信息结合提示叙述一天的全过程,这是文章的主体,写作时应当仔细考虑图中给我们提供全部信息,不要漏掉要点,并尽量使叙述过渡衔接自然;

(3)个人对今天所发生的事情的体会或感想。

March21, 2011 Monday Sunny

I had an unforgettable experience today, Li Hua, Zhang Ping and I went to the scenic spot to get her to play. Because it is a bit far away from our houses, each of us took a lot of food with us. each were full, I said, “Let’s go home”. At this time, “We shouldn’t leave the rubbish in the scenic spot, so I brought it out.” Said Zhang Ping happily and threw the rubbish into the dustbin by the side of the street.

Zhang Ping today. We should know 点评:①现在分词短语作状语, 高档句式, 能够体现作者的语言功底。

②并列句的运用恰当好处的把张平和我俩的做法做了鲜明的对比,句式运用恰到好处, 富有表现力。

③set an example to sb.“给某人树立了一个榜样”是对动词短语的地道运用。 ④宾语从句的运用显现其驾驭复合句的能力, be responsible fordoing为高档词汇的运用, 对提升文章档次起提升作用。

书信（建议类）

写作指南:

建议信是作者就发现的某一问题提出自己的看法和建议。一般来说，建议信的正文分为：开头、主体和结尾。开头一般开门见山，向对方陈述自己的观点。主体则是对所提出的问题进行分析、说明理由，接着提出自己的建议。结尾则是对开头的呼应，重申观点。

其基本段落结构如下:

①Introduction: State your idea

②Body: Reasons and evidence

③Conclusion: Restate your opinion

常用句型

字数作文