自考英语二作文范文

篇一：自学考试英语(二)作文模板

1）要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。

1.有一些人认为??

2.另一些人认为??

3.我的看法??

The topic of ①-----------------（主题）is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------（支持A的理由一）What is more, ③-------------理由二). Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).

While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥------------------（理由二）. Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三).

From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------（我的观点）. The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .

2）给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点

Some people believe that ①----------------（观点一）. For example, they think ②-----------------（举例说明）．And it will bring them ③---------------(为他们带来的好处).

In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,④-------------(我不同意该看法的理由一). For another thing, ⑤---------(反对的理由之二)．

Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥-----(我对文章所讨论主题的看法)．

★★★阐述主题题型

要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求进行论述．

１.阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义．

２.分析并举例使其更充实．

The good old proverb ----------------（名言或谚语）reminds us that ----------------(释义). Indeed, we can learn many things form it.

First of all,-----------------(理由一). For example, -------------------(举例说明). Secondly,----------------(理由二). Another case is that ---------------(举例说明). Furthermore , ------------------(理由三)．

In my opinion, ----------------(我的观点). In short, whatever you do, please remember the say------A. If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you'll necessarily benefit a lot from it.

★★★解决方法题型

要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径

１.问题现状

２.怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)

In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ------------(说明Ａ的现状)．Second, ----------(举例进一步说明现状)

Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ---------------(解决方法一). For another -------------(解决方法二). Finally, --------------(解决方法三).

Personally, I believe that -------------(我的解决方法). Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because --------------(带来的好处).

★★★说明利弊题型

这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度（利或弊）出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度（或对事物前景提出预测）

１.说明事物现状

２.事物本身的优缺点（或一方面）

３.你对现状（或前景）的看法

Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First ----------------(Ａ的优点之一). Besides -------------------（Ａ的优点之二）.

But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that ----------------(Ａ的第一个缺点)．To make matters worse,------------------(Ａ的第二个缺点)．

Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to ---------------(我的看法)．

(Or: From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, ---------------(对前景的预测)．)

★★★议论文的框架

1)不同观点列举型（ 选择型 ）

There is a widespread concern over the issue that 作文题目. But it is well known that

the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people thinkthat 观点一. In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows:

in the first place, 原因一.Furthermore, in the second place, 原因二.

So it goes without saying that 观点一.

People,however,differ in their opinions on this matter. Some peoplehold the idea that观点二. In their point of view, on the one hand，原因一. On the other hand, 原因二.

Therefore, there is no doubt that 观点二.

As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that 观点一或二_. It is not only

because ________, but also because _________. The more _______, the more ______.

2）利弊型的议论文

Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)作文题目. In fact,

there are both advantages and disadvantages in 题目议题. Generally speaking, it is widely

believed there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly, 优点一. And secondly 优点二.

Just as a popular saying goes, "every coin has two sides",讨论议题is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To begin with,缺点一.

In addition, 缺点二.

To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of 讨论议题into full play,

and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, wewill definitely make a better use of the 讨论议题.

一、英语书信的常见写作模板 开头部分： How nice to hear from you again. Let me tell you something about the activity. I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr. 9th. I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit. I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America. 结尾部分： With best wishes. I’m looking forward to your reply. I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier. 二、口头通知常见写作模板 呼语及开场白部分： Ladies and gentlemen, May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make. 正文部分： All the teachers and students are required to attend it. Please take your notebooks and make notes. Please listen carefully and we’ll have a discussion in groups. Please come on time and don’t be late. 结束语部分： Please come and join in it. Everybody is welcome to attend it. I hope you’ll have a nice time here. That’s all. Thank you. 三、议论文模板 1.正反观点式议论文模板 导入： 第1段：Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... （导入话题） Our opinions are divided on this topic.（观点有分歧） 正文： 第2段：Most of the students are in favour of it.（正方观点） Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由) 第3段：However, the others are strongly against it. （反方观点） Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由) 结论： 第4段：Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.（个人观点） オ 2.“A或者B”类议论文模板： 导入： 第1段： Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages. 正文： 第2段：There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因) 第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势) 结论： 第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论) オ 3.观点论述类议论文模板： 导入： 第1段：提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题 As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. （亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对） The reasons for this may be listed as follows. （过渡句，承上启下） 正文： 第2段：First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的理由) 结论： 第3段：In conclusion, I believe that... （照应第1段，构成"总—分—总"结构） 4."How

to"类议论文模板： 导入： 第1段：提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题 正文： 第2段： Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法) 结论： 第3段：These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法) 四、图表作文写作模板 The chart gives us an overall picture of the 图表主题. The first thing we notice is that 图表最大特点 . This means that as (进一步说明). We can see from the statistics given that 图表细节一 . After 动词-ing 细节一中的第一个变化， the动词-ed+幅度+时间(紧跟着的变化) . The figures also tell us that图表细节二 . In the column, we can see that accounts for (进一步描述). Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that (结论). The reason for this, as far as I am concerned is that (给出原因). / It is high time that we (发出倡议). 五、图画类写作模板：1.开头 Look at this picture./The picture shows that.../From this picture, we can see.../As is shown in the picture.../As is seen in the picture... 2.衔接句 As we all know, .../As is known to all,.../It is well known that.../In my opinion,.../As far as I am concerned,.../This sight reminds me of something in my daily life. 3.结尾句 In conclusion.../In brief.../On the whole.../In short.../In a word.../Generally speaking.../As has been stated...

篇二：自考英语(二)作文

1、 失败是常有的事。.2、人们对失败有各种不同的态度。3、我对失败的态度。

Is Failure a Bad Thing?

Failure is a common thing in our daily life. For example, sometimes we fail to pass the examinations. On other occasions, we are defeated in sport games. And there are times when we fail to do more satisfactory work. So it is safe to say that every one of us must have encountered failure of one kind or another.

However, different people have different attitudes towards failure. Some people lose heart when they come across failures. They seem to think that it is the end of the world. Others, on the contrary, don’t take failure seriously. They seem to think that failure is first step to success.

In my opinion, what really counts is not failure itself, but our attitude towards it. If we are afraid of failure and yield to it easily, we are bound to have one failure after another. But as long as we have confidence in ourselves and learn something from failure, we’ll certainly go from victory to victory. So I’m never afraid of failure, or I firmly believe that “failure is the mother of success.”

竞争是当今社会的普遍想象。竞争和合作经常并存。在提倡竞争的同时我们不要忘了合作。

Competition and Cooperation

Competition is a very common phenomenon in our social life today. We compete when we play games, we try to do better than others in our study and there is constant competition for jobs, fame, wealth and so forth. We can say, to some extent, competition is one of the motive force of the development of society.

We often find competition and cooperation occurring at the same time. Think of a basketball game. During the game, one team is competing against the other, but each member of the team must cooperate with his teammates. In most cases, we can’t compete without cooperation. Thus they are equally important.

While advocating competition, we can’t forget cooperation. In modern society, cooperation is especially important because most work is fulfilled with and through other people. So we must combine competition with cooperation to obtain our goals.

城市无论大小都应该保持清洁。保持城市清洁不是一件容易的事。为了保持城市的清洁，我们的政府做了大量的工作。

Keep Our City Clean

A city, whether small or big, should be kept clean. A clean environment will do us much good. Without the clean environment, we can hardly keep fit, work efficiently or live a comfortable life, which will greatly hold back the development of the city. So it’s of great importance to keep our city clean.

Moreover, keeping the city clean is not an easy job. We can clean up the city and keep it clean temporarily, but can we keep it clean for good? This arduous work is in close relation to the economy of the city, the government policy and citizens’ qualities. It demands permanent efforts and scientific measures and right attitudes.

In order to keep the city clean, our government has taken a great

many steps, which includes proper investment, making plans and regulations, the disposal of rubbish, the forestation, and the layout of gardens and flower beds and lawns. We can expect a clean and beautiful city as long s all of us do what we should under the leadership of the government.

目前环保还存在着许多问题。2、为了保护环境，各国政府做了大量的工作。3、我的看法。

Protection of Environment

There are still many problems of environmental protection in recent years. One o the most serious problems is the serious pollution of air, water and soil. The polluted air does great harm to people’s health. The polluted water causes diseases and death. What’s more, vegetation has been greatly reduced with rapid growth of modern cities.

To protect the environment, governments of many countries have done a lot. Legislative steps have been introduced to control air pollution, to protect the forest and sea resources and to stop any environmental pollution. Therefore, governments are playing the most important role in the environment protection today.

In my opinion, to protect environment, the government must take even more concrete measures. First, it should let people fully realize the importance of environment protection through education. Second, much more efforts should be made to put the population. Finally’ those who destroy the environment intentionally should be severely punished. We should let them know that destroying environment means destroying mankind themselves.

现代社会广告已经充斥了生活的每个角落；2、和任何其他事物一样，广告也有两面性；3、因此，面对广告我们得小心，以免上当受骗。

T he Effects of Advertisement

As one of the products of modern society, advertisement has filled almost every corner of the world. We are exposed to them anywhere and anytime. When we listen to the radio or watch TV, the programs are broken up by advertisements that flash on every five or ten minutes. Walking in the street, we find we confronted with endless ad bulletins. Every evening, especially weekend evenings, we find out mailbox full

of ad leaflets. With their tremendous power and attractive, advertisements have become a part of our life.

Every coin has two sides, so does advertisement. Advertisement exerts both positive and negative effects upon our life. In order to promote trade, business people engage in making their products known to the public in the most attractive ways so that potential customers find it easier to choose what they are to purchase when faced with shelves of goods in the supermarkets. However, advertisements are not always reliable, as some dishonest businessmen exaggerate the functions and qualities of their products. Customers may be misled and deceived. Such is often the case, and it does harm the interests of the customers.

Thus, when confronted with an advertisement, we have to be very cautious so as not to be taken in by appealing words and pictures in it. We should remember that advertisements are good at playing with words. What customers should do is to ask about the product and try it, if possible, before purchasing it.

作文六：

How to Succeed in a Job Interview1.

面试在求职过程中的作用；2. 取得面试成功的因素：仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是??

A job interview is indispensable in the process of job hunting. If a job seeker can make the best use of the interview and leave a good impression on the interviewer’s mind, he may be lucky enough to get the job competed for by many applicants. If, on the other hand, the job hunter gives a poor performance during the interview, he is unlikely to stand a chance to succeed.

To be successful in a job interview, the job hunter should demonstrate certain personal and professional qualities.

First, the applicant ought to attach much importance to his appearance and manner of speaking. Second, he is supposed to display his ability, especially his grasp of professional knowledge required by the position for which he is applying. Finally, a really impressive job seeker must convey a sense of self-confidence in and a practical attitude toward the cause concerned.

If the interviewee succeeds in displaying these characteristics and presents his most attractive qualities during an interview, the interviewer might make an on-the-spot decision to take him on.

Is It Good for College Students to Have Part-time Jobs

1、The advantages of having part-time jobs fro college students.

2、The disadvantages of having part-time jobs for college students.

3、The right attitudes.

There are many advantages for college students to take part-time jobs while they are at college. Firstly, part-time jobs will offer us students a chance to demonstrate our ability and to apply what we have learned at college. Secondly, part-time jobs help us become more independent of our families. Thirdly, the experience we gain through part-time jobs may be of great help to our future career. Finally, part-time jobs can broaden our horizon and make our life more meaningful.

However, a part-time job has some disadvantages. For example, we may lose time needed for sleep, rest, study, club activities and recreation. For another example, if we take part-time jobs, it is likely for us to be so interested in the work that we can’t pay attention to our study. As a result, we may fail in our school study, which will affect our future career too.

In my opinion, as a student we should hold the right attitude towards the part-time job, for acquiring knowledge, especially more book

knowledge, is our first important task. Although part-time jobs can do us some good in some aspects, we should pay more attention to school study than on it.

网络时代已经到来。 网络影响我们的生活。充分利用网络资源,享受生活。 Internet and our life

We are now living in an internet society. It seems that we are overwhelmed in the internet life. Newspapers are talking that the internet age has come.

Everything in our daily life can have relationship with internet: in the morning, we may turn on the computer to check whether we have E-mails from friends of abroad; then we can read some latest news from any websites in the world. To the internet users, there is no borders between nations. People can contact their friends wherever they are, as long as they are connected to the internet. After a day’s work, you may connect to the internet and do some shopping.

Internet makes our lives easy and convenient. So why don’t we turn on the computer and send a birthday card to our father?

作文九：

Reading Selectively or Extensively

有人认为读书要有选择.有人认为应道博览群书 我的看法

How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.

Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published. It is impossible for us to read all the books. What’s more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldn’t read them. Since we can’t read all the books, and we shouldn’t read bad books, we must read selectively.

But others may not agree. They emphasize that today’s society is not what it was. If one man has many kinds of knowledge, he’ll have more chances to succeed. If a man knows in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be useless. Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively.

Who’s right? I think both of them have something right. But I think we should read extensively first. We should read books in many fields and read selectively in one field.

关于财富与幸福/健康与财富的作文

Wealth brings happinessDirections: In this part, you are to write an

essay entitled “The Relationship between Wealth and Happiness”. You can agree or disagree, completely or partially to the above statement. But whatever position you take, you should give sound supporting reasons. At the end of your composition you are required to draw your own conclusion. Wealth has always been what some people long for. It is true that most of them try to acquire wealth by means of honest labor. Their efforts contribute to the welfare of the society and at the same time to the accumulation of their wealth, and hence to their happiness.

There is no doubt that wealth brings happiness, especially in the modern society. Various kinds of up-to-date household appliances, latest fashions and recreations make their appearance with each passing day. All this makes our life more comfortable and colorful. Therefore, without money we cannot turn admiration into reality.

Wealth, however, can also lead to disasters, if we have an

inappropriate approach to it. Wealth may tempt weak-willed persons to be addicted to harmful habits, such as drug-taking and gambling, and result in their own ruin. Besides, a person may lose his reason and go astray if he intends only to seek wealth and indulges himself in leading a luxurious life. For example, there are some government officials who take advantage of their positions to take bribes from the people turning to them for help . Obviously, wealth may bring us disasters if we don’t take a proper attitude to it. In my opinion, on no account can we equate happiness with wealth. I also believe that one should never reckon only on wealth to achieve happiness.

Health or Wealth?

Which is more important, health or wealth? When given this question, different people have varied answers. Some insist that health plays a more important role in our life, while others see more advantages arising from wealth.

The first group of people quote the old saying “Health is above wealth” to prove their idea. They argue that, on the one hand, a strong person can do almost anything as long as he/she tries hard. On the other hand, however, rich people will not be able to enjoy the wealth if their days are numbered.

In contrast, the advocates of wealth have such arguments as follows. For one thing, wealthy people will be able to buy more healthful foods. For another, they can enjoy better facilities to improve their health. (Take my neighbor, Lao Wang, as an example. He had a heart attack and is in hospital. However, he cannot afford the expensive operation, which costs as much as 100,000 yuan. Therefore, he has to lie in bed hopelessly. If he were a rich man, his life could be saved.) (括号中的部分同学们自己可以在别的文章中发挥。)

篇三：自考英语二作文模板

写作模板&注意点

大学英语写作基本属于控制命题模式。除了主题被限定以外，每一段的内容也被命题人所限定，所以考生需要做的就是按照固定模式创作。那么大家需要思考的还有段落结构设置，也就是分段的具体问题。

其实，一般采用的都是提纲作文模式，题目中已经提供了提纲，在提纲的暗示作用下，我们的分段也就简单清晰了。由于大多数作文要求的都是三方面内容，三段式作文创作当然是最佳分段模式。 作文的提纲多数都符合这样的模式：

以下是三大段的经典模板句型，供大家背诵使用：

首段：启动观点、引出话题。

经典句型：

1. Nowadays, there is a growing concern over the issue of?

2. Recently the issue of ?has been brought to public attention.

3. When it comes to?, people’s notions may vary from one to another.

4. When asked about?, different people will hold different opinions.

5. With the development of?, the problem of?has become increasingly serious.

6. Nowadays, ?plays an increasingly important role in our everyday life.

中段：承接论据，正反论述。

经典句型：

1. To understand the point of?, it is necessary to discuss/analyze?

2. There is no denying that?

3. There is no doubt that?

4. It is reported that?

5. A close study of...will probably make this point clear.

6. We must recognize that?

7. Some people hold the view that?while other people argue that?

8. Some other people have expressed the opposite opinion. 尾段：合并总结，归纳全文

经典句型：

1. On the basis of the analyses above, we may confidently come to a conclusion that?

2. All the evidence supports a sound conclusion that?

3. From what has been discussed above, we may safely conclude that?

4. Judging from all the evidence offered, we may arrive at a conclusion that?

5. There is certain truth in both arguments, but I believe the advantages of?outweigh its disadvantages.

6. It’s high time that we tried every means to put an end to?

7. It is obvious that effective measures must be immediately taken to solve the problem.

以上介绍的都是经典而又常用模板句型，大家可以背诵，只要作文中具备了高分句型，其它部分随机应变或即兴发挥，都可以保障作文的语言水准是在高分级别。

作为阅卷老师，在作文部分的判卷过程中，有以下几点需要各位同学注意一下：

1 字迹清晰——由于作文采用先扫描，然后在电脑前阅卷，所以在阅卷老师主观判卷过程中，作文的框架和书写的整洁程度对分值的评定有很重要的作用。建议同学们要采用黑色水笔作答，这样可以显影更加清晰，并且答题卡勿折叠。

2 严格按提纲顺序写作——大家可以灵活运用写作套路，比如以上介绍的一些经典句型或结构，把提纲变为中心句放在每段的开头，后面加上由逻辑词连接的分支观点，做到“以不变应万变”。

3 至少3段——按照判卷规则：只写1段 0-7分；2段0-9分。因此，建议各位同学至少写3段。

4 保证字数——作文规定字数150字左右，每少10个字扣1分，大家在写作的时候一定要达到相应字数。

篇四：自考英语(二)作文写作通用模版

自考英语（二）作文写作通用模版

1、利弊分析型作文模板：

思路：1、描述现象 2、介绍观点（第二段，利；第三段，弊）3、作者观点/结论

范例作文：网络，是新世纪的科技产物，也是新世纪的代名词。我们的前辈不会上网，懂得什么叫“伊妹儿”的人真可谓“凤毛麟角”。而今，如果你不懂网络，那你就会成为新世纪“盲人”。

请就网络对日常生活的影响发表你的看法。

At present, there is no doubt that network plays an

increasingly important role in our lives . We are all aware that, like everything else, networks have both favorable and

unfavorable aspects (have both advantages and disadvantages). Generally speaking, there are several main advantages of network. With the development of technology, a lot of

information is gathered together through networks. Information is shared and exchanged quickly. By accessing networks through various means, people truly realized to find the information they need everywhere on the networks from time to time. Networks greatly facilitate the people’s live, work and entertainment. Even people staying at home, work, shopping, entertainment, information retrieval and etc. can be completed through

networks.

However, just as every things has two sides, there is no exception to the above-discussed issue of networks .Due to the convenience and broad resource information of networks, some Internet users on the network had a severe dependence, but ignored the real life. The emergence of online games, also makes some young people addicted to online games and neglected in the study. The emergence of hackers makes some confidential information stolen possibility.

Weighing up the advantages and disadvantages of networks. We are inclined to believe that the positive sides of networks outweigh its negative ones. Therefore, we should make full use of its benefits. while on the other hand, we had better manage to avoid its harmful effects.

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At present, there is no doubt that plays an increasingly important role in our lives . We are all aware that, like everything

else,

have both favorable and unfavorable aspects.

Generally speaking, there are several main advantages of ?

（介绍优点）

However, just as every coin has two sides, there is no exception to the above-discussed issue of ?（介绍缺点）

Weighing up the advantages and disadvantages

of . We are inclined to believe that the positive sides of outweigh its negative ones. Therefore, we should make full use of its benefits. while on the other hand, we had better manage to avoid its harmful effects.

2、图表型作文模版：

思路 第一段，结合图表，将图表的信息描述清楚，点出主题

第二段，围绕主题展开讨论，分析原因

第三段，结合上段讨论，发表自己针对这种现象的评论，说明危害，重申自己观点

作文范例：

The chart gives us an overall picture of the changes in the ownership of houses. The first thing we notice is that state-owned houses’ ratio is diminishing and provite houses’ is increasing. This means that as time goes by, the proportion of occupied private houses is growing

We can see from the statistics given that state-owned house is 75% of total, which ratio was much higher than private houses’ in 1990. After 1990, the ratio on private house is increased as time. The figures also tells us that the increasing range on private house is much bigger in second 5 years than in first 5 years. In the second column of 2000, we can see that private house ratio accounts for 80% of total.

Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that private purchase of house becomes more and more. The reason for this, as far as I am concerned is that people’s income increases much more. It is high time that we should develop the economical housing construction to meet more private needs.

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The chart gives us an overall picture of

the （图表主题）. The first thing we notice is that_ increasing（图表最大特点）. This means that as （进一步说明）. We can see from the statistics given

that _（图表细节一）.

After ___ （细节一中的第一个变化）,

the （幅度+时间，紧跟着的变化）. The figures also tells us

that_ _（图表细节二）. （数据位置,如In the second column）, we can see that

_ ___ __（进一步描述）.

Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that_ （结论）. The reason for this, as far as I am concerned is

that_ （给出原因）.It is high time that

we （发出倡议）.

3、漫画型作文模版

思路 ：同图表型作文模版。范例作文，根据下图写一篇160-200个单词的文章

1.解释它要表达的意思2.简单描述这幅图3.给出你的评论 注：火锅里的文字有：佛、功夫、解构、礼、毕昇、儒、后现代、老舍、莎士比亚、爱因斯坦、道、仁、天鹅湖、启蒙、京剧等

作文范例：

The picture showed us a boiling hotpot of various forms of both domestic and alien culture. The hodgepodge could be

篇五：英语-2-写作范文

英语2：写作范文

How to be a Good Learner?

As a good learner, we should have good habits and ways in learning. We need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class. After class, we must go over the lessons and finish our homework on time. It’s good to study in groups and help each other.

As a student, working hard is important, but do more reading in our free time. If we have any problems, we’d better ask others for help.

I hope all these will be helpful to us.

点评：句子较完整，能简单介绍学习方法，但方法过于简单，缺乏自己的独特的学习方法。语法上无大错，仅有个别小错误。

************************************************************************************************ Dear Tony:

I’m glad to know that you are going to learn Chinese. I will give some advice.

Learning Chinese can be really fan. First, you should write the new words in groups and read them every day. You can remember all the words by doing this. Second, it’s a good way to improve your listening. Third, do you like reading? If you like, try to read Chinese newspaper and magazines and pay attention to the sentences. Or you can just read for fun. Last, what about going to the Chinese Corner in your school? It’s very interesting to talk to Chinese people. If you do that, you’ll be able to learn Chinese well. I think this is helpful for you.

E-mail me if you have any other questions.

点评：层次较清晰，语言流畅，但学习方法过于老套，有所重复。

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Women in the Modern World

Women are playing an increasing important part in society today. In many countries, more and more women are acting as workers, farmers, scientists and even leaders. We can say that almost all jobs which men can do are done perfectly by women. Women are no longer looked down upon by society.

With the changes in their social role, women’s position in the family has been improved as well. Husband and wife are now equal in family. They cope with problems of daily life together, and share happiness with each other. Also, you can hardly find out that in today’s families, women are being busy with dinner, whereas men comfortably sitting in armchairs, reading newspapers.

In spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been completely realized. A number of men still jealously guard their rights, and regard women as incapable creature. Few women are allowed to attend important international meetings dominated by men. That’s really the problems was should solve immediately.

点评：切题。论证充分，有说服力；论证手段丰富（举证、正反）表达思想清楚‘语言流畅，词汇丰富，连贯性好。其本上无大的语言错误，仅有个别小错误。

Direction: You are to write an essay of 100-120 words on the title “The Advantage and Disadvantage of the Internet.” You should base your composition on the following outline:

（1） 互联网的好处

（2） 互联网产生的问题

（3） 我的看法

The Advantage and Disadvantage of the Internet

Internet plays an important role in life. When you surf the net, the world become a smaller place. People can discuss about different topics and make friends with others. What’s more, they can work, play, and even have meetings on the net. Internet is indeed one of the most wonderful things man has ever invented.

But just like most other inventions, the Internet has its problems. Some people are just over-enthusiastic to offer worthless information. Official also find it hard to prevent invasion of criminals online. And sometimes bad information on the net does great harm to teenagers.

There is no doubt that the internet has changed our lives. However, we should use it properly and scientifically. Also, the Internet will serve us better if strict administration is applied.

范文点评：此文紧紧围绕提纲中的关键词---好处和问题----对互联网的利弊进行了讨论。

三段文字分别对应了提纲中的三个要点，并且每段的首句明确点明了该段的主题，中心明确，结构紧凑。文中句式有变化，显得活泼生动。

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Direction: You are to write an essay of 100-120 words on the title “Wealth and Health”

You should have your composition on the following outlines.

（1） 有人认为财富意味着一切。

（2） 实际上健康比财富更重要。

（3） 是比较说明。

Wealth and Health

When asked what the aim of their life is, the vast majority of people say “making money”. For one thing, wealth can ensure them comfortable life.

However, as far as I am concerned, if I had to choose wealth and health, I would prefer health. On the one hand, rich people can afford everything they dream of. But sometimes wealth cannot buy health. On the other hand, people who are healthy but not wealthy can make money through their own efforts and can enjoy the fruit of their labor.

In conclusion, health is more important than wealth. Those who are rich but are not healthy, are actually suffering.

点评： 本文紧扣提纲展开论述。观点明确，条例清晰，用词较准确。

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Direction: You are to write an essay of 100-120 words on the title “What Does Friendship mean？”

You should have your composition on the following outlines.

（1） 友谊是人生永恒的主题。

（2） 友谊到底意味着什么。

（3） 友谊的重要性。

What Does Friendship Mean?

What does friendship mean? There is no definite answer. As on eternal theme in literature, friendship is indispensable to daily life.

Friendship is as important to our life as what salt is to dasher. When you are happy, friendship is like adding flowers to carpet; when you are sad, having friends are a consolation; if you are in trouble, friends will surround you and remove the barriers for you; if you are facing difficulties, you can turn to friends for help. We admire the great friendship between Marx and Engel, Which drew them together and pushed them on the road to exploring and fulfilling Communism.

Friendship is not almighty, but no one can live happily without it.

点评：本文类似抒情式的议论文，第二段中运用了排比句，并巧妙地运用恩格斯和马克思的例子来证明友谊的重要性。

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A Person I Will Never Forget

The person I will never forget is Miss Wang, my junior English teacher. She was tall and nice with long hair. She is also active because she is fond of playing tennis, traveling and listening to music. In addition, Miss Wang is kind and responsibility. At first, no matter how hard I tried, I couldn’t do well in English. It was Miss Wang who gave me a hand in time. And my English has improved a lot now.

How lucky, I a

m to be a student of Miss Wang.

点评：文章开门见山，点奔主题，利用题目，完成主题的导入。文中使用了定语从句、原因状语从句和强调句等复合句使文章更显其魅力。最后作者用感叹句总结，给全文划上了一个圆满的句号。

本文作者采用了“总---分—总”的写作方法，层次清晰，要点全面，发挥的合情合理。 As is known to everyone, health is very important to us. All of us realize we should keep health and we will live longer and better. The following tips will help you a lot. First, if you always want to be in top condition, you must lead a balanced life. You should develop a good habit of going to bed early and getting up early. Don’t stay up! Second, food is a very important way to keep healthy. It is known to us that vegetables and fruit have a good influence on us. My idea is that we should eat them much more than meat or fast food. Third, start doing some exercise every day. I’m sure physical exercise does a lot for a person’s health. And the last, try to keep a peaceful mood and don’t lose your temper at any time. 点评： 本文是一个常谈话题，讲到保持健康的重要性和方法，作者从自身的角度给大家一些保持健康的建议。 名词性的从句和定语从句的恰当运用让整篇文章如行云流水般流畅自如。一些词汇、短语的运用也非常到位，整篇文章能很好地围绕中心思想，条理清楚，行文流畅，紧扣主题。

Writing

1) As is known to everyone, health is very important to us. All of us realize we should keep healthy and we will live longer and better. The following tips will help you a lot.

First, if you always want to be in top condition, you must lead a balanced life. You should develop a good habit of going to bed early and getting up early. Don’t stay up!

Second, food is a very important way to keep healthy. It is known to us that vegetables and fruit have a good influence on us. My idea is that we should eat them much more than meat or fast food.

Third, start doing some exercise every day. I’m sure physical exercise does a lot for a person’s health. And the last, try to keep a peaceful mood and don’t lose your temper at any time.

2) Mr. Black will go to Beijing by plane at ten thirty on Monday morning. Then he will visit the Great Wall and go to Wang Fujing to do some shopping from Tuesday to Wednesday. He is going to fly to Hainan Island at eight forty on Thursday morning. He will go to visit “Tianya Hiajiao” and go scuba diving in Sanya from Friday to Saturday morning. At 4:50 on Saturday afternoon, he will fly back to Beijing. Then he will fly back home at about 3:20 on Sunday afternoon.

3) I Love My Hometown

Xuzhou City is my hometown. It lies in the north of Jiangsu with a popular of over 5 million. In the past, it was poor and dirty. Most of the people here lived a hard life. But great changes have taken place in my hometown these years. It has wide roads. On both sides are many tall buildings. You can see tall trees, beautiful flowers and green grass everywhere. The people’s living conditions have improved a lot. I’m sure it will get richer and more beautiful. I love my hometown.

4) No breakfast, No Good

Now a lot of students go to school in a hurry so that they have no time to have breakfast. But not having breakfast will do harm to their health and their study.

And at our age, it is time for us to grow up. So our bodies are in great need of energy. If we don’t have breakfast, there will be not enough energy. This may affect our growth.

What’s more, it is a long time between breakfast and lunch. Breakfast provides us with the energy our body needs. Without breakfast we cannot get along well with our classes. So, we must have breakfast.

5) Computers

Computers are wonderful machines. They can store large amounts of information and never forget it. They can process problems quickly and also provide information quickly. Computers can’t think, but they can do things that human beings cannot do. It is very important tool in every office and in every home, so they are very useful. More and more people are getting interested in them these years. We should learn how to use computers now. Then we will get ready for the future.

6) Internet shopping is a new way of shopping. It offers a lot of advantages. The most important one is convenience. You can shop whenever you like as the on-line shops are open 24 hours a day. Secondly it is often cheaper to buy goods through the Internet and it is also easy to find want you are looking for.

There are some disadvantages, too. You cannot see the products or check their quality. Besides you cannot enjoy walking around the shops and talking with your friends.

7)

HR Manager

Simson Company

120 Lingling Road

Shanghai 200040

10 March 2008

Dear Sir,

I would like to apply for the position advertised in yesterday’s China Daily.

I was born in 1987 and graduated from the college with a B. A in general business.

I have been handling most of the bookkeeping for the past three years and I trust I am qualified to fill your position.

I am enclosing a brief resume of my life history as you requested. Please send any application forms that you want to fill out and let me know if you want an interview.

I look forward to hearing from you and appreciate your consideration of my application.

Yours Faithfully

Chang Ming

Dear Sirs,

I am applying for the position of administrative assistant you have advertised in the People’s Daily. I enclose my CV and hope to hear from you shortly.

Yours Faithfully

Ma Jun

8 My Hometown

My hometown is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and wheat.

In the old days, it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work and they lived a hard life. Now great changes have taken place in my hometown, As China’s reform and opening up, people found a lot of ways of making money. Now many people live in a beautiful and spacious house. With a lot of wide and clean, new-built roads, People can take buses or drive their own cars to work. More and more people have cell phones and personal computers and they are living happy lives.

The living condition in my hometown has improved a lot and my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful. I am proud of my hometown.

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